Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:38 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you again, my friend. First chance I have had to respond today; the site has not been letting me in at all today! Thanks as always for reading and for your comments; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 11:49 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Hey Kim! Life has been crazy busy and insane lately, I'm trying to get planned and get moving so it has been super stressful but I'm finally able to have some free time and am excited to see two new updates on this waiting for me! :D 

Awww.. I can only imagine the emotions coursing through all four of them when Brian and Justin finally got to tuck in their daughters together again after so long... the bickering between the sisters is always great, I love how opposite they are. :P I'm glad Brian stepped in so Justin didn't have to explain why he needed to stay in the carriage house for now, it's hard enough on him as it is so I'm glad Brian saw that. It's so cute that Brian remembered Justin's favorite breakfast, he's really trying. Oh gosh being so close to one another yet so far away has to be SO difficult, especially after all the built up longing and heat between them from being apart so long. Haha, I have a feeling Brian definitely despises those cats, and will forever because of the jealousy of this exact moment. I really like that Brian is "sacrificing" and not fighting on Justin on this and letting him go and take his time and do what he needs to do. Ohhhh boy, the girls are at it again. I wonder what they'll be up to this time.

I think they are both going to have plenty of sleepless nights ahead of them... haha oh my gosh, I LOVED when Justin got lost in what shower Brian looks like just by hearing where he was. Oh goodness the sleeping pills thing... I feel like they definitely still have some sort of walls up between each other... I know it will take time but I think they are still pretty tentative and still protecting themselves by not being as playful as they used to be. I hope the playfulness starts to seep back in soon...

I love this extreme fatherly side of Brian. (: I'm glad he made sure to let Gus know that just because there are now two sisters here that he isn't any less important. Ha, Gus is sooo much like Brian, love it. Hahaha oh gosh, Justin is torturing Brian without even knowing it. I wonder how much more they are both gonna be able to take.

I cannot wait to see what plan the girls have worked up this time.. I SO hope it doesn't backfire... everything is moving along for the family... my fingers are crossed! Excited to have the next chapter to go onto now! :D

M.



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan! You're so thoughtful to leave a review for each chapter; thank you for that.:)  And I agree with you - obviously both men are more than ready to resume their lives together, but after living apart for so long there is bound to be some reacquaintance period for both them and the girls.  I think it would be unrealistic to just throw them back together. That doesn't mean they can't still indulge in a little "afternoon delight" from time to time.;)

Thanks for reading this chapter and for the feedback!  I really appreciate that.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2013 01:18 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Caught up with one of your epic novels.



Author's Response:

And you did quite well in such a short amount of time!  I will have the next part up very shortly.  BTW, did you ever read the one about Brian going camping?  "Roughing It?"  That's one of my personal favorites (if I do say so myself.;))  I guess you can figure out what sort of story it is; I mean, Brian going camping??  I know you enjoyed "Arms Open Wide" a few years back; this one is somewhat similar in nature to that where Justin is tormenting Brian.;) Hard to believe that was over two years ago since I started writing on here!  But what a ride.:)

 

Thanks again for all the comments, Bob.  It is truly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 12:15 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Justin couldn't stand the heat in the kitchen, LOL. I'm with the girls on this one. The two are going to go hot and heavy as much as possible. They might as well shorten the commute.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  So good to see you reading this latest chapter.:)  "Shorten the commute" - ha!  Love that!  Well, all I can say is that by the time the girls get through, the 'quaint, cozy little' carriage house might not seem quite as ideal.;) 

 

I'm working on the next part of this right now, so I should have it up shortly.  Hope you enjoy what the girls come up with.;)

Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sandra; I really appreciate that as always.  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 03:32 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Oh this is exciting! I am looking forward for what the girls are planning. I really enjoy reading this story Kim. Thanks for the update. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  So good to see your comments.;) Thank you for reading and for the encouragement.:)  I'm very happy that you're still enjoying this story.  The next part should be up very soon, and the girls will be coming up with some creative ways to hopefully bring their dads closer together in the same house (they are VERY impatient - ha!).  I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story!

 

*Hugs* back to you, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2013 02:31 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

i really like this story, but i wish that everyone wouldn't look at justin's actions at the momemt as unreasonable because i am completely on his side. brian cheated on him after they had agreed to be monogamous and had two daughters - it is fine that he wants to take it slow. but i do love this story anyway, it's really well written.



Author's Response:

Hi, Vicky! Thank you for reading this chapter and for the comments.  I'm glad you are satisfied with my taking their reconciliation a little more slowly.  I know most readers want an easy, quick reunion between the boys, but I tend to agree with you that there are good reasons for making sure that they are doing the right thing this time.  Of course, the girls are as anxious as everyone else, though, for them to be back together as a family, so they will be doing their best to push them in the right direction.  I think there needs to be a little more balance between desire and common sense, though.

Thank you for the comments; I'm glad that you are enjoying the story!  I will have another part posted soon.  I hope you continue to enjoy it until it concludes.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:36 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I can't wait to see what crazy plan the girls have in mind. I don't think anything less than a brain transplant will help Justin. When will he come to his senses and realize he can trust Brian? I hope the cats aren't too stress by all this moving about and start to pee all over the place. You know how cats can get. Nothing worse than a cat with problems. I can also see the girls are going to have some drag out fights soon. Once Brian and Justin really reconnect the girls will have nothing to bond over, wonder which one will be the real nasty one and start things. I'm sure they will also start to hate their fathers for making them lead such different lives for so long. I'm betting Kaylee turns to drugs and hanging out at tattoo joints, sure her first one might be cute but before long she'll go dark and gruesome and she'll be designing a headless horse for her back and some skulls on her neck...but in a girly way, probably done in pink ink with small flowers peeping out of the eye sockets. Katie will either join a cult or become an unwed teen mom and wind up hooking on the streets to pay for diapers. If she ever does find her way to therapy it will all come down to the way Justin treated the whole family. Thanks for another amazing chapter, my favorite part was Gus eating the yummy breakfast, maybe because I haven't eaten yet today and now I'm dreaming about that, well minus the icky syrup.
Lori

Author's Response:

Lori, just when I think you can't possibly top your previous comments, you do.  You must live in a really imaginative, amazing world - ha!  I was reading this while sitting with my mother, who was awaiting cataract surgery today, and trying my best not to crack up over your comments (she has NO idea what sort of stories I write, and trust me, she would NOT understand - LOL!).  It was hard not to laugh out loud, though.  I love your amazing, warped, imaginative mind! 

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope the girls' hijinks lives up to your expectations in the next part.  I feel a heavy burden to do that now - ha!  Thanks for reading and for your comments, Lori; I still say you need to write a comedy story for the boys.  I would definitely read it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 07:43 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I don't see Justin and Kaylee staying too long in the carriage house, though having it for his artwork will work out well.  Will Brian and Justin stop pussy footing around now that the cats are in Pittsburgh?  I hope so!  Love reading how Grandma Jen fits in so well with Brian and Gus as well as Katie.  Looking forward to the next installment of this tale.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  Pussyfooting around - ha!  Love that.:)  Well, the girls will be giving them a definite push in the right direction in the next chapter - the little schemers just can't stay away from their attempts to bring everyone together in the same house.  Look out, Daddy!  Poor Justin.;)  (But it's for his own good.....!). 

I'm working on the next part of this now, so I should have it up very soon. Thank you again for reading and for bearing with me as I update it.  This story WILL be finished just like all my others.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:38 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

It's tough sleeping alone with the desire still inside.  I hope they figure that out soon.  :)

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for the comments.  Yes, I think the boys are quickly going to realize that coming up; and the girls' scheming is only going to make things worse (or better, depending on your viewpoint - ha!).  I should have the next part up very soon.  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:17 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Uh oh! Those girls are going to cause even more trouble? I hope they're more successful this time and nobody ends up at the doctor's. tAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  I promise not to generate any more physical harm.  Their scheming will be more along the lines of pranking.  All I can say is, poor Justin - ha!  But it will turn out to be for his - and Brian's - good.;)  I should have the next part up soon, since I've already started on it. Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 10:17 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

I hope we’ll get to see a scene between the girls and Daphne before the story is over. She is their mother and has a good relationship with both of them so it’s strange that while Jennifer has been over to see them Daphne has not especially since one of her daughters was recently injured.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa - yes, I intend to have Daphne show up in the next chapter, as a matter of fact.  I, too, think it's time she come for a visit with them.  She has been involved with both of their lives growing up - and they are aware of who she is.  But despite her busy schedule, I think it's time to reintroduce her, and I think Justin could use someone to talk to about Brian.  Thank you reading and for the thoughtful comments; I appreciate your support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 09:12 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Nice chapter! butt we are waiting for the steamy one. You know how we are. I have been watching Randy at the con 2010. I know it's old, but it is very informative and he is so cute. I have been reading a few things here but find some stories a little too weird for my taste. Off tonite so have been reading here and there. Adam will be performing July 3 here in San Diego, hopefully I can go-good lord willing and the creeks don't rise. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  I promise to get to the 'steamy' parts coming up.;)  You know that is inevitable with these boys!  I assume you're talking about Randy in Paris?  I remember at the con in Cologne, someone asked him if he would say something in French.  Yummy!  I wish I knew enough French to write a short story about Justin learning to speak French to Brian. I think that would be quite interesting - and get a certain brunet quite horny, too.;)

If you're looking for other stories to read, may I suggest one if you haven't already read it?  It's a period piece, but it's one my favorites:  "Five Coins."  I just loved that story for some reason. And have you read Snow's "Alien?"  Those are two that come to mind.  I'm sure there are a lot more, though.  Oh, and I wrote an RPS story about Gale and Randy and posted it yesterday on my LJ.  Not sure if you're into that - or if I will post it here - but thought I would mention it in case you wanted to check it out.:)  It's relatively short (for a change!).

Hope you get to go see Adam.  Looks like he really puts on an amazing show.  I saw him on "American Idol" not too long ago with one of the other contestants, and it was great! 

I hope to get the next part of this story up very soon. And Michal tells me she's working on the next chapter of "Father, Son, and the Blond," so hopefully we'll have that updated next week as well. And I see a new Tricky story - and maybe a summer fan fic story - on the horizon, too, if I can get to it.  Ack!  Thanks for all your support as always, lindc.  You and the peeps are very special to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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