Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Emma
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

good one

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

fucking Lindsey

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

Rats.  Justin needs rehab?  I really want more, because this is good.  Hope there is a sequel.  I sort of thought that Mikey might know more than he was saying but that would have been too easy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 2

Looks to me like September has been in touch with Justin.  Brian didn't leave a number where he could be reached if she heard from him?  Justin needs to show up if only to spike Lindsay's plan.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Where is Justin?  What made him change his mind about calling Brian and moving back with him?  Brian wouldn't have turned him away just because he flunked out of that I am sure.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

Compelling story, I am really hoping to see a sequel to it soon.

Reviewer: Nickknack (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2015 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

Really liked this story to date and hopeful that the follow up will appear soon

Reviewer: MEAL6733 (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

Can't Wait for the sequel!!! So exciting!

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

I can't wait for the sequel! So excited!

Reviewer: july_jd (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

I enjoy it very much,thank you.What about next?When does Justin come back?Please ,I can not wait,I like this fic.

Reviewer: Sooz (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2012 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed your story, and am hoping for more. Are you still planning the sequel?



Author's Response:

I am, actually working on it now. I'm just working out some kinks. I'm actually hoping to have it up sometime this week! <3

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it. I would love to see more of it, could be a nice long one! LOL.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm working on a sequel. <3

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great to see Brian step up to the plate... I am sadden that Justin is having a hard time, but glad that he is getting the help that he needs to be able to get back to Brian and Emma in good health. Great storyline and beginning… I am like sooo happy about this story and it’s sequel(s) that I can’t wait! :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I finally got my internet back so I'm working on my stories again. Still working out some kinks in the sequel to this so it may be a while before I start posting it. Again, thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

I writing this review again. The earlier one did not go throught. AUGH!

I love this story as I do  all of yours so far. I would very much love to see more of this story. I have to know what is going on with Justin and the baby situation.



Author's Response:

Thank you. There is a sequel in the making that I will probably be starting to post at the end of the month. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: imback (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2011 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

This's was good now get working on writing the sequel, Oh question

what's the behind story on Justin depression  and

why weren't him and brian not keeping in touch with each other?



Author's Response:

Working on the sequel, but have another story I'm posting a little first. As for your questions, hopefully they will be answered in the sequel. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

the end? i was enjoying brian and emma together. september is wrong for not letting brian know that justin is okay. i'm not sure what justin thinks he'll be coming home to when he's ready. alot of anger to be sure.



Author's Response:

There is more in a sequel, coming soon. Promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

you can't leave it like this.  we need more more more.  this is very good and holds ones interest.  where do we go from here.  please more. thanx  there are so few really good stories here.  this is most certainly one of the best



Author's Response:

Haha. Yes I can. There is a sequel to this, I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

Uuuh!? this is the end!! NO ... you must write a really long sequel of many many chapters.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

There is a sequel, not sure how long it will be just yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2011 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

I was so happy to see another chapter and I have to be honest I'm shocked that it's the end.

I hope the sequel will be soon.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah. This story was actually suppose to be a one shot but it got a little too long for my liking so I broke it up. The sequel will be coming soon. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

and the plot thickens as they say! WTF? I hope Brian does not get the phone call that Justin did something stupid, but on the other hand I hope that he does so he can reconnect with him sooner rather than later. And help Justin get over his depression along with their daughter.

Great story and am waiting for the next update soon.

Marla



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. A sequel is coming soon. <3

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great story ..I am captivated already ! I hope Lindsy gets some attitude adjusting ..because she is getting on my nerve. Who was september talking to, jus? i can't wait for the update. Thanks for sharing ur writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Kim. September may or may not have been talking with Justin. Thanks for the review. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

What happened to Justin? Where is he off to? And that bitch Lindsay...I am not even gonna bother with that excuse for a human being.

Great job there sweetie, cant wait for the next update.

Marla



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you Marla. Questions will be answered soon. As for Lindsay, yeah. I'm not usually a anti-Lindsay person, but for this I thought I would try it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

What a great story.  I love the tension and drama.  Your style of writing is very well done and easy to read.  It flows nice and makes for a well told story.  I will try to wait for the next chapter!

Lori



Author's Response:

Why thank you. It makes me happy to know that someone likes how I write. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2011 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Harley,

I am so hooked on your new story Emma that I can't stop reading it. I am half way finished with Chapter one, I'm very late for an appointment, and still I can't stop reading.

Just wanted you to know that I'm going to be looking for lots more chapters - bye, off to finish the story,.

Jane

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Jane. I am so happy that you are hooked. I only have another 2 or 3 chapters planned for this story but it may become longer if I decide to. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

ok, I'm totally hooked - where is Justin - why would he ever leave his daughter? - what is September up to - and more importantly - who is behind it - and why?

Very intriguing story - can't wait to see wherre you go from here! Nice pace, good storytelling. Thanks.

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Why thank you. Some questions should be answered soon. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting, the plot thickens...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

wonderful chapter.

how terrible for justin to lose his sister and jen her daughter. but that still doesn't explain why, if his conversation with september is anything to go by, he set up this ruse to have brian think he abandoned the baby and left town when he didn't leave at all.

what a bitch! lindsay! i can't even begin to think of anything nice to say about her.



Author's Response:

Haha, who says it was Justin that September was talking to? Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is getting good. I can't wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading the reviewing. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

This really hooked me!  I have a sneaky feeling that Justin's disappearing act has something to do with Mikey or Lindsey or both.  Can't wait to see where you're going with this.



Author's Response:

Everything will be answered soon, I hope, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can not wait to read the next chapter of this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'll update soon. <3

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2011 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like mysteries, I'm already hooked. Please more ASAP.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'll be updating soon I hope. <3

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well this is new one, Justin leaves his daughter???? What was he thinking, is his depression so deap that he would rather leave his daughter in the hospital with Brian business card? Well I hope that Brian with the help of his friend will be able to find him and bring him back where he belong. Waiting for new chapter soon! Metka



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Many questions will be answered soon. I hope. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! Can't wait for more ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. <3

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I love a good mystery and this one certainly has my interest piqued.  I'll be looking forward to where you go with this one.  Thanks for sharing it with us!:)



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for reading. Glad that this caught your interest. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

You got me with this one, again! what the fuck is wrong with Justin? what is going on in that maze of a mind of yours and what adventures you have come up for our boys and their little girl this time around?

Cant wait for the update sweetie.

Marla



Author's Response:

Ha! You may just find out what is wrong with Justin soon. As for me, I don't know. I get an idea in my head and it won't leave me alone until I have typed something for it out. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

just leaving his daughter!!!!!!!!!!!! something new

cant wait for the next chapter//////////////

thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice idea for a story.  You have a nice style of writing and I can't wait to read more.  You packed a lot of story in once chapter.  I hope this turns into a long well told story.  Great start.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Actually that story was just going to be a one-shot at first but then I decided to split it up into parts. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

what has justin done, and where is he?

loving this.



Author's Response:

Glad you like and questions will hopefully be answered. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is certainly a fresh perspective, totally different from anything I have read on any site. Your plot bunnies truly lead to unique and exciting storylines.

Looking forward to more...my mind is contemplating so many possibilities, and I can't wait to see which (if any) of them are close to what you have planned for our boys.

Enjoy your writing - thanks for sharing it.

loving life,

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you like my stories. I have so many other ideas that I can't wait to post but I don't wanna overload myself with having to update so many stories at once so I'm trying to pace myself with them. Yup, you'll have to wait and see if any of your possibilities pan out to what I have planned. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: sunnyday (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! where is Justin? Why did he quit communication with Brian? Why.....? I smell foul play perhaps? I'm already hooked. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Many of the questions that are probably whirling around in your head will be answered soon. Promise. <3

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow!!  this is going to be a good mystery story.  why why why!!  so many questions to be answered.  love it.



Author's Response:

So glad that you love this story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. <3

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