Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2018 05:06 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Ugh, I think this Ferarri and Chamberlain were cut from the same cloth!! He sure went to some great lengths to pull off his trickery on Brian, but luckily, he caught on, and it was great seeing Justin put him in his place. He may be smaller than Brian, but he can sure take care of himself when it suits him. He and Brian are definitely evenly matched!!
Reviewer: Brynneth (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2014 02:28 PM · On: Head On Collison!
Aw, so sweet! I liked this one too! Thanks for sharing :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 02:58 AM · On: Head On Collison!
That was one sexy tune-up from Mr. Hard-top... Loving this so much!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Justin knows how to fight for his man - LOL! So glad you're enjoying it; thanks for letting me know! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 01:36 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Someone's in for a BIG surprise... The question is who???
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi, Kathleen! I see you're on the sequel now.;) Let's just say that Justin is super feisty when it comes to his man.;) I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Thanks so much for choosing to read this one, and for your comments. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 06:45 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
I knew you wouldn't let me down. The perfect car like ending and as a bonus Gus included.
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.;) Thank you all your support. It is very motivating to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 06:36 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Yay! Jumping up and down with joy. Andy finally got what's coming to him. But what about the meeting? Will Brian be able to salvage it? Will the lying sleaze cause more trouble? I hope not.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 06:16 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Oh what web we weave when... you know the phase. Sabotage is not nice. But surely Justin will get at the truth and Andy will be out the door.
Author's Response: Yeah, old "Andy" is a sneaky one! Don't worry, though; Justin may be small, but he's feisty - ha! Thanks for the comments. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 06:03 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Boy is Brian going to be in for a surprise. Will Cynthia get into trouble? I hope not. Will Ferrari end up without a job? I hope so. Love all the car tidbits, from the name to the tire apron.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 04:41 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
If Ferrari is trying to get back at Justin for calling him Andy, he's in for a big surprise. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Tee - hee. Just you wait. There's a big fender-bender coming up - ha! So glad you're enjoying this one; I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks for the comments! Head-on collision approaching - LOL! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Oh you little Dickens you. You had me thinking Andrea was a girl, though I should have known better. What do you have planned. Love Brian's new car, it's sweet. I had to google it.
Reviewer: 35nanou (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2013 05:05 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
La version de Justin jaloux est tout aussi agréable à lire que la version inverse.
Doute, jalousie, irritabilité sont une partie des points importants de l'histoire mais au final la confiance et leur amour inconditionnel font que Justin et Brian sont et resteront ensemble.
Excellent!
A bientôt
Author's Response: Hello, my friend. Thank you for reading the sequel to the other story and for your comments. You can be assured that while the boys will encounter some rough patches, I will always make sure they are together at the end. I cannot think of them any other way.;) Thank you for all the support. I hope you continue to enjoy some of my other stories. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2013 05:03 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
very nice story! Thanks. :))
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting, Saskya; I'm glad that you enjoyed it.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 04:23 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
I was very glad to know that there is a sequel to the magnificent first story! I enjoyed it just as much as “It’s polite to share”, though it has an entire different plot. The roles definitely changed, so now it’s Justin’s turn to get jealous!
I dislike Andrea even more than I dislike Max. Chamberlain at least achieved something, while this Italian obviously overestimates his worth. I hate how he dismissed Justin right away, as if he didn’t mean anything! Only a stupid and a completely blind man wouldn’t see strong feelings that Brian and Justin share. So, he lost his job – and all for nothing. Brian chose Justin, as he always did and will be doing in future if some other person emerges, fighting for his attention. I love how unsure and vulnerable Justin felt, and how Brian was at first flattered, but then – almost worried. He is almost a perfect partner – well, as perfect as Brian can be:) All those moments when Justin was intentionally messing with Andrea’s name, calling him Andy, made me laugh so hard!:) I was worried as much as he was, because Brian seemed to like this new attractive man, though luckily, his fear of hurting and losing Justin happened to be much stronger.
The whole idea of going on a business trip is very interesting! I noticed that almost half of your ideas are very simple, but in the same time - absolutely unusual and exquisite. Andy came up with a whole complicated plan so just to sleep with Brian, and his methods are rather cruel. He played well on Justin’s insecurity – of course, who can feel sure when his partner is the sexiest and the most beautiful man in the world? But I’m glad that Justin still kept faith in Brian, even though he rushed forward to test it. And Brian… well, you’ve done an excellent work here! It would seem unrealistic if he wasn’t attracted to Andy, after all – the man *is* beautiful. So, Brian had his doubts, but fortunately, he made right decision! I can’t imagine what would happen if Justin saw them together… I guess it would be the end, and Brian realized that as well.
The moment when the disclosure of all Andrea’s machinations began is one of my favourite! I love how pissed off Brian was, and how then he was shocked to see Justin there. Together they are invincible, and Andy was made sure of that! When Justin showed him who is who here – it was so *great*, I even re-read it twice. I absolutely enjoyed it!:) And the idea with a little Ferrari for Justin – wow, isn’t that meaningful! Brian always knows what to do to make Justin feel special and happy.
Thank you for another fantastic story, Kim! I enjoyed it, as usual:) Or, and by the way - the title of the story is great and well-thought, I love it!
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin - I'm delighted that you read the sequel to "It's Only Polite to Share" and enjoyed this one as well. And I like the fact that Justin stood up for his man, and I couldn't help poking a little fun with the toy Ferrari - it seemed like something Brian would do.;)
Thank you for all the wonderful comments, Katrin, and for all the support; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 04:34 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
I really enjoyed reading this alot!! First a jealous Brian,then this....amazing!!
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: Thanks, Vonnie! I liked the idea of Brian buying Justin his own little toy "Ferrari" - ha! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story; thanks for all the comments and the support. *Big Hug* ~Kim
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 12:16 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
I love it. I hope Justin kicks Andy's butt (Not that I into viloence but I hate when folks try to break them up)
Great chapter Kim :)
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: Hi, Vonnie! Don't worry - he's going to take care of the fancy arrogant 'Ferrari' - ha! Thanks again for reading and commenting, Hon.:) *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 04:01 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
That Ferrari guy is gonna get his ass kicked by Justin lol.Great chapter Kim. I love a jealous Justin too. I love the way Justin calls him 'Amdy' hahaha
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: Ha! Me, too! And you're right - there's going to be a major fender-bender coming up very soon - and "Andy's" going to turn out to be quite a conniver - stay tuned; it's going to get nasty! LOL! Thanks for the comments, Vonnie.:) *Hugs*
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
I love the first chapter alot :
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! Yes, Brian's about to get in trouble.......ha! Poor Justin.....but maybe not so poor; he's about to have another smackdown with a Ferrari - ha! Thanks for giving this one a try, Vonnie.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2011 04:11 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Love this. Boys so cute together and all the csr funnies so appropriate. Love the apron. Have to put more logs on the fire and have some left over turkey stew before I continue. What do you suggest a sweet one or one with angst. I think another long one would be good. I'll leave it up to you for me.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! A fire in the fireplace sounds so nice right now.:) Forgive me for not remembering exactly which long ones you have read before, but if you're looking for lengthier ones I might suggest either "I Don't" or "Stirring Up Trouble." Both have some angst but enough enough sexual tension between the boys to make it interesting until they eventually wind up together (of course!). I hope you'll like them. Thanks again for all the kind words, Kym!:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 01:37 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
"Justin is filling in for Mr. Ferrari. He was unable to attend due to mechanical problems"..... lol...... I loved it..great ending..... Thanks..
Author's Response: Thank you so much for traveling this road with me - LOL! So glad you enjoyed it.:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Head On Collison!
I loved it..... the little compact Sunshine Mobile....managed to totally demolish....a brand new Ferrari....lol....
Author's Response: Ha! Love your name for Justin! Thanks for reading and commenting - so glad you enjoyed it.:)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 11:13 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Really enjoyed this story and this last installment of them being home with Gus! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Susan! Glad you enjoyed the story.:)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Wow, the nerve of Andy! I'm a little surprised by the violence though due to Brian & Justin aren't usually the violent type. I just see them throwing Andy out, not actually attacking him! Greens eyes don't seem to agree with Justin! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Andy's going to get busted! Yea, Justin, not falling for Andy's BS! :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 04:49 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
"From now on, no more Ferrari's except for the Hot Wheels kind."
I have a feeling Brian would use that Ferrari incident to death. He loved it too much to let it go that easily.
Author's Response: I have a feeling you're right! Thanks so much for reading and for all the reviews! I'm very appreciative.:)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Head On Collison!
"Ooh….I'm shaking in my G-string."
Andy only got the upper hand verbally.
LOVED IT! Justin got to fight for his man, and Brian got to bask in it.
Author's Response: Thanks, my friend! So glad you liked it! I kind of laughed myself when I came up with the quote about the G-string......but he only came out temporarily ahead. It never pays to confront a feisty little compact.:) Thanks for reading and reviewing.:)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 03:32 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Sneaky Brian! "Forgot" to tell Justin until right before he left, right! :)
Andy, tsk, tsk..... he's going to be disappointed! :)
Author's Response: You don't believe him? LOL!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 04:59 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Grrrrr! Andy needs to back off! Should be fun though! :)
Oh, enjoyed the lunch! :)
Author's Response: Hi, Susan! Glad to see you reading this one.:) Just wait - Justin's just getting started - ha! Thanks for all the comments!:)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:35 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
This is going to be fun! Poor Justin! :)
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 10:50 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Wonderful job, sweetie. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us. These two series bookend each other very well.
Later!
Author's Response: Aw....Thanks, Daphne, for reading and for the kind words - I'm very grateful. Glad you liked both stories.:)
Reviewer: Gainsboro (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:24 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Yeah! Finally Ferrari was out of the picture! Well, at least one of the two... ^^
Thanks for the wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fei! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the story! I hope to hear from you again in the future and I hope you enjoy many more of my stories to come.:) Thanks again.
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:57 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
This was great. Glad the Italian stalion got what he deserved, the ass! Certainly don't estimate a certain blond! I have this picture of Gus wearing the apron and pushing his car around.
Love it as always, darling!
Author's Response: Thank you, Megan Rose! I'm so glad you liked it.:) I love little Gus - it always brings out a tender side in his gorgeous dad.:) That one scene in the show where Brian is trying to instruct him on how to bring the wedding rings forth was so adorable! You could tell he loved his son so much, which was quite a feat considering that he had never had that wonderful experience as a child. I think in a way, though, that made him try to be an even better father to his OWN child.:) Thanks again for letting me know you read the story and enjoyed it.:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:54 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
You're fast in updating this story.
It's a wonderful ending.
Sorry for the short review * sticks tongue out * It was fun to do yesterday, but it was a lot of searching for the correct words. And still I've made mistakes yesterday pfff (... safely).
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! That's okay - just the thought that you took all that time to look them up was very flattering, but it's the fact that you reviewed is what means the most.:) Thanks for letting me know you liked it, my friend - *hugs* back to you as always!:)
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:39 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
was reading some of the reviews.. sorry you were sick. should have known something was amiss when you didn't update quite so quickly. we all wish you a speedy recovery and take it easy and push the fluids. lol
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend, for the well wishes - spoken like the true, compassionate professional that you are, but I also consider you guys friends as well.:) I'm doing better - slowly getting my voice back, which I didn't have for the past few days (I think my students would have actually liked that - ha!). First two days I missed all year at my teaching job.:( But couldn't help it.....The throat is definitely better, though, and the typing fingers are hard at work on "Heart's Desire." Thanks again for caring - I really appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:32 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Great ending! I just loved this story. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much, Gina Marie! That is high praise coming from such a fine writer as yourself.:) Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my story - that means a lot to me!:)
Reviewer: Curious George (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
I really enjoyed these 'jealousy' stories! (It's Only Polite to Share and Color Me Green.) They were fun to read, while moving the B/J relationship along nicely as both Brian and Justin became more mature, along the way.
I'll admit, though, to having some reservations about the boys drinking Beam while being overnight caretakers for Gus. That choice seems to take away, a bit, from these more 'grown-up' versions of Brian and Justin.
Other than that, this was a solid set of entertaining stories, which I'm learning to expect, and anticipate, from you. Next, I plan to read 'Double Jeopardy' and am looking forward to 'My Heart's Desire', when it's completed. Can't wait! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review! I appreciate your comments. Hadn't really thought about the drinking aspect; I suppose I was thinking of it being a one-drink thing and not actually going on a typical Kinney binge.:) I think Brian would stay responsible with his son there. Thanks for pointing that out, though.:) And thank you for reading some of my other stories.
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 02:51 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
That was just ... BRILLIANT !!
Author's Response: Aw.....thanks so much. I am very appreciative. Glad that you enjoyed it!:)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 01:06 PM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Yeah no more Ferrari's is right. A lovely ending to another great fic. Justin is so smart he knew Ferrari was up to no good but he was not sure of Brian because of his own insecurities. however both Brian and Justin trusted their feeelings for each other thankfully.
The only thing I did not understand is why Brian did not accept the second room when they found one when he went downstairs, when the computers were back up?
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! As always, thanks very much for reading and for the review!:) I'm glad you liked this one. To answer your question, the way I was looking at it (in my warped head, anyway - ha!) is that once Brian found out about Ferrari's duplicity, he had already made up his mind to give the man the boot out on his ass. So the other room wasn't going to be needed, because he was about to become unemployed. At that point, Brian wouldn't have given a flying who-know-what about WHAT happened to our little luxury model. Hope that explains the inner workings of my brain.:) Thanks again for all your support - I am very grateful.:P)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 11:28 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
I JUST LOVE A GOOD OLD FASHION LOVE STORY! GREAT JOB PREDEC2. IF YOU KEEP 'EM COMING I'LL KEEP READING 'EM
Author's Response: You're very kind - thank you so much! I'm so delighted that you enjoy my stories. Thank you for letting me know - that means a great deal to me.:)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Just finished reading chapter 5 and i loved it of course, justin fighting for his man and brian doing the right thing. Glad to see that overpriced ferrari go. BTW loved the car analogies, funny. Can you imagine the exhaust fumes coming from that bedroom "smokin" see you got me doing it now, I don't think i will look at a car the same way again(smile).
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend, for reading and for the entertaining comments.:) Yeah, sometimes I got a little carried with all the auto jokes, but I couldn't resist with this one. And believe it or not, the motto on the apron is actually REAL - it's for a tire company. Somehow I found it when I was doing research and thought, how appropriate is that for our boys? Ha! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!:)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 10:10 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
love it - thanks for the playful little ending this chapter gave us - it made me smile!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm so honored that you liked it.:) And thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts as well - I appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 09:17 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
WOW!! WOW!!! what a fabulous ending. the boys loved all the automotive innuendos.. so funny and cute. you surprise us constantly. we loved this story. on to paper hearts now?? brian wants to know. our peeps are losing rick. his residency is over so now he can be a full fledged surgeon. he's going to cal. they offered him a spot and pretty good salary so he's off june 1st. it's too bad we can't keep our frriends--but they have to make their way in the world. he says he'll read out there as predec2 is ingrained in his mind now. be interested to see who brian will be training next. hope it's someone compatible to us. at least we have lee back. i'm happy for rick, but it won't be the same. just a little down in the dumps. lol
Author's Response: Hey, lindc! Hey, all you peeps! Always look forward eagerly to your comments.:) Glad you enjoyed this one - sorry to hear I'm losing one of the peeps, but I'm flattered that Rick will still be reading along. Tell him to let me know who he is when he gets out to Calif and reviews so I will know.:) And tell BB that I believe "My Heart's Desire" is up next. Have to check, but the best way to keep track is to look at the most recent stories category. I go by the order they're posted there (oldest to newest) to make sure I don't miss one.....and I believe that one is the oldest.:) I'm sure everyone is anxiously awaiting what happens to little Gus in the the other story, though. I promise to just borrow him for a while - not hurt him.:) Tell Rick best of luck and success in his new position - hope he gets to work with as great a group as you guys are.:) And tell Lee I said welcome back!:)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:59 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Hi Sweetie,
Coming out of my drug haze (prescription for my torn knee, not an addict, promise), pain and mourning funk. Glad to catch up on this fic. Yay, glad to read that Justin won a fight and stood up for his man!
Hot, hot, hot love scenes! Fantastic.
Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, dear friend - always a delight to hear from you.:) Hope you're feeling better now - I know the feeling; been down and out for several days with what the doctor thought was strep; NOT fun....but my typing fingers are getting back into gear now and I think I only have 3 open WIPs on here at the moment, so I should be able to update faster now - unless I can't stand it and have to post a new one.:) Thanks as always for your friendship and support - it means so much. BTW - hope to see an update to your story soon as well.:)
Reviewer: Kacey (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:51 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
Enjoyed the resolution and all the domesticity. I loved your story. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Kacey! I have enjoyed all your comments and am very appreciative of you taking the time to do that. And like I said before, LOVE the user name since it's my initials - ha! Thanks again - looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts.:)
Reviewer: Kacey (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Head On Collison!
:...resolve and righteous determination..."--that's Justin! This was a great read. Loved all the car talk--really fun. I'm glad Justin had the opportunity to give A.F. his just desserts. I'm going to go read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kacey, for all the comments - it is greatly appreciated! I knew everyone was looking forward to the 'demolition derby' - ha! Thanks again for readng.:)
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 05:52 AM · On: My Favorite Hot Wheel
What a great story! I loved how Justin took off for Phily to save his man. It was priceless! I really liked how little Gus found Justin's apron and put it on. When it comes to kids, ignorance is bliss. He was happy with the car theme.
I look forward to your next story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cheryl! I'm delighted that you liked it.:) I only have 3 WIPs going right now (unless I miscounted - LOL!), and I'm sitting on my hands to keep from starting a new one, even though I'm itching to do it. I'm going to try and concentrate on the open ones right now so I can update them a little quicker - I think that would be best. But that's not to say that I won't yield to temptation and start another one anyway. For now, though, I'm going to try and stick to my plan. Thanks for reading and especially reviewing - I am very appreciative of your kindness.:)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Really enjoyed Justin's entrance into to the suite. Loved how the pieces came together or came out as the case maybe. Worth the wait, definately worth the wait. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm feeling a little better after feeling lousy with strep for the past few days so my typing fingers are up and running again - LOL! I'm about to post the last chapter - thanks for reading and taking the time to review - I really appreciate that!:)
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 01:12 AM · On: Head On Collison!
'andy' may think he's god's gift to gay men, but he really should know that justin is god's gift to brian. he never stood a chance.
(forgot to add that over at ff).
Author's Response: Thanks, my dear! Great comment! Loved the observation and totally agree with it! Thanks as always for reading and taking the time to review - I should have the final chapter up shortly - either today or tomorrow at the latest.:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 01:12 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Reading and commenting at the same time * giggles *.
OMG it's a really long chapter * dancing * .
~ Poor Justin still a bit insecure. Justin you know you're right ... you do trust Brian.
~ * clappes hands * good Brian. Back of ferrari-man, you're not wanted!!
~ Justin. Little shit; damn it, he loved him….deeply. And keep remember that, when you go back to that hotelroom.
~ found a typo ... he had decided to talk a walk ..
ohoh Ferrari-man I think you must hide real quickly, you're in deep shit. You're so gonna get fired by a very angry Brian.
~ Ferrari-man you're so stupid * giggles *
~ Glad to see that Justin made it savely to the hotel * runs to the next paragraphe *
~ "He's my partner. Always has been, always will be." yes .. and Justin has also hear the words. Sitting here with a very big smile!!~
~ Wowww I like a pissed off Justin. You go Justin ... hit the ferrari-man (I hope he does) ... * is reading and makes happydance * way to go Justin. Love you.
~ OMG * giggles * I like Brians slow test drive, that was HOT.
This was a brilliant chapter, you have outdone yourself * deep bow *
10+
Author's Response: Marny: Wow! I laughed through your whole review - never had one done while someone was reading it at the same time - very entertaining! Fixed the typo, BTW - thanks for pointing that out! Yeah, it WAS a long one - never know just how long they will be when I set out to write them, but normally you know they're going to be big ones - LOL! So glad you liked Justin taking charge. I actually had a different title for the chapter but had to change it to the current one - I thought it was more fitting - ha! Thanks again for your kind words. I should have the ending up soon.:) *Hugs* to you.:)
Reviewer: Verity64 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Head On Collison!
i really like colour me green and its only polite to share was good too
ferrari what a bastard!
great writing of course
Author's Response: Thanks, my friend! I'm very pleased that you liked it as well as the prequel.:) I'm actually working on the epilogue right now - I should have that ready either later today or tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing - I'm very grateful.:)
Reviewer: The Black Rose (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Oh my word, Brilliant. I absolutely love that Justin punched him.
Author's Response: Thank you, Monique! I consider that high praise coming from a fellow writer.:) I thought it was only fitting that Justin get to do the honors - LOL! Thanks for taking the time to review - I'm know as a writer you realize how much that means to me.:)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 12:47 AM · On: Head On Collison!
What a great chapter! I could not be more thrilled that Justin jusst happened to arrive in time to overhear all that Brian revealed. The passion as a result was so hot - not that these two don't always sizzle - but Brian in love just sends it over the top! Its always a joy to read your stories - and this one definitely does not disappoint.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! So delighted that you liked it! Sorry about the delay - been sick for the past two days with strep - yuck! Finally felt well enough to write, so hopefully the 11,000+ word chapter will help make up for it. I'm actually working on the conclusion right now, because I'd like to get this one wrapped up. Hopefully I'll have it posted either later today or tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing!:)
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Head On Collison!
Ahhhh, poor little Ferrari - got his walking papers. Do I feel any sympathy there?? No, not much at all. LOL. Good for Brian. He didn't even need Justin rushing to save his 'virtue'. And, I say that very loosely in regards to one Brian Kinney!!! Haha. And, the reunion between our hot blooded guys was simply amazing and blazed across the screen. Another excellent update. Enjoyed this immensely!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, my dear! So pleased that you liked the 'head-on' collision - ha! Got one more chapter to wrap it up and then I'll only be down to, what? Five WIPs now? Ack! If I can just keep myself from starting a new one, though, eventually I'll get it whittled down a little more and I can update faster.:) Thanks again as always for the feedback.:)
Reviewer: Ruth_QAFan (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
I thought I would just write reviews today - always been meaning to! I really like how this is going and cant wait for you to update and see where this goes! :) Andrea watch out bub! good work!
Ruth
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Ruth! I appreciate you taking the time to do that.:) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story - I should be updating this one soon. Thanks for leaving me feedback - that is very motivating for me.:)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Loving this! Damn, Andrea is truly a worm, isn't he. Brian will be delightfully and rightfully furious when he finds out, but with Justin on the way - ohy my, i see a wonderful disaster brewing. I hope Andrea pays and big time.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hi, Laura! So glad to hear from you, dear! I would really like to find a way to keep Brian in the dark until the little blond compact shows up - I really want Justin to have the honor of 'rear-ending' him and not in a pleasant way - LOL! Thanks so much for readng and reviewing, my friend.:)
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2011 12:23 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
I'm loving this story. Can't wait for Justin to show up at the hotel room door. Andy's in for a RUDE awakening when it comes to Justin's man. I await the next installment.
Author's Response: Hi, Cheryl! Thanks so much for the review! I'm very glad you're enjoying Justin's bout with the 'little green monster" - ha! Sunshine isn't going to be so 'sunny' soon - LOL! I'll get this updated just as soon as I can - I'm sure everyone's eagerly awaiting their confrontation in the next installment.:) Thanks for reading and especially for the feedback - I really appreciate that!
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
“I don’t know what game you think you’re playing, Andy, but I’m not buying it."
I love that Justin has enough faith to believe Andy is lying and that he can read him so well.
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks as always for reading and for leaving your thoughts, my friend! I like that, too - I would have hoped both boys would have learned from past mistakes and grown from them. Stay tuned - someone's warranty is about to run out - ha!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
This story is great. I wouldn't want to be 'Andy' when Justin gets to him. Please update quickly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lorie! I'm very flattered you like it.:) And not to fear, 'Andy's' about to find out that Justin is more than a match for him - ha! Thanks for reading and especially reviewing! (And thanks for the favorite author and story designations, too, by the way - I am very honored.:)) I'll get this updated just as soon as I can - I'm in the middle of the boys' last honeymoon day in Ireland for my other story!
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 01:00 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Great Chapter, i feel so sorry for Justin, but glad he is going to find Brian!
Can't wait for the next chapter
(Also thanks for the kind review on my story 'Need' i really appricate it)
xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review - yeah, Justin is NOT going to be happy with "Andy" to say the least! Remember how he reacted when Ethan cheated - well, he's going to outdo himself this time - LOL!). And you're welcome about the review - we need to try and support each other on this site, not tear each other down. As I mentioned, it not's like he or she didn't know what the story involved so if they didn't like the concept they shouldn't have read it in the first place!! Don't let it get you down (although I know from personal experience that's easier said than done because I think of all my stories as my 'babies'...!). Keep writing and just ignore the trolls!:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
WOW...I can't believe the BALLS...of that S.O.B. "Andy"...to speak to Justin like he was a piece of trash..... I don't know who Justin is madder at... Brian or Andy...but.... they both better watch out..... because... nothing is more scary than a pissed off Sunshine....lol... Thanks...
Author's Response: Well, I'm sure he's wondering what exactly is going on because he can't reach his man, but once he gets there and figures out what's happening, the old Ferrari's going to get a major overhaul and not in a good way - LOL! Thanks for reading and for the review!:) Stay tuned - this is going to get ugly and I see a major fender-bender ahead - LOL!
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:59 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
only have twenty minutes to read and review. this place is craziness. never worked so long and hard in my career--anyway as to this story. i can not wait til justin gets to brian. so much flack is going to come down. this story is gritty--love it. we think we may go home in 4 days--as some other teams have been recruited from california--hope so--want to get back to my own little rut ha ha. lol
Author's Response: Lindc! So great to hear from you! I guess you know your 'substitute peeps' have been reviewing in your absence and doing a great job of filling in - LOL! What a nice surprise to hear from you before you get home. Speaking of which, I hope it's soon for you guys.:) You're very kind to pitch in for them. Try not to work too hard and I'll keep writing the chapters while you're gone.:) Thanks for checking in - I'm very honored you would go to the trouble.:)
Reviewer: Babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Justin's going after his man! I had a feeling he would head to Philadelphia - can't wait to see what happens when he gets there.
Author's Response: Hello, my friend! Thanks for reading and for leaving your thoughts. I think Andy's going to regret trying to take Brian for a test drive - get ready for the smackdown in the next chapter because he's going to be the one blowing smoke and sputtering then - LOL! Thanks again for taking the time to review - I really appreciate that!:)
Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 02:45 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
oh please continue soon !!! Its a great story !
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Akasha! I'm so glad you like it. There will be some angst thrown in for the boys in the story, but I promise not to hurt either one of them. This will be a happy ending, I assure you.:) Thanks for reading and leaving the time to review - and double thanks for the 'favorite author' designation - I am very flattered!:) Hope to hear from you again.:)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Hi I have just scrolled down and read some of the reviews as I like to read your responses to see if I can get a clue to story direction lol. I was stunned to read the comment by a aptly named 'real bitch' and your response, my suggestion is do not give your precious time to people like that if they cannot discuss the chapter with respect they are not worth your efforts. I am only one of your avid readers who is thrilled with the variety of fics and the size of the brilliantly written chapters you give us :) Chris
Author's Response: Hi, Chris - You don't know how much I appreciate your comment. I know - you should never 'feed a troll' and compared to OTHER comments she left for other writers (yes, they were a lot worse than mine), I should have just not responded at all. But I try to read a lot of other fics and encourage other writers whenever I can, and if I can't think of something positive to say when I read a story, I feel it's best not to comment at all, because I for one know how time-consuming writing these are. And if it weren't for readers such as yourself who actually take the time to let me know they are enjoying the stories, trust me, I wouldn't spend HOURS writing them and publishing them. So THANK YOU so much for coming to my defense - that means more to me that you probably realize and really lifts my spirits.:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Watch out Ferrari .. Justin is coming .. and that's not good for you !! * grins *
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! *Hugs* back to you, too, girl.:) I know - there's definitely going to be some 'front-end' damage and maybe some 'rear-end' damage to the Italian model once Justin gets a hold of him - LOL! Thanks as always for reading and for your kind encouragement - I am very appreciative.:)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Go Justin go don't let the fucker beat you trust in brian's love. I seriously want to do damge to a ferrari
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! You and me both - ha! I've got to figure out what to do with the manipulative little Italian model for 4 1/2 hours, though - that's the approximate commute time between Philly and the Pitts! Don't want to deprive Justin of the honor of taking care of him - LOL! Thanks as always for reading and reviewing - you're so consistent doing that and I am very grateful for your kindness.:)
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:41 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Oh, Andy, you do not want to piss off Sunshine. Looks can be deceiving. He is no pushover!
I'm definitely anxious to read about that confrontation!! :-)
Author's Response: Hi, Daphne (I always loved that girl, BTW - ha!). Thanks for reading and for the review. You're right - Justin might be a little compact car next to the sleek sports car, but there's a lot of horsepower underneath that sturdy hood, and one luxury car in particular is about to find that out. When he's jealous, too, he's extra feisty - LOL! Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment! I'll get this updated as soon as possible.:)
Reviewer: diane sue & pat (dsp) (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
this is getting very mucky. justin is going to cause some kind of havoc.can't wait!!! lindc and her peeps have gone on another assignment at another hospital that is having trouble with surgical teams. a lot of their teams have broken up or gone elsewhere. they have been working double shifts and don't know exactly when they will be back---so i am the fill in as she didn't know if she would have time to read and review--soooo we are the back up reviewers. she thought you would probably wonder why she wasn't reviewing. she said to say hi and lol.
Author's Response: Hi, girls and guy Peeps - LOL! I actually recognized your 'handle' this time - ha! Thanks for being the backup reviewer in lindc's absence (I'm a little spoiled - I admit I WAS missing her regular review....). I appreciate you reading for her - I'm sure she, Brian and the others will get back up to speed soon. Tell lindc I'll be looking forward to her thoughts; in the meantime, thanks for reading and leaving me a comment - I am very appreciative.:)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
This Andy's not too bright and a whole lot conceited if he thinks Brian going to give up Justin for one night with him. Little does he knows our blonde Dudley Do Right is on his way and like all Mounties(because he's a bottom, get it) they always get their man. Waiting for the next chapter anxiously.
Author's Response: Ha, Kate - Love the comments - LOL! I'm trying hard to give Justin the honor of giving the little Ferrari a kick in the nuts (and bolts) but it's a 4 1/2 hr. drive to Philly. I'm going to try hard, though, in the next chapter to find a way to make that happen. Brian might get the honor of a verbal smackdown in the meantime, but I think Justin deserves the physical one! Thanks for much for reading and reviewing.:) I'll get this one updated as soon as I can.:)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
yes!! you go Justin! I can't wait for Brian to get out of the shower.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reading and for the comments! Yeah, I'd hate to be the little slick sports car when Brian and the blond compact gets done with him - ha! Thanks again for taking the time to comment for me.:)
Reviewer: Kacey (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Manipulations indeed! That was infuriating. Go get him, Justin! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kacey! Again, love the user name - I actually use that sometimes as an alias because it's my initials - LOL! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - I really appreciate that. Justin's about to put the little sports car in his place in the next chapter - I think I see a certain vehicle needing a little choking on the gas pedal - ha! Thanks for your feedback.:)
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Manipulations and Misunderstandings
Go Justin, Andy is a jack ass and does he really think that Brian is going to be happy when his battery is missing or he finds Andy in his bed....poor diluded thing. Oh well.
Author's Response: I know, Deb! He's not going to be happy, but that being said, his reaction is going to be nothing compared to a certain blond's - hell hath no fury than a jealous Justin - LOL! Stay tuned for the smackdown coming up - and as always, thanks for reading and reviewing:P)
Reviewer: lindc & predec 3 (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
oh oh oh!!! alex you better beware and brian you better be good. next chapter should be a hum dinger. just got home. really long week for us. exhausting but very productive. bb and i are exhausted. back to work soon. no access to computers there and really no extra time that we weren't sleeping. so i'll have to catch up on our reading. later
Author's Response: Hello, dear! I'm so thrilled you're back safely - I missed you guys! I'm sure you'll catch up on TLC right away if you haven't already.:) So glad you're back in the fold - catch some rest; you're going to need it for the roller coaster rides about to follow. Say hi to BB and the others for me!:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Great chapter.
Can't wait to see (read) how Brian will handle the one room.
* hugs *
Author's Response: (Sigh....) I know - what a shame that it's a busy convention weekend and there's no more rooms available there - whatever will they do? I know, Marny, I'm evil! Thanks for reading, dear - I'll get this updated as soon as possible - the Demolition Derby's about to commence! LOL! *Hugs* back to you, too!:)
Reviewer: The Black Rose (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
I really don't like Ferrari but good chapter
Author's Response: I know, my friend, but I guess that means I'm doing my job here because he's meant to be a pain in the you-know-what - LOL! Thanks for taking the time to review - I'll get this updated as quickly as possible for the Smackdown that's coming!
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
That conniving little bastard. There are only a few fics where I find I have the urge to reach into the computer and strangle a fictional character -- and this is one of them. :-)
As usual, wonderful update, sweetie!
Author's Response: Thanks, dear! I know - he really is a 'little bastard," isnt' he? - great nickname for our slick, little sports car - LOL! But not to fear; eventually he's going to find out that Brian prefers his feisty, little reliable 'compact!' LOL! Thanks for reading and for the review - I'll get this updated just as soon as I can.:)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Andy is a little pischer. Actually, I'm looking forward to the chase around the hotel room or whatever the slut plans for Brian. I'm so enjoying this!
Looking forward to your update.
Author's Response: Hi, Laura - LOL! The 'slut' - love the name! ha! I think we could have a real donnybrook with the Ferrari, the angry brunet, and the feisty blond - ha! Stay tuned - Smackdown Number Two is about to commence! Thanks for reading and reviewing, my dear.:)
Reviewer: real bitch (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 06:06 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
still waiting before commenting. But why is this taken longer than other?
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I really don't understand the question; I have five WIPS in process at the moment, and I am diligent about updating each one in the order in which I have updated them before. So I'm not sure what you mean exactly, unless you are referring to how quickly I finished the prequel to this one. If that is the case, then it must have been because it was either when I was off work for a week for spring break and had more time, or I did not have any many WIPs going at that time. You will find that despite my having quite a few open stories, I update a LOT faster than some - usually within 10 - 12 days for each one, which I think is quite fast considering how long each chapter is (a minimum of 5,000 words normally).
I hope you won't get offended, but if this is the only comment you wish to leave each time I update while it is a WIP, perhaps you would feel better waiting until I get it completed and then you can get a sense of how it turns out, and I WILL complete it; I have never left a story unfinished. I appreciate the fact that you are leaving a comment at all - that is more than a lot of others do - but I work very hard to at putting my heart and soul into each of my stories, and between your user name and the tone of the comments, it is quite upsetting to me. I respect your right to comment, but I also hope you will respect the time and effort it takes for me to write these while holding down a full-time job.
Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 05:08 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
Aaaahhh --- I can't wait until the next chapter! I really want to see how Brian reacts to Ferrari's advances. As usual, another great chapter -- laughed out loud at Justin's apron. Did you make that up or was that a real slogan for a tire company?? I read your reply to one of my comments for one of your other stories -- I lived in Ohio for 2 years while working on my Master's and am now in Illinois working on my PhD (I'm legitimately crazy). I liked Ohio, but never made it to Cincinnati, though my dad goes to Reds games quite a bit -- and throws it in my face that they're better than the Cubs! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Kemma! Well, the Reds might be better right now, but it certainly hasn't always been that way. I'm a little prejudiced, though, because I grew up in the era of the Big Red Machine (if you're too young to know exactly what I mean, I'm sure you dad would! I know I aging myself here...!) And to answer your question, the apron doesnt actually exist, but believe it or not, that really IS the slogan for a tire company. I think I was actually researching the slogan for the Dodge Ram Truck (Ram Tough), thinking of using that one when I found this one instead and bingo! I knew I had my slogan for the apron - LOL! And they had just been to the auto show, so I thought it was perfect for our little blond.:)
So glad you're enjoying the story - sorry I can't update faster; I know - I shouldn't have so many WIPs right now, but I will be updating them all continuously on a regular basis until they are finished. Thanks again for reading, my friend.:P)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 04:23 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
I can't wait to see who lays the smackdown on this little Italian creep - Brian or Justin! Cause I can see both of them blowing a gasket if Andy tries anything (and he will!)
Author's Response: Ha! Love all the 'car' jokes in the comments, and I'm just as bad as the next person! Thanks for reading and the review - yeah, I think this Ferrari's about to be involved in the middle of a demolition derby between an angry brunet and a feisty blond - LOL! Stay tuned - Smackdown Number 2 is coming up.:)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 03:32 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
I loved the apron scene and the way Justin stakes his claim on Brian in the morning. I can't wait until Ferrari gets it -- and not in a good life affirming way.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for the comment. Stay tuned - me thinks the little luxury car's about to run out of gas - LOL! Thanks for reading - I really appreciate it.:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:58 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
What a slimy weasel "Andy" is turning out to be...I hope he brought a sleeping bag with him... becuse I don't think he will be sleeping in Brian's bed tonight.... at least he better not be.... lol....
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend! I think you are very perceptive. I think Brian's going to be quite surprised when he finds out what's in store for him, and while there's bound to be some twists and turns coming up, I think this is one luxury model that's going to turn out to be a lemon - LOL! Thanks for reading and for the review - I really appreciate it.:)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
This story just get better and better with every chapter. I have every confidence in Brian to do the right thing, but just in case someone should remind him it's healthier eating at home than eating out (wink wink).
Author's Response: LOL! That is very funny - and very true! So glad you are enjoying the story. Not to fear - I think between the smitten brunet and the feisty blond, I don't think this Ferrari is even going to get out of park.:) Thanks fo reading and for the witty review!
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:59 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
oh yeah, that's what he thinks! Can't wait for Brian's reaction. Does Andy even have a clue who he is dealing with?
Author's Response: The real question is, does he have any idea how possessive a certain blond might get? I think not, but he's about to find out - LOL! Thanks so much for reading and especially reviewing.:)
Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:17 AM · On: Preparing for the City of Brotherly Love
ahh, oh no!! what is brian gonna do when he finds out its one room... with one bed... he better see that andy set it up!!! .... great so far, cant wait for more!
Author's Response: I know, such drama and potential for misunderstanding! Have faith, though, I think between a love-smitten brunet and a feisty little blond that Ferrari's going to be sputtering on his own gas tank soon - LOL! Thanks for reading and especially taking the time to review.:)
Reviewer: Julian (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Wow! it's great to have a jelous Justin fic for a change, I'm lovin it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Julian - Glad you're enjoying it! I agree - there doesn't seem to be too many of those, despite the fact that Justin was jealous numerous times on the show - he put up with a lot of Brian's tricking, but you could tell he wasn't too happy about it, despite what he said at times.....I think "Andy's" going to do his best to get under Brian's "hood," but I don't think he's going to get too far - LOL! Stay tuned - the fur's about to fly in subsequent chapters, but not before the Ferrari tries to burn some rubber first - LOL! Thanks for readng and especially leaving a review - I really appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: mysid (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2011 07:04 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Bad Andy! Bad! Grr!
And to think I was willing to give him the benefit of a doubt and think that he just wanted the job and not the boss.
Author's Response: Hi, mysid! Thanks for the review! Yeah, that Ferrari is one lean, mean, conniving machine - LOL! He knows he needs to play nice with his boss' partner (or at least act that way) to try and finagel his way into Brian's good graces and hopefully into his bed. But he'd better watch out - Justin's not going to stand for Andy taking his man! Chamberlain's not the only one about to experience a smackdown - ha! Thanks for reading, mysid - I am very appreciative.:)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:42 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
"Let's Get Ready to Rumble!"
I can't wait for the main event!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sandra! Yeah - Justin may be smaller than the Ferrari, but he's feisty! LOL! So glad you're reading along with this one - stay tuned. I have a feeling someone's joyride is going to be short-lived - ha!:)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:17 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Oh dear, the plot is definitely twisting and turning. Have a feeling Mr Kinney is going to get into deep trouble, one way or other. Lets hope this doesn't seriously damage Justin fragile self esteem.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! I imagine there's going to be a certain amount of angst involved with this one and Justin may misunderstand at first. but have faith; I like to play a little with their emotions, but I always bring them back together.:) Hope you continue to follow along - thanks again for leaving your thoughts.:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 09:01 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
OMG.... it looks like OBNOXIOUS "Andy".... wants to be Justin's "replacement" in more ways than one....lol...but...won't Brian wonder why on earth Cynthia would book one room with one bed for the two of them???
Author's Response: Yes, I'm sure he will - but I'm thinking somehow "Andy" will come up with a logical excuse, like they just messed up the reservations somehow.....although "Rhonda" does have his name....mmmmm....we'll have to see. At whatever rate, it's going to be interesting to see if Brian and the Ferrari wind up taking a "joyride" together before Justin arrives or calls - hope you'll stay tuned! Thanks for the review.:)
Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 06:52 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
It begins very interesting
Author's Response: Thank you, crazykitty! I appreciate you taking the time to read and especially review; I will be updating this regularly until it's done. Thanks again!:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 05:28 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Great chapter.
Aagrrrr can I put my hands around some one's neck and squeeze. Brian please get rid of mister Ferrari he's TROUBLE !!
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny - I warned you before that he would be a conniver! (Is that even a word? LOL!). You know how much I love angst, so I'll have to throw a little bit of that in the story somewhere before I put the boys back on track again....Hang in there, I think the man's warranty is about to expire - ha!P) Thanks as always for reading and reviewing my dear - *hugs* to you, too. Brian really likes his new car, BTW (not THAT new car - ha!)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 03:51 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Bastard coniving ferrari, Justin is going to be majorly pissed as he should and Brian is going to be in so much trouble, how do these boys attract all the treacheros ones.
Author's Response: Now, Chris, it wouldn't be nearly as much fun playing with them if I didn't give them a few bumps along the way - LOL! Do not fear, though, they will work it out and that "conniving" Ferrari will be parked for good - LOL! Thanks for the review and for reading my friend.:)
Reviewer: chase (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 03:25 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
That little italian rat. He has bad ideas. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Hi, Chase! Glad to see you're still following this one....love your name for "Andy" (little Italian rat) - I think weasel may fit him better - LOL! I'm going to have fun with this one, seeing how Justin reacts and especially writing about the little Ferrari's attempt to get Brian to go for a test drive - ha! Thanks for reading and for the review.:)
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:46 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
AHHHH! lol great chapter cant wait for more!
xxx
Author's Response: Hello, Friend! Very glad you liked this chapter - that little Ferrari's a tricky little character, isn't he? LOL! Now all we have to do is see whether: A) Justin shows up or calls at the wrong time; and B) whether or not Brian can resist the shiny new vehicle's leather seat and crank shaft - ha! Thanks for reading and reviewing - I appreciate that so much.:)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:14 PM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
"Well, maybe I shouldn't interrupt the next meeting of the Queers' Mutual Admiration Society, then," he said stiffly. "I'll just go down to the corner street vendor and grab a hot dog."
hahahaha XD
i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! You must have the same warped sense of humor that I do - LOL! So pleased that you liked it.:) Thanks fo reading and reviewing - I think someone ELSE'S 'hot dog' is about to get pretty battered by a certain little blond.....!
Reviewer: lindc & predec 3 (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 10:16 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
oh oh!! justin will somehow find this out and go to philly and find out they are in the same room. fireworks!!!! you are sooooo bad. bb and i have to go to chicago the end of the week. so you might miss us for awhile. we don't know for sure how long we'll be gone, depends on the hospitals need. lol
Author's Response: Hello, my dear.:) Yes, I think you're on the right track. Not sure if he's going to find out on the phone first or not, but I think I could have fun with that - don't know about Brian, though. I think he's going to have some 'splaining to do in the words of Ricky Ricardo - LOL! Thanks as always for the review and for letting me know about your travel plans - I'll miss you guys! Safe trip if you DO go....hope you get a chance somehow to read along somewhere in between.:)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 09:11 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Oh Andy, what a tangled web we weave. I've got a feeling this is one Ferrari that's about to get wrecked by a blonded compact.
Author's Response: Hello - LOVE the "blond compact" part! LOL! I wish I had thought to call him that! And I think you're right - Justin may be small (in some areas, anyway - ha!), but he makes up for it in feistiness! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.:)
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 08:15 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
i think justin is going to take andy out,
Author's Response: Mmmm...you may be right.:) He may be small but he's feisty - LOL! Thanks for reading and for the review, galenut! I really appreciate it.:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 08:00 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Oh, Andy, you are in for a world of hurt now! Jackass. I actually feel sorry for Brian, but he's never had a problem telling people what's what. Justin will have a small stroke when he finds out. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, Megan Rose! Something tells me that Brian isn't going to just comply like a little puppy dog; I like to think he's changed since the "Kip" days - hope you'll stay tuned for the rest of the story. Thanks for reading, my friend.:)
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 07:10 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Oh dear. What an amazing update, my friend. Although, I'm very worried for poor Justin - but I trust you - as always! We all know Justin often has cause to be jealous, but what *Andy* seems to be strategizing goes far beyond Brian's normal extracurricular exploits in the backroom. Well done! =)
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend.:) I seem to have a lot of worried readers all of a sudden! Have faith, everyone - you know I love these guys dearly.:) I think Brian may have learned his lesson from Kip and may have just changed his tune since being reunited with Justin.:) Time will tell, though, whether Brian actually gets into the "driver's seat" before Justin shows up.:) Thanks for the support, my dear.:)
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 06:55 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
what a son of a b***h.i can see justin walking in on somnething.and the sh*t hits th fan
Author's Response: Mmmm.....Certainly is a possibility, isn't it? At least if our little Ferrari gets his way. Will Brian succumb to a little "test drive" when the flashy sports car "flashes" his big, bad "manifold" at him - ha! Thanks for reading and reviewing - hope you keep following it.:)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 06:52 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
ohhhhhh...doesn't andy realize that Cynthia is not just any executive assistance? She makes the impossible happen so this 'mistake' will be thoroughly examine by her? atleast I hope so......I am just letting my imagination go with the story,so many ways it can go besides the obvious. Look forward to what happens next...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the review. That's a good suggestion - I will think that over. But I'm leaning toward Brian not finding out until it's too late to change it - makes for quite a bit of angst, which I enjoy writing. But if you've read any of my other stories, you know I dearly loved keeping these two together so I wouldn't jeopardize that permanently.:) I think Brian may just have an unpleasant surprise in store for "Andy." Hope you'll be following the rest of the story.:)
Reviewer: babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 06:44 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Can't wait to see how Justin deals with Andrea!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I don't think Justin is going to take this lying down, at least not THAT way, anyway - LOL! And Brian just might surprise old "Andy." Hope you'll stay tuned for what happens next.:)
Reviewer: real bitch (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 05:52 AM · On: The Ferrari and Rent-A-Wreck
Before I make a real comment on this I will wait and see how fair you are to justin in this story, oh why is the word hurt in this one and not in the other?
Author's Response: I respect your comment; but please, as you say, wait until I finish the story out of fairness to me. As you stated, at this point you can't really tell where I'm heading with this story; I'm assuming at least that you liked the first one? If you have read my profile or any of my other stories, I think you have a good grasp of where my storylines normally would go if that's any comfort..... At any rate, thanks for taking the time to read this one.
Reviewer: chase (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Lol looks like someones jealos already can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Chase! Yes, he is......and I think this new guy is going to be a real manipulator! Thanks for reading and for the review - I will be updating this one soon:)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Oh dear there is going to be trouble in paradise, I am going to assume the guy is gay lol
Author's Response: But of course, Chris! Where would the fun be if he was straight? Although that might not matter where Justin and his jealousy is concerned - LOL! Something tells me old "Andy" boy is going to be a conniving type before it's all over with, which is going to put Brian in a precarious situation even if he IS trying to be good.:) Stay tuned......things are going to get complicated - ha! Thanks as always for reading and reviewing, my friend.:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 04:52 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Well...Ferrari's are built for looks and speed....and something tells me...Mr. Ferrari is no exception....but... I am sure Justin will be more than happy to let some air out of his "tires"....lol.... Thanks..
Author's Response: That's so funny! Yeah, I think Brian's car color may be black, but Justin's color at the moment is definitely green - ha! Something tells me Justin isn't going to like "Randy Andy" at all - LOL! Stay tuned - the fur's about to fly and it's not going to be pretty - meow!! Thanks for the review, my friend!:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2011 11:22 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Let the games begin....I don't think Justin is going to like his "Replacement" very much...lol.... it looks like you have another winner on your hands.... Thanks...
Author's Response: Thank you, BluvsJ! Glad you'll be giving this one a try.:) I found out Andrea is a common male name in Italy and when I found the common surname of "Ferrari," I knew Justin had met his match - ha! Poor man - stay tuned; something tells me this Ferrari is going to be a conniving one - LOL!
Reviewer: ls1966 (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Wow, great start. Looking forward to the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and taking the time to review - glad you like the story. I will be updating this (and my other stories) regularly. Thanks again for leaving me your thoughts - I really appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
When the shoe is on the other foot, it's a tight fit indeed! I love this! And I was wondering whether Andrea was going to be a man or not. Can't wait to see what Justin says/does.
Author's Response: Thanks, Megan Rose! Glad you like it! Yes, I'm sure they're out there but you don't see too many stories where Justin is the jealous one, at least later in their relationship, so I thought this would be an interesting twist.:) Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.;)
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
nice choice for the car. poor justin is going to have to keep an eye on brian.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, galenut! Yeah, I have to thank Marny for the suggestion - took a look online and thought that's Brian - LOL! And apparently Andrea and Ferrari are both common names for a male in Italy (at least Andrea anyway), so I knew that was the name for me - ha! Thanks for leaving me the review - I am very grateful.:)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 03:41 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
I can't believe you did it. Another chapter! This should be interesting. I love the name -- Ferrari. How could Brian resist? I can't wait to see Justin enraged.
Thank you for the gift of another chapter!
Author's Response: I can't believe I did it, either - LOL! Hope everyone doesn't get sick of me although I couldn't blame them.:) I've got the week off so I have some extra writing time. And believe it or not, I did some research and Andrea is a common male name in Italy as is Ferrari. When I saw that, I thought I've found my name - ha! And I think old "Andy's" going to be a little trickster with some white lies to Justin before it's all over with as he goes after Justin's man! He'd better watch out, though, I don't think he knows what's about to be unleashed on him - LOL! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - hope you enjoy it!:P)
Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2011 02:36 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Great start with this story so far, can't wait to see the possessive side of justin. This new intern had better watch out you don't come between a twink and his stud.
Author's Response: Ha! Love the description of the two - LOL! You know Justin, though - he's not always the most secure little fellow, and I have a feeling that Brian's new intern may just be the lie fabrication type....dum, de dum, dum - ha! Stay tuned - the road's about to get a little rocky, and we're about to take the gloves off - LOL! Thanks for reading and especailly reviewing - I really appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Whoa Nelly! This is going to be juicy! Love this premise, a jealous Justin. I guess it's only fair, but Brian had to put up with a rapist after Justin in the original. Me so likey angst and then - the make-up sex - oh, my!
I love the semi-lighter stories; the subjects of rape and abuse are just too painful for me to read. I try, but just can't do it. You are so talented and have such a wonderful imagination, you appeal to such a vast range of readers. That's why I love your collection of works - something for everyone.
Well, my friend, I so look forward to seeing the next chapter!
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Thank you so much, my dear friend.:) I know - the make-up sex makes it all worth it, doesn't it? I know I'm out of my mind for starting another story - hope I won't alienate everyone with so many at once, but I try hard to keep them updated regularly and I have this week off so I figured that would give me extra writing time.:) So glad you like the premise - I don't think there's too many stories out there with Justin as the jealous one (at least when compared to the ones with Brian), so I think I'll have fun with this one. And I have a suspicion Andrea (hey, it's a male name in Italy - think Andrea Bocelli!) won't be helping the situation - in fact, I think he's about to make it worse for poor Justin.....Thanks for takng the time to read and review.:) All the best to you too - *hugs*
Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Great start! i'm really looking forward to whats to come!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Can't wait to torment poor Justin for a while - I think we're going to have a failure to communicate here and a predatory employee to boot (hint, hint....!). Thanks for reading and especially reviewing.:)
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
wow!!! justin will be taken aback majorly..green eyed monster rears it's ugly head. have to read this tonight to the predec 3. new temp starts tonight--so may have to change the name again.. his name is teddy. how ironical is that?? hope he's not a geek. will let you know. he he. lol
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I'm always looking forward to what name you come up with - LOL! Can't wait to see it - thanks for reading - let me know what they think. Hope you're able to rope the new temp into your group - tell him I said hello.:O)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Just Which Car Is Brian Riding In?
Aahhhh thanks you, that's a big surprise. I didn't expect this. But it's a beautiful car. And it rides marvelous.
"Brian worked hard to be as successful as he was and he deserved some of the finer things in life as a result" and that's why my hubby bought one too * sitting here with a very big smile *.
Hihi I told my girls what you did. They find it a very nice car, but it's not for them. They don't fit in the back. There's no space for their legs. My hubby is 1.97m .
But OMG you had me in the end ... Andrea is a man ... you're evil * giggles * .
* a very big hug *
Author's Response: Thanks, Marny! Yes, I AM evil, aren't I? LOL! But after all, there's Andrea Bocelli and he's a man - I actualy checked first to find female-sounding names (at least in the US) that are males in other countries and came up with this one. Otherwise, how am I supposed to make Justin jealous? Ha! Glad you liked it - and thanks for the photo! I can so see Brian in that car, can't you? Thanks for suggesting it - I want one, too.....(can I get the man with it?) LOL!
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