Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For A Wanted Man
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 07:59 AM · On: Part 2

Yup. The dick should have been incarcerated. :D

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 07:27 AM · On: Part 1

This is fantastic! I love the bantering, their dialogues are so funny. Although the catching of the Oppenheimer thieves were not shown, and Justin talked about his ways too much that it would be easy to catch him when the fbi prepare for him, the whole chapter was exciting.

Reviewer: kimi (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 12:51 AM · On: Part 1

Brilliant little fic!!!!

The premise is so different from the usual BJ stories, yet stiill very them..

i just love love the snappy, witty and snarky banters between the boys :)

I enjoyed it alot, thank you

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 05:44 AM · On: Part 2

Great story, I just wish there was more of B/J and taking Vraig down :). Thank you.

Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Part 2

This story was such a delish! Thank you!

Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 02:44 AM · On: Part 2

I still say this deserves an award. I love Brian and justin in this fic. I would love to see more of them.

Great Job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I don't think there'll be more, but I'm glad you enjoyed what little I did write!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Part 2

loved it.

what a shame there won't be another chapter to see craig get taken down and how brian and justin handle a relationship.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! But no, sadly, there will be no more from this 'verse. You'll just have to use your imagination!

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2011 09:38 AM · On: Part 2

far too short and could definitly be a great long story, but it was very well written and kept my interest



Author's Response:

It did have the potential to be a huge whopper of a story, but sadly, I don't have the time/interest to do that. I'm glad that you liked the abbreviated version of it, though!

Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Part 1

another amazing story, havent seen anything like this before, great job!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:00 PM · On: Part 2

This was very unique and so cute, my friend!  You certainly have a way with the witty repartee - loved the snappy dialogue between the two boys.  And I absolutely LOVED the code names you gave each of the 'gang' - very ingenious!

Not sure I would want Justin to remain as a 'felon on the run,' so to speak, but this was certainly a very different take on their relationship and a very enjoyable read!  Thanks so much for sharing this fun story with us!:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've always been told that dialog is my strength, and this piece is definitely centered around the dialog. It was a lot of fun to write. Especially coming up with the code names! I was in fits when I decided that Brian would be "Brando". 

Justin isn't so much a "felon on the run". He can really take care of himself, and he's been raised to be the class of criminal that don't really get caught. Plus, you know, it adds drama and contention to his relationship with Brian, and that's just about as essential as bread and water! 

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Part 1

Hey!  I like this story... I think it's QUITE SEXY, LOL!  And, like the other reviewer mentioned... I too like Brian meeting Justin while he's hanging from a rope attached to the ceiling... SMOKING HOT, Damn it!



Author's Response:

Lol. Everyone seems rather captivated by that scene, yes. 

The second half of this will be up in a few hours. I hope you like it just as much!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Part 1

oh this was a very exciting first part. part two please.

seems like brian can't get rid justin if he tried and i don't think he wants to.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Part two will be up tomorrow. 

Justin's certainly a persistent bugger, no matter what universe he's in!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Part 1

This story is UNF...ING BELIEVABLE!!!

This is blue ribbon material from just the first chapter. That scene at the beginning where Brian first meets Justin dangling from the ceiling  is perfect. The dialog is clever and the action is riveting.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you! 

Unfortunately, there's only going to be two parts. Caper!stories aren't really my thing--if it went on for any longer, you guys would see just how bad I am with them. I'm pleased that you like the first half, though. The second part will be up tomorrow!

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