Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 11:10 PM · On: stumble

Poor Justin, what a shi**y time in his life.  He's got a tough, tough road ahead of him, especially with his dad causing conflict.  I look forward to this developing and how Brian will fit into the mix.

Very enjoyable!



Author's Response:

Yeah, things aren't looking very bright for Justin at the moment. I can promise you that things aren't going to get any happier in the coming chapters, either. But he's a strong kid, and I think he'll make it through. 

We'll see Brian in the next chapter, and how he's going to fit into this situation, I promise. See you next week!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2011 04:15 PM · On: stumble

Interesting start I hope we will get some back story of Brian and Justin and Justin and Sara and Cal. Is Justin close to Debbie and the gang?? Looking forward to the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Although, er, I don't know what backstory you're looking for. This is a season one AU that essentially split off at 104, so... Justin is as close to Debbie and the gang as he was in 104--which is to say, not very--and he and Brian have only slept together twice (three times, once you count the first chapter). 

I hope you continue to read, though. I promise we'll be seeing more of Brian, Debbie and the gang in coming chapters. 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 11:42 AM · On: stumble

:)



Author's Response:

*g*

Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 10:17 AM · On: stumble

nice chapter, showing the difficulties justin will have to face as a parent, and some funny stuff too.  also, thanks for the explanation about just how the baby came to be, was wondering about that one.  cant wait for the next chapter! and great job on this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I did try to make this a little more realistic than most teenage!father!Justin stories try to do. There will be more bits and pieces of backstory coming in throughout the story, but you've gotten the most of it in this chapter. 

I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying it, still. I promise that in the next chapter, we'll see Brian again!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 11:25 PM · On: stumble

i'm sorry that YOU misunderstood that i thought the last chapter was great, not sara dying.

once justin and luke gets into a rythm and ignore craig, things should be a little easier. it would be nice if he heard from cal as turning sara's car over to him and maybe sending money for her burial. even allowing him to live in cal's house. something.



Author's Response:

Lol. I didn't seriously think that was what you meant, don't worry. Only joking, I was. 

Mm... I can't promise that things get easier from here on out--if anything, they get more strained--but we do fall into a rhythm for a while. As for Cal, well, we'll see if he turns up again. I promise I haven't just let him drop completely off the map, how's that? 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing--again--and I can't wait to hear your thoughts on next week's chapter!

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