Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Breakneck
Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 10:17 AM · On: stumble

nice chapter, showing the difficulties justin will have to face as a parent, and some funny stuff too.  also, thanks for the explanation about just how the baby came to be, was wondering about that one.  cant wait for the next chapter! and great job on this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I did try to make this a little more realistic than most teenage!father!Justin stories try to do. There will be more bits and pieces of backstory coming in throughout the story, but you've gotten the most of it in this chapter. 

I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying it, still. I promise that in the next chapter, we'll see Brian again!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 11:25 PM · On: stumble

i'm sorry that YOU misunderstood that i thought the last chapter was great, not sara dying.

once justin and luke gets into a rythm and ignore craig, things should be a little easier. it would be nice if he heard from cal as turning sara's car over to him and maybe sending money for her burial. even allowing him to live in cal's house. something.



Author's Response:

Lol. I didn't seriously think that was what you meant, don't worry. Only joking, I was. 

Mm... I can't promise that things get easier from here on out--if anything, they get more strained--but we do fall into a rhythm for a while. As for Cal, well, we'll see if he turns up again. I promise I haven't just let him drop completely off the map, how's that? 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing--again--and I can't wait to hear your thoughts on next week's chapter!

Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 07:24 AM · On: push

really intense, absolutely love it, like all your writing.  I can't wait to read the next chapter, totally hooked!  i wonder what brian will think when he finds out about justin's problems... and i do love any stories where justin raises a kid, he would be such a great father!  anyways, i eagerly await the next chapter, thank you!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! I'm happy to hear you're a fan. 

A lot of this story centers around Justin learning how to become a father and do what's best for his son, so I definitely think that you'll enjoy it. As for what Brian will think... Well, you'll see. New chapters posted every Wednesday--I hope to see you then!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 03:46 AM · On: push

Nicely done. Very well written, and quite a unigue perspective. I can't wait to find out more. - - - and...I never thought anything could make me think less of Craig! How can be so calloused towards his son at a time like this...but even more - how can you not have feelings for a child - any child - but especially your grandson. Yes, I think Craig has hit a new all time low.

looking forward to the next chapter

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's definitely a unique perspective for me, because I usually despise writing in first person. With vehemence. But this story just kind of demanded it. 

Craig... does not like things that don't fit in his vision of ideal household. He's been pissed about the Luke situation from the start (as we learn in this chapter), and while he doesn't hate the child, he hates what he stands for. He's also, in his own way, putting the wellbeing of Luke first, because in his mind children should of course be raised by two loving parents who are of proper age. 

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I'll be posting chapters every Wednesday, so keep an eye out for a new one around that time! 

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:49 PM · On: push

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad to hear it!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:16 PM · On: push

Wow great beginning. I'm hooked.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you're on board, 'cause it's gonna be a long haul. 

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:53 PM · On: push

loved it. as sad as it was losing luke's mother i think it's great.

running into brian while their relationship is new , i can understand why he didn't tell him about sara.

craig, first grade bastard as usual. put luke up for adpotion? his own grandchild? what an idiot.



Author's Response:

Lol. You think it's great that she's dead? I'm a bit alarmed, but okay. *g* 

I'm not sure how long Justin thinks he can keep all this a secret from Brian--but then again, in this chapter, he isn't really thinking in the long-term until the very end. We'll see how he deals with Brian in later chapters. And as for Craig... Yeah, kind of a dick. The situation with Luke put a lot of strain on the household, and this definitely isn't going to improve things... 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. See you next week!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:41 PM · On: push

Great beginning.  I look forward to reading this.



Author's Response:

Thanks! New chapters will be up every Wednesday--see you then!

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