Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Can Brian correct the half truths that Deb's been told?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
Time to call Brian.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 6
Brian asked him to move in his room? That's big.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
Looks like the beginning of something new.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ok we know that Linds and Mel are bad guys. Who else in the family are going to be a problem?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2021 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
Brian and Justin are on the same page about each other, but neither knows.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2021 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love how Gus offers his dad for snuggling purposes.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2018 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
Please, please update
Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2016 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Are you going to finish this? I'm really enjoying this so could you please update soon. Thanks
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story but is it ever going to be finished:-(
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2013 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
I liked this since I read this in fanfiction and still hoping you'd continue with it.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2012 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
W/ill this story be finished?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2012 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 8
Ilove what you have written so far when will you post the next chapts
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
is this going to be finished. it is so good. is rl kicking your butt or what. you have a few wips that need updating. it's nor fair to your readers to leave them hanging. please finish your stories. you are a good writer, and it's not fair to us, your readers. sorry, but that's my feelings.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
Dont get me wrong, most of the time, I like Debbie, but man she needs to get her head out of her ass sometime when it comes to Brian. Seriously, it is quiet unsettling the way she always jumps at Brian's case.
And to continue, now the boys must come across the family dinner will all the family present, is my guess, well let's see how that goes and what the reaction of certain individuals is going to be.
Great work sweetie.
Marla
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 3
It's positively, dreadfully delightful when ones comes to the realisation that they are completely and royally fucked when it comes to the person who claims their heart and soul. LOL
Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 8
Another good update, I really like this story. They have a nerv to show themselfs infront of Brian's door, thumbs up for Justin, he did good at defending Gus and Brian, and as always Debbie is one sided again. When will she learn to keep her mouth shut and mind her own business, he had enough problems with her little boy, Michael. Good job, update soon. Metka
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
Nice update. I was afraid this story had been forgotten about. I can't wait to see what transpires at the family brawl, oh I mean dinner.
Reviewer: imback (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
Debbie can be an ass most time just like her son, good for justin to stand up to the two bbbbbbbbb for brain and gus
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 8
Love it. Linds and Mel were rotten mothers and now they want Gus back, when he is in a home that gives him everything a growing boy needs. And what is Debbie doing?? She must know what happened that caused Brian to have custody of Gus in the first place. I hope Brian lets the police know the girls showed up at his house uninvited and tried to take Gus. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 8
I am really liking this story. Good work.
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see Justin putting Debbie in her place too. She clearly said that she doesn't know what is going on but she orders Brian to do what she wants. Daphne could watch Gus while Justin and Brian go to Debbie's. Knowing Lindsay and Melanie will be there he can't bring Gus because of "being in direct violation of the court order regarding Gus". They can say all they want but Brian has the law on his side. And of course, Debbie know nothing of all of this. Will she be so kind to the girls when she'll understand how she's been manipulated and used. Will Brian would forgive her for thinking he would intentionally hurt his son like that ? I know that I couldn't and wouldn't do it.
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hey Hun,
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon. and keep up the wonderful work
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 7
Nice chapter. I like that Brian isn't feeling trapped or jumpy about Justin moving in to his bedroom. Can't wait to see how Lindsay and Mel are goping to try to get Justin to let them in and what Brian is going to do. Update soon?
Author's Response: I promise I will update much sooner than the last time.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
well there goes their tranquility. brian better get home soon.
Author's Response: LOL, definitely. thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 7
I love this story. This chapter was great. I was worried that Brian would be furious at Justin for moving into his room but this was great. More soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It took a while for me to decide what Brian's reaction should be and I have to say I like this one.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
Intresting story, and absolutely invigorating to not have the entire "family" breathing down Brian's neck all the time (I mean seven chapters and no mention of the family wow!)
As for the munchers and how they mistreated sweet Gus, well I can definitely see that happening with Lindsay though not quite with Melanie, but hey this is AU after all and thus everything is possible.
I loved the fact that Brian did not have a shit-fit realizing that he CAN be in a committed relationship with Justin.
Cant wait for the update.
Marla
Author's Response: Thank you, We will finally be seeing the rest of the "family" in the next chapters. I wanted to give Brian and Justin some time before lumping in everyone else.
Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2011 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 7
They can't just barged in like that and I'm glad that Justin didn't let them in and left the front gate locked. I can't wait to know what really happenned between Brian/Lindsay/Melanie ? I hope Gus don't have to see them. It will upset (me) him.
I love the relationship between Justin and Gus. I love Gus, he almost makes me want to have kids. He's cute, nice, polite and funny : the perfect kid. How can you resist his "Daddy !" when Brian comes back home ? The image of Brian with Gus in his arms is another thing that makes me want to have children. At least, one.
Author's Response: *grins* It makes me so happy to know that you are enjoying this story so much. I will update soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
love the story so far when will you up date
Author's Response: thanks, I will update soon
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
Bravo!!! wonderful chapter...such a bold move...I can't wait to find out what Brian's reaction is gonna be...please update soon ...um,I mean soooo sooooon.
Later.
Author's Response: Thanks so much
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ohhhh...Brian is going to be so pissed!!!!
Author's Response: *smirks* we'll see
Reviewer: Conzieu (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2011 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is so cute. Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow. I do enjoy a ballsy Justin. This should be entertaining.
Author's Response: I know so do I
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oohh I wonder what Brian is going to think about Justin moving into the main bedroom I am thinking he is going to feel a bit claustrophobic lol
Author's Response: thanks for the review
Reviewer: Sunshinegirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
i'm enjoying this story very much! justin is so bold! i hope brian will not mad or something and begin to push justin away.. this is so great! please update it soon
Author's Response: Yay, glad you are enjoying this. Thank you
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh, bold move Justin, I love it! - and this scene was so sweet, and hot, all at the same time - do, now wait to see where the boys go from here - please don't keep us waiting too long
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you like it
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story. it's great when Brian is caring and sweet.
Maybe Daphne should stop him from seeming too pushy. Brian needs gentle nudges not big shoves.
Author's Response: Thanks so much
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ooh...what a cliffhanger! It will be interesting to see how Brian reacts to that. I may be wrong, but I think he might fight that decision, at least at first. So glad to see you had updated this - I'm enjoying this story, and this chapter was a hot one - just my type - LOL!.:) Looking forward to the next installment, my dear.
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad that you like it
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
Dam the chapter was to short! next chapter soon please I need to know where they are going now lol
Author's Response: haha, I'm happy you are enjoying this
Reviewer: ruby-tuesday (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
i can't get enough. that's a wonderful story you're writing. i need more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad that you love it
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 5
Lovely update, more please
* hugs *
Author's Response: *hugs*. thank you.
Reviewer: Verity64 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
i like this a lot so far
please keep going and update soon
Author's Response: Thanks, I will eventually finish this story
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5
Last passage is amazing. ;) Thanks so much. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I'm really glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
It was really a nice chapter... it seems we are in the right direction... we just need a misunderstanding like 4depthoflove said then a fight then tears then seperation then longing then a huge reunion, summary: more and more angsty please LOL,Pardon my intrusion it's your story ..and I'm sure I'll enjoy it any way you lead it to,but I can't help it I'm a big fan of angsty stories with positive endings.
Thank you so much but please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I always welcome suggestions. I also love some angst or drama so I promise there will be some. =P
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
yay. brian's happy, justin's happy. he's beginning again with his mother and brian gave a choice. glad he made the right one. let's ee how the family handles it all.
Author's Response: Thanks. You will be seeing the rest of the family soon =P
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
I was just thinking about this story last night, hoping it wasn't lost and that you would be updating soon! I love your writing style, not too hurried, not to drawn out. This story is such fun, and has so much potential for our boys. Now, with this steamy cliff-hanger you left us, I can barely wait for the next chapter! Sure hope we get a few chapters with Brian opening his heart to love before we get whatever obstacle we know is coming. The way Brian's character has been developed, I'm thinking there will probably be some misunderstanding with him thinking that Justin is just out for his money afterall, and doesn't really love him. Oh, well, whatever the problem turns out to be, the bigger it is, the more explosive the reunion! Don't keep us waiting.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for such an awesome response and review. It warms my heart to know you are enjoying it. Thanks
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm enjoying your story, my friend; so glad to see you updated it!:) Looking forward to reading more about their deepening relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review. I'm truly glad that you like it so far. :-)
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great Chapter! i really can't wait for more!
Thanks
xxx
Author's Response: Thank You
Reviewer: mrz (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice story, keep going!
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
This story is developing very nicely...
Later ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: thank you for the review
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
Really loving this fic! I love the whole concept and it's well written. Looking forward to your next update.
All the best,
L-
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks
Reviewer: echelonizi (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love this! Can't wait for more! :)
xo
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm anxious to find out how they'll handle this! :-) Oh, and THANK YOU for spelling Kinnetik right! LOL
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: No problem. Thank you for reviewing
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love stories where Justin's the babysitter!
My favorite line from this chapter: Justin felt his face heat as his mind went straight into the gutter. LOL! That was great!
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: LOL, Thanks. I love that line as well
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
Loving this story a lot.
In America we use gas cards.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the info
Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great begining, please update soon, I would really like to see where they are going with their thoughts about each other.
Author's Response: thanks. Will update soon
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
Sounds like this story is going to be a GOOD one! Very well written. I'm looking forward to more very soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
lovely story, thanks for writing
* hugs *
Author's Response: glad you like it
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
OH HI ....... HT WAS VERY NICE A GOOD START ....... PLEASE MORE CHAPTER
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
very good beginning. i like this story. my guess is you are english, thus petrol card?
Author's Response: thanks and yes I'm english. Wasn't quiet sure what they would use in America
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is cute so far. i love the premise.
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
j'aime beaucoup ton histoire attend la suite tres vite
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
Being thrown out by homophobic parents could give someone nightmares. They might need cuddling during the night by someone with big strong arms. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. Great idea, hadn't thought of him needing comforting. Thanks
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start. A couple of people started Nanny Justin stories, but they have dropped them. It would be great to have a finished one.
Author's Response: Thank You and I can promise that I will complete it or my beta will kick my butt so no worries :-)
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
i like ,how long will it take before brian sneaking in to justins room a day,a few or a week or like 2 hrs
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