Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2015 02:14 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Have to stop reading for now, its in the middle of the night here in Germany ... I started reading your story today, perfect for a relaxing Sunday :-) I almost didn't, because its sooo long, but I liked your "Love and Drama at the Sit A Spell" so much that I decidet to give it a try.

I know there are more chapter to read, but I am really glad for now that you had Brain acknowledge why he did what he did and explain it to Justin, so that he could understand and would finally be able to heal inside.

All the longing and the bitter-sweet moments really got me! And what a great idear to put Gus in the mix and his feelings of beeing abandoned by Justin! I enjoy this one, but if I dont stop now, I know I couldn't till the last chapter, and my boss would certailny be not that happy abaout that.

Thank you for sharing this story!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Man on a Mission

"Please, Daddy.  Don't separate us all over again.  I promise Dad and I will give you all the room you need.  I won't come and bother you unless I know you aren't busy.  And I'll even cook you and Kaylee dinner every night.  I'm a good cook, aren't I, Dad?"

That broke my heart!!!

"I need to make sure that we can love each other the way we are, not the way we were."  Beautifully said!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sorcha.;) It's almost like I'm reliving rewriting it all over again, which brings back good memories. So happy to have you reading and commenting. Thank you again for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:02 PM · On: Man on a Mission

The table scene was funny.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Man on a Mission

You're such a tease! Brian's not the only one likely to self-combust from lust overload. I need me some B/J action soon! Please! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag!  It's coming (amazing how much 'that' word COMES up in my responses - ha!).  I have most of it written, so I hope it doesn't disappoint.;)  I just have to write a little more and then it can be posted as soon as my beta looks the last part over.  So it won't be long!  Coming from someone who can write smut with the boys so well, I do hope you like it.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sweetie; it really means a lot to me, my friend.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:22 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend, for reading and for the comments!  I almost have it done, and at least according to my beta, she needed an ice bucket, so I'm hoping it lives up to its reputation.;)  It should be posted very shortly.  Thanks for all the support!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:18 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Thank you for updating this one sweetie! I love the old movie, but the twist you did with the story, I love it more!!! I am enjoying the scene wherein Brian became a responsible father, hehehe....I can only imagine how he took care the baby Katie till it reaches 10 yrs. old and can't believe the fact that he doesnt anymore tricking and stocking up condoms wow!!! Can;t wait for the next chapter, surely it will be amazingly hot!!! :):):)

{{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy - thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the comments, Sweetie; I really do appreciate that.  And as far as the next chapter goes, well, this is what my beta said, and I quote:  DAMN!! THATWASFREAKINGHAWT!!

LOL! So hopefully you will feel the same way once you read it.;)  I'm almost done with it, so it shouldn't be long now. Thank you again, my friend, for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 08:06 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Wonderful Kim, but ... aggrrr ... I need a little bit more * grins *.

Love the interaction between Brian and Gus about the concom * giggles * .


I've to stay at home today and tomorrow (and maybe longer). Thus plenty of time to read. Saturday my oldest daughter (Belana, 15 years old) has fallen from her horse * sigh * against a fence. She has broken her left upperarm near her shoulder. They can't put a cast on it ... and surgery isn't needed. She only has her arm in a sling. The whole week no school for her. She need a lot of help and sleeping ... * sigh * we do very little.


Need the next chapter ... hurry.


* hugs *

Author's Response:

Ugh - so sorry to hear that, Marny!  Tell Belana I hope she gets to feeling better soon - now (unfortunately) she and Kaylee have something in common - LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed the part about the condoms; I think that was one of my favorite parts, too.:)  Talk about the shoe on the other foot!  I do have most of the next part written already - including the part everyone is no doubt waiting for - but I just need to finish it up a little before I post it.  I just figured part of the update was better than none since it had been quite a while since I had posted something, so I thought I'd best post what I had.  The other part should be up very soon, though.:) 

I hope your daughter recovers quickly and does not wind up in a lot of discomfort.  I'll be thinking about both you and her, my friend.  Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave me feedback, Marny.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 07:42 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Kim dear,

Please update soon. The sooner the better!!! ;)

 

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Hello, Sue, my friend.:)  Always so great to hear from you, and to know that you're reading this one.  I DO have most of the next chapter written; but need to finish it up, which I hope to do today (crossing fingers).  My beta, Gloria, is wonderful at getting them back to me quickly, too, so I'm hopeful it will be posted at least no later than Wednesday (I really do have to work on some school grading - ugh!).  Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, Sweetheart.:)  That means the world to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 06:34 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Hi Kim I must have missed a chapter so I was thrilled to catch two chapters in one lol. Well at last the boys are on track and hopefully they can sweep away all their hurts on a bed of love. So funny Brian frantically looking for condoms and lube and the mum's knowing the real dessert lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! Oh, how the tables have turned, haven't they?  LOL!  I enjoyed the part about the condoms, too.:)  Good thing his Sonny Boy comes prepared for all contingencies.:)  You'll be happy to know that they do, indeed, wind up 'horizontal' in the next chapter.:)  I hope you'll enjoy it.;)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments - and for all your support.  You're so good about reviewing authors' stories, I've noticed; I do hope they all realize how great you are about that.  I know that I do.:)  Thanks again - I'll have the next chapter up very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 04:42 PM · On: Man on a Mission

Thank you!



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Orchida! And thank YOU for reading and for commenting.  I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:40 AM · On: Man on a Mission

You are SUCH a tease!  Love the dialog.  Good job.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend; I love the bantering, too.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Janessa (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:22 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Hi! New here to reading and reviewing.  I have been assigned a daunting task-no not really, just kidding, to read and review your stories for my friend lindc while she is on her trip to Japan.  I work at the hospital on a different or team and have been friends with her since here arrival here.  She asked me to do this for her-so I am obliging.  I must say this is a wonderful story as I thought it would be a good idea to read previous chapters before the new one.  They all enjoyed this chapter and are waiting for the "wink" "wink" other half.  Everyone says hi.  Brian will be off to Arizona for more teaching seminars soon and Lee maybe be moving. He is not sure yet.  Well I'll sign off now.  Later  Jan



Author's Response:

Hi, Jan!  lindc takes such good care of me - assigning someone to fill in with the 'peeps' while she's gone - LOL! And you're great to not only help her out, but also go back and read the other chapters to get caught up.  Thank you for doing that!  And thank you for not only the comments, but also the other info about Brian and Lee.  Both Brian and lindc have been doing a lot of traveling lately, haven't they?  And Lee may be moving? Is it out of state?  That's kind of a surprise.  I do hope he'll stay in touch from time to time, but I want him to do what will make him the happiest.  He certainly deserves it.:)

Tell your 'peeps' that the 'other half' is coming up, and I hope it doesn't disappoint.  And yes, they will FINALLY do some 'talking' horizontally (wink, wink).   Thanks again, Jan; I hope even when lindc gets back that you will continue to enjoy some of my stories.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

P.S.  You even sign off like Brian with the 'later' comment - ha! :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:16 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Well I guess it's official, Brian is going to put up with the heartless blond. I still think Justin is being very unfair about this but if it makes Brian happy I'm willing to allow it. I do hope the poor cats are going to be happy with the move and I hope they don't cause too much trouble. I loved when Brian had to ask Gus for condoms, that was perfect. Now I just hope the lube Brian found isn't too old and gunky, it would be a shame if Justin had to suffer any irritation. Now how long will it take before the twins start to fight? You know they won't get along all the time. Thanks for such a wonderful update.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  I always love the spin you put on things - ha!  Wouldn't have even thought about the old lube irritating Justin's delicate passages.;)  But with his allergies, I guess that could be possible.;)  I'm going to let that pass, though, so I can have them engage in 'other' things (wink, wink).

About the girls fighting, that's rather perceptive of you, since part of the remainder of the story will involve them all having 'growing pains' as they try to reunite in one house.  As you mentioned, things can't always be a bed of roses, and that may be one of the issues, along with the cats.  If you'll remember, Katie and the cats didn't exactly get along all that well.  What will happen when they become a member of the family?  And how will it work with Brian having TWO girls under the same household?  It's going to be a lot different than when they were babies.

I'm just not sure if all this will be in this story or maybe a sequel; I'll have to wait and see where my muse takes me on that - and what the readers think.  Thanks again for reading and for the comments, Lori - I always look forward to them.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Oh Thank you thank you.   I had an amazing weekend but after all my guests left, it is a little sad.  This was such a wodnerful surprise and present when I got on tonight.  Brian and Justin consummating their long lost selves-  Oh I can't wait.  



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy!  I'm so delighted that you were looking forward to reading this; thank you for the comments, too.:)  I have most of the next part written - including what you and no doubt most of the other readers are waiting for (wink, wink), so it should be up very soon.  I do have to grade some papers today that I have put off doing (I wonder why? LOL!), but I'll do my best to get the rest of the chapter written sometime today and hopefully at least get it posted by tomorrow or Wednesday at the latest.  Thank you for all the support, my friend; I really do appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BIZ (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Nice-----but teasing.  We are all waiting!..  Cute Brian asking Gus for condoms.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Hi, Biz - thank you, first of all, for reading and commenting on so many of my stories lately - I appreciate that more than you know.:)  And yes, I know; I fully intended this to progress to where this is all leading to - and it will, promise! - but the chapter started to run too long and I wanted to at least get this part posted so everyone didn't think I had forgotten about it.  I have most of the next part written, though, so it should be up within the next couple of days.  It won't be all smooth sailing for them just yet, but they will definitely get their wish finally in the next part.;)  Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to comment; I am very grateful.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:18 AM · On: Man on a Mission

"I need to make sure that we can love each other the way we are, not the way we were."

That is such a valid point. I was disapointed when they did not move in together, but the resaon makes perfect sense.

That condom situation and then the dinner with Brian groping Justin under the table was priceless! You've outdone yourself, lol.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra - I'm so glad that you liked this chapter!  I didn't get as far as I would have liked - just like Brian - ha! - but I have most of the next part ready, and I can assure you that they become much better 'acquainted.' (wink, wink).  I just have to finish it up and it will be posted.  But in the meantime, I thank you sincerely for reading and for the comments; it's been extremely quiet this weekend, so I appreciate you taking the time to do that, my friend.  I'll get the other part posted in the next day or so.  Thank you again, Sandra.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Man on a Mission

I enjoyed this chapter so much darling ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie; I appreciate you reading and commenting, Sweetie (I was feeling a tad lonely here - ha!).  I'm working on the next part and almost have it done, so it should be posted very shortly.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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