Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 6

You caught all the kids perfectly.  I'm surprised that Brian is taking things so well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

It's amazing how mellow Brian is with the kids.  I like it.  Well except for when Henry got him all wet that is.  LOL.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love this story i can not wait to read more of this story your a wonderful writter .



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

"Your son decided turn the water back on after I had turned it off. I turned to grab the towel and as soon as I stepped back into the shower to wrap him in it, he turned it on."

 

Cute, Cute, Cute!

The two of them are married and living a very domestic life. I can't see why their friends can't see the difference.

Great chapter to a great story!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. That part almost wasn't in the chapter. It was going to be Henry running out of the bathroom naked, but I changed it last minute, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 6

Nice family feeling in this chapter.  I love how Brian and Justin react when the kids act like kids and make a mess or act crazy.  Its how all parents should be, and far too often aren't.  Still can't wait for Cynthia and the guys to find out about how many babies she's expecting!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's still going to be some time before Cynthia is even pregnant and even more time before they find out they are having sextuplets. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent chapter.  So funny.  I can just see Brian trying to give Henry a shower.  It reminded me of my nephew at that age.  he also hated taking a bath.



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you. Yeah, I loved taking a bath when I was that age but I know my friend's son didn't. Lol. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2011 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great BJ story..love the kids. Cant's wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lol... I thought I was going crazy with the age thing. I can say that I am not schocked that the "family" had not noticed the rings or inquired about them. Daphne and Justin just though? I'm guessing that she is either waiting for Justin to tell her... I like that they didn't really tell anyone about geeting hitched and doing it afterwards :o) Loving your story thus far.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The reasoning behind Daphne be explained in the next chapter. Yeah, I thought I was going crazy myself with the age thing for Henry. At first I had him at the age of 4 and then at 3 and realized he is only 2, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2011 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love ti



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: Roxy Frances (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

It's odd that Justin has been home for two weeks and Daphne has not mentioned the rings. Though she normally waits for Justin to tell her stuff, she is not normally this patient. As for the others, they are normally very self absorbant so its not suprising that they have not noticed. Except for Emmett who normally picks up on accessories.



Author's Response:

It's all be explained in the next chapter, I promise. <3

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