Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Queer as Blood
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Chapter Nine: The Preparations

Ahh...still sweet but sexy!  Enjoying it very much.  Liked the idea of Brain renting a private jet - a little disappointed that we didn't get to see Justin incorporated into the Mile High Club, but somehow I think you will make up for that soon.:)  Looking forward to seeing how the Blood Ball goes, and I have a feeling that a little shower of angst might be about to occur amidst all this sunshine and light (or should I say darkness in Brian's case - ha!).  I snickered at the eight pieces of luggage that Brian had.:)  Thanks for the quick updates - wish I could do that so rapidly - I'll have to quit writing epic-length chapters, I guess, and less stories - LOL!;)



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you! I'm in the process of writing the next chapter but I'm trying to get it just right and it's taking me a bit longer this go around. :S But hopefully I'll have the next chapter up in a day or so. :) Thanks ever so!

*hugs* -Louchelle

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2011 03:16 PM · On: Chapter Nine: The Preparations

wow anticipation factor high!!.  good lead-in chapter, wonderful.  loving this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Working on the next chapter...hopefully I'll have it soon. :) Thanks for the rating! *hugs*

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

Hi, Louchelle.:)  Still enjoying this story immensely.  Love the little touches like the color of Brian's drapes and pillows, and the "Blood Ball" - perfect name for it!  Will there be some sort of "bloodbath" occurring there? (sorry - couldn't resist - ha!).  I like this lovestruck Brian, but I'm a sentimental sap anyway.:)  So nicely written and full of emotions between the two boys.  Love the eroticism you've written between them - very hot as well as sweet in spots.

As for Michael  -ewww!  Hope Brian doesn't wind up with 'blood poisoning' - ha!  Looking forward to the Blood Ball as well as the other events in your story.  You've gotten a LOT of reviews for this one - well-deserved, my dear - kudos to you!:)



Author's Response:

Thanks Kimberly! :) I had to throw a little Michael in but didn't want the whole 'I love you Brian blah blah blah' to happen haha. I'm still figuring out how to portray the Blood Ball...but it's coming...slowly HA -__- Thank you for the compliment and for reviewing! Means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

Thank gawd you had Brian glamour Mickey after the feeding because for the life of me I do not want this entire Michael-Brian thing happening here, in fact if you can get Michael to dissappear that would be just fine.

So, what's coming up next? Is the Blood Ball coming up or there is gonna be something to help the plot thicken?

Cant wait

Marla



Author's Response:

I felt like I had to add Michael but without the 'I love you Brian blah blah blah' shit lol I'm in the process of writing the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 01:17 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

i really liked this chapter, the only thing troubling me is brian feeding off michael. did the glamoring work? wonder what deb would do if she found out.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it the glamouring worked on Michael...Glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

i'm happy that justin gave brian another chance to earn his trust again and also to explain what happened. if they stay open and honest almost everything will be okay.

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

Fuckin' awesome! :)

Absolutely perfect! I love the whole crossover thing you've got going and how it all ties together... and even though Eric has only been in it once so far, and quickly, I like where you've got him and Sookie's relationship, too. Justin should fit right in at the Blood Ball... provided that everyone knows he belongs to Justin and Justin sticks close. Knowing the Blood Ball that Sookie was invited to, it would be all too easy for a human with uniquely delicious blood to be pursued too much... especially by the wrong vampire.

Oh, and I have to say I love your description of Ted... perfect! He's a sweetheart and would be a real catch in a society that prized consideration and chivalry. Can't wait for more of this story! 

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

Absolutely beautiful!  I mean the last chapter with that sleeze Ethan, and Brian rescuing him and then here... deciding he truly loves him... it was a bit reminiscent of the love displayed in Twilight... which I absolutely loved, btw... so it totally worked here with my all time favorite couple ever. 

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

And I love the turned out of this story..... can't wait for the next chapter, esp the Blood Ball...... cheers!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :))

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation

keeps getting better and better.  wondered when the blood ball would be happening.  good chapter. love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank youu! :))

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

This a frustratingly slow paced story, but I love it anyway LOL.

Well, so much about ethan I suppose, he was always a creep in my book and I would have loved to see him perish by our vampBrian but I will let that pass, but I would love to see some death coming into his future.

So where are you going with the story, please please please do not get fairies (no pun intented) in the story, cause then you have to bring the entire vampire population in their wake, though hmmmmm that might be interesting to see, and with Eric and Sookie trying to protect our couple, I definitely see potential there...

I am waiting impatiently for the next update

Marla



Author's Response:

Sorry for the pace love :/ I'm glad you like it though :) My muse is taking it's sweet time I guess...but maybe the pace will change in the near future. Will be posting another chapter soon. -Louchelle

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

Very hot! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

Hello, dear!  I liked the way you had Brian explain to Justin why he acted the way he did - I think it was quite plausible.  And I had to get some ice water after I read this chapter (and not just because it's in the mid-90's here, either - ha!).  Still really enjoying this tale - I will definitely be along for the ride!  Thanks for sharing this with us.:)



Author's Response:

Hiya! I'm reallyyyy glad you liked it! *whew* :)) Hehe Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

omg!!  what a sexy chapter.  i loved it.

Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation

Wow!!! ermmmm... the lovemaking in this fic is just too hot that my brain is so incoherent rite now!!!!... but I love this loving and full of emotions Brian!!!! and he said "i love you " first!!!.. wow!!!!!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Chapter Six: The Dilemma

i've read all six chapters and find this to be very addictive.

things were going so well for them when brian let his lust for blood over come his lust for justin. good thing eric showed up when he did. evil fiddler, who did he think he was? him and the fat guy, brian should kill them both if their blood wouldn't make him sick.

i hope they go to the blood ball, justin and sookie would get along, especially since she can read minds too.

there was only one thing, how could deb offer him a ride from home and be at the dinner when he got there? was she working the same shift?



Author's Response:

They were working the same shift...she offered to let him ride with her but he chose to walk. :) Thanks for the review!! Another chapter will be posted soon.

Reviewer: julimango (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 08:49 AM · On: Chapter Six: The Dilemma

sigh....this is so sad :( fix it please! lookin forward to your update.



Author's Response:

I will probably upload the enxt chapter either tonight or tomorrow :)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter Six: The Dilemma

5 feet away==like that is going to happen.  interesting.  if someone tastes vampires blood doesn't that turn them into a vampire or do they have to have pints?  i think i read that somewhere.  good chapter--loving this story.



Author's Response:

Drinking vampire blood gives the ability to heal...but there's a side effect to be discovered later. He would become a vampire if Brian drained most of his blood and then let him drink his vampire blood. :) Thank you for reviewinggg :))

Reviewer: Predec2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 03:44 AM · On: Chapter Six: The Dilemma

Again another wonderful chapter - portrays the inner turmoil both men are experiencing for each other.  Poor Ethan - always the bad guy, though - ha!  Love how fast you're able to update, too - looking forward to the rest!:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D I may put up another chapter later tonight or tomorrow.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter Five: The Old Friend

I liked your story and I am looking forward the Blood Ball and what finally is gonna happen when Justin's real identity is revealed.

Cant wait for the update.

Marla



Author's Response:

I just posted another chapter that's hopefully going to seque into the Blood Ball soon. I hope you like it :)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapter Five: The Old Friend

such a good story.  i loved this chapter, really a scary happening=have to find a way to resolve brian's thirst when it comes to justin or he dies.  the banner you have made is dope.  good job!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Hopefully I'll have another chapter up in about a day or so.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 09:05 AM · On: Chapter Five: The Old Friend

Still enjoying your story - I'm jealous you can update so quickly - ha!  I'm intrigued by your portrayal of the turmoil occuring within each of the boys' hearts and minds.  Can't wait to read the rest of this!  Keep up the great work, my dear!:)  And love the new banner.:)



Author's Response:

My muse is working double time right now...haha! And thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Chapter Five: The Old Friend

Ooooh, I love it! My two fave shows and characters in one story, excellent. Great new twist on Brian and Justin. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 11:22 PM · On: Chapter Four: The Sweet Taste of You

Is this story going to follow along with some of the storyline of True Blood? Or will it be a more original tale with just the characters making appearances?   I like the story so far and would love to see it continue in a more original form. I like the TB characters and think it would be great to have their personalities interacting with the QAF folks but not along the same themes as TB is doing.  Does that make sense? Anyway well written!!



Author's Response:

I'm trying to make it more original with a few similarities between the TB and QaF characters. There will be appearances of the TB characters but it won't follow along the same story line as TB. :) I'm anxious about how the next chapter will turn out. :S

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter Four: The Sweet Taste of You

Just got through with the next two chapters - had to take a break after writing the humongous latest chapter of "Paper Hearts" (ack)!  Such a great first story - I'm amazed and so impressed!  I'm totally enchanted - your ability to place yourself inside B and J is great, and despite there being a plethora of vampire Brian stories lately, you've managed to inject some freshness into this version with Justin's telepathy and Brian's hunger for him....It will be very interesting to see how Brian recoups his trust with Justin after what he almost did....and I profess ignorance over the Eric Northman name - not sure if that is an original character or a crossover from another show (sorry - don't get around much - ha!).  At any rate, I will be eagerly looking forward to the rest of your story....would love eventually to see a banner for this one - would be hot, I'm sure! 



Author's Response:

Eric Northman is a character from HBO's True Blood...I'm intermingling the characters from Qaf and True Blood together some. It's mostly a Brian/Justin story with guest appearances by Eric and other characters from the HBO hit. :) Thank you so much for reviewing. Being a new writer, it means a lot hearing one of my favorite fanfic authors saying they're impressed. :D That is enough to make me do a little happy dance. *dances cutely* :)

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 06:29 PM · On: Chapter Four: The Sweet Taste of You

Forgot a rating... so here it is... a 10! Just like the other chapters... and I foresee many more! :)

 

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter Four: The Sweet Taste of You

That was hot, sweet, terrifying, romantic, wonderful, heart-stopping... did I mention: brilliant!

You can't hear this, but I'm actually singing goofily "love it!"

Can't wait for more... this is so friggin' awesome! 



Author's Response:

*lets out a HUGE breath* Thank you! I was worried about how I wrote this one...but thank you SO much for reading and enjoying! *does a cute happy dance* :D

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Chapter Three: The Insatiable One

Awesome!! But... that's where you leave it? Not that I'm complaining too much... that was a hot, steamy and wonderful chapter... but I do so hope for more soon... :) 

And I gotta say I love the characterizations for Brian and Justin... absolutely perfect!



Author's Response:

Totally about to post another chapter...sorry about the cliffhanger though. :)

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