Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2013 07:30 AM · On: First Date

Loved it!!!!! Oh what a great date!!!!!

Oh no!!! no more chapters!!! *sniff*. Please update soon! Thank you for this beautiful story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetheart!  I think there will be perhaps a couple more before I'm done with the story. Do not fear; it will definitely be finished soon. Thank you for ALL the wonderful feedback and for reading.  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 04:42 PM · On: First Date

I've recently been reading "The Wedding Present". I had t get away from all the angst and good romance always does the trick. I was delighted to see this update and that it was appropriately titled. I loved that date as much as Justin. I also loved Brian's comparison of Justin's antics with the girls. All in all, this was very delightful chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra! Thanks, first of all, for reading "The Wedding Present."  I know what you mean about angst. For it to be closer to the holidays, there seems to be an abundance of it over here (and I'm guilty of that myself).  I may have to throw in a Christmas Tricky tale somewhere before the holiday just to break that trend.;) 

I'm glad you enjoyed their date.  I tried to come up with something a little unique, and hopefully I succeeded.  There ARE some wine and painting classes, but normally I think it's where you bring your own liquor. Not sure if any vineyard does it this way, but if not I think they should - ha!  We actually have a vineyard about five minutes away from us, so maybe that's where the inspiration came from. But I thought it was very appropriate for them.  So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:03 PM · On: First Date

so happy that you updated this story-  yeah-  I love the idea of painting and wine, and evidently it is a new trend.  My daughter posted about doing a similair evening tonight with some friends.=  who knew

 

loved that they are realizing that they need to work this out together under the same roof and are not taking making love off the table-  wonderful update as always- will be sad to see this story end, but for now I love the slow build up



Author's Response:

Hi, there! Thank you for reading and for the comments; I really appreciate that.  Funny that your daughter would mention the same thing about the date!  Not sure how I came up with it, but we DO have a vineyard nearby, and I think I googled the idea and it came up.  I thought it was very appropriate for the boys on their date, and I tried to come up with something that would be a little different for them. I'm glad you liked it.;) 

I think I see maybe two (?) more chapters before I'm done with it.  Thank you again for reading; I have enjoyed writing about Katie & Kaylee, and kind of hate to see them go, too.  Maybe a sequel at some point down the road (?).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 10:31 AM · On: First Date

Hi Kim,

I’m late reviewing again, as usual : /  this was such a great chapter though, I could just imagine the look on Brian and Justin’s faces when the girls told them what they did : ) 

I also liked the wine and watercolors idea for a date, LOL, although the cop at the end kind of wrecked their mood, that was funny.  Another wonderful chapter, my friend, and congrats on reaching 500 reviews  :  )  Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Thanks for reading and for the well wishes. First story in which I have achieved that plateau, so it does make me happy to see it.;)  I appreciate everyone's support of this story.  I thought this was a good place for Brian to take Justin on their 'date.'  Was wracking my brain about an inventive/creative sort of date to take him on, and this came to me eventually.  I will probably have a couple more chapters of this to go before it's all said and done. Thanks for the comments, my friend!  I truly appreciate that.  Looking forward to more of your own story, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 04:12 AM · On: First Date

congratulations on topping 500 reviews! - and with such a sweet chapter, too!

the date was perfect - and I love Brian's reaction to the girls efforts!

really great story - fulfills every need of this unapologetic 'depth of love' addict

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  Thanks for your well wishes and for reading this latest chapter.  It makes me happy to finally reach this milestone in one of my stories.  I have truly grown to love Kaylee and Katie as part of this family now.;)  I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can. Thanks again for the support,  my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:15 PM · On: First Date

LOL!!!!

I really couldn't hold my laughter when they got busted by a patrolman.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sue! Thanks for reading and for the feedback, my friend. So glad that you enjoyed this one.;)  I thought it was kind of ironic that Brian, the previous Stud of Liberty Avenue and the man who didn't think twice about using cuffs on a policeman himself, would wind up being busted for his 'friskiness.';) Thanks for taking the time to comment!  I will get this updated again just as soon as I can.  Probably have one or two more chapters to go before it's finished. Thanks again for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 06:05 PM · On: First Date

I am very happy seeing this story being updated. Thanks much sweet Kim! I love this chapter, so full of romance, lots of funny parts too, Ohh you made me laugh so much in that part when a police officer knocks the SUV window, that is super funny and embarrassing too which made me love this story more. High Five for another wonderful chapter! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  Thanks for reading this latest chapter and for your feedback, my friend.  LOL - yeah, I thought it was kind of ironic that Brian of all people would be busted by the cop - ha!   I think I see probably two more chapters to this before it's all over with.  Thank you for bearing with me in between updates. Wish I could do it faster! But it WILL be completed in the near future. Now onto a little "Stallion!"  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 04:14 PM · On: First Date

Thanks Kim for the update of this story. It's wonderful and funny.
* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny! I was just thinking about you and missing you.;)  Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend. Thanks for reading and for the comments!  *Hugs* back.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 12:01 PM · On: First Date

What a wonderful date - up until they almost got arrested. LOL.  Like daughters like fathers.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, at least Brian didn't wind up in jail this time! Wonder if he ever told Justin about that, BTW?  Of course, since Justin got a little 'treat' afterward at the loft, maybe he wouldn't care.;)  So happy that you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for reading and for the comments - and for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 11:42 AM · On: First Date

Oooh, sexiness with the boys.  I think they are truly stuck with each other.  Nice story.  Can't wait for more.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  So glad you enjoyed this chapter!  Well, we all know what I hope will happen by the time this is done; they have a little unfinished business to take care of (wink, wink).  But that will come (pun intended) in the epilogue.;) Thanks so much for reading and for your comments.  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 10:57 AM · On: First Date

I am doing a happy dance--look what I found tooling around here. What a wonderful chapter. Justin teaching is a great idea and the run-in with the cop is quite a riot. This hapened to me a few years ago as I am sure it has happened to a lot of readers here. I really love this story a lot--it is one of your best and another favorite of mine. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Well, I'm shocked!  You little vixen, you (speaking of Lee - LOL!).  I'd love to hear the background about THAT little adventure of yours - ha!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this one. I think at least with me the stories that resonant the most are ones that contain new characters that have not been on the show before and that you can actually bond emotionally with. I think that's what happened here with the girls; I truly feel like they are part of B and J's story now.;)  Hopefully, readers feel the same way, too. Thanks for reading and for the feedback, lindc.  You are such a support to me.  I hope you and your friends have a great Thanksgiving together. Tell Lee and Brian that I said hello and send my love.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:10 AM · On: First Date

Loved the idea for the Wine and Watercolors. What a great date! Is this a real thing? If not I know lots of wineries here in Oregon that you could market the idea to. Congrats on going over 500 reviews, too! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag! Well, there ARE "paint and wine" parties, but I'm not sure I saw one specifically at a vineyard where they grow the grapes.  It's mainly a "BYOB" sort of thing, instead, where you bring it to a studio and paint. But I thought this would be a great idea for the boys' date.  Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for the good wishes. I appreciate that.:) ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:27 AM · On: First Date

It's now 1.30 am in Paris and I'm supposed to be up in 4hours (who needs sleep when there is a B/J story to read?) LOL. Thank you for your amazing stories!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:23 AM · On: First Date

Hi there!!

Because I'm so curious and hungry for this story I've jumped from chapter 9 to chapter 34. The only thing I can say is "Happy 500th review", you really desserved it!!!! Your story are always so entertaining and beautiful. Please keep writing!!!!



Author's Response:

Awww...thank you, Sweetie! I'm so honored. And so happy that you like this story! Thank you so much.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 06:23 AM · On: First Date

Hi, Kim! What a wonderful update! How I laughed at Justin's embarrassment, and of course, Brian encouraging that behavior. I can just picture that so easily. I think it probably wise that the girls confided in Brian. He would be understanding and relate. And.. the date, that was great! The end just as much so. I think one thing is for certain - these two will never have an ordinary life, parents or not. Such a fun and heart-warming chapter!

Once again - great chapter! Thoroughly enjoyed it. Will definitely hate to see the end of this one. But... I know how that goes. Good luck with your 500th review. I don't know if I will ever have a long enough story to achieve that! *Hugss* Janet 



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - thanks for much for reading and for your support.  I am woefully behind on reading other stories between trying to update and beta, in addition to my teaching, but I promise to get caught up soon.  TGIF!  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter  I'm *this* close to finishing it, but to me that probably means two more long chapters before it's over. Thanks for the comments; I appreciate that so much, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

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