Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 11:45 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Oooooh! Admissions of caring and love. So nice. Now, just get Kaylee home safely and, voila, we should get renewed couleness! Yea! TAG



Author's Response:

Ha! You wouldn't expect me to make it that easy, would you?  Of course not!  But not to fear - I'll make sure they make up eventually (wink, wink). Thanks so much for reading and for the comments.  Looking forward to your own updates too; just wish I could update as fast!!:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 06:51 AM · On: For Our Daughter

I REALIZE I HAVE BEEN VERY REMISS IN REVIEWING.  IT SEEMS MY LIFE IS GOING 110 MILES AN HOUR.  I REALLY DON'T HAVE A LOT OF DOWN TIME.  I GUESS THAT'S GOOD, BUT I REALLY NEED A VACATION. HA, FAT CHANCE AT THIS TIME.  THIS PLACE IS A ZOO. SO DAMN BUSY.  THERE ARE FIVE US ON CALL OR HERE CONTINUALLY.  THREE HAVE THE FLU BUG, SO THAT LEAVES TWO OF US-NOT GOOD.  OH WELL, ENOUGH OF THAT.  THIS STORY IS QUITE ALARMING AS TO THE HOSPITAL STAND ON PARENTAL RIGHTS.  I GUESS SOME ARE THAT RIGID.  I HAVEN'T COME ACROSS THAT IN MY FIFTEEN YEARS, BUT GUESS IT MIGHT HAPPEN SADLY IN SOME AREAS. I THOUGHT IT MIGHT BE A CONCUSSION BE IT SLIGHT OR MORE AGGRESSIVE.  IT'S BETTER TO BE SLIGHT AS OUTCOMES ARE MORE FAVORABLE.  AS SHE HEALS MAYBE THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL ALSO.  THEY REALLY NEED TO SIT DOWN CALMLY AND TALK IT ALL OUT AND THEN SEE WHAT THEIR OUTCOME WILL BE.  IN OTHER WORDS DO MORE GROWING UP.  FORGIVE AND TRY TO FORGET AND GET THEIR FAMILY BACK TOGETHER FOR THEIR SAKES AND THEIR CHILDREN. ENOUGH DIATRIBE-HAVE TO GET MY PAPERWORK DONE-GET A NAP AND BACK TO O.R. HAVE A GOOD LABOR DAY.



Author's Response:

HI, Sweetheart; you really sound harried and hurried right now!  I'm sorry things are so hectic for you at the moment, and having so many doctors out certainly can't help.  I do hope that things slow down for you soon and you are able somehow to get some rest and relaxation, athough it doesn't sound too likely for a while.  I wish there was something I could do for you to lighten the load.  I will certainly be thinking about you and hoping that things change for the better soon.

As far as the story goes, you know I always get nervous when I'm dealing with medical issues, not being well-versed in that.  But I hope what I wrote wasn't way off the mark.  I'm very touched that you took time out of your extremely busy schedule to read my latest chapter; you are all so special to me.  Please keep in touch as time permits and know that I will be thinking of all of you.  I'm sending you a big hug and a 'virtual,' long soak in a hot tub somewhere.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2012 09:06 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Hey there!  Thiswas quite the chapter.  I really don't understand the protocol in that hospital.  Usually, here at least, whoever brings a child to The E.D. can stay with them during treatment.  I t does more harm than good to leave a young child alone and defenseless during treatment. There is abandonment, fear and pain issues that the child has to deal wiith especially when Brian tried to tell them he was the father-proof or no proof.  I would have thought they could see how much he cared for her.  I don't know-it just seemed a littlke unnecessary.  Sorry to be on a soap box-guess it's different being i work in a hospital and haven't encountered this as of yet.  Things are good with me-am feeling better and coping better in this ole world.  I am house sitting for Nonie as she has a family crisis.  It's a cool house.  I stayed here for a few weeks when i first came out here.  I think t will give Lindc a rest from me HA!  Hopefully, while here I can look around for a place as i think i'll be ok now by myself.  This is the big test, according to the peeps.  I know they care about me-butttt!  The DEVIL is doing well.  He has quite a few more miles on him due to the trip here, but my friend was really helpful in my time of need.  Off to work now.  I really like my job here so that has also been beneficial to my recovery.  luv 2 u



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm so happy to hear from you, and to know that things are going better for you now.:)  And I'm delighted to hear that the job is working out.  Lindc said your hours are pretty intense - 36 on, 36 off I believe (?).  But it's great that you and "the Devil" have been reunited now (why does that sound so ominous when I put it that way?  LOL!).  Very best of luck with hunting for your new digs.  Just make sure once you find a place that you don't sit there all alone and brood (you don't do that, do you?). :) 

And don't apologize about the rant with the story - I probably had to take a little literary license in this chapter so I could set up the boys being reunited on the same front in concern over their daughter.  As you and another reader pointed out, in "RL" probably the hospital likely wouldn't even challenge Brian's contention that he was Kaylee's rightful father, although if he had to prove medical insurance coverage perhaps it might have come out that way.

So great to hear that things are looking up for you!  You are such a special guy - I know things will continue to get better and better.:)  Please keep in touch and take care of yourself.  Love & hugs back to you, too.:)  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:31 PM · On: For Our Daughter

"No, I understand exactly what you THINK you saw happened!" Gus retorted stiffly, his face contorted in righteous anger in defense of his father.  "Did you even give him a chance to explain, Justin?  Or did you have so little faith in him that you just made a hasty judgment and wouldn't allow him to even try?"

 "When you AND Kaylee left and I never saw either one of you again, the older I got, the more I resented it.  I felt like she was more important to you than either Katie or I was, and that hurt.  A lot."

The converstation between Justin and Gus did not disappoint. Gus was clearly hurt by what he perceived to be abandonment by Justin. I was furious that Brian had let Gus believe it was all Justin's fault.

"He still loves you, too, you know," Gus replied as he looked back over at Justin.  He sighed.  "Can't you two work this out somehow, Justin?  Hasn't it been long enough?  Has it been worth all this hurt for you and Dad?  For me?  For Kaylee and Katie?  What is it going to take to get you back together?  Isn't that what all of us want?  What you want?  Be honest with me."

Out of the mouth of babes... It seems so strue that everyone suffered for the breakup, but I was satisfied to see that Justin was going to look at things logically and decide to make a go at reconciliation or a clean break from Brian. His love for Brian was never in question, it was whether or not he could live with Brian. And I get so tired of Ethan being thrown in Justin's face all the time as if that should give Brian a free-for-all to do what ever wants to and then be forgiven.

There's nothing to forgive, Katie."  He lifted his gaze to stare into Brian's eyes as they locked onto his...

I loved the way you had things come to head with Jusitn realizing that someone could really be sincere with guilt and that forgiveness was needed for both of them to heal. But I still think Brian was still very wrong in what he did and he needs to explain to Justin what was going on in his head at the time of his mistake. He needs to aplologize for misleading Gus too.

Now as for that nurse... Being busy is no excuse for rudness. I have encountered nurses like her and I wished I had been as vocal as Justin. It's a pet peeve of mine to for nurses or any employee to take out their frustrations on patients or customers.

Anyway, excellent chapter!

Okay... I'm going to sleep now.

 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  I always love to read your thoughtful comments; thank you for the time you always put into constructing them and thank you for all the support you give me.  I've delighted that you enjoyed this chapter.  I do think the guys are slowly heading toward a reconciliation, but once Kaylee is back at Britin they will have a lot of discussing to do.  At least now I think both are ready to do that instead of allowing their hurt to take priority over rationality.  Of course where the heart is concerned, it doesn't always follow logic, does it?:)

 

Thank you again for the the feedback; I will get this updated again just as soon as possible.  For now, I must trot back over to the Bluegrass of Kentucky!  Hope you have a great weekend!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:20 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Very touching chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your kind words, my friend; I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story.  I will be getting this updated again very soon.  Thanks again!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 08:01 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Wonderful chapter as always. thanks Kim.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you, Marny - I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.  I hope you have a great weekend, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 12:57 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Is it possible, could a miracle be taking place, is Justin finally pulling his head our of his ass and going to act like a sane person? I won't be really sure till I know the horses are safe. I know Justin was hurt by what Brian did but look at all the pain Justin caused to so many people, he did much more damage by his actions. He is the real monster in all this. So I guess if a horse has to be slaughter what's one more loss right, I mean Justin is the blond Angel who can charm the pants off anyone. I think Brian should try for complete custody of both girls and he can lead a nice life with out Justin. However I know you seem to like Justin so I'm going to try and come to terms with letting the idea start to form of a possible reunion. Any chance Justin might fall down the elevator shaft and suffer a fatal landing? I was also worried by the way Justin was getting so turned on by Gus, that just isn't right. There he is rushing to the death bed of his dearly beloved daughter and he's practically drooling over his stepson just because he looks like the man he loves but refuses to love. SICK SICK SICK. One more reason to have him castrated or put down like a rabid dog.
I hope you know how much I love your stories and I know you can put up with my outrageous comments. I am enjoying every chapter of this story. I keep trying to picture Halley Mills running around Britin causing Brian major headaches.
Lori

Author's Response:

My, my, my, you DO have a fertile imagination - LOL!  I really need to ask Bob to come up with a special award for you for the most intriguing and unique reviewer on this site!  I'm sure all the other writers would heartily agree with me.  Poor Justin - remind me not to put the two of you alone together in a room sometime, much less the horses!  Mercy!  Okay... I know it was all tongue and cheek, you're not fooling me (I think....!). 

Yes, you may have to get used to the idea of the boys (gasp!) reconciling at some point.  How else could I throw in some steamy sex scene without doing that?  I do promise not to have anything of the kind involving Justin and Gus, though  (I mean, really???).  Anyway, Lori, as always I look forward to your comments - truly!  Ha!  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 12:03 PM · On: For Our Daughter

A child had no right to interrogate an adult about their life but I can see here Gus is being used as a catalyst to move the story along so I’m on board here; and I much prefer an older Gus to a cute one. I am still having trouble understanding why everyone thinks time should be a reason for forgiveness when rarely does any married or committed couple’s relationship survive a betrayal of this kind. Brian really needs to have a good excuse and not the lame ass one Michael and he came up with. Justin again gets to take the blame when Mr Kinney should man up as it should lay clearly on his shoulders. Great chapter, any writing that invokes emotion in the reader like this does is testimony to your ability. Thank you.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee - thank you for reading and for the comments.  Obviously there will have to be quite an in-depth discussion between the two men before they can move toward resolution; once they are back at Britin I see that occurring.  I think Brian just asking Justin to forgive him may go a long way towards heading in the right direction.  I don't recall him simply asking for that yet.  As far as the betrayal goes, yes, I do see it as one, but we also have to remember where Brian had come from and what his normal M.O. was.  He never was one before to be monogamous with Justin, at least not until they decided to commit fully to each other after the girls were born.  The fact that he did I think is definitely what hurt Justin the most here, but I do see some slight give and take happening now. 

I'll be updating this again soon. Thank you again for the thoughtful comments; I appreciate that very much.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 11:30 AM · On: For Our Daughter

I don't quite understand how the hospital knows that Brian is not Kaylee's father or at least have the parental rights(is it how it called?) towards her. Is there any ID or record which can search from the computer immediately that shows Brian has no right? Coz if a minor rushes to ER with a grown-up, we just assume his or her is the kid's parent, since they come in together anyway. 

My mom is a nurse in private hospital, she always tells me stories of how some bad nurses act like, so yeah, the one dealing with our boys actually not so bad at all haha



Author's Response:

Hi, June!  First of all, thanks for reading and for your comments.  I do not profess to be an expert on hospital protocol by any means, so I'm going to have to ask for some literary license here I suppose.  It dawned on me also that the hospital probably wouldn't be so analytical about parental rights in an emergency situation, but obviously it did provide some little drama regarding the boys' custody arrangement, so I ran with it.  Hopefully you can forgive me the faux pas and overlook it for me.:) 

 

I personally encountered some nurses similar to this one in my hospital stay, but I am glad to say that most of them were both professional and caring.  Thanks again for the comments; hope you will continue to enjoy the story.  I'll be updating it again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:25 AM · On: For Our Daughter

Oh so good.  Now we are getting somewhere.  Talking, revealing old secrets and the talking is awesome.  Maybe two people are really growing up.  More good talk is necessary as they don't do that enough.  I was right-slight concussion.  Years of experience, I guess.  Some bad news here.  Nonie's mother is quite ill.  She lives in Italy.  Nonie is leaving this weekend for Italy.  Lee is going to house sit while she is gone.  Why do we peepshave all the shitty luck.  Seems we can't be happy for too long before something goes hell west and crooked.  Sorry-just ranting and rambling again.  I'm not too sure how long she will be gone.  She is really upset.  The hospital put her on family leave for three months.  After that we'll see depending how things develop over there.  We all loved this chapter so much.  Lee is wondering if his story is up next.  He says  hi and will review when he is rested. He has been working 36 on 36 off, so he pretty pooped.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm SO sorry to hear about Nonie's mother.  Please tell her I am praying for her mother and will keep her and her family in my thoughts.  I know how close I am to my mom, so I can imagine what she must be going through; to be so far away, too, would make it even worse.  It does seem like your tight little band of friends has seen more than their share of heartache this past year, but I think you are all so fortunate to have each other.  You take care of each other and really love one another; just think how terrible it would be if you DIDN'T have each other!  It sounds like the hospital is taking advantage of Lee's skills and experience, but I'm sorry to hear about his rough schedule. Tell him I think "Stallion" is actually up next and then "Heart's Desire." I will have to go back and check, but I think that's correct. 

Started back on teaching on 8/22 - have 18 students, but not too bad so far.  It will keep me busier, though, but at least I have a 3-day weekend, so that should help keep me writing.  Please tell everyone I said hello and I'll be thinking of all of you. Don't know what I would do without all of your constant encouragement and support, along with all of my other constant reviewers.  I appreciate that so much (of course I consider all of you more than just 'readers,' though; if they DO have the LA con for QAF next June, I'd love to meet all of you!).  Take care and don't all work too hard!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:24 AM · On: For Our Daughter

What a satisfying chapter! Yay Gus - he didn't mince words with Justin. I'm starting to like Justin again!

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend; glad to hear it!  I think our stubborn blond is starting to come around now.:)  Once Kaylee is back home, I see a long overdo talk occurring and maybe some additional prodding from a couple of little girls and perhaps their big brother.:)  Poor men won't know what hit them - ha!  We're definitely heading in the right direction now, but there's a ways to go yet in the story; I haven't even gotten to the 'good' part yet (I'm sure I don't have to spell that out - LOL!). Thanks so much for reading so many of my stories and for your ongoing support; I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:07 AM · On: For Our Daughter

Loved this chapter, the boys are making progress! I loved how Brian finally fessed up to being the hospital all that time, and Justin and Gus finally getting some things straightened out. And, of course, little Kaylee being okay! I can't wait for the very long overdue coversation they need to have!

The actions of that doctor and nurse in the hospital made me angry! I have a friend who is friends with a gay couple. They have an adopted son (neither is the bio dad). They went on a road trip to the US and when they came back to Canada, they got such a hassle at the border, wanting to know who the kid was, why does he have both their last names, where's his mother, what do you mean he doesn't have one? It was a nightmare! I hate how gay parents get put under a different set of standards. I'm glad you touched on this.



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan!  Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I can only imagine what these couples go through, especially the ones that are unable to legally marry and the hassles they must endure as a result.  And Justin is still torn over everything - still hurt with Brian, but also fiercely protective of his ex-partner's place in Kaylee's life and his right to be involved with her medical decisions.  I think once they get Kaylee back home and things settle down a bit, they can start moving in the right direction.  But first they most definitely have a long overdue talk coming before we can get to the more 'entertaining' elements (wink, wink).  Thank you again for all the support you give me, Megan; that means a great deal to me, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:00 AM · On: For Our Daughter

It sounds like our boys are on the road to reconciliation, although they do have some talking to do before they can get there. That cunty nurse made me laugh... it seems that some medical professionals don't realize that they either talk too loud or not loud enough. The doctor at the clinic I go to when I get sick talks so quiet, you have to strain to hear him. One of the nurses at our vet always talks to us in baby-talk, like we're the dog.



Author's Response:

Ha!  I liked your comment about the vet's office - so funny!  Of course, no one really gets a lot of sleep in the hospital, but it always seems like some of the nurses have to practically yell at you like you wouldn't wake up for them to give you a breathing treatment or your medicine or take your blood, etc.  Brings back some not-so-pleasant memories of last April when I was in the hospital for pneumonia (yuck!).  Anyway, yes, I think we are seeing a gradual shifting in Justin's attitude, but I still think he needs a good explanation from his ex-partner about what happened so long ago. At least now I think Brian may be better equipped to provide that to him. Thank you for the comments and for reading, Nancy, I appreciate that so much.  Oh, and BTW - what about "Sweet Sacrifice?"  Only one I can come up so far!  I'll keep thinking.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 08:51 AM · On: For Our Daughter

oh, you are such a good story teller-  Brian finally admits to Justin about his hospital watching-  oh so many years ago

 

 

I hope that talk comes soon and that you update soon-  I just love this story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy - thank you for those comments, dear friend, I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.  The idea to mention Brian's hospital visits with Justin sort of fell into place in this chapter, and I think it helps to show Justin just how much he did - and does - love him.  And now that Brian's had his talk with Michael, I would hope he will be better prepared to give some straight answers as to why he did what he did so long ago.  I think that is mainly what Justin is waiting to hear.  His heart is ready to take the leap, but his head still needs a little more convincing.  Thanks for all your support, Sandy; I'll be updating this one soon, but in the meantime I'm heading out to the wilds of Kentucky - ha!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 08:50 AM · On: For Our Daughter

Lovely chapter, Kim! I'm happy that Kaylee is OK and that Brian finally, FINALLY spilled the beans about visiting Justin in the hospital after the bashing. Justin's conversation with Gus was pretty great; made me happy that they seemed to get things straitened out.

Can't wait for another update, as always!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - well, at least this chapter was much longer.:)  I think both men will be a little better equipped to talk once they get Kaylee home and things quiet down a bit.  Thanks so much for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 04:43 PM · On: Kaylee's Accident

I'm glad to see an update of this story.  Love this so much. Thanks Kim.

Uuggrrr hospital rules !!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  Yes, nothing like some rigid hospital rules to ruffle Brian's feathers and get his dander up.:)  Glad that you're still following along with me.  I'll get the next part up very soon.  Hope everything is well with you, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kiim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 04:29 PM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Well I’m glad I scanned down some of the reviews as it looks like I might be the only one on Justin’s side. First his mother interferes, then Brian kisses him and he supposed to say, I haven’t seen you for 10 years but I am sure you have changed and everything is alright now. Kiss, Kiss. Then the twins and Mother Taylor interfere again, then Gus is on his case, if I was Justin I would tell them all where to go. However, saying that I always give Craig his kudos when he gets the men together so I will forgive Jennifer that part. I’m glad Kaylee is alright but when Justin arrives how about he gets to be the good guy for a change. Yes you still have two camps but its very lonely in this one. Thank you for the update I look forward to the promised updates of this and the farm story.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee! Thank you for those thoughtful comments.  Yes, I think you are right about the two differing opinions.  And while I think Brian still needs to offer more of an explanation to Justin as to why he did what he did before Justin begins to change toward him, it HAS been ten long years of separation and at some point I think he needs to decide what is more important - upholding to a principle and continuing to be apart from his daughter and the man he still loves despite flaws, or finally letting go and forging a life with him again.  I think he needs to figure out what his priorities are and what will make him the happiest for both him and Kaylee.  So I see a little give and take on both their parts coming up before they can reconcile, which will have to take a little of a back seat until they know for sure that Kaylee is okay.

I have most of the next chapter written so it should not be too long at all now before I post it.  And "Tame the Wild Stallion" is up next after that.;)  Thank you again for reading and for the comments, Flossee; I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 09:31 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Hi Kim! Glad to see you, I was getting worried! But I guess you're back teaching now right?

What an intense chapter! That poor family. I imagine there will be enough blame and guilt going around for everyone! But we know Kaylee will be fine and if it helps bring the boys together, so much the better!



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan - thank you for worrying about me, my friend.  Yes, I started back teaching about a week ago, so it will slow me down a little.  To confess, though, I was busy this past month doing a little more "Randy ogling." Went to see him in NYC for "Silence" at the beginning of the month and then in "QWAN" in Mass on 8/20; they were both hysterical!  But I think I'll be staying put now for a while so I can concentrate on updating faster.:)  I do have a lot of the next chapter written, so I should be able to post that very soon.  Thank you for sticking with this story!  I appreciate you bearing with me, and I WILL finish it:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Will the police need to be called to stop the riot when Justin arrives? I feel it could go very bad, or maybe a miracle will happen and Justin will realize that he's been a miserable ass and it's time he leaves the past where it belongs.

I am worried that the horses are running loose at Britin. I hope there is stable boy who will round them up and take care of them. I'd hate for them to come to harm. I am afraid Justin will probably order them destroyed once he get home from the hospital, he does seem to hold a grudge towards anything that causes him the slights bit of pain so I would imagine the poor horse is destined for the glue factory.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lori, you continue to crack me up!  We need to find a special designation for you as the funniest reviewer; I always laugh at loud at your comments!  Glad to see you're concerned for Eton's and Ceres' welfare - no telling what Justin might do in his fit of rage (oh, sorry, that's Brian, isn't it?  LOL!).  I think he'll go easy on them when he discovers that Kaylee isn't seriously hurt.  I should have the next part of this up very soon.  Thank you for always being so entertaining - I love it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

I've been very busy, so I do a hit a run review whenever I get  a chance. This one was so good that I listened to it, initially, and then I went back to read over it again. I see that Brian was in full protective mode about his daughter and it was good and lucky Michael was there to help.

I wanted to see how the conversattion bettween Gus and Justin was going to fare. Justin had a lot of explaining to do. It was inexcusable for him to cut alll ties to Gus.

I love this story and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Aww... you're very kind; thank you for the lovely comments!  I appreciate that so much.:)  There will be a more in-depth discussion between Justin and Gus in the next part which hopefully will go a ways toward the two of them mending their broken relationship.  And of course, Justin and Brian will be joining together as Kaylee recovers as well.  I have a lot of that chapter written already, so I should be able to post it shortly. Thank you for all the support you give me and for taking the time to review - I am very grateful for that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:55 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

definitely still with you - I have been waiting anxiously for this next installment and it did not disappoint - I can just feel all the emotions Brian is feeling, not the least of which is trepidation, wondering what Justin's reaction will be...as are we!

awaiting the next chapter...and then that little farm life story that you have me hooked on - ;) 

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hey, Charle!  LOL - Now I have no idea which story you're referring to (wink, wink).  Actually, I believe that is up right after I finish the next part of this one.  I have a good idea where I'm heading with it, so hopefully it won't be too long before I update it.  I'm glad you enjoyed this part - I will be updating it again very soon, since I have a lot of it already written. Thank you for all your support of my stories, Charle; that is so appreciated.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Wow!  welcome back to us--we missed you-but this was well worth the wait.  Seems Mel went through this same scenario with Gus.--Oh well, aother time.  I'm sure she will be ok--shook up. She had her helmet on so her head should be ok-maybe a slight concussion.  Will be intersting to see if Justin blames anyone.  He is going to be very upset and lord knows we know how he acts when he is.  Get ready for hurricane Justin.  I read our notes from Quan-sounds like it was a riot and that you had a blast.  I wonder what he's going to do in Europe.  I read an interview he gave and said he was going there for a while and then hang out in Brooklyn.  I wonder if he has new man in his life.  You probably know. HA HA!!.  We are all well here-all working hard. BB is still dating the same person.  Don't know how serious it is as he is very closed mouth about it.  Usually he is not this way-so maybe it is serious.  I guess I'm to nosey sometimes.  Lee is settling in very nicely.  He is all done with his therapy and still staying with me, although i think he will be finding a place soon.  The "DEVIL" is quite the hit here as it is everwhere.  Helps with the dating situation-but he's really not quite ready for that scene yet.  He ill be when someone strikes his fancy.  Enough of my rambling-back to work.. So glad you are back.  Will be waiting for second half of this chapter.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I missed you, too!  I had been wondering how all of you have been.  So glad to hear that you are all doing well, especially Lee.  I'm sure having the 'Devil' back where he (she?) belongs is a big help.  I think it will fit right in out there in the California sun:)    Yes, both "QWAN" and "Silence" were hysterical!  Saw "Silence" three times when we were in NYC for the weekend of 8/3, and don't regret it for a minute.  Too funny!  And QWAN was so off the wall.  I love Jenn Harris - after seeing her in both plays I would gladly go see her just by herself.  She is amazing and so funny! Not sure if Randy has a new man in his life or not - he does seem happier lately than he was right after the apparent breakup.  There's talk of a new QAF con in LA next summer!  If they manage to swing it, would love to come out and meet all of you.:)  I would definitely try to attend as long as it's at least in June - if it's in May it wouldn't work for me.:(

As far as the story goes, yes, I don't plan on Kaylee being too severely injured - just enough for the boys to start bonding over some worry for their daughter.  Justin will be anxious and upset, but it might surprise you was his reaction is.  I have 7,000 words of the next part written, so it shouldn't be long before I post it.  Thank you for checking in - I really missed all of you, too.  Tell everyone I said hello and I'm thinking of them.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

A new chapter, yay! I feel terrible for both the girls, but especially Katie. It's understandable that she feel guilty for what happened to her sister, but as Brian said, she didn't know that it was going to happen. Freak accidents do happen, unfortuantely.

Hopefully Justin doesn't blame Brian for this.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy! Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend - I'm amazed you even have time with your update schedule lately, but I'm glad you do.:)  I actually have a longer part coming up already written, but it's not at a good stopping point yet.  Shouldn't take me long to update it, though.:)  Really enjoying "Come Undone" especially right now, and BTW I'm still mulling over what to call your new story - not sure if you have a name for it yet.:)  Thanks again for reading and for the feedback; that means a lot to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:50 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Kim...thanks so much for the update of my favorite story.  Wow great chapter, can't wait for part 2.

Poor Kaylee, i know she will be ok though, she at least opened her eyes and talked to her dad.
And poor Katie, just like dear old dad taking the blame for her sister getting hurt.

Can't wait for some bonding time with Brian and Justin and also curious to see how Gus fits into all of this.  Great as always Kim...I will be eagerly awaiting the next part.  Have a great day.
Susie



Author's Response:

Thank you, Susie, for your kind words and for telling me this is your favorite story - that makes me happy and means a lot to me.:)  The next part is even longer than this one, and yes, the two men begin to work their way back as they bond over Kaylee's injuries.  I should be posting the next part very soon since I have so much of it already written.  Thank you for sticking me with me - I promise to complete this story as I do with my other WIPs.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:41 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Great scene in the ER. Pure Brian. But I am calling this a cliffhanger. I was waiting for Justin to arrive and was sort of shocked when the chapter was over. Is this your shortest chapter ever???

Author's Response:

Ha - when it comes to multi-chaptered fics, it could be.:)  Is that a good thing or a bad thing?  From the sound of your comment, though, hopefully you're wanting more.:)  I actually have over 7,000 words of the next chapter writtten, but I'm not quite at a good stopping point yet.  But at least that means it shouldn't take long for me to get it posted in the next few days.  And yes, Justin is definitely in that one along with Brian as they wait for definitive word about Kaylee's injuries. 

Thank you for still following this and for the comments!  There're so many wonderful writers over here right now, so I am honored that you took the time to read mine.  This will be updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Yea! So glad to see an update to this story! Great build up of tension! Hopefully the scare (I'm going on the theory that this IS just a scare and nothing serious is wrong with kaylee) with their daughter will throw the boys into each others arms, they'll realize how silly they've been and live together happily ever after! TAG

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tag, for reading and for the comments. I am very flattered you took the time to do that, considering how busy you are with your job and your own writing schedule.:)  And yes, I think you just may be on the right track there.  The next part that I'm writing presently deals more with the two men bonding over Kaylee's bedside and Justin realizing how fragile life can be and how it can change in a heartbeat.  I think that will get him reconsidering how stubborn and unyielding he has been and how much time they have wasted.  

Thank you again for the feedback; that means a lot to me.  And congrats on all your success on the site - you have quickly become a real favorite over here and for good reason.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 04:57 AM · On: Kaylee's Accident

How can you tease me like this, Kim? OMG, I can't wait for the rest of the chapter! I hope you'll post part 2 soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - if it's any consolation, the next part that I'm working on is already longer than this part, so at least I can assure you that it will be even lengthier than this one.  I thought rather than waiting until I had around my typical 15,000 word chapter, I would post part now and the rest in a few days.  Didn't want everyone to think I had disappeared off the face of the earth. So many new and talented writers on there right now - great for the fandom, but hard to draw people in at times with so much talent in abundance (including yourself!).  So I thank you for reading and for the feedback.  I'll get the rest of this posted probably within the next couple of days.  Oh, and congrats on all the reviews for your one-shot - 19 for one chapter - that's amazing but so well deserved!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 09:43 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Yaaay,I still love this alot!!! ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 08:11 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Awww,I was hopeing they would have things resolved in this chapet....runs of to the next on!!!! ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Now what would be the fun in that?  LOL!  Don't worry - I'm slowly heading in that direction - kind of like the same speed as those two snails in one of the early episodes - ha!:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Breaking Point

That was a really hot kiss.Wow,I loved it!! ~Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 07:22 AM · On: A Not So Fond Walk Down the Primrose Path

I think thats true -> "Don't kid yourself, Justin; I wouldn't have had to force you to do anything." ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Hey, Vonnie - It has to be late where you live by now; I'm flattered that you're still reading, but you CAN take a break, my friend.:)  I'm glad, though, that you like Katie and Kaylee; they are different in a lot of ways, but when it comes to their fathers they are more alike they they know.:)  I'm still plugging away on the latest chapter - getting closer and closer.  Up to over 12,000 words now, but need just a little more to post it.  Thank you again for all the wonderful comments, Sweetheart; I do appreciate that and it helps to keep me motivated. Hopefully everyone won't forget me by the time I get this next part posted!  Hope you have a great week.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 07:05 AM · On: Preparing for Dinner

Oh my god,I love these kids alot lol :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 05:35 AM · On: Back To Where It All Started

Beautiful! ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Tightening the Emotional Screws

I love your version of this alot,Kim :) ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie; I'm glad you decided to give it a go:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 03:58 AM · On: An Undeniable Hunger

Yaaaay,Im so happy right now,Im glad they have reunited!!! ~Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

You don't know how long I was waiting myself for that moment!  But it's just a baby step - they have a ways to go yet, and Justin can be quite stubborn as you're about to find out.  I'm working on the current chapter, though; up to about 12,000 words, so I'm getting there (at last!).  So glad you had faith in me and gave this one a chance!  Thanks again, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 03:28 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Hehehe Im so excited now,even more so ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:
LOL!  Yes, that was one of the most pivotal chapters.:)  So glad to see you still enjoying it, Vonnie!  You're slowly building up toward their encounter - get ready for the roller coaster ride!  Thank you again for all the comments.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 01:20 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Another fantastic chapter ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 12:48 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

You always know how to get me hooked on your stories,Kim ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 12:32 AM · On: The Other Father and Sizing up the Enemy

:) Still loving this ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Expulsion Can be a GOOD Thing!

I think Mr periwinkle is lovely hehehe.I still am hooked on this.I love the story so much :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie!  I'm so delighted that you like this one!  I hope you continue to enjoy it - I'm still plugging away on the update and hope to have it to my beta later today.  Thank you again, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 11:51 PM · On: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed

I am enjoying this very much,Kim ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 11:35 PM · On: It is Too Late?

Oh oh,how will sunshine get out of this I wonder. Great chapter Kim ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:34 PM · On: Twin Conspiracy

Im so excited!!! ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:15 PM · On: An Astonishing Discovery

The first meeting for the girls,I really love this story :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Soooo happy that you gave this story  a chance and that you're enjoying it, Vonnie!  I'm up to about 9,200 words on the next installment, so it should be up very soon.  Thank you again for all the feedback, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 09:59 PM · On: Camp Orientation

I really am enjoying this story very much Kim ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that, Vonnie!  And you know how much I truly appreciate the comments, my friend, but please don't feel obligated to review each chapter - I know you're probably going to get caught up-to-date with it soon, and I love to hear your thoughts.  If it's better, though, feel free to wait until you're done, Sweetie.  I appreciate you reading this so much in either case.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 09:32 PM · On: Camping Conspiracy

Im really loving this alot,Kim.I actually had a feeling I would when I started reading it earlier :)

 

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

I'm so glad, Vonnie!  I tried not to make this too much like the movie version, so I hope you continue to enjoy it.:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Divergent Lives

Hi Kim,I could only find a few chapters of this on your journal,so Im gonna read it here :)

 

I think I will enjoy this very much ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Hi, Vonnie!  Thank you for the PM earlier, and for your willingness to give this one a try.  It does follow some of the same premise as the movie, but there are a lot of differences as well, so I do hope that you enjoy it, my friend.  Thank you again for your support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

I am really enjoying this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know!  I'm working on one more update to it before I move onto "Tame the Wild Stallion." I should have it up hopefully later today.  There's a climax coming soon (two kinds - LOL!).  Thanks again for reading and especially for the feedback, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

This was great! Hopefully Brian got through to the girls and they will let the dads sort it out now (although being their daughters, I doubt it!) And that's kind of sad that Justin felt he had to hide from everyone at the diner. I look forward to Brian and Michael's conversation. If they have drifted apart, even after Ben's death (still sad about that!), maybe they can now forge a more healthly friendship than what they had on the show.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  As always I am grateful for your support, Megan.:)  I actually have over 10,000 words of the next part written (good thing I broke it up now!), so I should be posting it very soon.  Justin might have escaped Michael's notice, but he won't be able to do that so easily with Debbie - or some others that he encounters.  Both men will be doing a lot of soul searchng in the next chapter, and there will be an event that will draw them even closer together.  And Gus is about to enter the picture, too!  A LOT going on still as we head toward the conclusion!

Thanks again for all your support, Megan!  I appreciate that so much.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Sorry I didn't make a comment earlier this day.

My daughters and I had one rule today: no computers ! I'm glad they were up late, but I didn't finish the whole chapter. * giggles * but they are in bed now.

 

Great chapter as always.

Hope Brian has a good conversation with Michael.

And Justin Justin please .... you make everyone happy including yourself.

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Oh, you sneaky woman, you!  Good for you, limiting their computer time.  I think too often kids spend way too much time in front of them (which is kind of ironic considering how much I'm doing that same thing right now - ha!)  Don't worry, BTW - Justin is slowly coming around.  I have about 10,000 words of the next part written (ack!), but still need to finish it off.  I should have it posted very soon.  Thanks as always for your comments, Marny.  I still think about our meeting back in June - I do hope one day we can meet again.  You'll have to come over here one day and I'll play tour guide for YOU then.:)  *Hugs* back - Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 03:22 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

I am really anxious for the next part - you know I can't wait to see how Brian will explain his faux pas - I have no doubt that is the only obstacle to Justin putting it all on the line one more time - the lve between them is not in doubt

I can't wait to 'hear' the conversation between Michael and Brian -  with all they've been through - together and apart - those two will definitely have a unique perspective - one that will hopefully cause Brian to stop and really look at things

then...the reunion - hot!

and the girls finding out and reacting - fun!

and the gang - oh my, what a hoot!

I am so very glad that this chapter ran long - it means I will get another glimpse before we head over to the farm where thing no doubt are heating up there as well

;)

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  Thanks for the wonderful comments, my dear!  Yes, there will be a lot of soul-searching in the next chapter by both men, and their friends will all be conspiring to get them headed back in the right direction.  And I think Gus will be a big help in driving that goal.  I have over 10,000 words written for the next chapter and I'm not done yet - ack!  But I DO need to wander back over to the Bluegrass State very soon.  I should have this next part up in the next day or so, however.  Thanks again for all your support, Charle!  You're very special.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Well, finally I am once again caught up on this nail biting tale of yours. As always, you kill me with your thorough and steady progression. I think it's wonderful how you can get so indepth with your characters. It feels as if you are in their lives that way. I try to do that, but I do get lazy sometimes, and distracted by all the other projects. LOL. Regardless of how wonderful that process is, it leaves me wanting to see what the resolution will be like - hence the nail biting. Haha.

All that said, amazing installments as always. Looking forward to more. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Thanks, my dear friend.:)  Hopefully I don't bog them down too much with details; sometimes I worry about that and just want to move it along.  But I guess it's more in my style to be more detailed as well as get way too carried away on chapter word counts - ha!  Thanks so much for your kindess and all your support - it means the world to me.  As always, I'll be here looking forward to more of your own updates.  *Hugs* back.:)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Oh-  please post soon.  I love angst- and it would be terrible for Justin and Brian not to move forward- but I know you love them as much as I do-  glad that Brian still has Michael in his mind- even after all these years- folks do change, but hopefully Michael can offer him some hope.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy!  Well, as you know if you love angst you've come to the right author - ha!  Don't worry - as you suspect I will get them to a good place by the time I'm done.  There will be a lot of soul-searching in the next chapter by both men, so that will definitely start them back on the right path.  And I think Debbie will help 'straighten' Justin out - ha!  I have most of the next part written - over 10,000 words - yikes!  I should have it posted hopefully tomorrow. Thanks so much for reading and for your comments.  Can't wait to read your next story instalment as well - will get to that today hopefully.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:28 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

You won't hear any complaints from me about getting 2 chapters of this story in a row! Can't wait to see how the meeting between Jus & Deb goes! TAG

Author's Response:

Thank you, Tag!  And congrats on the reception to your new story - 11 reviews for one chapter!  Sigh...sure you're not luring everyone away from mine?  (Just kidding...I hope!).  I should have the next part of this up shortly - and a review to your own story as well as soon as I can catch my breath.  Good luck on the new job, BTW.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

I learn so much reading the comments, lots of viewpoints I never thought of. Never figured out that Gus's visit would impact Justin. Duh to me! Still not sure what you're planning to do with Mikey in the mix...BigPaw, you're a riot!

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - yes, Lori is a hoot, isn't she?  I know what you mean about the review comments - I hope everyone doesn't think they're too wordy when I respond, but I think if readers bother to review the least I can do is answer with more than a 'thank you.'  Obviously my wordiness transfers over to here as well.:)  Sometimes I think the comments are almost as big as the story volume itself - ha!  Gus will definitely be showing up soon - not sure if I can make it into the next chapter or not - might be a brief appearance.  But I'm past 8,000 words alone on where I'm at, so to update my other stories I'll have to stop it somewhere.  And (ducking under desk now) I think it will be on a terrible cliffhanger, too....! 

As always I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.  Your consistent support means the world to me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 02:21 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

just wanted you to know I'm still enjoying your story here. I don't really have anything to say about it in partic. sorry have been tired lately. But I'm still reading. Haven't gotten to Stallion yet AT ALL, feel bad but will someday.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jon - a short review is much preferable to none at all, my friend.:)  Hope you get to feeling better soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 01:59 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

I love this story. I am constantly amazed at people who can take a concept and adapt it as you have here. I think I am in the minority though when it comes to assess blame. I love that both men know they still love each other but I am amazed that Brian thinks he can just kiss and it all better. He broke their trust and that isn’t repair by time it’s earned. I read each chapter now waiting for his excuse. Please hurry back as I am dying to know.
Cheers

Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  Yes, there seems to be two camps here - some think Justin needs to just get over it and move on - it HAS been a long time! - while others think both are to blame.  I tend personally to come down on the latter side.  Yes, he does need to move forward for the sake of their girls and to get on with his life, but it wasn't so much the act itself as what it signified that continues to haunt him. I think he needs that explanation from Brian as much as Brian needs to figure it out himself. Brian has always had tried and true responses to troubled or challenging times in his life, and I think it would be hard for him to veer from that practice, even with a partner and two children involved...

Michael will be helpful in helping Brian to sort out what happened and his motiviation behind it, because he will remind him of what happened before the event that precipitated it.  Justin, though, needs to come to grips with his blame in the whole thing.  Every event has an impact on the others, and I think the fact that HE broke his own promises before had a bearing on what happened as well.  I hope I can do a good job of explaining each man's viewpoint coming up, because the big showdown is fast arising.  Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback, Flossee; I truly do appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 10:44 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

This was a much needed chapter, it calmed my killer beast, I'm almost willing to let Justin live one more day to try and come to his right mind about this situation. I'm so glad the girls can depend on Brian to offer them the comfort they need. I was a little sad to learn that Justin leg didn't need to be amputated and he only had bruising, all that drama for a bruise!! I'm beginning to wonder if Hobbs really did use a baseball bat or if Justin just dramatized getting hit by a used toothpick. Can you tell I am not on Team Justin right now...But really this chapter did sooth my worried mind. I think I have to let things work out as they will, nothing can force Justin to give up his feelings however stupid they are. Why should a poor horse be made to harm a person and then be labeled a dangerous animal, I wouldn't want that. I have to rethink my plan. I'm going to go drink some calming tea. I do love how wrapped up in your stories I become! You bring it to life in such a real way.
Lori

Author's Response:

What lovely comments, Lori! (at least the last part - ha!).  Thank you for that!  I'm glad that you have decided to let Justin live for one more day...LOL!  Debbie will be giving him at least a 'virtual' head slap in the next chapter, so I think you'll enjoy that. And yes, Gus and he will meet again soon - not sure if it will be in the next chapter or the one right after that, though - I'm already past 8,000 words for the next part alone and haven't gotten through the entire Michael/Brian talk yet - ack!  Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, Lori - I appreciate that more than you know.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 07:01 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

WOW thanks for the chapter...First of all those poor little girls, they are so upset and Brian is great with them. I also can't wait to see Gus and Justin together, I think if anyone can get thru to Justin it may be Gus.  He can get to Justin while Michael helps Brian.  Great setup and cannot wait for the final showdown when they finally decide to be together.  I really will hate when the story is over, I always look forward to the updates.  I am loving this.  Thanks so much Kim and have a good trip to Kentucky.  By the way thanks for Tricky, I just love that pup!! Take care!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Susie!  Thanks for your patience while I wind through all the convoluted mess known as the Brian and Justin relationship.  I do want to get back to the boys interacting together, and they will soon.  But first it's necessary to reintroduce some of the other players, including Gus. He will be showing up shortly and yes, he WILL be interacting with Justin. I agree - Justin has a special place in his heart and so does he in Justin's heart.  I think that will go a long way toward mending fences.  I should have one more update to this before I go back to the Bluegrass State.  I have over 8,000 words written for the next part of this story and haven't gotten past Mikey and Brian's talk yet - or Gus with Justin - ack!  Too wordy - LOL!  Good think I broke it up, then!

Thank you so much for reading so many of my stories, Susie, and for your lovely comments!  I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: kym (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

This story is a beast.  Keep waiting for some happiness for the four of them.  I know it's coming down the road but it's so hard waiting.  Hope Mikey gives him some insight and help, dubious at most.  Michael giving advice is hard for me to fathom, although I'll give the benefit of the doubt to him. hope update is soon.  I will in all honesty hate to see it end, but the angst is driving me bonkers. Hee!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  Sigh...I know - it's taking a while to get there and it's hard to wait, isn't it?  But it's coming very soon - we're getting a lot closer now.  I have to build up to it properly, but I would say probably in the next chapter after the upcoming one we might just be getting there....I will be posting another chapter to this very shortly - have most of it written, but have to finish it off. Then it's onto Kentucky next.  Thanks so much for all your support, Kym! I hope I can continue to write stories that you enjoy.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 04:57 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

thanks for updating, i will be waiting for the other part and i can't wait to see what is going to happen in thw wild stallion too. Great chapter, i cried with the girls.



Author's Response:

Hi, Luisa! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend!  I know - I apologize about "Stallion."  It should be updated this week - I know it's been a little neglected lately - I hope you will bear with me just a little longer.  I need to post the next part of this one that ran a little too long to post together, and then I will be working hard on updating the other story.  Thank you for letting me know you're enjoying the story.  I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Building, building, building. Iam so impatient. as you know I am.  Glad Michael has met someone.  Brian just needs to hold on a little longer.  I don't know what he thinks Michael can do-or does he just need to unload on him a bit.  Next chapter or the other half of this one should be quite interesting. Justin is going to have to survive Debbie.  What was he thinking or was he not thinking at all.  This whole matter has him depressed and upset.  He needs to get his priorities in line and grow the hell up.  He can't be carrying all that anger around forever.  Sorry! on the soap-box again. Ha! lol



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  I think you're right about Michael - he and Brian have been good friends for so long that I think he's looking at him as more of a sounding board as you said, as well as the one person who can help sort through this convoluted mess.  We're heading for a showdown here, so the climax is coming up soon!  Hope it's been worth the wait!  Thanks so much as always for your support, lindc.  Tell the other peeps I said 'hello.':)

P.S  Tricky's coming up very soon....!  He's meeting a new 'friend,' too....!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2012 03:02 AM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

Can hardly wait for Debbie and Sunshine's reunion!! I'm sure there will be plenty of spine-crushing hugs and mascara-running tears from good old Deb. I'm also looking forward to Gus's arrival and reunion with Kaylee... will Sonny Boy join the girls in their effort to re-unite their parents, perhaps??



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy....Deb's reunion with Justin is in the next part, and yes, Gus will have a bearing on this story coming up (wink, wink). Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.:) *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 08:46 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

H!  Nonie called to talk and in our conversation she alluded passing on our rl crisis to you. Before we get too depressed I want to say this chapter was vey sad for me.  I guess I am just caught up in the troubles here and want the boys to get over this"mess" and get back together and have a good life with their kids.  I am sure you won't make us wait too much longer for some happiness for them.  Our boy is a mess.  He was very close to his uncle and quite unconsolable for a while.  He was glad I came as I am glad to be of assistance.  The hospital was very acommodating when I asked for time to come here.  I think Brian pulled a few strings.  He was unable to come, although he would have been the rock Lee needs right now as his family is very upset and needs all the help they can get.  I think I have talked him into coming to be with us in Cal.  He really needs his friends right now as I a a little worried about his mental health.  Too much has happened in a short time for him to deal.  The funeral is Tuesday and I'm going to Florida with him on Thursday.  You feel like part of the peeps family so just thought I'd let you know the latest. Need to get some rest as this day has been very taxing. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc.  Yes, Nonie was kind enough to let me know what happened.  There are really no words to express how sorry I feel for Lee, but how blessed he is to have such wonderful friends such as you and Brian.  I am glad that you have apparently persuaded him to move out to California to be closer to you - I think a change, plus being back with his closest friends, will be very good for him.  I feel like I know him personally and wish I could give him a hug to let him know how awful I feel for him.  My heart really goes out to him.  Please let him know how sorry I am and that I will keep him and his family in my thoughts and prayers. I can never understand why these kinds of things happen to people such as Lee and his family, but I firmly believe that he WILL see him again one day.  Please express my heartfelt condolences to him and tell him I am sending my love to him.  And when and if he is ready to read my stories, I will be honored to hear from him again.

I would really like to send him a card if at all possible.  I would be grateful if someone could PM me and give me some address I could send a note to him a least in care of.  If you would prefer not to do that or if that is not possible, though, I understand.  Please give him my best, and I'm sending hugs out to all of you.  You are all very special to me.  Please take care of yourself, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2012 08:46 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

...it was time for a little ‘tough love...

This was absolutely my favorite chapter. I'm happy that Brian had gotten more forthright with his feelings. I loved that kiss he gave Justin.

I'm also happy that he told the girls to stop their little games to get them back together although they clearly have no intention of stopping them. Jennifer actually started the whole thing and should take full responsibilty for it.

I think Justin is right in that Brian needs to come clean as to why he was unfaithful. It's sad that Brian has no idea himself as to what caused it.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Your words of encouragement are very motivating to me - thank you for reading this latest chapter and for your feedback!  I'm delighted that you liked it.  I agree with you totally -  they both have a lot of thinking - and talking - to do.  The girls' attempts to get them back together have been humorous, but now I think the really tough part begins, for only their fathers can truly resolve what needs to be hashed out between them.  I see some struggling yet ahead, but they are slowly getting back on the right track now. 

Thank you for taking the time to comment and for all your support!  I am very grateful for your consistent encouragement!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 12:25 PM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Ooh, those boys are so stubborn!! On one hand, it has been a decade and despite what Brian did, Justin still loves him and knows how much the girls want them to be a family. I doubt Brian would ever hurt Justin like that again, because he knows what he has to lose. On the other hand, Brian needs to get his shit straightened out in that thick head of his and open up to Justin about why he decided to destroy their relationship and their family.

Now that I'm all caught up, I need more, Kim, I need MORE!!!!! :)



Author's Response:

I'm very grateful that you took the time to read what I have written for this so far, Nancy!  Thanks for all the comments, too.:)  I'm heading toward the conclusion of this story soon, so I will probably update it one more time before I move onto one of my other WIPs. 

 

Thank you again for taking the time to review.  The boys will soon be engaging in a more heart-to-heart discussion, which is sorely needed here!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 11:05 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

I was so excited to see this chapter.  I love this story.  I feel Justin and Brian's pain.  So hard to watch Brian try to get Justin and Justin not open himself to that opportunity.  Great angst.  Hope Mikey can help.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy - thank you as always for reading and for the comments; I really appreciate that so much.:)  I do think that someone who is hurt deeply takes longer to forgive someone.  Even though Justin still loves him and it was the one act, I think due to the trust issue and what Brian's violation of that trust signified, it will still take a little while longer for him to come around.  But soon we will be seeing a sea change in his attitude due to several things.  I hope you'll bear with me until I can reach that point - it IS coming.:)

Thanks so much for your ongoing support, Sandy; I'm very grateful for that.:)  Looking forward to the rest of your own story as well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 08:00 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Justin Justin why are you so ... aggrrrrr. Kim please fix this. You are the one who can do that ... and maybe Brian !

 

* hugs *

 

Last week was very nice. We (me, my girls and a little niece) were at a park with shetland ponys. We had a lot of fun with those little ponys.

 

Are you going to Silence! the musical ?



Author's Response:

Hi, dear - I was missing you!  I think everyone's run off on me to go join the "Tag team" - LOL!  I hope she takes a breather in between her writing marathons so I can get some more readers over here...aargh! (don't mind me, just a little envious, I guess...:)   BTW - that is one sexy banner you made up for her - incredible!  You did a beautiful job.:)

Now you know I always have to throw some angst in my story before I get them back where they belong, but you also know I'll get them back to a happy place eventually.  I hope you'll hang on until I can get them there...should be maybe three, four more chapters? 

And yes, I am going to see Randy in his new play.   I will be going to see him perform on August 3, maybe even again on August 5.  But at least the one time for sure.  And I'll be seeing him in his one-time reading of "QWAN" in the Berkshires (Massachusetts) on August 20.

Thanks again for reading and for the comments, Marny.  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 07:49 AM · On: An Undeniable Hunger

I can hear a choir singing the Hallelujah chorus!! Brian and Sunshine, re-united! :D I'm sure getting them back together won't be as easy as Kaylee and Katie would have hoped, but I know they will end up happily ever after eventually.



Author's Response:

Thank you again, Nancy. And you are right - their road back will not be a smooth one (you wouldn't expect anything less from me, would you?:))  I do hope you will continue to enjoy the story until I resolve their issues, though...Thank you so much for taking the time to comment for me; that means more than you probably know, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 06:37 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Woohoo!!! *Doing my happy dance* Alex is history and Brian figured out the switcheroo!! Katie is doing a slightly better job pretending to be Kaylee (and did a hell of a job convincing Justin that she was sick at just the right time), but I'm sure Justin will soon put the pieces together. I was actually expecting Justin to figure it out first, but seeing that filling in what was supposed to be Katie's mouth set off the alarm the most with Brian (which could never be explained), along with the 180 change in her wardrobe choices.

I've been a little sickly for the last couple of days (per usual during this time of year, with the increased humidity and outdoor allergens), so this story is perking me up big time!! It's also distracting me from the fact that I have another Biology test on Tuesday *groan* On to chapter 13!! :D

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - so sorry to hear you've been under the weather - I know my sinuses always kick up around here due to the weather, too, so I can certainly sympathize!  Thank you for your comments on this chapter - as you can see, Justin does not have much patience for any man who would not treat his daughter with the right respect; that would most definitely be a deal breaker in his eyes. It won't be long now before he lays eyes on the man he's still deeply in love with, too, which will hopefully start them on a journey back together.  So glad you're enjoying this one, Nancy; thank you for all your support.:)  Hope you feel a lot better soon and ace your biology test!  Looking forward to more of your own story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 10:39 PM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

It's kind of sad that the girls' plan backfired so quickly... On the other hand, maybe this will get the boys back together quicker also.

I think that Brian needs to stop letting pride rule his head and give his heart the rains. As for Justin, I hope that whatever reason Brian gives him for what happened years ago will be enough for him to forgive and forget.

Can't wait to read more of this awesome story.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - thank you for reading, my friend, and for the review.  I appreciate it.  They are slowly moving in the right direction now, I think.  And I believe once he talks to Michael, he will have a clearer idea of his motivations.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback.  Looking forward to our trips! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed

Of course, I hate Alex and that little bitch Sandra...

Alex was dead wrong when he told Justin that he was proposing to him and not Kaylee. When you marry someone with a kid, you marry the kid, too. You have to love your potential step-kid like they're your own, and damn any parent who marries someone their kid doesn't approve of. My ex's mom married a man that her three kids didn't like, and that was the main reason they ended up divorced a few years later. Her kids still resented her for marrying the asshole.

As for Sandra, bullies like her will pick on any little weakling they can, and Kaylee was unfortunate enough to be stuck with her as a roommate. Much like her dad gluing the judge's ass to the toilet, Katie wants revenge for how Sandra is treating her sister!! I love it!

Off to bed now...



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy! Thanks for the comments, Sweetie. I couldn't agree more about the stepfather marrying the kid, too, and it will come back to bite Alex in the ass later on...You will find a lot of differences and similarities between the two girls and their fathers, too, along the way.  So glad you're reading the story!  Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback for you; hope you continue to enjoy it.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 12:00 PM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

ok - so as much as I really really  want to 'Debbie slap' Justin right up side his head and say 'just get over it...will you? - Brian being Brian is his own worst enemy as usual...and in true BJ style is keeping himelf from getting the one thing he wants...no needs...more than anything else in the world - all because he is not willing to step back and give Justin the one thing he needs at this moment to move on...validation

now that Brian is finally open and willing to ponder and address the real issue at hand, and get past his signature "I'll do anything for love...but I won't do that' walls, excuses and avoidance tactics - I'm guessing it won't be long before he is able to regain Justin's trust...and his hot little bubble butt won't be far behind...

in fact, knowing our boys as we do...would we be surprised if the boys give in to their passion long before all the emotional baggage is resolved completely?

chin up girls...you're hot daddy twosome is about to turn your little frowns upside down...in a most life affirming way!

so happy for this update Kim - great writing as usual

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle - thank you as always for reading and taking the time to review, dear friend; I really appreciate that.:)  I think a lot of people are getting impatient over Justin's stubbornness; if it's any consolation, I see that changing pretty soon, especially once some other elements come into play in the story.  It IS amazing how pride and hurt can factor into decisions we make and how it can fester for so long.

I think we all know eventually that their passion will not be able to be contained (wink, wink), but I may just surprise you and let them sort through their issues first before we get to that point.  Thanks again for all your support, Charle - I'll be updating this one again very soon.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

P.S.  Your comment about the 'Debbie slap' reminded me of a moment at the con on Sunday (the closing day) when the actors were up on the stage for photo shoots with fans.  At one point Sharon Gless and Hal Sparks were up there and she gave him this fake slap just like in the show - it was HILARIOUS!

 

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:53 AM · On: An Astonishing Discovery

I am so in love with Kaylee and Katie!! It must kill Brian to see his half-Justin daughter every day for the past eight years and see how she got Justin's artistic talents. I don't know how Justin can live without Katie, his blood, living away from him, and see how much Kaylee takes after Brian, as far as their shared preference for vanity. I'm glad that Daphne and Jennifer are actively in both of the girls' lives and keep each dad up-to-date on how their other daughter is doing, and that the girls at least know the truth about their mother and their "other dad," even if they don't know about having a twin... until now, that is!!

Please tell me that Perry the camp director is Periwinkle from the Fairy camp!

Of course, I can hardly wait for Brian and Justin to be re-united, and for them to see their girls back together again! It is 8:48 PM right now, and I have a feeling I will be pulling an all-nighter reading this one!



Author's Response:

Aww..you're so sweet, Nancy, with your wonderful comments - thank you. I hadn't thought about the Periwinkle connection - OMG! I wish I had come up with that!  But sorry, alas, I did not.  I loved the two names that Emmett and Michael wound up with, though, from the camp - Emmett and his Barbra Streisand fixation.:)  Thanks so much for reading this one.:)  I'm probably off to bed soon - hope you continue to enjoy it.:)

*Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:32 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Okay, really, Justin, enough is enough! Either end it (and we know that won't happen!) or get over it and move on! He's being beyond stubborn here. I do agree Brian should figure out why he did what he did, and hopefully Michael can help him. But Justin needs to back off and let him. Oh, the poor boys!



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend!  Yes, I sense readers are in agreement with you on this one.  Don't worry - Justin's about to realize that it IS time to dwell on more important matters - it's coming up shortly.  Please bear with me until I can get them to the right spot.:)  I plan on updating this one again before moving on to the next WIP if that helps.:)  Thank you for all your support, my friend; that means a lot to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:32 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Hey, Mama Kim!! I'm beginning on this story today and I'm sure it will be an emotional journey for me (I already teared up at the goodbye in this first chapter). I love the Parent Trap with Lohan (and have most of the dialog memorized), and I enjoyed the original version, too.

Here I go!! :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy! Thank you for letting me know you'll be checking this one out; I'm honored considering what a full plate you have right now yourself.  I do hope you enjoy it.  It's pretty angsty so far, but I think it's slowly moving in the right direction. These boys are both extremely stubborn in this one, though! Thanks for the comments and for reading - that means a lot to me.  And congrats on all the wonderful reviews you're getting on your story - looking forward to the rest of that one as well as the new one.  *Hug*  ~Kim

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:00 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

good morning, it's 7 saturday morning over here. Having my breakfast and reading my favorite story at the same time now! Cheers, June:)



Author's Response:

Good Morning, June! What a lovely thing to say - thank you!  I'm so  delighted that you're enjoying the story still.:)  I will probably update this one again before I move onto my other WIPs, by the way, so I may another chapter up again very shortly.  Thank your for spending your breakfast with me - wish we could meet for some coffee:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 05:05 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Loved it, as always.  Especially the idea of Brian finally being willing to talk to someone (even if it's only Michael) to try to figure himself out.  Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter!  TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag! I'm honored that you took the time to read this latest installment - that explains why no update on yours yet today - LOL!  Congrats on all the tons of amazing reviews you're getting and TWO blue ribbons in a row now! I'm jealous but so well deserved.:) You're the fastest updater I've ever seen!  I'll have to hire you to be my ghostwriter.:)

I'll probably update this one again before I  move onto my next WIP - it's getting toward the end now and I'd really like to get it wrapped up soon.  Thank you again for reading and taking the time to leave me feedback - you of all people certainly know how important that is to a writer.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: NONIE (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 05:02 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Hey there.  Just got home and read my e-mail, went over here and found your update.  I feel very sorry for Brian, I must say.  These two together are like tom cats or push me pull you.  In a way its kind of funny.  I can just picture it on the screen.  I'm not sure when you'll hear from Lindc next.  She had to go back east to help Lee.  His uncle was killed in a three pile up on the highway.  I don't know the particulars as she was quite upset.  He is having a hard time with everything in his life right now. She really wants him to come here to be with her and Brian. His family thinks t would do him good as they are very close.  Just thought I'd let you know.  I'm sure youill hear from her when the dust settles.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nonie - OMG - I am SO sorry to hear that about Lee's uncle!  That poor man!  First a serious accident of his own, then his broken engagement and moving, and now this?  I so wish I had an email address for him or a snail mail address so I could send him a personal condolence. Please ask lindc to relay to him how very sorry I am to hear that.  How horrible for him and his family.  I will keep him and his family in my thoughts and prayers.  And I tend to agree - I really think he could benefit from being around his close friends, so I do hope he considers coming out there to live.  Again, so sorry to hear that!

As for the story, yes, it is kind of comical how stubborn these two can be.  They obviously are still deeply in love and have wasted so much time now.  But not to fear - I'll get them patched up before it's all said and done.:)  Thank you for taking the time to read and comment - and especially for telling me about Lee.  I will be thinking about him and I'm sending him my love and a big hug his way.  *Hugs* to you, too, for being such a special friend to all of them.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 04:51 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Great balla of fire Justin.  Grow the devil up and stop being such a drama queen.  It's been years,  Let it go already.  Now poor Brian is going to see Mikey?  How is he going to help-my goodness.  Brian should go see a shrink.  He would probably get better advice.  I guess you have your reasons for this next step.  Justin should just have had the big flare-up and forgiven him years ago.  Women don't hold grudges this long.  Ha!.  Good chapter-didn't mean to get so irate-just me being me.



Author's Response:

That's okay, Kym!  I wouldn't mind giving Justin a big kick in his pretty little bubble butt myself - ha!  I think he is beginning to come around (maybe?) and things will be happening soon to start making him see it's time to move on.  Brian probably would be better off with a shrink, but I just don't really see him doing that unless he goes to see his buddy Alec at Woody's again.  I think the fact that he actually sought out help for Justin so long ago is very telling about just how much he cared for him at the time.

 

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and for the comments, Kym!  I really appreciate that! I will get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 04:41 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Hey Kim..wow thanks so much for the quick update.  I love how Brian is dealing with Justin in this chapter, he is not backing down at all and I am glad.  Justin is still being a brat but I do think a he will come around.  The girls were really great in this, I felt so sorry for them, it is sad.  Brian is so good with them.  I love that you are getting Michael involved, I think that will be really good. I hate it when some stories make Michael out to be mean when he really can help Brian deal with Justin and help Brian get to his feelings.  Well also, I love the sexual tension and would love a juicy chapter of making out and sex…LOL, I guess I am a pervert.  Well thanks again for this great story, I have to go and read it again. I will be looking forward to more. I hope you have a great weekend..take care honey.


Susie



Author's Response:

Hi, Susie!  Well, if you're a 'pervert,' then say no more - I think you will get your wish eventually (wink, wink)...First, though, we have to get these obstinate men to see reason and make up for lost time!  I still think of Michael as kind of whiny, but when it came to making Brian see things clearly I think he was perfect in that role after Justin.  And he knows the history behind their relationship well, so with Brian's reluctance to seek out professional help I think it's realistic to have Brian ask him for guidance.

Justin, on the other hand, needs to start seeing reason here!  I think it will take someone on his end to help him with that as well, along with some other events that help to open up his eyes.  Thank you so much for reading and leaving me feedback, Susie - that's very motivating to me as a writer and I am very grateful to you.  I'll be updating this one again very soon - hope you continue to enjoy it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 04:38 AM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

I still think Brian should give up on Justin, i don't think a kick to the head from a draft horse would do any good. Justin needs to look at the big picture, he is making 3 people suffer just because his feeling got hurt by one mistake that happened 10 years ago. I do like the way the story is going, loved Brian's talk with the girls on the patio, I want Tiki lights!
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  Well, I'll keep the kick in the head in mind if Justin doesn't straighten up soon.:)  Maybe I'd better start posting my new Tricky story ahead of time so I can introduce some much lighter fare to calm your nerves - LOL! (hope you know I'm just teasing here).  Yes, it was one mistake and I see your point, but it wasn't so much the action as what it signified, I think, but what they lost as a result.  It's more of a trust issue and an honesty issue, which is kind of ironic considering that Justin broke Brian's trust by cheating on him with Ethan.  Hopefully with Michael helping Brian to talk things through, and someone ELSE coming to visit in the next chapter, the boys will start figuring out what in the world their problems are and start hashing things out!  Thank you as always for your comments and for reading, Lori.:)  I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 07:14 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

Where is chapter 13? I want Chapter 13! I demand chapter 13!!!!

So freaking looking forward the united of the boyz :)

 



Author's Response:

Hi, June!  First of all, welcome to the site!  Thank you for reading my story and for your comment; I'm very flattered that you're looking forward to the next chapter!  You will be glad to know that I am working on it right now, and yes, I DO see them finally laying eyes on each other again in Chicago.  I don't see Justin just falling into Brian's arms, though; that is going to take a while.  But both the girls AND Brian - and Jen - all ganging up on him now?  The poor guy won't stand a chance - ha! 

Thanks again for leaving feedback!  I really appreciate that.:)  I should have the next chapter up very shortly.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 01:11 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Oh my god. I didn't take notice of the fact that this story wasn't finished. Please, you got to update. This is so good. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Please, again I say, update!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Tay!  Sorry I inadvertenty dragged you into a WIP, but I'm glad you're reading it anyway, because I got some very lovely comments out of it.:)  Thank you for the wonderful feedback; I've very honored.  I know it was an awful place to leave it at!  But I'm down to just three WIPs right now and am about to update "Heart's Desire."  I DO have an update to "Paper Hearts Killer" that I really do need to do next but this one is coming up right after that.  As with all my stories, I promise to update this regularly and especialy to finish it. 

I know how frustrating it can be to read a story in progress and want to know the end!  But I thank you for reading it anyway and especially for taking the time to review.  I promise to get it updated very soon, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  I'm just now getting to what I consider the pivotal part of the story, so it should be getting quite interesting (wink wink).  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Annev (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 03:12 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

Hi.  I have just read this for the umpteeth time as something keeps nattering at me...namely Michael.  Alex may not be the only obstacle to K&K's efforts to reunite their fathers.  Perhaps Michael has influenced the negative events in B&J's lives.  How many people knew the real reason for the dissolution of their partnership...other than Jennifer...how did Michael know?



Author's Response:

Good Morning, my friend - thanks for the thought-provoking comments and for reading my story.  That is a very good question about Michael.  I won't lie and say he's my favorite character - there was always something about him that grated on my nerves, but I'm trying not to be too harsh on the guy; after all, Brian DID see him as his best friend, although I think toward the end he was leaning less and less on their friendship once Justin came along.  I'm sure from the tone of Michael's voiceover when he said  "That's when HE came along," that there was always some jealousy going on there that Justin had what he could never have for himself.

I don't want to give too much away in the story, because Michael will return at some point, but suffice to say that I don't think Michael has been the biggest supporter of them overall.  Whether Brian disclosed the real reason for their breakup remains to be seen.  Thanks again for reading - I promise to update this as soon as possible.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:52 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Leave it to Brian to figure it out first.

I rushed through my work so that I could take a break to read this. Loved it!

Alex was finally sent packing and the boys will have to talk now that the ruse has been uncovered.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  THANK YOU for the comments!  Yes, I thought Brian should be the one, too; I think it fits his personality.:)  He seems to be a little less trusting and more suspicious and cynical if you will.:)  I will probably break from my story rotation briefly so I can update this one next, although I feel guilty about neglecting the others.:(  (Sigh)  ...But I probably will anyway because of the terrible cliffhanger ending - ack!  Thank you again for reading so many of my stories and for the wonderful comments; I appreciate that so much.:)  *Hug*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 02:38 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

Finally, Brian catches up with the differences in his daughter "Katie" since the camp and Justin seems not so far behind, too, with his "Kaylee". Now the show can go on to the first meet-up of the daddies. Maybe Brian should get a good dose jelaousie, because I don't think Alex'll give up that easy. Because of your story I read the original Kästner's "Das doppelte Lottchen" again. as a filler between your updates ;-)

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Always a delight to hear your thoughts and to know you're following one of my stories.;)  Thank you for the thoughtful comments.  Yes, you may just be right about Alex; I don't think it's going to sit too well with him that he let a pre-teen girl get the best of him.  And I DO so love a jealous Brian, even though in actuality he will have nothing to worry about where Justin's heart is concerned.:) 

Thank you for telling me about Das doppelte Lottchen - I had to go look that up - OMG, there are a lot of similarities there, even the attention to each girls' styles and personalities!  I didn't even know that movie existed.:)  I was only aware of the two "Parent Trap" movies with Hayley Mills and Lindsay Lohan.:)  Now I wish I could speak German!  Actually, I bought a German language DVD in hopes that I can learn at least a little before I attend the convention in June - wish me luck! 

Thank you again for reading and for the comments - I love the feedback!  I'm working hard to finish up two of my shorter stories - "Framed for Christmas" and "Hunka" - so once I do that I can hopefully update the other three WIPs a lot faster.  In the meantime, I hope you will continue to enjoy this one as well as some of my other stories..:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:26 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

Haha.. Of course Brian found out what was happening. Can't wait for the reunion! Is Alex really gone? Please say yes! Another great chapter :o)



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee, my friend!  As always, you're so good about reviewing; thank you for the constant support.:)  Hmm......as irritating as Alex is, I'm not sure I can pass up one more opportunity for Brian to get a glimpse of the would-be suitor....not sure if I can put him back in there in a legitimate way, but I really hate to pass up an opportunity to write about a jealous Brian - ha!  Will have to see.  Right now, though, my main focus is bringing Brian and Kaylee back to Chicago for the fateful, first meeting since the breakup.  I do see that happening in the next chapter.  And I may break from my story rotation to continue with another chapter after updating and/or finishing "Framed" if enough readers want me to, because I know I left it at a terrible cliffhanger! (any takers?)

At any rate, Justin's going to have a hard time standing up against a conspiracy of three now, but I'm sure going to have fun writing about it!  Thanks again for all your support of my stories, Yvee; it definitely helps me to keep writing if I know others are enjoying them (In fact, it's the ONLY reason why I write these - that and my love for these guys!).  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 08:11 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Hey, no fair! and what was katie's reaction?  I scrolled and scrolled and no more words..........

The tooth filling was an absolute genius idea!

Especially ejoyed the 'manipulative little felines…' bit



Author's Response:

(Sigh)...I know - I was up to 14,000 words and after hours of writing it, I unfortunately came to the conclusion that I had to stop somewhere.  I at least wanted to get to the part where Brian finally realizes he has the other daughter with him.  If readers don't mind me holding back a little on updating my OTHER stories, I may just write another chapter of this one first (after updating "Framed."  With it being a Christmas story, I'm really trying to get that one done sooner rather than later...).  As far as Katie's reaction, she's sure to find out that the jig is up soon, but she's not aware just yet that Kaylee's identity has been discovered yet. 

Glad you liked the way their ruse was eventually uncovered; I always thought Brian would be the one to figure it out first.  I hope you will forgive the unfortunate stopping point and will continue to enjoy the story. Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback; that means a lot to me.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 06:26 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

GOT MY PAPERWORK FINALLY DONE, HAD SOME SPARE TIME-VERY RARE AROUND HERE.  STILL HAVE SOME SURGICAL STUDENTS TO CONTEND WITH.  NOT REALLY.  THEY ARE DOING WELL.  SORRY, I DIGRESS.. THIS CHAPTER WAS VERY GOOD.  THESE GIRLS ARE HAVING FUN LIVING LIFE ON THE EDGE.  SOON THINGS WILL BE VERY CONFRONTATIONAL.  I AM INTERESTED TO SEE HOW YOU WILL WRITE THIS REUNION.  ONE OF MY STUDENTS IS A GALE FAN.  ALL SHE TALKS ABOUT IS THE SECRET CIRCLE.  WE HAD A DISCUSSION ABOUT QAF.  SE HAD HEARD OF IT AND HAD SEEN SOME VIDEOS SOMEWHERE.  I TOLD HER, IF INTERESTED, TO CHECK YOU OUT.  HER NAME IS LIN-ANNE IF SHE SHOULD HAPPEN TO REVIEW.



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I'm always honored when you take time out of what must a terribly busy schedule to read my latest chapter and leave feedback for me.  That means so much to me as you know; thank you for that!  Yes, Justin won't just go rushing into Brian's arms, but he IS going to find himself vastly outnumbered by both Brian AND both daughters this time!  That will be a formidable trio to contend with!  But he has been hurt, and with Justin he feels things very deeply, especially with Brian having broken a promise to him; something that he rarely if ever did. 

The girls will get to now turn their attention away from harrassing Alex the interloper and expend their energy toward getting their fathers back together!  It won't be easy, but we all know how it's going to turn out eventually.  I hope in the meantime that you and everyone else enjoys the ride (well, except for that one person who reviewed that obviously has a very different opinion regarding the plot....! (sigh)....)

Anyway, thank you again, my friend, for all the support and for recommending me to your student!  I would love to hear some of the conversations you, lindc, Lee, and the other peeps have about QAF and its actors at the hospital or sit in on one of lindc's readings - LOL!  BTW - I got my tickets today for Randy's play "Red" next month in New Jersey - I'm going on 2/18.  Yes, I know - I'm totally obsessed!  But it's a nice weekend treat for me and a friend, and gives me something to look forward to during the cold, bitter winter days like today (it's presently about 18 degrees - brrrr!!).  Thanks again, Sweetie, and hope you have a wonderful weekend!~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 04:24 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

I am totally loving this story.  What a smart guy Brian is to think about the horses.  I was wondering what dad would figure it out.  Will be waiting to see what transpires in the next chapter.  This meeting is going to be epic, but not too friendly i think.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  Always so great to hear from you, my friend!  You're so wonderful about reviewing and leaving feedback, and I thank you very much for that.:)  I think you're right; their meeting is going to be very emotional for all of them, but Justin is going to be less than receptive at first.  He still feels deeply for Brian, but even now he still harbors some hurt over the promise that Brian broke so long ago.  That being said, with both girls AND Brian on the same team, poor Justin's about to be ambushed!  I'm going to enjoy have Brian pursuing HIM for a change, though.:)

Thank you again for all your kind words, Kym, and for your continuing support; I appreciate that so much.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 06:15 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

Wonderful, but ... pssttt ... you made a big mistake ... the chapter is too short. You forgot to write the reaction of Kaylee * giggles * . Aggrrr need an update NOW ... sorry.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Too short?  Ack!  I think that one was 14,000 words!  I feel like Goldlilocks - some readers probably think it's way too long, others think it's too short - LOL!  Seriously, thank you, my friend for the words of support.:)  I will definitely be featuring more bonding time between father and daughter in the next chapter - it will be continued immediately from the ending of this chapter.  Then it's off to Chicago for the momentous meeting between the two ex-partners.  (Of course we all know they won't be ex-partners forever, though, right?)  Thanks for all your encouragement, Marny; that means so much to me.:)  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 03:00 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

It's been awhile since I've written a review, but never fear i have been definitely reading this story by my fave writer and waiting with anticipation for each chapter which are written brilliantly by the way.  Loving the interaction between Katie and Alex  she's like a mini Brian who ever gets in her way she just moves them by any means necessary.  P.S. Save your typing skills for the great story, these haters who can't think outside the box are not worth your time. 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend.:)  Thank you for taking the time to let me know that you are enjoying the story; the 'fave writer' part makes me very happy.:)  You're very perceptive; I always imagined that if Katie lived with Brian that she would have to inherit some of his tenacity and creativity.:)  What better way to manifest itself than by getting rid of that pesky Alex?  Ha! 

As far as the other reviewer goes, I know I should be the 'bigger person' and just let it slide.  But I guess I take my writing to heart a little too much.  Probably a good reason why I shouldn't  try and publish something - those rejection letters would be real killers - ha! 

Thank you again for the words of encouragement - that means so much to me.:) I will work to get this updated sooner rather than later! *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 12:42 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

GOOD NIGHT NURSE! THIS WAS A GOOD ONE.  NICE CLIFF HANGER.  BRIAN GOT IT.  NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE SPARKS I FEAR.  COULDN'T SLEEP SO THOUGHT I'D SEE WHAT, IF ANYTHING, YOU WERE UP TO.  YIKES!  YOU HAVE BEEN BUSY-THIS WAS A LONG ONE.  I READ SOME REVIEWS FROM YOUR READERS.  MOSTLY GREAT REVIEWS WELL DESERVED.  DON'T PAY MUCH ATTENTION TO THE TROLLS THAT LEAVE STUPID NO CREDENCE REVIEWS.  YOU HAVE MANY GREAT FOLLOWERS THAT GIVE YOU WONDERFUL REVIEWS.  THERE ARE A LOT OF UNKIND PEOPLE IN THE WORLD.  YOUR REBUTTAL WAS BRILLIANT.  WAY TO GO !!  I DUG IT. LUV 2 U.



Author's Response:

Aww...Lee, what would I do without your encouragement, my dear friend?  You're so wonderfully kind to me!  I liked the "Good night, nurse" comment by the way - ha! 

Yes, this one started out relatively slow and short in words and kind of blew up after that - LOL!  And I hated to leave it at that cliffhanger, but I had to stop it at some point.  I may try to update this one a little earlier than normal because of where I had to stop it, though. 

If I remember correctly, you're about to go back to work, right?  Congratulations!  I'm sure you're looking forward to that!  Let me know how it works out for you.  I'm sure everyone is ecstatic over your return, and you'll be arriving in style now, too, with those fancy wheels.:)  Thanks again, Lee, for all the kindness you've shown me; I hope I can continue to write stories that you, lindc, Brian, and all the other 'peeps' will enjoy.  *Big * hug to you, my friend.:)

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 12:26 PM · On: I Know Who You Are

we had a bet going who would guess first.  i won of course.  everyone thought justin was smarter. huh!!  i know how smart our man is-didn't get where he is by not being good at deduction.  i wish you would write another chapter here before joining the campaigners on the trail.  this story is going down as one of our favorites.  whoops, that's crap--all your stories are our favorites.  that being said it's back to work.  have a great weekend, hopefully fingers to keyboard. ha!  lol



Author's Response:

Hello, my special friends!  Don't know what I would do without your ongoing support for my stories; that means more than you'll ever realize.:) 

I hope you got something for winning your bet, lndc - ha!  I never see Justin as being dumber or less perceptive than Brian, but I thought with their characteristics and personalities that Brian would probably be the one that would be more apt to take a step back and view it from a more analytical perspective and realize what was going on.  I plan to pick up exactly where I left off in this chapter in the next one before Brian and Kaylee return to Chicago for the momentous meeting between the boys and to reunite the sisters again.  Then look out, Guys!  The girls' work will just be starting.:)

BTW - I'm going to see Randy in New Brunswick, N.J. in "Red" on February 18 - I am now officially obsessed!  Can't wait to see him in his newest role.  Any chance you might go to see him, too?  Would LOVE to meet all of you one day, but I'm not sure how close you are to that area. 

Anyway, thank you so much for all your kindness.  I'm not sure how I got so lucky to have such supportive readers as you and your friends, but I will be forever grateful for that.  It keeps me going when I begin to doubt myself.:) *Biggest of hugs* to you all.:)  ~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 11:21 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

I read your response to Charle's comment re: twisting your arm to get this story out of rotation just this once (*wink, wink*) for a faster update. So, I just COULDN'T resist adding a little note...

...CONSIDER YOUR ARM TWISTED! (at least by little ole me... LOL!)

Anyone want to join me in this noble effort, huh, loyal Predec2 readers?  :)

Seriously speaking, though, whenever you update this absolutely wonderful story, I'll be oh so happy to read it, as would 99.9% of your fans, Kim. Consider the other 0.01% a statistical anomaly.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I will definitely take that under advisement.:)  I actually would like to at least get these two guys in the same city; then at least the healing can hopefully begin.  Although I fully intend on taking them back to Britin, where all the memories are.  After all, what better place to help bring them back together than where it all began?  And I would enjoy writing more about their past memories together as a family before the breakup.  PLUS - I have some ideas for the girls to do some more scheming to bring them closer together....MUCH closer (hint, hint...).

Thanks again, Vin, for all the kind words; they mean a lot to me and do wonders for my bruised soul.:)

Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 10:50 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

i had to say that i love this story. it's sweet, funny, and so full of love that you can almost feel it coming of the characters on the screen. i hate that someone would bother to write something bad about your wonderful story, but just know that the people who truly matter are those that actually read your work and enjoy it. so my friend, don't let one idiot ruin all the wonderful work you've done.

Author's Response:

You're so sweet to take the time to leave me feedback, my friend, but knowing the type of person you are that doesn't surprise me.:)  Thank you for all your support over the past two years for my stories.  You've been with me practically since Day One and I'm so glad you picked my stories to follow, because not only did I get a wonderful reader as a result, but a great friend as well.  I hope that both will continue for a long, long time to come.  Thank you, Gloria.:)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 10:43 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Perfect! Watching the two girls get (re)-acquainted with their dads and learn more about them and each other - what a hoot - yet so very sweet at the same time! This chapter gave us everything we could want...and then some! I couldn't be more thrilled that Alex is gone - out of the picture more quickly than I expected, but then I always love when you send us  little surprises, especially lovely ones like this! Now, there is nothing but time and distance - and of course the pesky issue of a broken promise and potentially stubborn men short on trust - to keep these soul mates from a reunification to beat all! Please don't make us wait too long - you are the master at cliffhangers!

I am drooling over what will come next, with Brian and Kaylee now able to truly reunite - I feel a need for tissues coming in the next chapter.

 

I also want to thank you for your encouragement and support. I have recently returned to work on my last unfinished story, after renewed but unexpected interest and reviews - imagine that! It is because I know first hand how vital responses from others can be in keeping me motivated and inspired that I do my best to respond to any chapter/story that moves or touches me in any way! For me, it's what feeds the muse - and I can only guess that this is true for others who put so much of themselves into their work and need to know that it is not in vain.

 

...any chance we can get more of this story...out of rotation? I really can't wait! (you know I am so bad at that delayed gratification stuff - some things never change - lol) - although there is unfinished business that I am anxious to read about elsewhere as well...such anticipation!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle - How can I express what YOUR support means to me, too?  You are absolutely correct; I LIVE for positive reinforcement and yes, I am crushed when I get just the opposite.  Perhaps those with tender, easily bruised hearts shouldn't be writers, then.  But I like to think that maybe it translates into a little more emotion in my stories.  Some may not like my style of writing, but it is what it is....

I try hard and I think I do a good job of responding to every review I get, and not just with a 'cookie cutter' response, although I don't begrudge any that DO; I know only too well how time-consuming writing as well as responding to reviews can be.  I have noticed you are so exceptional about always taking the time to provide a thoughtful review not only to me but to others; I can't speak for them, but as for me that means more than you will ever realize, my friend. 

As for changing up the story rotation, it's hard to do (sigh) because there are (hopefully at least!) other readers who are anxious for updates on the other stories.  Recently the only exception I've been making is to the two shorter stories I have going right now ("Hunka" and "Framed"), since finishing up those two will free me to catch up quicker on the longer ones such as this one. 

But it wouldn't be the FIRST time I went against the norm.:)  If I got enough readers to twist my arm, I might just be convinced to at least write the next chapter where the boys finally see each other again after so long.  It might make up for the less-than-glowing response I received for this chapter as well...

Thank you, Charle, for being such a devoted supporter of my stories and for going the extra mile to write such thoughtful reviews.  You are very kind.:)~Kimberly

 

 

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:47 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Love love love this story...please post more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Susie, for reading and for the comments; you're very kind.:)  I promise to do my best to update quicker next time.  I'm trying hard to get two of my stories wrapped up shortly, so that should help as well.  I definitely see the boys meeting up again in the next chapter at last.  I hope you will continue to enjoy this story - it means a lot to me!  Thank you again for takng the time to review, my friend.:)  I appreciate your thoughtfulness.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:32 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

There I was devouring every word and then - a cliffhanger! What a great chapter! And it was wonderfully long - hopefully the next one will be just as long and hopefully you are almost done writing it. Just kidding. Or not!  I love this story - I'm thinking it might be my favorite of your fics......



Author's Response:

(Sigh...) I know; it was a terrible place to end it, wasn't it?  But if it's any consolation I fully expect Brian to whisk Kaylee back to Chicago for the (hopefully) much-anticipated reunion of the two fathers in the next chapter.  Then it will be Justin's turn to be shocked, because as much as he suspects something is off, I don't think he quite figures it out before Brian shows up with daughter #2 in tow.  Then let the fireworks begin, because Justin won't just fall into his arms.  But for me that's the fun of it until they do!

Thank you for taking the time to comment; your encouragement and kind words mean a lot to me and helps me when I start to question my abilities.  It means more to me than you will ever know, and I am very grateful for that.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:19 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

OMG, you leave it here? HERE? You are so cruel! Oh, nooooooooo!

*runs around the kitchen screaming like a petulant 5 year old*

OK, meltdown over.

Great update and a lovely Thursday surprise - thank you! I loved Kalee meeting Debbie and Emmett. I loved her interaction with Brian. I just knew, KNEW he'd be the one to discover the truth - our Brian is no dumb cookie. Not that Justin is dumb, not at all - he's just more trusting, the poor thing.

I loved Katie's silent war with Alex. Her pretending to be sick was genius! When I tried to pull something like that on my mother once I got caught and was punished, so I never tried anything like that ever again. So on the one hand - kudos, Katie! On the other hand - bad, Katie; lying is a very, very bad thing.

I just can't wait for the grand reunion! I suspect it will be epic.

Please, pretty please update soon.

Cheers,

Vin

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you for the encouragement; I really needed that.:)  Yes, I hated to leave it there, but after 14,000 words I had to end it somewhere.  I'll do my best to get it updated quicker this time.  Katie always WAS the most conniving and creative of the two sisters, I think, so it was only fitting that she be the one to divest them of that pest Alex!  I fully expect for the boys to finally see each other again in the next chapter.  I hope you and some of the other readers will continue to enjoy it and will let me know that you do.  It means a lot to me.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave feedback for me.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2012 08:24 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

I dont care how you write this story. it just dosen't fit well that justin gave up one of his daughter’s, sorry thats just me and my comment



Author's Response:

Mmmm....are you by chance the same "anonymous" one as before who called this story mindless?  If so, why are you still reading it?  And why take the time to tear down someone's story when you could be reading some other one that you actually DO like?  You're certainly entitled to your opinion - that's what makes the world go round.  I'm sorry if I'm unable to just let comments such as yours roll off my back like most writers, but I enjoy reading stories as well as writing them, and I choose to take the high road when I don't like a story and not comment at all on it rather than be hurtful to  others.

After spending HOURS writing this ONE chapter, I really appreciate the encouragement!  Please don't bother reading any more of my 'mindless drivel' if you don't care for it and expend your energy on ones that you do like, and maybe have the courage next time to REGISTER as a user rather than hiding behind the veil of anonymity.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Just re-read the whole story again and you are right... *facepalm* I knew that's what he had done... I think I was in deniel because - well - because. :o) I do have high hope for B/J still... By the way, the girls are adorable! I am loving your ability to bring them to life.



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee!  Thanks for letting me know.:)  I can understand, though - it does take me a little while to update sometimes, so it's hard to remember where it's been (sigh)..wish I could update faster.  Maybe once I get the Elvis and Christmas stories done I can do that.:)  And don't worry, BTW, about whether they will eventually get it right or not - that is the only way I can write these boys because I believe they belong together!  So we all know where it will lead eventually.  But for me half the fun is getting to that point!  Thank you for the compliment about the girls.:)  I purposely tried to evoke some of their fathers in both of them.  Of course, that will ALSO be their own undoing in time as one of the boys finally catches on to what's going on.  Thanks again for the feedback and for reading - hope you have a wonderful Christmas!~Kimberly

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

OMG I need more



Author's Response:

Thank you again, Sweetie!  So glad you're enjoying it!  I promise to update this one very soon.:)  Your kind words are so appreciated.:)

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:35 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

Oh I love this.   You have inspired me



Author's Response:

Hi, Latoya!  Thanks so much for your kind words!  I'm so glad you decided to check this one out!  I hope you will continue to enjoy it.  I should be updating it very soon - I am moving quickly toward the boys' reunion, but I want to show Kaylee's interactions with her grandmas as well as Deb and Emmett, especially.  Also, Katie needs to try and put Alex in his place!  Soon, though, one of the girls will trip themselves up and they will be discovered.  Thank you for reading this one!  I am very appreciative.:)

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

"But if someone were to dig deeper, they would see the fine cracks around the surface, the spark that had gone out of his life when Justin had left, the inability he had now to allow anyone else’s heart to pierce his, except for his daughter anyway."

I'm happy the twins are trying to put them back together. They are miserable apart. Brian realized he made a huge mistake and has paid his penance.

I love that you had Justin playing the piano and singing in this chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks so much for reading that huge chapter! I'm very glad that you liked it.  I could see Justin singing and playing the piano; as an artist, he seemed interested in all sorts of cultural arts, including dancing and singing, and we all know what a beautiful voice Randy has in real life, so I could certainly see it as plausible anyway.:)  I think it's time to put these two boys back together, don't you?  I know the girls certainly do!  Thanks again for taking the time to comment - you're so consistent about doing that on a lot of my stories, and I really am grateful for that.:)  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.:)  The girls will have a little more groundwork to do before one of the boys finally realizes what's going on and moves to reunite all of them together.  I hope you'll stay tuned in the meantime.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:47 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

That was sweet! I can imagine the "other side" is difficult for the girls. I wonder which twin will crack first? I hope it's Kaylee, because once Kaylee tells Brian about Alex, he will up to Chicago like that! Because we all know Brian Kinney does not lose!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks so much for tackling that super-long chapter!  It was long even by my standards.:)  I'm so glad you're still reading along.  The twins are already finding it hard to keep up their charade as they realize it's not as easy as they thought.  And I tend to agree with you - I kind of like the idea of Brian going all 'caveman' and rushing up to Chicago to pursue his ex-partner back into his life (yum...).  You might just be on the right track (wink, wink).  But I'm not sure if it will be a case of one of the twins cracking or simply slipping up and being discovered.  I hope you will stay tuned - the reunion is coming up in the not-so-distant future but not before I have a little fun with Kaylee's reunion with Debbie and Emmett specifically and Katie's goal of making Alex's life miserable - LOL!  Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend.:)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Wonderful as usual..Excellent writing!....each father is unique in their own way yet they fit together as a puzzle.

I think I should start reading completed work only since I am confusing myself. I almost ask abt Rob, only to realise that's another story. Somehow, I thought the romancer's name was Rob (Alex)....sorry....

Look forward to when the girls reveal themselves ....



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear - (Sigh)....I know - I'm sorry to have more than one WIP going at once.  I keep telling myself I'm going to eventually finish them up to where I only have one going at a time, but the ones (most of them) I'm writing right now are so detailed that it will be some time before I can get to that point.  And I can't let Christmas go by without at least writing a short story about the boys, but I'm trying hard not to post it until I get it either completely done or close to it so everyone isn't waiting for the updates to it.  At least I do hope I do a good job of updating each story regularly rather than taking months in between, so maybe that eases the pain just a little over having to wait.  I can certainly understand wanting to only read the completed ones, though, but I hope that won't wind up losing you as one of my readers.:)

At least you're confusing Alex with one of my OTHER story characters (in case you haven't figured it out, Rob is in the Elvis story I'm writing where he has the crush on Justin), so I'm flattered that if you're confusing it at least you're doing it with one of my other stories and not someone else's - ha!  Thank you so much for your kinds words, my friend, I am very appreciative that you took the time to do that.  I promise to update this just as soon as I can and I hope you will continue to enjoy it.:)~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Now I am very curious to find out what Brian did to cause the split; I mean, I really just went through every possibility and I can't think of anything. But then again, Justin and Brian said he broke a promise, sooo THAT is huge considering Brian never broke a promise to Justin (or anyone for that matter). Well, thanks for the update and let's get another one soon :o) This is getting better and better!



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee! Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.  Actually, if you go back to the second chapter (I think that's the right one), it does explain what Brian did to make Justin break off with him.  Don't want to spoil it for you, but hopefully you will see what I mean if you go back and check.:) And of course, it will have a big impact on any possible reconciliation because it points toward an issue of trust, something that Justin will have to learn to do again with Brian if they are to reunite. 

Thank you again for all the kind words; I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  I promise to get this updated again just as soon as I can.:)

 

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

What a great chapter! I suspect that Justin is very close to putting it all together....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you kind words and for reading!  Yes, I think both guys are beginning to figure out that SOMETHING is wrong, but they just can't pinpoint it yet.  I mean, what would be the odds that both girls would meet each other?  Of course, they had just a little help, which will be revealed in time.:) 

Thanks again for leaving me feedback and for tackling that very long chapter!  I promise to get this updated soon.:)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Well, I am not surprised, but I love absolutely everything about this chapter. The descriptions are like snapshots of everything that is happening, and the emotions for all four of them show clearly. I have been anxiously waiting for a new chapter here for days now, and this one certainly did not disappoint! I think by the time these two find their way back to each other I will be just a blubbering pool of tears, so strong is the anticipation! I don't know how I will bear the wait, but I have a feeling that wait is exactly what I will have to do - as it seems more there may be alot more to tell before we reach that point.

Excellent writing - thank you so much for this story.

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Aww...thanks, Charle!  I always love to hear your thoughts.:)  I'm glad you liked this extremely long chapter!  It was long even by MY typical standards.:)  I don't think the girls realized just how difficult it might be to impersonate each other.  Despite being twins, they still have some differences that will eventually be their undoing.  As you mentioned, though, as much as I would LOVE to just move straight to the boys' reunion with each other, it's going to take me a little more time before I get there.  I want to show Kaylee's reactions, for example, to Emmett and Debbie among the 'gang,' as well as Katie's battle against Alex.  She is going to continue to make it very hard for the man to make any headway regarding his plan to get Justin to marry him. 

Rest assured, though, that I will do my best to make the boys' reunion an explosive one eventually (in more ways than one!).  Thanks again for the comments, Charle.:)

~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Boy!  what a chapter.  I guess that's why I love your stories they are long, descriptive and so evolving.  I don't think this charade is going to last much longer.  I would have thought by now they would have been a little suspicious.  Cats are very intuitive about people.  they may be twins but have different scents.  Any way this is a remarkable adaptation story of the main one with different little twists here and there.  So much fun to read and waiting for the slip-ups to come.  Good job, you are the story master or is it mistress ha ha!



Author's Response:

Awww...You're so kind, Kym - Thanks for the comments, my friend!  I like that - 'story mistress' - ha!  That WAS a long chapter, even for me!:)  Yes, the boys will continue to get suspicious - they know something is up but they can't quite figure it out yet.  There will be some more slip-ups on the girls' part coming up and eventually one of the fathers will figure it out (don't want to give too much away yet, though, but I have a specific one of them in mind and a certain way I want to do it.:)


Thanks again for reading so many of my stories, Kym - that means so much to me!  I will be updating all of my stories regularly, and hope to have the first part of my Christmas story posted soon.  I hope you will enjoy that as well.:)

 

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Happy Tuesday to me! Another chapter of "The Parent Trap"! Yes, yes, yes!

OK, now that I am done celebrating, onto my review... I loved this chapter - the interaction between the girls and their dads was awesome, the conversations between them were great. There were a number of places that either made me laugh or brought a lump of emotion to my throat. It was just great!

The only thing that I don't like is that I'll have to be super-duper patient until the next chapter, because my impatient patootie wants the next chapter right the f**k now! LOL! I'm sorry, but I really, really, really want to see how it all progresses, which of the boys figures out their daughters' secret first and I CANNOT wait for their reunion. I don't know how I am going to survive the wait time....swoons...

OK, I'm back... lol! Maybe you would consider writing a couple more chapters of this story before going back to your regular rotation? Pretty please, with sugar on top? Possibly?  :)

Again, loved it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  (Sigh...) You're killing me here!  And to think I'm considering posting a Christmas fic, too - I must be out of my mind!  LOL!  You're so sweet to want some more of this; that makes me very happy to hear.:)  I'll think about it.  I'm always torn between wanting so badly to continue while I'm on a roll and not wanting to disappoint the other readers who may be waiting for another update in one of the other stories.  It's like being in a candy store and not knowing which treat to eat first!  If only one of these stories showed an ending soon - the only one even near that place is the Elvis story, at least I hope.  Of course, you know how I can get.  My 'two-part' Thanksgiving went on for five rounds - yikes! Thanks so much for your kind words, Vin.  Wherever I wind up you can rest assured I will be diligently working on an update to one of these!:)  Take care, my friend.:)


 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

a wonderfully long one. loved it.  i was afraid you were under the weather-but i guess you are super busy as are all of us peeps.  i just got back from another hospital--i was loaned out to give updates on some procedures.  i had to write up my findings and my action plan and results.  i am not very good at the writing bits but better on ojt.  i will have to read this one when i get back to work. bb and lee will be waiting for their updates on their favs.. no pressure ha ha! i, of course i am waiting for the latest christmas story.  i see a new friend and worker has joined our ranks.  jo-ellen is a character, so funny and is loving your stories.  need a nap. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Yes, thank you SO much for all the recommendations for my stories!  I can't believe the number of your co-workers you have steered my way, and I will be forever grateful for that.  It's really weird how small a world it can be at times; Jo-Ellen was telling me she had gone to see Randy in "Tommy," too and she had had a similar experience about having to shave her brother's hair like I had portrayed in "Trust."  Such a small world!!  Thanks again for all your support.  Next up is Lee's favorite - the dirty world of politics!  I'm debating whether to post the first part of my Christmas story first.  I may do that soon.  I have it written, but I was hoping to get a little further along first.  Will have to see how it goes.  I do have some extra time off during the Christmas holiday, so that should help my writing schedule somewhat - keep your fingers crossed!  Now go get some much-needed rest; thanks so much for all your support.  Say hi to al the 'peeps' for me - you're all very special.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

* makes happydance * finally an update and such a wonderful one. Love those two girls with their "big" mistakes. I'm glad Justin admits that he still loves Brian. Please don't make me wait another month for the next chapter * is begging *.

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  (Sigh...)  I know - I have triple the number of students this year from last and it seems like all I do is grade papers - yuck!  It has seriously cut into my writing time.  But on the positive side, this chapter at least was SUPER long, even by my standards!  I will try my best to update a little sooner.  I do try to update before they fall off the 'most recent' category on the site, but I do wish I could update faster.  At least in the next chapter I think we will see a definite progression of the boys' eventual meeting again.   But first there's a pesky boyfriend and some grandmother reunions to get through first.  Thanks as always for the kind words, my dear.  *Big hug* back to you, too.:) 

Reviewer: Taire (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

I wan't sure about this story when I first starting reading it, but I love it.  Update soon

please. Can' wait until the guys figure it all out. :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Taire!  Thanks for giving this one a try.  I think some readers are a little hesitant sometimes to read a story based on a movie for fear it will follow it too closely, but hopefully I have changed the story around enough to keep it interesting and unique.  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.  I am about to work on the update to "Hunka, Hunka Burning Love," which is next in the story rotation, but then this story will be up right after that.  I hope you will continue to follow it.  The next chapter should be a mix of Katie's attempts to torment Justin's boyfriend, Alex, along with the girls trying to get acclimated to their new surroundings without being detected.  Thanks again for giving this story a try!  That makes me very happy.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 02:18 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

Just before the last scene with the cats I wondered, if there wasn't some puddle or so in the original story from Erich Kästner, who was shy to his new playfriend. It's good that both Justin and Brian have a feeling, that something isn't right - it shows their deep connection to their daughters. I think not only Katie and Kaylee have their work cut out, Jennifer and Debbie will have to help, too.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - I'm so sorry I didn't respond to your review earlier - I must have overlooked it!  Thank you for reading and commenting.:)  Yes, I think it may be harder than the girls thought to toally fool their other fathers, but it will take a while until they are discovered, as neither father is really contempating that possibility. Thank you again for your thoughtful comments - I will be updating this one soon.:)

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:32 PM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

"She looked over her shoulder to see Alex scowling at her before, realizing she was watching him, he pasted a more neutral expression on his face and opened the back door to enter the SUV."

"The only question would be how quickly she could find a way to get rid of the guy so the man that her father really loved could replace him.  In her mind and in her sister’s, there was no question of if; it was when."

It is going to be fun reading about Katie and Alex in a game of wills. 

Brian's way of dealing with the summer camp situation was totally different from Justin's. I can see where Katie gets her tenacity.

I can see that Katie and Kaylee have their work cut out for them in trying to fool their fathers.

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment.:)  I agree - I think despite the girls' careful planning, it's going to be hard to completely change their personalities no matter how much they try.  It will be interesting to explore their slip ups and see just who figures it out the soonest; or will the girls finally crack and tell one of them?  I'm going to have fun with Katie scheming against Alex while Kaylee becomes acquainted with her grandma Debbie and Brian's friends, especially Emmett.:)  Thanks so much for your feedback, my friend; I promise to update this as soon as possible.:)

Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 08:55 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

SORRY FOR THE LATE REVIEW.  I HAVE TWO MORE SURGICAL RESIDENTS TO COPE WITH-WHICH MEANS EVEN MORE TEDIOUS PAPERWORK-BUT WHAT ARE YA GONNA DO.  LINDC READ THIS TO US A FEW DAYS AGO AT LEE'S.  IT'S A VERY CUTE STORY.  I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THE ORIGINAL TIL "THE BOSS"TOLD ME ABOUT IT. I THINK THE BREAKING POINT WILL BE SOON.  WONDER WHO WILL GUESS FIRST. WE HAVE A POOL GOING WITH THE 6 OF US AS TO WHO IT WILL BE.  THE LOSERS HAVE TO TAKE THE WINNERS OUT TO EAT AND GO DANCING.  THAT WILL BE SPECIAL DON'T YOU THINK.  I HAVEN'T DANCED FOR A VERY LONG TIME. GOT TO GET BACK TO MY PAPERWORK AND CATCH SOME ZZZZZS.



Author's Response:

HI, Brian!  What a delight to hear from you, my friend!:)  I LIKE this bet, but now I feel like I'm under pressure to deliver - LOL!  Maybe you'll get a chance to go rent the old Hayley Mills version - I prefer that one to the one with Lindsay Lohan.  And I always thought Maureen O'Hara was beautiful.  Every time I think of Lindsay, though, I'm afraid all I think about are her jail stints - ha!  Well, you at least have a 50-50 shot at whether Brian or Justin figures it out first.  I know, but I'm not telling - pffftt!!  LOL!  After that, you'll have to bet where they first get 'better reacquainted' so to speak, because you know it's going to have to happen at some point.  Will it be in Chicago at Justin's brownstone?   Brian's loft?  Britin?  Babylon in the "VIP" room?  Or somewhere else altogether?  So many choices, so little time - LOL!

As always, thanks my friend for reading and reviewing.  I think whether you lose the bet or not you will all undoubtedly have a great time together.  You all sound like such a wonderful group of people - I hope one day I get the chance to meet you.  Take care and talk to you soon - tell everyone I said hello and to have an extra dance on me.:)  Go get some much-deserved rest, my friend.:)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 04:08 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

when will they finally meet??? I can't wait anymore



Author's Response:

Hi, Rose....(Sigh)....I know, I'm as anxious as you are.  But I think I need another chapter or two of setting it up before I do.  I think the girls need to be better planted in their temporary homes and need to be a cataylst for the boys thinking more about why they split up and whether it may be time to change that.  I think they have a right to know more of the back story, too.  And I want Kaylee, especially, to have a little more time with their grandmas and Brian's friends, especially Emmett and Debbie. I'm hoping you don't mean you won't still be reading - I'd hate to lose you.:)  Thank you for reading so far and for commenting, though - it is so rewarding to get feedback that tells me readers are enjoying what I write.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

The father daughter reunion had some tears flowing.....imagine when the four of them finally meet.....

Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your kind words - I'm happy that you're enjoying it.:)  I promise to update this one soon.  Thanks again for taking the time to comment.:P)

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 11:51 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

And the girls get to see how the other half lives! Katie may want to tone it down in her hatred towards Alex if she doesn't want Justin to get any more suspicious than he is. And Brian knows something's different. Wonder which dad will figure it out first? Or which twin will crack first? Can't wait for more, darling!



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  Always a pleasure to hear from you.:)  Yes, it will be interesting to see how one of the boys finds out exactly what's going on; will one of the girls actually tell them, or will they have to finally realize what's right in front of their noses and put two and two together somehow?  Hmmm.... I have a feeling Katie may have a hard time trying to maintain her civility toward Alex the Interloper (I love that description - ha!).  And it will be fun to describe Katie's meeting with Emmett and Debbie especially.;) 

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment, my friend.  I will update this again soon.:)

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

This version of this story is wonderful.  I rented the original to see it again.  It has been a while as Haley is menopausal now I think.  I will certainly look forward to how this pans out.  I know we are supposed to hate Alex, you certainly have achieved that.  He will be history soon--right? As they say=the best is yet to come.  Are you writing any holiday stories in the near future?  I would really like another Christmas story.  Soirry, I'm just a sucker for the holidays.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Hi, Kym!  Loved the comment about Haley being "menopausal" now; it's half-funny and half-scary to realize that - yikes!  I still prefer the original version myself; I always loved Hayley Mills in this as well as in Pollyana.    Poor Alex doesn't really stand a chance, does he?  But that doesn't mean that Justin will go rushing into Brian's arms right away; someone's going to have to 'persuade' him - we should ALL be so lucky!:) 

Funny you should ask about holiday stories; as a matter of fact, I AM writing a Thanksgiving story right now.  I'm probably about half-way done so I hope to have it posted soon.  I love to write Christmas stories with the boys - I think I've got three of them so far, but one isn't posted over here at the moment yet - so I likely will find a way to write another Christmas story before it gets here.  (Hard to believe it's less than 2 months away - wow!).  If I can add a little to my one story that I don't have over here - "The Christmas Surprise" - I'll probably post it here as well eventually.:)

Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words, Kim!  Reviews are what make me happy.:)  Thank you for taking the time to do that.:)  I promise to update this one soon.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: stacy (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:15 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

I am very much enjoying this story.  Your writing is amazzzzing!!. Can't wait for more chapters to see how you work your magic.  I especially love the part about the cats.  I have two and they can certainly tell by the scent who is who.  Great read.



Author's Response:

Hi, Stacy!  I'm so glad you checked in!  Thanks for the heads up on the cats; I wasn't aware of that.:)  I love all animals, but I've mainly had dogs throughout my life.  I have some other ideas in mind as to how the girls will not be quite identical, despite their best intentions, which will help one of the boys eventually figure out what exactly is going on.  In the meantime, I want to give the girls time to get to know their other father a little better, and I have to give Katie enough time to continue to torment "Alex and Interloper" - LOL! 


Thank you so much for all the kind comments, my friend!  They mean so much to me.:)  I promise to update this just as soon as I can.:)  Thanks again.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

what a great chapter.  we are at  Lee's.  just got back from a great dinner.  it's helping him to sort of get back in the mainstream.  we are really enjoying this one.  my guess it won't be too long til someone figures out what's going on.  the cats know --that's gonna let the cat out of the bag-- sorry bad pun.   couldn't resist--my bad!!  lol



Author's Response:

Lol!  Hi, my friend!  Give my best to Lee and Brian for me - it's so great that Lee's recuperation is moving right along, but I'm not surprised. He's a fighter! 

As far as the story goes, I, of course, will definitely have one of the boys eventually figure out what's going on, but not for a little while yet.  I want the girls to get more familiar with their new surroundings, and I think they still need to find out more about why their fathers split up in the first place.  It will be interesting, though, to continue to explore their differences and see how Kaylee, for example, interacts with Brian's friends such as Emmett and Debbie.  That should be fun to write!   

Tell Lee that "My Heart's Desire is technically up next; I started on the next chapter, but I haven't gotten too far yet; I got waylaid on a (new) short story for Thanksgiving I may finish first.  It shouldn't be too long (famous last words, right? LOL!).  As soon as I finish it up, I'll get right back on his favorite story.  Thanks as always for reading and for all your support, my friends.  And a double thank you for all the new readers you've sent my way!  You're incredible!:) 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 06:07 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

Not going to lie... A few tears managed to escape. Loved the update! Alex has no idea what he's in for, let alone Brian/Justin... lol.



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee, my dear; thanks so much for reading and especially commenting.:)  I really appreciate that.  I'm glad this chapter moved you.:)  I imagine once the boys really understand which girl they have, they will be emotional about it, too.  I'm going to build up to the guys realizing that they have their daughter with them, as well as Alex's trials and tribulations with "Katie" before the two boys meet again.  I can guarantee when they do that it will be quite an explosive climax eventually - figuratively as well as literally! - but I still think Brian will have a ways to go to convince his ex-partner that they belong together.  Thanks so much for reading and for all the comments you've given me on my stories - you're very kind.:)  I'll get this updated soon. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

I think the next chapter will be really really funny. Hope the girls don't reveal themself. Hmm thinking of the grandmothers .. hope they don't mistake in the names of the girls.

 

Ohhh my ...  If you do go to Cologne, you can come stay with me for the week in my hotel room ... you are so nice. I really don't know if I go, it's so expensive. And for you even more expensive, you have to buy a plane ticket!!!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, dear - don't worry; I don't plan on them tipping their hand too soon -I'm going to have too much fun playing with the boys' minds first!  I think the grandmas, especially Debbie, will have to work at keeping it a secret, but I think they'll succeed as they think of the bigger picture and what the girls are trying to do. 

BTW - I'm serious about the invitation; let me know.  I won't make actual plans until later in the year, but I was checking airplane flights and some of them already say there're only EIGHT seats left for some of them, and this is for next JUNE!  Unbelievable!  I may have to come over on a freight ship instead!  Ha!  At any rate, I hope we have a chance to meet somehow.


Thanks so much for your comments, my friend.  Big *hug* to you - have a great week!:)

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