Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 02:15 AM · On: Omnos
Bet when you wrote this you didn't think it would happen again in 2018.
Reviewer: Ro (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Omnos
what a tear jerker. Great story
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2013 03:54 AM · On: Omnos
wow. awesome but also really scary. Brian is a hero. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Omnos
Scary but sweet ending! Action/paction Brian is a favorite of mine! Great job. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 08:47 AM · On: Omnos
I loved this one-piece.
What would have made it more interesting is if you had Justin and Daphne bump into the room Hobbs was in and have Justin/Chris confess that they liked each other, for Chris it would have been a dying confession that he loved Justin but was afraid to come out the closet in fear of how people would react and jealously at Brian for having Justin. And Justin to confess he had a huge crush on Chris. Then Chris/Justin kiss(a wish that Chris acts as it his dying wish) then Hobbs dies in Justin and Daphne's arms. Of course, Daphne is witness to all of this.
I hope you do more like this. :)
Author's Response: I actually totally thought about something like that but at the time I wrote this, I couldn't really find the place for it to fit. I am however working on another story that something like this maybe possibly happen. Thanks for reading and glad that you liked it. <3
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Omnos
This is a wonderful story. You have set the scene in a very realistic way. Brian risking himself for Justin, such selfless true love. Thanks for sharing this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! <3
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2011 03:53 AM · On: Omnos
I cna't believed i never reviewed this story. It is on my list of favorites. You did a believable job of the shooting and the angst was perfect!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! <3
Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Omnos
This was amazing! Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2011 12:45 AM · On: Omnos
I loved this story. Very emotional plot and will love to read more of your stories in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad that you liked it. <3
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Omnos
I loved Chris Hobbs being killed. Very engaging, maybe a squel?
Author's Response: Yeah, I almost didn't have him be killed, but then I changed my mind. Maybe, I haven't really thought about writing a sequel.
Reviewer: Winifred (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 01:15 AM · On: Omnos
Wow, this was really good. Subject is truly touching, it's so cruel to know that school shootings happens - and they happen everywhere, no matter which country you live. Really sad and touching subject but that only make this so good. You're good writer, I love all your stories and this is not expection! I'm really glad that you write and post your stories here - hope so you write much much much more (truth to be told, I'm addicted to your stories!).
Brian is hero<3 I love Brian when he's protective mood. And well, I love Justin always anyway :D This really was good alternative to the prom night. I worship you!
(And I'm sorry that my english is not very fluently. It's not my native language even though I'm studied it years from now.)
Author's Response: Awe! I loves you now! lol. Your English is fine! I will always continue to write and post my stories here. Yes, protective Brain is always awesome to read. I hate that school shootings happen all the time, all over the world. It's not something I like to really read or write but seeing it on the TV just inspired this story. So glad that you are addicted to my stories, means I'm doing something right, haha. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. It means a lot to me. <3
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Omnos
Wow nice twist on the prom story. Sadly this kind of event happens all to often. Nicely written I enjoyed it thank you
Author's Response: thank you. Yeah, I actually got this idea from listening to the news about a shooting just a few towns over from me or something.
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:55 AM · On: Omnos
Nice twist - good story
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I am a fan of your stories and to know that you've read one of mine and then reviewed... just wow! <3
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:03 AM · On: Omnos
sad story but you did a fantastic job writing it.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! <3
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