Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

This really is promising! :) I really hope you continue!

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Why so defensive??? Story good premise; like a lot!!!!!!!! thanks!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like you've started a great story line. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

I couldn’t help but smile as you went all the way back in

time. Justin is only about 7 days old.

Sure your writing technique could use some

improvement. Who’s couldn’t? The best way to

improve your writing skills is to write. So my advice is to sit back, kick off your shoes, and let your fingers

glide over the keyboard and tell your story. You will

probably like your Chapter 3 better than you like

Chapter 2. And so on, and so on ....

As for us readers, if you have a good story to tell – we

will appreciate your efforts.

DavidR

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