Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 05:20 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Loved it!

Reviewer: apipsc (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 05:25 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

I'm like Katie. I refuse to believe that Justin can be happy with other man who is not Brian Kinney x'D

Amazing adptation . Keep going :D*



Author's Response:

Hi, Ana!  First of all, welcome to the site!  Glad that you are here.  Secondly, thank you for reading and for the comments; I greatly appreciate that.  I'm delighted that you're enjoying this story. Things will get a little rocky for a while as everyone tries to adjust to their new lives, but I'm confident that it will all work out in the end.:)  Thank you for the support.  I will get this updated again just as soon as possible.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Canon memories.....

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 01:20 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Another fantastic chapter ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Just re-read the whole story again and you are right... *facepalm* I knew that's what he had done... I think I was in deniel because - well - because. :o) I do have high hope for B/J still... By the way, the girls are adorable! I am loving your ability to bring them to life.



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee!  Thanks for letting me know.:)  I can understand, though - it does take me a little while to update sometimes, so it's hard to remember where it's been (sigh)..wish I could update faster.  Maybe once I get the Elvis and Christmas stories done I can do that.:)  And don't worry, BTW, about whether they will eventually get it right or not - that is the only way I can write these boys because I believe they belong together!  So we all know where it will lead eventually.  But for me half the fun is getting to that point!  Thank you for the compliment about the girls.:)  I purposely tried to evoke some of their fathers in both of them.  Of course, that will ALSO be their own undoing in time as one of the boys finally catches on to what's going on.  Thanks again for the feedback and for reading - hope you have a wonderful Christmas!~Kimberly

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

OMG I need more



Author's Response:

Thank you again, Sweetie!  So glad you're enjoying it!  I promise to update this one very soon.:)  Your kind words are so appreciated.:)

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

"But if someone were to dig deeper, they would see the fine cracks around the surface, the spark that had gone out of his life when Justin had left, the inability he had now to allow anyone else’s heart to pierce his, except for his daughter anyway."

I'm happy the twins are trying to put them back together. They are miserable apart. Brian realized he made a huge mistake and has paid his penance.

I love that you had Justin playing the piano and singing in this chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks so much for reading that huge chapter! I'm very glad that you liked it.  I could see Justin singing and playing the piano; as an artist, he seemed interested in all sorts of cultural arts, including dancing and singing, and we all know what a beautiful voice Randy has in real life, so I could certainly see it as plausible anyway.:)  I think it's time to put these two boys back together, don't you?  I know the girls certainly do!  Thanks again for taking the time to comment - you're so consistent about doing that on a lot of my stories, and I really am grateful for that.:)  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.:)  The girls will have a little more groundwork to do before one of the boys finally realizes what's going on and moves to reunite all of them together.  I hope you'll stay tuned in the meantime.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:47 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

That was sweet! I can imagine the "other side" is difficult for the girls. I wonder which twin will crack first? I hope it's Kaylee, because once Kaylee tells Brian about Alex, he will up to Chicago like that! Because we all know Brian Kinney does not lose!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks so much for tackling that super-long chapter!  It was long even by my standards.:)  I'm so glad you're still reading along.  The twins are already finding it hard to keep up their charade as they realize it's not as easy as they thought.  And I tend to agree with you - I kind of like the idea of Brian going all 'caveman' and rushing up to Chicago to pursue his ex-partner back into his life (yum...).  You might just be on the right track (wink, wink).  But I'm not sure if it will be a case of one of the twins cracking or simply slipping up and being discovered.  I hope you will stay tuned - the reunion is coming up in the not-so-distant future but not before I have a little fun with Kaylee's reunion with Debbie and Emmett specifically and Katie's goal of making Alex's life miserable - LOL!  Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend.:)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Wonderful as usual..Excellent writing!....each father is unique in their own way yet they fit together as a puzzle.

I think I should start reading completed work only since I am confusing myself. I almost ask abt Rob, only to realise that's another story. Somehow, I thought the romancer's name was Rob (Alex)....sorry....

Look forward to when the girls reveal themselves ....



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear - (Sigh)....I know - I'm sorry to have more than one WIP going at once.  I keep telling myself I'm going to eventually finish them up to where I only have one going at a time, but the ones (most of them) I'm writing right now are so detailed that it will be some time before I can get to that point.  And I can't let Christmas go by without at least writing a short story about the boys, but I'm trying hard not to post it until I get it either completely done or close to it so everyone isn't waiting for the updates to it.  At least I do hope I do a good job of updating each story regularly rather than taking months in between, so maybe that eases the pain just a little over having to wait.  I can certainly understand wanting to only read the completed ones, though, but I hope that won't wind up losing you as one of my readers.:)

At least you're confusing Alex with one of my OTHER story characters (in case you haven't figured it out, Rob is in the Elvis story I'm writing where he has the crush on Justin), so I'm flattered that if you're confusing it at least you're doing it with one of my other stories and not someone else's - ha!  Thank you so much for your kinds words, my friend, I am very appreciative that you took the time to do that.  I promise to update this just as soon as I can and I hope you will continue to enjoy it.:)~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Now I am very curious to find out what Brian did to cause the split; I mean, I really just went through every possibility and I can't think of anything. But then again, Justin and Brian said he broke a promise, sooo THAT is huge considering Brian never broke a promise to Justin (or anyone for that matter). Well, thanks for the update and let's get another one soon :o) This is getting better and better!



Author's Response:

Hi, Yvee! Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.  Actually, if you go back to the second chapter (I think that's the right one), it does explain what Brian did to make Justin break off with him.  Don't want to spoil it for you, but hopefully you will see what I mean if you go back and check.:) And of course, it will have a big impact on any possible reconciliation because it points toward an issue of trust, something that Justin will have to learn to do again with Brian if they are to reunite. 

Thank you again for all the kind words; I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  I promise to get this updated again just as soon as I can.:)

 

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

What a great chapter! I suspect that Justin is very close to putting it all together....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you kind words and for reading!  Yes, I think both guys are beginning to figure out that SOMETHING is wrong, but they just can't pinpoint it yet.  I mean, what would be the odds that both girls would meet each other?  Of course, they had just a little help, which will be revealed in time.:) 

Thanks again for leaving me feedback and for tackling that very long chapter!  I promise to get this updated soon.:)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Well, I am not surprised, but I love absolutely everything about this chapter. The descriptions are like snapshots of everything that is happening, and the emotions for all four of them show clearly. I have been anxiously waiting for a new chapter here for days now, and this one certainly did not disappoint! I think by the time these two find their way back to each other I will be just a blubbering pool of tears, so strong is the anticipation! I don't know how I will bear the wait, but I have a feeling that wait is exactly what I will have to do - as it seems more there may be alot more to tell before we reach that point.

Excellent writing - thank you so much for this story.

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Aww...thanks, Charle!  I always love to hear your thoughts.:)  I'm glad you liked this extremely long chapter!  It was long even by MY typical standards.:)  I don't think the girls realized just how difficult it might be to impersonate each other.  Despite being twins, they still have some differences that will eventually be their undoing.  As you mentioned, though, as much as I would LOVE to just move straight to the boys' reunion with each other, it's going to take me a little more time before I get there.  I want to show Kaylee's reactions, for example, to Emmett and Debbie among the 'gang,' as well as Katie's battle against Alex.  She is going to continue to make it very hard for the man to make any headway regarding his plan to get Justin to marry him. 

Rest assured, though, that I will do my best to make the boys' reunion an explosive one eventually (in more ways than one!).  Thanks again for the comments, Charle.:)

~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Boy!  what a chapter.  I guess that's why I love your stories they are long, descriptive and so evolving.  I don't think this charade is going to last much longer.  I would have thought by now they would have been a little suspicious.  Cats are very intuitive about people.  they may be twins but have different scents.  Any way this is a remarkable adaptation story of the main one with different little twists here and there.  So much fun to read and waiting for the slip-ups to come.  Good job, you are the story master or is it mistress ha ha!



Author's Response:

Awww...You're so kind, Kym - Thanks for the comments, my friend!  I like that - 'story mistress' - ha!  That WAS a long chapter, even for me!:)  Yes, the boys will continue to get suspicious - they know something is up but they can't quite figure it out yet.  There will be some more slip-ups on the girls' part coming up and eventually one of the fathers will figure it out (don't want to give too much away yet, though, but I have a specific one of them in mind and a certain way I want to do it.:)


Thanks again for reading so many of my stories, Kym - that means so much to me!  I will be updating all of my stories regularly, and hope to have the first part of my Christmas story posted soon.  I hope you will enjoy that as well.:)

 

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

Happy Tuesday to me! Another chapter of "The Parent Trap"! Yes, yes, yes!

OK, now that I am done celebrating, onto my review... I loved this chapter - the interaction between the girls and their dads was awesome, the conversations between them were great. There were a number of places that either made me laugh or brought a lump of emotion to my throat. It was just great!

The only thing that I don't like is that I'll have to be super-duper patient until the next chapter, because my impatient patootie wants the next chapter right the f**k now! LOL! I'm sorry, but I really, really, really want to see how it all progresses, which of the boys figures out their daughters' secret first and I CANNOT wait for their reunion. I don't know how I am going to survive the wait time....swoons...

OK, I'm back... lol! Maybe you would consider writing a couple more chapters of this story before going back to your regular rotation? Pretty please, with sugar on top? Possibly?  :)

Again, loved it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  (Sigh...) You're killing me here!  And to think I'm considering posting a Christmas fic, too - I must be out of my mind!  LOL!  You're so sweet to want some more of this; that makes me very happy to hear.:)  I'll think about it.  I'm always torn between wanting so badly to continue while I'm on a roll and not wanting to disappoint the other readers who may be waiting for another update in one of the other stories.  It's like being in a candy store and not knowing which treat to eat first!  If only one of these stories showed an ending soon - the only one even near that place is the Elvis story, at least I hope.  Of course, you know how I can get.  My 'two-part' Thanksgiving went on for five rounds - yikes! Thanks so much for your kind words, Vin.  Wherever I wind up you can rest assured I will be diligently working on an update to one of these!:)  Take care, my friend.:)


 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

a wonderfully long one. loved it.  i was afraid you were under the weather-but i guess you are super busy as are all of us peeps.  i just got back from another hospital--i was loaned out to give updates on some procedures.  i had to write up my findings and my action plan and results.  i am not very good at the writing bits but better on ojt.  i will have to read this one when i get back to work. bb and lee will be waiting for their updates on their favs.. no pressure ha ha! i, of course i am waiting for the latest christmas story.  i see a new friend and worker has joined our ranks.  jo-ellen is a character, so funny and is loving your stories.  need a nap. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Yes, thank you SO much for all the recommendations for my stories!  I can't believe the number of your co-workers you have steered my way, and I will be forever grateful for that.  It's really weird how small a world it can be at times; Jo-Ellen was telling me she had gone to see Randy in "Tommy," too and she had had a similar experience about having to shave her brother's hair like I had portrayed in "Trust."  Such a small world!!  Thanks again for all your support.  Next up is Lee's favorite - the dirty world of politics!  I'm debating whether to post the first part of my Christmas story first.  I may do that soon.  I have it written, but I was hoping to get a little further along first.  Will have to see how it goes.  I do have some extra time off during the Christmas holiday, so that should help my writing schedule somewhat - keep your fingers crossed!  Now go get some much-needed rest; thanks so much for all your support.  Say hi to al the 'peeps' for me - you're all very special.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

* makes happydance * finally an update and such a wonderful one. Love those two girls with their "big" mistakes. I'm glad Justin admits that he still loves Brian. Please don't make me wait another month for the next chapter * is begging *.

 

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  (Sigh...)  I know - I have triple the number of students this year from last and it seems like all I do is grade papers - yuck!  It has seriously cut into my writing time.  But on the positive side, this chapter at least was SUPER long, even by my standards!  I will try my best to update a little sooner.  I do try to update before they fall off the 'most recent' category on the site, but I do wish I could update faster.  At least in the next chapter I think we will see a definite progression of the boys' eventual meeting again.   But first there's a pesky boyfriend and some grandmother reunions to get through first.  Thanks as always for the kind words, my dear.  *Big hug* back to you, too.:) 

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