Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Buses & Trains
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2018 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 9

Phew that was hot. I love the angst of sexual tension! 



Author's Response:

:D

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is such a simple but very clever literary conceit. Enjoying it so much!! 



Author's Response:

:)

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 3

Marvelous...lol...their theories were too funny.



Author's Response:

hahahah - thanks! I still remember writing that scene :P

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

Omg...justin and brians intro was too good... ilove it.



Author's Response:

:) Thanks! Am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 25

Goodness!!! This was really great!

Good thing I have read your new fic "Truly Madly Deeply" and I thought it was really awesome and tried to check out your other stuff.. And it was it was truly great!

 

Thanks for sharing your stories.

Nadine



Author's Response:

Thanks Nadine for this wonderful review. In the midst of writing this story, I went through a terrible depression, and struggled to finish the story, especially because the underlying message in the story about hope and friendship striving to do good felt so alien to me. Justin watching 'Criminal Minds' endlessly in 'Truly, Madly, Deeply' came from my actual experience with depression while writing this story.

I am so glad that you liked this story, because it is very special to me.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 25

What a clever version of Brian and Justin's story! And the ending is so heartwarming--with Brian, Justin, and Michael all friends. Thank you!

I just discovered your stories and will be reading more of them. I'm always on the lookout for B&J fanfic. I only stumbled on QAF (and the associated fan fiction) this past June; how it eluded me until then, I have no idea. Now I find it difficult to read anything else...and I'm an avid reader--the only way to cope with real life.



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for your review! This story is special to me because I had to complete it during a pretty bad time in my life, and I felt bad because I kept readers hanging for months, and seemed to disappoint a few with the ending.

I am so glad that you discovered this story, and that you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: silvermoon8916 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2014 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 25

really good job.i absolutely loved this story.i couldn't stop reading it and still was soooo sad when it came to en end. i liked the progress ,liked how u described their feelings and really was glad when brian came to his true feelings in the end and requested justin to be returned to him.though i prefered to read more about when justin woke up and brian's reaction before the epiloque but one can't have everything right? lol

thank u for the great story.i llok forward to read more stories from you soon :))

 

m.sa



Author's Response:

Hey there. You reviewed this story over a year ago, but my head space was not great and I could not respond. Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing. I am SO appreciative of that, and for wonderful reviews like this. It is a really amazing feeling to know that someone out there liked what I did/wrote.

I am trying to get back to writing - I've done a few shorter stories recently. I hope that I can manage a longer one soon.

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2013 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 25

wow, sorry to see it end.  Hang in there and keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your good wishes, and for reading and reviewing. I'm finally having my head space clear out, and I just wanted to say thank you!

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 25

Hi, Jessica! I’m happy that you’re finally back, I was worrying about you. I knew you probably wouldn’t disappear without any reason, so something bad must have happened. I hope from now on, there will be less terrible things in your life, and more good and beautiful. I have no idea what’s happening, but I hope you’ll remember that there are still people in your life who care about you and who love you very much. And, if for some reason it’s not the case, then there are at least those who admire you deeply, like me. I hope you’ll be able to remain strong no matter what!

I so fervently wished to see the ending of this story! It haunted me for some days. I’m happy that Justin was able to remain in his human’s form, that Brian asked for him. You used such mature, beautiful, amazing words – it proved once again what kind of clever and brilliant person you are. Justin in this story is fantastic, Brian is so lucky to have someone like him love him. I enjoyed Loki and Justin’s conversation – I was hoping fervently that Justin *will* be allowed to stay with humans. To stay with Brian. I’m so happy he did, the ending is great!

But, I also agree that it would be great if you added a few more chapters. Because – somehow it doesn’t feel like the closure, you know? I felt strongly the lack of Brian/Justin’s relationship in the end. It was so touching to see Brian suffer in the hospital, but it would be also so great to see what his reaction to Justin’s return was, what he told him, what they decided together. The last time they saw each other, things weren’t great between them, Brian didn’t believe Justin and hurt him, and the way they solved their problems remained behind the scenes. At least some conversation between them is lacking, in my opinion. You evoked many important themes in this story, and you meticulously developed them till the very end. The only thing that remained unfinished is Brian and Justin’s relationship. Their romance was so beautiful and powerful, so unusual, but many-many things are still not discussed. Who will they be to each other from now on, partners, lovers? Won’t Justin live with him? Do they know how much they love each other? Will Brian still trick, considering it doesn’t sit well with Justin? Will he be more open in his feelings now, when he almost lost him?

Anyway, it’s fantastic to see you finished this incredible story! I can only try to imagine how many efforts it cost you, considering what was happening in your life. I will miss reading your story, enjoying your unusual inimitable style. And I *loved* the song in the end. It showed so many things…

Thank you! It’s an amazing work of art, of literature. It’s worth re-reading!   



Author's Response:

 I should have responded to this review AGES ago, but…my head space just wasn’t there and I was just really struggling to be normal and decent and do simple stuff like say thank you. Even after I finished this story, I was just dipping in and out of being depressed, and was just blah most of the time. A few highs and lots of lows. RL is still not too great, but I am dealing with things much better as a person, and there is more calm and clarity inside my head.

This story was my favourite (the plot idea), and I felt so bad about letting readers down because I took so long to finish it, and the quality really dipped because I wasn’t able to write very coherently. I can’t rewrite it now that it is over, and I know lots of people wanted more in the ending, and I apologise for it.

At the same time, this story was, for me, mostly about friendship, hope, growing up and choosing the right path in spite of hardship, and I hope that message came out in the end. Brian and Justin are always special to me, but in this story, it was important to me to show that beyond the love and sex, they shared a deep, abiding friendship which pulled through for them in the end.

Your reviews are so amazing. They made me feel so good about myself, like, hey, someone likes something I did. Maybe there is something I can do halfway decently. I’ve come back and re-read these reviews a million times, though I wasn’t able to articulate a response. I think I am slowly making my way back to the person I was when I started writing this story.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 25

But what happened? Justin returned as a human but never to work as an angel again?

Author's Response:

I shouuld have responded eons ago. Yes, Justin became a proper human. It was kind of implied, though I never stated it outright.

I'm sorry that the ending was vague and kind of sucky. I was going through a really bad time, but I desperately wanted to finish this story somehow and give the readers the ending that I had always envisioned.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 24

Loved it. Justin doesn't like his job as much as you do. I read your A/N. I glad you have found some happiness. I hope its another job.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 23

OMG! I had no idea the story was headed that way. Brilliant chapter!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 22

It was a crying shame Michael was more understanding, but so like Brian to be skeptical.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 25

Thanks for coming back and finishing this story for us. I'm in complete agreement about how sucky life can be sometimes. We're all just happy you stuck it out. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

I am responding after almost 2 years, which is shameful. I've come back and re-read these reviews a bajillion times, because they all made me feel useful and worthwhile, but I wasn't able to respond because I just felt ashamed somehow. It was a really, really, bad period in my life that I think I am finally getting over, slowly. I just wanted to say thank you.

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 25

Very different and very creative. I liked how everyone pulled together.

I wish you would have said more about if Melanie, Lindsey, Emmett, and Debbie found out that Justin was an angel. Maybe you can add an extra chapter to explain how they took it and how they all kept it a secret from the world.

It also, would have been nice to see what happens to Rikert and Stockwell. In all the other stories I have read Rikert always kills himself. It would be nice to see what would happen to him. Also, would Rikert or Stockwell turn againist the other to get a better jail sentence?

You could write a whole other story as a sequel.

Great story.



Author's Response:

Hey there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I know, I am over two years late in responding. I was just going through a really rough patch. I don't think I can get back into the headspace needed for this story, or any sequel of it. Unfortunate, because it has been my favourite plot. In my mind, Rikert and Stockwell both go to jail, and Melanie is told by Michael about Justin, as she witnessed Daphne and Justin getting bashed. And like Ted and vic did earlier, those who knew, kept it a secret.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2013 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 25

It’s so funny how much power Justin has over Brian! I have a feeling Brian would do absolutely anything for him. And I’m glad Michael has come along, though I still don’t like him very much.

It’s a fantastic story! Thank you! Now it’s finished, I would love to read everything from the beginning!   



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Sasha. I'm really glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2013 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 24

I’m so glad you’re back!!  I really started to worry that this amazing story will remain unfinished. I’m sorry to hear life was so hard on you – I can only hope everything will be better now. Just don’t lose faith!

The best ending – I hoped so much Justin will be allowed to remain human! I’m happy you gave us this kind of closure. This is so great!       

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 23

Hi, Jessica! I really miss those updates :( At least let us know that you're fine. And, if you decided not to complete the story after all, please send some summary of what you've been planning. Please.

I hope to hear from you soon!



Author's Response:

Hi there,

I'm so sorry for being such a terrible author, but life threw me for a loop. The last few months were downright awful, and I'm not ashamed to say that I was suicidal. Suicidal enough to look up how to hang oneself, and plan everything down to the last T. But...random events kept me from harming myself, and, here I am. Still alive. Struggling, but still alive.

And, I managed to finally, FINALLY finish this story. The writing is nowhere as good as I would have liked it to be, but I thought it was more important to finish the story rather than wait to return to a person/author I will probably never ever be again. I think (I hope) I kept the spirit of the story, of Justin, of Brian and of Michael the same though, even in the last two chapters. This story means a lot to me, and, this character of Justin is a daily reminder to me of what I need to do with myself.

I hope you enjoyed your holiday. I look forward to reading your review.

Last but not the least, even if I did not respond to you, because I was in a really, really dark place, seeing your comments brought some light into my life.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2013 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hi there. dear! I hope you're okay. When can we hope for the next chapter of this amazing story?



Author's Response:

Hi Sasha,

I was very, very far from ok, but am slowly finding my way back (I hope). The story is FINALLY finished!!! :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 23

Eek! What a cliffhanger. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi there,

:)

I keep thinking that everyon can see where I am taking the story, but I guess not always.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 23

I’m so glad you updated! I’ve been checking the page of your story for several times a day, waiting for wonderful news. I almost died from greed when I saw it! :) The chapter was so exciting and interesting, and you ended with a real cliffhanger! I don’t know how to wait for the next one.

Brian can be an incredibly infuriating asshole, but I love him anyway. It was even funny – the way he was thinking about Justin’s words over and over again, admitting they sounded true enough, but it was not, just *not* possible. I admired Michael once again – amazing, to think of it. I used to dislike him, but he has really changed. I loved how rational he was while trying to talk to Brian – Justin’s story is indeed so unbelievable that it could very well turn out to be true. The possibility of Justin being sick was real enough, too, I love how worried and protective Brian immediately got. He loves that beautiful boy *sooo* much, even if he behaves like a prick. Additional thanks for The X Files reference! I spent *years* being obsessed with this show, writing and reading and watching everything I could find about it. I still love it dearly, so it’s always fantastic to see it being mentioned somewhere – especially in the story I love so much.

It’s great that Michael talked to Vic! I didn’t think he would dare, but he did it. Only Brian seems to be impossibly stubborn – he doesn’t want to even try imagining that Justin’s being an angel can be true, no matter what.

Justin slept with Rikert?! OMG, that’s *disgusting*! I knew that Justin was very kind, caring and loving, but this really surprised me – he must be beyond pure to do something so dirty, in order to make Jason’s killer pay for his crime. My admiration of him increased even more, though it seemed impossible. Brian was pissed when he learned it, that’s for sure – maybe even jealous, I think (and hope). But really, this man is just unbelievable – he himself sees the glow, and still refuses to believe what it means! Brian, Brian, when will you change?

The ending made me freeze. I never excepted it! What a terrible thing to happen! So what’s now? How badly is Justin hurt? I don’t know how Brian will take it, how he will ever get over it (if he ever will). I’m just dying with impatience now! I’m really looking forward to the next chapter, you have no idea how much! Thank you for another intriguing, breathtaking and totally captivating piece!         



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Again, wow! what an awesome review, and so long as well! Thank you so, so much. I love them! :)

Brian IS an infuriating asshole; it is so easy to hate him, and then he says or does something and we all love him again. There are people like that in real life too, I think.

Justin's story...they say that when you rule out the impossible, what you're left with is the truth, no matter how improbable. I think Michael took that logic and kind of gave it a twist, but keeping the idea behind it the same. I kinda feel for Brian, because it IS a rather implausible story to buy...

X-File: OMG...I am SUCH a huge fan. I adore that show...was totally, completely obsessed by it. I think I can quote certain episodes verbatim :P Nice to meet another fan.

I hope to update again over the weekend, or at least early next week. I am SO glad that you are enjoying it, and thanks again for your really amazing reviews :)

 

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 23

Noooooooooooo!!!!!

Great chapter with a terrifying end. I am so, so glad - ecstatic even - that you are continuing with this amazing story.

Can't wait for the rest.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi Vin,

Yes, it isn't a very nice way to end the chapter, is it? (Or a very nice thing to happen!)

Thanks so much for reviewing; it is very, very much appreciated. And such wonderful compliments :)

I hope to update again over the weekend, or early next week.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 20

Justin didn't know if he felt sorrier for Michael, Brian or Tracy.

I only watched Mikey’s birthday episode once, but his chapter has me wanting to see it again. Brian could have just spoken to Mikey about it being no future for the two of them and to stay with David. He could have gotten things out in the open like a mature person. It was lucky that Justin could see through Brian’s BS and realized what Brian sacrificed.

Author's Response:

Hi there,

I was afraid that people would find the chapter boring, as we've all seen it before, in living colour. I'm so glad that it made you want to watch the episode again, instead of skipping forward.

You're so right; Brian had a million better ways of handling things with Michael.

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2013 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm sure more than 10 people read this.  I know I'm enthralled and glad I found it again.  I had to start over to remember all of it.



Author's Response:

Hi Jean,

:D I hope so - but even if it is just 10, I will still be happy.

Thanks for reviewing, and I am so glad that you like it!

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2013 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

My sister higly recommended me this story, so I decided to read, and I found myself absolutely fascinated! I spent this whole week reading and I have to tell you, this is one of amazing story! You can surely be proud of it! I'm in love with Justin, I'm completely on his side. Brian is great too, he has many flaws, but he is human. Though I am SO angry with him after this last chapter! Justin told him everything, and he didn't even try to believe! What an assho;e, really, I hope he'll suffer a little for doing this to this angelic creature. But I hope for a happy ending, of course, sometimes they are what keeps me going. Thank you! I'm happy I decided to read it!  



Author's Response:

Hi Sahsa,

 

Thanks to you and your sister for reading :) And thanks also for that very sweet review; I am glad you like the story - I hope you'll like the next few chapters as well.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2013 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 22

I understand those horrible days.......had one today and reading gives me a break from thinking about it.

Thank you so much for providing this wonderful storyline and putting it in words.

 

 



Author's Response:

I hope your week improves...I understand the need for escape.

Thank you for your lovely review; it means a lot to have people take the time to write something :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 22

I'm hurting for Justin so much right now. Another great chapter. I can't wait for more. Thank you



Author's Response:

No, thank YOU for reviewing. I feel bad for Justin too...

Writing the next chapter, the latest it will be updated is by next weekend.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh, what an incredible chapter, but you finished it on such note! So many really important things happened here, I’m not even sure where to begin.

As always, you filled this small part of masterpiece with so many feelings and raw emotions, it’s amazing to read it – I actually feel like I’m there, like it’s me who is going through the death of beloved creature, along with Justin. It’s fantastic that you managed to show so much in a single chapter (and there is even more of it in the whole story). Justin’s sufferings over what happened, over what he had done in the past – sparing all those people who he thought deserved a chance to live - they are so heartbreaking. And Jason must be his greatest failure, because his death made Justin doubt himself, he brought that terrible disappointment to him. But maybe one thing was still good in it, though – Jason got to live a little more anyway, even if he wasn’t entirely happy, and he was killed, he didn’t choose to end his own life this time, so that past experience must have taught him something. Maybe he will still have his chance one day, in some place else. But my heart aches for Justin – didn’t he go through enough already, why is he getting more and more miserable? That is so cruel, but also so true – I love how you perfectly captured the unfairness of this life, when good people don’t get what they deserve, they are not appreciated, they are being tortured over and over again, for no obvious reason. It’s terrible, it’s outrageous and infuriating, but it what happens, and Justin feels all of it, even if he is not supposedly a real human. And he still doesn’t give up, he is ready to fight. That’s admirable. And what beautiful words you used about ‘Soli’s lesson’. It touched me so deeply.

Brian, on the other hand, has really infuriated me in this chapter. Really, what a perfect time he chose to ignore Justin because he believes him to be a liar! As if Justin’s doesn’t have enough shit to deal with. But Michael impressed me – he must have really changed, because in the past, I would have never expected him to go to Justin by himself and talk to him. And maybe he didn’t fully believe him, but he came so close anyway, he gave him the chance – the chance Justin was desperate for! More than that – he actually suggested him to go to Brian. It means so much!

‘Of course Brian didn't care about Justin the way Justin cared about him’ – oh, Justin, I think you’re so wrong. But who can blame him, really – Brian is the most difficult person to read and understand. I’m very glad that he finally told Brian everything, even if the consequences were not like Justin might have hoped them to be. I wonder, though, Brian just simply didn’t believe him and decided it was all just a lie, or maybe he got scarred because he actually *did* believe in some way, and it means he is going to lose Justin, the person he loves, very soon? I'm thrilled that Justin said 'I love you' for the first time, it was such an important moment, and Brian spoiled it. Argh! I can’t wait for the next chapter, this one was incredible, and it ended on such a cliffhanger! I hope you’ll update soon!

Thank you so much for your beautiful inspiring work – and for having explained the title meaning to me :) I didn’t even think this may be a song. Now I’m looking forward to new chapters even more than before! And I really, *really* hope that everything will be okay for you. It saddens me so much to hear that you are going through such tough times. I guess this amazing story is about you in many ways – I can already claim that you indeed *are* a wonderful person, because such thoughts, such depth, such feelings don’t just come to anyone. You are incredible, and I can only feel sorry for people who didn’t/don’t see you for who you really are, who can’t see that light that is inside you. It’s them who are insignificant if they don’t appreciate having a person like you in their lives. I would definitely be happy to have a friend like you. Of course I don’t really know you, but a lot of things can be said just after reading what you write. I hope fervently you will find the strength to go on, to hold on, and one day, everything will be great, and these days/months/years would only become bad memories. Thank you once again for your work, for your talent, for who you are. I love this story deeply and I’m looking forward to more!                 



Author's Response:

Thank you again for your long, detailed and fantastic review. It means so much that aperson has taken this much time and effort to give their feedback to my work, and that you've understood it so well.

I agree that it is unfair that life keeps heaping misery on Justin, but, I feel that RL is like that too - there is no real fairness as to who suffers and why, or whether it is even deserved. Everything is so random and unfair.

Brian is a dick in this chapter; again, people are like that, no? Too selfish and self absorbed and wrapped up in their own neurosis and fears to be able to make time for and have sympathy or empathy for another human being.

You are so sharp - this story IS about me, in many ways. The relationship Justin has with Brian is in many ways a reflection of a relationship I recently had (age gap inclusive lol!), though I must say that Justin is both braver and luckier than I was. Continuing to write this has proved cathartic, and through Justin, I remind myself what I should be focussing on.

Your words are really so wonderful and kind. I am so happy that you think those things; it is such a nice feeling to be appreciated. Your friends are very lucky people.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2013 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 22

What did we expect from Brian? Of course he wouldn't believe Justin. Time for more divine intervention? Thanks for giving us another chapter in spite of your bad week. We love you and your stories so screw the rest of it and just write! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi,

There WILL be divine intervention, of sorts, but not in the way you might be expecting :) I wish Brian could have been more human, but, unfortunately, being human (or humane) is not one of Brian's strongest suits.

Thanks for your awesome review :D  I am writing, and trying to tell the world to go screw itself.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2013 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 22

Brian, Brian, Brian, why kicking someone who is on the ground already, tsktsktsk. 

Maybe it is that it reminded him to much of his mother? 

Continue soon pwettypweeease! 

Wishing you a strong and funny week! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, and more importantly, for the wish for a better week :D

I'm writing the next chapter; definitely will be updating by next weekend.

I think, at least in my experience, it is common to kick a person when he is down. Unfortunate, yes, but...c'est la vie.

You'll have a lot of Brian in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2013 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 22

I'm very happy that your back but this time I'm not tacking the risc of waiting a year and half for an update. I'll wait until it's finished and than read it again from the beginning.

All the best.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh, I also wanted to thank your beta, Xrifree, for the great work. And I wanted to ask about the title meaning – ‘Buses & Trains’, it’s simple yet very unusual, and to tell the truth, I can’t quite figure it out why you called it like this. But I could have missed a few things, because I was reading very fast and might have skipped some important minor details. So I’d really like to know :)



Author's Response:

Hello,

 

I just saw all these reviews!

"Buses & Trains" is a song from an Autralian band/singer called Bachelor Girl. The real meaning of the title is revealed in either the last chapter, or the chapter before the last. The lyrics of the song that will make sense up to now is:

Hey Mom
Why didn't you tell me
Why didn't you teach me a thing or two
You just let me go
Out into the World
You never thought to share what you knew

So I walked under a bus
I got hit by a train
Keep falling in love
Which is kinda the same

 

If you don't know the song, you won't see the relevance of the title, but you will definitely see the relevance of the title in the last chapter, and you don't need to know the song for that. The title has special meaning if you listen to the song, from Justin's POV.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 21

I absolutely love this story. I didn’t expect to fall in love that much when I decided to read it – I misunderstood the idea and was slightly dubious. But I was caught up right from the very beginning – I couldn’t tear my eyes from text, I couldn’t stop. The idea you came up with is unique – I’ve never seen anything like that, and I loved it immensely.

I’m just crazy about the way you portrayed everyone here (especially Brian and Justin, of course). You have obviously put many emotions, thoughts and feelings here, this story is incredibly thought out. I’m truly impressed. Justin is a real angel – he is so smart, so pure, so kind, tender and loving. His Latin, his words, his ability to see right through everyone, including Brian, and the courage to point out mistakes or lies… No wonder Brian is unable to resist him – Justin is the most unusual, interesting and mysterious person he’s ever met. Not to mention beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of their moments together, and Justin’s strength continues to impress me. I love how he is constantly shocking Brian.   

I’m not sure whether you did it intentionally or not, but you emphasized the great difference between Justin and Michael (like when Justin explains so emotionally and rationally why Brian can’t just ‘not do love’, and all Michael has to say it something like ‘cut the bullshit, he doesn’t and that’s it!’). I’m not really fond of Michael, though I have to admit, I even liked him in the end of the last chapter. It was very kind and great of him to hold Justin and try to soothe him. His relationship with Brian still irritates me, though. Justin is very perceptive and can clearly see true reasons behind both Brian and Michael’s behaviour. I hope now, after that horrible party, Michael’s infatuation will start dying slowly, though I’m not so sure. I can’t wait to see it.

I usually don’t like when authors use lines from the canon, but in this case, I’m thrilled. You must be the first in whose works it sounds right, interesting and even new in some way. I also don’t usually read WIPs, only those which I’m absolutely sure will be finished, but since you are back, I hope you’ll do it :) But if for some reason you won’t, could you please give some summary of what was planned? Because I’m really in love with this fantastic story (and I’m sure I’m not the only one), I’m dying to see it finished or at least to know how it had to be finished. You’re a great writer. This story is amazing, and it deserves everything. Thank you for writing and posting it, thank you for this exciting, breathtaking world you created.

The last chapter was so sad, it nearly broke my heart. I understand Justin’s despair so much – it nearly kills me every time I see the dead animal, and it’s much worse when it’s *my* animal, the one I love dearly. I hope Brian will find the strength to be there for him. Justin needs him. Maybe it’s not normal, but I adore reading of mental angst (though not when it includes someone’s death), so I’m really looking forward to seeing what you have planned. Brian and Justin – I just can’t get enough of their relationship! You described it so unusually and amazingly… Do you know (at least approximately) how many chapters you intend to write?

Thank you once again for this fantastic story! I hope for the next update, I hope for the happy ending (can’t live without them), and I hope everything will be okay for you. You must be a great person, because only a great person can write something like this, think and feel this way. Thank you for everything!                  



Author's Response:

OMG, thank you thank you thank you!!!

What a wonderful, wonderful review, and how kind of you to write so much.

I came home today bawling my eyes out because my day was so bad, and seriously, I considered the drop from my 3rd floor window at the office. My day/week has been THAT bad.

And then I checked my spam folder, saw some notifications and came here to check and saw this. I cried all over again, but this time out of relief that there are people like you out there, who take the time and effort to say/do something nice for another person you haven't even met.

This is why I came back to finish the story; because of readers and reviewers like you.

This story was inspired by the last one I wrote - I was planning to kill Justin at the end of that, and the prologue was of him as an angel, watching over all his former friends. But everyone, including my beta, said that I should keep him alive, so I did. But the idea was in my head, and then I just let it simmer until I had the whole story fleshed out.

I mostly disliked Michael on the show until Ben came and tempered him. But I am trying hard to show the good side of Michael, as well as his annoying, childish side. He is a great friend to people (like Ted on HIMYM), but terrible vis-a-vis Brian. So....

The story has another 3 - 5 chapters to go. But it WILL be finished, and updates WILL be a minimum of 1 per week until then.

I've had some terrible personal s**t to deal with, and I felt so worthless that I abandoned writing. I don't know that I am a great person - today, I feel slightly tinier than an ant - and have been thoroughly insulted and humiliated in the last 24 hours, but, thank you so much for saying that.

I cried after writing Soli's death, and struggled to pick-up after that, but it's almost good to go now.

 

Again, thank you. You have no idea how much your reading your review helped me.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 21

What a fantastic story! This definitely different from anything I've ever read. I love how you've slightly altered canon moments and made them your own, while not taking away from the integrity of the original plot.

I can't wait to read more and will be waiting anxiously for the next installment ;) ~JP

Author's Response:

Hey there :)

Thank you so much for reviewing. It really, really helps - short or long - I live for them. Reviews are almost always the (only) highlight of my day.

Next installment will hopefully be tomorrow evening.

The canon parts were tough, because I don't want to bore readers with what they've already seen in living colour. I am so glad that you liked them!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 21

I think this is the first time I have read where Justin is a total mystery to Brian and I love it!

Justin has always been so open and Brian so cautious.



Author's Response:

:)

Thank you. And thank you for reviewing, even without a MW account. That is so kind.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 21

awww, killing off Soli, bad move :'(......

poor Justin. Here I am hoping for divine intervention.

 



Author's Response:

I am so sorry; I'd have responded sooner, except the notifications went and hid in my spam folder!

I hated killing Soli. I cried afterwards. I felt so bad. Believe me, I did NOT want to do it!

Thanks for sticking with the story so far :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 21

Great story. I'm fascinated by the storyline - can't think where your going to take this unless somehow Justin manages to stay human. Bring on the next chapter! TAG



Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks so so very much for reviewing. Truly.

I have the whole story plotted out, and not much to go before the end now; I will update by tomorrow night, hopefully.

 

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh...:( poor justin.

 I love this story!



Author's Response:

I know; I feel so bad for Justin. He's surrounded by bad luck it seems.

Thank you so much for reviewing and sticking with the story.

I can't tell this enough to my readers/reviewers. I'm going through some terribly tough times right now, and your reviews and support have been so amazing and have brought light to such a dark period in my life.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2013 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter, it was so heartbreaking. I love how you masterfuly play with canon events. This moment has always made me very sad, but you made it even more touching. I'm so happy Brian has Justin, though. You write beautifuly! Thank you. I hope the next chapter will be up pretty soon.



Author's Response:

Hi Katja,

I am sorry, but I think I have a lot more heartbreaking stuff in store! I have now updated the story again, so you can read the new chapter.

 

Thank you for your sweet review, I love reviews, and it is what inspires me to keep writing.

It is difficult to write the canon-based scenes, because everyone has seen it before so they would find it boring, but still, it is a necessary part of this story. I am really glad that you liked it.

Reviewer: Vin (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2013 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

OMG, you are back! Oh, how I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. I am so happy that you havn't abandoned it and that it'll be finished. when I saw the update, I thought I'd have to reread the story from Ch 1, but surprisingly it all came back to me as soon as I started reading the new chapter.

Great update. I'm exstatic that there's another chapter to read.

Cheers,

Vin

 



Author's Response:

Hello darling,

 

yes, I am back, and before I disappear until the next weekend, I believe I shall post ANOTHER chapter as well :)

 

I am so glad you have been enjoying it so far, and thanks so much for reviewing. Truly truly, we write for whatever reasons, but it is the reviews that make it worthwhile.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2013 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 19

This story is indeed very interesting and unusual - I'm sorry I hadn't found it earlier! I'm ecstatic knowing that you plan to finish it - this one deserves it, it's truly amazing. I hope everything will get better for you. You are a great writer, thank you for your story! I really hope it will have a happy ending. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful review. It makes me smile. I am glad that you are enjoying it, and I hope that you will like the ending too.

Reviewer: winetou58 (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2013 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

What a great story. I am very happy that you not abandoned this story. 



Author's Response:

No no no, not abandoned at all.

 

I am finishing it, and it will be updated regularly from now onwards.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 19

I've been so limited in time for reviewing but I had to make a hit and run for this one. I've been wating a long time for an update. Thank you for providing one. I still love this story and can't wait to see the rest of it.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I am finishing it, and will be updating regularly. Promise!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 19

So happy to see an update. Thank you!



Author's Response:

You are most welcome.

And there will be another update in a few days as well.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 19

YAY!!!!!!! she s back!!!!!!!

And I am sure MORE than 10 people just ADORE your stories. Seriously hoping that lifegives you more fun time now to continue this story! And yes, waiting for the watercooler story as well... just saying :-)



Author's Response:

Yes she is :)

 

Thank you so much for your contniued support. Life sucks. I think it always will. But...there's always fanfics and wonderful readers like you!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2013 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 19

Its great to see you back. This is one of my favourites. I didn't even have to read earlier chapters to remember the story line.

Absolutely love this Justin!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

I am finishing the story. And, you'll have regular updates.

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 19

No need to apologize! It's a bit strange, but I've also been absent from the fandom for quite some time due to issues with health, school, finances, etc. You name it, I've dealt with it these last 2 years. But you're right -- it's the good things we all need to emphasize, no matter how small they may seem. And you updating this story is definitely a good thing! I'm so glad you're continuing with this story -- if you write it, I'll happily read it! :)

I don't know what your specific struggles are, but just know that I'm sending good thoughts your way and sincere wishes that things get better! I just keep telling myself that all of the crap I've gone through has helped me to become a better person and has helped me to learn more about myself. It's tricky and difficult trying to extract the good from the bad, but it's so important to at least try.

Great chapter -- I really love how you write the interactions between Brian and Justin. Very realistic and authentic. To be honest, I'm going to need to start from the beginning and re-read to remind myself of the finer details of the plot you've created, (which I look forward to!). You're a fantastic writer and should be proud of your work! :)



Author's Response:

:)

 

Thanks for that wonderful review! I too had financial issues, physical health issues,severe mental health issues, job issues and, most recently, getting dumped.

 

I DO hope things will improve soon. But you're right, writing and then seeing reviews does improve my day tremendously. I hope I will manage to be a good person in spite of everything that has happened. I am writing a really sad scene (for me) right now. I hope to finish writing soon!

 

Have a great weekend and thanks again for your good wishes.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 2

Darn, I love this story. Is there going to be an update soon?

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 18

Yay! An update - how excited am I! Fantastic chapter, it just seemed way too short. That's probably because I've missed this story so much.

This was a wonderful New Years present, so thank you!

I can not wait for another update and I sincerely hope you'll update again soon.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 18

Well that kind of a morning can make your head spin from here to Mars any time. I wonder if Justin is gonna decide to confide to Brian sooner rather than later about him not being human for starters, and if Brian will assist in bringing Stockwell down...

I guess I am gonna have to wait and see where your muse is taking you with this story. Until next time... *hugs* Marla

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 17

"I already have a job; this is extra money. I just want certain types of guys." Justin smiled sweetly at Gino. "And there's something so sexy about men in uniform and men with power and just strong men..."

Justin is a true angel to go to such lenghts.

"And they were still kissing, slowly, softly, gently, as Brian entered him and yet, Justin couldn't help but cry out slightly."

I could not believe they are actually did the deed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I lost this story in the shuffle and was glad to see the update. There are not many Justin non-human stories and I relish them.

Reviewer: Claypool (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ok so I haven't read the whole thing yet but I had to say this story is awesome dude :D I love it and I haven't read all of it I can't believe their isnt a lot reviews but it was recommended to me a lot so I also hope it updates soon b4 I finally get to chap 17 I hate wips but I like your story so I hope u don't leave it can't wait for more ur newest fan ;)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 17

What are you doing cutting the chapter where you did? Talk about a BIG TEASE! Shame on you sweetie LOL!

See I said that big bad Brian is coming to the rescue only I did not expect it to be so soon, then again that kiss at the parking lot, that was hot!

But I would really like to have the entire sex scene in the next update, along with the thoughts of our dear Mr Kinney about his Sunshine.

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 16

"There was no worse curse than enjoying something that you were determined to hate." God I love this frase, I think I have had the same thought repeatedly I'm afraid, and it is absolutely annoying as hell.

I enjoyed this chapter, though I have to tell you Justin here is absolutely reckless and fucking thick headed, if you dont mind my saying so.

What is this boy/man thinking going after Reikert on his own? I see a moment there with Brian coming to his rescue along with his demi god friends...

I will keep reading then *snickers*. Great job sweetie

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow the sexual tension was tangible reading this chapter. I really felt for Brian watching Justin on stage, and I have to say this was a really well written chapter. I enjoyed it immensely.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

So glad to see that you were able to update.  So bittersweet, knowing that Justin's times is limited asw a mortal but his love for Brian keeps growing.  I'm hoping for a happy ending <wink>.

I do understand the lapses in writing due to RL, but so glad that you haven't abandone the fic.  Look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

OMG OMG OMG... please update asap!



Author's Response:

:D

 

I did, but the update is of a very different nature. I promise more hotness in the next chapter though ;)

 

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

That dance seemed hotter than the one from the show. I thought Brian was going to take him on the stage.

Good chapter!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Aaaaw, such a nice thing to hear! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Isabel (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm so glad that this has been updated! Great chapter; although I thought that Sheba's intro of Justin was a bit too lengthy to maintain the dramatic tension...

Are we every gonna have more of your collaboration with Xrifree 'What They Won't Tell You at the Water Cooler'? Please please say yes!

Author's Response:

Lol, yeah, I wondered if the intro was too long, but I had chopped so much of what I had that I felt bad to cut any more. 

 

thanks for reviewing :)

 

Watercooler...hmm...cowriting is not easy, because we end up having to make two schedules work, but I'm trying to get it back on track.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

This chapter was way too short, but so welcomed.  I get a twinge whenever Justin talks about leaving.  He and B are just too stubborn.  Looking forward to your next update.  Really enjoying this fic.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

I feel sad for Justin too, but I think he's trying his best to have both feet planted on the ground...much action ahead for him though!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

Now that's a challenge I like. I wonder what you have cooked up for this amazingly frustrating couple in their near future. You gotta love Sheeba, she reminds me of Emmett so much.

And where are you going with this Michael-Brian-Justin thing-y? Cant wait to see more.

I will keep following this story, I enjoy it immensely.

Marla



Author's Response:

Hi Marla,

They are a frustrating couple, aren't they? :)

Thanks a million for your lovely review, and I hope you enjoy the latest chapter!

 

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 14

Just catching up to this fic.  Loved J punching B.  I don't think I've ever read that in a fic.  But, really crazy over J's prop to B.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Hope you can update soon.



Author's Response:

Hello there! long time no see :)

Yeah, even I didn't see the punch coming until I edited the scene for like the third or fourth time...it just felt more real to put that in there.

 

Glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 14

He left his position of standing beside David and stood in front of Brian, leaving a gap of an inch or so between them. "You haven't been able to have the one person you really want. Keep this up and you never will. I say we make this interesting."

Justin stood and whispered into Brian's ear.

That was HAWT! This was a very good chapter. This story is so underappreciated!

Thanks for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Aaaaw, that was such a wonderful thing for you to say!!! Thanks so very, very much!

I'm glad that you like the story, and I shall try my best to keep the updates more regular.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 13

So Justin feels that Brian is in love with Michael? He does always acts as if he couldn't live without him though, and he is the only one he shows affection.

I always wondered why David and Ben always put up with Michael pining after Brian.

"Long after I'm gone, he'll still have Michael. And Michael will have him."

This seems to be true whether Justin is human or not.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I hated Michael's dynamic with Brian in S1, and parts of S2. I couldn't imagine why David hung around as long as he did. I guess I'm trying to show that from all angles here.

Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

I don't understand why Justin tries to prevent people from dying.

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

Aw --- stupid Michael, ruining Brian and Justin's fun.  Great chapter -- especially loved this line: You know Aeolus, the opposite of love is not hate. It is indifference.  So true!  Already can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

I thought I responded to the reviews, and then I find nothing :( It's my computer or MW. Grrrrrrrrrrr

Anyways, thanks a ton for your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

That Jennifer...oops, Gwenhyfwar...she knows Justin's heart ;)

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter!  I love the interactions between Brian and Justin -- and I may just be weird, but I also really love the interactions between Brian and Soli (and I particularly love how Brian, in this chapter, is confused about why he ever allowed Soli in his car).  I always thought Brian's character would benefit from having a dog to love and take care of -- a dog no one else wanted, that was abused just like he was.  Okay - end tangent.  I'm really looking forward to the next chapter -- can't wait to see more B/J interactions and to see what else Brian digs up about Jason.  This is kind of turning into a bit of mystery, which is fun.  Keep writing -- I don't review every chapter, but I'm still definitely reading and enjoying! :) 



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for that lovely review.

Brian & Soli - lol, I'm glad you like those teeny scenes :) Your tangent makes perfect sense; dogs have that incredible calming quality on personalities like that. This story certainly has an element of mystery. It's kind of a whodunnit, even though the readers knew the answer right from the outset, and Justin has a cheat-sheet. 

I'm glad that you like it and here's hoping that you have a great week!

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

" You'll just be another past-his-prime-wannabe with no friends and no family and not even fawning sycophants at night clubs to stroke your epically proportioned ego. New York or Pittsburgh or Timbuktu, you're so selfish and cold that you'll always go to bed alone, even if there are thirty three tricks in there with you."

That was harsh. But I like it!

Things have gotten very tense. I can't wait for the update.



Author's Response:

It was a really harsh chapter, but I guess the showdown had to happen eventually. 

I love you for being such a regular reviewer! :D *hugs*

I am trying to update soon. Hope you're having a great week!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

Glad to see this update.  Justin did an excellent job of standing up to Brian.  Great speech about how he should go to NYC and be one among the crowds.  I hope you update soon.

All the best.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviweing. I might respond a million years later, but please know that I really appreciate the reviews.

I'm almost done with the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be up soon. 

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2011 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

so intriguing...completely enjoying it.



Author's Response:

Aaaaw, thank you! :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 10

It looks like Justin has been wasting his time.



Author's Response:

As always, thanks a million for reading and reviewing, and I truly apologize for being such a lout in not getting back to you any earlier than this.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Loved these lines:

"Guess what? You don't get to choose. You can't choose not 'do' love like you can choose not to 'do' a particular dance move. That's like saying I don't 'do' sleep. You're going to fall asleep eventually, whether you like or not. The same way you're going to fall in love."

 "Do you actually believe this nonsense he's spouting? Or are you just being a horrible friend by encouraging it,.."

I was a little disappointed at the end about the kiss.



Author's Response:

:)

Thanks for the review, and I am terribly, terribly sorry for this bizarrely delayed response. 

Disappointed because it happened, or that it didn't continue? ;)

Hope you are having a fabulous week!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 9

It's not so much that Mikey is annoying as it is that Brian allows him to be. Sometimes I think they deserve each other, but then I realize that it is the two of them fighting maturity that keeps them together.

I don't know how or why David puts up with Mikey or Justin deals with Brian.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, and I must say, it's bang on! They are fighting maturity, because I think comfort is safer for some people, even if it makes them unhappy.

 

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 8

Another good chapter. I love meeting of the minds and the leaflets falling from the sky.

favorite lines:

"It's ok to just laugh sometimes about the silly stuff. Or to smile without a reason. I promise I won't tell anyone and you look much better when you do that."

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter!

Favorite line:

"Soli, please give Brian a good night kiss. And another one as a thank you for the ride."

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh... Michael, Michael, Michael... Why are you so annoying, boring, useless... ? Grrr

Justin start to fall in love. How cute.

In my world, Brian would immediatly share this love without denied it. Justin would never be hurt by rejection and they would live happy for ever. However, I love when Brian goes after Justin and try to fix things between them in order to prove his unconditional love.

I hope Brian will have enough time to win Justin before the Angel have to go back to Heaven. Please, don't end your story like City of Angels with Cage & Ryan. It would be very cruel. X(

I can't wait the next chapters.



Author's Response:

There is no excuse for not responding to your wonderful review sooner. What can I say? RL sucks. Totally sucks.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It truly means a lot. 

And don't worry, this story will not be like City of Angels; I had actually forgotten the movie until readers pointed it out to me. Will it have a happier ending? Um....I dunno, I guess that still depends. I have an ending in mind, and so far, things are on track for that. This story actually began as the rejected ending from my previous story of Certamen. 

I hope you're having a great week, and I will try and update soon!

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

Haha -- I love it!  Raining leaflets -- where do you come up with this?!?  :)  Great chapter!  And I really love Vic's role in this story -- he was one of my favorite characters on the show and I love how he laid the smackdown on Brian.   And this -- And then Justin leaned across the counter, whispering into Brian's ear, warm breath on his neck making him almost miss Justin's words. "It's ok to just laugh sometimes about the silly stuff. Or to smile without a reason. I promise I won't tell anyone and you look much better when you do that." -- this just made ME smile (but I had a reason!).  Can't wait for the next chapter -- keep up the good work! :)



Author's Response:

:D  I just thought: what would I do if I were Justin, limited by money and lack of technical skills, but with a host of supernatural friends at my disposal?

Glad that you enjoyed it! Vic was always one of my favourites too, and we rarely see him fanfics. For once, he gets centre stage as opposed to Debbie.

Thanks for your lovely review, and I shall start writing the next chapter tomorrow!

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter!  I love Brian's list he made about Justin!  Can't wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

:)

Thanks for the lovely review! Brian and his list of denial lol. I updated just now; hope you like the new chapter!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

Enjoying this fic so much.  Poor Brian, trying to fight off his feelings... idiot.  ;)

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Hi Laura,

Thanks for commenting, and happy to know that you're enjoying this story. Lol, yeah, Brian can be quite silly when it comes to his feelings!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

Absolutely loving it ...........can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

:) Thank you so much for your review, and I'm glad that you like it! Next chapter is up!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

I think Justin is learning a lot, but in a very painful way.  I 'm so glad he's going to try to fight against Stockwell's campaign ... even though he is sacrificing some of his time.

Great update!



Author's Response:

Sorry I took forever to respond to your lovely review. Thanks for reviewing! And yes, you are right; Justin is learning the hard way, and there's a lot more coming up that he will have to deal with ;)

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hot, hot, hot!  Loved the kiss between Brian and Justin -- can't wait for more! ;)



Author's Response:

:D

Thank you! Totally struggled with that kiss, and I almost didn't feature it :P

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is so enjoyable.  I read the first several chapters at bjfic and am glad to see it being posted here. 

Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I thought I had responded to your review, but now I notice that I haven't. Ooops!

Thanks for your review; I'm glad that you're liking it. I cross post on MW, ff.net, bjfic and Queer Eyes so you can find my stories on any of those sites. Plus, I finally updated! 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

And eeeew, those men who paw me are creepy! And disgusting! I'd rather come back with no experience than go off with them."

This is a totally different Justin. Interesting chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

It's a whole new world for Justin; he isn't used to a lot of things yet ;)

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love, love, love this story so far!  Completely agree with all the other reviewers --- each chapter is better than the last and I'm definitely looking forward to the next one!  Like someone else said, I don't typically read WIPs, except for 2 writers I'm a big fan of, but this story just really hooked me.  I really hope you finish it -- the idea's so great I could see it turning out to be an epic (no pressure!).  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! This is exactly what I want to wake up to :)

I'm really thrilled that you like it; after all, it started as a discarded ending from my last story lol. Don't worry - I will definitely finish this story. I have the story outline in my head, and I hate leaving fics unfinished at any rate. 

Next chapter is almost done!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Given the amount of people on the planet, it was a surprisingly lonely place.

Each chapter is better than the previous one.

I LOVE THIS STORY. Justin is a stranger in a strange land. And Justin talking to the dog in Latin or his native language is a nice twist.

I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

:)

Thanks so much for reviewing...and for the review being so nice! 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

It certainly didn't say much for himself that he was lumped in together with the attendant. It really was cheap and degrading and what kind of man -

I like that you don't have Justin falling immediately into Brain's arms.

Looks like your playing with Norse mythology. Interesting.



Author's Response:

Loki and Hel are Nordic, but there's a bit of Welsh and a lot of Greek mythology as well. I just couldn't find the setting I wanted from any of these systems, so I decided to create my own hybrid. 

Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing; I hope you like what I've planned next.

Reviewer: audrey6768 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

I usually don't like supernatural fictions, but yours is really great and addictive !



Author's Response:

Thank you!

It's not too supernatural as a story; just veers into it slightly. I hope you'll keep reading and have a great weekend!

Reviewer: B/Jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2011 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is very interesting and unique idea. I like when Justin can resist the Brian's lure. Love the funny B/J dialogue; believable Michael the clueless ass behavior too hehe... Please continue!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

It's lovely as an author when people take the time to say something. I will definitely be continuing this; next chapter will be up on Friday or Saturday; just haven't had time to edit it, though the bulk of it is written. I hope you like the new developments!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm intrigued.  I hope you continue this soon.  I normally don't start wips this early, but I absolutely loved your Livin on a Prayer story, so I just hope you update frequently! 



Author's Response:

Hi Kate,

Thanks for your comment, and I'm glad that you enjyed Livin' on a Prayer so much.

I will certainly be updating Buses & Trains regularly (once a week) and it will not stay unfinished, so I hope you stay with me. :)

Reviewer: blklizard (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

Bangs head on desk... Bangs head on desk in desperation.... OMG!!! Kill me now I'm reading a WIP.  Can't believe I'm doing this.  I will hunt you to the ends of the earth if you don't finish this story. 

This is why I should never read a first chapter of anything that isn't completed. I know better.  But this is such a cute delightful story I can't help myself.  That first chapter got me hooked and I couldn't quit thinking about it.   As soon as I saw you had posted chapter 2 there I was clicking the chapter open breaking all my fic rules.  In my opinion this story is funny, clever and well done.   I like it a lot so far.  To many good things to list.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

I actually can't believe more people aren't reading and commenting on this story. 

 

 



Author's Response:

He he he

Don't worry; I will absolutely finish this story; the whole plot is laid out, I know exactly how it's going to end. I just need to work out sme of the finer details towards the latter chapters.

I'm thrilled that you like it so much and thank you sooooo much for your wonderful words. Reviews make my day (especially ones as nice as yours)

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