Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 11:18 AM · On: Camping Conspiracy

Yasssss! I am Team Jennifer for life. That custody decree  the judge handed down was an un- fair  un-funny joke. I can't believe Justin and Brian agreed to comply.  But if they had not, we wouldn't have this nice long story to indulge in.

As for the reason the family split, I would gladly wring Brian's neck and kick his narrow  butt  into the middle of next week for cheating. However, the ex-stud of Liberty Ave is still only human. Because Justin was so hurt, disappointed, and angry he couldn't deal. What a mess! But I know you're going to fix it. Right, Kim?

Author's Response:

Don't worry; would I let another Kim down? I've got your back. 😉

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 10:33 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

Wonderful! I simply adore this story and I feel sure I will return to it again - definitely gave me that warm fuzzy feeling. I love grown up Gus too and really glad to see him included and so close to his Dad:-)

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikky! I have no idea how I missed your review! Must have been when we had problems with the notifications.  But I still want to thank you for reading and especially conmenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ~Kim

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2015 07:48 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

That was a nice ending, including Daphne und her girls.

 

Can't read such a long story again, it's too addictive ;-)

Author's Response:

Hi, Steff! Yes, 39 chapters is a long one.;)  Guess "Paper Hearts Killer" and "Remember Me" are disqualified, then, along with some others that I got carried away with - ha!  Thank you so much for sticking with it, though, and for all the comments. It is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2015 02:14 AM · On: Man on a Mission

Have to stop reading for now, its in the middle of the night here in Germany ... I started reading your story today, perfect for a relaxing Sunday :-) I almost didn't, because its sooo long, but I liked your "Love and Drama at the Sit A Spell" so much that I decidet to give it a try.

I know there are more chapter to read, but I am really glad for now that you had Brain acknowledge why he did what he did and explain it to Justin, so that he could understand and would finally be able to heal inside.

All the longing and the bitter-sweet moments really got me! And what a great idear to put Gus in the mix and his feelings of beeing abandoned by Justin! I enjoy this one, but if I dont stop now, I know I couldn't till the last chapter, and my boss would certailny be not that happy abaout that.

Thank you for sharing this story!

Reviewer: enika_benika (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2014 01:06 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Yes!!! And I so wanted to get rid of asshole Alex myself! ))))

Author's Response:

Ha! Me, too! But there's only one man for Justin.;)  Thanks again for reading, Nadia! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 03:51 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

Wow, I just re-read this from the start as I had lost track of where I had reached previously and I absolutely loved it! The twins are adorable, nice to see they inherited some of Justin's creativity in more ways than one lol! And I am always a sucker for a nice happy ending! Now I'm off to read some more of your work for the 4th or 5th time :D 

Author's Response:

Hi, Hannah! How kind of you to not only reread, but also take the time to let me know how much you enjoyed this story. Thank you for doing that.  And I feel like I need to apologize for you having to make you reread it to remember parts of it. I know it can be a while in between updates due to everything going on in RL and helping to admin this site, so I do appreciate you having faith in me to finish my stories, and being patient while I complete them. I will never leave one unfinished; never have, never will.;)

I'm thrilled that you liked Kayley and Katie.  I try to introduce new characters when I can, and if someone tells me how much they liked them, I consider that a true compliment. Thank you again. I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2014 11:57 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

'the end (for now)' - OH! does it mean you're going to think of a sequel??? yay! it'd be sooo great! my heart is breaking to say goodbye to this beautiful family, i love them so much! i would love to read the sequel! your imagination is amazing!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sasha - you are so sweet - and so good to me. THANK YOU for your very kind words; that means a lot to me.  I really grew to love Kaylee and Katie in this story, so if I can figure out a way to write a sequel I will definitely do that. I would want the sequel to do the first story justice, though, so it will require some thought.  I do try to invent additional characters for Brian and Justin to interact with, so I am very happy that you liked this story so much, and liked their daughters. :) Thank you again for all the support; that means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2014 12:17 AM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

Oh, Kim, I can't believe this amazing story is over! This final chapter was THE perfect end - funny, romantic, sexy, sweet, emotional and all together lovely. Happy endings make me beyond happy and this one just wrapped an already wondeful story with a perfect bow.

You know I love all of your stories, Kim, but this one is definitely my #1 favortie of yours.

Hugs & cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:

Hi, Vin! So great to hear from you, dear friend. Sorry for the delay - I was actually in Spain for the "Queens of the Road" con with Gale, Peter, Scott, and Randy.  I have HUNDREDS of photos and my retelling of the events yet to post, but what an amazing experience. Anyway, thank you for reading these last few parts and for the comments.  I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this story.  I just found out it's being translated into Russian on another site, which is a great honor to me.;) Thanks again for reading!  Hope to see you again one day soon.  Stay in touch!  *Hug*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2014 10:20 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

I can’t believe this story is finished! Seems like it’s been ages since I started reading it, and yet I remember everything, every small detail. This was a wonderful, thrilling journey, and ‘m surely enjoy it more than once in future!

Justin’s proposal was *beautiful*. So beautiful, it’s hard to describe it! I was sure that Brian would say yes, but still I felt a little afraid and nervous. I can’t even imagine what would have happened with Justin if Brian had said no! Daphne was right, he did have his heart set on all this. Refusal would have destroyed him  - again. When Brian said yes, I was finally able to breathe!:) It was a brilliant idea to say yes in different languages, and when he said ‘nai’, I took it as ‘no’, like Justin.

Only Brian could say ‘I do’ in such a way!:) It was completely brianish, and I loved every second of it – again, just like Justin. I can just burst with happiness imagining them, with their family, smiling and so deeply in love! The wedding was striking, the present was amazing,  making love after it was… incredible. I still can’t imagine how you fill every line with such raw emotions, such seemingly elusive feelings. My heart broke for a  moment when Brian once again remembered his cheating. I was touched when Justin soothed him — I felt that right then, Justin has finally forgiven him completely. It was a very important, incredibly beautiful and surreal moment.

Ah, Christmas, my favorite holiday! I always thought that with a manor as big as Britin, the gang will want to celebrate everything in there. I would give so much to watch how their celebration would go! Even though I re-watch Queer as folk rather often, I still constantly wish for behind-the-scenes and gap-filler moments!

By the way, ‘Forever isn’t long enough’ is probably the best phrase I’ve ever head. It describes perfectly what I think of love, and what love means between Brian and Justin. It’s about them.       

Wow, what a Christmas present! Or should I say, presents? Brian and Justin are so in tune with each other, it’s ever scary! They truly belong together.

The last chapter was bittersweet, as always, but I loved it with all my heart. I’m glad you didn’t forget about Daphne – she needed to hear that the girls love her and think of her as a mother. Thank you, Kim! Thank you so much for giving us such a wonderful, fantastic journey. Today I saw that this masterpiece is being translated into my language, and already has many fans! I was so surprised, thrilled and happy! But I still prefer to read in original, because you have an incredible style, I want to enjoy it as much as I can. Thank you! I have no doubts that I’ll be returning to this story occasionally. It’s amazing, and it’s absolutely unforgettable.  

Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! As usual, you honor and humble me with your very thoughful reviews. Thank you for always taking the time to do that, and for always lifting my spirits with your support and your kind words. That means so much to me and I am thrilled by how much you enjoyed this story! Thank you. 

 

I am also honored to hear that this story is being translated, but to be honest I was not aware of that.  I normally try to keep track of where it was posted, so if you could provide a link I would greatly appreciate it.;)  Thank you again for reading, and for the feedback!  I am very honored.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Inga (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2014 12:09 AM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

Thank you! That was a awesome story. I love it.

The only thing I don't like is the end. I mean, why have there to be an end at all? I want to stay with the boys and this lucky little family forever.

Thank you!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Inga!  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story.  I'll take it as a big compliment that you didn't want it to end.;)  Perhaps one day in the future I may revisit them; I did grow very fond of writing about both girls.  Thank you again for the feedback!  It is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Inga (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2014 12:26 AM · On: Unquenchable Fire

That - was - hot !!! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Hi, Inga!  You're welcome, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it.;)  You know the boys can't stay apart for too long once they see each other again.;)  Thank you for reading this story, and for taking the time to comment.  I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2014 10:14 AM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

My dear Kim,

thank you so much for this amazing and wonderful story. I enjoyed it so much, especially the last few chapters.

I forgot to breathe when Justin was waiting for Brian's answer, although he couldn't answer otherwise than yes, right? :-)

Can't wait meeting you in Bilbao, my dear.

Take care, hugs, Meggi

 

Author's Response:

Hello, dear friend!  Thank you for reading this story, and for your lovely comments.;)  I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.  "Little Randy" and I are eagerly waiting to make our international journey to meet you, Myri, and so many other online friends.  It's going to be so much fun! Can't wait to get away from all this snow!  See you soon!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Inga (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2014 11:09 PM · On: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed

It's wonderful, Kimberly. Thank you. Chapter 1 to 7 since yesterday evening. I'm curious about how it's going on.

I was really touched by the part as Katie found the picture of Justin and Brian in this book. You described her feelings so well. I experienced exactly this situation as a kid and I felt thrown back to my thoughts and feelings.

You're amazing.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  You're so sweet to read and leave me feedback; thank you for doing that.  That means so much to me.;)  I hope you enjoy the rest of it.  *Big Hugs* for your thoughtfulness.  ~Kiim

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2014 05:35 PM · On: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

it really is a sound of happiness! a wonderful chapter, i love your story so damn much! it's fantastic! brian and justin came a long way to happiness they have now, and i enjoyed reading about their journey so much! i'm glad you got the ribbon! you so deserved it! i've read two great completed story in the last few months, yours and 'Broken open'. i've rarely been so impressed! this site is great, i'm so happy that it works again, the best stories are here!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sasha! Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment, my friend. What lovely comments; I am so happy that you enjoyed this story.  I, too, am delighted the site is back in operation. This is by far my favorite site in which to post stories.:)  Thank you again for the best wishes and the support; I greatly appreciate that.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2014 04:32 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Hehehe, I am really enjoying this!

Reviewer: Jodie (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2014 12:27 PM · On: Divergent Lives

I loved the end of this story, im glad they are all happy. now its completed i will read again :) 

cant wait to read more from you! 

Author's Response:

Hi, Jodie! Thank you for reading this story and for the comments that you left.;)  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, and appreciate you taking the time to let me know.  And never fear, I will never leave a story unfinished.  My duties here, along with my full-time job, prevent me sometimes from updating as fast as I would like, but I know all too well how it is to get caught up in a story and see it left incomplete, so that will not happen with mine.;) Thank you again for the support! And I will have a new story up soon, as soon as I can finish "My Heart's Desire," which will be concluded shortly.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:09 AM · On: An Undeniable Hunger

OMG!!!! This chapter was so perfect :) I think the most wrenching part was when Brian would remember the brief happy times he and Jusitn had witht he twins before the split. And then with him looking at the photos on the piano... it just made my heart melt. And also when you wrote about Brian hearing Justin's voice, and how he hadn't realized how much he missed that sound, that was so perfectly worded. Justin's reaction to seeing Brian also had me squeeing the whole time. I'm SO glad the next chapter is already posted so that I can go on and read it.

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Sarah!  You started reading this at the right time, too, because I just finished it, so you will not have to wait to read the conclusion.  I really enjoyed writing this story, and putting a QAF spin on it.  I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it.  Thank you for reading, and for the feedback; greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 08:25 PM · On: Divergent Lives

This was such an amazing story from start to finish. I loved it from the playful beginning with the girls right through to parts where I never thought they'd come together - in the cellar etc. I mean Justin was a right twat at times... and you kept me / us on tenterhooks right to the very end - will they, won't they...

You really outdid yourself with this fantastic story. Can't wait for the next one!!

Lisa xx

Author's Response:

Hi, Lisa - you're very kind to comment, especially since you already read it on another site and reviewed.  I suspect most people have already read on the other sites as well. Hence, the lack of reviews.  But I didn't think it was fair to make everyone wait until I could post it on here.   Kind of discouraging in a way, but MW is still by far my most favorite fan fiction site. Thank you for the encouragement.  I really enjoyed writing this story, and getting to know the two girls along the journey's way.  *Hug*  ~Kim

Reviewer: stella bousquet (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2014 04:34 AM · On: Family Plans

Please please please, don't stop this story. I don't feel obligated to write that. I'm writing because I feel that : this story makes my heart speeding and gives me butterflies in the chest. So much love and so much tenderness !

It's a very very touching story. I love the girls and I love the B&J love.

So congratulations, really. Don't let anyone discourage you. Don't have doubts. This story is so good ! Keep going.

Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that, and for reading this story. And don't worry; as far as this and my other WIPs go, I would NEVER leave one incomplete. So one way or the other, it WILL be finished, whatever the number of comments. I would never do that to readers.;) 

Thank you for the encouragement; it is greatly appreciated.  I needed that. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Family Plans

Oh do I remember the 11yr olds mood swings.  I love the way this story has progressed.  Waitng pactiencely for the next chapter.   Sandy

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sandy. You're a sweetheart to leave a comment. TY, too, for following me on Twitter.:)  I may just try to go ahead and finish this up before moving on, as I think I can do it with one more chapter.

Thank you for reading and for the comments!  It's nice to know that some readers are still continuing to enjoy this story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 11:53 PM · On: Family Plans

What a wonderful chance to get caught up on what the girls have been up to.  I'm really curious to know what Justin and Katie are painting.  And what Brian had hidden.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Thank you for reading, and for especially taking the time to comment. :) And thank you for bearing with me in between updates. How I wish I could do that quicker!  I will do my best to get this updated again soon, especially since I think there is only one more chapter to go.  In fact, I may go back and update this again after "Tame the Wild Stallion," since that one needs to be updated as well (I HAVE started on that one, BTW).

Glad you are curious about what is going on.;)  I will update again just as soon as I can. Thank you for sticking with me to the end! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2013 07:22 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Loved it!!! The girls are priceless!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:38 PM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you again, my friend. First chance I have had to respond today; the site has not been letting me in at all today! Thanks as always for reading and for your comments; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 04:42 PM · On: First Date

I've recently been reading "The Wedding Present". I had t get away from all the angst and good romance always does the trick. I was delighted to see this update and that it was appropriately titled. I loved that date as much as Justin. I also loved Brian's comparison of Justin's antics with the girls. All in all, this was very delightful chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra! Thanks, first of all, for reading "The Wedding Present."  I know what you mean about angst. For it to be closer to the holidays, there seems to be an abundance of it over here (and I'm guilty of that myself).  I may have to throw in a Christmas Tricky tale somewhere before the holiday just to break that trend.;) 

I'm glad you enjoyed their date.  I tried to come up with something a little unique, and hopefully I succeeded.  There ARE some wine and painting classes, but normally I think it's where you bring your own liquor. Not sure if any vineyard does it this way, but if not I think they should - ha!  We actually have a vineyard about five minutes away from us, so maybe that's where the inspiration came from. But I thought it was very appropriate for them.  So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:21 AM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Loved it!!!!!

Author's Response:

You're very kind, Sorcha! Thank you for continuing to read and for your comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Man on a Mission

"Please, Daddy.  Don't separate us all over again.  I promise Dad and I will give you all the room you need.  I won't come and bother you unless I know you aren't busy.  And I'll even cook you and Kaylee dinner every night.  I'm a good cook, aren't I, Dad?"

That broke my heart!!!

"I need to make sure that we can love each other the way we are, not the way we were."  Beautifully said!!

 

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sorcha.;) It's almost like I'm reliving rewriting it all over again, which brings back good memories. So happy to have you reading and commenting. Thank you again for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2013 12:34 AM · On: Where Do I Belong?

Loved it!!!! Happy the garbage is out!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 11:46 PM · On: For Our Daughter

Loved it!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 11:21 PM · On: Footprints on the Heart

Loved it!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 10:50 PM · On: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

Loved it!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 10:05 PM · On: A Not So Fond Walk Down the Primrose Path

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 06:40 PM · On: Back To Where It All Started

Still loving it and enjoying it, Justin is such a drama queen. “Are you done with your tantrum now, Daddy?” LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha!  Yeah, Justin has been known to get kind of worked up at times - LOL!  I do enjoy writing the interaction between the fathers and the girls here.;)  So happy that you like this version of the movie! Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 07:16 AM · On: Tightening the Emotional Screws

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sorcha!  You're very kind.;) So glad you're still enjoying it, my friend. I am very honored by your thoughtfulness;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 05:46 AM · On: I Know Who You Are

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Ahh...the big secret is out!  Now how will the boys react when they meet after all this time? Thank you for all the comments, Sorcha; so glad that you are enjoying this story. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2013 04:35 AM · On: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sorcha! The girls ARE little devils, aren't they?;)  So glad that you are enjoying this story.  Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I hope you continue to enjoy it, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:15 PM · On: First Date

LOL!!!!

I really couldn't hold my laughter when they got busted by a patrolman.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sue! Thanks for reading and for the feedback, my friend. So glad that you enjoyed this one.;)  I thought it was kind of ironic that Brian, the previous Stud of Liberty Avenue and the man who didn't think twice about using cuffs on a policeman himself, would wind up being busted for his 'friskiness.';) Thanks for taking the time to comment!  I will get this updated again just as soon as I can.  Probably have one or two more chapters to go before it's finished. Thanks again for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 04:14 PM · On: First Date

Thanks Kim for the update of this story. It's wonderful and funny.
* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny! I was just thinking about you and missing you.;)  Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend. Thanks for reading and for the comments!  *Hugs* back.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2013 11:42 AM · On: First Date

Oooh, sexiness with the boys.  I think they are truly stuck with each other.  Nice story.  Can't wait for more.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  So glad you enjoyed this chapter!  Well, we all know what I hope will happen by the time this is done; they have a little unfinished business to take care of (wink, wink).  But that will come (pun intended) in the epilogue.;) Thanks so much for reading and for your comments.  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 09:10 AM · On: First Date

Loved the idea for the Wine and Watercolors. What a great date! Is this a real thing? If not I know lots of wineries here in Oregon that you could market the idea to. Congrats on going over 500 reviews, too! TAG

Author's Response:

Hi, Tag! Well, there ARE "paint and wine" parties, but I'm not sure I saw one specifically at a vineyard where they grow the grapes.  It's mainly a "BYOB" sort of thing, instead, where you bring it to a studio and paint. But I thought this would be a great idea for the boys' date.  Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for the good wishes. I appreciate that.:) ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:23 AM · On: First Date

Hi there!!

Because I'm so curious and hungry for this story I've jumped from chapter 9 to chapter 34. The only thing I can say is "Happy 500th review", you really desserved it!!!! Your story are always so entertaining and beautiful. Please keep writing!!!!

Author's Response:

Awww...thank you, Sweetie! I'm so honored. And so happy that you like this story! Thank you so much.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:16 AM · On: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed

Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha!  You're a quick reader - ha!  So glad you stuck with it.  This is still a WIP, but I am VERY close to getting it done, and it will be completed. Thank you again for reading and for all the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:07 AM · On: Twin Conspiracy

Way to go girls!!!!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Camp Orientation

I already love the girls!!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Hi!!!

This is so heartbreaking!!! Why? What happened????

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha! I'm so glad to see you reading this one.  What happened will be explained shortly coming up.  I hope you enjoy this story, my friend. Thank you for the comments.  Hang in there, it WILL get better by the time it's done.;)  You know I can't see these boys any other way but together.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2013 03:52 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Hi, Kim! Sorry I didn’t comment earlier. I love this story so much, I often think about it, and sometimes the desire to re-read is just unbearable. I want to wait for the en, though :) I have a feeling that it might be close. I will surely miss this wonderful saga, but the ability to read it whenever I want is soothing. Along with the fact that you’ll probably go on writing another masterpieces!

The last two chapters were fantastic! I love Kaylee and Katie with all my heart, they are amazing, especially when together! Always plotting and planning something. Brian and Justin must be so proud to have daughters like them… and Daphne – God, I *loved* the adult version you described! You made her so believable, still the same Daphne we know and love, but a little more mature and grown. The most important thing is that she is still Justin’s best friend – and she loves Brian as well. That’s so funny – how easily Justin gets embarrassed! You’d think after all this time, he had to get used to it. He is so touchingly funny like that!:)

Aunt Daphne, hm, I wonder if girls feel any resentment seeing how little her role is in their lives. Daphne may feel she doesn’t deserve the ‘mother’ title, but children usually call their parents like that no matter how much time they spend together. Our girls don’t seem to be upset with her, though. Maybe it’s just how relationships in this crazy unusual family work:) I *loved* Daphne’s story about Brian and Justin – it must mean so much to them to be able to have a look at their parents’ previous life.

Oh, that argument between Brian and Justin got me worried! It was also incredibly realistic. Boys just can’t do without fights, and last days were sort of heaven for them. I understand both Brian and Justin – I wouldn’t want anything in *my* study, but I also would want to have my beloved piano in *my* house. I myself have one, and I wouldn’t want to move without it. Both of them are right, it’s just Justin is comfortable in sharing everything while Brian still feels he needs some personal space. But how they solved all this!.. I couldn’t stop smiling when Brian agreed and even asked Justin not to go… in fact, not even mention of going anywhere. That’s so romantic, and so wonderful, seeing how much Brian has changed over the years!

Wow, such a beautiful place, that mountain… I felt so relaxed and peaceful at once.

Hah, girls are genius! Their plan has worked perfectly, they got their fathers just where they wanted them! I also love the fact that Justin made it to curfew:) That’s so symbolic.

Oh… the last scene touched me so much. More proofs of how Brian has changed, how desperately he wants to have Justin back in his life fully, with no boundaries. His offer was so romantic and clever – I’m sure it’ll work! It’s what they both need. I loved their conversation. They’ve been through so much… I think now Brian will stay away from other men, and the just thought of any of them will be repulsive. That stupid fuck with a client’s son was *so* no worth losing *so* much.

I know the story might be approaching the wrap up stage, but I still really hope to see more chapters! I love this story, this universe so much - it’s incredible. Thank you for writing it, for sharing it with us! I can’t even describe what I feel while reading it, every update always makes my whole day – even more. Thank you!   

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - I am always so thrilled to get a review from you, because all the care you taking in composing them always lifts my spirits.  It means more than I can say to know how much you are enjoying this story.  I love it when I can create new characters that actually resonate not only with me as the writer, but also with readers, so I am delighted that you like Kaylee and Katie.  And as far as Daphne goes, I think she wants to be more involved in their lives, and the boys would certainly not have any objections to that.  She just may get her wish in the future.;)

 

I do have a specific direction I'm wanting to take this before it's over, and yes, it is somewhat nearing the end. But I'm thinking maybe two, three more chapters yet?  I do hope you will continue to enjoy it! Thank you again for all the care you take in writing down your thoughts; that means so much to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2013 03:53 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

First: Sorry, I can't come to Bilboa.

Second: still loving those girls * grins * with their tricks to bring their dads together. And woohoo the boys are going on a date ! Haha, for you I do the * happy dance *.

Don't wait to long with the next update. I had to re-read the previous chapter. I read to many stories to remember everything * blushes *.

 

* hugs *

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny - I'm sorry to hear you won't be at Bilboa.  And I'm sorry about the long gaps in between updates. Sigh...I really do update as fast as I can. Between working full-time, helping on the site, and helping other writers with beta work and banners, though, it keeps me much busier than I would like to be.

One day I will FINALLY have these stories done, and I hope then that I can post one at a time and have it finished before I post them.  Or at least just have the one story so I can continually update.  I have so many other new story ideas in my head,  but I realize it's a turnoff for readers to not update faster.  If I could only write less lengthier chapters! That would certainly help. But I guess it's not in my nature to write that way (typically; sometimes).  I do apologize for that. 

I'm hoping I can update a little faster; I'll do my best.  Hope you will bear with me until then. Thanks again for reading (and re-reading!) and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kin (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2013 08:27 PM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Devious little vixens, aren't they? Just like their fathers! Great update, Kim!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment.  I really appreciate that.  Yes, the twins are still up to their antics, along with the mom.  Not sure how the dads will react to their latest scheming, but I think they're quickly becoming so besotted with each other that maybe they won't care too much by now.;)  Looking forward to taking them out on dates, Kinney style! Thanks again for the feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2013 05:21 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Nice job of getting the boys together, slowly but surely.  I never thought of mouse poop as an impetus for romance, but, hey, whatever works!  LOL

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, if anyone can make mouse poop sound romantic, it would have to be Brian Kinney's kids - ha!  Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I could have stretched this out some more, but I really think it was time to reunite them. I'm still going to have fun with their dates, though, although I don't think Brian's idea of a 'date will be very traditional, shall we say.;)  Thank you again for the support.  That means a lot to me.  Working on "Stallion" right now, BTW, if you are following that one.  Should be posted soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2013 06:50 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

 

For some reason, I didn't get an email that you'd updated this (for here and ff), so I was delayed a day in reading this. (I also blame the start of the new seasons on tv for distracting me so I didn't check earlier.)

 

Anyway, the whole chapter got a fangirl squee from me. And I'm happy Justin's finally gotten over himself. And damn you for your secret Daphne/girls plotting.

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Thanks for reading this update and for the comments.  It WAS feeling a little lonely here.;)  Perhaps the email notification system isn't working. Sometimes it seems to do that.  I keep getting review notifications, too, when there aren't any, or duplicate notifications for the same review. (Ghosts already??).  Anyway, glad that you liked this one. I suspect the girls and Daphne will be caught in their scheme at some point, but I think the boys are finally on the right track here.  I'm going to enjoy taking them out on 'dates.'  Not sure if Brian's idea of a 'date' will be a conventional one, though.;)

I will work hard to update this again soon. I see maybe two (?) more chapters of this before it's done. Thanks for all the support, my friend; I truly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yin ping (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2013 09:14 PM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Hi Kim,

This my 1st time on review. I have been following all your stories and they are amazing  as it's fulll of life, emotion and characteristic on each story. I had been constantly checking the latest up on all your story. When I saw the latest chapter being post, I'm exited, love it and looking forward for the next chapter. Beside Parent Trap, I'm looking forward your updates from My Heart' s Desire, The Father, The Son and & The Blond.

Congratulation on your Summer Challenge win and looking forward for all the amazing stories on the next challenge.

 

Author's Response:

Hello, my friend.  You are very kind to review; I appreciate that so much!  And your lovely words mean more than I can say.  Thank you for that.  I'm glad that you are enjoying some of my other stories as well. I hoped to have had another update to "The Father, the Son, and the Blond" by now, but my co-writer, Mika, is going through some rather major real life issues at the moment, so it has delayed it longer than we would have hoped.  I am hoping, however, that she will be able to send me her part of it soon.

Thank you again for taking the time to comment and for your kind words.  I am very grateful.  I hope to hear from you again from time to time.  It really helps to know that others enjoy what I write.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2013 10:12 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

What a wonderfully long funny chapter. I had the giggles several times. So cute, the girls are the dickens, as my grandma used to say. I am glad you are back. This was a long chapter but you know how I like the long chapters---they are the best. BB off to Chicago, his aunt passed. He will be back in a few days. Lee still in recoup mode. His neck is better and his eyes, so hopefully another week and we will have him back again. The "Listeners" as I have dubbed them are chomping at the bit already for more reading--Ha! I have opened Pandoras box. My fault now I have to live with the consequences. I have set the 15th ,16th and 17th of the month read days. TLC will be next. How is school this year-are you fairing ok? I wne to Vegas to see Queen and Adam. It was fantastic--that boy can sing his face off. He was at I heart radio and there were tons of well known singers there. It's going to be televised the 30th of this month on CW. If you get a chance watch-he is amazing. Am off tonight so am going out with some of the peeps. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Thanks for reading and for the comments.  I get a kick out of you having official 'reading' days now.;)  I hope they enjoy the story.  I'm glad to hear that Lee is doing better. Tell Brian I am very sorry to hear about his aunt. 

I will be working on my update to "Tame the Wild Stallion" next and working behind the scenes to write another Tricky story.  Sigh...kind of bummed at the moment, though. Spent DAYS working on this update and it's as if no one noticed for the most part.  Kind of discouraging, but that makes me cherish the ones that did comment, such as yourself, all the more. Thank you again.  Sending a big hug out of you and the others.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2013 08:20 AM · On: When the Parents Are Away, the Mice Will Play

Well if this doesn't work you could always have Daphne break something and have to move into the carriage house.  I'm soooo glad to see another chapter on this story.  It's been way too long.  : )

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend; I really appreciate that.  Apparently between the long gap between updates and Tag's epic tale, I guess this one has kind of been forgotten.:(  Glad to see you still reading, though. Thank you for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 12:25 PM · On: Mother, May I?

Hey, Kim! So excited to have had the opportunity to read 2 chapters back to back because as always I am never left NOT wanting more of your stories. :D 

Whew.. definitely a nicely heated chapter! :P I love that Brian found that protective opening to use on Justin with the sunscreen. There is no way Justin could have resisted I mean COME ON.. Brian knew that. But you can't really blame him.. he's been deprived of his Sunshine for years. Haha ohh Daphne.. bad bad bad timing, dangit! Well, she saved Justin.. or .. didn't.. whichever way you look at it.. lol Haha the coldest pool in the world couldn't cool Justin off...

Ahh I'm so torn... at who I feel more sorry for.. lol. This has to be extremely hard on Justin being around Brian again after all these years.. and living that united family dream again... his heart is still in such a fragile state with Brian and not being able to breath with Brian being so handsome, the girls pushing him into hurrying up, and he has all of those memories and thoughts coming back to the surface all at once... I don't see how he couldn't be feeling completely overwhelmed. And then theres Brian... trying his hardes to keep his hands off of Justin but being tortured with him being so close all the time... and knowing he needs to and wants to be patient and give Justin time so things can be right but it being waayy easier said than done.. it has to be extremely difficult. Brian certainly is playing with fire, and he's completely captured like a moth to a flame. 

Ohhh goodness.. I have a bad bad feeling about the girls little scheme... Haha Katie definitely knows how to lie with the best of them, It seems like she constantly finds a way to dodge bullets. I LOVED LOVED LOVED Daphne's talk with the girls about why Brian did what he did... I think it is the perfect explanation of why Brian messed things up... I wish Daphne would tell Justin this theory.. he would be the only person who could ever make Brian believe that he truly does deserve to be "too happy". 

I'm glad Daphne found out... hahaha ohhh goodness... I can only imagine what she can provide for this plan of theirs... I only hope Justin doesn't get pushed too far... he is still treading slowly and carefully... he's not only trying to stay strong and try to start anew with Brian but he's also definitely protecting his daughters... he already has so many feelings and thoughts going on right now... I feel like one little thing might make him take a step back and rethink if he's ready for everything if the pace of things are moved along too quickly. 

As always I cannot wait for the next chapter... but I think Stallion is up next so... YAY! :D haha I hope you have some angst planned for this story still (which I'm sure you do). Cannot wait to see what happens next in this crazy family rollercoaster! Loved this chapter.

M.

Author's Response:

Hi, Megan!  Wow - thank you for that very thoughtful review!  I think you have summed up what is presently going on very well. And I am happy - and relieved - that you liked the explanation that Daphne gave them.  I kind of worried about that when I wrote it, and if it sounded realistic enough, so I am thrilled that you thought it did.;)  And yes, there will still be some growing pains and angst coming up before this story is completely put to bed, so I hope you will stay tuned.

And speaking of angst, yes, ma'am - you wanted angst in "Stallion," you're going to get it.  What would be the fun in just a simple, old race?  No...there's going to be some drama coming up.  I'm working on it now, so hopefully I will have it up very soon.

 

BTW, saw that you will be writing a new story for the challenge - that's great!  Can't wait to read it!  Thanks again for the support, Megan.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Divergent Lives

Omg! This was an amazingly hysterical chapter. I love the twins & Daphne. One has to wonder if the author herself, is a closeted prankster. Lol.
Anyone who comes up with super glue, mouse shit. Still laughing. Btw. Has to have been mischievous at Katie's age. Lol. I think the boys are too cute. Always touching. Excellent chapter. Fantastic writing. Brava.
Anxiously awaiting Surfer Brian. Hugs! My Dear Kim! Annie

Author's Response:

Hi, Annie!  It's so good to see your over here, my friend.:)  Hey, are you trying to say that I would play practical jokes on people?  LOL!  I wish I could say yes, but it's only in my fertile imagination.  Perhaps I'm living vicariously through the girls.:)  I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. They really should have learned their lesson before, but I think their fervent desire to have their dads back together in every sense of the word is definitely clouding their judgment. And it doesn't help that Daphne is encouraging them - ha!

 

Thanks so much for reading and for your comments, Annie.:)  I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can. And yes, I'm working on the challenge story in addition to the next update to "Tame the Wild Stallion."  Hope to have both of those posted very shortly.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 11:36 AM · On: Mother, May I?

Sweet sexiness between the guys.  They just can't resist each other, can they?  And those girls!!  They are a scheming pair, but I like them.  Hope to see more soon.  Sorry I didn't review sooner, I was too intent on getting "Moonrider" ready to publish.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Ha!  I know - so much for 'taking it slow.'  Although, Brian didn't seem to be in any hurry to finish his task.;)  And the girls just can't seem to help themselves, much like the boys can't.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, my friend!  The wait was well worth it, BTW, because I really enjoyed your new story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: apipsc (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 05:25 PM · On: Yes, You Are My Father

I'm like Katie. I refuse to believe that Justin can be happy with other man who is not Brian Kinney x'D

Amazing adptation . Keep going :D*

Author's Response:

Hi, Ana!  First of all, welcome to the site!  Glad that you are here.  Secondly, thank you for reading and for the comments; I greatly appreciate that.  I'm delighted that you're enjoying this story. Things will get a little rocky for a while as everyone tries to adjust to their new lives, but I'm confident that it will all work out in the end.:)  Thank you for the support.  I will get this updated again just as soon as possible.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 01:51 PM · On: Mother, May I?

Daphne is now in the thick of it all. Interesting and I wonder where this is headed.

Author's Response:

Hi, Bob! Well, I thought it was time to reintroduce their mother into the mix.;)  She can be their best ally or their worst enemy, I suppose, depending upon how the boys react to this latest turn of events.;) It might prove successful in the short run, but I don't think it will exactly be 'smooth sailing' for a while yet.:)

Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2013 05:43 AM · On: Mother, May I?

Don't you dare go down to the bear bones in your writing. That will be a sure way to lose your wonderful readers. I know you have a big heart and try to help your friends when they ask. NEVER turn them down-that is what makes you so special to us. Nonie is very good now. She is going to Europe soon to visit family and friends. Lee has a new love Yippee! BB still working his buttoff, but turned down the move- phew!! I was quite worried for a while. He is really at home here and decided against the move. We are all very happy. Lee is tinking about getting another sports car. He is really into cars. He will keep 'V' though. She is very special. Don't be down in the dumps. Just remember the Peeps have loved yu for how many years now?? and will continue to love you. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc.  Words cannot express what your support (and the peeps' support) means to me.  I don't how I deserved all of you, but you really know how to touch my heart.  I am so happy that you are all doing so well, and that Brian decided to stick around. That certainly solved a dilemma for you.  And I'm thrilled that both Nonie and Lee are doing so well. Tell him when he gets his new car to let me know what it is. And tell him that I expect a name for it - LOL! 

Tell Nonie I hope she has a wonderful time on her trip.  And in the meantime, I will work as hard as I can to update my stories a little faster.  Thank you isn't enough to tell you all how special you are to me.   I'm sending a big hug of gratitude your way as well as my love.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 02:57 AM · On: Mother, May I?

I had an issue with Daphne saying twins run in her family, as I was going on the assumption she'd been implanted with fertilised eggs. I then thought it was probably more like that Brian/Justin (I forget if you said which one it was) jerked off in a cup and squirted it up her, seeing as she's both the egg donor and carrier.

Also, Brian did manage one time to fix a lamp, so he can't be completely hopeless.

I also hope Katie and Kaylee have planned what they're going to do once they've gotten Justin into the house, as there are other bedrooms for him to sleep in.

(These are the types of reviews you get when I want to review, which is all the time, but can't think of anything to say. And I know I don't have to review, but I feel bad if I don't. So you get rambling reviews instead of anything coherent.)

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, a 'rambling review' is better than none at all.;)  And you're right about Daphne; it was more of the same type procedure that Mel and Lindsay used to get pregnant.  Brian isn't totally inept, but I don't think his talents are too much in the mechanical area (unless it involves bodily functions - ha!).  And I'm not so sure that Justin actually needs to be in the master bedroom; that hasn't prevented him and Brian from engaging in a little bit of hanky-panky already, despite being in separate living quarters.  I think just being under the same roof is going to be hard enough; that, plus, some other issues that will spring up to create a little conflict will actually prove to them that, while they do love each other, they HAVE led different lives and will need to work through some things before everything is the way they want it to be.

I hope you are continuing to enjoy the story. Thank you again for reading and for the feedback.  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 11:53 PM · On: Mother, May I?

This is the first major bit of reading I have done in the past week. After the heartrending events of yesterday I needed some time out of my RL. This addition to this captivating story was a very welcome sight. I enjoyed it immensely... most especially that indepth sunscreen application. We should all be so lucky as to have THAT man protecting us from the sun! :) I think our boys just settle back and let the girls just have things their way; I think it's quite apparent they have things well under control. 

Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Kim. *Hugss*

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - I was just thinking of you earlier today and wondering how you were.  I'm sure yesterday was extremely difficult.  I'm happy that you chose this story to read and that it helped somewhat.  And I, too, would love to have that gorgeous man rubbing sunblock all over my body.;)  Poor Justin - how can you resist someone like that??? 

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Janet.  My thoughts continue to be with you and your family during this time.  Looking forward to meeting you in person soon.  *Hugs* back  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2013 01:18 AM · On: A Little More Kissing, a Little More Scheming...

Caught up with one of your epic novels.

Author's Response:

And you did quite well in such a short amount of time!  I will have the next part up very shortly.  BTW, did you ever read the one about Brian going camping?  "Roughing It?"  That's one of my personal favorites (if I do say so myself.;))  I guess you can figure out what sort of story it is; I mean, Brian going camping??  I know you enjoyed "Arms Open Wide" a few years back; this one is somewhat similar in nature to that where Justin is tormenting Brian.;) Hard to believe that was over two years ago since I started writing on here!  But what a ride.:)

 

Thanks again for all the comments, Bob.  It is truly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:47 PM · On: Firmly Grasping Onto the Future

Alex is such a jerk.

Author's Response:

Ha! He was meant to be, so my work is done - LOL!  Almost caught up, my friend. Thank you for all the comments!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2013 11:02 PM · On: Man on a Mission

The table scene was funny.