Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: bubbafrogz@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2016 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

Brian said that really well.  True to it's name!! 

Reviewer: bubbafrogz@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2016 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

What a wonderful evening and then... thanks Ted.  Damn.  Justin has a good plan but I don't think or hope it will stand. 

Reviewer: bubbafrogz@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2016 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good! Brian is still in and just has to prove he wants to and can stay!  Brian is definetly a vision!  Laying it out there!

Reviewer: bubbafrogz@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2016 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

Change is hard and so is realization!  Glad Mickey has friends to lean on.  Love Brian wanting this and thinking this through!  Come on Brian!  She'll see it is all worth it, I hope?!!

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

" Even as he spoke, his eyes never swayed from their gaze on the pools of ocean blue that he saw when he looked at this man who had boldly stepped past every hurdle to getting what he wanted,  realizing with a start that at this moment,  what Justin wanted...was him."

LOVED IT!!!!  Once will not be enough. 

"Fuck...that was...I don't even think there are words to describe what that was." Brian sighed.  "I have never needed to cum that badly in my whole life! And, that was just the beginning. I am going to fuck you so hard and so long that there is no way for you to move this week without being reminded of today - and how I felt inside you. "

MORE LOVE!!!

Cynthia gets a raise!  Life will not be the same it will be better.  OH NO, I was hoping this would be mutual.  WOW a jaded Justin.  Brian is very good!!! as Justin will come to realize....



Author's Response:

thank you so much for all your thoughtful comments - it makes it all worthwhile - and I love when folks like what I wrote...

hope you like the rest as well

happy reading!

Charle

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh I think he is about to DO NEEDY!!  Brian has met his myth.  Talk is good!  Neither one wants to loose the other.  I like that Brian can tell Mikey he doesn't want to loose him.  You did that awesome!  Nice timing!  Go Justin Go!!  YESYESYESYES!!!  Justin has great ideas!

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

I don't think this resistance is going to last long!!  UH OH

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2016 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have a hard time imagining Brian and Mikey being intimate and Brian risking their bond.  I look forward to how you handle it.  Love the electricity between Justin and Brian!!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 6

At last: Brian and Michael start growing up and learn to be true friends, letting go of their codependent enabling (and I hope Michael loses that horrid whining). Plus, Brian does romance. <3



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and taking the time to let me know that you emjoyed it - and for the great comments

Charle

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

Reversed roles a bit, but both Justin and Brian need to learn about and accept love.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like take-charge Justin! And, I hope, at some stage, toppy Justin too.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ugh, that high-pitched Mikey whine would set anyone's nerves on edge. Must be time for that codependence to end. Hooray!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Intriguing opening with instant attraction on both sides--what else with Brian & Justin. ;)

Have to get Brian away from Mikey; those two don't belong together romantically in any time or place.

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

I really loved this story I just felt the ending was kind of rushed. Justin said towards the very end that he couldn't take a chance on love then he gives in three lines later without much effort or struggle. It felt a little too quick. 

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

you're welcome! - thanks for taking the time to read and respond! it makes it all worth it

Charle

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 9

Aww, such a sweet ending! Loved the story! It seemed a little rushed but I think RL and your muse kept fucking with you; otherwise you would have been able to go deeper into the storyline. But, an excellent fic, nonetheless! :-)

More hugs! Cindy

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just noticed that this is finished so I started reading ... I'm going to be as kind and respectful as I can when I tell you that I LOVE IT!! The plotline is interesting and it looks like Michael will be getting the boot soon! And, even without a beta, I don't see glaring typos or grammar mistakes that make me cringe (a BIG plus in my book!)

Now, I'm off to read Chap. 2 ... I'll probably finish it tonight! :-)

HUGS!! Cindy

Author's Response:

thanks - lol - hope you like the rest as much as the first! 

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very sweet. I really liked agressive Justin - way more fun than seeing him always as the victim. Good job. TAG

Author's Response:

thank you - and my thoughts exactly - very glad you liked it!

Charle

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hi, Charle!  So glad to see you updating again!  And you don't need to apologize - I certainly know how the best of intentions can get in the way of RL situations. 

I for one don't mind at all a more open and honest Brian - I like to think of him maturing and changing over the years.  I think we certainly saw glimpses of that in the show as well.  I'm glad he and Justin were able to work things out.:)

Thanks for this very entertaining story - and also thank you for all the ongoing support that you give me as well for my OWN stories - that means so much to me that you do that consistently.:)

I will be looking forward to reading more stories from you in the future as time permits.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Kim - even with all you have had going on - you are always among the first to support and encourage - thank you friend - you are amazing! I hope you are recuperated, well rested, feeling fine and loving life!

While writing a totally in character Brian is a hoot - he is such an adorable asshole and we love him dearly - I often struggle with the result, Justin ever the victim - strong and brave one minute and running away with his tail between his legs (no pun intended - lol) the next. I think there are plenty of stories out there that indulge our need for sarcasm and cliffs from our handsome brunette, and so once in a while i like a story that validates Justin in a whole new way, shows some more of his layers - and still always but always ends with these two deeply in love.

I think that's what I love about your stories - other than the fact that you just write so well. There is always a new layer added, whether AU or canon - always a new way to look at some aspect of their relationship. You really understand our boys - and your love for them shows through.

hugs and kisses

Charle

 

 

Reviewer: GC84 (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2012 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 9

That was really good! Thanks for the update!

R u goin to work on another story?

I really like Justin's attitude here i've been scanning for stories much like this one. I'm glad i found yours... I'd like it if Justin looks up to Brian like a brother or something and he's not remotely sexually attracted to Brian that would be interesting for once Justin is not the one doing all the work.

Thanks again!

G



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to respond.

I'm sure I will have more stories coming, the ideas hit me every now and then. Probably will stick to a few one shots until life calms down so I don't leave folks hanging, but we'll see where the muse leads.

I agree that it is nice sometimes for Justin to not need to be the driving force - although to do that it is necessary for Brian to be pretty far OOC which some folks don't like. Sure am glad there are enough of us out there who don't mind mixing it up a little - its all good as long as our boys end up in love - right?

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2012 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 9

This was a wonderful story, hun. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!

Hugsss



Author's Response:

thank you so much - warms my heart to know that you liked it!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

Intriguing chapter, Charle - I knew you were going to throw a wrench in there - ha!  Nothing is ever easy with these boys, is it, but you know how much I LOVE the angst because the culmination is that much more intense!  Something tells me that as much as Justin's head is telling him to stand by his convictions, his heart is telling him something else, and Brian is going to do his best to change his mind.  Looking forward to how all this gets resolved, my friend.  Thanks!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim, my friend - you know these two are rarely hotter than when something (or someone) is trying to stop them...even if most of the time its they themselves that are standing in their own way...

this story is not over by far - but we all know that in the end...their 'depth of love' always wins the day!

thanks for your continued support - it means the world

Charle

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2012 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

Brian had alot to tell....hopes Justin listens....



Author's Response:

he sure does - and we all know how comfortable he is talking about his feelings - lol

thanks so much for taking the time to read and review

Charle

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

Boy Justin is not making this easy. Nice change to see Brian is the one trying to build a relationship. Can't wait to see how he talks his way thru Mikey.
Lori

Author's Response:

thanks Lori - nothing is ever easy for these two is it? - yet it seems that neither man can get the other completely out of his system, huh?

and you're right...now to explain Mikey...can he make Justin understand?

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hey!

I had to actually reread the story..coz I sort of forgotten the storyline (bad memory here) and now that I've read all of them, all I can say..it's still got me hooked! Great writing :)

I love the angst in this chapter but at the same time, I feel a little bad for Brian.

I hope you update soon =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to re-read through the whole story so far - and how thrilled I am that you are still enjoying the ride.

If Brian only knew we were feeling a little sorry for him - well we all know what that does to his 'manhood' ha ha. But, I'm sure he will be the first to say that it was all be worth it in the end.

have started on the noext chapter - will post as soon as I am able

Happy Easter

Charle

 

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great story, good to see such a different Brian, so totally captured by Justin and willing to admit it. Now it's convincing Justin that he wants Brian just as much.
Lori

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story, Lori. I am having so much fun with this one. I too love the juxtaposition, Brian pursuing Justin, yet both with elements of their canon characters in place.

This story has taken on a life of its own, and I am as excited as the readers to see what might happen as we move along,although I admit I do have one or two things up my sleeve that will move the story along.

hope you keep enjoying the journey

Charle

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well, he didn't say what KIND of dinner - I think he's got Justin in mind for the appetizer, entree, AND dessert - ha!  Very sweet, Charle.  I like a romantic Brian.  And I love the idea of our little blond being wooed to within an inch of his life.  You can tell that despite his protestations to the contrary, it wouldn't take much for  Justin  to promptly succumb, though.  I'm looking forward to seeiing how long he can hold out - ha!  I'll be waiting for the rest of your tale, Sweetie. *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey Kim, glad you are stilling following along and enjoying the ride! I am having such a ball with this one, it is almost writing itself. And, while I am sure you are right and Brian would love nothing more than to feast on our blonde, the road these two take is never the easy one. Thanks as always for your encouragement. I am working on the next chapter and it may even be up tonight yet. 

Have a wonderful blessed Easter.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2012 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

Totally loving it....impatiently await the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:)

thanks - I am working on the next chapter andwill update as soon as I can - hope you continue to enjoy!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2012 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just started reading and I love it.



Author's Response:

so glad you like it - thank you for taking the time to read and review

loving life,

Charle

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

I read all chapters in one go and I love it. Think I'm hooked.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

awww Marny - thanks for taking the time to do that - working on the next chapter - hope you continue to enjoy it - I am having fun writing this one

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 6

Well, I admit when I started reading this chapter after the previous steaminess that I thought it would be kind of an interlude of sorts, but I actually really enjoyed this one!  Of course, the sexy activities in the office were really hot, but I liked this more introspective reflection of Brian - and even, God help me - Michael's - feelings! 

I'm wondering if you might be going to have Ted pursue Mikey now - we all know he had a crush on him in the show.  We all know that Brian is definitely done with him.

At any rate, I really like the idea of Brian 'wooing' Justin and going after his heart instead of his body for a change!  I will be eagerly waiting for your next chapter, Charle!  Kudos and Hugs!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

oh  Kim - I have been anxious to hear what you thought of how the story is going - so glad the direction my muse is leading me does not disappoint.  And what a lovely little side benefit to have made Mikey, the necessary thorn in my side throughout the show, become temporarily likeable enough to garner your compassion... lol - quite an accomplishment I would say

a Ted and Mikey pairing does seem possible - it keeps jumping to my mind as well - how clever of you to notice - it was never explored enough on the show I think - we'll see what the muse has to say ;)

thank so much for your consistent support - it means the world - I'm having a blast contemplating this aspect of Brian - you know its all about the love for me (but...don't rule out the hot passion - these two will never be tame!)

loving life

Charle

 

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am greatly enjoying this story. It's such an original idea, and I'm looking forward to where you take it next. Great job! Thanks so much for the update. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

oh my - I couldn't be more thrilled - these lovely comments mean so very much coming from you...one of my own favorite writers - wow - I am so happy you are enjoying the story.

I will try my best to have an update each week - and apologize in advance if that stretches out a couple of days further at times - but I am really loving writing these two...and the fun is only just beginning!

I only hope you continue to enjoy the journey.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2012 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

this story is the best am loving it so much-can't wait for more-sooner i hope as your muse seems to have recuperated. :)



Author's Response:

haha - thanks Linda - yes, my muse seems to have returned from the land of the lost - it's a wonderful thing! there is nothing worse than a story stuck in my head that I can't get out.

I don't have words to tell you how much your consistent encouragement means to me. I am so very thrilled that this story appeals to you since I am having a blast writing it.  Thank you so very much for taking the time to let me know. Its so much more fun with a friend along for the ride!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: awan_angel (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hello,

Why, this is new perspective. No stories I've read subjecting Brian and Mikey are fuck buddy. You make new beginning and imagination that "something" really happen between two bestfriend. Although Justin presence is can never be denied by Brian.

Well,, how will I put your story into alert? I don't even have an account here. Do you update this regularly? If so, then I have to check it in my regular time of reading fanfiction.

Regards,

~awan

PS: you can contact me on my email: awan_angel@yahoo.com



Author's Response:

love that you are enjoying this story - not sure that you can get alerts registering - but doing so is easy - and well worth it! - there are quite a few really excellent writers here that you will most definitely want to follow, and then you can keep up with this story as well

I try to update as often as I can - although admittedly real life keeps that from being as often as I'd like

looking forward to running into you here often

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

this is a wonderful story am enjoying it immensely.



Author's Response:

Thank you Linda. I really appreciate you taking the time to read - and then to respond. It warms my heart to know that you are enjoying this story.

loving life

Charle

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hi, Charle, my friend!  I really enjoyed this chapter!  I really like the way you got inside Brian's head as he realized Justin means more to him then a one-time tryst.  Not to mention their encounter was hot!  And I like this side of Justin - bold and confident in one regard, but also vulnerable, too.:) 

Brian found a great way to show Justin how serious he is about him, too, with the revised art brochure.  Looking forward to the rest of your story.:)  Oh, and the sofa bed was perfect - ha! *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I am truly humbled Kim. These kind words from you mean so very much, coming from one of my all time favorite writers! How could I help but be thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter, even getting my vision of Justin here, fragile yet strong. Thank you so much my friend for your support and encouragement. You are a treasure!...and I'm glad you liked the sofa bed - I knew it had to happen in the bath house turned office, but my boys need to be comfortable. ha ha

Now, I am off to read how you got Justin out of this mess in Paper Hearts, while you ready the next installment of TTWS, and then still my anxious heart with what I know will be heartwrenching yet exciting as Parent Trap continues. You know what a sucker I am for these two torn open and laid bare (emotionally ... along with other obvious possibilities). After all these years, fireworks are inevitable. I can't wait.

thanks again for your review - it made my day!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

that was some heat   i love it    kim



Author's Response:

Thank you Kim. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I figured I had it had been so long since I left he boys on the edge of fulfilling their desires that I owed those reading along a hot continuation. It was the least I could do! :)

thank you for taking the time to respond

loving life

Charle

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh come on sweetie, you do not let a sex scene linger...It is not dignified LOL!

The end conversation of the Brian and Michael [shudders] relationship was small and to the point, and I loved that Michael did not make any fuss over it, I mean the man went there knowing the result, but then again this is Michael we are talking about here, so anything was possible.

As for Justin busting into Brian's office, I LOVED IT!

Cant wait for the next update [not only for the sex scene, get your mind out of the gutter] I want to see if the boys are gonna get it out of their system LOL

Until the next time then... Marla



Author's Response:

thank you Marla - it's great to know that at least two of you seem to be enjoying this story - other than me, of course! ha ha ha

as for the 'lingering' - i will do my best to make it worth the wait ...

thanks again for hanging in there - and being so supportive - it means alot!

Charle

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

Me like me like..haha..I love how this is going :) and michael's out of the picture...yeeah..



Author's Response:

ha ha - how did I know that Mikey's departure would make you smile? I love that you are still liking it...and that you are so supportive. Thanks again!

Charle

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

love the story update soon kim

Author's Response:

thanks - so glad you like it - am working on the next chapter, but need to take the time to make it all it can be - I always get so anxious writing the 'hot' scenes!

Charle

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Whoo hoo!!! this one is going to be a keeper. :)



Author's Response:

:)

thanks - sure hope you continue to enjoy the journey as we go!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

OK lets comment now, I could never picture Brian in a relationship with Michael, EVER you know? I mean the guy is impossible and sooooo whinney, he really gets to my nerves, so I will be absolutely content to see Michael taking the place he deserves in Brian's life [if it was my way he would be getting the high way but hey that's just little ole me LOL].

I cant wait for the next installment sweetie. Marla



Author's Response:

ha ha - I agree that Michael and Brian is a match made in...la la land - but I needed him in some type of 'thing' and before Justin - the only remote possibility would be Michael - even if it was just long enough for them both to realize that it's just...wrong! We all know that for Brian...all roads lead to...Justin!

Thanks again! You're support is terrific!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sweetie I loved it! The first encounter with the boys was beautifully written and I felt like I was in the room with them seeing their reactions to one another.

I will continue reading now and comment as I go along.

Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you Marla - the renewed interest in this story has been a pleasant surprise. I am working on the next chapter and will pst it as soon as I can.

Thanks again for your time and kind words. It means so much.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hey still waiting for the update ;) I was just going through my reviews (I'm a really bored person)..and stumbled here..it really is getting more interesting..hope to get your update soon :D 



Author's Response:

thank you so much - I really needed this in order to convince myself that this story shouldn't just die a slow death -  when I got no review at all on the 2nd chapter I couldn't muster up the desire to continue - now I will have to go back and revisit it and see what my muse has to say! I so appreciate you taking the time to read it and respond - it made my day!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

I loved the sexual tension between them.  I hope they do something about it soon.



Author's Response:

thanks Bridget - these two will always find their way to each other - no fail

thanks for reading and reviewing

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh..........how delicious!  Such exciting titillation! PLEASE, more and soon.! Loved it, thank you.



Author's Response:

wow - thanks - will try to finish the next chapter as soon as I can

I appreaciate you taking the time to read and respond

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

i like it so far update soon    thanku kim



Author's Response:

thanks Kim - will try to update as quickly as possible

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

This meeting has even more zing than the wonderful lamp post one.  I can tell this is going to be a wonderful story.  I'm sure I'll be able to forget that icky little bit of Brian sharing a bed with Michael.  From the sparks flying and pants feeling snug I have a feeling poor Michael will be looking for a new sleeping spot soon.

Thanks for sharing this story..

Lori



Author's Response:

Hi Lori - thanks for the review. I agree that Michael in Brian's bed is unsettling at best, and in truth actually quite distasteful, at least for me, - but believe me he doesn't deserve that spot and won't be there any longer than necessary. I am so glad that you like the story so far, and hope that you will continue to enjoy it as it continues. I have so many thoughts about how this story plays out, I'm not even sure myself where it might lead - it will be as exciting for me as for the readers.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: amyb. (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love it keep i t going and more please.

Author's Response:

Thanks - as long as folks keep loving it - I'll keep writing! More coming soon, I will try to post as soon as possible.

I appreciate the review!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start I can't wait for more... I hope we don't have to wait long for them to get together; poor Mikey...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathleen - glad you like the story so far. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. That's what makes writing worthwhile.  These two can't help but find their way to each other, but it won't be an easy road, I'm afraid...and as for Mikey - well - I believe that in this life - we always get exactly what we deserve in the end...

Hope you continue to enjoy as the story unfolds.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Ana (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am liking this so far and will continue to read. I just have to know how much Brian and Michael I will have to go through. I already like the voice of your Brian and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. You have good instinct, things will not go easily for Brian and Michael - there is more than one level to their relationship, and there is so much story to tell between all of them. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as the layers unfold.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sooooo loving this story, is great, the way they atract each other is magical.

please go on with the story.

kisses



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad you love it, 'cause I am already having fun writing it. You're right, there is something magical between these two, their love is a force unto itself, and I just couldn't get past the idea that it is so strong that they could actually feel it right from the start.

I appreciate you taking the time to read and review - it mean a lot.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow great start I look forward to more edventures with our boys



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so happy that you like it so far. Any time these two get together, adventure is just the very word for it. Since the plot bunny here was actually this initial meeting, I am not sure myself where it will lead, but you can be sure there will be plenty of excitement, and of course some angst, along the way. Thanks for taking the time to read, and review. That means alot.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!!  this is a great beginning.  good name for this one, but we all know how combustible their relationship is.  will be waiting for more as your writing is a no-brainer.



Author's Response:

Hi Linda - and thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so glad you like the beginning of this one. I couldn't get the idea out of my mind - even on the show there was something overwhelming for both boys right from the very beginning - something neither had ever felt before, something to strong to be stopped. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your support  - thanks for taking the time to review. It keeps me motivated. Will try to update as quickly as RL allows.

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting..love to read more! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review - you don't know how much that means! I'm glad you like this so far. I will try to update as quickly as possible. I have lost of ideas running around in my mind. Usually I know the end before I start, but this time the plot bunny was the very beginning, so even I am not sure where this will lead - which is fun for me. Hope you continue to enjoy it as we journey forward!

loving life,

Charle

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