Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Baby, You're Mine
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2019 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 11

Love it

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11

Such a beautiful and perfect last chapter. You captured every wonderful moment that happened. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

Awe that was so cute, loved this chapter x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 9

Omg that’s crazy Mickey and Ethan are nuts. Omg get Justin to the hospital fast.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow what a chapter lots of revelations. Life can be crazy can’t it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

Omg wow that was some surprise. And Gus OMG so cute x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Will EM tell on Mickey, I sure hope he does he can’t get away with it. I love how much closer Brian and Justin are getting and their love for Gus is just beautiful. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

The boys are so good for helping their friends like that, having them all in the same building will be fantastic. Oh no Mickey will cause a lot of trouble. I hope he won’t harm Justin or his baby, 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian and Gus and Justin, it’s going to be hard but they can do it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2019 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

I’m so glad for EM he deserves a nice guy that will treat him well. Mickey better listen to his mother because if he doesn’t he will lose everyone. I’m so happy for Brett he gets to do what he loves again. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2019 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Mickey better back off or he will lose Brian forever. I loved how Justin calmed down Gus it was so cute. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2019 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant first chapter, I’m so happy Brian found the one. Mickey will just have to suck it up and get over it. 

Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2019 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

Just WOW! This story was EXCELLENT, thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the excellent review.  Just an FYI, I am working on a sequel as we speak.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2018 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved this story so much. The twists, turns, and angst were dramatic and exciting. Brian was a sweetheart and the twin thing was genius. Would love a sequel. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm working on a sequel as we speak.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2014 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice story

thank you for sharing



Author's Response:

Thanks Chandrika.  I loved writing this one.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow - what an outrageous story. It had everything: mpreg, ESP, long lost twins, evil Michael & Ethan, a kidnapping and a wedding! It sure kept me reading. I just always wanted to see what else would appear. You should consider a career writing for a soap opera - you'd be great. TAG

Author's Response:

Thank you Tag for the wonderful comment.  I got the idea from a pic that was posted by edom with the story Changes.  It kept flowing until it was writing itself.  Thanks again.  JANE

Reviewer: Hytense (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hmmm, I believe this is one of the sappiest stories I've

ever come across. No offence *g*

But - for some reason - I like it,

just wanted you to know:)



Author's Response:

I try not to make them sappy but somehow it comes across.  Glad you liked it though.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2011 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved the story. Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Sasha.  I loved writing it.  There is a sequel coming up soon.

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Love your story! The idea of having  two Justins was great. I love stories that show how B/J love is so terrific. Keep writing because I enjoy these stories so much.



Author's Response:

Thank you taurus.  I love writing about these two.  There love is so true.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

You little tease... the end maybe ha! To tell you the truth I can see this AU continuing but it is up to you sweetie. 

The story was very good and whatever comes to me that has the Anti-Michael twist well I love it.

Excellent work.

Marla



Author's Response:

Thanks, Maria.  I thought that last couple of words would make my readers want more and they do.  I love writing anti-Michael.  I'm now working on a sequel to this.  Thanks for the lovely words, Maria.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 11

very nice - I enjoyed this whole story - and this last scene was so tender that I loved it right up to the end. Thanks!

loving life

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting Charle.  I had a wonderful time writing it.  I might have a sequel in the future.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2011 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

love the supernatural connection they all have. good thing too since it helped find james. james and daphne make a nice couple.

mikey and the fiddler, what a pair. hope they're in the same prison.

fantastic update, can't wait for the baby's arrival.



Author's Response:

This story needed some excitment so I put James in that part instead of Justin.  As for mroe excitment, we'll see.  Thanks for commenting, Sophie's mom.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

great chapter. so glad daphne will have a lovelife.



Author's Response:

I think she needed one even if she was Justin's 'fag hag'.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2011 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

interesting twist to the story. i hope nothing happens to justin or james with that lunatic michael still around. can't blame brian for having james' background checked. he has to keep his family safe. i do like how you wrote ben and hunter into the story.



Author's Response:

Couldn't have a story without the professor and his little helper.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2011 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 9

C EST LA MEILLEUR HISTOIRE QUE J AI LU AVEC JUSTIN QUI EST ENCEINTE. HISTOIRE ACCROCHE VRAIMENT TRES BIEN J AI HALTE DE LIRE LA SUITE. J AI PASSER UN SUPER MOMENT A LE LIRE;



Author's Response:

I needed a translator for this but I got what you mean.

When I write long stories, I like to put a bit of history in it to make it more believable.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

I love this story so much that I just read chapters 1 through 9 in one sitting. What a lovely way to spend a day off!

Sure love Brian in love - you portray this couple so sweetly that it satifies  my craving for deep heartlfelt love between these two. The surprise twist of a twin is a wonderful surprise - and of course how could Daphne not fall in love with him...

Also, I love when Emmett - the most underrated character on the show - gets love and happiness, he deserves it - he is always a loyal and trustworthy friend. 

Then - Mikey and Ethan - nice to see them both get what they deserve - not a fan of either character.

Also love that they are all together under one roof - and I'm ure Daphne won't be far behind...

this story has every element to pull these characters together and keep them contentedly living life far into the future

thanks so much fo writing - will go back and find some of your older works when I have a chance

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle:  Thanks for the wonderful comment.  I loved writing this story because I wanted Brian and Justin with a special kind of love.  I aggree with you that Emmett was unrrated in the show.  I lvoed his episodes with George and their special love.  That's what I wanted here.  How can you not have a family under one roof.

I also couldn't leave a cliffhanger.  So that is why I posted the two chapters.  It won't be long before this ends.

Thanks again.

Jane

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Love the James and Daphne relaysh! When is Brian gonna figure out Mikey is the bad guy?



Author's Response:

I posted more chapters.  Soon you will find out.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 6

merci pour cette belle histoire. attend la suite 



Author's Response:

I read a little French so thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

ilove it



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I loved writing it.

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love evil Mikey stories!



Author's Response:

I lvoe writing them.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

this story is so sweet--except for one little thing.  em is so good in this one.  he never got enough credit in the series--he is a love.  glad you are giving him his just rewards.  he is a good friend to both of them.  michael is another story.  he needs to grow up and put his jealousy aside--but there again he is the angst so far in this story, that is if he turns out to be the bad guy.  we'll see soon i'm sure.  good story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Linda.  I think Em needed more lines in the show.  Mikey never grew up when it came to Brian.  I loved writing this one.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 6

we know it was michael. who else would wear a captain astro hoodie? MIchael knows justin is pregnant. he's the one that thinks both the baby and brian should be his. emmett is a gem, but will he tell brian what he found out? brian should know so he can keep an eye out for any trick michael may pull.

they make a lovely family don't they.



Author's Response:

I agree aout Emmett.  He didn't get enough credit in the show.  We'll find out about Mikey soon.  Wait until the baby arrives.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great story, really enjoying it so far! Keep it coming :-)



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it.  I just posted another chapter.  Happy reading.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

love this story with how you fitted all the characters together.  BUT!!! michael is another story.  don't trust him and justin had a bad feeling and a nightmare that may come to fruition.  i can see bad things ahead for our boys.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely words.  I'll post another chapter tomorrow.  Mikey is definitely another story.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Gotta love a crazy Mikey. I like that the family is supporting the boys in this and that Vic is alive to see it all happen.  I always felt lke he was just randomly killed off on the show.  Look forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment.  I didn't like how they wrote off Vic so I made him here as a father figure of sorts.  He was like that to Brian during the show and I wanted that feeling to show here.

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

You're going to update again soon, right? I love this story. Mpreg has already been my favorite stories to read between Brian and Justin. Great job! <3



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful comment.  I love writing mopreg.  I will update at least twice a week.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

i'm so loving this story. can't mikey have an accident on the way to his apartment? i know justin's nightmare was more of a premonition about michael kidnapping him and trying to get rid of him. with michael being such a bastard no wonder ben isn't in the picture.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I guess we'll have to see.

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Grrr ! Deb and her big mouth.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  It kind of slipped when she said that.

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