Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 09:10 AM · On: twist

I usually don't review unless a story is exceptional & I have to say...yours is!!! I love the way you keep the characters 'in character' and the fact that you can spell, punctuate, and demonstrate the correct usage of words & tenses (unlike too many authors).

I just want to encourage you to keep writing for this fandom (as it is the only thing I read these days)!

Thanks for this story!!!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 10:48 PM · On: twist

Nice chapter. The real question is: does Luke think ‘Da’

is Justin or is ‘Da’ his Hippo. ( Ok ok, just kidding)

I am happy that Justin is finally getting the help he

needs. Slowly but surely he is getting the support

group he needs – thanks to Brian.

Justin has been acting like a kid; then again, that is just

what he is. I do think that Justin does see it as it is, he

really can’t go home again. There were several hints to

that – when Jennifer only looked at Justin but seems to

ignore Luke. I find that very strange. I haven’t seen in this story where she accepts Luke as someone very

special, her Grandson. As for Craig? Whatever…..

Thanks for this terrific chapter, this story is just getting

more and more interesting and is fun to read.

DavidR

Author's Response:
Lol. It could very well be the hippo that Luke was referring to! Wouldn't Justin be embarrassed?

Justin is indeed not going home again. He knows it, and he's trying to let his mother know it. Jennifer definitely doesn't seem very attached to Luke, but that may change over time...

Sorry for the delay in responding--real life has been crazy these last few days!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 11:00 AM · On: twist

This is not a review. I just have a question that is driving me crazy.

What is in the right side of the banner of this story? I cannot make it out.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 10:57 AM · On: twist

I forgot about Debbie being a teenage mother. Good move!

Brian is a total dick in this even if he provided a solution to the problem.

The ending is so cute.

Author's Response:
Debbie being a young mother herself is a nice tie-in that I've neve seen anyone else bring up in a kidfic before. Brian, though... Eh. I think he's just being his usual cranky self. You know how he likes to be a huge asshole to compensate for doing something nice.

In answer to your question about the banner, the thing on the right side of the banner is a person in the process of throwing themselves off of a cliff. Sorry that was unclear!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 02:29 AM · On: twist

I love the Luke and Justin scenes! Just adorable. What's up with Craig, he's too quiet. I don't trust that.

This is really just so good and meaty, I'm so glad when I see an update. You really can't update it fast enought for me.

Great chapter!

Author's Response:
Eh... I think Craig is pretty much out of the picture for now. Just like in canon, he's pretty much done associating with Justin, and Justin feels the same way. Justin's relationship with Jennifer is a lot more strained than it was in canon, though, so it should be interesting to see how he handles her.

"Meaty"? Wow. That's the first time anyone's ever used that in a review!

Glad to hear you're still hanging in there. Boy. I can't believe we're halfway through!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 09:26 PM · On: twist

I'm happy you updated this story - I am really enjoying it! You're very good at keeping the characters true to their personalities, and I like the details you put in about Luke and how Justin is taking care of him. I'll be looking forward to more of this story!: Thanks for sharing it with us.:)

Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear it! This story wasn't too difficult to write, but it was this middle section that was the hardest for me. Characterizations were tricky. I had a lot of fun writing the little Justin/Luke moments, though.

I hope that you continue to enjoy the story!

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