Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 07:06 AM · On: Irresistible

Brian was so cute reading the story to his son, you put a lump in my throat. Tricky lol 😂 I just about cracked up when he did what he did to Brian 😂😂. As for Mel, grrr she is a grumpy child in an adults body.

 

Excellent work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2013 03:37 AM · On: Irresistible

He,he.  Sleeping on a narrow couch is challenging, though I think if Brian took the recliner, Justin could use him as a pillow.  Tricky sure has taken a liking or a licking to Brian, which I'm sure will delight Gus.

Reviewer: Yyvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Irresistible

Hi Honey,I decided to read this again and I still love it alot :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Aww...thanks, my friend!  You're very kind.:)  I'm glad you liked it enough to read it again!  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Irresistible

This was sweet and fun to read. The characterization of Tricky was perfect for such a "person".



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bob!  Yeah, not much drama here but Tricky is on a quest; he's one curious pooch and Brian is an irresistible target - ha!  Thanks for reading this one, my friend.  I will get it updated/finished very soon.:)

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Irresistible

Brian was sweet with Gus (even if he did shorten the bedtime story, hehe)  I wondered who was going to land on the floor with that sleeping arrangement, sorry Jus!  This is so cute!

“Better look again, Stud; that’s not me”  LOL  



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Love the user name, BTW - not sure how you wound up with it, but I like it!!  Thanks for readng and commenting; all your support is very appreciated.:)  Yeah, not the most optimal sleeping arrangement for our boys, but at least they made the best of it for the time being.:)  And at least Justin has more 'cushioning' on his derriere than Brian - ha!  I couldn't resist Tricky coming  back for more; and I suspect he's not quite done with his goal to prevent the boys from getting a good night's sleep (wink, wink...).

Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Kim!  I will get this updated/finished very shortly.  I have the final part started but I need to finish the next chapter of "My Heart's Desire" first.  Thanks so much for your support.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Irresistible

i love this story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi jm c!  Thanks for the comment, my friend!  I do enjoy writing a humorous, 'fluff' story from time to time; I'm not sure why mine tend to be so angst-filled all the time - LOL!  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story!  I'm a big dog lover, so it was probably a natural for me to focus on one for this holiday tale.:)  And as everyone suspected, I don't know when to quit, so there will be at least one more chapter to this dog-wagging story.:)  Tricky is not yet done on his nocturnal adventures, and he seems to have developed a definite fascination for our alpha male - ha!  I promise to get this updated/finished very soon. 

For now, though, I feel the need to at least get "My Heart's Desire" updated first at risk of neglecting my other stories.  But rest assured I will finish the 'saga of Brian and Tricky' shortly - LOL!  Thanks again, my friend, for reading and especially commenting  - I am very honored.:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Irresistible

I'm enjoying this story sooooo much are you sure that you want to stop at just one more chapter?



Author's Response:

LOL!  Don't tempt me - ha!  Who knows?  By the time I finish with Tricky's nocturnal prowling and tormenting of his favorite new friend, I might just make it to four chapters.  It makes me very happy that you want them at any rate.:)  Your encouragement means more than you know.  Thank you for the comments!  I will see what I can do.  I still want the boys to spend Thanksgiving with Gus and the Munchers and also perhaps discuss their long-distance relationship to see if they can do something to amend that.:)  I promise to update this story soon.  Thanks again for taking the time to comment- that means so much to me.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Irresistible

* giggles * I haven't read it yet, but ... hihi I knew it you can't write a two chapter story. I'm gonna read and commenting at the same time.

 

Oohhh so sweet Brian and Gus together.

Ughhh they are doing it raw !! wowww. I read that part 3 times, wondering if I missed the condom * smiling *.

LOL grumpy Mel.

Pfff Brian you can't push your lover of the couch * shakes head * .

OMG Brian ... LOL ... can't you feel the difference between Justins and Trickys tongue !!

My daughters are asking why I am laughing so hard.

Brilliant and very very funny chapter.

 

Want to give more then a 10, it's definitely a 10 + 

 

"There will be at least one more chapter to this one" LOL sure !?

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Hey, Marny, I resemble that....no, I mean I resent that....Oh, never mind....ha!  I am no longer making promises about the number of chapters because I realize I'm like an addict and don't know when to stop!  I bet Brian thought Justin had been working on his 'technique' - LOL!  I'm so glad you liked this chapter, my friend!  Tricky's not quite done with his adventure just yet....we'll see now if I can control myself and keep this story to three chapters - ha!  Thanks so much for reading and for the review, my friend.:)  *hugs to you, too.:)

Reviewer: Alicia (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Irresistible

this story is so adorable...love the image of brian having to deal with tricky...glad there will be another chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you, Alicia!  That Tricky is quite a character, isn't he?  Of course Brian and a dog does seem like an unlikely combination, but I'm hoping by the time I'm done they will have come to a mutual consensus.:)  Like Justin said, I think his bark is worse than his bite....Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment, Alicia!  I will get this story updated soon.:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Irresistible

cute, funny chapter.  sleeping on a small couch not much fun i agree.  mel, not jealous, much.  i was right not just two chapters.  i'm glad as we haven't had Thanksgiving yet. lol



Author's Response:

Ha!  Don't remind me - I'm still shooting for three chapters and I have a feeling we're not quite done with Tricky's night-time antics yet.:)  I'm glad you're enjoying this one.  I will probably go back to Lee's favorite ("My Heart's Desire") because I'm starting to feeling like I'm neglecting my other stories.  But I will definitely get this one updated very shortly - I need to get it finished up once and for all (If I know what that means...!).  Thanks as always for taking the time to leave me feedback, my friend - you spoil me.:)

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