Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2019 03:05 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved it

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2018 11:35 PM · On: Epilogue

Great story!!!  Loved it!!

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:48 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved it

Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks, this was good and yes it deserves a sequel.

Reviewer: Cherrycheriie (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 05:34 AM · On: Epilogue

yes, sequel please :)



Author's Response:

I'll make a note of it! Hopefully, I'll get around to writing it soon XD

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Epilogue

That was great and yes we want a sequel to the story... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you so much :D

I'm already working out an idea for a sequel :p

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Prologue

Hey,
Great story. I loved it. Thank you for writing and posting it.
Sasha

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed this story!

Would you want there to be a sequel? Only some people have asked and I want to get some overview on what people want XD

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Epilogue

Perfect story. I loved every word. You had a nice blend of new elements and a few key scenes from the series to make a new and much improved version. You even made me not hate Michael and that's a miracle. I'm very sad story is over.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed this story so much and stuck with it!

Do you want there to be a sequel? Some people have asked about it and I want to get an overview of what people want before I start writing :)

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Prologue

thank you for sharing your story

i enjoyed reading



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Epilogue

great  ending   kim



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Epilogue

Very nicely done.  I truly enjoyed reading this.  I think you took what happened in Season 4 and made it much better.  I, too, would love a sequel, but I'm not sure how I'd like it to go.  Maybe your muse can take this story somewhere positive in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing :)

I shall add your vote to my list XD If there was a sequel, it would be either preparing for or going to the wedding.

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 04:54 AM · On: Epilogue

Hi, i gues i'm voting here for a sequel,yes,yes and yes.

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing :)

I shall add your vote to my list XD

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Epilogue

I want a sequel!!;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing :)

I shall add your vote to my list XD

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 09:57 PM · On: Prologue

Loved the epilogue, but it looks like there is a chapter missing? Seems like a huge leap to go from telling Deb and agreeing to get married to Brian getting a clean bill of health.  Either way this was a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing :)

No, there isn't a missing chapter. The chapters between the prologue and epilogue are pretty much spread out across the monthly period within which Brian is going through radiation. The marriage was pretty much guarnteed on Brian getting a clean bill of health, which is how the story ends. Some people want sequels, but I'm not entirely sure whether or not it would ruin the feel of the story. If there was a sequel, it would preparing for/or at the wedding.

Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 9

This is a wonderful story! I love how you have rewritten the cancer episodes. I like this so much better.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm chuffed you think this is so good XD

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

I LOVE IT!! Can't wait for another update!=D



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

Enjoying it.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

i like it update soon  kim



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 6

last few lines are the best lines to explain Michael and Brian. Completely Hopeless :)



Author's Response:

I know. No matter how much of an arse they act towards each other, it always ends up settled and happy in the end i.e. hopeless xD

Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 02:26 AM · On: Prologue

Justin is amazing, just like this chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love this story! Please update soon:):)



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you're enjoying this! I should be updating up by the end of the week :D

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love this story, thanks for the update.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!

I'm glad you're enjoying this story and I hope you keep reading xD

*hugs*

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 7

ilove gus and justin drawing together    kim



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I always thought they were sweet together, like a cute little family xD

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

Enjoying it.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is a well written cancer fic. I like the concept of Brian allowing Justin to help him through the illness this time. It's interesting to see how this proceeds.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you're enjoying this fic. It's my first cancer arc story and I'm glad it's going was well XD

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

love the way justin looked after brian kim

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love the Brian and Justin relationship.    They r such opposites but they balance out each other



Author's Response:

They are just perfect together. Situations like the cancer arc are brilliant for bringing our boys together :)

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great Chapter.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

Now that is a turn of the canon that I like to read. Having any person fighting cancer alone is cruel and ultimately stupid, when said person has so many people caring for him [I just don't understand the writers of the show some times, but hey that's just me].

I like the perseverence that Justin shows toward his stubborn sick partner.

Until next time then... Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I felt the same, Justin would have stuck by Brian, especially after everything, he's stubborn that way X)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

I know all people deal differently with life altering diseases, and mind you cancer is way up that list, now add to that mix our beloved Brian and you have an explosive mix to say the least.

I loved the way you wrote this chapter, Brian and then Justin and then both of them, the determination of Justin to stand by his man no matter what bullshit his partner would throw at him.

I am gonna continue to the next chapter and comment more... Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it - I felt I just had to do a chapter with Brian completely freaking out XD

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great Chapter, love all the details. You know how to paint a picture with words.
Lori

Author's Response:

Awh, thank you, I appreciate the compliments :) <3

 

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

i like it update soon kim

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

"For once in his life, he needed someone – needed Justin – to hold him, to be with him, to care about him. He would take the risk to feel that, even just for a fragment of time."

You have a very mature Brian here. Good story so far.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I wanted Brian to be more mature than he was about the cancer in the tv show, I think, but I really do like that quote. One of my friends suggested it to me and I just couldn't get it out of my head until I wrote it down lol

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Prologue

Good start!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh i loved this I cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Hopefully I'll be updating this weekend XD

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was great.   One question was the prologue was that a hint of the future because justin was with him at the hospital with him and this time he was confused why Brian was there.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Yes, the prologue is a jump into the future, which will be returned too later on in the story

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 10:54 PM · On: Prologue

Oh thar was truly beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2012 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

great chapter kim

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Anesthesia sure brought out the worst in Brian! But Justin was over his little worry wart fit and once again they seem to fit each others missing parts perfectly. They really do belong together. I can't wait to see how they manage the rest of the road to recovery. I am enjoying this story.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lol ^^ yup, a very bad reaction.

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! XD

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love your story, please give us happy ending. On cancer stories it is good to give hope and let people know their is fear and there is pain, but there are storys of victory of renewed love many, many times some times like the charactor of Brian chances are good and you find out who really loves you. 



Author's Response:

The happy ending is a dead given, I promise XD

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

Justin sure needed someone to share and the choice of Jennifer was very good. He will need the support that is for sure.

Great work sweetie. TTYL Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very nice.  It was good to see how you pulled a few items from the past into the story with just a few key words.  I am very attached to this story and I hope it is going to be very long!  The way you are pacing the story now offers me hope for a full length novel :)  

I think the pep talk from Mama Taylor was just the thing Justin needed to make him realize he has to be ready to take care of Brian and that he is capable to do the job.

Lori



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you like this story! 

It's not very long, but it still has a few good chapters to go and I have been thinking about a sequel. Everything will be revealed at the end, and you can tell me what you're vote on the matter is :D

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh no, Justin is not going to be much help to Brian if he's this stressed out already.  I think he needs a smack up the side of the head from Debbie.  But I have confidence when it all comes down to the wire he'll find some courage and be able to offer the support Brian needs.

This story is so much better than the TV version!  

Lori



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

I'm glad you're enjoying it so much - I'm hoping to get the next chapter up this weekend XD

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

This was a great update sweetie!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

I always like to read stories where Brian actually lets Justin in without too much fuss. Of course it is not pleasant readig about cancer [it hits too close to home] I like it when you ahve the characters supporting each other rather than having them fighting off that dreadful disease alone.

So I will continue to follow this story and see where your muse is taking you.

Until next time. Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I've always wanted to write one of these cancer arc stories. It's kind of difficult to try and write about something as serious as cancer, when I really have had no real life experiencs about it. I'm hoping that this story ends up being realistic at least. 

I always thought that Justin should have been there for Brian, considering they seemed to be doing so well, although there's bound to be some kind of arguement over Brian's obvious insecurities.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

When I read a wonderful chapter like this I feel so sorry for people who don't enjoy reading and arent willing to be swept away by the written word.  I am so thankful that I can escape into so many other new worlds in a matter of moments just by reading the works of talent authors like you.  

I can't wait to read more.

Lori



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I really appreciate all the love and support from all my readers and, yes, I fully agree with you. There's so many amazing stories out there - both fanfiction and otherwise - and it's so sad that some people will never get to read them and go through everything with the authors. I love escaping into a story and I'm glad I was able to help you escape into mine :D

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Prologue

Really good so far. I have always felt that the cancer arc was not given the power it could have had - and can't wait to see how you treat this storyline - it really has the potential to mold and change the boys so much more than the show took advantage of - with the levels of trust and dependence needed so far out of Brians comfort zone, yet so absolutely what it takes to make him recognize his worth to Justin and how very much he is loved...not to mention forcing everyone to recognize the strength and confidence that Justin is capable of when his very being is threatened. Together these two are a foce beyond measure.

more please....lol

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. You made the whole situation so poetic, I just hope I do it justice in the end...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 03:23 AM · On: Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

XD

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