Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 03:04 PM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

Another incredible chapter. The playful banter between the boys makes me giggle. Mel she is making me want to jump in a boot her out lol.

 

Fabulous work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2013 07:04 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

If Mel started treating Brian nicely I'd be worried.  Looks like Brian and Justin might be getting close to an agreement on something.  Do they get it resolved before or after they get to the hotel?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  They WILL get it resolved, but near the end - after they get back to the hotel and have some much-needed alone time.  I do hope you continue to enjoy it. If you do, there's a Tricky Christmas story (Framed for Christmas), along with many more. I will also have a new Tricky story in the near future. Thanks for reading and for your comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

I knew you couldn't stop with just two chapters and such a nice long one we have here.  I know Brian has many fans, except for Mel, but I think Tricky is at the top of that list.  Brian is obviously smitten and trying to hide it.  Now if he and Justin would just get there act together.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2011 11:17 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

"As the two men playfully fed each other, Mel looked over at them in astonishment; it was like that other time at dinner several years ago after Justin had been reinstated to PIFA and the two had acted like newlyweds, kissing each other and helping to gather the dinner dishes together at Debbie’s house.  It was amazing to see them still acting that way after so many years."

This was a very enjoyable chapter. I love seeing the boys interacting so lovingly together. It's a wonderful story for the holiday. I'm just wondering about that wishbone, though.



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend! Thanks for your comments.:)  I'm delighted you're enjoying the story.  I'm about to post the final chapter shortly (yes, I have finally reached that point believe it or not - ha!)  The wishbone you mentioned will be making an 'unscheduled guest appearance' at the end of the chapter.  Hope you will enjoy it!  Thanks for your kind words and hope you have a great Thanksgiving!:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

Tricky's antics are so fun, makes me wish I had a dog!  Glad there is hope for a Christmas all together too.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Thanks for reading, my friend!  I'll try hard to figure out a way to bring Tricky back for an encore.:)  I'm working on the next (last?) installment of this Thanksgiving story; I hope to have it posted sometime either later today or tomorrow.:)  Thank you for leaving me your thoughts; I'm so pleased you're enjoying it.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 06:25 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

I'm too tired to say more than .. it's such a sweet story.

You're sure, only the sequel and not more! ... LOL ... sorry.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Aww...Hi, Sweetie!  *hugs* back to you (hopefully you're still awake but maybe you're dreaming in your sleep right now like Tricky does - lol!).  I think they're will be one more chapter - I'm working on it now.  But if it's any consolation at all, Tricky may make a 'guest appearance' in my Christmas fic if I can work him in.  I'm trying for a plot with a jealous Brian in it - I love those kinds of stories! Hopefully I can arrange for a little 'private time,' though, between Brian and Tricky before it's over - ha! 

So great to hear from you, my friend.:)  Take care and sweet dreams.:)

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2011 05:34 AM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

Such a cute chapter we loved it a bear in the loft--indeed ha ha!!  don't over eat on Thanksgiving ha ha!!  I think we all will--my diet will go out the window for that day.  I have lost 15 pounds hope i don't gain too much back.. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend.:)  Congrats on your weight loss!  I think I found it - LOL!  I couldn't help the ' bear' part - I thought it was rather funny if I do say so myself.:)  My mother always makes way too much food so it's hard not to overindulge, unfortunately; she's already baked three pies for Thursday!  I am working on the next chapter of this now so I can hopefully get it done by Thursday. 

I hope you and all the peeps have a wonderful Thanksgiving, my friend; Lee tells me you're all going out to eat together - you are such a special friend to him. Tell everyone thanks for reading this latest chapter and all my other stories - I am thankful for that all the time, not just at this time of year.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Yep! It's a Butterball

Adorable dog in this story and the banter with Brian is priceless. And only five chapters will be perfect for such a story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Bob!  So glad you like Tricky - he is a persistent little (uh, big) fellow, isn't he?  Thanks for leaving your thoughts and for reading - I really AM trying to write just one more chapter, honest, but why does that not sound like I'm sure?  LOL!  Hope you have a great Thanksgiving, BTW - I'm going to try and finish this one by then.:)  Thanks again.:)

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