Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 09:19 PM · On: impact

Brian is clearly smitten with Luke. Justin's persisitence paid off.



Author's Response:

Indeed! Justin is a persistent little bugger, isn't he?

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 10:17 AM · On: impact

This story is unfolding very nicely.  I like it.


 


Hopefully PIFA is still on Justin’s radar.  Ok, just not now,


but maybe Brian can convince Justin that it is really best for


Luke that Justin be the very best he can be.  In my opinion, that


means PIFA.


 


Thanks for the story.  Things are looking up.  So far …


 


David R.



Author's Response:

Case in point, why I am terrible at endings. *headdest* 

This is sort of the last chapter. There's an epilogue coming your way on Saturday, but this is pretty much it for the characters. There will be no PIFA for Justin, sadly. Everyone's exactly where they're meant to be, and mostly happy, and I called it a good point to close on. Sorry about that... 

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2011 08:34 AM · On: impact

this story just gets better and better.  i just crave more chapters.  the dynamics between the two is wonderful.  keep the chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Heh. That was actually the last chapter--all that remains is the epilogue, which will be posted on Saturday. Sorry...

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 03:42 AM · On: impact

Very intense, good chapter.  Love that Brian is opening up to Luke.  So sad that this fic is coming to an end, it's been so enjoyable to read.  Love all the characterizations, plot, and relationships.  Sequel maybe?



Author's Response:

Thank you! This chapter is really... "deliverance". Everyone is where they're supposed to be, and everything's just good, you know? It was a blast to write. 

No chance of a sequel, unfortunately. But you do get an epilogue, on Saturday!

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