Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2017 04:20 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
Soo romantic and sweet.
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 04:39 AM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
I can't believe this is your first fanfiction! Your writing is impeccable! I LOVE vampire!Brian and your crossover with True Blood is a natural to me! A Brian/Eric friendship is wonderful and Sookie is going to be crazy-excited when she meets Justin (as it seems like he is a faerie like she is!) I've read through "The Explanation" and am now on "The Invitation," and I HOPE there will be another chapter by the time I get to "The Blood Ball!" I apologize for not commenting sooner but I usually read on my iPad and for some reason it won't let me comment (grrrr!) But, rest assured that I'm reading and loving every second of it! :-D ♥ ♥ ♥ Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: Thank you Cindy! :] I've always wanted to write fanfiction but I was nervous so I just bit the bullet and did it. I'm SO SO happy that people are liking it! Hopefully I'll write another chapter soon...writer's block is not my favorite...AT ALL lol. <3 *hugs* -Louchelle
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
i'm happy that justin gave brian another chance to earn his trust again and also to explain what happened. if they stay open and honest almost everything will be okay.
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
Absolutely beautiful! I mean the last chapter with that sleeze Ethan, and Brian rescuing him and then here... deciding he truly loves him... it was a bit reminiscent of the love displayed in Twilight... which I absolutely loved, btw... so it totally worked here with my all time favorite couple ever.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
This a frustratingly slow paced story, but I love it anyway LOL.
Well, so much about ethan I suppose, he was always a creep in my book and I would have loved to see him perish by our vampBrian but I will let that pass, but I would love to see some death coming into his future.
So where are you going with the story, please please please do not get fairies (no pun intented) in the story, cause then you have to bring the entire vampire population in their wake, though hmmmmm that might be interesting to see, and with Eric and Sookie trying to protect our couple, I definitely see potential there...
I am waiting impatiently for the next update
Marla
Author's Response: Sorry for the pace love :/ I'm glad you like it though :) My muse is taking it's sweet time I guess...but maybe the pace will change in the near future. Will be posting another chapter soon. -Louchelle
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
Very hot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
Hello, dear! I liked the way you had Brian explain to Justin why he acted the way he did - I think it was quite plausible. And I had to get some ice water after I read this chapter (and not just because it's in the mid-90's here, either - ha!). Still really enjoying this tale - I will definitely be along for the ride! Thanks for sharing this with us.:)
Author's Response: Hiya! I'm reallyyyy glad you liked it! *whew* :)) Hehe Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
omg!! what a sexy chapter. i loved it.
Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter Seven: The Explanation
Wow!!! ermmmm... the lovemaking in this fic is just too hot that my brain is so incoherent rite now!!!!... but I love this loving and full of emotions Brian!!!! and he said "i love you " first!!!.. wow!!!!!
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