Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Stitch by Stitch
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2021 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

did read it again.. Michael should be castrated

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

good one,looking now for sequel

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

This wedding is working out just right.  Love how Jenny Rebecca just dumped the flowers.  LOL.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 9

In this case your solution works just fine.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Boy this chapter was a shocker.  First they end up having twins, then only one of them is Brian's.  Gus won't tell will he?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 7

It's good that they are getting married and moving into Britin with plenty of room. Shame though with Ben and Hunter living in their building.  Somehow I think Emmett will end up living there as well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

Can't wait to find out which name you decide.  Somehow I think it will be a boy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 5

It's bad enough to be raped, but to find out he was pregnant!  I hope it's Brian's.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

I agree with Brian that Michael shouldn't get off scott free.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

Aha!  I've never liked Michael.  I'm glad that Emmett and Ted said they believed Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm pretty sure I've read this before but it's always nice to read it again.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2018 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

Like I said before so glad I found your stories.  This one was tough to read but so good.  Never like Mikey, but this one made me really hate the idiot.  Great writing.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2017 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

I read this all in one go it's why I'm reviewing at the end. This was such a powerful story so moving and shows the love they have for each other. No matter what nothing can break them apart. You really and truly wrote this with sensitivity and respectful manner.

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

Please write more of this story

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 10

Way to make me cry, wow

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

That's what's great about fanfics you can do anything. Really loving this, I love them with kids

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 8

Awww they are cute and I have heard of this as well and have plans for a story with it for ages now. Brilliant work

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG poor Justin glad they are OK. I can't wait to see what's next

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 6

This was great, I loved them looking at names and now getting married, whoop whoop

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

I am loving how you have Brian looking after him, I pray it's Brians

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thank god the family is there for them. I would have pressed charges

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

This made me cry, so emotional

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2016 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love that Brian is looking after him so well, you are doing a brilliant job

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2015 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

A very poignant story and so glad that they could move through all the angst and finally marry. I'm off to find the sequel:-)

Reviewer: misseshermionemalfoy (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

This was an interesting twist! I love the baby names your picked! 

Reviewer: misseshermionemalfoy (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Just a heads up you wrote that they took the 'vette there and took the jeep back! Pretty sure that's what I read at least. 

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2014 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm so glad that Ted is the bestman.  Cool how Emmett is so worried. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

It works for me.  Wonder how Mel is going to get Mikey's signature.  Gus was in the room when the results came in, will he say something, I wonder? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Twins!!!  What a surprise.  They both take after Justin!  I guess I shouldn't be surprised that one of them is a Kinney and the other isn't, but I am.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

How on earth did Justin manage to fall down a flight of stairs?  Having Ben and Hunter for neighbors for a few month might prove useful.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

I started reading Step by Step, so I'm pretty sure Greenlee is what they picked.  I'm glad they are both seeing therapists.  Like how Ben and Emmett seem to be getting close. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Michael a father.  Holy crap. This story has me on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 4

So Mikey gets off easy.  My question is why?  Why would he do something like that?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

That was a shocker!  Michael of all people.  At least Lindsay, Melanie, Ted and Emmett are on Justin's side.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

Darn, that's a gutsy thing to do, seeing everyone after something like that happens. 

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2012 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 10

to histoire est superbe mais j'ai l'impression qu'il n'y aura pas de suite de vous, vu qu'il y plus de nouvelle depuis 2011.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 10

Choosing to replace an awful memory of a rape with a beautiful memory of your wedding day? I dont know, it just doesn't add up for me. I mean, yes one should make new memories over old bad memories but not on so a significant event as a wedding, long overdue. Anyway that is just me talking here, so....

I loved the fact that Ben and Emmett are a couple, and that our lovely queen is still being Emmett! And a great partyplanner at that.

I got caught up with your story, so I guess now I have to wait for the next chapter LOL

Great work sweetie.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. Yes, I always loved Emmett and Ben was an ok character and since I didn't like Michael, I figured I'd keep Ben around and pair him with Emmett instead. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 9

Is Hell starting to freeze over, Brian Kinney has not have sex in what? TEN MONTHS??????? LOL

Is that thing with the parental rights and the adoption taking place legal? I hope there are going to be NO problems with the kid.

 



Author's Response:

For the story, yes? You'll see in the sequel. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

I should have expected it the moment I read about the twins...

Keep reading I am



Author's Response:

It almost didn't happen. Both almost were Brian's but then I thought of a sequel that needed one (or both) to be Michael's child. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

I should know that something like a fall in the eighth month would occur, what's with this lot, they always have to have that mishap every now and then to appreciate what they have? Jeeeeshh!

Loved the chapter though, and the fact that Ben and Hunter are temporarily neighbooring with the boys.

I will keep on reading now LOL



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am glad both boys managed to get professional help, who would have thought that possible?

As for the name, since I am late in reading these chapters I would not impose but my two favorites are Gale *do not laugh* and Zane.

I am off to reading the rest of the story now



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. <3

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'm sure the name has been picked but this is what my choices would have been:

Ireland Taylor Kinney, Rain Taylor Kinney (although I think would be female), Landon Taylor Kinney,

Now I'll finish reading the story and find out what your choice was.

 

 



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 10

Besides some awkward commas this was a very good chapter. If you check your story's panel you'll see why an admin cyber fairy touched it up a little for you. Very well written with many happy fans wanting more.



Author's Response:

Okay and yeah, working on a sequel I'm hoping to have up soon but I'm also working on one for my "Fcked Up" story. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 9

I don't have a clue about adoption laws in PA but it sounds reasonable to me. Four months for Brian Kinney to wait? Now that's unreal ;)



Author's Response:

He's already waited about 8 or 9 months, what's another 4? LOL. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 8

Well slap my ass and call me a bitch. Twins. Love the names by the way. The DNA twist is a novel plot idea too.



Author's Response:

Haha. Yup, almost didn't go down that way at first but then I changed it last minute. As for the novel plot idea, I'm actually working on a novel with twins that have different fathers like this. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 7

Way to go! I didn't see any typos in this chapter. Good job! Looking forward for the special day when someone arrives.



Author's Response:

Really, no typos. That's a first, lol. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 6

Male pregnancy reminds me of a joke.

A boy was learning the facts about sex from his father and asked the question: "Can a girl get pregnant by anal sex?"

"Certainly son; where do you think lawyers come from?"

You did confuse Michael's situation by first saying he was going to do about a year in prison and then suddenly he was free. I sort of changed some wording to avoid that in the story. I hope you don't mind. I have my admin reasons for cleaning it up a bit :) I didn't change much however.



Author's Response:

That's fine. I knew it was confusing when I wrote it but I never went back through and fixed it. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

Nobody can queen out like a gay boy :)



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

Good to see the story moving at a rapid pace. It makes for a very interesting read. I beta'd some places when I saw them for you.



Author's Response:

It all really depends on the story if I write it out longer or skip time like I did with this one. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

Well I certainly didn't expect that to go down! Can Mikey have a 380 lb. cell mate named Bubba who likes little white boys late in the night? (snicker)



Author's Response:

Haha, that would be great wouldn't it. Sadly, not how it goes down. <3

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

Usually such a victim has a problem seeing people for a long time. This should result in an interesting development since you're going there.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't do much with it though. I toned it down on this story unlike others I've written before. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Was that the last chapter?  Please, a sequel is needed, ASAP! 



Author's Response:

Yes it was and I am working on a sequel. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 10

Nice story! Cant wait for a sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 10

I loved this story!  I read all 10 chapters in one sitting! LOL  Can't wait for the sequel!

I was wondering about something; there was no mention that since Westley is biologically Michael's, then Jenny is his biological sister.  

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Yeah, Westley and Jenny are biologically brother and sister but since everyone (but Brian, Justin and Mel) don't actually know that, I never said anything. The sequel will actually go into it more though. I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2011 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great story. Sad at parts, but nice happy ending. Definitely looking forward to that sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 10

wonderful and great story i can not wait to read the next chapter you are a great writter



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

Glad to hear of a sequel. Well done!!! :o) Really enjoyed reading this story... tagged at the heart.



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

I think its great how Brian loves and treats both babies the same.  About the adoption laws, they probably vary from state to state, but your way seems reasonable, given the circumstances.  Love the update and can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

hi, your story is great, is realy sad that one beby is not of brian's but is true, that can happen, in my country, Chile, a women have sex with to men in the same day, she have twins too and in the paternity test, one baby was of each gay, I saw in the news. so it can happen. 

kisses

 



Author's Response:

Well thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2011 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 9

I just love this Brian! Still him, but better...



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! <3

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love this story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 9

I like your story and that Brian is such a good  and understanding partner to Justin. Iwas  just thinking, how both Brian and Michael can be the biological parents of the twins, because last Brian met Justin 2 weeks before Michael's attack. But o.k. if men can get pregnant, which I absolutely love for equality reasons :-), than this may be possible, too.



Author's Response:

No, he was actually with Justin the weekend that Michael attacked him. They were just saying it was 2 weeks before because they didn't want everyone to think Michael could be the father of the child. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

"Justin confessed that he didn't want to press charges against Michael because it was all already causing so much hurt in their family."

I'm with Brian on this one. The book should have been thrown at him.



Author's Response:

I agree but then my sequel wouldn't work. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

It was a shocker finding out the rapist was Michael. Why did he do it?



Author's Response:

It almost wasn't him but then I got the idea in my head and it wouldn't leave me alone. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

"'Brian, I'm not going to hid out in the fucking lof' just because I was attacked and raped by someone.' Justin hissed, "I want to see the gang before...' His voice hitched and he closed his eyes, 'Before they find out and then Carl arrests him and they all blame me for it happening.'"

That's the Justin that I know and love. It was a brutal rape and he has fears but he is facing them.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I sort of hate these sorts of stories that play Justin as a victim when he's never really acted like that. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

"He knew that it helped that he and Brian would be getting married in less then a years time now and nothing was going to stop the wedding this time, not if Justin could help it."

I had forgotten about he marriage proposal. The pregnancy and that are probably what Justin needed besides Brian at his side, of course. Irt is obvious that he has not fully gotten over the rape.



Author's Response:

I don't think anyone fully gets over rape, even after years have passed. But yeah, with Brian by his side and knowing he is about to marry him, nothing can stand in Justin's way, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

"He's not even going to give Michael a chance to know the kid is really his."

Good idea.

I'm behind in reading reviewing and have missed this story. I'm happy I didn't miss it altogether. I was nervous about the premise but you have written this story well.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you. It's always nice to hear what others think of my stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

 "The boy is not biologically yours, Mr. Kinney."

That's a bummer, but they had said that it wouldn't make a difference. I just think it is sad that Michael would be a part of their lives.

 



Author's Response:

Yes it is sad but yup, it doesn't make a difference for them. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

Twins!  I love it!  And a neat little plot twist, and you're right, non-identical twins can have two different fathers.  Now is Michael, the scumbag, gonna show up and cause problems?  Or maybe you can just shove him down a well somewhere, never to be heard from again.  Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Haha, I would like nothing more then to shove Michael down a well, but then my sequel wouldn't work. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

Two babies, different daddies. Well if they can do it on a soap opera (one life to live) i guess you can do it in your story. I like it. As for the names of the babies not so much but it's your story.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

It's rare, but I did my research so I know it could happen. You're not the only person who didn't like the choice for the names. It was really a last minute decision as I was working on this chapter while talking with a friend. The boys name is from my brother's nephew and the girls is from Greenlee on the soap opera "All My Children". She had always been my favorite character. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

I knew it was too good to be true for them to both be Brian's...



Author's Response:

They almost were but talking with my friend, she got an idea into my head for a sequel and the only way it would work is it one of them had been Michael's kid. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting, very interesting. Can't wait to see if Michael will return and everybody finds out about Westly being Michael's. Not keen on the names though, everything else is brilliant.



Author's Response:

It took me a while to decide on the names. I was going to go with different ones but then my friend and I started talking about it all. It was actually only suppose to be one kid too, but she talked me into making it twins. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh....its time to call Mel in for a consult I think.  Poor Debbie how is she going to feel. Does this mean Mikey will be making a return appearance? I hope everyone lets him know their opinions of him. "I was drunk" just doesn't cut it. Look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yup, it is. As for Michael making  return appearance, I haven't really decided yet. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 7

Did you know that you can copy your text from what ever wordprocessing program and paste into the text box of MidnightWhispers?  It's very easy.  I do it when I add stories/chapters to my account.

Just thougt you'd like to know so this won't happen again.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah. That's what I did with every other chapter for all my stories and have them saved to the WordPad, up until this last one. I was just typing it into the box here on the site because it was there and since I didn't have the next chapter for this already finished during my little "internet lock", I was going with the flow. I didn't know it was going to close out on me and I would lose it all. I've learned my lesson, never doing that again, LOL. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

So glad you updated! Really hoping the baby is Brian's.



Author's Response:

Thank you, me too. With the update. I haven't fully decided on who the father is going to be just yet, just like I haven't picked the name yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter!  You would never know you were angry when you wrote this!  I feel for you with the internet thing.  Mine doesn't cut out, it just moves so slow sometimes I want to toss the computer thru the window.  Anyway, I'm looking for ward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Haha. Yeah, my computer moves slow too and I've threatened to throw it over the balcony and it starts working again. I'm waiting to get the money to get a new one soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 7

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 6

You really should name the baby if a girl, Olivia Malia Taylor Kinney or a boy Leo Chase Taylor Kinney. I like them the best.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Though those names weren't in the list, I'll keep them in mind since I haven't fully decided on the name yet. <3

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

kind of partial to Finley, and of course Gale - but the one  I like best was not chosen - Gavyn - it's my son's name - and sounds great with Taylor Kinney I think.

 

by the way - loving the story - thanks

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

I like the name Gavyn, but I wanted names that are not that common I guess? Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 6

I think Seely for a girl and Langston for a boy. I hope you going to add some more chapters.  I do not like for Justin  to get hurt. But always the strong love between the guys is amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think you are the first to pick Seeley and Langston as the name. <3

Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

I vote for Evan for a boy, and Jamie for a girl.  They are not my favorites on the name list, but I think they are the best with Taylor Kinney.  Looking forward to finding out what sex the baby is, and what name wins.  Can he have 'surprise!' twins?



Author's Response:

Haha. I haven't quite decided that yet. I may just change my mind when the time comes that he ends up with twins instead. Not sure yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

You just CAN'T use Dusty, Evan, Greenlee Gale, Ireland Langson, Lane, Lyndon or Rain.  I mean, come on!  Even Dakota is a bit contrived.  Guess I like those Irish names like Riley, Reed or Seeley.  (Could get quite some hassles at school with Seeley).



Author's Response:

Um, wow. Okay. The list of names are actually names that I liked and would probably use for my own children.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yay, another chapter. I really like the story. Good work. I think it was definitely sneaky with the names and baby's gender and all.



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you. I almost gave it away a few times, not paying attention when I was typing. I had to reread like 10 times to make sure there was nothing that would have given it away. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Winifred (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

Finally! I have waited so much for the next chapter. I really love this story! Even the wait was little bit long, it was totally worth of it.

About baby's name. I myself love Jamie! Plus I think that Jamie Taylor Kinney sounds good. Also Riley sounds nice, it kind of rhymes with Taylor and Kinney. Also Lyndon and Luca are very nice names. Well, tough decision. It's your choice ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter - but that's nothing new :D



Author's Response:

Sorry about the long wait. First I had writer's block and didn't know where I wanted to go with the chapter and then my computer died out on me. I promise to update sooner now that I'm past the writer's block and my computer is fixed. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

I really like this story, most of all because i can't stand Michael, but i also LOVE MPreg stories. ;o)
I hope you keep going.

As for the names:
For a boy, i really like Lane Taylor Kinney.
For a girl: Dakota Taylor Kinney.

Best wishes
Diana



Author's Response:

Thanks Diana. It's not anti-Michael but you might like my "Growing Up Liberty" Mpreg story. =) Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love the way brian is with justin.  I also love the Idea of Ben and Emmett.  Maybe I am reading to much into it but in your chapter end notes you wrote that you wouldn't give the sex until after "they were born".  does that mean that there will be two babies.  Interesting.  as for names I like  Brooke and Gale.  Looking forward to see what is next.  Just love it



Author's Response:

Second person to mention about Ben and Emmett. I really did not think anyone got who I was talking about since I didn't give his name, lol. As for the end notes, I haven't really decided just yet. I've only really thought about giving them one kid, but that may change by the time that chapter actually happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW another great chapter.  I really like the way you write.  the emotional pull is amazing.  you have reaaly captured the essence of Brian and Justin.  



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you! Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

Cute story., Evil Mikey! Although it does kind of fit with the way the show developed the character.  I hope the baby turns out to be Brian's in the end but a little drama in between would be good too ;)  

I like the name Riley.  Riley Taylor Kinney. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I've never actually need a fan of Michael so it's a little hard for me to write a story where he is actually nice (except for my "Growing Up Liberty" story now). Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

isn't it just like justin not wanting to cause any pain to everyone.  I absolutely love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks. <3

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 6

I like Dusty for a name of the baby. And to give Ben and Em a chance evetually is a good idea.



Author's Response:

Haha, you're the first person to say anything about Ben and Emmett. I didn't even know if people would figure out it was Emmett I was talking about there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Spif (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 6

Dakota (#1) or Landon (#2)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ireland  Reed Kinney

Evan Zane Kinney

love it



Author's Response:

Well, I've already decided that Taylor is going to be the middle name. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

i love it

Author's Response:

Thanks. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you. <3

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

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Author's Response:

Um... thank you?

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Well...........of course 1st choice must be GALE TAYLOR KINNEY!!!  Also like Reed Taylor Kinney!  Just PLEASEEEEEEEEE rush next chapter.  LOVE this story...your writng.... expecially B's caring, patience , caring and protectiveness, which is always there.  Thank You.



Author's Response:

Haha. You're the first person to pick that name. I thought it was funny that when I was going through the names on the baby name site that Gale was even listened that. I was all like, I have to, lol. Reed is my second favorite so far. I'll get to the next chapter soon. Promise, I'm trying to go back and forth between this one and WHtM and SF. But I also have another that I am working on and hopefully will be posting in a couple of hours or so. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: neetaskita (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 6

Don't mind the wait, just like your stories.  Update when you can.  I'll be there to read. 

As for a name, either Ireland or Rain.



Author's Response:

Thank you. So happy that you like my stories. =) Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 6

Sorry about the "test" review. I had written an elaborate review and it didn't take. I had that problem before and I did not discover it until I had written about 5 of them. OK, back to the matter at hand.

I was pleasantly surprised and please to see the update. You have done a wonderful job with the description of Justin's body as it changes with his pregnancy. I also love the display of intimacy between Brian and Justin.



Author's Response:

No probably, I just deleted it. =) Thanks. I'm always a little hesitate when I'm writing an Mpreg because of the pregnancy and changes to the body because well, I've never been pregnant myself so I don't really know much other then what I've read. So glad you loved it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Just my personal opinion but i hope it's a girl, since brian already has a boy. But i couldn't choose between 3 names Langston, Brooke and Dakota I liked all 3.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 6

I like Riley Taylor-Kinney  it has a musical ring to it and either sex would rock the name.  So glad you are writing again missed this story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I'm writing again too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

I like Finley and Reed.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

Dakota for a girl or Riley for a boy i think. Britin.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hey Hun,

 

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work and plz update ssssssssoon :D



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on the next chapter right now. <3

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

sad but great story



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Winifred (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2011 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Aaaawwws, Brian is so wonderful! They go through hard times and still Brian is so supportive. I really don't care who is baby's other father - of course I hope it's Brian's but if it's not then they will deal with it.

As usual, you're amazing writer and characters are really believable. Can't wait for the next chapter<3



Author's Response:

Why thank you! So glad you like this. It means a lot. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2011 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

Please don't let it be Michael's kid.  I may throw up



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon if the kid is Michael's or Brian's. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian is a good guy, but why isn't Michael in jail? I don't get it...



Author's Response:

I have other things in store for Michael and if he was in jail, they wouldn't work. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

It would be so frustrating for the baby to be Michael's, I really do not like that SOB.

I am hooked with this story and I will impatiently await further updating.

Marla



Author's Response:

So glad that you love this story. Thanks so much for the review. Questions will be answered soon. <3

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter. I really hope the baby is Brian's in the end. I wouldn't mind the anghst that would result from the family and Michael figuring out that Justin is pregnant possibly with Michael's child.  Look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Everyone will find out whose baby it is in the end, I promise. But I'm not saying anything more. <3

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

That Michael Novotny is an asshole. However I need to learn the reason behind the rape. Why did he do it? And I still have to wonder what is Brian gonna do about him, because if I were in his shoes I would hurt him BAD!

Cant wait for an update.

Marla



Author's Response:

Yes he is. It'll come out sooner or later. I'm still working out a few knots for the story as I am writing it and sadly, that is one of them at the moment. <3

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great so far, unfortunately I am sure we haven't heard the last of Michael...



Author's Response:

Thank you and no we have not heard or seen the last of Michael yet. <3

Reviewer: Winifred (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2011 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

Do you know that I love you? This is so fucking good that I can't believe it. I like that things go slowly. There is too many stories where someone is raped and the next thing is that the one who was raped have sex with someone he/she loves. Because it do not go that way. I'm thankful that in your story Justin have problems to let anyone, even Brian, to touch him. It takes time. It's wonderful how Brian waits Justin to make the first move - to let Justin have the control that he lost when Michael raped him.

If I was Justin, I would let Michael rotten in the jail years - but I have to admit that Justin is right. The family has suffered enough. Especially when they find out that Justin is pregnant.

I really really love this one. So I guess that I have to wait patiently for the next chapter.

The banner is really pretty, I like that too :)



Author's Response:

Well, I do now, lol. Yeah, I don't like stories that go in a fast pace either when it comes to subjects like this. I've written a lot of rape stories before so I know just what to write and how to write it. There will be many problems for Justin and for Brian to over come because of this. If I was Justin I would allow Michael to rot in jail too, but I already know where I am going with this story (there is already a sequel in the making), and I need him out of jail for that to happen so I tried to pull it together as Justin not wanting to cause the family more pain then already happened because of what Michael has done. And thanks, glad you like the banner, though I didn't make it. It is very good. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! <3

Reviewer: Azzurra (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh God!! It was Michael!!!!!!!!!! I have a feeling, but....... I mean, why would he do that??!! and.... how stupid is he??!! no condom!! I hope that DNA test came fast!!!! throw him in the jail!!!!  and he said "Hey, Brian!"!! what is he thinking?? did he think that Justin just shut his mouse up, he is even more stupid than i think he is. Gosh!!
I'm Glad Brian is there with Justin!!!! they're so loving....  <3
I can't wait to see more!! the reason why Michael did such a horrible thing and I'm really want to see the baby news!!!! 
Thanks <3

Author's Response:

Wow with all those !'s I would think you were bouncing off the walls while writing that, lol. All your questions will be answered in good time, I promise. Thank you so much for reading and review. <3

Reviewer: Winifred (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow. I suspected that it was Michael but it still feels like slap on the face. I can only ask why? Why did Michael something like that to Justin - to Brian? I guess that Michael's motives will be revealed in time (but I'm still anxious :D)

The Chapter was very well written. Like I said earlier, you're really good writer and I love your stories. So, keep going :)<3

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It'll all be revealed as to why soon. So glad that you like this and thank you. <3

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

I knew it had to by Michael.  I hope they find his finger prints all over Justin's apartment. Poor Justin just can't seem to catch a break. I hope the baby ends up being Brian's I don't think Justin could handle raising Michaels child or giving it up for adoption.  Debbie is going to be a handful.  Great start I love Mpreg and angst.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yup, it was Michael. I was trying my best not to give it away until the right moment, and I wanted another chapter or two between chapter 2 and revealing that it was actually Michael, but I guess that didn't work out, lol. You'll just have to wait to find out if the baby is Brian's or Michael's and what Justin does about it. Yeah, Debbie is going to be a handful, but Brian will be there for Justin through it all. Thanks for reading. <3

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

this story will keep us guessing for a few capters, i fear.  that's good writing n'est pas???  must keep up with this one--it's a keeper.



Author's Response:

Hopefully it will. It will be updated soon again, don't worry. <3

Reviewer: julimango (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 2

Tell us who it is! Tell us who it is!!! :D



Author's Response:

Haha nope. You'll have to wait to find out. lol. <3

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

I bet it's Brain best friend, this is very good something new



Author's Response:

I ain't sayin' a word about who it is. You'll have to wait to find out. Glad that you like it. <3

Reviewer: Azzurra (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

ohhhhhhh, poor Sunshine :"(

I'm really really glad he has Brian!! Brian is really amazing.

and I'm glad Justin is still strong. able to smile. he and brian can survive this. right?

and... who is the attacker??!!!! is he someone really close to them??!!!!! 

i'm soooo hooked up this story. can't wait to see more!!



Author's Response:

Yup, poor Sunshine, but he will always have Brian... maybe. As for your questions, you'll just have to wait to find out. Thank you for reading. <3

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