Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Life Altering!
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 20

I love your story and I realize with fanily health issues that updates are your problem as your child comes first as it should be. I also wanted to talk about your banner the picture of "molly" is good, I think we only saw her in the qaf series maybe three times in five years, the picture of Gus is okay the child is cute but seeing  "Gus" quiet abit on the series the child actor just had so many features that were like dada its hard not to visualize him rather than the little boy in the banner. Now that blue eyed blond in the banner of "gracin", he looks so much like Justin, the hair and eyes but also the beautiful little grin--he has the sunshine look and he has the little trouble gene, he is so sweet looking you just know he's thinking of something to get into. your stories are worth the wait they're so great.

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

So nice to see you posting! I've been thinking about you...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 20

Thank you for updating especially as you have so much going on with your son. I hope he gets better and you can manage the MRSA

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 20

i love your story,

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20

My heart goes out to you in your family's need.  Life is really not fair at times.  This story is wonderful and I hope you can complete it at some point in time when you have a little more normalcy in your life.  Hang in there things will get better-good lord willing.

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

I saw you writing name when checking out authors, I love your story, I really like that Justin is an adult not a weepy little twink who has to be taken care of by Brian. And Brian is shown as a loving dada, boo and a willing and loving man to his Justin this story is so entertaining because they love each other and "their little family".

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 20

I´m so happy to read another chapter of this story because it´s beautiful. I hope there will be some peacefull times for you and your family. Take care.

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 18

I do hope Justin and Molly will be able to connect with their new born sibling from Craig. Maybe something will happen to Craig or the courts don't find Craig a fitting parent so custody go to Brian/Justin.

 

I hope Gracin ends up calling Justin well Justin. It'd be odd if he calls his brother 'pops' or 'dad' and Molly 'Aunt Molly' or Brian 'dad'.

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 19

I hope your son is alright, hon!

Now as for the story...I want to say I am glad you kept Molly as a main character. But, you seemed to have forgotten Daphne. One big thing I loved about Daphne is that she was the original B/J fangirl and yet even though she was Justin's childhood best friend, she never readily took Justin's side, she was always unbiased whenever B/J fucked up. And she always told them their faults. 

I always hated Melanie, she always crictized Brian's parenting skills, yet she was the one who got so jealous of Gus that she cheated on Linds. And no offense, but why doesn't Brian just get main custody of Gus. I mean Mel/Linds barely survive since they always ask Brian for money, at this point Mel cheated on Linds, they're always arguing, and etc. Brian has the money, Gus has a friend, an aunt like figure(Molly), Dad, and Pops, and Brian/Justin could provide for Gus, when Brian goes through building Kinnetik he would be his own boss so he would be able to flex his schedule and Justin could do it now. 

I hope you have Justin or Molly confront Mel in front of everyone. That they won't sugar coat it. 

Update soon!

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

First off, I hope your son is doing well, love. :) I love how you incorporated Brian, Justin, Molly, Gus, and baby Gracin. So, many people leave Molly out of the picture.


 


Second, I am so anti-Melanie. I mean, she does have her alright moments in the show, but her attitude with Brian about his parental rights to his own son and how she always reminds him that he was never there for Gus bugged the shit out of me. She forgot that Brian didn't even want to give her parental rights by giving his rights up, however she was the one who kept bitching about how he was selfish because he kept telling them before Gus's birth he would give his rights up. Then in season five, she does it again.                       I really do hope Brian gets main custody or full custody of Gus in this fic and very soon. Update soon.


 

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm glad your little boy is doing better. I'm really enjoying your story especially Gus and Gracin are adorable, eagerly await further chapters.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

Loved the chapter!! Don't worry, everyone has important things to do in real life.... I hope your son is all better now... Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 19

TRES JOLIE HISTOIRE ATTEND LA SUITE

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter... I am so glad Brian is accepting his roles very well.  I look forward for your updates always!.... Glad to hear that your son is doing better.  Take care.... cheers, E

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter Brian is really putting it together at last and they are a real family at last. I hope Brian decided he needs more say in Gus's life soon :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter!  I like the subtle progression of their relationship. Can't wait for folks to find out that Brian and Justin signed partnership papers. It symbolizes so many different things to the whole family.

 

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 19

love it

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 19

This is very enjoyable!  I like the idea of the boys having a family and especially the way that Justin was able to step in and help out his brother and sister.  I'm also sorry to hear about your son, but glad that is doing better.  I'll be looking forward to the rest of your story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 19

I was sorry to hear about your infant son being ill, and am glad he is doing better now.  I know how worrying it is when children, particularly small children are ill.  I am enjoying this story, and am looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love this story. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18

great chapter      kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 18

* is confused * hmmm this is not a new chapter, I read this some time ago. Hope to see an update soon, because I really like this story.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 18

I think this is the most touching chapter ever!!! So well written! I can feel Brian in turmoil with himself.... His role as a stud & his wanting to be Justin's partner. I'm so glad he manage to sort himself out! I couldn't help tearing at the end!!! Love this so much!!!

Reviewer: may (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 18

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the story, I finally caught up.


 


It appears that Brian is actually finding happiness.  A word rarely


attributed to him.


 


Again, thanks for the story.


DavidR

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great chapter Justin is by far the most mature adult amongst the gang!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

ilove this story update soon   kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 18

I loved the chapter!!!!! It's a good thing that Brian got his f*ing sh*t together quickly.... and I hope Craig goes straigth to hell!!!! Hope to read you soon!!! Kisses!!

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 18

Finally Brian gets it! About time ;-)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

Loving the way this tale is going!!! Brian is finally a grown-up and Justin is a great dad. Can't wait until the gang finds out what is going on with the 2 of them.  I think it is great that Justin is going to work on getting custody of Molly, that shoudl be a fun court room appearance!  Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

love it

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

So glad to see this chapter.  Ooohhh, I wanted Justin to smack the bitch and his father.  Oops, my anger is coming. 

Love that they are building a family together.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 18

Its good that Brian headed to Justin to deal with his issues. love it!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Awwww, Brian's growing up! Good for him. I hope Justin gets Molly out of Craig's house.

Great update!

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

Very nice!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love that Gracin calls Brian Boo :) I don't know where Justin gets all of his energy from ... he exhausts me reading his daily schedule!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

this is sweet. i'm enjoying Brian's gradual change of heart.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter!!!!!!!!! It was so cute that Gracin screamed for Brian!! At first, I thought that 'Boo' meant he was crying, but when you clarified it was Brian he wanted, I just melted at the nickname.... Anyway, great chapter as always! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 17

I am a puddle of goo... chasing after Justin's smile - pure poetry; Boo for Brian - so sweet...

Well, gotta say, you're fic brought back my interest in the fandom.  I've kept the characters personalities, but allowed them grow logically under unique circumstances.  It's all believeable, not overly written or mundane.  Very, very enjoyable.

I'm on board until the end.  Glad I gave it a try, it turned out to be a hidden jewel.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love how Brian refers to 'all his boys.'  Very tender, loving morning.  You're killing me here.  Nothing irking my eye, but my innards are melting.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 14

'can we keep him' - so cute!  So sad to realize that Brian probably never did enjoy the holidays with that horrible family of his.  It's amazing that he didn't become a serial killer.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

Glad to see the boys are taking it slow and I can feel the sexual tension buidling.  Nice.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 12

Yeah!  Happy hamster dance!  Dammit, something got in my eyes a few chapters back and it's kicking around now.  I do not have real tears in my eyes.  I don't, well not much.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

I haven't been up to reading for awhile and have been away from the fandom for awhile.  This has been just a wonderful fic to draw me back in.  This fic is addictive.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

My grandfather's name was Grason.  Kinda cool to see a variation of it, it's not a common name at all.  Loving this!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

You're ripping my heart out here...

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving the angst.  Dreading the next chapter, I have a feeling that Jennifer is going to the angels and Justin is going to be a daddy uncle.  Loving a strong Justin!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, Jennifer's pregnant, I was not expecting that.  I'm enjoying this story and I really like your writing style.  It's crisp and it grabs you immediately.  This is very enjoyable.

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

This chapter was a great snapshot of the world you've created for Brian and Justin! As always, I'm in awe of your use of words, especially this - 'but he chased after that smile of Justin's.' More please.....

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh my gosh how wonderful is this fic I have just read it all up to here and loved every chapter thank you. It looks like we are coming to the end 'sigh'

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 17

love it

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 17

nice great chapter  update soon   kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

Oh such a good chapter, Brian is really starting to get this family/holiday thing. He must have felt gobsmacked when Justin went into bat for him against smelly melly! 

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 16

i love ur writing update soon  thanku kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wonderful update! I just love this story and can't wait to read more.

I hope you've had a wonderful Christmas and I wish you to have a fantastic New Year!

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 16

Really cute chapter! I liked it!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

This is a wonderful holiday present - another beautiful chapter. It's good to see the change in Brian as it slowly occurs.

Happy Holidays!!

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 16

I loved this chapter!!! Justin sticking up for Brian was fantastic! I can't wait to read the reactions of the family when they find out that Brian and Justin are trying to get back together... I can't wait for the next chapter either!!!!! I hope you had a great Christmas!!! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!!!

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

I love this fic!! It's amazing

Reviewer: Shari (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

More! More! This is great stuff!

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!! I always love Brian and child or baby moments!!!!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 15

i love how u add the xmass in it thanku up date soon    MERRY XMASS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR       KIM

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great story! I always love it when Brian realizes he is able to change and fit into a life he never imagined for himself.  Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

lol loved that Brian's first thought was of Justin missing the first smile :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 15

love it

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 15

It good that Justin is standing strong and independant that it seems to pull Brian his way.......

love it!!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

love this story especially this chapter.  so cute.  Brian is just an ole softy inside. :)

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter!!!! Brian and Gracin are so cute!!!! I can't wait to read the next one.... Just in case you don't update until after Christmas.... Merry Christmas!!!! :)

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 15

This story is, this season's special gift. I am happy to read and review it !

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 15

Aahhhh this is so sweet. But ... too short ... sorry. I love this story.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: paeansong (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

I've been reading this story, but this is the first chance I've had to comment. I love the way you've written Brian and Justin. And you have Gus and Molly so pegged...as the all knowing other beings in their relationship. This is great. I'm waiting for the next chapter. (smile)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 14

knew craig would show his true colors sooner rather than later. what a bastard.

the perfect famiy. of course you can keep him, he wants to be kept.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

awwwww.... can we keep him..? I want to keep him :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 14

Grrr Craig is an asshole !!

It's a wonderful family: Brian - Justin - Molly - Gus and little Gracin.

More please, this is so sweet.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 14

"can we keep him" juajaja hahaha I love that part, and  Justin "maybe" 

they are a perfect family, they are so cute.

I love the story

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

I have just read all the chapters in one go and loved it I am looking forwaqrd to more updates.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awwww............this was so sweet - hot cocoa with lots of tiny marshmellows( I know whipped cream but marshmellows are my preference).

Love that you showed Brian's first Christmas tree experience and Molly makes such a mature observation. A wonderful family moment - perfect for the season.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

"Can we keep him?"  I was thinking the same thing.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 14

love it

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 13

great story

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

love the 'parent' justin. with both of them molly can't get away with anything. how soon i wonder before craig leave her with him permanently?

the "dads" spending the day shopping. how sweet.

great update.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

i think that if brian is willing, and he seems to be, then justin should take a chance although he has to let brian know that he comes as a package. gracin, molly whenever, and him.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

don't make it to sweet put some miky whine in and keep justin guessing to what brain is doing    HAPPY HOILDAYS andMERRY XMASS from brisbane qld        thanku kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 13

What a beautiful chapter!! Absolutely loved the interaction between Brian and Gracin, and Molly too. Brian and children, ha! really enjoyed it.

Really a great story here. Looking forward to their shopping day. Imagine that........

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

Thanks for the extra chapter :o) Yeah for RL giving you a break! I do like the way you have their relationship developing... it's great, not rushed or fake. It's... nice. "Don’t start Brian, you don’t need to use the excuse of my tuition to keep me in your life anymore. I’m here and I’m not going anywhere." That was very true and needed to be said by Justin. Especially if they are working on a friendship. Brian needs to know that Justin is there because he wants to be there. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy your enjoying the story. I believe that the best relationships take time to flourish and need some foundation of friendship, Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

I am enjoying reading your story. It's lovely...

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 12

tres belle histoire

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 12

good very good  update soon   thanks  kim

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 12

love it

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

Finally, Brian has made a move. I am sure he will be making other moves(wink). Wonder how he will include Gracin in his life because Justin has him as his priority.

Looking forward the next chapters.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

love it sooo much, i can't wait for more

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 12

This was a sweet chapter and I like how Brian is defending Justin and trying to work out his place in his life...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: D (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

"and don’t fucking say in your dreams."--Classic.  Loved that line.  

 

I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see where it goes.  

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2011 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

I just read your story and am enjoying it very much.  How is Gracin's name pronounced?  Is the C  hard like a K or soft, like in 'grace'?



Author's Response:

"Grace" Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 11

This is such a lovely story, please update soon.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wait... Don't walk away, do the right thing for once...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ugh... the last update was too short! And this is the only complaint that comes to mind. Nice sory line, this could go anywhere... I hope somewhere interesting... I really need that :)

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2011 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 11

I love this story! Please update asap, can´t wait what happen to Justin and his brother and what Brian will do.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad Justin is keeping the house and that Craig allowed Justin to see Molly. He may not have the best intention but it's okay. Molly can gain more independence and help Justin with Gracin. I'm sure they both miss being in each other life.

Molly and Gracin will meet the gang at the Sunday dinner. How Gus will react to Gracin ? He will have to share his Justin with a new baby. Molly will help him, she had to share her brother with Gus without knowing the little boy.

Reviewer: jlbjlb628 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

Sorry to be dense but what is a HEA story?

Debbie will guide Justin, help him with Gracin and Molly; but I'm dying to know what is Brian up to?



Author's Response:

Happily Ever After

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

i can not wait to read more of this story

Reviewer: shari (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 11

I'm loving this story! More! Soon! LOL

Reviewer: Taire (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2011 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 11

Tears, laughter and more tears. Love this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

go debbie   love it

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great update! Now Justin will be parenting two kids...Can't wait to read about Sunday dinner at Deb's...It'll be interesting to see everyone's reaction to little Gracin.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

I can't believe the chapter finished so quickly. it was too quickly... want more to read, want lots more......

This story is going so good.....can't wait for it to continue.



Author's Response:

Sorry it was short but I typed it on my phone the week that my toddler managed to spill her sippy cup over my keyboard killing it! Glad you enjoyed!!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

I love Brian! He gets misunderstood a lot of times. But then again, I can see how Justin would come to this conclusion. “I could never hate you. I might not like the changes, but I could never hate you.” There is sooo much in these two sentences it’s just… wow. I am enjoying reading this story. Hope you get a chance to update soon. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like it, that Brian is not all of a sudden all lovey-dovey with the baby, because this wouldn't be Brian. And I think its very good to show that a newborn is more than smiles, but hard work. What I'm wondering about, though maybe I just missed it, is, why Daphne doesn't help. Maybe Brian will come back in Justin's life with ministeps to help without loosing his reputation at first. Thanks for the good work.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2011 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

love it

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

Mystery solved for Brian!  Bummer he just walked away!

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 10

Finaly, Brian knows about Gracin. And I'm sure he will be spending his time with him (and Justin). The gang will want to know where and with whom he is when he's not with them. They don't have to know. Brian has no right to tell them Justin's business. I hope Lindsay (mostly) but the entire "family" will not make Brian fell guilty that he spends more time with Gracin than Gus (he's own son).

Justin always could feel a tention in the family since Brian and him break up. I completly understand that he doesn't want that near his brother. He has the opportunity to create the family he lost. He could understand, accept and love Gracin like his own father can't (won't) do anymore. I have no doupt Justin will raise Gracin like a big brother and not a father. He won't disrespect his mother memory.

How long Brian needs to digest the news about Gracin ? He really didn't expected it when he decided to confront Justin.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Finally, the secret is revealed. wonder how Brian will deal with it?? Right now its just shock, I so look forward to his reaction.

 

 

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 9

It's so sad that Justin doesn't feel like he could confide in Brian. I am sure Brian would be most understanding... This whole situation is really sad and heartbreaking. I hope Justin can find some support system soon.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

love it, poor justin

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9

Aw! I loved the very ending of this chapter. Nicely done.

Can't wait for more.

Vin

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 9

great u r up to were i left of this is a great storie    thanks kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2011 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 9

Justin is so strong to handle this by himself but I hope that Brian would make an appearance.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2011 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

I soooo love this story.  Jus will make a great "dad". :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2011 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

Enjoying it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2011 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 8

Can Craig really forbid Molly from seeing or talking to Justin ? Gracin is her half-brother too. Now that Jennifer is gone, Justin is the only person that Molly can count on. Craig kicked Justin out because he was gay. What says he won't do the same thing with her because he doesn't like her best friend, boyfriend, the school she wants to go...? He isolates her from her own family and she just lost her mother.

Justin knows it's the lack of communication with Brian that was one of the problems between them. He has to tell him about Gracin before someone else did or he find it by accident. If Justin wants Brian's trust, he has to show Brian that he trust him too.

I don't forget that Justin is more vulnerable than ever right now. He doesn't really have the time to grieve his mother. He has to think about Gracin. He became a parent without the 9 months to prepare him. He's a single "father" (for now). He has school. He definitely needs help.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2011 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

love it

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

did u rewote the storie or did u lose it on site well keep going i will wait 4 u to catch up i love ur writing       kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oohhh poor Justin, I wanna hug him real tight * sigh *. Hope he calls Brian, so that he is not alone in the hospital waiting for news about his little brother.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

i love it

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

how sad that jennifer's in an accident, probably dies (minor character death) and leave him the baby after he had such an explosive cleansing of his soul. can't imagine what he's going to do about brian now.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love it

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2011 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

i love it

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