Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2019 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
More? Pretty please.
Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is great, are you going to finish?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2013 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
More please!
Reviewer: Cat (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2012 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
OMG! Brian is sweeter in this than he is in QAF! And he's a criminal in this.
Author's Response: Yes, I really just wanted Brian to be much more sweeter to Justin, because of his new found possessiveness!!
Thank you for reading :P
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is very enjoyable. I love th bad-bad Brian, it's a great contrast to Justin's innocence. Looking forward to your next update.
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Thank you :D
I hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
I just started reading this story. I like what you're doing, still keeping the essence of Brian and Justin but adding something to make it fresh and new.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
What? Justin is hiding something too!!!!!?????? MORE PLEASE! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, Justin has a secret too - you'll find out in the next chapter ;)
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yeah!!!!! Thank you for updating! It was too short *sighs*. But I think that even if you had written 20 000 words it wouldn't have been enough! lol. LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Lol, thank you :D
I'm glad you like this story!!
Reviewer: pen-f (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
I love how Brian's not being too arrogant and admitting his interest in Justin upfront. I love that new development in Brian's character. :) Can't wait to see what happens with the dead bodies found. Keep up the amazing writing!
Much love!
-PF
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I really love writing it, it's so fun. I'm planning to start writing it soon, but I still have to post the next A Beautiful Mistake before then x)
Thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Penelope Ferris (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG Dad-Brian is my favourite! Especially doting Dad-Brian hahaha Another great chapter!
-PF
Author's Response: Yes, Dad-Brian is brilliant! This story is going to have a lot of Dad-Brian as well as Badass-Brian!
Thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Penelope Ferris (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love this story so far!! Thank you for changing up Brian and Justin's forst time a bit, while also keeping to what actually happened. Too many people use the actual plot verbatim that it was nice to see a change while also seeing parts hadn't as well. Kepp up the great work! :)
-PF
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this story and I hope you keep reading!!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
love it - Brian admitting he wanted more right from the very start - like it was ever really a question for anything other than his own limited mind...lol
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I really wanted for Brian to just know what he wants, and I hope this shows that XD
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 5
hope the boys dont get hurt
Author's Response: Hmm, I can make no promises for the future. But for now, everything better them is good :D
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
And I love the banner!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, it's a perfect example of foreverbm's great work :D
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm in love with this story! Great work! I want more please!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Hopefully, I will update this story soon!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
love it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very intriguing story. Love the first four chapters, can't wait to read more.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this, I'll hopefully be updating this week or next, depending on how much work I have xD
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
Whaouh I forgot to mention that's one of the best smuts I ever read!!!!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!
I always have doubts when it comes to writing the smut scenes that are, let's face it, a little integrel to any QAF story, so it's great to hear some positive feedback!
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
I was so glad to see an update for this story, thank you for that!!!! I'm excited to see how it will progress, there are so many possibilities. I'm eager and ready for the ride!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this fic as much as I am enjoying writing it! I'm altering between updates so next week I'll update 'Brian's Secret' and the following week this one. However, I have half term this week and if I have time between all my college work, I may be able to update both sooner than usual :D
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
looks good.wheres whiney mikey
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Mikey will show up later in the story, promise XD
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story.bad guy brian.what will justin do when he founds out.more please
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 3
I reread your story during a moment of boredom and I want an update like now, pretty please! It looks so promising, please say you will update soon! I love Dark Brian!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm hoping to update this week, along with the next chapter of A Beautiful Mistake but that all depends on how much time I can wiggle out around my college work XD
Oh, and I love Dark Brian too ;)
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I like this very much! I always like criminal!Brian stories and now to add this Brian that wants to keep Justin from day one; that's going to be fun! Plus, you write great porn!! :-D
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this story, it's my first criminal fic!
Oh, thank you. I'm glad my Brian/Justin porn is a hit lol ^^
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
He is so fucked indeed...
As for Lindsay, I would really like to see her suffer the wrath of the mighty Kinney LOL
Until next time sweetie *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, he totally is :P
Thank you for commenting!
*hugs*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 3
Thank you for updating.
Love this story...I'm looking forward to see how Justin will fit in Brian's dangerous life. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)
I'm glad you like it. I'm hoping that other the next couple of chapters, the dangerous life of Brian will become more obvious XP
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
I like it: Unusual, interesting, hot and so promising. Please update soon.Meanwhile Happy holidays!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Happy Holidays to you too!
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW, this is really good. can't wait to see where you take it. i was a bit shocked at the beginning but i couldn't stop reading. please continue, soon.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
How could you stop where you did? Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Lol, sorry :)
Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very nice story. Any more chapters, I hope so. Keep on writing.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a really good start! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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