Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Wicker77 (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2015 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Still waiting and hoping for more!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

What an unbelievable start.  Justin and Brian are together and between them have 8 children?   That has me wondering who is the sextuplets mother and which of them is the father?  Hunter died of a hit & run?   Lindsay's done something!  And it must have been bad.  Best of all there are 14 finished chapters to explore!!!!

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi :)

Wow, what a plot! I hope you will finish the story, because I'm going to read it now.

Sextuplets... Jesus... I think I know who the mother is

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Please finish this story, I am so excited, can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love your story and I LOVE how Brian is with the kids! Please update soon! How many chapters are you planning on writing? I wouldn't mind if you srote 100 more! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

I don't know how many chapters there are going to be for this, it was originally going to be really long but I just don't know anymore. Thanks so much, so glad that you love my stories so much. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ohhh. I really love this story.

It's horrible whats happening to you right now.
Suggestion: How about an internet café in your area??

You could use this.........
Just a thought. ;o)

Best whishes
Diana



Author's Response:

I know we have two cafes with wifi around town somewhere, and then there is always McDonalds and now Taco Bell, lol. But they are all about 2 miles away from my house and alas, I have no car... Anyway, thank you! <3

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

first, i hope everything is fine with ur mother

second, i do love mpreg with 6 kids around!! cant wait for the next chapter!!

thanks!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Well, this story isn't Mpreg. It's a normal, they are using a surrogate type of story. Though my stories "Stitch by Stitch", "Emma" and "Growing Up Liberty" are all Mpreg stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing though! <3

Reviewer: Roxy Frances (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

A story addressing Lindsey's feelings toward Brian and her obvious manipulations is always good. I like the way you used Molly to bring Brian's natural family back into the plot. This should make an interesting plot. Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you are liking my story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story.  I love the idea of sextuplets,  Am looking forward to finding out how everythng happened.



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

This start to the story sounds really good. I love a good anti-Lindsay instead of a anti-Michael, I think they can be a lot more interesting and there is so many more ways Lindsay can be instead of Michael.

I can't wait to find out the names of the sextuplets. I hope there really nice and unique because I think they wouldn't pick your everyday, ordinary names.

I hope Michael isn't to anti in this story, sometimes it's nice have him nice in a story.

Hope it isn't to long before another update. Love it.

Britin.



Author's Response:

So glad you like the story. I hope they are unique names, but not sure. It'll be a while until the names are told though. Michael will be a little anti at times, but other then that he's going to be a perfect angel, LOL. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2011 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, they have multiplied quite alot. Love the family dynamic, hope you will give us more insight into their live.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning. Picturing Brian with sextuplets is sorta hard to imagine, LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

What did she do this time, that conniving bitch?  I love a good Anti-something story ALWAYS! And what's that six kids in one go? That's a mouthful anyday.

I am waiting for the second chapter so I can figure out what the hell happened to the boys.

Marla



Author's Response:

Haha. Yeah, I'm not a big fan of Lindsay so writing Anti-Lindsay stories is fun for me. Yeah, six kids in one go is a lot, I actually just wrote the numbers 1 through 6 on pieces of paper and picked one, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2011 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

lots of questions unanswered, but where would the story be??  i'm sure all will be answered in following chapters.  i am really wondering about 6 names and what they came up with, will be waiting for new chapters.  good beginning!!



Author's Response:

Yup, all questions will be answered in following chapters, including the six names. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks. <3

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

After reading this first chapter, I have so many questions, where is Lindsay, what did she do, when did they get married, who is the mother of the six children, how did you reunite Brian and Claire, where is Joan if Claire is friends with Brian, and I'm sure I forgot a few things to ask. Waiting for the rest of the story and soon I hope. Metka



Author's Response:

All those good questions will be answered throughout the story. Wow, I wasn't actually expecting anyone to ask about Joan since Claire is in the picture now, lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad you liked it. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was very intrigued by the summary and this first chapter proved to be a great follow up. I can't wait to read more. I love Brian and Justin with a family biologically fathered by both of them whether mpreg or not.  

This looks like a great story. Please continue!



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah I actually have an mpreg one in the works with them having a lot of children but it revolves around the whole gang, not just them. I may start posting that one soon too. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, so glad you like my stories. <3

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story i hope you write more to this story



Author's Response:

I will. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow what a busy life they have now I look forward to seeing how all this played out :-) cHRIS



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH GOOD START PLEASE COUNTINU



Author's Response:

I am, no worries. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

And now, the obvious questions : what did Lindsay do ? I can assume she wasn't happy that B&J were married and she couldn't hid well her jealousy. I never liked her. It's because of her that I didn't like Melanie. I think Melanie hated Brian because of Lindsay's feelings for him. Lindsay didn't want to let them go.

I'm sure it was Michael and/or Debbie who were angry/disappointed that B&J were married without the family. And maybe Jennifer and Daphne too.

I'm so sad that you have "killed" Hunter. I didn't really like him but I prefer him to Claire and her children. How did you do for Brian and his former family to reunit ?

And finaly, where did the six kids come from ? What are their names ? Who is the mother ? The pregnancy was a secret from the family ? ...

So many questions that you have to answer. And soon, please. I can't wait.



Author's Response:

Ha, those were the exact questions I was expecting from people from this chapter. First off, I think you're right about Melanie only hating Brian because of Lindsay's feelings for him. Melanie was one of my favorites though. As for killing Hunter, I just could never really write him into a story, but for this it was only this chapter. He is actually going to be in the story because it's backtracking two years now. As for Claire and her children and Brian reuniting with them, that will be told in a later chapter. I have the whole story planned out, now I just gotta write it, lol. And the sextuplets. Ah, yes. I left their names out and who the mother is as a surprise because well, I didn't want to give everything away in the first chapter. I'll tell you, it was hard not to use their names and having to keep saying sextuplets instead. As for the pregnancy being hidden from the family, yes and no. Some knew, some didn't and they all know the mother was pregnant. If that was confusing, it means they all knew that the person was pregnant but they didn't know that Brian and Justin would be the fathers. Only some of the gang knew right away. That is all, now you must wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG! That´s wonderfull! How could that be? What happend? Can´t wait to read more, expecting drama, pain, mess and lots of love. I hope I keep the names right in order, it´s a lot.....grand opening! Thanks-please go on with many chapters!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you. I wasn't really all too sure about this story when I first started it. But, thank you. <3

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