Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For THE GREAT DIVIDE
Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 41

Say NO!!!! No, no, no Justin say no. Lindsey is crazy and scheming and JUST SAY NO!!!!!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 41

Wow, Lindsay is good. She can't get anywhere with Brian so it's time to try Justin. Still love the story. Good work.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 41

The answer to Lind's question is a nooooooooo!  Haha!  I feel like i'm reading this for the first time, it's so good.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 38

Wow. Just wow. Was not expecting that at all. Though it is nice that Brian is so sweet now and all. Feel bad for Justin though, he's so scared he's gonna mess up again. Oh well, wish them both luck.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 37

Gotta love psychologists, right? They are always so....unhelpfully helpful. Well, hopefully Brian knows what to do now.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 36

Wow! Linds has snapped!! She is going off the deep end it seems. Can't wait to see how Brian handles this.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 01:19 AM · On: Prologue

Wow, Lindsey it totally losing it.  Maybe its time for Mel and Brian to take Gus for awhile. Lindsey clearly has issues to work out. Look forward to more. Thankd for the quick updates.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 33

Loved the boys scene together.  It's so awesome to read about them behind doors, especially when they are being vulnerable and loving.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 31

Wonderfully romantic chapter.  Glad that they had this "down" time.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2011 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 29

i'm rereading this and this is one of the funniest chapters ever. brian is no better than him when it comes to making do with what you got to get what you want.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately it's all based on personal experience ... lol!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 29

I am most definitely still loving this!  Love these scenes between the B/J, and the hotter the better.

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 29

That's just... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. !!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 27

I love it when Mel and Brian get together and take Lindsey on.  I hated Mel on the show but Lindsey was worse with her sicky sweetness.  

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 27

love it - everything I've always wanted someone to say to Lindsey - all here in one read! while some of it is driven only by this particular story - there is so much that hits the mark with her actions on the show - I could not be more thrilled that Brian finally sees her for who she is!

can't wait to see what comes next - it's great seeing Brian and Mel working together for Gus' best interest!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 26

So enjoyable, waiting for the next update.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 24

I think I am gonna need a dictionary too...Boot is complicated, but cool. Great new chappy.

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 24

i'm back to commenting :) i love boot very much! he's a great friend for justin! <3

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love Boot! Great character! And he really likes Justin!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 23

Look forward to Lindsey, Brian and Mel having a chat. I like that you wrote Mel in a sympahetic way, kind of getting tired of all of the 'EVIL' Mel stories.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lindsay is a f****** manipulative, crazy bitch like she didn't know that Brian would put them up somewhere and the mansion is her dream afterall. I hope she gets exactly what she deserves in the end.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

This fic fantastic, even better the second time around.  I'm savoring each moment.

Best line - He's too ugly to be gay.  Yeah, I guess that's why Gene Hackford has never been thought to be gay.  HaHaHa!

 



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much for still leaving comments!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

I love your story Nightvision. I like the plot, and the way you write, and I especially like your frequent updates  :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 21

very good! This chapter answers questions, brings renewal for our boys - and it's hot to boot! - and now with Brian's new found open heart, brings us toward some really interesting possibilities - I love that Brian is hearing Justin - can't wait to see what comes next

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 20

very well written chapter - I really enjoyed every moment of it - and the dialog and resolutions make ssense in keeping with the characters - not, I can't wait for Justin to be feeling better, because these two are gonna' be hot!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Waiting for more!

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 03:15 PM · On: Prologue

So brilliant, so thrilling !! Can't wait to read the rest of it !!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 18

OMG Brian is so sweet!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

Sorry for not reviewing sooner.  I am enjoying this story with every word.  YOu have a nice style of story telling and the story is getting better with every chapter.  This chapter was really good- I've got a thing for shower action.  I can't wait to read the rest of this fantastic story.

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 16

I Knew Justin would agree with Brian! I´m counting with more updates!!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wonderful re-reading this.  This is one of my favorites.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying reading this again!  I read it awhile back at fanfiction.net and just loved it.  Off to read!

All the best.

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

i'm tearing near the end.. :')

it's getting intense.. hope justin agree back to pitts. thanks for the super fast update!

Reviewer: Erica (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 15

I start reading today and I´m very impressed, almost like a professional. Great plot, great suspense and I´m waiting for more!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 15

Even though Justin is hurt in this story, like Brian, I am just so relieved that nothing is life threatening. I am also thrilled that my boys are together, an Brian is realizing what he's done. Now, to see how Justin will react. With his history of cliff pushing with Brian, he probably won't have any trouble believing that's what happened, but forgiving might be a bit harder this time...we'll see.

I really loved this chapter, I could actually feel Brian's emotions - excellent!

loving life,

Charle

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

I´m really loving it. I hope it doesn´t end too soon. How many chapters have?



Author's Response:

An awful lot!  You'll probably be fed up with it by the time it's finished ... although I hope you're not!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

i believe i just leave a comment on the last chap. you're super fast!! wow now brian know about justin. i hope everything gonna be alright :)

Author's Response:

Ah no, I'm cheating!  The whole thing is already written ... I just love teasing with chapters!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 14

This suspense is killing me! Can´t wait for more!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 13

uh-oh - that's not good - except maybe it will serve as the catalyst for Brian to come to the rescue - sure hope Justin is not hurt too badly - but just enough maybe to stop his free fall!

very interesting story - anxious for more

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

oh my God! you updated again! i love you!
oh my.. Justin was hit by a car! please update soon again! thank you for the update btw :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

wow I have just reaqd all the chapters to date in one go and I am in love with this fic. But sod it a dam cliff hanger and obviously Justin is going to hospital without Brian.

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loooving this fic! I´m always looking for your updates!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 12

wow Boot is a really good man! hope he can be a couple with daphne :) 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

I really like Boot. It's often hard to accept a new character in such an established circle of friends - but once in a while a new friend really clicks with me, and this is one of those times. Plus, I have a feeling that this guy is going to help to bring Justin's unfortunate coke behavior to am much needed close! And I love the tie-in to Daphne. Well done!

Reviewer: Sachan (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great story! Great suspense! When Brian will find Justin?

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 12

Waiting for more chapters! This story is addictive too! Poor Justin, will Brian save Justin?

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

Each chapter make me want read more and more! I´m loving this story. I hope Brian finally realizes what he lost!!

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

i love this fic!! it brought tears to my eyes whenever justin with brian.. and finally brian came to his sense and throw that Dan! i hope everthing gonna be alright. please continue this! i love it so much!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, that´s creepy , Brian became straight! No, please! I want Brian and Justin together!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

I´m Loving the story, but Linds is a real bitch!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 9

I am loving this story - that is to say...I hate when our boys are apart, and I really hate when Lindsey manipulates Brian - it really makes me bristle - but your writing is enthralling, and always leaves me wanting more. I also love that it is updated so regularly - I read so very many stories at one time that it is difficult to keep the storyline in mind for stories that are updated infrequently.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

loving life,

Charle

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 04:06 AM · On: Prologue

I just wanted to say how much I have enjoyed this story. It's a classic. I'm so happy you moved it here because there were things I had wanted to comment on that I forgot to do on ff.net.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

i can not wait to read more of this story please update soon

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

please update this story i like to read more

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 04:23 AM · On: Prologue

Hi lady. First, I would like to say I am really enjoying your story. I went over to fanfiction,net and read some of it . It is really good. I have one problem.I  am a black woman. We don,t say colored anymore, we say black or african american. It is very irritating to be called colored. I don,t mean any harm, because I really like your story.



Author's Response:

Oops, that's the problem with writing stories about a different culture!  Point taken, and please forgive an ignorant English person! 

Reviewer: masterglory (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Prologue

Ohmygod...I've just finished to read this wonderful story on fanfiction.net, and it seems I can't, try as I might, to read it again and again and again...IT'S WONDERFUL!!!!!!!

I'd loved to leave you reviews but sincerely I don't like that site a lot...here it's better, brava!!!

P.s. are you going to post here even that amazing masterpiece that is "bird on a wire"????? I hope so....you're one of my fav authors of every time, thank you for your delicious insightful intelligent never-boring fanfiction!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, now I've worked out how to do it, I'll post everything here too.  I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Prologue

Hey!  So glad you decided to also post it here.  I will enjoy reading it again!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Prologue

wow glad you came over to mw.  the readers here will love this story as much as i did.  i read it on lj a while ago.  so welcome to mw.  we are the best readers!!!.

Reviewer: kellydeer (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Prologue

Hi!  I read this story over at fanfiction.net and I have to say...it is one of my all time favorites!!! And I absolutely adore the fact that it is loooooonnnnng!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 04:37 AM · On: Prologue

Since your story is not completed I edited it for you to undo the completed check.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This is the first time I've posted on this site, and I'm still getting th hang of it. 

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 03:28 AM · On: Prologue

great start - but you have marked this story complete - I hope there is more to it.



Author's Response:

Oh yes ... it's rather long!  I'll update every evening.

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