Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Life Altering!
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2020 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

Great ending to a great story!!   I thought it was great that Brian realized what he was missing in not being with Justin and pretty much turned his whole life around to get back with him.   

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2020 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

so sorry about your son, hope all works out

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2020 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 16

fucking Mel and Lindsey too

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 21

This made me so happy. Beautiful. 

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 18

Brian finally admitting he turned into family man and he fcking love it :]

Craig always the bastard. Some people shouldn't have kids.   

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2019 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh no :( Jennifer :(

I always liked her. Poor baby boy. 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2016 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 21

 I have enjoyed your story from beginning to end. This last update I was apalled by the rudeness of their family. Coming uninvited in the evening knowing a toddler lived there and banging on the door (mikey) pushing their way in (mikey) declaring Brian had left town with out telling anyone (mikey again) Justin short on patience informs them that to look around Brian's furniture is in their house. Justin demanded that Brian was happy and settled and no one wanted their advise or their opinon on how they lived their life and advise that they keep their mouths shut (mikey again). Of course they move closer to the door hearing Brian tell Molly goodnight and he loved yer too.I thought it was so cute when telling Justin he wanted to fuck and spelled it out, as if the toddler was around. Needles to say Brian is not happy that they have distrubed them with the reasoning he had up and left town(mikey) Then mikey says should he be living there when he just quit his job (thinking he's supporting Justin and the kids) when Brian says Justin is supporting them all! I LMAO when Mikey later was thrilled Mel asked him to father her child--the kid doesn't have a chance, Mel a crazy bitch from hell and mikey an idiot with the smarts of a shoelace. mikey maybe be able to father a child (I'd be surprised) but he takes a man like Brian to be a daddy to love someone more than you love yourself (not mikey) and teach his child how to love others. thank you for a lovely story.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2016 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 17

Boo, How cute and is spoiled by his Boo, little demon.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2016 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 16

I was glad Brian had spent Christmas eve and Christmas morning with his new little family, even if it meant red and green pancakes! How can Mel say those things in front of Gus, it made Gus feel bad, he knew his Dada wouldn't hurt him. mel can be a real bitch sometimes.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2016 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love how Gus treats Gracin like a baby brother and Brian is so smitten with that tiny baby, he's like a mini Justin.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

OMG iF grandma Debbie doesn't frighten Gracin Auntie Em will. talk about nightmares!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'll miss Jen in the story, she was one of my favorite charactors. Seems like the hits just keep coming. Justin is so unsettled not only by Jens death but having to raise Gracin, who ever did the banner shopped and got the cutest little boy, big dimples, bright blue eyes and the blonde hair, he looks like a mini Justin, just beautiful. It helps to see a picture you can visualize with the baby boy. Needless to say Brian is totally confused.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

Bless his little horny heart, Brian is still thinking with his dick! We all know how much he's missing Justin and in his heart of hearts he loves him. Now is time to go to work and tell Justin how much he cares.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

As soon as I read where Justin was giving a down payment for his education I knew Brian would never accept it, it was just a way for Brian to keep seeing Jus. Another way to be close to him, then somewhere he found a way to ask Justin for a date, I don't know who was shocked more Justin or Brian. Loving youe story

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

This up date showed Brian does have a weakness, even if he can't say the words, he misses Justin, he still wants to allow him a college decree and to be the and be the man Brian always knew he was. I bet the baby's room is wonderful with all the finishing touches that he and Daf worked so hard on.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

Glad to see Em in your story, he was so sweet on the series. He tried to keep peace between fussing that was always going on. He tries to be friends with the boys but mikey was such a jerk, not only to Justin but to his ''best friend'' Brian.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like this chapter, but sometimes I think Brian's brains are in his ass--he's got a cute tush, but he needs to use his intelligence. He's great ad man but when it comes to his feelings and how to mean it when he says he doesn't care what people think of him. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2016 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

Lovely story.A real pleasure to read and another to add to my favourites:-)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2015 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

So sad... And Brian so stupid... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 21

I've only been reading QaF fanfiction for the last 12 months having only seen the series last year on a new channel to New Zealand, it had not screened here before. Immediately hooked and I love that there are so many fans out there writing and keeping this amazing series going. I really enjoyed this story and thrilled to see the sequel guiding me to it. Can't wait to read more of your fantasic writing :-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

This was excellent. It was an even better read the second time around.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 18

I wondered how long it would take Craig to blow it.  Good to know that Brian's decided he wants to be around for the long haul.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love Christmas stories and having Justin take up for Brian is a plus.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh, goody.  Justin gets to keep his mother's home, giving both Gracin and Molly their own room and he's gonna have Deb on his side helping.  Yay!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

How is he going to pay for the surgery and his mother's funeral?  He's really going to need Brian's help.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Does Brian know that Jennifer is having a little one?  Where is Brian planning to pick Justin up at?  I didn't know he knew where Justin was living.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm so glad that Emmett is keeping in touch with Justin.  Daphne, of course, will do her best to keep Justin on the straight and narrow.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

So Brian does care.  What happens when he finds out that Justin doesn't work at the diner anymore?

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 18

I loooove the line of Brian. Probably read it 10x now... Ok, even more than that.

Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2012 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

Melanie is such a bitch. She should be thanking him for giving them Gus instead of bitching him out. I loved the interaction between Brian and the Taylor trio. So cute.

Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 13

Justin is such a great "Dad" to his siblings. So funny that he was on to Brian right away. ha ha ha

Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

I love this story. I feel bad that Jennifer died.

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm thoroughly enjoying this, but I have one small issue. A baby born 3 weeks early would weigh more than 3lbs 8oz, as they would be virtually full term. I was 3 weeks early and weighed 7lbs-ish. My sister was 8 weeks early and weighed 4lbs 1oz. Other than that, great story. I'm always happy with Justin doesn't run off into the sunset with Ethan. :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 21

Children have a way of making you grow up quickly. I love this take-charge more mature Justin. Great story!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

Justin was raised well. I always knew he could be mature and do the right thing, but seeing Brian change because he wants to is always lovely.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 21

Just finished all 21 chapter in one setting. Please update soon. Hope all is well with you and your family. Marion

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 21

love it

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2012 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 20

I remembering reading this a while back and was disappointed when I realised it wasn’t finished but I am so glad you are updating it as I’m really enjoying Justin and Brian in the unplanned parenting situation. It’s nice to see them now being there for one another. Thank you for the update and I look forward to when you post the next chapter. Hopefully RL will be kind to you from now on.


Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 20

i hope your son and father are doing much better. just wanted to let you know how much i love this story, great premise and great writing! hope real life goes easy on you and your family from now on :D

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

"Come dance with me honey-bottom..."


I love Emmett's little nicknames.

Great story!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

The angst was high in this chapter with both of the guys being unable to communicate their pain. This was well written and the storyline is great. 

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 20

I love your story and I realize with fanily health issues that updates are your problem as your child comes first as it should be. I also wanted to talk about your banner the picture of "molly" is good, I think we only saw her in the qaf series maybe three times in five years, the picture of Gus is okay the child is cute but seeing  "Gus" quiet abit on the series the child actor just had so many features that were like dada its hard not to visualize him rather than the little boy in the banner. Now that blue eyed blond in the banner of "gracin", he looks so much like Justin, the hair and eyes but also the beautiful little grin--he has the sunshine look and he has the little trouble gene, he is so sweet looking you just know he's thinking of something to get into. your stories are worth the wait they're so great.

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

So nice to see you posting! I've been thinking about you...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 20

Thank you for updating especially as you have so much going on with your son. I hope he gets better and you can manage the MRSA

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 20

i love your story,

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20

My heart goes out to you in your family's need.  Life is really not fair at times.  This story is wonderful and I hope you can complete it at some point in time when you have a little more normalcy in your life.  Hang in there things will get better-good lord willing.

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 20

I saw you writing name when checking out authors, I love your story, I really like that Justin is an adult not a weepy little twink who has to be taken care of by Brian. And Brian is shown as a loving dada, boo and a willing and loving man to his Justin this story is so entertaining because they love each other and "their little family".

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2012 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 20

I´m so happy to read another chapter of this story because it´s beautiful. I hope there will be some peacefull times for you and your family. Take care.

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 18

I do hope Justin and Molly will be able to connect with their new born sibling from Craig. Maybe something will happen to Craig or the courts don't find Craig a fitting parent so custody go to Brian/Justin.


I hope Gracin ends up calling Justin well Justin. It'd be odd if he calls his brother 'pops' or 'dad' and Molly 'Aunt Molly' or Brian 'dad'.

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 19

I hope your son is alright, hon!

Now as for the story...I want to say I am glad you kept Molly as a main character. But, you seemed to have forgotten Daphne. One big thing I loved about Daphne is that she was the original B/J fangirl and yet even though she was Justin's childhood best friend, she never readily took Justin's side, she was always unbiased whenever B/J fucked up. And she always told them their faults. 

I always hated Melanie, she always crictized Brian's parenting skills, yet she was the one who got so jealous of Gus that she cheated on Linds. And no offense, but why doesn't Brian just get main custody of Gus. I mean Mel/Linds barely survive since they always ask Brian for money, at this point Mel cheated on Linds, they're always arguing, and etc. Brian has the money, Gus has a friend, an aunt like figure(Molly), Dad, and Pops, and Brian/Justin could provide for Gus, when Brian goes through building Kinnetik he would be his own boss so he would be able to flex his schedule and Justin could do it now. 

I hope you have Justin or Molly confront Mel in front of everyone. That they won't sugar coat it. 

Update soon!

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

First off, I hope your son is doing well, love. :) I love how you incorporated Brian, Justin, Molly, Gus, and baby Gracin. So, many people leave Molly out of the picture.


Second, I am so anti-Melanie. I mean, she does have her alright moments in the show, but her attitude with Brian about his parental rights to his own son and how she always reminds him that he was never there for Gus bugged the shit out of me. She forgot that Brian didn't even want to give her parental rights by giving his rights up, however she was the one who kept bitching about how he was selfish because he kept telling them before Gus's birth he would give his rights up. Then in season five, she does it again.                       I really do hope Brian gets main custody or full custody of Gus in this fic and very soon. Update soon.


Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm glad your little boy is doing better. I'm really enjoying your story especially Gus and Gracin are adorable, eagerly await further chapters.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

Loved the chapter!! Don't worry, everyone has important things to do in real life.... I hope your son is all better now... Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 19


Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter... I am so glad Brian is accepting his roles very well.  I look forward for your updates always!.... Glad to hear that your son is doing better.  Take care.... cheers, E

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter Brian is really putting it together at last and they are a real family at last. I hope Brian decided he needs more say in Gus's life soon :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter!  I like the subtle progression of their relationship. Can't wait for folks to find out that Brian and Justin signed partnership papers. It symbolizes so many different things to the whole family.


Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 19

love it

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 19

This is very enjoyable!  I like the idea of the boys having a family and especially the way that Justin was able to step in and help out his brother and sister.  I'm also sorry to hear about your son, but glad that is doing better.  I'll be looking forward to the rest of your story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 19

I was sorry to hear about your infant son being ill, and am glad he is doing better now.  I know how worrying it is when children, particularly small children are ill.  I am enjoying this story, and am looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love this story. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18

great chapter      kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 18

* is confused * hmmm this is not a new chapter, I read this some time ago. Hope to see an update soon, because I really like this story.


* hugs *

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 18

I think this is the most touching chapter ever!!! So well written! I can feel Brian in turmoil with himself.... His role as a stud & his wanting to be Justin's partner. I'm so glad he manage to sort himself out! I couldn't help tearing at the end!!! Love this so much!!!

Reviewer: may (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 18

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the story, I finally caught up.


It appears that Brian is actually finding happiness.  A word rarely

attributed to him.


Again, thanks for the story.


Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great chapter Justin is by far the most mature adult amongst the gang!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

ilove this story update soon   kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 18

I loved the chapter!!!!! It's a good thing that Brian got his f*ing sh*t together quickly.... and I hope Craig goes straigth to hell!!!! Hope to read you soon!!! Kisses!!

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 18

Finally Brian gets it! About time ;-)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

Loving the way this tale is going!!! Brian is finally a grown-up and Justin is a great dad. Can't wait until the gang finds out what is going on with the 2 of them.  I think it is great that Justin is going to work on getting custody of Molly, that shoudl be a fun court room appearance!  Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

love it

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

So glad to see this chapter.  Ooohhh, I wanted Justin to smack the bitch and his father.  Oops, my anger is coming. 

Love that they are building a family together.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 18

Its good that Brian headed to Justin to deal with his issues. love it!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 18

Awwww, Brian's growing up! Good for him. I hope Justin gets Molly out of Craig's house.

Great update!



Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

Very nice!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love that Gracin calls Brian Boo :) I don't know where Justin gets all of his energy from ... he exhausts me reading his daily schedule!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

this is sweet. i'm enjoying Brian's gradual change of heart.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter!!!!!!!!! It was so cute that Gracin screamed for Brian!! At first, I thought that 'Boo' meant he was crying, but when you clarified it was Brian he wanted, I just melted at the nickname.... Anyway, great chapter as always! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 17

I am a puddle of goo... chasing after Justin's smile - pure poetry; Boo for Brian - so sweet...

Well, gotta say, you're fic brought back my interest in the fandom.  I've kept the characters personalities, but allowed them grow logically under unique circumstances.  It's all believeable, not overly written or mundane.  Very, very enjoyable.

I'm on board until the end.  Glad I gave it a try, it turned out to be a hidden jewel.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love how Brian refers to 'all his boys.'  Very tender, loving morning.  You're killing me here.  Nothing irking my eye, but my innards are melting.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 14

'can we keep him' - so cute!  So sad to realize that Brian probably never did enjoy the holidays with that horrible family of his.  It's amazing that he didn't become a serial killer.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

Glad to see the boys are taking it slow and I can feel the sexual tension buidling.  Nice.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 12

Yeah!  Happy hamster dance!  Dammit, something got in my eyes a few chapters back and it's kicking around now.  I do not have real tears in my eyes.  I don't, well not much.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

I haven't been up to reading for awhile and have been away from the fandom for awhile.  This has been just a wonderful fic to draw me back in.  This fic is addictive.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

My grandfather's name was Grason.  Kinda cool to see a variation of it, it's not a common name at all.  Loving this!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

You're ripping my heart out here...

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving the angst.  Dreading the next chapter, I have a feeling that Jennifer is going to the angels and Justin is going to be a daddy uncle.  Loving a strong Justin!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, Jennifer's pregnant, I was not expecting that.  I'm enjoying this story and I really like your writing style.  It's crisp and it grabs you immediately.  This is very enjoyable.

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

This chapter was a great snapshot of the world you've created for Brian and Justin! As always, I'm in awe of your use of words, especially this - 'but he chased after that smile of Justin's.' More please.....


Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh my gosh how wonderful is this fic I have just read it all up to here and loved every chapter thank you. It looks like we are coming to the end 'sigh'

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 17

love it

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 17

nice great chapter  update soon   kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

Oh such a good chapter, Brian is really starting to get this family/holiday thing. He must have felt gobsmacked when Justin went into bat for him against smelly melly! 

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 16

i love ur writing update soon  thanku kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wonderful update! I just love this story and can't wait to read more.

I hope you've had a wonderful Christmas and I wish you to have a fantastic New Year!



Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 16

Really cute chapter! I liked it!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

This is a wonderful holiday present - another beautiful chapter. It's good to see the change in Brian as it slowly occurs.

Happy Holidays!!

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 16

I loved this chapter!!! Justin sticking up for Brian was fantastic! I can't wait to read the reactions of the family when they find out that Brian and Justin are trying to get back together... I can't wait for the next chapter either!!!!! I hope you had a great Christmas!!! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!!!

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

I love this fic!! It's amazing

Reviewer: Shari (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

More! More! This is great stuff!

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!! I always love Brian and child or baby moments!!!!!

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 15

i love how u add the xmass in it thanku up date soon    MERRY XMASS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR       KIM

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great story! I always love it when Brian realizes he is able to change and fit into a life he never imagined for himself.  Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

lol loved that Brian's first thought was of Justin missing the first smile :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 15

love it

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 15

It good that Justin is standing strong and independant that it seems to pull Brian his way.......

love it!!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

love this story especially this chapter.  so cute.  Brian is just an ole softy inside. :)

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter!!!! Brian and Gracin are so cute!!!! I can't wait to read the next one.... Just in case you don't update until after Christmas.... Merry Christmas!!!! :)

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 15

This story is, this season's special gift. I am happy to read and review it !

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 15

Aahhhh this is so sweet. But ... too short ... sorry. I love this story.


* hugs *

Reviewer: paeansong (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

I've been reading this story, but this is the first chance I've had to comment. I love the way you've written Brian and Justin. And you have Gus and Molly so pegged...as the all knowing other beings in their relationship. This is great. I'm waiting for the next chapter. (smile)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 14

knew craig would show his true colors sooner rather than later. what a bastard.

the perfect famiy. of course you can keep him, he wants to be kept.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

awwwww.... can we keep him..? I want to keep him :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 14

Grrr Craig is an asshole !!

It's a wonderful family: Brian - Justin - Molly - Gus and little Gracin.

More please, this is so sweet.


* hugs *

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 14

"can we keep him" juajaja hahaha I love that part, and  Justin "maybe" 

they are a perfect family, they are so cute.

I love the story

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

I have just read all the chapters in one go and loved it I am looking forwaqrd to more updates.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awwww............this was so sweet - hot cocoa with lots of tiny marshmellows( I know whipped cream but marshmellows are my preference).

Love that you showed Brian's first Christmas tree experience and Molly makes such a mature observation. A wonderful family moment - perfect for the season.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

"Can we keep him?"  I was thinking the same thing.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2011 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 14

love it

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 13

great story

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

love the 'parent' justin. with both of them molly can't get away with anything. how soon i wonder before craig leave her with him permanently?

the "dads" spending the day shopping. how sweet.

great update.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

i think that if brian is willing, and he seems to be, then justin should take a chance although he has to let brian know that he comes as a package. gracin, molly whenever, and him.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

don't make it to sweet put some miky whine in and keep justin guessing to what brain is doing    HAPPY HOILDAYS andMERRY XMASS from brisbane qld        thanku kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 13

What a beautiful chapter!! Absolutely loved the interaction between Brian and Gracin, and Molly too. Brian and children, ha! really enjoyed it.

Really a great story here. Looking forward to their shopping day. Imagine that........

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

Thanks for the extra chapter :o) Yeah for RL giving you a break! I do like the way you have their relationship developing... it's great, not rushed or fake. It's... nice. "Don’t start Brian, you don’t need to use the excuse of my tuition to keep me in your life anymore. I’m here and I’m not going anywhere." That was very true and needed to be said by Justin. Especially if they are working on a friendship. Brian needs to know that Justin is there because he wants to be there. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

I'm very happy your enjoying the story. I believe that the best relationships take time to flourish and need some foundation of friendship, Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

I am enjoying reading your story. It's lovely...

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