Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: adrita (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2013 07:21 AM · On: terminal

oh my god, whaatt..what ....whaa?

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 05:34 PM · On: terminal

OMG what a wonderful chapter I was so worried that Cal would try and take Luke away, but I did love Justins father/protector instinct kicking in.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Justin's a bit overprotective of Luke at this point, but it was definitely fun to play with those feelings. Poor Justin, all cute and fatherly...

Reviewer: koalared (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 09:37 AM · On: terminal

This story continues to be amazing.

Cal could have at least given the house to Justin and Luke.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Cal isn't really thinking of anyone but himself at this point--I think that his intentions might have been to give Justin some of the money from the house, but... Apparently the grief was too much. 

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 09:04 AM · On: terminal

omg what an ending.  good chapter.  brian still brian with justin.  something hopefully will turn him into something other than a sex machine.  i know that's what he purports himself to be, but he can be and is more. interested to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Brian and Justin's relationship is definitely slow-going, possibly even slower than in canon, so for now we'll just have to live with the little moments between them. Don't bank on Brian suddenly waking up oen day and realizing that Justin is his One True Love. *g*

Perhaps Cal's suicide will push Brian into a little hurt/comfort though, yeah?

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 04:57 AM · On: terminal

intense chapter.

justin has very right to be angry and wary of cal's return. i have a feeling that justin is going to be receiving more from cal than 300 dollars. maybe money for luke's day care, money for school all from the sale of the house. that would be a great thing for cal to do for his grandson, making sure luke was taken care of any way justin can.

not liking brian or the girls too much. brian's out for himself and the girls are being two-faced. if i were justin i would have asked mel why she'd want him to babysit and take care of gus when she and lindsay don't think he's even capable of taking care of his own son. i wouldn't have done it. let brian babysit his son on a friday night. other than that it was a great chapter.



Author's Response:

Justin certainly does have the right to be upset with Cal, and he also has the right to keep Luke away from him. Not that that becomes an issue, but it still stands. Interesting thought about the money... We'll see. 

As for Brian and the girls, I wouldn' be too harsh on them. Remember that we're reading this through Justin's eyes, and right now he has serious trust issues with adults. He's very defensive about his situation and is looking for any excuse to shove all adults out of his life. It becomes a bit more prominent in coming chapters. 

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2011 04:48 AM · On: terminal

what a joy to see that you are also posting here. :-)

another great chapter, looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Yep, I'm posting in many places! 

I haven't been able to get on LJ since Sunday, and it's driving me a little crazy right now. I hope they recover from this DDoS attack soon.

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 12:56 AM · On: terminal

Just wanted to let you know I've been following this story and I love it. I really love seeing Justin as a father and I find it amusing that he became a father before Brian did. And even though this is an AU, your characterizations are spot on. Can't wait to see what happens between Brian and Justin next -- keep writing! :)



Author's Response:

That's wonderful to hear! I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it, even if the premise is a bit odd. I hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 11:55 PM · On: terminal

OMG, that last line was a bombshell!!  I just sat here stunned when I read it. 

This story just gets better and better!  See you next time!



Author's Response:

Lol. Yep, it's a bombshell. I didn't put it there just to shock you all--there's some plotting reasong behind it, blah blah blah, but I swear I didn't do it just to be evil. 

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave feedback!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 11:32 PM · On: terminal

"He was as good as ignoring Luke, but he wasn't angry with me, and he certainly didn't judge me for my failed attempt at striking out on my own."

This is the reason Justin should not be with Brian and is too immature to raise a child. He is letting everyone, mostly Brian, push him around. And Melanie is right. Brian should not be around his kid.



Author's Response:

I think that while Brian probably shouldn't RAISE a child, being around them certainly won't hurt anything. He's not a bad guy. Plus, I mean, I think Brian's just struggling to deal with the fact that he kind of more than tolerates Justin--the baby bit is too much for him at this point. 

Have faith. This story, much like QaF itself, is about boys becoming men. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 10:21 PM · On: terminal

Great chapter thanks. Please more really quickly !!

 

* hugs *

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! The next chapter will be up on Saturday, which is just around the corner!

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