Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

Glad to see the boys are taking it slow and I can feel the sexual tension buidling. Nice.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 13

great story

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

love the 'parent' justin. with both of them molly can't get away with anything. how soon i wonder before craig leave her with him permanently?

the "dads" spending the day shopping. how sweet.

great update.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

don't make it to sweet put some miky whine in and keep justin guessing to what brain is doing HAPPY HOILDAYS andMERRY XMASS from brisbane qld thanku kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 13

What a beautiful chapter!! Absolutely loved the interaction between Brian and Gracin, and Molly too. Brian and children, ha! really enjoyed it.

Really a great story here. Looking forward to their shopping day. Imagine that........

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

Thanks for the extra chapter :o) Yeah for RL giving you a break! I do like the way you have their relationship developing... it's great, not rushed or fake. It's... nice. "Don’t start Brian, you don’t need to use the excuse of my tuition to keep me in your life anymore. I’m here and I’m not going anywhere." That was very true and needed to be said by Justin. Especially if they are working on a friendship. Brian needs to know that Justin is there because he wants to be there. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:
I'm very happy your enjoying the story. I believe that the best relationships take time to flourish and need some foundation of friendship, Thank you for the review!

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