Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2024 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
That was a fun read. I love reunion stories. 💕
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 7
It's nice to see what has been happening with the family. I do love anti-Michael. Six kids that's a lot.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
What a beautiful name. Can't wait to find out what you have planned for them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
The baby is here, the baby is here. Emmett will be so upset when he finds out and can't tell anyone.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 4
What a nice chapter. Justin doesn't know about Gus yet. Ben should drive him to the restaurant. Then he wouldn't have to worry about the GPS.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2019 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Daphne knows just how to get Justin to do what she wants. Will it work? Good that Molly decided to side with Justin.
Reviewer: MrsHippyfreak (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2018 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Glad to see more of this and look forward to reading the in-between years! Just one piece of concrit -if you don't mind- your last chapter has Brian buying Babylon 4 yrs ago but, in the conversation in the waiting room when Daphne was in labor, he already owned it.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
Just read and enjoyed this from the beginning. I would love to see you continue from the point between chapters 6 & 7 - my curiosity has been peaked - so many parts of the story left to the imagination - especially where Michael is concerned - I have a lot of imagination...LOL
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 7
Damn so many kids...lol..This was a amazing story.
Thank u for sharing.
Cheers..looking forward to read your more stories.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
Lovely name..great chapter.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 5
Really enjoyed this chapter...u r awesome.
P.s - took me long time to read this chapter too cause i have like 4 apps open on my phone...lol.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awesomeeeeeeeee
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter...brian is on mission ..he is going to get his Man.
P.s - Geez brothers are pain in the A**..lol.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 2
True love never dies..they still feel the same about each other even after 7 seven years ...thats true love..they will find their way back to each other.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Omg ...what a start...i love it..looking forward to read more eagerly..thanks
Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
Just found this story and read it to the end. I really enjoyed it. Will be looking for more stories by you.
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 7
I really enjoyed this thanks for sharing
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awwwwww! I wish there was more. What a lovely story.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
B&J Are MARRIED?!? Stop the press and be still my heart! I am going to love this story.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 6
Superb fic...i loved it.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2017 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this fic very much...awesome.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2015 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
its been a while are you going to finish this pls do
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2014 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
this is one of the great story of qaf.everything is new about this story.pls pls please pls pls continue this story. dont stop .pls pls pls pls.
Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2013 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 6
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2013 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
very beautiful story.
shame that they are no longer following chapters. :( hope always remains.
Reviewer: K (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2013 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 6
Please please please finish this story... I have thoroughly enjoyed what has been written so far. Need more
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2012 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
I honestly don't know if I reviewed this, but it's brilliant. I will say I do love Mikey but eh whatever to the anti-Mikey.
One problem that I am afraid of is that Scout will overshadow or push Gus to the back. It's one of my pet peeves that authors do. They have Brian/Justin have their own kids yet as soon as new kids are born, Gus is barely mentioned or Brian barely mentions him because of the new kids whether it's another surrogate carrying Britin child or an mpreg fic. I hope that doesn't happen. I do Gus spends time with Daphne and Scout. Becoming an over protective brother to his baby sister. That Mel/Linds always bring Gus over to Brian's to see Scout.
I think if they try to make Aiden Hunter, they should both mix their sperm and have the surrogate be Cynthia.
Loved how Justin and Daphne stuck with the Irish theme even though Scout's middle name is Jacqueline.
I love how you balanced both Brian and Justin being equally successful.
Update soon
~Nim
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
Update soon!
I agree with Hunter, they need to have a son next. I'd say Cynthia as the mother and of course, Gus and Scout would be heavily involved in the babe's life.
But I hope we see a lot of Gus, that he doesn't become invisible and spends lots of time with Scout...I say everyday.
I hope the Gang excluding Linds/Mel/Gus find out about the marriage at the diner or at a family dinner where everyone including Jus/Scout/Daph/Mol/Ben/Hunter attend.
Update soon
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
Okay - great job so far! Can't wait for the loft scene! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
Love how you've done the alternating POVs for the same time periods. TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great premise for a story - starting out that the boys are married. Can't wait to read more! TAG
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love Hunter and Ben being in here a lot. Molly as well. So many people don't have her in Britin fics. Update soon. :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2012 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
It's an o.k story a little boring, but o.k. What I don't get is ten years and justin a man a gay young man mind you but still a man never fuck anyone be for real. This is to cut and dry boring.
You're very much in the minority with your opinion here. After reviewing your reviews we'll be watching you very closely for violating our policy "not to be negative in your comments" on Whispers. ~Admin
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love the story so far!!!! Can't wait to read what happens next! Hope to read you soon!! Kisses!
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is moving along very nicely :o)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 6
sounds like one big happy family now.
Lori
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 6
well well - this short chapter is worth forgiving if we get to the next chapter very VERY quickly - ha ha
really good writing
loing life,
Charle
Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
great chapter :)
Reviewer: Winifred (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yeah, you're back! I missed your stories so much. I've liked every story of yours that I've read and thats a lot. I'm so happy that you decided to continue this story because I love this very much and I would have been sad if you had decided to delete this.
Justin is going to be dad! I really hope that everything will be alright and Daphne and the baby will be healthy and okay. It's also great that Brian and Justin will try again - hope so this time they'll be alright and happy together. But I'm little afraid what everybody in Pittsburg will say when they find out about Justin and Brian.
Anyway, great that you're back and I'll be waiting for the next chapter =)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 5
How did I miss this story? I really enjoy it. Nice plot, can't wait to see how things go from here.
Lori
Author's Response: Well, this is the first time I've updated since January so it's been a good three months, that would have been why? Anyway, really glad that you like. <3
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
So glad to finally see this delightful update! Thanks so much; looking forward to more, soon,
Author's Response: So am I. Real life really took my family down and it was hard on my muse but I'm back! =D Glad you like. <3
Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
love this!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
Okay so they are meeting for dinner... I really wanna read that chapter now.
Great update sweetie. Until next time then...Marla
Author's Response: Totally late but working on the dinner chapter now. <3
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG OMG OMG OMG!
I just decided to read this after the coment you left on Feral Love.
I love this!
Can't wait for the update.
<3
Author's Response: Totally late but thank you. Glad you decided to read this. Finally working on the next chapter now. <3
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
really really nice - a new story with all the important elements - our two boys, and their love - can't wait to see how this plays out - and of course...the reunion! wink wink - update soon!
Charle
Author's Response: Late but I am working on it right now. I've had little pieces of the whole story written on paper and now I just need to get the chapters together to post them. <3
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
love it
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
love it
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
love it
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
love it
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
hears hoping i love tha chapter kim
Author's Response: <3
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2012 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Loveing this.......(so glad you didn't have to wait to long to post!). Hope for undate soon. many Thanks!
Author's Response: This is totally two months late, but working on the next right this minute! <3
Reviewer: jules2009 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
I love this story! I was hooked from chapter one and check every day for an update.
I hope you will update soon!!???
Love you writing :-) and hope you will be successful with working on finishing your stories they are all very good, but this one... sigh it´s my favorite of yours (until now) :-)
Author's Response: I know this respond it like months late but I am working on an update right this minute. So glad you like this story. <3
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 3
Don't get me wrong!! but you will anyways...but didn't brian cheat on justin and justin forgave him but brian left him anyway for ten years so why is justin dumb ass family giving him a hard time about getting back with him and brian never told his whatever they are to him about justin! if it was the other way around brian would big time give justin a hard way to go be forgeting back with him stop making justin so easy.
Author's Response: Really, Brian didn't actual cheat per say. Justin had told him he could trick all he wanted but there were rules they both had to follow and Brian broke them. Yes Justin had forgiven him, but Brian had made a promise and basically hated himself for breaking that promise to Justin so he left. Now Justin was in town to get Brian back but after running into him at the diner, he is having second thoughts but Daphne, who pretty much saw their love for each other when they were together and how bad Justin was after Brian left, wants them to get back together because she knows that Justin is not completely happy and won't be unless he is with Brian again. There will be a lot of talking between Brian and Justin in the next two or three chapters about all of this and more. <3
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great update! Sorry to hear it might be a while until the next one. I'll wait for the next installment with anticipation.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm hoping I can talk him out of canceling the internet, but I'm not so sure. We'll see tomorrow if I post again or not. Thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
There is no reason to say this but I am gonna say it just as well, those boys are certainly fucked up! Furthermore, I hope against hope that Brian actually goes after his man and at the same time Daphne will have her water broken and all that BEFORE Justin's crew is to leave for Chicago...
I mean I can see it taking longer than that but I just don't want to LOL
Great story sweetie, until the next time *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Haha, well I'm working on it all now. I have little pieces of the story written in a notebook, just need to get the chapters together now. <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Woah! That was a mouthful, but then again you can always trust Cynthia [I love that woman]. I liked the beginning of the story and the history the boys have between them, however fucked up the reason for the separation, pure Kinney maneuver...
I guess I am gonna go on reading the second installment and see where you are going with your muse. TTYL Marla
Author's Response: Yeah that was a lot. I actually changed that part of the story about fifty times before settling on that. <3
Reviewer: Henny71 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 2
Why do I feel like I read this story somewhere? Great start. Update soon.
Author's Response: I don't know, I've never posted this before so maybe it was someone elses story with the same sort of plot? Anyway, thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
WOWZA:)
Author's Response: <3
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great, so far. Can't wait for the next update.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thanks! <3
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
It's so stupid, those two still love each other yet they each think the other doesn't. Your gonna make sure they get past that aren't ya??? I see some nice long chapters in your future. So Justin's gonna be a dad? Can't wait to see if Brian finds out and what he's gonna think about that. After all they are still legally married, right?
Author's Response: It'll all be sorted out, I promise. What sort of person would I be if I didn't hook them back up in the end? Or will I? As for Justin about to be a father, yes. But Gus is also in this story so Brian is already a father so I don't think much would be said about it. Thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting indeed. Great premise. Can't wait to read more.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my God. Who would have thought. Brian married to Justin!!! And Justin a writer? This story is going to be very interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Brian and Justin are married! <3
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
great beginning. i am going to love this. great idea!:)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting and intriguing... very different from the usual they meet, break up and meet again and stay together.
I'll be very curious to read the rest... and I'm definitely looking forward to reading where you go and how you get there.
Cheers, Laura :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I've had those stories before. Figured I'd try something different this time, lol. <3
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
good start, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! <3
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
great beginning, more please .
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
This promises to be a great story,looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
i like it update soon kim
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
mmmmmmmmm My comment is only about justin, he was young kid than, he's a man now and will not take shit from anyone even brian?????????.
Author's Response: I sort of made him a more confident teen then from the show for this story so even at 17, he wouldn't take shit from anyone, even Brian. Thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is sounds like it's going to be a really good story. Can't wait for more. Britin.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response: <3
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