Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Jason's Story
Color me offically hooked to this story. I love how it is unfolding and the plot is intense and haunting. For a first story this is very good writing indeed.
Author's Response: well, color me delighted ;} i'm really glad you like this story, especially since it's my first. i was unable to respond to all your wonderfull reviews (technical issues), but i just want to say thank you for all your kind words. i hope to not dissapoint.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 03:36 PM · On: The Musician
I may love the violin but I totally hate Ethan Gold with a purple passion. Hopefully you'll drive a wooden stake in his dead heart somewhere. Justin saw fangs so he knows they're vampires now. Great story so far. Tell me, can you assure me that this story will be finished? Inquiring minds want to know.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 03:17 PM · On: Babylon
Brian makes such a delicious vampire; wouldn't you agree? Reincarnation comes to mind for Justin since he was with Brian in the distant past. Do I have the sub-plot details correct? Justin will not be able to resist the vampire's draw to him I'm sure.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 02:58 PM · On: Violin
I forever amazed at the writing quality of new authors and once again this story has given me the same experience. Your paragraph breaks are unique but not wrong grammar; usually a writer will begin a new paragraph with a new person talking and contain the information sentences in a singe paragraph but how you do it is fine too. It has a different writing style about it and flows very well.
And I'm reading this one because I'm a sucker for vampire tales :)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 08:11 AM · On: The Musician
Yeah... Two Chapters :o) Loved both of them of course, but now I am very nervous. Seems to me that Jonathan's soul is back and Brian had been waiting/searching for him. But what does Ethan want with Justin? It is because Brian had, dare I say it, loved Jonathan/Justin? Ohh the plot thickens... *rubs hands together* More!!
Author's Response: lol!!! yes the plot thickens. as for what does ethan want from justin/jason (sorry about the name mistake), well just look at him. who wouldn't want justin? i always felt like justin and brian were soulmates, and so how can one soul survive without the other? oooh...did that thicken the plot more? hmmm...guess you'll have to keep reading ;}
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2011 05:52 AM · On: The Musician
Loving this a lot. Very different from other vampire stories. Please write fast.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lorie, for reading and reviewing; I'm so glad you like it! I promise to get this updated regularly.:)
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Babylon
Keep on writing. This story is really good. I hope some more chapters are coming. Nice job!!!
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Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Babylon
I understand now. sorry. I found this story elsewhere and read 5 chapters. Are there more chapters to follow? just wondering. I must say this story is very thought provoking. I didn't understand at first, the more I read the clearer it became.
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Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Violin
Oh nooo... what's wrong with Justin?! I am very intrigued and curious. Love the writting style as well. More please :o)
Author's Response: first, thank you for reading and reviewing. i am glad you're interested. as for what's wrong w/justin, well you'l just have to keep reading to find out ;) hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Violin
I'm having a hard time understanding what is going on here. Maybe it will be more clear to me in the next chapters.
Author's Response: Hi, Linda! Thanks for reading and for the review! Yes, the plot will become clearer as the story goes on. I hope you will continue to read along with my first story. Thanks so much for giving it a chance!:)
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Violin
Sounds intriguing...waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the review! I'm so glad you gave it a try! I should be able to update this with another chapter tomorrow. Thanks again for your encouragement!:)
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Violin
I loved the nightmare sequence. This does seem familiar though.
Excellent first chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You may have read some of this on another site. It's a WIP but I promise to update this regularly. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Violin
Welcome to Whispers. Thank you for publishing here.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled to be able to post this on here.:)
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