Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2021 02:37 PM · On: EPILOGUE

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2021 02:37 PM · On: EPILOGUE

did read it again

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2020 02:13 PM · On: EPILOGUE

I found this one from someone who mentioned it on Facebook, and just had to read it!!  I loved it and thought it was a great story!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2020 08:50 PM · On: EPILOGUE

great story. love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2020 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 52

what is wrong with Bian?  I would left Lindsey to burn

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2019 04:21 PM · On: EPILOGUE

Love it, thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2019 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 55

Gus is not even worth the trouble, spoided

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2019 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 43

what a bitch, kill her now

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2019 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Gus is a spoiled brat

Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2019 05:26 PM · On: EPILOGUE

Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it. I do wonder what happened with Lindsy. But the ending made up for any questions.  I’m still smiling. 💕

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 09:38 PM · On: EPILOGUE


Time and time again, for years now, I keep coming back to this story.

I can't find the words to describe all the feelings that come and go while reading.

You give the reader layer upon layer of feelings, drama, suspense and love.

The only thing I can say is: This story is, imo,  a masterpiece in the world of QaF fanfiction.

Love, love, love it.



Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2017 07:59 PM · On: EPILOGUE

That was a GREAT story... I was appauled by Lindsay's actions, but it was great to see the rest of the family rally. and I really enjoy when Mel and Brian get along.  I think Boot was one of my faves, such a great original character!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2017 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 41

Say NO Justin... definitely say NO... this is a BAD IDEA!!!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 08:18 PM · On: EPILOGUE

loved your story and sad to see it end. thank you for posting.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2016 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 23

Glad Brian got to hear Mel's side of the story. Lindsay's got some explaining to do. Oh! And the way Boot jacked Brian up and called him out of his name: Byron, Brendon, Bernie... I like Boot. Boot can stay😂

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2016 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 15

I am still loving this story. But if Brian takes Justin back home to Britain, Lindsay is going to freak. After all, she has Brian in the palm of her hand. Even Michael sees it. 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2016 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

I have enjoyed the. First chapters . I try to understand that Brian  thought he was doing the right thing for Justin by pushing him to realize his potential. But did he have to shove him off Mt. Kinney again to make his point? 

Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2016 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 60

loved it

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2015 02:46 PM · On: EPILOGUE

Wonderful! Such a sexy, romantic, fun story (even with the angst caused br a deranged Lindsey). Thank you!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2015 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 38

<3 Wonderful way of looking at/defining survival in B&J's relationship!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 29

ROTFLMAO. Hilarious chapter. This story is fantastic--so glad I discovered it.

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 20

I started reading at 6am today and haven't been able to stop. I meant to comment earlier though.

I don't know why, after everything that Brian had done, my heart sunk when I found out about Dan. He had hooked up with him only a month after Justin left. I don't know why that bothered me more than anything else. Oh…and Lindsay…setting up house at Britin. UGH.

That's all for now. :)

Reviewer: renad (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2014 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

I can't thank u enough u are amazing 

I have  been reading non stop and that's weird for me coz I'm not a reader but thank you so much for this beautifully written fan fic

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2014 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 27

OMG, that was so awesome!

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2014 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 20

So sweet. So them.

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 04:53 AM · On: EPILOGUE

Just spent the last few days giving this story a read, and I loved it! I really liked the character of Boot... normally I don't like original characters that have as much involvement as Boot did in this story, but I thought he was a wonderful addition. Justin and Brian were lucky to have him as a friend during their difficult times.

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:42 AM · On: EPILOGUE

Wonderful story.  You didn't rush to finish it....just let it play out so we could all savour every chapter. I never want hem to end.  Keep on writing!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:11 AM · On: Prologue

I just finished your story - was reading it all weekend. It´s great! I love Boot character knocking some sense into Justin and Brian. I would also love to see Justin with black hair. Got any pic? I´ve read all of your fics and you´re very good story teller. Hope there´s going to be some more fic in the future.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 29

I am having a good laugh here.You are very talented.Story is funny,sad,happy and some of it makes my heart hurt!!!So very well done.

Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 45

Um...  wonder what the hell Lindsay is thnking?  Don't trust her.  loving this

Reviewer: gloria (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 29

I was't sure I liked where this story was heading in the beginning.  I'm loving it know


Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 10:37 AM · On: EPILOGUE

Thanks for the great journey. I fully enjoyed reading this story. So glad it was finished and that Brian and Justin are happy and doing well. I loved it!!!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2011 01:30 AM · On: EPILOGUE

i started reading this story and found it very familiar.  i guess i read it on another site.  it is so good i read it again.  so glad you posted it here.  there are a lot of writers from other sites here now as well.55734

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 07:38 PM · On: EPILOGUE

Perfect epilogue to a most enjoyable story!  I love hearing how they gently grow old together.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Prologue

Great story! I loved it. Thank U!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 60

I just found another outstanding Best Fan Fiction Classic for Whispers. Outstanding writing here.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 18

"And oh Christ, I’d forgotten.  I’d been so engrossed with looking after Justin’s physical needs that I’d entirely missed the one that’s causing him most pain."

I still love this story!!!

Readiing for the third time.

Reviewer: lindsay22la (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 10:27 AM · On: EPILOGUE

I just finished reading this story at ff.net.  I left feedback there, but I noticed that you had posted here as well, so I just had to 'drop by' to tell you again how wonderful your story is and say Thank You!

Author's Response:

You're very welcome!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2011 11:22 PM · On: EPILOGUE

wonderful story

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 29

I've been reading this since yesterday and I'm really liking it a lot!  I waited until you were finished to start because I've been left hanging with WIP's that haven't been finished lately so I'm trying not to read incomplete stories.  This one is great, though!  I love anti-Lindsay stories!  I always thought she was a manipulative bitch in the show!  I'm about to start Chapter 30 so I'm almost 1/2 way through but I can't comment often because I usually read on my iPad and it won't let me use the comment function on this website for some reason. (I do have one question, though ... Why the NC-18 rating?  Through 29 chapters I haven't seen anything that would require anything more than PG-13 or maybe mild-R.)   Hugs, Cindy  

Author's Response:

Yeah, I.m never to sure about ratings ... it says NC-18 if exolicit sex scenes are included, so I figure it's better to be safe than sorry.  But I agree, I don't think there's anything too outrageous, either!

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 04:27 AM · On: EPILOGUE

I'd like to thank you for this wonderful story and include my apologies for not commenting earlier. I cried in the first chapters... I must admit. I really enjoyed reading this story, It is amazingly well written and I also love when new characters are included in stories. Boot was a great new addition to the world of Brian and Justin. I don't seem to be able to write anything useful just now, I think I might have read the story to fast. I only realized it was out when all the chapters were online and I could not tear my self from the story. Amazing work! I think I must re-read some of the first chapters now...

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:00 AM · On: Prologue

Loved this story!  I waited until it was complete to read it and, wow, it was definitely worth the wait.  So sad you didn't work for CowLip -- they could have really used a high-calibre storyteller who made actual sense from one episode to the next. ;-)

This one will definitely be saved in my 'comfort food' folder, which holds stories that I go back to over and over again.

Thanks for sharing this with all of us.  Now, I'm off to see what else you've completed that I may have missed...

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 11:45 AM · On: EPILOGUE

well worth the time to read and the blue ribbon award - I don't give blue ribbons lightly

Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I'm gald you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow poor Justin! I have the feeling the he will not give uo so easily.....andI what to know what plan B is.....

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 11:58 PM · On: EPILOGUE

I loved re-reading this, sweetie.  And thanks for posting it over here, too.  I can enlarge the print for my tired, old eyes!  :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 11:37 PM · On: EPILOGUE

Great chepters! it's already over! what a pity

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 12:42 AM · On: EPILOGUE

That was soooo brilliant !!

But what about the other characters ? Please, do not leave us in the dark as far as they are concerned...

Author's Response:

I expect I'll find Boot cropping up again somewhere in the future!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 12:38 AM · On: EPILOGUE

What a wonderful ending to a charming story.  I really enjoyed it!  I'm sending it to my Kindle to read again.

You might want to change the status of the story to completed, though.

Keep up the excellent writing!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 59

What's tonight?  What's tonight, I can't remember!!!!???!!! Update soon, please!!!!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 59

second read as good as the first. that last line is so special. great job.

Author's Response:

Ah it's nice to have old friends still reading!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 57

Yet another wonderful chapter! Boot is a great character, you've given him a great deal of depth.  Can't wait for the party.

Reviewer: epfan (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2011 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 56

This story is absolutly fabulous!

Great b/j so close to canon and so evolving

Totaly love it

Please carry on



Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 56

This 'happy together' moment is doubly sweet after what the boys have been through.  This has been such a pleasure to re-read.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 55

I love Boot.  Its great that you have given us a peek into what makes him the man he is. Brian did a great thing with Gus, he handled it so well and I like that Mel is starting to praise him for being a great father.  Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 55

I haven't commented on this story before, because at the end of each chapter, rather than think about commenting, I find myself thinking "I can't wait for the next chapter".  The story and the characterisations are incredibly good, if a tad harsh on poor Lindsay.  I can't say I am totally enjoying the story, but it is very gripping, and makes me long for the next bit.  Keep up the good work. 

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 53

Dramatic much??/ Gees can't Justin actually talk to Brian instead of stomping off in a snit. I get that he's stressed and angry, but leaving the hospital w/o telling anyone where he was going is just childish. I hope Brian finds him and they have it out. And that Brian sues for his parental rights back from Lindsey, she is nuts and a danger to Gus. Great job writing Mel as sympathetic without making her pathetic.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2011 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 52

OH, Poor Justin!!! It's so sad that all that is actually true. Bad Bad Brian. He should have known better. I hope things do work out well.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 51

Seriously, Brian hesitated!?! He is seriously messed up when it comes to Lindsay. Hopefully he gets over that. Otherwise, they are all screwed.

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 51

OMG!! I just got caught up with your chapters.... .and Lindsay is a total looneytoons!! Made me think of the way she looked and acted in season five, LOL, there was just something so evil and off looking about her that season.  And WTH is wrong with Brian??? How could he possibly want to protect HER?? What if she had killed Justin, would he not have told the police?? And after what she did to Gus.... I mean WTF??!! I hope the smoke is making him a tad confused, only reasonable excuse.  Very exciting, intense chapters, thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 51

Brian had that tirade from Justin coming, big time.  What exactly is his problem, not wanting to call the police?  He doesn't realize that she is deranged?  I'm glad Boot agreed with Justin.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 50

Wow, crazy Lindsay. I can almost see her face as she is doing this. What was she planning to do? Kill Justin? Kill herself? Wow she is totally nuts. I hope Mel is willing to give Brian his rights back...I would hate to see them have to go to court over custody.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 50

this story just keeps getting better and better - so many facets - I am loving it!


loving life,


Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 50

Thanks for updating so fast!  Now Justin is ok but I'm worried about Brian.  And LIndsay sure is deranged!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh no!  Justin had better be ok.  What a cliffhanger!  What are you trying to do to us???  I really am loving this story.


Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 49

Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story.  Also you've got the cliff hangers spot on.  I was hoping that Brian and Boot to show up o rescue Justin before I leave to go up to see Randy in "Tommy."  I guess I'll have to wait.  We're not taking a laptop.  :-(

I look forward to lots of chapter updates when I get back Sunday night.  LOL!

Author's Response:

Oooh.  I'm so jealous ... blow him a kiss for me!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 49

That is an EVIL cliffhanger. I knew Lindsay was crazy and all, but homicidal is somewhat unexpected. How does she really think she can justify all this to anyone, let alone Brian? Looking forward to seeing how crazy she really is. :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh No!!!!! Where is Justin, where's Lindsay. Is she really that far gone? What is this going to do to Brian?  Update soon please?!

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 47

I am chewing my fingernails off, the suspense is killing me!! What has nutcase Lindsay been up to?? Argggh, great chapter and poor Brian and poor Justin and poor Gus!! You've aptly communicated Brian's feeling of helplessness... Glad Boot is around. Looking forward to more! 

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2011 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 47

What a place to end it!!!!!! that is just evil of you :( But I will survive.  Thanks for the frequent updates. I hope Justin isn't in trouble and that if Lindsay is up to something he can hold her off until Brian and Boot get there.   I'm always a sucker for crazy Lindsay/nice Mel stories.  Especially when they result in Brian getting Gus. 

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 46

Grrr!   I know what's coming and it pisses me off!  This fic is just so enjoyable.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 46

Need more!!!!!! Is Lindsey going to die? Is she having an affair and ignoring the phone? I hope Gus is ok and the Justin and Brian don't get snowed in seperately.

Reviewer: Valarie Winters (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 46

OMG.  Don't leave me hanging!  Either Lindsay has poisoned Gus as a distraction to keep Brian away from Britin while Justin is all alone and she going to try to kill him (I hope Boot is around) or she's killed herself and poisoned Gus so Brian and Justin won't get to raise him.  Please update soon (like tonight).  Great story! 

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 45

WoW!! I just read this story in 2 days... what a tale you weave, worthy of DyNasty(which is a compliment, BTW). Very in depth descriptions of the characters and unique storyline, you've created a very interesting universe. You're good at the psychological complexity that is Brian/Justin.

 I admit I'm a (not so) closet hater of Lindsay, I thought she was a very manipulative bitch by season 5 and yes I do believe very in love with Brian all series long. The scene before the wedding to Mel when she looks at herself side by side in the mirror with Brian(so longingly) still gives me the shudders. (Of course Brian did lead her on a bit, as he did with Mikey)......So therefore, this last statement of hers in this chapter is SO OMINOUS, you have got me worried sick!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 45

Hisssssss.  Linds is sneaky like a snake in the grass.  I love the pace and build of the fic.  The suspense is thick enough to cut with a knife.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 44

Crazy Lindsey...she's probably just sitting in the studio think about how it all should have been her's.  Can she just have nervous breakdown and send Gus to live with Mel or Brian for awhile. I would love for her to lose custody of Gus because she is nuts.  Loving Brian and Justin.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 19

“No, Brian.  You wanted me to have your chance.  You were the one who wanted New York; you’re the one who wants money and influence and power.  That’s always been the problem; everyone always knew what was best for me, what would make me happy.  Never mind that those ambitions were only their own fucked-up hopes, not mine!  Dad wanted me to go to Dartmouth and be a businessman like him.  Mom used to want me to find a nice WASP boyfriend and settle down in a nice conventional relationship because that was how she’d been brought up.  Michael wanted me to go to Hollywood and make his comic into a movie.  Lindsay expected me to leap at the chance to go to New York and become the world-famous artist she never had the talent to be.  But nobody ever asked me what I wanted!”

I always thought this was so powerful and insightful.

Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 43

In case it has not been mentioned Lindsey is insane, she should not be raising Gus and Justin, Ben and Michael should say something to Mel and Brian. I so don't like Lindsey in this story...

Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 41

Say NO!!!! No, no, no Justin say no. Lindsey is crazy and scheming and JUST SAY NO!!!!!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 41

Wow, Lindsay is good. She can't get anywhere with Brian so it's time to try Justin. Still love the story. Good work.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 41

The answer to Lind's question is a nooooooooo!  Haha!  I feel like i'm reading this for the first time, it's so good.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 38

Wow. Just wow. Was not expecting that at all. Though it is nice that Brian is so sweet now and all. Feel bad for Justin though, he's so scared he's gonna mess up again. Oh well, wish them both luck.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 37

Gotta love psychologists, right? They are always so....unhelpfully helpful. Well, hopefully Brian knows what to do now.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 36

Wow! Linds has snapped!! She is going off the deep end it seems. Can't wait to see how Brian handles this.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 01:19 AM · On: Prologue

Wow, Lindsey it totally losing it.  Maybe its time for Mel and Brian to take Gus for awhile. Lindsey clearly has issues to work out. Look forward to more. Thankd for the quick updates.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 33

Loved the boys scene together.  It's so awesome to read about them behind doors, especially when they are being vulnerable and loving.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 31

Wonderfully romantic chapter.  Glad that they had this "down" time.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2011 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 29

i'm rereading this and this is one of the funniest chapters ever. brian is no better than him when it comes to making do with what you got to get what you want.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately it's all based on personal experience ... lol!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 29

I am most definitely still loving this!  Love these scenes between the B/J, and the hotter the better.

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 29

That's just... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. !!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 27

I love it when Mel and Brian get together and take Lindsey on.  I hated Mel on the show but Lindsey was worse with her sicky sweetness.  

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 27

love it - everything I've always wanted someone to say to Lindsey - all here in one read! while some of it is driven only by this particular story - there is so much that hits the mark with her actions on the show - I could not be more thrilled that Brian finally sees her for who she is!

can't wait to see what comes next - it's great seeing Brian and Mel working together for Gus' best interest!

loving life,


Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 26

So enjoyable, waiting for the next update.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 24

I think I am gonna need a dictionary too...Boot is complicated, but cool. Great new chappy.

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 24

i'm back to commenting :) i love boot very much! he's a great friend for justin! <3

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love Boot! Great character! And he really likes Justin!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 23

Look forward to Lindsey, Brian and Mel having a chat. I like that you wrote Mel in a sympahetic way, kind of getting tired of all of the 'EVIL' Mel stories.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lindsay is a f****** manipulative, crazy bitch like she didn't know that Brian would put them up somewhere and the mansion is her dream afterall. I hope she gets exactly what she deserves in the end.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

This fic fantastic, even better the second time around.  I'm savoring each moment.

Best line - He's too ugly to be gay.  Yeah, I guess that's why Gene Hackford has never been thought to be gay.  HaHaHa!


Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much for still leaving comments!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

I love your story Nightvision. I like the plot, and the way you write, and I especially like your frequent updates  :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 21

very good! This chapter answers questions, brings renewal for our boys - and it's hot to boot! - and now with Brian's new found open heart, brings us toward some really interesting possibilities - I love that Brian is hearing Justin - can't wait to see what comes next

loving life,


Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 20

very well written chapter - I really enjoyed every moment of it - and the dialog and resolutions make ssense in keeping with the characters - not, I can't wait for Justin to be feeling better, because these two are gonna' be hot!

loving life,


Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Waiting for more!

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 03:15 PM · On: Prologue

So brilliant, so thrilling !! Can't wait to read the rest of it !!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 18

OMG Brian is so sweet!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

Sorry for not reviewing sooner.  I am enjoying this story with every word.  YOu have a nice style of story telling and the story is getting better with every chapter.  This chapter was really good- I've got a thing for shower action.  I can't wait to read the rest of this fantastic story.

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 16

I Knew Justin would agree with Brian! I´m counting with more updates!!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wonderful re-reading this.  This is one of my favorites.

All the best,


Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying reading this again!  I read it awhile back at fanfiction.net and just loved it.  Off to read!

All the best.

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

i'm tearing near the end.. :')

it's getting intense.. hope justin agree back to pitts. thanks for the super fast update!

Reviewer: Erica (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 15

I start reading today and I´m very impressed, almost like a professional. Great plot, great suspense and I´m waiting for more!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 15

Even though Justin is hurt in this story, like Brian, I am just so relieved that nothing is life threatening. I am also thrilled that my boys are together, an Brian is realizing what he's done. Now, to see how Justin will react. With his history of cliff pushing with Brian, he probably won't have any trouble believing that's what happened, but forgiving might be a bit harder this time...we'll see.

I really loved this chapter, I could actually feel Brian's emotions - excellent!

loving life,


Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

I´m really loving it. I hope it doesn´t end too soon. How many chapters have?

Author's Response:

An awful lot!  You'll probably be fed up with it by the time it's finished ... although I hope you're not!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

i believe i just leave a comment on the last chap. you're super fast!! wow now brian know about justin. i hope everything gonna be alright :)

Author's Response:

Ah no, I'm cheating!  The whole thing is already written ... I just love teasing with chapters!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2011 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 14

This suspense is killing me! Can´t wait for more!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 13

uh-oh - that's not good - except maybe it will serve as the catalyst for Brian to come to the rescue - sure hope Justin is not hurt too badly - but just enough maybe to stop his free fall!

very interesting story - anxious for more

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

oh my God! you updated again! i love you!
oh my.. Justin was hit by a car! please update soon again! thank you for the update btw :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

wow I have just reaqd all the chapters to date in one go and I am in love with this fic. But sod it a dam cliff hanger and obviously Justin is going to hospital without Brian.

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loooving this fic! I´m always looking for your updates!

Reviewer: SunshineGirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 12

wow Boot is a really good man! hope he can be a couple with daphne :) 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

I really like Boot. It's often hard to accept a new character in such an established circle of friends - but once in a while a new friend really clicks with me, and this is one of those times. Plus, I have a feeling that this guy is going to help to bring Justin's unfortunate coke behavior to am much needed close! And I love the tie-in to Daphne. Well done!

Reviewer: Sachan (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great story! Great suspense! When Brian will find Justin?

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 12

Waiting for more chapters! This story is addictive too! Poor Justin, will Brian save Justin?

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

Each chapter make me want read more and more! I´m loving this story. I hope Brian finally realizes what he lost!!

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

i love this fic!! it brought tears to my eyes whenever justin with brian.. and finally brian came to his sense and throw that Dan! i hope everthing gonna be alright. please continue this! i love it so much!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, that´s creepy , Brian became straight! No, please! I want Brian and Justin together!

Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

I´m Loving the story, but Linds is a real bitch!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 9

I am loving this story - that is to say...I hate when our boys are apart, and I really hate when Lindsey manipulates Brian - it really makes me bristle - but your writing is enthralling, and always leaves me wanting more. I also love that it is updated so regularly - I read so very many stories at one time that it is difficult to keep the storyline in mind for stories that are updated infrequently.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

loving life,



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