Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:55 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Re-enter our villian.....



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yes, but his reappearance will be short-lived.  I think he's caused enough havoc - that's the twins' job - ha! Thanks again for reading this one, Bob.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 07:07 PM · On: For Our Daughter

:)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 06:11 PM · On: Kaylee's Accident

Good cliffie followup.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - glad to see you still reading.:)  Hopfully I'll have the next chapter up soon.  I'm working on it right now.;)  Thank you for reding this one and for all the comments.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness

You do Debbie very well.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 03:23 PM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Maybe his best friend can help.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 02:32 PM · On: Breaking Point

Brian surprised me.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 01:33 PM · On: A Not So Fond Walk Down the Primrose Path

Very interesting chapter.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 01:00 PM · On: Preparing for Dinner

I am curious what the girls are planning.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Back To Where It All Started

The pace increases a little.....



Author's Response:

Well, you know my writing style well enough by now to know I don't do 'fast' when it comes to pacing.;)  Hopefully you can bear with me while I trudge through it, though.:)  Glad to see you still reading along.  Thank you again for all the comments, Bob.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Tightening the Emotional Screws

And the beat goes on.....



Author's Response:

Well, you wouldn't expect me to make it easy, would you?  LOL!  BTW, if you're ever in need of a laugh and haven't read it yet, go over and check out "Roughing It," where Brian goes camping with Justin.  (I know - shameless plug!  If only I could have written THAT for the summer challenge!).

 

Thanks for all the comments, my friend.  You know how much that means to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 05:29 AM · On: An Undeniable Hunger

Ain't that special!

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 03:43 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Ah Ha!

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Canon memories.....

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 12:15 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Justin couldn't stand the heat in the kitchen, LOL. I'm with the girls on this one. The two are going to go hot and heavy as much as possible. They might as well shorten the commute.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  So good to see you reading this latest chapter.:)  "Shorten the commute" - ha!  Love that!  Well, all I can say is that by the time the girls get through, the 'quaint, cozy little' carriage house might not seem quite as ideal.;) 

 

I'm working on the next part of this right now, so I should have it up shortly.  Hope you enjoy what the girls come up with.;)

Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sandra; I really appreciate that as always.  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 11:36 PM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

Cats are smart.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 10:46 PM · On: The Other Father and Sizing up the Enemy

The best laid plans.....

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 08:42 PM · On: Expulsion Can be a GOOD Thing!

Twins!



Author's Response:

More power to create havoc and turn their dads' lives upside down!:)

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 07:49 PM · On: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed

Bonding and ploting.....

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 07:05 PM · On: It is Too Late?

Wow!

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 05:52 PM · On: Twin Conspiracy

More fun since I never saw the movie.



Author's Response:

Well, hello there!  Aren't you sweet, reading this one!  I hope you continue to enjoy it, dear friend.:)  I'm heading toward the end of it, but you probably know I have a hard time letting go of one, so my "one or two more chapters" is quickly evolving into more like three or four.  Thank you for the comments.  BTW - my laptop seems to be behaving itself (at least for the time being). Still don't know what the problem was with it, but for now doing okay - thanks for trying to help me the other day.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 04:54 PM · On: An Astonishing Discovery

Super how you brought them together.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 03:39 PM · On: Camp Orientation

The build up.....

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 02:53 PM · On: Camping Conspiracy

Love your writing.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 02:21 PM · On: Divergent Lives

Outstanding beginning.

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 03:32 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Oh this is exciting! I am looking forward for what the girls are planning. I really enjoy reading this story Kim. Thanks for the update. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  So good to see your comments.;) Thank you for reading and for the encouragement.:)  I'm very happy that you're still enjoying this story.  The next part should be up very soon, and the girls will be coming up with some creative ways to hopefully bring their dads closer together in the same house (they are VERY impatient - ha!).  I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story!

 

*Hugs* back to you, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2013 02:31 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

i really like this story, but i wish that everyone wouldn't look at justin's actions at the momemt as unreasonable because i am completely on his side. brian cheated on him after they had agreed to be monogamous and had two daughters - it is fine that he wants to take it slow. but i do love this story anyway, it's really well written.



Author's Response:

Hi, Vicky! Thank you for reading this chapter and for the comments.  I'm glad you are satisfied with my taking their reconciliation a little more slowly.  I know most readers want an easy, quick reunion between the boys, but I tend to agree with you that there are good reasons for making sure that they are doing the right thing this time.  Of course, the girls are as anxious as everyone else, though, for them to be back together as a family, so they will be doing their best to push them in the right direction.  I think there needs to be a little more balance between desire and common sense, though.

Thank you for the comments; I'm glad that you are enjoying the story!  I will have another part posted soon.  I hope you continue to enjoy it until it concludes.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:36 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I can't wait to see what crazy plan the girls have in mind. I don't think anything less than a brain transplant will help Justin. When will he come to his senses and realize he can trust Brian? I hope the cats aren't too stress by all this moving about and start to pee all over the place. You know how cats can get. Nothing worse than a cat with problems. I can also see the girls are going to have some drag out fights soon. Once Brian and Justin really reconnect the girls will have nothing to bond over, wonder which one will be the real nasty one and start things. I'm sure they will also start to hate their fathers for making them lead such different lives for so long. I'm betting Kaylee turns to drugs and hanging out at tattoo joints, sure her first one might be cute but before long she'll go dark and gruesome and she'll be designing a headless horse for her back and some skulls on her neck...but in a girly way, probably done in pink ink with small flowers peeping out of the eye sockets. Katie will either join a cult or become an unwed teen mom and wind up hooking on the streets to pay for diapers. If she ever does find her way to therapy it will all come down to the way Justin treated the whole family. Thanks for another amazing chapter, my favorite part was Gus eating the yummy breakfast, maybe because I haven't eaten yet today and now I'm dreaming about that, well minus the icky syrup.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lori, just when I think you can't possibly top your previous comments, you do.  You must live in a really imaginative, amazing world - ha!  I was reading this while sitting with my mother, who was awaiting cataract surgery today, and trying my best not to crack up over your comments (she has NO idea what sort of stories I write, and trust me, she would NOT understand - LOL!).  It was hard not to laugh out loud, though.  I love your amazing, warped, imaginative mind! 

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope the girls' hijinks lives up to your expectations in the next part.  I feel a heavy burden to do that now - ha!  Thanks for reading and for your comments, Lori; I still say you need to write a comedy story for the boys.  I would definitely read it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 07:43 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I don't see Justin and Kaylee staying too long in the carriage house, though having it for his artwork will work out well.  Will Brian and Justin stop pussy footing around now that the cats are in Pittsburgh?  I hope so!  Love reading how Grandma Jen fits in so well with Brian and Gus as well as Katie.  Looking forward to the next installment of this tale.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  Pussyfooting around - ha!  Love that.:)  Well, the girls will be giving them a definite push in the right direction in the next chapter - the little schemers just can't stay away from their attempts to bring everyone together in the same house.  Look out, Daddy!  Poor Justin.;)  (But it's for his own good.....!). 

I'm working on the next part of this now, so I should have it up very soon. Thank you again for reading and for bearing with me as I update it.  This story WILL be finished just like all my others.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:38 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

It's tough sleeping alone with the desire still inside.  I hope they figure that out soon.  :)

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for the comments.  Yes, I think the boys are quickly going to realize that coming up; and the girls' scheming is only going to make things worse (or better, depending on your viewpoint - ha!).  I should have the next part up very soon.  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:17 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Uh oh! Those girls are going to cause even more trouble? I hope they're more successful this time and nobody ends up at the doctor's. tAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  I promise not to generate any more physical harm.  Their scheming will be more along the lines of pranking.  All I can say is, poor Justin - ha!  But it will turn out to be for his - and Brian's - good.;)  I should have the next part up soon, since I've already started on it. Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:17 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I hope we’ll get to see a scene between the girls and Daphne before the story is over. She is their mother and has a good relationship with both of them so it’s strange that while Jennifer has been over to see them Daphne has not especially since one of her daughters was recently injured.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa - yes, I intend to have Daphne show up in the next chapter, as a matter of fact.  I, too, think it's time she come for a visit with them.  She has been involved with both of their lives growing up - and they are aware of who she is.  But despite her busy schedule, I think it's time to reintroduce her, and I think Justin could use someone to talk to about Brian.  Thank you reading and for the thoughtful comments; I appreciate your support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 09:12 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Nice chapter! butt we are waiting for the steamy one. You know how we are. I have been watching Randy at the con 2010. I know it's old, but it is very informative and he is so cute. I have been reading a few things here but find some stories a little too weird for my taste. Off tonite so have been reading here and there. Adam will be performing July 3 here in San Diego, hopefully I can go-good lord willing and the creeks don't rise. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  I promise to get to the 'steamy' parts coming up.;)  You know that is inevitable with these boys!  I assume you're talking about Randy in Paris?  I remember at the con in Cologne, someone asked him if he would say something in French.  Yummy!  I wish I knew enough French to write a short story about Justin learning to speak French to Brian. I think that would be quite interesting - and get a certain brunet quite horny, too.;)

If you're looking for other stories to read, may I suggest one if you haven't already read it?  It's a period piece, but it's one my favorites:  "Five Coins."  I just loved that story for some reason. And have you read Snow's "Alien?"  Those are two that come to mind.  I'm sure there are a lot more, though.  Oh, and I wrote an RPS story about Gale and Randy and posted it yesterday on my LJ.  Not sure if you're into that - or if I will post it here - but thought I would mention it in case you wanted to check it out.:)  It's relatively short (for a change!).

Hope you get to go see Adam.  Looks like he really puts on an amazing show.  I saw him on "American Idol" not too long ago with one of the other contestants, and it was great! 

I hope to get the next part of this story up very soon. And Michal tells me she's working on the next chapter of "Father, Son, and the Blond," so hopefully we'll have that updated next week as well. And I see a new Tricky story - and maybe a summer fan fic story - on the horizon, too, if I can get to it.  Ack!  Thanks for all your support as always, lindc.  You and the peeps are very special to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2013 04:51 AM · On: Camping Conspiracy

I have only just started reading this story, but I can not forgive comment right now. I am very happy movie The Parent Trap and story has definitely delivered. Jennifer is clever grandmother. I hope you will be a happy ending like the one in the movie! :D I love happy endings. Tomorrow to continue reading. Thank you. :) Later.



Author's Response:

Hi, Saskya!  I'm so thrilled that you have chosen to read this story!  I do hope that you enjoy it. And yes, it WILL have a happy ending; do not worry.:) I'm working on the next part right now.  It's getting closer to the end, but I still have probably a few more chapters to go. Thank you for reading so far and for the comments!  I will be posting an update to this story very soon, and it WILL be finished just like all my other stories.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 11:16 PM · On: Beginning Anew

I don’t know why, but summary of the chapter alone made my heart squeeze. In those words – ‘Justin returns home’ – there is so much meaning… only now I can feel that their terrible, painful separation has really ended. No more hurt, no more killing uncertainty and hopeless hopes. Finally the entire family is reunited, and now it is for forever. Even though you mentioned some angst still waiting for them (and I can’t wait to see it!) – it’s already obvious that nothing will really break Brian and Justin apart again. There may be serious fights, misunderstandings and mutual offences, but nothing that will destroy love those wonderful two men have.  

I *love* the moment when Justin came home and saw that beautiful romantic scene, as opposed to what he had expected. Brian has really changed, and now he is constantly proving this. Maybe their separation, albeit how unbearable it was, did something good – now Brian cherishes absolutely every moment he has with Justin, and Justin is more determined to make things work than ever before. Finally I feel like they really moved on, that they are ready to start everything anew. It’s a precious feeling after everything they’ve been through, I wasn’t sure I would be able to really feel it.

I love that Brian is still jealous of Alex – maybe not only as of a man who had relationship with Justin, but of someone who was with him when Brian wasn’t, someone who will forever remain some part of Justin’s past that Brian knows nothing about. I guess it will always remain this way, he won’t ever be able to let go of those many long years he and Justin spent apart. The evening they shared was so beautiful and hot! I always enjoy seeing how much they two still want each other after so many years, how strong their passion is still is – and always will be. I wonder, when will they return to the level of intimacy they had before? When condoms won’t be needed any more? I understand it’s too early now, some things still need to be resolved, but I already anticipate this incredible moment. I think Brian is more than ready to do this right now, but Justin is another matter. It’s still difficult for him, and I understand him completely. I still feel slightly uncomfortable and angry when I re-read some parts of this fantastic story and remember once again what Brian did - I know it’s pathetic and even cruel to continue berating him for that, but I can’t help it, this anger is irrational and uncontrollable. Of course Brian changed and did – still does! – everything he can to prove that to Justin, so I’ll just wait impatiently to see where all this is going :) I think the remains of anger will finally be gone only in the very end of this saga, but it’s making me even more excited and intrigued!

Thank you! I love this story deeply and dearly, I cherish it as much as Brian cherishes Justin. I can’t wait for the next chapter!       

 

P.S. I’m sorry I still didn’t get to ‘Tame the Wild Stallion’ – I read all new chapters (and the last one was *so* long-awaited, beautiful and simply incredible!), but I can’t get enough time to re-read everything from the first chapter so to remember all Brian/Justin history and other details. Exams are killing me. Just wanted to let you know, I’m *very* much in love with this story, and also can’t wait for more! 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin!  I just realized I never responded to your review.  I'm so sorry about that; I overlooked it.  I don't want you to think I don't appreciate each and every word you write.;)  I lvoe hearing your insights into each of the characters, as I think you do a fantastic job of analyzing them.  I'm about to begin the update to this one, BTW, as soon as my beta return my latest chapter of "My Heart's Desire," which is done and will be posted soon.  Not sure if I can conclude this story in one more chapter - I'm thinking probably two - but I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story, along with "Tame the Wild Stallion," which will be next to update.

 

Thank you again for all the wonderful comments, Katrin!  I am back from the QAF con in LA now, and can hopefully get back on track more.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Beginning Anew

Hi Kim, 

Sorry for the awfully late review, especially for a story that's been a favorite of mine for so long. I'm a bad friend, please forgive me.

Speaking of favorites, this story still has a special place in my heart and this chapter especially made me love it even more. Justin's homecoming was great. The image of cats being walked on leashes made me laugh for some reason. Somehow I doubt two cats that were cooped up in a car for hours enjoyed that. I sort of imagined a couple of "grumpy cats" (I'm sure you've seen that meme all over the net recently) being walked on leashes. Adorable! 

Anyway, I digress, I thought that Brian's desire to make things comfortable for Justin at the carriage house showed maturity. For a split second I thought that it would be great if he sabotaged things a bit, but then I thought it would be something Michael's character from season 1 would do and not Brian's a decade post show. So, I totally loved the way you handled it. The expensive bottle of wine in a crock pot meal, though, again made me laugh.

Like many in the fandom I swoon over Protective!Brian, so his reaction to Justin's confrontation with Alex was fantastic. On the other hand, Justin's way of calming him down and the self-confident way he dispatched his ex was equally swoon-worthy. 

I also absolutely LOVED the idea of Gus indulging his little sister with artbooks. I could imagine it quite clearly because of something I experienced just a couple of weeks ago myself with my half-sister. Like Gus, though she's the younger one in this case (by 9 years), she spent a good hour with me at a book store in St. Petersburg helping me pick out several books about Russian art. As an art lover and as someone who's Russian, it was truly ebarrasing when I realized HOW MUCH I've forgotten about Russian art. My sister, to my surprise and delight, knew quite a lot and spent hours telling me what she knew and what I used to remember, but sadly forgotten, while we toured the Russian Museum in St. Petersburg. Basically, this already great chapter was made fantastic just for that little snippet of a scene alone, just because it had personal meaning for me.

There are many other details that I enjoyed, but I'll be here until tomorrow if I continue, so I'll end it right here. :) Suffice it to say that it was another marvelous update and I can't wait for another one. Is there any way you'll step out of rotation and update this again? :)

Hugs & cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  I'm so thrilled to hear from you, my friend!  You sound like you're have a great time on your adventure.  I'm so happy for you.  I think this was just what you needed.  I've missed you, though!  I'm glad that you've found a way to keep following this story, and that you are still enjoying it.:)  I thought there would only be one more chapter, but you know me.  By the time I'm done, it will probably take at least two.  I still have a few bumps to throw in the road for these two before I finally get them back on the right track, but nothing too difficult now.  I think their major hurdles are over with.  Do not fear, though; their girls will be featured prominently in what happens.:)

How I wish I could say I will go ahead and write the rest of this!  I would love to, but it's been so long since I've updated "Stallion" that I really do need to do that first, and then I probably will stick to my normal rotation and update "My Heart's Desire" next.  Sorry about that! I will be on vacation soon, though, so hopefully after the con I can accelerate my posting schedule faster.  I do hope that we can get together again some time after you're home.  I will have time in July and August, if that would work out for your schedule.  Would LOVE to come back to NYC and see "Wicked" with you!

I hope you continue to have a wonderful time with your family!  Stay safe and keep in touch as you can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2013 05:34 AM · On: Beginning Anew

So, I know I'm supposed to be working on my story right now but I saw that this was updated and just HAD to stop and read! Operation Sunshine was completely adorable! The phone call was great! Brians excitement and and saying he missed Justin must have put a huge sunshine smile on his face! I could feel Brian's eagerness so I know Justin did.

Katie is gonna have to get used to Kaylee's babies! Especially when they eventually get to run around. I hope they aren't holding too much of a grudge towards Katie for trying to pretend to be their owner, cats can be viscious! lol. Poor Justin is already starting to feel the time he's missed with Katie and Gus. I can't wait for the precious moment when Katie finally gets to paint with her dad! Hahaha, taunting Justin with a picture is so Brian! I love impatient Brian.

Brian surprising Justin with the romantic meal was so sweet, I can only imagine how shocked and happy that madee him. Protective and jealous Brian at his best! (; Brian and Justin have a lot of making up to do with constantly fantasizing of one another all these years! I wonder when the day will come when absoilutely nothing, not even latex will come between them like Brian wants? That is a HUGE step forward.. and would take a lot of trust that is still being piececd back together. I hope it happens for them eventually.

Their reunion of Justin finally being 'home' was so tender and heartwarming from beginning to end. When they get back up to tuck the girls in I wonder if Brian will be able to restrain himself from asking Justin to stay in 'their' room just for the night. Having Justin off in the carriage house while the rest of the family is in the house would be unfortunate. Brian definitely isn't letting Justin go this time. Looking forward to the next chapter, this one was perfect as always Kim! 

M.



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan! Thanks for reading and for the feedback, Sweetheart!  I really appreciate that.:)  Yes, this will probably wind up being a battle of wills between two strong men.  The question is - who will hold out for their principles?  You know it will be extremely difficult for Justin to stay out of Brian's bed, but he's looking at the bigger goal here.  So his resistance just might surprise our indominable Mr. Kinney. I think I'm going to enjoy bringing them all back together now.  There will definitely be an adjustment period for all of them, the girls included.  So my "one more chapter" goal is probably out the window now - ha!  Hope you and the readers don't mind.:)

Thanks again for your support, Megan; I am very grateful, and feedback keeps me going.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 09:36 PM · On: Beginning Anew

Sorry I got my review posted under the forst chapter. It was meant for the latest one. Tired I guess. I will be leaving for Japan the 23rd and will be back June 13th. Am excited. lol

Author's Response:

That's okay, lindc! I see them anyway, and I'm just happy to get the feedback.  Have a wonderful time and a safe trip.  Hopefully when you get back I'll have some nice photos on my LJ for you to see of the con.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 09:20 PM · On: Beginning Anew

Ahhh! Together at last! Now, how are you ever going to get Brian out of the carriage house and away from Sunshine long enough to wrap up your story? TAG



Author's Response:

LOL!  I don't think he'll be in a hurry to leave, do you?  Thank goodness they didn't wind up in bed instead of on the couch.  Don't worry, though; when it comes to the girls, Justin will hold his ground because he'll be looking at the bigger picture.  And you know how much I love the angst, so there will still be a little to come yet.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Tag; I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 05:04 PM · On: Beginning Anew

Wow seriously hot Kim, at last the boys are back together and in love at the same time :) brilliant chapter this is such a great story xxChris

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris - your kind words mean so much.  I'm glad that you are still enjoying this story, my friend.  Not really any angst per se in this chapter, but I will still throw a few obstacles their way before this is all said and done (nothing TOO bad, though; promise).:)  Thanks again for the support, Chris; I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 03:44 PM · On: Beginning Anew

I felt so much love in the air while I am reading this chapter. Perfect words to express their great love and yearning towards each other! Another great chapter Kim! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Thank you, Cindy! So glad that you are still enjoying this story.  I DO plan on throwing in a little angst here before the story's finished.  You know me - I have to create a little drama.;)  Thanks so much for reading and for your support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 10:09 AM · On: Beginning Anew

Great to see an update.  Lovely reunion and homecoming-  glad to see Brian setting an alarm and not throwing the idea out the window.  Can't wait for more of this reat story.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy! Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the support, my friend; it is deeply appreciated.  You know me; all will not be smooth sailing until the end, but I promise not to make the 'water' too choppy.  Thanks again for the feedback!  I really need that and I am grateful to you.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Beginning Anew

I guess I'm happy to find the 3 travelers made it home safe and sound. I was very shocked by Brian's plan to make the carriage house inviting. I was thinking he would try and make it a horrible place to stay, like cutting off the AC, causing problems with the plumbing. Things to make Justin return to the main house. Now I'm just waiting for the moment the twins walk in on the dads in a very adult moment. I think it might be event that means they will need counseling for years. How long will it take for the poor kitties to be relocated to the barn. I just don't see Brian turning into a cat lover, no matter how much he wants to make Justin happy. Please don't tell me that wonderful meal is going to be wasted. I know that beef is fork tender and swimming in a rich sauce. Send me the recipe, I'll omit the slimy fungus that I'm sure are floating in it. Any chance the girls can be sent to boarding school for a semester or two so the boys can re establish their relationship without fear of scaring the girls?
Lori

Author's Response:

Ahh, Lori, your comments are, shall we say, 'unique' - LOL!  Not sure if Brian would appreciate you calling his crock pot recipe 'slimy,' though.;)  And BTW - don't give away any of my trade secrets; some of your comments may be getting dangerously close to my story plot (well, not the Swiss boarding school, though; somehow I don't Justin would take too kindly to that).  Thanks for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Beginning Anew

WOW WONDERFUL CHAPTER. WE ALL LOVED IT SO MUCH. LOL

Author's Response:

Thank you, lindc.  I admit; not much drama in this chapter, but you know I won't just end it with them living happily ever after (well, not too easily, anyway).  I plan on throwing some more angst in there before this is all said and done. 

If I don't get the chance before then, I do hope you have a wonderful time in Japan with your friend.:)  I definitely plan on posting updates and photos of the con in my LJ, so I hope you will enjoy them.  Thank you for the kind words and all the support; you don't know how much that means to me.  Tell everyone I said hello and that I hope they are doing well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 08:44 AM · On: Divergent Lives

what a wonderful surprise. on break and found this gem. wonderful chapter left us all teary eyed-romantic Brian always does this to us. soooo good. we are sad tho as we know it is winding down. lol

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Beginning Anew

Of course the girls helped,and it was all their idea too.Just one word for this chapter: BEAUTIFUL. Hugs.



Author's Response:

Hi, Luisa!  You are very kind.;)  Thank you for reading and for the feedback.  I think it's important for the boys to have some private time, but also for the girls to feel they are a part of their lives together now.  It won't be all smooth sailing for them, but you know I won't let anything bad happen to our little family unit.  Thank you again for the support, Luisa!  I hope I can continue to write stories that you enjoy.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Beginning Anew

Ahhhh this chapter had it all, Kim. This precious family reunited, the heat and love only these two lovers can generate... and let's not forget two of my favorite variables - Jealous!Brian and Protective!Brian. Ahhhh what a man. *Sigh* This was just a perfectly written installment - start to finish. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Janet; that means a lot to me.  And thank you for your friendship, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 11:23 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

I can’t believe I almost missed this update! So glad that I decided to check and saw it. Fantastic chapter, and even though there weren’t many Brian/Justin moments, those which were were absolutely beautiful, not to mention touching. Another interesting thing is that despite Justin went to Chicago, I still felt joy throughout the entire chapter - maybe because it really felt like closure, the end of Justin’s lonely life and the beginning of his new life with Brian. Future seems to be bright and very promising for them.

The farewell with girls was so touching, they both are so sweet – I *love* how cunning they are in some episodes, and how childish, naïve and sincere in others. And Brian… I can’t start describing how incredible, strong and beautiful his love with Justin is to me. I admire that you managed to show this unique connection between them so well, make it so moving, they just look at each other – and my heart stops right away. The whole world disappears not only for them, but for me as well. Brian’s ‘never’ was so unexpected but pleasant! I adore every time he shows his romantic side, and it’s happening more and more now, when he finally got Justin back. It’s impressive to think how much he changed since the very beginning – I can’t believe he agreed to have *kittens* - two of them! – in their house. Picasso and Dali – what a perfect choice of names! Shame on me, I don’t quite remember Kaylee having pets, but I love them already. Artistic kittens :)

That phone conversation was hilarious (and hot)! Very domestic and so realistic, I could just hear all their voices, girls’ laughter... this Story constantly makes me forget that it’s fictional, it’s as if I’m watching a real life of real people. Maybe in some ways it is really so – you definitely managed to create a whole universe which I love deeply. Brian’s confession was incredible – it doesn’t matter that he didn’t say it for the first time, because every time Brian Kinney says ‘I love you’ is unique, mind-blowing and very special.

I didn’t expect to see Alex, but maybe it’s good that he came to Justin again – out blond had to have a closure of this part of his life, too. Strange, but I feel sympathetic for Alex, he isn’t a bad guy, he is just stupid and shallow. He wasn’t good for Justin, but he was all right, and I do believe that he loved him. If he had really made an effort to love Kaylee, if Brian hadn’t appeared just then thanks to girls’ plan, he and Justin could have had something, even if not for long. His words about Brian are true in some aspects, but way too old now. The Brian he described is Brian who had just met Justin, and he stopped being that person long ago. Justin and Alex’s parting was sad to watch, though really, I’m not sure why. I feel sorry for him – he will never have Justin, and now he learned he never did. I hope one day he’ll find his happiness – someone less complicated, more materially-minded than Justin.

This was a great chapter, I treasure every bit of this amazing work. It’s fantastic that the next update will happen soon enough!

Thank you!   

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading this chapter and, as always, for your encouraging and well thought-out words.  It truly is humbling to write for someone who takes the time to so carefully craft their thoughts and provide such wonderful feedback.  I always have a smile on my face when I see that you have reviewed one of my stories, and I am so delighted that you are enjoying it.  It is getting nearer to completion now, but I DO see a few more chapters yet to go before I conclude everything.  I hope that you continue to enjoy this story, as well as others that I may write in the future.

 

Thank you again for all the support!  It is deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 08:52 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

I was happy to see a confrontation with Alex again, but I can't help feeling a little sorry for him.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra - thank you for reading and for the comments.  I suppose I can agree to a certain extent about Alex.  I don't think Justin set out to deceive him - perhaps he really did think he could move on beyond Brian and establish a true relationship with him - but Alex sort of put the nail in his own coffin by his treatment of Justin's daughter.  It was a package deal; if he couldn't truly accept Kaylee in Justin's life, then Justin couldn't really have a future with him. I DO slightly pity him, though, because as he said he really never stood a chance in the first place, not in Justin's heart, and it turned out that he was right about that.

Thank you for the constant support, Sandra; it is deeply appreciated.  I have most of the next part already written, so it shouldn't take too long to get an update posted.  It definitely WON'T be the last chapter, though; there will be at least one more to go after that.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 06:15 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Sweet and warm, hot and sexy.  Ahhhh.   I feel better now. 

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Thanks, my dear (and you just made it an even 400 reviews, too - woo hoo!).  Actually, I had that before the 'great crash of February, 2013' when we lost all those story chapters and reviews and had to resubmit - ugh. But thank you for bringing back my 'mojo' - ha!  I'm working on the next part right now - and I think I can safely say it will NOT conclude with the next chapter.  I'm just too wordy to rush it along like that, and I'm just getting to the good part with the boys being reunited again (wink, wink).  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments, my friend.  Less than a month to go!!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 02:32 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

The goodbye between Brian and Justin was so beyond sweet, Justin is finally able to see exactly how much he really means to Brian. Brian saying never to letting go of him was absolutely perfect. Ah, poor Mrs.Bailey, atleast she got a little more time with the cats before she goes and gets her own, lol. I can only imagine all of the thoughts swirling around in Justin's head as he's packing up to move. That pride and sense of comfort of startig his own new life with his daughter would definitely be hard to let go of. I'm sure he still has some fear about remembering how he got to moving in the very beginning, he's stepping into the unknown of what may happen. I think the newfound strength of their relationship will help ease Justin's nerves a tad but not very much, it's a huge step. They can definitely forgive and move on from the past but the memories can never be fully forgotten, it'll just take time. Hahaha, oh my gosh the phone call with Justin being so eargerly ready and then being caught and shut down with his daughters waiting for him was absolutely priceless! Atleast the phone call ended extremely well, very hot! My absolute favorite part was when Brian said "No" "Let me say it", oh my goodness, so insanely heartfelt and sweet. So glad to see Alex officially out of the picture, such an ass. There were definitely things said that were needed for closure for both of them. I cannot wait for Justin to be officially home with Brian and the girls. I hope you have atleast some angst planned, it makes things so much sweeter in the end. I have a feeling there will be, though. I wonder how long it will take for Brian to get Justin to fall asleep in their bedroom? I saw that you see two more chapters for this story, while I know it has to be coming it still makes me sad. ): This has been such an amazing story. When you post the last chapter I plan on going back through each chapter and leaving a comment before I comment on the end, I don't even want to think about saying goodbye to this story, though! I guess that makes more time for my all time favorite story of yours, though, right? :P I need to get around to reading and commenting on all of your stories. I cannot wait for another update! 

M.



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan! You're so sweet to leave those thoughtful comments; that makes me very happy, my friend! Thank you for that!  I will hate to see this one end, too.  I have really become fond of Kaylee and Katie.  I CAN tell you that I have a lot of the next part written (I'm just getting to the 'good' part, though - wink, wink), and there will be some ups and downs here before it's all finished.  It COULD go longer than two chapters - just depends upon how far I take it.  But Alex is definitely gone for good.  I feel like I need to get Daphne back into the picture, though, as well as describe some of the adjustments the family will have to go through before they are totally together again.

I'm so glad that you're enjoying this, Megan!  BTW, I'll be eagerly looking forward to the rest of your story, too.;)  Thanks again for all the wonderful comments; that means a lot to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 03:29 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Hello Kim! Finally I got the time to read, I was super busy with RL work. And I am so happy seeing you updated this one sweetie!

I love the phone call, so hot and romantic, but I was touched with the goodbye part, esp between Justin and Brian and was laughing much when they were being interrupted by Gus using the car's horn.

This part I love the most:

Now let him go, Dad!"
"Never," Brian whispered

I hope you will update more soon!

{{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, my friend. I'm glad you're still reading this one.  I feel awful about the long gaps in between updates, but it's constantly on my mind and I WILL get all my WIPs finished.  My teaching job has been particularly stressful this year, but it's soon coming to an end for the year, so I'm hopeful I can update faster.  I see probably two more chapters to this one before I say goodbye to it.

Thank you, too, for letting me know which parts you enjoyed; I like hearing about that.  I'll have the next part to this up pretty soon; I have most of it written already, and it WILL include Justin's return (wink, wink).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2013 09:50 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

so good to see an update.  When Alex showed up , it had be a little concerned but I'm pleased with how Justin handled it.  Love that Brian and Justin are coming togehter so nicely.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for commenting, Sandy.:)  I decided that it was time that Alex realized once and for all that he could not compete with Justin's love for Brian and his girls.:)   I will have the next part to this up fairly soon as I have most of it written already (I was actually going to wait and put it all in one chapter, but decided to break it up since it had been so long since I had updated last).  Thanks again for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback; as a fellow writer, you know how much that means to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2013 05:52 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Glad to be rid of Alex for good! TAG



Author's Response:

Yeah, time to say 'bye-bye' to the old flame.;)  And now onto the boys' reunion in the next part (wink, wink). Thanks for reading and for the comments, Tag.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 02:34 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

I'm still not convinced Justin is really ready to forget the past. I think he's always going to feel Brian can't be trusted. I also have fears for the cats and horses. I think it might come down to no pets of any kind. I hope Brian is busy installing sound proof material in the walls and ceiling of his bedroom or I'm afraid the girls will get an education well beyond their years. Child welfare might get called in to determine if it's a safe place for children. I did enjoy the good bye drama, it was worthy of sending a young teen off to war with nothing but a sharp stick. I can't believe Justin didn't offer to go with Mrs. Bailey to find a kitten, he should have offered to buy her a sweet companion. I hope he did compensate her for devotion to the two blue eyed sweeties. I am expecting there to be trouble with the return trip, I'm thinking accident where the cats get lost at the very least. I'm picturing a horrible back spasm while on a twisty road, loss of control, large tree, deep ditch, SUV flipped and cat carriers tossed in the woods. Door springs open and out they dash....or limp depending on how hard the landing was. Justin will be knocked senseless and who know how long till help arrives. I hope he still has his phone so he can attempt to make a call once he comes too. Of course he'll be in an area with no service. Brian and the girls going crazy with panic when he's not home at a reasonable time, utterly distraught when they can't reach him. Brian will attempt to trace his trail by using his credit card usage but since he's not on the account this will be a lost cause. I just don't see a happy ending. I have this horrible feeling Dali is going to become a sleek snack for a roaming coyote, Picasso might find a place to hide but soon hunger will make his venture out...poisoned bait will do him in. By the time a recluse woodsman finds Justin in the SUV it will be anyone's guess if he can survive. Now I just hope the girls aren't kidnapped while Brian leaves them home alone to so search the highways looking for Justin. I'm sure he will begin to wonder if Justin has just decided he can't be with him and planned to disappear all along. Soon his mind will convince him Justin has taken off for a tropical island to paint beautiful cabana boys while they dance around the pool wearing only the tiny paper umbrellas you find in fruity drinks...well I don't mean to ruin your next chapter, but they subtle hints you left just made it so obvious what was going to happen. Can't wait to see how close I came to reading your mind...As always I love your stories. I'm just always so worried for the well being of the pets.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG, Lori, I think I see a whole new story in these comments!  Hilarious as always! Sure you weren't a comedian in a previous life?  You really should try to write a story of your own (hint, hint); preferably a funny one, because I think it would be wind up being one either way.;)  I hate to disappoint you, but I've written most of the next chapter already, and Justin (and the cats) manage to get home without any deer running out in front of them, winding up having an allergic nut reaction to too many pecan logs at Stuckey's, or being delayed due to a sheep herding contest in the middle of I-81 (or whatever highway there may be between there - I just made that up)....

You are TOO funny!  I promise, though, not to make it TOO easy on the boys once Justin gets home.  I think I still see some growing pains coming.  Thanks for reading and for the extremely witty - and entertaining - comments!  I just wish we had a 'funniest reviewer' award to give you, because you would win hands down!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 09:15 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Hello, my friend. It's good to see your name back up on the 'recent updates'. I had been thinking about this story and was thrilled to see this installment. What a wonderful one it was too. The reluctant goodbye our newly reunited fathers shared, and of course a long distance phone call that can only end in one way for these two... especially in the special circumstances they are in here. I love the way Brian professed his love. It really suited him immensely. I think that final goodbye with Alex was needed too... for both of them. Very nice job on that. 

Another brilliant chapter, Kim. I can see this heading into the wrapping up stages, and it will be a shame to see it go. But... what a great journey it's been. Thanks so much for posting. As always I look forward to more. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - thank you for reading and for the comments.:)  I'm glad to be 'up there,' too; at least temporarily (we know how quickly that can change!).  At least I have most of the next part written, so I should have that posted before I move onto one of my other WIPs.  And I agree about Alex; I think it was good for Justin to put that to rest so he could move on with Brian and his daughters.  And, yes, I couldn't resist a little 'bedtime action' with our boys, although I think you're the queen of sex scenes between them.;)

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review, especially in light of your busy writing schedule yourself (still don't know how you do it!). And thank you for your support in every other way as well.   *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 06:05 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Aha!  see what a sweet treat I found to read before bed.  Just got off work.  Busy busy.  Have two new interns-seems all we do lately is train more fledglings-part of the job-we just get them trained and they are gone and a new rotation begins.  BB IS GETTING A LITTLE RUN DOWN.  I keep telling him to slow down-but it's not in his nature.  E veryone here is good.  I guess you are winding down your school year.  I don't know where this year has gone.  Time has flown by.I just read on Gale's site his interview about Defiance and his other projects cooking.  I didn't realize his love for music until I heard him on Sheena's radio show.  Such a classy guy.  I hope you have a great time at the con with all your buds-too bad you can't be in Randy's upcoming movie.  That would have been a treat for you. I can't go as I will be in Japan when it's all happening.  You take a plethora of pictures and post them for us as you usually do so we can see what we missed. Off to bed now. lol

 



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Glad to hear that everyone's okay, but sorry to hear that they're running Brian crazy!  Tell him I said hello and hope that he gets some much-needed rest.  Yes, three more weeks until the students graduate and then one month until the con; I think I will be more excited about it once school is out, because I am SO busy right now!  Tell Lee I hope his baby is all back together and in good shape now, and tell Nonie that I'm thinking about her.:)

As far as the story goes, I probably see two more chapters to this.  The next one is fairly along already, and I don't see me wrapping the story up in that chapter, so I would estimate at least two more installments.:) Thanks so much for reading and for the comments as always, lindc; I appreciate that more than I can say.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 10:33 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Hi, I am so happy to read an update of this story,i have been waiting for it for some time now, and i'm glad i did.This chapter was great, the encounter with Alex so good,The man show his true colors..Iam happy to se that Justin is callin Britin his home again, i can't wait for more,hugs.



Author's Response:

Aww..thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment, Luisa!  That means so much to me, Sweetie.:)  I have a lot of the next chapter already written, so another update will be coming shortly, including the boys' reunion back in Britin (wink, wink).  Thank you again for the support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2013 10:33 AM · On: Unquenchable Fire

I forgot that I did read this chapter before the server crash. Happy to see that Justin is wanting to start a new life with Kaylee near Brian and Katie :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy - thanks for the reposted comment; I appreciate that, my friend.  Now you won't have to take time out this weekend to read it again - LOL!  Take care.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 08:06 PM · On: Unquenchable Fire

I love this chapter so much – it’s like a soothing balsam after everything Brian and Justin have been through. It’s so beautiful, there are so many emotions and finally-resolved feelings here – such tenderness, a great all-consuming desire, readiness to give everything to the partner. The love between them is so strong, I could feel it in every line! And I’m absolutely crazy about each moment, passionate and tender, shared by them.

I loved how Brian scooped Justin up into his arms, how he carried him right to the bed and then stared at him, thinking of how much he had longed for this minute... and – how Justin made him return from his thoughts, and Brian realized that the man he loved is truly right here, waiting him to make love to him for the first time in such a long period of time. Of course then Justin dozed off, and it was Brian’s turn to bring him back:) I don’t know, you’ve put so many feelings in this chapter… it’s really bittersweet, because there were moments when I felt abrupt, sharp sadness, thinking how much time Brian and Justin have lost forever. Ten years, and considering their age, it’s almost the best time of people’s life – best in a perfect combination of youth and maturity, but for Brian and Justin - worst because of their separation and sufferings, lots of pain and hopelessness.        

You described their ‘first’ time together so beautifully, with such tenderness – I couldn’t breathe while reading, it was so touching – Brian and Justin’s love could be felt just in everything, in every their movement, in their touches. And how extremely beautiful you’ve described Brian’s eyes, how they were changing their colour, and Justin was watching, fascinated!.. Every moment between them is a special one, completely unforgettable, mesmerizing. Such love is a very, very rare thing, and despite many mistakes made, Brian and Justin *must* be together. I’m so sorry that some comments were lost, but, well, it gave me an opportunity to re-read the last two chapters again and make sure what I feel. I still believe Brian has made a big, almost fatal mistake, and Justin had every reason not to forgive him ever. If it was just a mere fuck, like it had been before, in first five years, it wouldn’t matter so much, but Brian has broken something impossibly valuable – their trust, faith, even love. His actions were *not* acceptable – not after everything he and Justin had been through, what they had promised each other. Brian had never lied before, and here he’d chosen to forget about what he had, what he and Justin shared – about his *daughters*, which is completely unforgivable for Justin, just to pleasure himself with no obvious reason. If Brian chooses to sleep with some stranger *now*, considering they have never been more stable (they were a real family!), what can Justin expect from him in future? If Brian screws up when everything is perfect, what will he do if something goes wrong? It became impossible to trust him, and without trust, there is no future, despite how great love can be. Maybe Justin was wrong torturing Brian for so long, but I don’t blame him. He just couldn’t help himself, the trust can’t be rebuilt easily, it might never happen at all. Justin *wanted* to be with Brian, of that I have no doubts, but forgive is not forget. Sadly, but right now I don’t think they’ll ever have what they had before. Brian’s stupid mistake will hunt them for the rest of their lives. However, knowing you, I won’t be surprised if somehow they’d manage to restore everything:) At first I didn’t even believe they would ever find their ways to each other again, and yet it happened.

Their night together was truly magical. I also enjoyed how Justin mentioned Chicago as his home – I *love* those psychological moments! Some time has to pass till his perception will change. I’m very interested in seeing how his relationship with Brian will progress now – no matter how much Justin would like to forget, he still can’t, he is slightly unsure. Brian feels it, it makes *him* unsure, and then Justin can see that, too, and it adds guilt to his uncertainty. I can’t wait to see how all this will work out! Thank you so much for those beautiful chapters, I’m looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin - I am so grateful to you for taking the time to rewrite a review for this story; it was distressing to see so many review comments disappear, but your lovely words go a long way toward making me feel much better.:)   I do feel the boys will have a ways to go before it's all said and done; after all, it's been several years since they lived together, and there will bound to be a reacquaintance period.  But they love each other, and they have their daugthers, who they adore; that will go a long way in their stead.

Thank you again for the wonderful feedback, Sweetheart; it is grealy appreciated.  I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2013 05:39 AM · On: Unquenchable Fire

Please accept this replacement review and try to remember how clever and witty the original was. I'm really glad the boys got back together finally! I know that the original comments were soooo much more entertaining. But, I'll try to get it back for the next chapter. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  You're very sweet to leave me another review; thank you for that, my friend.  What a shame we lost so many wonderful comments!  But better to only lose a week's worth rather than for much longer, so it could have been a lot worse.  I will reciprocate for you shortly on your own story - well written as always.:)  And BTW - I'll get in touch with Bob tomorrow about our 'other' project - I'm sure he's had his hands full the past couple of days.

Thank you again, Tag, for the repost; I really appeciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 11:28 PM · On: Unquenchable Fire

Since you were kind enough to repost I feel I must give you my thoughts on the second read thru. I still think Justin is a rotten jerk for all the pain and suffering he put the rest of the family thru but he does seem to make Brian happy. I think Brian should have been able to move on and find a more compassionate partner by now but since he held out I guess he should have who he wants. I think he will still have lots of trouble making a happy home with Justin and the twins. I also worry that the horses and cats won't bond well. I think horses are more willing to allow normal barn cats to share a stall and some hay than snooty Siamese Cats. Heck I bet those blue eyed fur balls will be allergic to hay. If Justin really does return to Britin after his trip to Chicago I expect lots of tension and conflict. I think Brian really has changed but I don't see much growth in Justin. I will be thrilled to see where this goes next.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori - thank you for going to the trouble of reposting another review; was up to over 400 and then the crash; ugh.  I appreciate that.

As far as the story goes, I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree on this subject; I think both men were wrong with the way they've handled things in their relationship, and I think they are (hopefully) at a point now where they can move beyond that, not only for their sake but for the sake of their daughters.  Perhaps in a way Brian has matured more than Justin, but I suppose I'm just a dyed-in-the-wool romantic and believe they belong together and can grow from their mistakes.  To me, Brian did commit a grave error in judgment; it wasn't just the one-time indiscretion - it was the meaning and symbolism behind it.

But again, that's just my opinion.  Thank you again for the comments.  ~Kim

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:40 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

I somehow missed this chapter when you first posted it. I'm glad that the ASSHOLE is finally gone for good! :D



Author's Response:

If I didn't know better, Nancy, I'd say you didn't like dear old Alex - LOL!  Thank you for reading the chapter you missed and for taking the time to leave feedback for it; I really appreciate that.  I'm hoping I might have the next part up tonight; if not then, should be tomorrow (smut alert - wink, wink).  Thanks again, my friend; you're very thoughtful.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Man on a Mission

You're such a tease! Brian's not the only one likely to self-combust from lust overload. I need me some B/J action soon! Please! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  It's coming (amazing how much 'that' word COMES up in my responses - ha!).  I have most of it written, so I hope it doesn't disappoint.;)  I just have to write a little more and then it can be posted as soon as my beta looks the last part over.  So it won't be long!  Coming from someone who can write smut with the boys so well, I do hope you like it.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sweetie; it really means a lot to me, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:22 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend, for reading and for the comments!  I almost have it done, and at least according to my beta, she needed an ice bucket, so I'm hoping it lives up to its reputation.;)  It should be posted very shortly.  Thanks for all the support!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:18 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Thank you for updating this one sweetie! I love the old movie, but the twist you did with the story, I love it more!!! I am enjoying the scene wherein Brian became a responsible father, hehehe....I can only imagine how he took care the baby Katie till it reaches 10 yrs. old and can't believe the fact that he doesnt anymore tricking and stocking up condoms wow!!! Can;t wait for the next chapter, surely it will be amazingly hot!!! :):):)

{{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy - thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the comments, Sweetie; I really do appreciate that.  And as far as the next chapter goes, well, this is what my beta said, and I quote:  DAMN!! THATWASFREAKINGHAWT!!

LOL! So hopefully you will feel the same way once you read it.;)  I'm almost done with it, so it shouldn't be long now. Thank you again, my friend, for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 08:06 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Wonderful Kim, but ... aggrrr ... I need a little bit more * grins *.

Love the interaction between Brian and Gus about the concom * giggles * .


I've to stay at home today and tomorrow (and maybe longer). Thus plenty of time to read. Saturday my oldest daughter (Belana, 15 years old) has fallen from her horse * sigh * against a fence. She has broken her left upperarm near her shoulder. They can't put a cast on it ... and surgery isn't needed. She only has her arm in a sling. The whole week no school for her. She need a lot of help and sleeping ... * sigh * we do very little.


Need the next chapter ... hurry.


* hugs *

Author's Response:

Ugh - so sorry to hear that, Marny!  Tell Belana I hope she gets to feeling better soon - now (unfortunately) she and Kaylee have something in common - LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed the part about the condoms; I think that was one of my favorite parts, too.:)  Talk about the shoe on the other foot!  I do have most of the next part written already - including the part everyone is no doubt waiting for - but I just need to finish it up a little before I post it.  I just figured part of the update was better than none since it had been quite a while since I had posted something, so I thought I'd best post what I had.  The other part should be up very soon, though.:) 

I hope your daughter recovers quickly and does not wind up in a lot of discomfort.  I'll be thinking about both you and her, my friend.  Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave me feedback, Marny.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Kim dear,

Please update soon. The sooner the better!!! ;)

 

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Hello, Sue, my friend.:)  Always so great to hear from you, and to know that you're reading this one.  I DO have most of the next chapter written; but need to finish it up, which I hope to do today (crossing fingers).  My beta, Gloria, is wonderful at getting them back to me quickly, too, so I'm hopeful it will be posted at least no later than Wednesday (I really do have to work on some school grading - ugh!).  Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, Sweetheart.:)  That means the world to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 06:34 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Hi Kim I must have missed a chapter so I was thrilled to catch two chapters in one lol. Well at last the boys are on track and hopefully they can sweep away all their hurts on a bed of love. So funny Brian frantically looking for condoms and lube and the mum's knowing the real dessert lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! Oh, how the tables have turned, haven't they?  LOL!  I enjoyed the part about the condoms, too.:)  Good thing his Sonny Boy comes prepared for all contingencies.:)  You'll be happy to know that they do, indeed, wind up 'horizontal' in the next chapter.:)  I hope you'll enjoy it.;)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments - and for all your support.  You're so good about reviewing authors' stories, I've noticed; I do hope they all realize how great you are about that.  I know that I do.:)  Thanks again - I'll have the next chapter up very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ASAP (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 05:53 PM · On: Divergent Lives

Oh my gosh you killing me Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



Author's Response:

Hello!  Looks like you are starting to read this one?  Thank you!  I do hope that you like it.  As you can tell, we're heading toward quite a bit of angst here; but not to fear, eventually, it's all going to get straightened out.;)  I hope you will continue to read and will enjoy it.  Thank you for giving this one a try and for the comment.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 04:42 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Thank you!



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Orchida! And thank YOU for reading and for commenting.  I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:40 AM · On: Man on a Mission

You are SUCH a tease!  Love the dialog.  Good job.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend; I love the bantering, too.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Janessa (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:22 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Hi! New here to reading and reviewing.  I have been assigned a daunting task-no not really, just kidding, to read and review your stories for my friend lindc while she is on her trip to Japan.  I work at the hospital on a different or team and have been friends with her since here arrival here.  She asked me to do this for her-so I am obliging.  I must say this is a wonderful story as I thought it would be a good idea to read previous chapters before the new one.  They all enjoyed this chapter and are waiting for the "wink" "wink" other half.  Everyone says hi.  Brian will be off to Arizona for more teaching seminars soon and Lee maybe be moving. He is not sure yet.  Well I'll sign off now.  Later  Jan



Author's Response:

Hi, Jan!  lindc takes such good care of me - assigning someone to fill in with the 'peeps' while she's gone - LOL! And you're great to not only help her out, but also go back and read the other chapters to get caught up.  Thank you for doing that!  And thank you for not only the comments, but also the other info about Brian and Lee.  Both Brian and lindc have been doing a lot of traveling lately, haven't they?  And Lee may be moving? Is it out of state?  That's kind of a surprise.  I do hope he'll stay in touch from time to time, but I want him to do what will make him the happiest.  He certainly deserves it.:)

Tell your 'peeps' that the 'other half' is coming up, and I hope it doesn't disappoint.  And yes, they will FINALLY do some 'talking' horizontally (wink, wink).   Thanks again, Jan; I hope even when lindc gets back that you will continue to enjoy some of my stories.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

P.S.  You even sign off like Brian with the 'later' comment - ha! :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:16 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Well I guess it's official, Brian is going to put up with the heartless blond. I still think Justin is being very unfair about this but if it makes Brian happy I'm willing to allow it. I do hope the poor cats are going to be happy with the move and I hope they don't cause too much trouble. I loved when Brian had to ask Gus for condoms, that was perfect. Now I just hope the lube Brian found isn't too old and gunky, it would be a shame if Justin had to suffer any irritation. Now how long will it take before the twins start to fight? You know they won't get along all the time. Thanks for such a wonderful update.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  I always love the spin you put on things - ha!  Wouldn't have even thought about the old lube irritating Justin's delicate passages.;)  But with his allergies, I guess that could be possible.;)  I'm going to let that pass, though, so I can have them engage in 'other' things (wink, wink).

About the girls fighting, that's rather perceptive of you, since part of the remainder of the story will involve them all having 'growing pains' as they try to reunite in one house.  As you mentioned, things can't always be a bed of roses, and that may be one of the issues, along with the cats.  If you'll remember, Katie and the cats didn't exactly get along all that well.  What will happen when they become a member of the family?  And how will it work with Brian having TWO girls under the same household?  It's going to be a lot different than when they were babies.

I'm just not sure if all this will be in this story or maybe a sequel; I'll have to wait and see where my muse takes me on that - and what the readers think.  Thanks again for reading and for the comments, Lori - I always look forward to them.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:10 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Grown up Gus!!! OHHH WEEEE!! Now THAT's a sexy idea! I think the best scene in that chapter was him escorting and kicking Alex to the curb!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Oh Thank you thank you.   I had an amazing weekend but after all my guests left, it is a little sad.  This was such a wodnerful surprise and present when I got on tonight.  Brian and Justin consummating their long lost selves-  Oh I can't wait.  



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy!  I'm so delighted that you were looking forward to reading this; thank you for the comments, too.:)  I have most of the next part written - including what you and no doubt most of the other readers are waiting for (wink, wink), so it should be up very soon.  I do have to grade some papers today that I have put off doing (I wonder why? LOL!), but I'll do my best to get the rest of the chapter written sometime today and hopefully at least get it posted by tomorrow or Wednesday at the latest.  Thank you for all the support, my friend; I really do appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BIZ (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Nice-----but teasing.  We are all waiting!..  Cute Brian asking Gus for condoms.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Hi, Biz - thank you, first of all, for reading and commenting on so many of my stories lately - I appreciate that more than you know.:)  And yes, I know; I fully intended this to progress to where this is all leading to - and it will, promise! - but the chapter started to run too long and I wanted to at least get this part posted so everyone didn't think I had forgotten about it.  I have most of the next part written, though, so it should be up within the next couple of days.  It won't be all smooth sailing for them just yet, but they will definitely get their wish finally in the next part.;)  Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to comment; I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:18 AM · On: Man on a Mission

"I need to make sure that we can love each other the way we are, not the way we were."

That is such a valid point. I was disapointed when they did not move in together, but the resaon makes perfect sense.

That condom situation and then the dinner with Brian groping Justin under the table was priceless! You've outdone yourself, lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra - I'm so glad that you liked this chapter!  I didn't get as far as I would have liked - just like Brian - ha! - but I have most of the next part ready, and I can assure you that they become much better 'acquainted.' (wink, wink).  I just have to finish it up and it will be posted.  But in the meantime, I thank you sincerely for reading and for the comments; it's been extremely quiet this weekend, so I appreciate you taking the time to do that, my friend.  I'll get the other part posted in the next day or so.  Thank you again, Sandra.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Man on a Mission

I enjoyed this chapter so much darling ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie; I appreciate you reading and commenting, Sweetie (I was feeling a tad lonely here - ha!).  I'm working on the next part and almost have it done, so it should be posted very shortly.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 05:35 AM · On: The Talk

This Story has left me speechless for a few hours. I was just wandering around, unable to speak or to think about something else, remembering everything I’ve just read. ‘The Parent Trap - QAF Style’ is more than fanfiction, it’s a real book that should be seen and read by lots of people, not only QAF and Brian-Justin’s fans. I know there is already a novel with this kind of plot, but your version is so much more better. This complicated story turned out to be nothing what I had expected before reading. I thought it would be concentrating more on romance and comedy elements, with a slight hint of angst, like it was in the movie, so when I was in a cheerful mood, I decided to read it so to relax even further. Instead, I fell into another reality, and read this masterpiece in a record time. I always knew you are a great author with an impressive deal of talent, but I never thought you could write something like this. All the details – even the tiniest ones (and there are lots of them here) are thought-out so perfectly, the psychology is so powerful and overwhelming that it seems like a life-work to me, something people work on for their whole life, yet you managed to create yours in less than two years! I know the story is still not finished, but you have already written so much of it!

I usually don’t like stories with kids, at least not when they take a lot of attention to themselves, but here I have to take off my hat!:) I loved deeply both Kaylee and Katie, I admire how you managed to make them so similar yet so different in the same time. Each of them has a complicated, unique personality – determined, emphatic, bold Katie and also determined, but more tactful and vulnerable Kaylee. I loved how you showed that they have a strong resemblance to both their dads, even if they haven’t lived together for many long painful years. I believed in them, and I knew almost from the very beginning that *they* will definitely be able to reunite Brian and Justin – they are their daughters to the very core. But, though I knew their success was just a matter of time, I still couldn’t be absolutely sure – sometimes children’s dreams, hopes, faith and love are just not enough… like here. I’d characterize this incredible, powerful story as bitterly realistic, full of endless pain, severe betrayal, cold silence and involuntary cruelness. I always enjoy reading about how the dominant part of the couple, like Brian, makes some big terrible mistake, and then does everything he can to make everything right again. Well, all of these elements are here all right, so I not only got enough – I got more than I could possibly handle. Usually Justin forgives Brian rather quickly, Kinney doesn’t even have to fight hard, but in your story, you made him struggle for every tiny step forward, for every Justin’s smile, for his trust which is almost impossible to regain again. I love mental angst deeply and passionately, but here it was almost too much for me – and it’s a good thing, you made me come down to earth, made me see what it really means to broke something, and then be unable to rebuild it. Brian’s despair, his pain, that hell he had lived in for ten torturous years has almost crushed my heart, as well as Justin’s pain, his confusion and embarrassment because he loved Brian, he craved him, but he couldn’t be with him, he couldn’t wholly forgive him. I understand both of them, I support them immensely, and it’s impossible to tell who is right, who is wrong – they are both are. It’s like a vicious circle – I felt like crying, because there was just no way out – Brian had suffered for ten years, his punishment was extremely severe, he begged for forgiveness thousands of times, so he was right when he said he couldn’t do it any more, now it’s all up to Justin. But, Justin had suffered terribly, too, and the betrayal was just too painful – he had every right not to forgive Brian ever. With each chapter – till the last one posted - you continued making that horrible situation more and more hopeless. In fact, it was so painful that I wasn’t even sure I’ll read it till the end, and when I did – I doubted I would ever want to read this again, it’s just… too much. But the next day I realized this story is such a masterpiece that I’ll be simply incapable of staying away. Yes, it’s realistic, it’s bitter and heart-breaking, but it’s beautiful. It’s very, *very* beautiful – the kisses, the conversations which you’ve described and built perfectly from psychological point of view, all small and not so small gestures and looks at each other, hesitant and passionate touches - and the happy ending it is very slowly leading to is just as realistic as all pain and sufferings Brian and Justin had to endure.

This story has almost made me cry for million times, and I’ll always be grateful to you for showing me what a real break-up is. In ‘The Parent Trap - QAF Style’ I was able to see pain, to feel it, to touch and taste it from all sides. I could also see Love – in everything. The way Brian missed Justin, kept his things, looked at his painting, always wondered what might have been is so touching, and again – so heart-braking, I can’t find words to describe it, to express everything I feel. THANK YOU. I’ll be waiting for the next update!                



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin - once again, all the time and care you take into your feedback is so humbling to me.  I cannot begin to tell you how much your words of support mean to me.  THAT is why I write; to hopefully take readers to another time and place and to touch their emotions.  If I have done that, then I consider that a great compliment.  I am thrilled beyond words that you are enjoying this story, and that you persevered reading it, even through the painful parts.  Both men have evolved and changed during their separation, but I believe that will only serve to make them stronger in the end.

I tried hard to do just what you said - to make each girl a small part of their fathers while maintaining their unique personalities  - Kaylee, the more tenderhearted one, and Katie, the strong, independent one, but both capable of sadness, fear, insecurity, vulnerability, and anxiety where their fathers are concerned.

I'm happy to say that I am working on the next part of this right now!  I have probably two-thirds to three-fourths of it written, so it should be updated very soon.  Thank you again, Katrin, for your extremely thoughtful and encouraging remarks; that means more to me than you know, as well as the 'favorite author' and 'favorite stories' designations.  I hope I can continue to keep you entertained with my stories for a long time to come.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MAXIE (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2012 08:33 AM · On: The Talk

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THISA STORY.  I DIDN'T GET MUCH SLEEP LAST NIGHT AS I STAYED UP TILL 2 READING.  THIS IS SOMETHING I VERY RARELY DO.   PROPS TO YOU AND YOUR WONDERFULLY WRITTEN STORY.I DON'T HAVE MY FIRST CLASS TILL 10 A.M. SO THAT WAS HELPFUL..  IT SEEMS THIS STORY IS SO ABSORBING I COULDN'T STOP READING.  IT IS PROBABLY ENDING SOON BUT IT WAS WELL WORTH MY SLEEPLESS NIGHT.  DO YOU HAVE IN YOUR PLETHORA OF WORKS A STORY IN WHICH EMMETT HAS A PLOT.  NEXT TO BRIAN AND JUSTIN HE IS MY FAVORITE.  YOU SAID YOU TEACH.  WHAT DO YOU TEACH, IF I'M NOT BEING TO NOSY?  WRITING MAYBE?



Author's Response:

Hi, Maxie!  So good to hear from you again, and to see that you're reading another one of my stories!  I'm so honored by your comments; thank you very much!  I get a lot of pleasure out of writing them, but even more so when readers such as yourself take the time to let me know how much you're enjoying them.:)  Yes, Parent Trap is heading toward a conclusion; maybe one or two more chapters, I'm guessing.  I always hate to see one end, but that will free me up to try my hand at another one.  I love these boys dearly, and still have a lot of story ideas floating around in my head.  So as long as readers enjoy them, I would love nothing better than to continue writing them.

 

I don't mind you asking at all about what I teach.  I'm flattered that you would think that it's writing, but I've never had any professional writing classes - I just love to read, and I guess that helps me to write; plus I had a very strict 5th-grade English teacher - ha!  I actually teach a full-time, nine-month adult ed course that helps train adults to assume front-end, administrative medical office positions.  So I teach a little bit of everything:  Microsoft Office 2010, medical coding, terminology & anatomy, English, spelling, accounting, medical software, etc.  Keeps me quite busy between that and my writing! 

 

And yes, I have two stories that feature Emmett rather prominently if you want to check them out.  He's one of my favorite characters, too!  One is "Bon Appetite," where he and Justin take French cooking lessons while Brian's out of town, and the other one is "Stirring Up Trouble," where he and Justin are business partners in a catering shop (Justin's a cake designer and Emmett mainly does the catering).  That one was quite popular, and is one of my personal favorites.  He's also featured a fair amount in a one-shot called "Just A Piece of Jewelry" and in "Roughing It," where Brian and Justin go camping and he and Michael start playing practical jokes on them.

 

Thank you again for all the interest!  I hope you will enjoy some of my other stories as you get a chance.  Hope you can get some rest, too - ha!  But I'm very flattered as well as honored.  *hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 07:53 AM · On: The Talk

I've would have reviewed earlier but there was just too much I wanted address that I had little time to do. I took a page of notes. I also had problems copying it to my Nook which delayed me. It always breaks at the pics in the middle of the story. Hopefully, that problem will disappear with a Calibre upgrade. Anywoo, let me begin:

"If they were going to lay all their cards out on the table, it was time to discuss the infamous weasel Ethan as well."

I didn't get it at first, why this was still an issue. The two are vastly different occurrences, but I did finally get that Brian did forgive Justin and it didn't take 10 years. My only issue is that Brian had a hand in pushing Justin in that direction. Justin paid a penitence before and after that fiasco dealing with Brian's emotional immaturity with relationships.

"Damn it, Justin, you are the most stubborn man I've ever met!"

That was true. I can't see why they never talked it out to begin with. But I cannot help but think that Justin had put up with a lot from Brian in the past and that was the final straw ( I think Flossee was Justin's big defender with this story and I hope she was able to do so again. She always made sense to me, LOL).

"I've changed a lot since you left."

Brian had changed a great deal before Justin left. It was just that slipped that made it seem otherwise. It had to have scared Justin into thinking that, perhaps, he couldn't sustain it.

"And when they made some other comment about how hot I would look in a frilly, lacy, white apron..."

That was harsh and one of my favorite parts. I'm glad Brian attacked him. I know that Brian never liked violence, so the teasing hit him pretty hard.

"I won't move Kaylee and me back into Britin, though, at least not yet..."

Stubborn Justin strikes again! I can't really blame him, but god, the man had gone without for 10 years. I think the man has paid his dues. The good thing is that Justin won't make him abstain any longer. And to really look at it in perspective; he didn't ask Brian to become a monk. He truly wanted nothing to do with the man ever again.

Loved the cabin lovemaking scene and the condom thing was hilarious.

All in all, I loved this very interesting chapter!

Sandra:)

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Well, I have to admit I like the idea of these two gorgeous men wet from the rain making out in a cabin with a fire.  Can I join them?  Sigh... I wish! LOL!

I'm very honored that you took the time to present such a comprehensive and thoughtful review; thank you for that and for reading this latest chapter.:)

Yes, Justin has certainly made Brian suffer long enough; I suppose it would make more sense in a way for him, since he has forgiven him, to just move back into Britin with Kaylee (which COULD still happen - Brian is not done trying to 'persuade' him yet - wink, wink), but I think for his daughter's sake (both daughters, actually) it might be better for him to be a little cautious before he (and Brian) fling themselves to the wind and go back full force to the way they were.  I do think they're definitely over the hump, though, and it will be a brighter future for both of them and their children.:) And I think their relationship will come out deeper as a result. 

I probably see maybe two (?) more chapters to this one before it's all over with.  I thank you sincerely for all the support you give me and my stories, Sandra; that means more to me than you probably know and always inspires me to continue writing. And I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. Thank you again - and I hope you have a great holiday!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 11:45 PM · On: The Talk

Oh I guess I should feel happy that Justin is willing to hop in bed with Brian again, but I still thinks he's being a bit of a jerk for not agreeing to just face facts and move right back in to Britin. Justin just refuses to really forgive Brian. I'm also mad that the poor horses had to stand around in the rain while Brian and Justin were able to run into the cabin. I can just imagine arthritis beginning to set in and soon those poor horses will be looking at a life of pain. I bet they won't even get their pictures on the bottles of glue they're heading for. Maybe the vet Brian finds to try and treat them will be hot as hell and he'll finally dump Justin and find real happiness. If I am able to put aside my feeling for Justin, I have to say this was a wonderful chapter. I think Tadhg and I would love to spend a restful vacation at the cabin.
Lori

Author's Response:

Oh, Lori, Lori, Lori...now I mentioned that there was a small corral next to the cabin, so please put your mind at ease; they were nice and dry inside the corral when the rain came; I made sure of that.:)  And I suppose Justin IS being just a smidgen (okay, a LOT stubborn) here.  But he's just trying to make sure they both get things right this time, and they have their daughters to consider as well.  Perhaps Brian will be able to, ahem, 'persuade' Justin to change his mind in the next chapter (wink, wink)...if he can find a condom - ha! 

As always, thanks for reading and thanks for the entertaining comments; even if you didn't sign your feedback, I would always know that it's you - LOL!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 11:23 AM · On: The Talk

yeah-  finaloly-- now I want Justin and Brian to go to bed together-  that will get Justin to adjust really fast-  thanks for the update=  please finish soon-  Kim-  I anxiously await the conclusion.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thanks for tackling that loooonnng chapter (normal for me, though, right?  LOL!)  I think you just might get your wish in the next chapter (wink, wink).  I see probably a couple more chapters to this before it's all said and done.  Thank you for all the support you've given me; I really appreciate that so much.  Looking forward to more of your own story, too.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Hey Kim,


Thanks so much for the great update.  I am so happy Justin forgave Brian.  I love the person Brian has become and I happy they are together.  Love the girls and Gus too.  More alone time for the boys too, some of my favorite reading.  LOL.  It makes me happy to see these updates to all of your stories.  Love them all!!  I cannot wait for the next chapters even though I know it is almost over. Take care Kim and have a wonderful holiday.


susie



Author's Response:

Hi, Susie!  It makes ME happy to see your wonderful comments, my friend; thank you very much for reading and for your thoughtfulness!  I'm so happy that you've been enjoying this story, and that you enjoy reading my others as well.:)  I, too, hate to see this one end, but hopefully that will eventually mean a new story that you may enjoy, also.:)  I'm about to 'trot' over back to the Kentucky bluegrass to a certain town social, but I promise to get this one updated again soon.  The boys have a little 'unfinished business' - both vertical and horizontal - to take care of before this is all said and done:)

Thank you again, Susie!  I hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, too!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 01:28 AM · On: The Talk

Great chapter - finally the boys talked and . . . Well almost got back together. Loved the hot action scenes. Can't wait till they find a condom! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.  And don't worry - something tells me that they'll scrounge up a condom somewhere - LOL!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Divergent Lives

So happy the boys are going to get back together. Thanks for the update . Marion

Author's Response:

Hi, Marion!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave feedback; I truly appreciate that, my friend.:)  I'll be updating more regarding their reconcilation soon.  Thanks again - hope you have a wonderful holiday!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 09:49 PM · On: The Talk

Finally :)

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - I know - this took longer than the dawn of man - ha!  Thanks for reading and for the comment.  Glad to see you still reading this one.:)  And BTW - thanks for the calendar, too! I'm looking forward to it and the DVD.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: lauren49ers (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 09:19 PM · On: The Talk

I'm so happy to see Justin and Brian could have mended their troubles. I hope it's not temporary.

It's great so see that Brian has changed a lot since their separation.

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Hi, Lauren!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I really appreciate that!  I'm glad that you're enjoying this story.  And no, I see this (finally!) as a permanent direction for them; I think it's well past the time to get them back together.  There are still some issues to address, but I do see them finally on the road to reconciliation.  I think they'll be one or two more chapters before it comes to an end.  Thanks again for the support; I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 08:54 PM · On: The Talk

HEY THERE!!  GOOD CHAPTER-FINALLY SOME HEALING CONVERESATION.  LIKE THE PICTURES, ESPECIALLY THE FIREPLACE.  I COULD HIDE OUT IN THAT CABIN.  I FEEL THIS ONE WILL BE DONE SOON.  LIKED IT A LOT, BUT YOU KNOW MY FAV.  VERY BUSY HERE HAD TO READ ON MY OWN AS WE ARE NEVER DOWN AT THE SAME TIME LATELY.  THE TEAM IS SCATTERED THUS MAKING IT NOT TO MUCH FUN AT THE MOMENT.  BAD NEWS!!  SOMEONE HIT "V" IN THE PARKING LOT.  DIDN'T LEAVE ME A NOTE OR ANYTHING.  I AM VERY PISSED.  TOOK HER TO A BODY SHOP-NOT TOO MUCH TO REPAIR BUT I'M NOT HAPPY.  FRIENDS SAY GET HER FIXED AND MOVE ON.  GUESS I HAVE BEEN A PAIN LATELY.  THE ONLY REASON I BVROUGHT HER TO WORK WAS TO RUN SOME ERRANDS AFTER WORK.  I'LL COOL OFF SOON HA!!  LUV 2 U



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  So sorry to hear about the Vixen; I know it's just a material thing, but I know how much of a disappointment it is to get your 'new baby' damaged.:) I'm assuming they don't have any surveillance cameras out in the parking lot?  That's a shame, but I'm sure you can get her fixed up good as new.  You'll just have to take her to the 'car doctor.':)

Lindc told me how you all are separated right now; I'm sure the dynamics aren't the same, but hopefully it's just a temporary thing and you will all be back together soon. 

So you must have a little bit of 'mountain man in you.:)  I, too, would love a mountain getaway somewhere.  Maybe someday.  Thanks for taking the time to read this and for your comments, Lee.  You are really so sweet to do that, my friend.  I'm sending you a hug and my love back to you, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 12:23 PM · On: The Talk

Once they reached the cabin I was waiting for the fact Brian wouldn’t have a condom but I thought Justin might have one. I love that you did that as now they have to wait longer to have sex and since I know how you write you probably won’t even give that to us in the next chapter. LOL Hurry back but only after farmer Brian.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Are you trying to say that I'm long-winded?  You're right - ha!  So glad you enjoyed this latest chapter.  Poor Brian, though, just can't catch a break.;)  I'll try my best to get to the 'horizontal' part in the next chapter, though (wink, wink). Thanks so much for reading and for your feedback; I really appreciate that, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 11:49 AM · On: The Talk

absolutely everything about this chapter made me smile...it was SO worth the wait!

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  I was just thinking about you.:)  I hope that you are doing well, my dear. Thank you for reading and for the comments; I'm so glad that you liked it.  I admit I was a little nervous about this one for some reason, I guess because Brian is OOC here.  But I'm relieved that you liked it.  Thank you again; I will get this one updated again just as soon as I can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 11:14 AM · On: The Talk

Jeez, I almost had to hook up the swamp cooler again with that scene in the cabin, LOL ( loved the pictures BTW). Had to laugh at the antics of the girls and Gus in the barn. Loved it! looking forward to the next chapter : )

~*~ Hugs, Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend!  I'm glad you liked their little cabin scene (wink, wink).  I thought poor Brian had suffered enough.  And I did enjoy writing about the kids at the end; of course they would have to check it out - ha!  I'll get this updted again very soon - thank you again for all the support you give me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 11:00 AM · On: The Talk

SO SO SO GOOD!!!!! FINALLY A BREAK THROUGH.  SORRY IF I'M LATE REVIEWING.  JUST GOT OFF A DOUBLE SHIFT AND HAVEN'T HAD MUCH TIME.  THIS CHAPTER WAS THE BEES KNEES SO GOOD.  I HOPE IT IS ALL UP HILL FROM HERE ON.  LORD KNOWS THERE HAS BEEN ENOUGH ANGST-ON TO HAPPIER TIMES.  THIS PLACE IS CRAZY-THE MAIN MAN IS OFF IN PHOENIX AND WE HAVE TO WORK WITH TWO OTHER DOCTORS.  NOT TO MY LIKING.  I TRY TO BE OBJECTIVE BUT IT'S NOT WORKING.  BB AND OUR TEAM WORK TOO WELL TOGETHER I GUESS.  I TALKED TO HIM TODAY AND HE WILL PROBABLY BE THERE ANOTHER WEEK.   RATS!!  I'M JUST SPOILED.  IT'S TRUE YOU GET USED TO YOUR TEAM AND IT'S LIKE A WELL OILED MACHINE.  SORRY, TIRED AND FEELING A LITTLE SORRY FOR OLE ME.  OFF TO BED.  THANKS FOR THIS SUPERB CHAPTER.  LOL



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  Always so good to hear from you, but sorry to hear how hard they're working you.  I'm sure you'll be so relieved when Brian is back home and the team is back together again. Thank you as always, though, for taking the time to read and review; that continues to mean so much to me!  I'm working like crazy on my updates, along with a new story that I will be posting early next month; I hope you enjoy it - it will be finished before I post it, though, which will be a welcome change, no doubt - ha!

And now it's back to the bluegrass of Kentucky to a certain town social.  Thanks again, lindc.  Tell everyone I said hello and send my love to them.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 09:13 AM · On: The Talk

Oooh, baby!  Hot passion from the boys and WAY overdue.  Very sexy scene and one can imagine every move when reading.  Nicely done.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

LOL!  I even get a wonderful visual aid to go with the review, too.:)  I thought poor Brian had suffered enough.:)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments, my friend; I really am grateful for that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 08:51 AM · On: The Talk

Yay! A wonderful update, Kim. I'm glad that Brian finally explained himself and that Justin forgave him. The cabin scene was lovely, of course (what cabin scene with those two wouldn't be, right?). I am very glad that they boys decided to start over and not rush into anything - a very smart decision.

The girls' reaction at the end was adorable.

I just loved the chapter and can't wait for more.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - I'm glad that I could finally get this story updated, and that you enjoyed it.  (I was feeling a little lonely over here - ha!).  I see probably a couple more chapters of this before it's all said and done as the boys adjust to their new life together and try and set things right again.

Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  I do appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 07:12 AM · On: The Talk

Haha. It appears as if the girl's cunning planning finally began to pay off - in dividends! Great talk... and the after was scorching HOT! Which you always write so unbelievably well. Loved the pictures... and the most amazing part of all - Brian Kinney without a condom! Who knew? And the world is still on its axis! :)

Wonderful update, my dear. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for tackling that rather voluminous chapter!  I'm glad you enjoyed their little 'reacquainting scenes' afterward.  Now they can (hopefully) continue their activities back at Britin; thank goodness Gus is a healthy teenager - ha!  Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review; you know how much that means to me.  *Hugs back*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 12:52 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

I much enjoyed that Justin set Alex to rights and beginns finally to listen to his heart.



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  Thank you for reading and for the comments!  I'm glad that you're enjoying this story and liked this latest chapter.  Yes, I think the boys are finally ready for their 'talk' in the next chapter, and will get the privacy they need to bare their hearts to each other.  Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback; I'll be updating this again very soon, but for now I have to 'trot' over to "Tame the Wild Stallion" for just a while. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 10:02 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

"No, it's not just a nickname; it's the name of a song."  

I never realized that. That was a nice touch.

Brian growled as he gripped both of Justin's shoulders to turn him to face him, resisting the urge to shake some sense into the man.

At least he knocked some sense in him. That punch to Justin's jaw was totally unsuspected, but I loved the whole scene of the commotion Alex caused and his subsequent tossing out by Gus.

Nice Job!

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Always a delight to read your feedback; thank you for all your support, my friend.  I'm glad you liked the part about the song; I was careful not to have Brian use that nickname in front of Justin just so I could use it later, and this seemed like a good time to do just that.  I actually have an ABBA CD at home (should I admit that?  LOL!), and every time I hear that song it makes me think of that scene, which is one of my favorites.  And I thought Gus doing the 'honors' for Justin and his dad was a good way to get rid of our pest, too.:) 

And BTW - don't worry about Justin's latest mishap - I think it will make for a tender scene between the two coming up during their 'talk.' (wink, wink).  Thanks again, Sandra!  I'll get this updated again soon - in the meantime, I'm in the midst of doing some 'horsing around' in Kentucky.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 05:00 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Yesterday I didn´t have time to read. But now I do ... just got home. Today I had my first presentation ... think it went well. Saturday I´ve 2 tests ... ieeekkks. Tomorrow and friday it´s internship and every free minute I'm studying. Pfff. 

But I wanted to read this chapter. One word WONDERFUL. * giggles * great job Gus !! And boys ... TALK !!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  Always so great to hear from you.:)  I'm honored you chose to spend what little spare time you have lately reading this chapter; thank you for that.  I'm glad that you liked it, my friend.  I thought it was poetic justic that Gus do the honors of throwing Alex out, don't you?  Now maybe these two stubborn boys can get 'down to business.' (wink, wink).  I promise to update soon, but first I have to 'trot' over to "Tame the Wild Stallion."  Brian's about to discover the joys of both sunshine AND moonshine - LOL!  Thanks again, Marny, and good luck with the tests!  You can do it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2012 01:16 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

thank you!



Author's Response:

You're welcome! And thank you for reading and taking the time to comment; I appreciate that.   I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Okay now I have a right to say poor Justin, he has a banged up ankle and a bruised face plus hurt feelings about Brian cheating. I hope Brian helps him on the horse. Alex came and went in one chapter; I was hoping Brian would think more about Alex and Justin together. Am I wrong to want to see him suffer, I know you will tell me he has already suffered but I want more. LOL I have my really sadistic hat on today. I am willing to forgo farmer Brian for now if your next chapter is the talk. Avoidance much. LOL I look forward to finding out what fic you update next.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee! Thanks for reading and for the comments.:)  You really ARE wanting Brian to suffer, aren't you?  LOL!  I understand, but I think their problems have been going on long enough now, and I do think both men are ready to try and resolve the hurt that has existed between them for so long.  If it's any consolation, I'm not quite sure Brian will get everything he wishes for in the next chapter; Justin will still be a little cautious when it comes to giving in totally to his ex-partner (I think that will become more clear in the next chapter).

 

And as much as I would love to update this one again, to be fair to the readers who have been waiting for an update to "Tame the Wild Stallion," I really do need to update that one next.  I promise to update this one just as soon as I can.  Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment; I greatly appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Woohoo Alex got his arse kicked by Gus of all people yay yay lol. I hope the ride on the horses goes well another brilliant chapter



Author's Response:

Hi, Chris; thanks for all the support you give me, my friend; I am very appreciative.:)  I thought Gus doing the deed was poetic justice in a way, and helps to show that he's warming up to the idea of the men getting back together again.  And I think you'll enjoy the 'ride' and the talk coming up (wink, wink).  Thanks again for reading and for the feedback.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 10:10 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Hi Kim, I really liked this. Loved both Brian and Justin's memories of Pride night, makes me want to go watch that episode again : )

Alex is just plain, dumb! I laughed though when Gus threw him out, would loved to have seen that,  haha.   

LOL, you might want to tell Justin that if he's going to do much horseback riding, he might want to invest in some boots. Those stirrups are murder on the ankels. Great update and looking forward to another one : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.:)  I confess I don't know a lot about horseback riding, so I might have to plead the fifth and hope you'll allow me a little license in Justin being able to ride.  I think Brian might have to give him a little 'boost' into the saddle by his ass (poor Brian - getting the hard jobs - ha!).  The 'talk' should be quite interesting (wink, wink).

 

Thanks for your own update, too, BTW; really enjoying your story!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 09:37 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to comment; it is greatly appreciated.:)  I should get this updated again shortly, and I think you'll like their 'ride.' (wink, wink).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Gus to the rescue-Brian's accidental poke at Justin was too bad.  Now he will have a good sized bruise to parade around.  This ride in the mountains better have a good ending.  Loved this chapter.  I think you are into horses lately.  They are having a horrible time back east.  Hurricane months are usually August and September.  This one in October is horrible.  30 miillion people without lights is some kind of a record.  I called my uncle to see how things were.  It is pretty bad especially in New Jersey.  Everyone here is good working hard and seemingly happy.  BB dating again.  He has turned into some kind of a romeo.  Ha!  Lee has a name for his vett.  VIXEN he calls her "V". Cute I think.  He is quite the hit.  So many people want a ride and he is very accommodating.  Off to bed. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Well, Brian's punch wasn't very accurate, but I think it *just* might come in handy next chapter when he tries to give Justin some TLC (wink, wink).  The horseback ride and 'talk' should be very 'interesting.':) 

I hope your uncle is doing okay - heard by last count that 16 had died on the east coast; horrible.  I was without power for a week in 9/08 due to Hurricane Ike and it's not fun, but at least we were safe and dry.  My heart really goes out to those affected.

So it's "Vixen," huh?  Cute!  But makes me think of one of Santa's reindeers - ha!  I was thinking maybe 'Seeya.':)  But as long as Lee is happy, that's the important thing.  Tell him to save me a ride, too, if I ever get to meet all of you; would love that some day!  Tell him, Nonie, and Brian that I said hello.:)  Take care and thanks again for all your support; it means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 09:26 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Yea! Loved the scene with Gus throwing out Alex. Can't wait to read about the horse back ride. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, Tag; I really appreciate that.:)  I thought having Gus throw Alex out was a nice twist, and helped to show that he was slowly warming up to the idea that the boys belong together again.:)  I think the 'talk' will go a long way toward bringing them together (finally - I know, it's been a LONG journey).  I'll work on getting this updated again very soon - have to 'trot' over to "Stallion" for a while, though.  Thanks again for the comments and for reading!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:05 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Yippie, Justin finally got the smack up aside his head he needed~ Lets hope this was just the thing to make his realize his mistakes. I think Justin might need a side saddle for his horsey back ride, he sure is in need of a handicap sticker, busted up face and sore ankle. I guess it looks like there is how a faint glimmer of the old feelings coming back to life for Justin. I still don't have great faith that their relationship will ever be as wonderful as it was. Justin will never be willing to forgive Brian for his very small error in judgement. I think Justin was by the far the bigger fool for his unhealthy hurt feelings and acting like a total jerk for all these years. But with the new death penalty laws I guess we can't really teach Justin a good lesson. I can't wait to see how the talk goes. Just please no more horse accidents. I still worry that somehow the pretty horses will end up in the glue factory. I enjoyed this chapter and eagerly await the next.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  Well, I'm glad that you finally got your wish (I think - ha!).  Hopefully Justin will redeem himself before the story is over; call me a sentimental sap, but I think they CAN get back to the way they were; only their lives will be different now with their children in the picture.  It may not be quite the same type of relationship, but I think it can be a deeper, more meaningful one now.  I think they will go a long way towards clearing the air in the next chapter (finally!).  BTW - I still can't tell which statements of yours are mockery and which ones are serious - surely you don't want poor Justin to be permanently maimed do you? - ha!  I DO promise to keep both horses out of the glue factory, though.:)  Thanks as always for your support, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 01:28 AM · On: For Our Daughter

Hospital draaaaama! Ya gotta love it!  And I loived the chapter! Onto the next one...

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Jon!  Glad you enjoyed this chapter, my friend.:)  A rather unwelcome visitor is about to pop up again to Brian's chagrin; but I suspect he will definitely be a short-term visitor.  Had to throw in just a little more angst and jealousy into the mix, though.:)  Thanks for reading and for the comments; and BTW - I'm (somewhat) impatiently waiting for the conclusion of your own story (hint, hint).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 04:44 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

How nice of Alex to pop up again. The only good thing I can think is there is no way he can handle twins, so I'm hoping that once he knows he will have to deal with twice the hate he'll realize that Justin isn't all that wonderful. Then of course a jealous Brian won't be a fun new friend for him to pal around with. I still think it would be best to to just kick Justin to the curb and move on, he does seem to have his fan club, even poor Gus is still captivated by his memories of the other father he loved so much. I hope something can change Justin back into the wonderful person they all loved before. Glad to see the two kitties are being well cared for, I hope in some way they can be returned to Kaylee. Even if they have to live in the barn with the horses!
I do so enjoy your stories, how lucky we are that you post them here for us...
Lori

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Lori, for those kind words; I appreciate that so much, my friend.  I consider that a great compliment.:)  I'll see what I can do about the dog (Alex) and the cats, too - ha!  I think if Justin and Kaylee wind up at Britin the cats should definitely be a part of it.  Good thing this is different than Tricky's stories; I don't think Tricky would be a cat lover, do you?  I could just see him chasing them all over the house, knocking down expensive Ming vases and Tiffany lamps with his tail - LOL!  But I'll try to make this version of Britin dog-free.

Alex can try, but I don't think he'll get very far in his pursuit of Justin; but you've given me an idea, though; perhaps he won't know there're two of them at first.  Can you imagine double the torment against him?  What a delicious idea!  I may have to think about that! 

Thanks again for providing me with such wonderfully entertaining comments and for all the support; I think every writer on here would echo my sentiment that you are sooo funny!  Love your imagination!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 03:40 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Sometimes it is good to overhear things about ourselves, Justin is at last starting to hear Brian. He has been so angry for so long he could not hear Brian before. Loved that Brian saw what Gus and Katie were manipulating and was secretly cheering them on. So we are off to Britin next chapter sweet :) hugs Chris



Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Thanks for your comments and for reading; yes, once we get rid of the 'pest' (Alex) the boys will FINALLY have their much-anticipated 'talk.'  Is that ALL they will do, though?  Hmmm....You know they're going to have to give in eventually.:)  I will be working on another update to this before I go back to "Tame the Wild Stallion," so it shouldn't take long.  Thank you again for all the encouragement you give me with my stories; it is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 01:41 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

I love to hear of the boys feelings for each other.  Let's get them together again real soon. 

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Yes, it has been a LONG road for them in this story, hasn't it?  But it's getting closer and closer; maybe not the next chapter (but who knows?), but it's getting very close now.  First I have to get rid of a certain ex-fiance; but not before the ugly green monster rears its head around Brian (wink, wink).  I do love a jealous Brian!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend; I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 08:45 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

You are such a tease. They have a one sided conversation. LOL I’m so pleased you are bringing Alex back as Brian might realize his ex is hot and other men want him but he stayed faithful when they were together. Yeah I’m like a dog with a bone, I won’t let it go. LOL Brian needs to grovel. Justin of course won’t go back to Alex but it can give Brian a little reality check. I am really trying to like this Brian but maybe bring on farmer Brian as I need to calm down. I can’t wait for this and the farmer update.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I think you've nailed down the scenario fairly well; of course I have no real intention of reuniting Justin with his persistent ex-fiance; but I DO adore making Brian jealous just a bit in the meantime.:)  They're getting very close now; that 'talk' is coming.:)  I'll be posting one more chapter of this before I go back to our little farmer.:)  I think Brian's about to learn the joys of 'moonshine' in addition to 'sunshine' over there - LOL!  Thanks for reading and for the comments; I greatly appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 07:10 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

SORRY!  COUPLE OF BOO-BOOS IN THE FIRST SENTENCE OF MY REVIEW-SUPPOSED TO READ YOU WRITE ON-SCREWED UP-MY PHONE RANG-AFTER I POSTED IT I READ IT DUH!! ME.  FORGOT TO TELL YOU THE NAMES SO FAR-GET THIS!! BEAUT,SIREN,JUICY,MYGAL,FIERY,AND CANDY.  OF COURSE I DISCARDED ALL OF THEM.  WHAT WERE THESE PEOPLE THINKING??? LUV 2 U AGAIN.

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:31 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

I KNOW YOU HAVE TO MAKE A LIVING-BUT IF I HAD BEAUCOUP BUCKS I WOULD BE YOUR SUGAR SOMETHING AND HAVE TO WRITE N A PERMANENT BASIS.  YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO BE WRITING JUST HERE ON THIS SITE.  YOU NEED TO WRITE A "BOOK".  SORRY JUST MY THOUGHTS AFTER I READ ONE OF THE NEW CHAPTERS TO ANY OF YOUR WIPS.  SEEMS SOME OF THE BARRIERS ARE BREAKING DOWN BETWEEN THEM.  THE BEDSIDE REVEAL WAS GREAT.  TwO VERY STUBBORN PEOPLE TELLING PEOPLE SOME TRUTHS BUT NOT ALL.  GUS IS JUST IN THE MIDDLE.  HIS THOUGHT PROCESS WAS SKEWED BY HIS DAD.  IMAGINE THAT.  THE NEXT CHAPTER, HOPEFULLY, WILL GET THINGS SET "STRAIGHT" HEE HEE!!  I HAVE MY NEW CAR, YOU WILL NEVER GUESS WHAT I FELL INTO.  BRIGHT RED CORVETTE.  SHE IS DOPE.  COULDN'T AFFORD A NEW ONE.  SHE IS TWO YEARS OLD AND IN GREAT SHAPE.  THE ONE OWNER ONLY DROVE HER THREE MONTHS OUT OF THE YEAR AS HE WAS OUT OF THE COUNTRY ON BUSINESS NINE MONTHS.  SO, NEEDLESS TO SAY I GOT A PRETTY GOOD DEAL.  SHE'S NOT CLASSIC LIKE BRIAN'S BUT SHE IS A BEAUTY.  CREAM INTERIOR. I KNOW I WILL HAVE TO WORK TO KEEP IT PRISTINE-LINDC'S DIRECTIVE.  SO PUT ON YOUR THINKING CAPS AS SHE NEEDS A NAME.  LUV 2 U



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  Congratulations on the new wheels!  I was secretly hoping for a red one - I'm assuming candy apple red from one of the names that was thrown out? (pardon the pun - ha!).  Well, you DID say it was a 'she,' so that narrows it down and only 5 letters is a challenge.  I was thinking maybe 'smokn' or 'flamn,' but let me give it some more thought. That kind of sounds too much like a Whoppe - LOL!  Perhaps a combination of letters and numbers?  I guess "Dopy" is out - ha!  I'll give it some more thought while I'm working on the next chapter of this story.:)  She sounds like a real beauty and in great shape - I'm very happy for you, Honey.:)

Speaking of the next chapter, what a wonderful review, Lee!  I can't tell you what your words mean to me.  How I wish I COULD get paid to just write; I really envy those people who are paid to do something that they love.  I do like to teach, but honestly I can't quite say that I consider it a passion.  Maybe one day I'll work up enough nerve to try and get a story published; who knows? 

I should have another chapter of this up soon, and then it's back to Kentucky.:)  Thank you again for all your encouragement; I'm so glad that you are doing better now; you deserve every happiness, my friend.  I'll be thinking about that name - take good care of your new baby.:)  *Hugs and love back*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 08:41 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

It seems like everyone's forgotten about Daphne. Considering that she has a good relationship with both Kaylee and Katie as well as with Brian and Justin it's surprising that no one's told her that the girls have been reunited and are in Pittsburgh and especially that Kaylee is in the hospital after almost being killed.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa - thank you for reading and for your comments.  Good point - actually, Daphne is due to pop up in the next chapter; I think Justin could use someone to confide in and to help push him in the right direction, which should help Brian's case when they finally have their talk.  Part of the reason why she hasn't come up, I suppose, is partly logistics.  I sometimes think I'm TOO wordy in my stories for some readers' tastes and maybe get too in-depth with details, and I get worried that if I try to include every possible character in the story, I'll never get finished - LOL!  But I do think it's important as the biological mother that she be included at least somewhat in the plot, even though she has not had quite the extensive involvement with them that the fathers had, although she DID know of the plot to help reunite them.  Not sure how Justin will feel about that little tidbit of information when he finds out,  hopefully it will be addressed in the next chapter.

In any case, thank you again for the comments and for reading; despite my occasional misfirings, I DO hope it is not preventing you from enjoying the story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 08:37 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Hey Kim...thanks so much for the update.  Can't wait for the next part. I just love Brian so much, he is so sweet to the kids and always knows what Justin needs.

WOW Alex is back, I thought that jerk would be long gone, but I guess he would have to come back to push Justin in the right direction, right back into Brian's waiting arms. 

Can't wait to see what happens at Britin when they all get back there...hopefully some hot Brian and Justin time (PLEASE...LOL).

Glad as always to read your great stories.

Take care Kim.

susie



Author's Response:

Hi, Susie!  Thank you for reading and for the support, my friend.  I don't think Alex will be greeted with open arms when he figures out where Justin is - I do see him popping up in the next chapter, but I suspect Brian will be more than glad to set him straight on where he does NOT fit in any more, and the girls won't be far behind him - ha!  I promise the much-anticipated reunion is coming, but you know me; it takes me a while for me to get there.:)

Thank you again for the feedback; it is very important to me to know that others are enjoyed what I write.:)  I really appreciate it.  I will be updating this with another chapter very soon.  *hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 07:26 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

THANKS for the update Kim-   Oh what a sneaky Alex-  I hope Katie and Kaylee and Gus' plans work out.  They need to be together.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy - and thank YOU for reading and for the comments; I really appreciate that.  I have a suspicion that no one in the Britin household will be too welcoming to our unexpected visitor, but he may just stick around long enough to create problems (at least temporarily). And I do love to tinker around with a jealous Brian!  Thanks again, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:38 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

I still love this story alot Kim ~ Vonnie xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend; I'm glad you're still enjoying it.:)  Thank you for taking the time to let me know.  I should have another update very soon.  Take care.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:44 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Hey, Kim, Great up date as always : )

I liked the fact that Brian just happened to have a bottle of Ibuprofen with him- he’s still taking care of Justin, even after all this time.

 I wonder what kind of trouble Alex is going to try to cause, he’s not going to like that Justin is at Britin with Brian and it’s no small secret that he isn’t too fond of Kaylee either. I have a feeling that neither one of the girls is going to put up with Alex trying to come between Justin and Brian, Oh I can’t wait for the next up date. Ha- I’m chewing my fingernails already. ~*~ Hugs, Janet



Author's Response:

HI, Janet; thank you for those kind words, my friend; I'm glad to finally get this one updated.  It's been way too long for my taste; darn people making me work for a living - ha!  And yes, you know Brian; he always just seems to 'accidentally' do what his friends or loved ones need for him to do, doesn't he?:) 

Alex will most likely show up in the next chapter, and Brian no doubt will NOT like it (tee-hee; I LOVE a jealous Brian - ha!).  But something tells me he won't be sticking around for too long; I think these two boys have been tortured long enough.:)

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, Janet; and I'm waiting eagerly for updates to your own story (hint, hint).  Take care and have a great week!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 02:41 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Yay, a new chapter! I'm glad to see Justin and Brian getting closer to reconciliation. But Alex needs to butt the fuck out!! :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend; yes, I think they're FINALLY heading in the right direction, but not without a few more bumps along the way.  I'll have the next chapter up very shortly. Thanks again for all your support; I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc &Nonie (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 02:04 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Wonderful last two chapters so good.  Looking up now.  We are a little more hopeful for them.  The talk will be next we hope.  Nonie came to stay with me for a couple days as i have a case of bronchitis (FUN).  So she read these two stories as i have coughing fits if i talk too much. BB said he has never seen me so silent, he is a bad ass.Ha! I can still type tho-that takes no talking.  Now to meds and bed.  lol ,from we 2.



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc; hi, Nonie!  Sorry to hear about the bronchitis; sounds like it's right up there with the pneumonia I had (ugh!).  I hope you get to feeling better soon; I'll just have to try and hurry up my next chapter so I can entertain you while you're resting, but unfortunately I have to do grades first for my students (another ugh but necessary for me to keep my job - LOL!).. 

 

I get the impression that Brian is enjoying your silence a bit too much - ha!  But I'm glad the typing fingers still work.:)  As always, I am grateful to you for your friendship and encouragement; thank you for reading and for your feedback; it means the world to me.  Tell Brian and Lee I said hello, too.:)  Take good care of yourself, my friend, and get well soon!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 12:15 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

I am so happy to see an update of this story,i think alex would do good if he stays away from Brian,he won't know what hit him he  goes there.Great chapter,can't wait for the next.Hugs.



Author's Response:

Hi, Luisa!  Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the feedback; I'm very happy to know that you're still reading along on this one.  Thank you, too, for bearing with me; once I went back to teaching, it has really slowed me down more than I like, but if it's any consolation there will be another chapter of this very soon to help make up for it.:)

Alex will not be welcome when he shows up, but he may be a little dense getting the message - ha!  Something tells me, though, that Brian will get his opinion across loud and clear.:)  Thank you again for the comments, Luisa; they are greatly appreciated; and thanks for all the support you give my stories.  *Hugs you back*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 12:03 AM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

I can't help but get excited when I see a new update from you, especially, since all your stories are my favorite.

The kids are still scheming and they have Gus' help now -- good.

Justin pretended to be asleep was worthy of his twins.

Alex back in the picture makes things more interesting -- nice build up.

It's clear that Brian and Justin love each other and want to get back together. Brian just may have to do some major groveling and Justin may have to let go of the past.

Love this story!

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  What wonderful comments about my stories; that means so much to me - thank you sincerely for that!  Your comments are just the encouragement I need to keep writing.:)   I guess we can see where the twins' scheming comes from now, can't we - LOL!  The next chapter should be quite interesting when the former boyfriend shows up.  No one will really be happy to see him, but least of all Brian - I definitely see the green monster rearing its ugly head coming up.:)  Things should be progressing nicely now - and we're just getting to the meat of the story.  I'll have another update again very soon - thank you once more for that wonderful feedback; it is appreciated more than you know.  And thank you for all your ongoing, consistent support of my stories.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 11:57 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

It's an update! But it's 1am over here and I just finished up Halloween cookies and I am beat! Will read this first thing tomorrow, Cheers, June :)



Author's Response:

Hi, June!  Thanks for checking in and letting me know you'll be reading the latest update.:)  Sorry it's been so long in coming - RL teaching is definitely slowing me down, but as with all my stories, it WILL get updated AND completed, especially since we're just getting to the good part now.:)  Hope you enjoy the latest update; I'll get another chapter posted very soon.  Thanks again for all your support, my friend; it is greatly appreciated.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 11:33 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Yay! What a lovely Sunday present. Thank you, Kim, for this wonderful chapter!

I am so glad that Justin is coming around and that Brian is opening up a little about his feelings and about what happened the night that broke them up. I enjoyed the kids' scheeming ways very, very much and I'm glad that Justin and Kaylee will be returning to Britin.

I can't WAIT for the next chapter where I hope that Brian will crush Alex into DUST! :)

Hugs,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Hope you and the hubby are doing well, and he is enjoying his new job!  Well, I think you may get your wish; Brian is definitely NOT going to like the former boyfriend showing up in the next chapter (actually, Justin won't like it much, either, but Brian obviously will be the more vociferous of the two!).  And, naturally, both girls won't be happy about it, either, but I suspect they will be happy about the eventual outcome (hint, hint).

 

So glad that you're still enjoying this story; I'm sorry it's taken me so long to update it.  I'll have one more chapter updated for this soon.  Thanks for everything, Vin; can't wait until we can go on another adventure soon, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 11:26 PM · On: The Mark of a Real Man

Thanks Kim, glad to see an update of this story. Love this so much. Wonderful chapter.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny, my friend; hope you and the girls are doing well.:)  Glad you enjoyed this latest update.  I will be posting another chapter to this very soon - have to get my students' quarterly grades computed first - ugh!  But it shouldn't be long.  Thank you again for taking the time to comment.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2012 06:26 AM · On: For Our Daughter

An awesome chapter,I loved it Kim ~ Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie, my friend; I'm so glad that you liked it.  BTW - I received your lovely card yesterday - thank you for that; I will cherish it.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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