Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2020 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
did read it again
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2019 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 4
good one
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2017 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 4
Now this is romance :-)
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
I take it back, Brian could not have made the right decision when it comes to a relationship with Justin. His pov is so convoluted, it's hard to decipher. Justin would have taken the helm and decide on their paths to be taken had he known the truth earlier.
But what the heck? It's fanfic and it's romantic and it's a happy ending! ;D Thanks again for writing and sharing.
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was it? Daphne received a blow out from Justin when he found out the truth, but Brian got a giggle? These being apart from each other, it actually served Brian right that he was lonely all those years. It was his decision to be away. But he's getting to lenient a punishment (in fact there is none) from Justin. Seems like Justin will be forever under the beck and call of Brian.
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
I agree with the reviewer in chapter 3, Daphne could have definitely sped up the meeting of these two crossed-lovers. She knows how deeply in love they both are still. Justin not wanting to hear about Brian would not have stopped the Daphne of the early years from straightening her friend. Daphne pushed her friend Justin to run after Brian, she is just as strong-willed and opinionated as these two. She also kept important details from Brian, the simple detail of Charlie not being Justin's companion. A description to Brian of the real Justin in California, Justin still very much in love and still very lonely for his prom date, would have made Brian do something. But I think Justin knowing the real deal about Brian, how his lover pines for him by painting him, would definitely ahve made Justin rush to New York. These two could have been together as soon as Justin graduated from college.
But I like hiw you exchanged the careers of Justin and Brian. Also Kinnetik belonging to Justin instead of Brian, and Brian coming-up with Jai Gee, Inc., obviously pertaining to his only love and his son.
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
I know it's a love story of Justin and Brian, but if I were Jenny, I would probably do the same. That is move to a different part of the country and start anew. And although Justin and Brian might still pine for each other, things did go right for Justin in terms of growing-up and his studies and career. Just like the old saying, if it comes back, it's really yours. And we all know they are really for each other.
I liiiikkke your Charlie. He's a loving sweet hetero version of a younger Justin. I was going to say Mikey at first, but he is a more innocent and trusting Justin, just like Justin is to Brian. Through Charlie, Justin learns to use the voice of reason and goals. To be the best that he can be, just like Brian wants him to be.
I also liiiikkke Daphne becoming the best friend of both. Brian needs the reasonable and practical Daphne, sympathetic and loyal like Mikey with a lot less whining.
And Brian taking up painting, that's super great. He is in advertising and many people in advertising are really good artists. Love that he is the one who painted Justin this time around! :D
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another Wow!!! Such a great story.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Enjoying your story...but Daphne is stupid!!! they could have been together much sooner if she just hinted a thing or two here and there...I'm sorry for all the years they missed. I like the change you made. How they basicly traded places. Justin, the advertising hor shot and Brian, the reclusive artist. :) Good work
Author's Response: thanks
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