Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2022 05:01 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
I'm re-reading your stories and this one is so ... so wonderful written. Thanks again.
* hugs *
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2019 05:09 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
What a wonderful ride this story was. Wonderful writing <3
I love it so much.
I feel down for reaching the end :(
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2019 07:49 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Fck :/
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2019 09:39 PM · On: Reliving The Horror
Oh no ! :( This mad man got angry at Justin.
Why cops are always so stupid? Damn it.
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2019 02:37 PM · On: Aftermath
Daphne is an angel. I want to have such a friend too :( Their friendship is amazing. They are always there for each other and always pushing the other further. <3
So glad Gus is gonna be okay.
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2019 01:57 PM · On: Resolve and Rescue
Gosh this story have me on the edge. I keep holding my breath till the last word in this chapter. Amazing .
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2019 08:50 AM · On: Hunting for the Next Victim
Oh no, not Gus! :(
Love Justin and Brian interactions. So funny and witty. Brian really piss Justin off xD
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 11:34 PM · On: Lingering Doubts Over Coffee
"Why in the fuck would I possibly be interested in having coffee with you? Is Ted Bundy unavailable?”
I laughed to hard xDDDDD
Love Justin here. So fiesty and bold.
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 11:04 PM · On: Distrust Versus Conviction
Poor Justin :(
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 10:37 PM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
So interesting *O*
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2019 01:31 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you, Angelika! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Thank you for reading and especially taking the time to leave me feedback. It is greatly appreciated. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2018 05:28 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
This was a great story, from start to finish!!! And I loved Justin's vision of their happily ever after!!
Author's Response: Hi, Sarah! Was getting ready to respond to someone else's review on this story, when I noticed I had never responded to yours. I'm so sorry! I appreciate you leaving a review, and I'm so glad that you liked it. It wasn't the most pleasant of subjects, but I couldn't resist the thought of Justin working with Brian to solve the case. Thank you very much for reading and especially leaving a comment. I really appreciate that. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 05:32 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Im so glad i read this after its complete. Thanks for writing this story
Author's Response: Hello, Bella - I was about to respond to someone else's when I noticed somehow I had overlooked yours. I'm so sorry! Somehow it must have fallen through the cracks. I wanted to thank you for reading this one, and for taking the time to leave me feedback. I greatly appreciate that! ~Kim
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 10:48 AM · On: A New Light
Tonight i will let my 6 years old son sleep in my bed. Im so glad gus is well and can spend time with his parents again. Im sorry for other kids who become a victim:(
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 10:15 AM · On: Aftermath
Poor justin. Phisically and mentally exhausted.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 09:37 AM · On: Resolve and Rescue
This is the scariest part ive read. Im so glad they found gus alive.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 09:11 AM · On: Desperation Makes Strange Bedfellows
Im so sad reading this...
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 08:34 AM · On: The Crime Becomes Personal Now
I couldnt stop reading this. Im so scared what will happen to the next victim it could be gus...
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2015 01:35 AM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
thank you for sharing this story
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading, Chandrika, and letting me know you did. I appreciate that. Hope you will enjoy some more of my stories. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2014 05:59 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
This was fantastic! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this one, and especially for taking the time to let me know. I greatly appreciate that.:) While not a pleasant topic to write about, I DID want to write a story where Brian's love for his son would force him to accept help from an unlikely source, and where the two men would fall in love afterward, so I did find the idea intriguing. I may write a sequel at some point, but it would be a ways down the road. Thank you again for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 05:47 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
I finally re-read this great story one more time, and I absolutely couldn’t not to thank you for it. It captured me immediately, since the very beginning, and I didn’t stop until I reached final. To say I’m impressed is to say nothing!
I love when detectives are so perfectly combined with love story. Your descriptions are awesome, just as always! Justin’s visions scared me – I can only imagine what it should be like to see those terrible things… of course, being so kind and caring, he decided to come to police, even though he knew they probably wouldn’t believe him. I admire his courage – he took a very big risk. It was heartbreaking when Justin realized he was already too late, and a child had already been murdered. I wanted to kick Brian for his harshness, though I can understand him – being skeptical and cynical, it’s almost impossible to believe someone who claims to have visions. I loved how you managed to show that he was both suspicious of Justin and attracted to him. I was pleasantly surprised that Carl wasn’t so hasty in his decisions, and that he decided to give Justin a chance. I also think that you showed Daphne perfectly – a very supporting, always understanding friend, and sometimes it’s too much of her:) Despite I was a bit irritated when she continued to treat Brian suspiciously, I could also understand from where it was coming. She is just too loyal to Justin, and can’t forgive people who hurt him even if he already did it.
I enjoyed every moment of Brian and Justin’s meetings and conversations:) It was so funny watching how irritated Justin was when Brian visited PIFA and then kept suggesting one inane version after another, and how highly amused and even impressed Brian was with his reactions. Brian is really a great detective here, it was fascinating to see how he interrogated Justin, carefully and attentively analyzed his every move, every sigh, tried everything to make him give himself away. This story has a fantastic atmosphere – even before Gus was kidnapped, I could feel a very dark cloud slowly form on the horizon. Every Justin’s vision is heartbreaking, I froze in terror when I realized it was Gus who was going to be taken. Of course I expected it from the beginning, but it was really terrifying to see it actually happening… and Brian’s reaction! I almost ate all my nails in agitation – you’ve mentioned before the first chapter that Gus won’t be killed, but I was going crazy anyway. It was torturous to watch Brian, how shocked and scared he was, and how terrible it was for Justin to witness all of it, tormenting himself with thoughts that he should have come earlier, even if he did everything he could. You are a Master in building tension! I don’t remember the last time I was so caught in the detective, I tried to read so fast I might have even missed a few sentences! Brian was an asshole to Justin once again, but I just couldn’t be angry with him. I can’t even imagine the level of his desperation and fear… I almost cried when he came to Justin, holding that cap, it was so incredibly emotional! I kept hoping Justin would be able to help him, and when he couldn’t, I was as shattered as Brian was. But then their car-adventure started, and once again I couldn’t breath. This story is like emotional rollercoaster, you never know what to expect the next second! I’m beyond impressed with how they finally found Gus, and with the way you described murderer’s story!
I’m in love with the process of Brian’s slowly falling for Justin, and of course of Justin’s starting to feel the same. I enjoyed every moment they shared, together and with Gus, and that baseball game, Justin’s panic attack and Brian’s protectiveness… I adore protective Brian as much as I love when he’s jealous. I don’t know how you always manage to describe everything so beautifully, absolutely perfect from psychological point of view. I almost squealed with joy when they finally kissed!:) So hot and passionate moment! But what followed was even more breathtaking and exciting, it was terrific to know that Brian is the first one for Justin. I don’t know why, but I love it this way very much:) Justin’s next vision and Carruthers’ escape just shocked me, left me speechless. Again that perfectly-built, agonizing tension, and nails being chewed in anxiety. I was sure Brian would find Justin in time, but it was almost impossible to wait! It’s so touching to see how much Justin means to him, that he is ready to do everything just to save him… This is a very sad, very emotional, beautiful, many-sided and brilliantly written story. I love it with all my heart. And the conclusion is the best one I could have ever come imagined! I was *thrilled* with Justin’s happy visions of their long life with Brian together, it’s so great that you mentioned it! Their history is truly unique, I wonder what Brian would have thought if he had been somehow informed that this blond man was going to irrevocably change his life.
Thank you so much for this incredible, unusual, romantic, beautiful and adventurous journey! I’m so happy you shared it with us!
P. S. By the way, I’ve just recently discovered ‘Tame the Wild Stallion’ – what an amazing story!.. I can’t even tell you how impressed I was, I was reading day and night, unable to stop! I’ll comment as soon as I can.
Thank you! I can’t wait for your updates!
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetheart! As always, your thoughtful comments humble me. I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this story, and that you are enjoying some of my others. This one was difficult in some ways to write, based mainly on the sensitive subject matter, but the idea of Brian as a cynical detective and Justin as a gifted artist haunted by the visions in his head, along with Gus being the instrument that drew them together, was too good to pass up as a story idea. I am so happy that you liked this story! I may, in fact, do some sort of sequel at some point to play off more of Justin's abilities, but it would have to be somewhere down the road.
Thank you again for all the time you take to leave me feedback; you are so specific in which you like about the story, and that is a great help to me. And I'm delighted that you're enjoying "Tame the Wild Stallion!" I know I had to leave that at an awful point, but rest assured when I am able to update it (and I will do that as soon as possible), that I will be picking up with the boys right where they left off.;) (wink, wink).
Looking forward to any other comments you may have for my stories. Thanks again! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: SAM (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 10:52 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
THIS STORY WAS THE BOSS. I AM REALLY INTO DETECTIVE STORIES SO THIS ONE WAS SUPER!!I WAS INSTRUCTED TO LEAVE REVIEWS WHEN I WANTED TO. SO HERE I AM. THIS IS VERY NEW TO ME, SO BEAR WITH ME. I WAS ASKED TO INTRODUCE MYSELF BY A VERY PUSHY PERSON. NO, NO REALLY-JUST KIDDING, WELL SORT OF PUSHY. I AM A NURSE IN THE CARDIAC UNIT WITH A WONDERFULLY TALENTED TEAM OF PEOPLE. I WAS VERY HAPPY TO SEE THEY HELD MY SAME AFFINITY FOR QAF. IT IS MY OBSESSION AS ARE GALE AND RANDY. I HAVE SEEN RANDY PERFORM IN MASS SEVERAL SUMMERS AND SAW GALE IN ORPHEUS-HE WAS SO SEXY AND CAN SING REALLY WELL EVEN IF HE SAYS HE CAN'T. HE IS SORT OF A RECLUSE TYPE OF GUY NOT TOO MUCH ON LINE ABOUT HIM OUTSIDE OF QAF. RANDY, ON THE OTHER HAND IS A LITTLE MORE OUT THERE. I SAW HIM AT JOE'S PUB A WHILE AGO. HE IS A RIOT. MY FRIEND AND I WENT TO SEE HIM IN TOMMY IN MASS. HE WAS SO GOOD. I UNDERSTAND YOU HAVE ALSO SEEN HIM IN TOMMY. I'M SORRY I SEEM TO BE RUNNING ON HERE. I JUST WANTED TO REVIEW THIS STORY AND I HAVE BEEN RUNNING ON AND ON. I TALK A LOT. I HAVE BEEN INVITED TO JOIN A CLUB CALLED THE PEEPS. I GUESS THESE PEOPLE ARE YOUR FAN CLUB. I REALLY ADMIRE YOUR EXPERTISE WITH THE WRITTEN WORD. I JUST GOT OUT OF WORK AND HAVE TO DUB DOWN BEFORE BED, SO SOME MORE READING. SAM I AM!!
Author's Response: Hi, Sam! Your comments made my day, my friend! Yes, lindc told me that she had snared you into her 'reading group.' She's so wonderful about finding new readers for me - tell her how much I appreciate that! I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story; I had to tread a little carefully since it involved such a sensitive subject, but I thought that Gus being in danger would be a dramatic device to bring the boys together.
BTW - I bet we have been at a lot of the same functions at the same time! Yes, I saw Randy in "Tommy" three times back in July of 2011, along with seeing him in "Red" (both in NJ and Cleveland), "Habit of Art," "Silence" three times, and "QWAN" this past August (yes, I'm obsessed - I admit it - ha!). And like you, I have all five seasons of QAF on DVD and have practically worn them out.:) I think that's why I love to write about them in fanfiction, so I can take them where I want them to go. The chemistry between Gale and Randy is out of this world, isn't it?? I have never had the pleasure of seeing Gale in person, but I hope to one day. I took a large-sized, rolled-up QAF poster with me back in June to the con in Cologne, and his autograph is the only one missing on it now - grrrrr! But I hope to remedy that next year if they are able to successfully organize the LA con in June. Hopefully if they do, with you being on the West Coast you'll be able to attend. Would love to meet you, lindc, and the other 'peeps.'
Oh, and I don't know if you heard, but for some reason Joe's Pub is discontinuing their Hits on Parade shows after December, which disappoints me greatly since I had been wanting to go see Randy sing there! What a bummer!
Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to comment, Sam; I really appreciate that! I hope you will enjoy some more of my stories as well and hope to hear from you again. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: sierra (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
This story is the best thing I have read in a long long while. I amost dropped my laptop in several places. I love the way you write descriptions, I feel it's like a movie I am so engrossed I feel like I'm there. Some was so scary, some was so tender, and the love scenes smolder. I was going to read the Tricky stories but I happened on this one and couldn't stop til I was done. I read through eating time so now I must satisfy my other hunger. adieu.
Author's Response: Hi, Sierra! You are very kind to leave feedback for each of the stories that you are reading; thank you for that! I can't believe you got through that entire story already - ha! But I'm so delighted that you liked it. I just thought the idea of Brian as a cynical cop and Justin as the anguished, artistic psychic was too good to pass up. And I felt that only Brian's love - and subsequent fear - for his son could make him overcome his great doubt and distrust for Justin and seek out his help. If you felt like you were actually there during the story, I consider that a great compliment. Thank you again for the lovely feedback and for reading! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 10:51 PM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
This was a great read.My kindle is being sorely neglected these days since coming across this website.While a lot of the stories just don't do it for me all of yours seem to.I am also neglecting the housework.LOL.Anyway I just have to thank you on another great story.
Author's Response: Aw...you're so kind - I kind of LIKE causing you to miss housework - ha! It's overrated anyway.:) Thank you so much for all your support and for the encouragement; that means a lot to me! I hope you continue to enjoy my stories, Charlotte! Thank you for the comments!:) *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: NONIE (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
I JUST SPENT THE LAST TWO HOURS READING THIS INTRIGUING, HAUNTING AND FILLED WITH SUSPENSE STORY I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN TO REVIEW. THE SUBJECT MATTER IS PROBABLY UGLY TO A LOT OF PEOPLE. I JUST KEPT READING AS I KNEW THE OUTCOME WOULD SOMEHOW BE POSITIVE. WITH SO MANY CHILDREN GOING MISSING LATELY YOUR STORY WAS CURRENT BUT WITH JUSTIN'S INCREDIBLE VISIONS IT MADE THE STORY JUMP OFF THE PAGE. TRULY I COULDN'T STOP READING. I'M GLAD IT WAS A FINISHED PIECE AS I WOULD HAVE GONE CRAZY WITH THE CLIFF-HANGERS. THE WRITING IS SO VERY GOOD. I SUPPOSE YOU HAVE HEARD THE NEWS ABOUT LINDC AS SHE SAYS SHE WRITES YOU OFTEN ABOUT HER LIFE. SHE IS A CHARACTER. PROBABLY SHE WON'T SEE THIS AS SHE IS QUITE BUSY. I THINK THIS MOVE WILL BE GOOD FOR HER. SHE IS GETTING BURNED OUT AT THAT HOSPITAL. SHE IS TOO YOUNG TO HAVE TO GO THROUGH ALL THAT. I KNOW WORKING NIGHTS WOULD DO ME IN. SHE WILL BE IN MY HOSPITAL AND WILL BE WORKING DAYS-SO GOOD. I'M REALLY HAPPY FOR HER AND ME AS WE DON'T SEE EACH OTHER OFTEN ENOUGH. NOW WE CAN READ YOUR UPDATES TOGETHER HERE. GUESS I'M A LITTLE WORDY AGAIN BUT HAD TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ENJOYED THIS STORY. BY 4 NOW. I GIVE THIS ONE A 20 RATING. HA!
Author's Response: Hi, Nonie! Don't ever worry about being 'wordy' - I LOVE the fact that you took all that time to leave me such wonderful feedback. Thank you for those lovely comments! Even though you're right - the subject matter was unpleasant - I enjoyed writing this one. The thought of Brian as a cynical detective and Justin as an artist haunted by dreams of what was to come was too perfect to pass up. And of course, Gus would be the one person that would cause Brian to ask for help and show his vulnerability. And yes, people did go crazy during some of those cliffhangers - ha! I had to often update the story with the next chapter so people weren't sitting there biting their nails, especially during the search for Gus.
I'm so glad that you liked this one and I'm very flattered that you read it all in one go. And yes, lindc is very special. Even though we have never met, she has given me such support for my stories over the past several months and has given me such great encouragement. And just from what she writes I can tell she is a very compassionate person. Her former employer's loss is definiltely going to be your hospital's gain. You are very kind to let her and Brian stay with you. They both sound like wonderful people as well as great medical professionals. I'm delighted to hear that you can all read my updates together now!
Thank you again for all the wonderful comments, Nonie! Another favorite of mine, BTW, is "Stirring Up Trouble" where Justin is a cake designer and clashes with Brian over a cake for his son. I think you might like that one - it's much lighter than this story, but does feature Gus prominently. And also Emmett - I always loved his character! Hope to hear from you again! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 11:51 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
I am such a good girl, didn't go straight for the smut but slowly read all the chapters for the good stuff
Author's Response: Ha! I'm proud of your restraint, June - LOL! Thanks for letting me know you're still reading this one. I really liked writing this one; hope you enjoy the rest! Hope the self-discipine was worth it - ha! Thanks again. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2012 09:44 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Awww... I'm sad it's over but happy that Brian and Justin ended up happily ever after, as they should. That bastard Carruthers got what he deserved. As you pointed out, he would have most likely rotted and died in prison way before he would have been put to death. I am totally for the death penalty, especially with child killers, but it pisses me off that there are so many people sitting on death row several years, sometimes decades, after they commited their crimes.
Another excellent story Kim, thanks for sharing your gift of writing and your love of QAF with us! :)
Author's Response: Hi, Nancy, my friend - I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, I agree - the man was obviously off his rocker in a lot of ways, but I didn't want to go through the whole trial thing and then have the man simply languish in jail or in a mental facility, so I thought this was the best outcome plot wise for him. Thank you very much for reading and especially for taking the time to leave me feedback. As a fellow writer you know how much that means to me. Looking forward to the continuation of your own story and any others in the future! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Play Ball!
Wooooo!!! Finally, some B/J action!! It has taken me longer than I had hoped to get to this point of the story. My internet provider has been doing some maintenance for the past week and our service has dropped out twice while I've been in the middle of a chapter. It takes literally hours before it comes back, the assholes. Anyway...
I've enjoyed the story so far. I knew that Gus was going to be okay, but it did get tense there for a minute. You're such a good writer, Kim! xoxo
Author's Response: LOL! Hi, Nancy! I know - it took me long enough, didn't it? But never fear - it's definitely going to 'heat up' now, in more ways than one.:) Thank you so much for your kind words, my friend; they mean a lot to me. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
Hey Kim! I've been meaning to start reading this story for awhile... so here I go! This is not my usual kind of story or genre that I'm into, but because it's one of yours, I'm going to give it a shot. I'm don't watch crime shows, like Law and Order or CSI and I don't believe in premonitions or psychics, but I love your stuff. I'm sure you are going to be playing with my emotions a lot, as this is some sensitive material, but I will keep reading until I finish. I just hope that there is a happy ending... ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Nancy! Thanks for giving this one a try.:) I do hope you like it. And yes, there will definitely be a happy ending for the boys - it's the only way I can write them.:) The crimes depicted aren't overly graphic, so I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for leaving me feedback; I really appreciate the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: DiddiAskew (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Lingering Doubts Over Coffee
I am being drawn into you're story - as usual, however, every time Carl is referred to as a sergeant, it kicks me out. The authority you've given him,supecedes his rank.
Based on a general model, from highest to lowest rank, would be:
From the power Carl seems to have, he should, at the very least, be a Captain. Sergeants don't promote.
Despite I'll continue reading, as I wait for you to finish you're other stories.
Thanks for sharing them.
Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for the informaton; I was not aware of that. I do try to conduct research as much as possible when I can to try and write as realistically as I'm able to, but obviously I didn't do my 'homework' well enough on this one. I wish someone had pointed that out to me when I had first started and I could have 'promoted' him to at least Captain.:)
I mainly write for entertainment value, though, so I hope you can forigve me the faux pas and read through it anyway. I appreciate you letting me know that you do enjoy my stories - that means a lot to me, especially from someone that I haven't heard from before. Thank you again for the information. If I ever write a sequel to this one, I'll make sure I 'move him up the ladder.':) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Got my computer back :o) I loved it! Glad to see it finished and everyone happy. What a ride! Couldn't be anymore happy for our guys. Well done.
Author's Response: Hi, Yvee! So great to hear from you and to know you finished this story! Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comments; I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! It WAS quite a roller coaster ride, wasn't it? But I always make sure the boys wind up happy eventually, since I consider them soulmates destined to be together.:) Thank you again, my friend, for the feedback and for all the support; I really appreciate that.:) Glad to see you back on the site! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
This was an AWESOME story, Kim. I loved it from start to finish. I'm sorry I didn't comment all the way through, but I wait until stories are completed before reading them.
The inspiration for this story was fantastic. I loved the psychic Justin and the Brian cop. Amazing how Brian had two different characters. This story kept me glued to it until I finished reading ~two days almost.
Wonderful story. ~Jane
Author's Response: Aww...thank you, Jane, for letting me know you read the story and especially for the feedback! That means more than you know. I don't blame you or any other readers one bit for waiting until a story is finished before reading it, but it DOES get a little disheartening when someone does wait and then I never receive any feedback for it afterward. So I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.:)
And I'm very happy that you liked the story. It occurred to me that of all things or people Gus would be the one person that would make a cynical Brian evolve into someone quite different and vulnerable, and with Justin's artistic abilities I thought this type of characterization would be a perfect match for him.
Thank you again for the lovely comments, Jane! I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy.:) *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 12:02 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Hey, It was interesting, heartstopping, tense,... I loved this different Brian. Thanks for writing and posting. Sasha
Author's Response: Hi, Sasha! Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave feedback; that means so much to me! I'm happy that you enjoyed the story.:) Thank you, too, for being such a faithful reader and reviewer; I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy.:) *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 06:44 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
WOW! I loved this. It was such a unique storyline that really grabbed me right in from the beginning and held me there. Sorry I did not get to comment very often or read it quickly. I dont get nearly enough time to sit and read your wonderful stories, but I saw this was finished and made the time. :P Thank you for weaving such an intriguing tale. *Sidenote* You really know how to write a psychopath! lol. Always a pleasure, giant bear hugs to you kim! ~Mandi
Author's Response: Awww..thanks, Mandi, I always consider your reading and commenting on one of my stories to be a great honor since I respect your own work so much! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this one! Yeah, I don't know what it is about me and psychopaths - LOL! I wish I could say that they're all gone now, but I just remembered old Adam over in "My Heart's Desire," and I have a sneaking feeling that he just might be well on his way to the same status - ha!
Thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. I always am delighted to read your thoughts and it is very encouraging to me! So glad to see you back on the site again, too! Take care.
*hugs* Kim
Reviewer: Nik (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 10:57 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Just finished reading this amazing story. I truly enjoyed it from beginning to end! Thank you for writing this story and all your stories. You are a gifted writer. I usually only read completed stories, but I am following along with My Heart’s Desire. Happy to see an update for this one. Look forward to reading this soon and to reading more of your stories in the future!
Author's Response: Hi, Nik! I really appreciate your comments regarding this story and that you enjoyed it - thank you for taking the time to let me know that you liked it! And I am grateful for your faith in me that I will complete my stories by reading "My Heart's Desire," because I know how extremely frustrating it can be to start a story and get caught up in it, only to find out it was never updated or completed - that is one of my pet peeves as well. So I thank you for trusting in me that I will finish my stories - I won't let you down! Thank you again for all the support - that keeps me motivated to keep writing! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2012 11:30 AM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
Oh no! Spotted this during my busiest weekend in months! What's a girl to do??????
Well, as Hannibal said, "We will find a way, or we will MAKE one!"
Off to find a way . . . :-)
Author's Response: LOL! I'm flattered that I'm capable of disrupting your schedule - ha! I do hope you enjoy this one. I know a lot of readers want to wait until a story is finished before reading; unfortunately, though, more times than not I don't think they think to comment when they read the completed work, so I really appreciate you letting me know you'll be checking this one out. Thank you for reading and for the feedback! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 05:48 AM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
*IZ DEAD* (of shock from seeing it's FINALLY finished) *
*iz revived, begins reading*
LMAO ;D
Author's Response: Hey! I resemble that statement - ha! See, I DO finish some eventually (actually, I finish them ALL - it just takes me a while with my full-time job to do it....!). Hope you enjoy the last part of this - thanks for letting me know you were revived - ha!). *Hugs* Kimberly
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2012 12:45 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Wow!!! I get distracted for a few days and you go and finish the story!!!! Thankfully, I managed to get a hold of it and read it! I LOVED the story, by the way... You kept me on my toes the whole time and I really loved the ending.... I hope to read you soon in another story!! Kisses!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Mafita, my friend! Thank you for reading my story and especially taking the time to leave your comments; I'm so glad that you liked it and I appreciate the feedback.:) I hope you will continue to enjoy my other stories as well. Thank you again for all the support! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Thanks Kim for this beautiful story. You're sure this is the last chapter!? LOL.
Everything is fine with me ... mmm ... I'm a bit ill. And still searching for a job. I wish kids from 12 - 16 are really really nice all the time. I would immediately go back teaching mathmatics.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! Yes, I think that will wrap it up, my friend. You know when it comes to the boys and their favorite 'extra-curricular activity,' I could certainly keep writing chapter after chapter on that topic - ha! But I think this is a good time to end it with them happy. I appreciate everyone who has left me reviews and read this story. (Sigh...) I just wish sometimes that those who prefer to wait until a story is completely finished to read it would leave me their thoughts as well, but I suppose that's human nature....I completely understand not wanting to commit to a story until it's totally finished - that is one of my biggest pet peeves as well.:)
Thanks again for all the support, my friend! And best of luck with the job hunting! Take care and talk to you soon.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: kyouruhi24 (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 06:35 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this fic is finally completed!!! (as you've promised in get it here..!) wahhh.. this is a really wonderful masterpiece!!! justin and his visions! you really have a knack of incorporating the qaf characters in amazing plotlines..! i can still remember the thrill i had reading your TLC and I don't... wow... i was just blown away.. same with this! the ending was perfect for this amazing AU.. may the two of them really grow old happily together... please do continue writing in this fandom! it was really saddening to see other great authors moving on to other shipping.... five years after the show... brian and justin still hold a special place in my heart.. hope your love never wane.... =D
Author's Response: Wow - thank you for those very kind and lovely comments - I am very happy that you enjoy my stories! I do love to write AU plots for them as I'm sure you've noticed.:) It allows me to take them places they never went on the show (along with a lot of sex sprinkled in, of course; after all, it IS a major part of their daily lives - ha!). I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one; it came to me one night and seemed like a perfect storyline for them.:) And I still have a great love for these two guys even after all this time, perhaps because I didn't discover the show until a few years ago after it went off the air. Now I almost have all of B & J's lines down pat from all the times I've watched the DVDs - LOL! (Sigh...) If only there had been more eps or even a follow-up movie, but I guess that's just a pipe dream. I suppose that's why I love all the fanfiction - can't get enough of either writing or reading it!
Thanks again for all the encouragement and wonderful feedback - that makes me very happy! I hope you will continue to enjoy reading my stories. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 09:20 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Great story,I like the way justin stood his groun about going with Brian,nice final for this story,good visions and happiness.
I love all your stories,great job.
Author's Response: Hi, Luisa! Thank you for reading this story and for taking the time to leave me your comments; I greatly appreciate that! I hope you will continue to enjoy some more of my other stories. Thank you again for your thoughtfulness! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: RUDE NATHALIE (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 04:21 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
j'ai adore ton histoire du debut a la fin bravo
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup pour vos commentaires! Je suis très heureux que ça vous a plu. ~Kimberly
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 03:45 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Fabulous ending I hope Justin's vision for the future comes true :) thank you so much
Author's Response: Thank YOU, Chris, for all the support, my friend! I am very grateful for all the feedback and encouragement you continue to give me. I appreciate that so much! *Big* hug to you.:) Kim
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 03:28 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Thanks so much for the "HUG" it means a lot even from someone i really don't know up close and personal. My sister is doing much better on the chemo even if the side affects suck. she only has two more rounds to go and we will see how it has helped. This story ended the way i knew and hoped it would. The man was sick,sick,sick. Happy to see the boys together and comfy. I am excited for next chapters you do on Parent Trap. I really find that story a bit different and fun to read. a big "hug" to you.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! I'm so glad to hear that your sister is doing better! I hope she continues to recover fully and I will continue to keep her and you in my thoughts and prayers. I am looking forward now to "Parent Trap," too, since the real meat of the story is just beginning. I am going to enjoy writing about Brian - and most importantly the girls - scheming together to bring their fathers back together. (Poor Justin - ha!). But - he will put up a valiant fight for a while and I'm going to have fun with that and with putting Brian through some good, old-fashioned angst in the meantime - ha! Thanks again for reading my story and for all your feedback, Kym.:) I'll be thinking about you and your sister.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: LOGAN (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
I HAVE BEEN AWAY ON BUSINESS FOR A WHILE, I SEE YOU HAVE FINISHED THIS STORY. REALLY WAS HAPPY WHEN THE PERP WAS KILLED AS HE SHOULD HAVE BEEN. I AM NOW INSTRUCTED TO READ A STORY CALLED MY HEARTS DESIRE. HAVE BEEN TOLD IT IS A GOOD ONE IN PROGRESS. SO I WILL CHECK IT OUT AS I AM REALLY INTO POLITICAL THINGS. WILL LET YOU KNOW AT A LATER DATE AFTER I HAVE CAUGHT UP.
Author's Response: Hi, Logan! So great to hear from you again! I think I know who might have suggested the other story.:) I do hope you like it! It's actually a sequel to "Wedding Present." Can't remember if you ever read that one, but you don't necessarily have to have read it for the other one to make sense. It does explain how Brian and his father got together, though.:) Thanks for letting me know you'll be checking it out and thanks for the feedback on this story - I really appreciate that! "My Heart's Desire" will be updated next.:) Thanks again. ~Kimberly
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 01:47 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
"It was one in which he and Brian were happy together, deeply in love, and growing old together over the years. "
Beautiful. Perfect ending!
Thank you for the story.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and especially taking the time to comment; I really do appreciate all the support you give me for my stories! I hope you will continue to enjoy them. *Hugs* Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:48 AM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Off today-look what I found. Wonderful ending for a wonderful story. Rather bittersweet tho. Always waiting to see where you take us in your stpories creates the fun. You are so great at this writing gig. Lee is over joyed HD is next. It's really funny if you think about it how we all have our favs. We are so diverse in our loves for your stories. Then again we all come together to enjoy each one on a different plane. Have to go grocery shopping-oh joy-I really hate it. I should get a housekeeper that will shop for me and clean my house. ha ha! LOL
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend - so glad you have a little time to yourself today, but I certainly share your pain abut the grocery store - it's one of those necessary evils that I only force myself to undertake whenever I run out of essentials such as coffee or toilet paper - ha! As always I am so grateful to you, Lee, Brian, and all the other readers you have sent my way - you will never know how much your support of my stories mean to me.:)
If only I could write and make a living out of it! (sigh...). But I DO get a lot of satisfaction and pleasure out of readers such as yourself who appreciate what I do. Thank you again for all the support. I'll try hard to continue to write stories that you, Lee, Brian, and the other readers will hopefuly enjoy. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All
Aww! Sniff, sniff...the story's over! Wonderfully sweet end, though. I enjoyed it tremendously (the entire story, that is, not just the epilogue).
Fantastic job, as always!
Can't wait to get on the road again with Brian, Justin, Finn and Tony. That should be an adventure. I was hoping you'd update the Parent Trap before continuing the new story. Any way you can make that happen? Pretty please with sugar on top?
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: LOL! I'll see what I can do, my friend; but I really DO need to update "My Heart's Desire" first. Perhaps since you gave me such a great inspiration for "Parent Trap," though, I might just have to indulge you before I tackle another chapter of the newer story.:) Thanks again for all the support, Vin. *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Safe in Your Love
* makes happy dance * thanks. Carruthers is dead and Justin is okay. I'm sad to see this wonderful story ending.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! How are you? Hope everything is going well with you.:) There will be a (fairly) short epilogue still to the story before I put it (and the boys - ha!) to bed. Thanks for all the support, my friend.:) *Hugs* Kimberly
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 03:27 PM · On: Safe in Your Love
Wow wow wow just fabulous and brillant Oh I wish I had the words to tell you how exciting this story has been and how I have looked forward to every chapter. I am so glad that Curruthers was eventually shot and Justin's love for Brian gave him strength to fight for his life. I am looking forward sort of to the epilogue good because it will bring closure and bad because it will bring a ending :( lol hugs Chris.
My friend I am so lucky to have found such a wonderful writer who reaches my heart with her stories and it's all for free lol
Author's Response: What lovely comments, Chris; thank you so much, Sweetie!:) I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Yes, I'm always sad when one ends too; this one was one of those stories that came to me one day and I just had to run with it. Some of them are like that - the idea seemed so perfect for the two characters. Thanks again for all the wonderful feedback; comments like yours always keep me so motivated to keep going. I'm sending a *big* hug back to you for all your ongoing support.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Safe in Your Love
OMG! The last two chapters were simply amazing! AMAZING! So much drama, heart-palpitating action and emotion. The 'I love you' scene was squee inducing and just perfect, as was the last line about making new memories. Wonderful!
I loved, loved both chapters and I CAN'T wait for the epilogue! I predict that I'll be refreshing the page every half an hour to see if it's posted.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! I'm so glad you liked them, Vin.:P) I should have the epilogue up today - it's actually rather short compared to my normal epic-length chapters - ha! But I do hope you like it. Thanks for all the support.:) *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Safe in Your Love
Sorry I got so carried away with this update on the story i neglected to tell you about mediation here. Three nurses and one supervisor are staying thank god and the two offenders have gone elsewhere. This was due to the wonderful mediator we all know and love. He says he was not the reason things are better- but we all know the truth. He is a marvel this man. lol
Author's Response: Oh, that's wonderful! Thanks so much for telling me; I'm so happy to hear that! They made the right decision! Tell the "super negotiator" he's awesome! *Hugs* Kimberly
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2012 07:53 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
SUPER L HISTOIRE ATTEND LA SUITE
Author's Response: Je vous remercie! Je travaille là-dessus maintenant.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
You will probably think me daft, but had a horrible day a patient passed away and I just can't seem to get my head around it. Have been depressed and that is not like me. I guess everthing has gotten to me, the mess here and my patient gone. So I needed a pick me up and remembered a story I read a while ago that I really loved so I read it and I feel much better. I just wanted to thank you for Remember Me. It was maddening but so good at the end. I'm glad it was here to help me over this speed bump. Just thought it would be appropriate to mention it. lol
Author's Response: Hello, lindc.:) You are so special, my friend, to not only care so much about losing a patient but to seek comfort by rereading one of my stories and then taking the time to let me know. I'm so sorry about your patient; I know how deeply you feel those things, so I know that can't be easy for you. The fact that you DO feel it so deeply, though, is what makes you so good at your job. I do hope the hospital realizes what a wonderful employee they have in you.:)
Between that and the other worries there, it sounds like you've had a really rough several days. Please know that I'm thinking about you, Lee, Brian, and the rest of your co-workers and I'm hoping things start getting better soon for all of you. I'm sending a *Big* Hug your way.:) Thank you again.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: LOGAN (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 09:26 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
HELLO THERE I HAVE BEEN TOLD TO TUNE IN TO YOU AND READ INCREDIBLE STORIES. I AM STARTING WITH THIS ONE AS I LIKE DETECTIVE STORIES THAT ARE DIFFERENT. THIS ONE SEEMS TO FILL THE BILL. I MUST SAY YOUR STYLE OF WRITING IS WONDERFULLY GRAPHIC FROM ALL ASPECTS.. I MUST SAY PEOPLE WHO KILL CHILDREN ARE THE SCUM OF THE EARTH AND NEED TO BE DEALT WITH SEVERLEY. THE DESCRIPTION IN THIS STORY IS VERY AWESOME. I WILL SAY YOU LIVE UP TO MY FRIENDS DESCRIPTION OF YOUR WRITING STYLE, THE NEXT COUPLE CHAPTERS SHOULD BE VERY INTERESTING TO SEE HOW YOU WIND THIS UP. NICE TO BE HERE READING. I HAVE OTHERS ON MY LIST TO READ.
Author's Response: Hi, Logan! Welcome to the site! I'm so thrilled that you have chosen to check out my story - thank you!:) I think I know which friends you are referring to and they have been wonderful supporters of my stories. I have never had the opportunity or privilege to meet any of them personally, but I really hope I can some day.
As far as Carruthers goes, do not fear; he will not get away with what he has done. I am writing the next pivotal chapter right now - I'm probably about halfway done with it, but I'm not sure if I can wrap it up in this chapter or not. I tend to be on the wordy side - ha!
Thank you again for reading one of my stories and for your thoughtfulness in leaving your feedback; that means the world to me! I hope you will continue to enjoy this story and perhaps check out some of my others.:) *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 08:46 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
Sorry, I have been remiss in reading and reviewing. Things in my life have been rather stressful for a couplke months. My sister has been very ill and has had to go to for chemo. She has stablized for the moment. I had to take some of my built up time off. It is over so now I have to go back to work. My life as it was has been put on hold. Anyway-this story is very angst ridden. I caught up and I must say it is so good. Justin and his visions will prevail and help his finders locate him. Brian must remember what he told him down to the details. Good chapter can't wait for the next one. ta
Author's Response: Hi, Kym.:) I've missed you, but I certainly understand why you have not been able to read any stories lately. Wow, I am SO sorry to hear about your sister, my friend.:) I will definitely keep you and her in my prayers and hope for a full recovery from her illness.:) I can't imagine what you and your sister are going through, but I'm sure your support has meant the world to her.
I am humbled and honored that you would take the time to get caught up on my story; thank you for that, Sweetie.:) I hope somehow that perhaps my stories might at least give you a temporary diversion from your troubles. Thank you for taking the time to read and review, especially in light of everything presently going on in your life. I will be thinking about you and your sister and hoping for the very best for both of you. I'm sending you a *BIG* hug of support.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 06:26 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
Iguess it's my turn here. This is going to be scary-dark-deserted amusement park-living up to Justin's vision. I am hoping it will end well -(course it will-knowing you) after all the creepiness. I love this part and the up-coming chapter creepiness and all. I suppose you heard all about our problems here. People get too upset and manic too soon. Things will turn out ok. We are not going to put our patients in danger of any kind. People need to calm down and proceed in a logical way for good results.. The Devil is running super well and is totally RAD. It still doesn't get the gas mileage I expect, but it's not really broken in yet. So I have to put some more miles on it. Am thinking I might take a trip in May to Penn. to see some of my friends. Hopefully all will be well here. lOVE 2 U.
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie - Yes, I have heard the unfortunate details from both Brian and lindc; how awful for not only all of you but the patients as well! But I know you and your friends will take very good care of them. They are lucky that you all care so much. I'm sure something can be worked out; surely they wouldn't want to lose all of you! That would be a real shame!
As far as the story goes, yes, I can't write the boys any other way but happy in the end. BUT that being said - I ALSO love a lot of angst, and boy, there will be plenty of that in the next chapter as Brian and Carl race to the amusement park to try and save Justin before it is too late! There will be some near misses for sure, though, until it's all said and done.:) I've got about 3,700 words of it written, so I'm moving along fairly nicely.:) I really want to try and either wrap it up in the next chapter or at least get to where I could do an epilogue in the one after that (that is looking more likely at the moment).
Glad "the Devil" is doing well - LOL! You deserve a sweet little ride after that awful ordeal you went through.:) I do hope you get to take a little break in May to visit your friends; that sounds like a great idea! PA in May should be very nice; I love spring! It's amazing how little snow we got so far this winter! BTW - you all don't work anywhere near Cleveland, do you? If so, I would LOVE to meet you when I go to see Randy in "Red" on 3/29! I have a feeling that's too far away for you all, though. I would really enjoy meeting all of you in person one day! Maybe this summer if Randy goes back to the Berkshires we can plan on doing that; I noticed "A Chorus Line" is up first there, but I don't really see Randy as the 'high-stepping' type, so I don't think he'll be featured in that one - ha!
I'll be updating this rather dark tale very shortly. I can't thank you enough for all the support! Let me know what happens and I'll be thinking the best for all of you. *Big Hug* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 01:31 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
What a heart palpitating chapter, my friend. I know you will fix this... but, in the meantime I feel like I am walking on eggshells here. An incredible chapter as always. Riveting and emotional. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully a rescue and a reunion!
Thanks for the update, my dear. As you know I love some drama, I am quite obviously loving this story. ~Hugsss~
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! So glad you like this one. If you think THIS is tense, things will escalate even more in the next chapter, at least for the first part. As you well know, though, I won't keep the boys apart for too long. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, my friend.:) I'll be waiting for updates on your own wonderful stories as well. And congrats on the terrific response to "Chosen!" (Great title, BTW - very appropriate.:) *Hugs*
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 01:05 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
This chapter was reminiscent of Stephen King horror stories. I always did think carnivals and amusement parks were scary. Chilling!
Now as far as stopping where you did, it amazes me that you feel you wrote too much and could not believe it ended so soon. I know most people enjoy canon stories but it is the AU stories like this one that are so entertaining. I love what you can do with the characters.
Hmm, okay. You posted what you had. I appreciate not making us readers wait any longer, but like I said, don't hesitate to publish a long one if necessary. LOL
Author's Response: Hi, Dear - thank you for the lovely comments; they mean a lot to me! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story.:) I am working on the next part right now; I really am hoping to wrap this up shortly so I can concentrate on the other stories (and I think I see a short story coming up for Easter featuring a certain boy and his faithful dog - ha!). Thank you again for reading and especially leaving feedback - I'm glad you like the longer chapters, because that appears to be the only way I can write - LOL! I'll get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
Wow another ciff hanger. This story is keeping me sane. It's really not a good place to work right now. We have to work insane shifts to compensate for others choosing not to be here for whatever reason. At least i have Lee back with me so have some saneness in this madness. Keep your fingers crossed for us as we are about at the end of our proverbial ropes. Off to try and get some much needed sleep. lol
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Brian filled me in a little bit after you told me what ws going on before; how horrible for you and your co-workers! I do hope that things improve there soon , or they stand to lose a lot of very good people. Surely they won't let it come to that; that would be extremely foolish! I will definitely be thinking about all of you and hoping things turn around very soon.:) I'm glad I can at least take your mind away from it for a while with my stories; I'm working on the next part of this right now.
Hope you get some much-deserved rest and things look better very soon. I'm sending you, Brian, and Lee my best wishes and a big hug.:) ~Kim
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 11:00 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
Great chapter, as always!! I loved it!!! It made me feel as if I was watching the best part of one of my favorite police movies!!!! But now I just have to know what happens next!!! Keep up the great work!! I hope to read you soon!!! Kisses!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Mafita! Thank you for reading and for your kind words.:) I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. I'm working on the next part right now, and it will be pretty tense for a while until Brian and Justin are reunited eventually, but I promise not to let anything terrible happen to our boys in the meantime.:) I will work hard on wrapping this up very soon. Thanks again for letting me know you're enjoying the story. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 07:42 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
SO GLAD THIS IS HERE. I'M SURE THEY WILL GET THERE IN TIME, AS YOU WON'T LET ANYTHING DRASTIC HAPPEN TO EITHER OF THEM. I CAN SEE A SHOOT OUT COMING AND CARRUTHERS WINDING UP DEAD, AY LEAST I HOPE THAT IS FORTHCOMING. GOOD CHAPTER, BUILDING UP TO THR FINAL OUTCOME. AM EXHAUSTED BUT THOUGHT I'D READ TO CALM DOWN A BIT. THE HOSPITAL AT LEAST MY PART OF IT IS VERY CHAOTIC RIGHT NOW. WE HAVE HAD SEVERAL ISSUES WITH A FEW STAFF MEMBERS RESULTING IN MANY PROBLEMS. I HAVE HAD TO GO THERE HOBBLING AS I AM TO TRY TO CALM THE DISSENTING PARTIES DOWN. SOME HEADWAY HAS BEEN MADE, BUT IT'S NOT OVER YET. NEXT WEEK WILL PROBABLY BE WHEN IT ALL COMES TO A HEAD AND IF THINGS AREN'T IN THE HOSPITALS BEST INTEREST SOME HEADS ARE GOING TO ROLL AND SOME PEOPLE WILL BE LET GO. SORRY TO RAMBLE BUT I'M BEAT. THANKS FOR LISTENING.
Author's Response: Hi, Brian, my friend - don't apologize! I've certainly done my share of rambling and venting before to you, lindc, and Lee! So sorry to hear about both your injury as well as all the problems at the hospital. As much as I hate to say it, I hope they let the rebel rousers go before any of you - it would be a real waste to see so many wonderful employees leave because the administrators are not responding to all the complaints. Hopefully that is the way that it is heading if they must let some people go.
BTW - I think you should be very flattered that the hospital thought enough of your team to get you involved with the moderating. I hope it has done some good.:) I'm sure you have done your best. Take care, get some rest and I'll hope for both a speedy recovery for you as well as a quick resolution of all the problems. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 05:04 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
Aggrrr you did it again, you're evil, you promissed ... * sigh *
I read it so fast, to know if Justin is okay, that I didn't read all sentences. Going back to the beginning and read it at a slower pace. Great chapter as always.
* hugs *
Author's Response: LOL! I know, I know - something came over me and I couldn't get where I needed to go fast enough - ha! I'm still working on the rest of it and hope to have at least the next chapter up in the next few days. I have to stop temporarily to work on medical coding for my teaching job (boring, but a necessary evil - yuck!). I promise to write another part very soon. I'll take good care of Justin in the meantime (well, at least as well as I can considering he's being held hostage by a serial killer - LOL!). Thanks for the comments, my friend.:) *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Gone In the Blink of an Eye
A real nail biter. Hoping for more soon.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Glad you liked it - I'm working on the next part right now, but decided to break it up because (as usual!) it was becoming very long again (I know - no real surprise there, is it? Ha!). I should have the next part up very soon. Thanks for reading and for your comments.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Sab123 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 07:14 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Great update. Thank you. Very clever construction of how Carruthers got free from the hospital and police surveillance. And I fear, now Justins worst dreams will come true.
Author's Response: Hi, Sabine, my friend! Thanks for reading and for your comments; I really appreciate that. I tried to come up with a plausible way that Carruthers could break free from his confinement, so hopefully I succeeded in that.:) Thank you for all your support of my stories! I will get this updated again very soon, probably as soon as I finish updating the next part of "Parent Trap." *Hugs*
~Kimberly
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 03:33 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
WHY!!??? Why would you leave it like this..... I'm going to go crazy, here!!! I need to know what happens next! That said.... Great chapter, as always!!! Hope to be reading more soon!!!! Kisses!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Mafita! I know, I know - two cliffhangers in a row on two different stories! But after 13,000 words it really was the best place to stop (even if it was a terrible place to do it!). I'm updating the next part of "Parent Trap" now for those anxious for an update on that one, and then I promise to return to this one temporarily to continue it. And I promise to keep Justin from harm, but I think he WILL be scared out of his wits before it's all said and done.:) Thanks again for reading and especially taking the time to comment! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 03:28 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
I've been waiting for this story. Happy to see an update. Woah, what a place to stop! This story is so intense and well written. Thanks for the great update. -Benny
Author's Response: Hi, Benny, my friend! Always so great to hear your thoughts.:) Thank you for reading and taking the time to review; I really appreciate all your support.:) I'm delighted you liked the latest update. Awful place to leave it, I know! I'm working on the next update to "Parent Trap," and then I'll come back to this one. I think it'll probably be two, maybe three more chapters before this one is finished. Thanks again for all the encouragement; I am very grateful.:) *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:54 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
AGGRRR You did warn me and I really should hunt you down! Hmm wait ... * is thinking * ... if I'm hunting you down then I'm in Ohio * big smile * woww I'm super smart * makes happydance * ... I'm coming with you to "RED" ...... * sigh * I wish.
But you will write the next chapter as soon as you're at home !!! How can you do that to us. Love it as always.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Ha! I was wondering when you would show up - LOL! And I figured you wouldn't be happy with the cliffhanger.:) I almost hate to admit this, but I am now officially obsessed now because I just purchased tickets to go see Randy in Cleveland in "Red," too! I'll be going to see him on 3/29. So I will see him in both cities...ack! I'm officially crazy now! But I love it! Two chances to get a photo - yay! BTW - I wish you were going with me, too! I'm still hoping we can at least meet when I come to Germany.:)
I promise to go back and update this one as soon as I finish the next update to "Parent Trap." Hope that helps a little. I promise not to hurt Justin, just scare him to death possibly! Thanks as always, dear friend, for your support. I always love to hear your comments, even I AM driving you crazy - ha! *Hugs* Sweetie.:)
Kimberly
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:21 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Noooo I can't believe you stop here. Great chapter as usual. Poor Justin.
Brian will go crazy for sure. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hi, Mariana! (Sigh...) Yes, I agree - horrid place to have to stop it! I will probably go update "Parent Trap" first,though, because of THAT cliffhanger (I AM evil, aren't I? LOL!) and then come back to this one due to where I had to leave it. So hopefully it won't be too long. Suffice it to say that Brian will be worried out of his mind for both Justin as well as his son, who remains the only surviving victim of Carruthers' actions. Thanks again for all the support, Mariana; I really appreciate it. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 10:25 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Noooooooooo! A cliffhanger! Sigh, grumble, grumble...
Great update, though. Can't wait to see how it all gets resolved. I hope Brian will get there in time to save Justin and do something entirely permanent to Carruthers.
On another note, I can't wait to meet you in NJ next Saturday and see Randy in Red, of course. It's going to be so much fun!
*hugs*
Vin
Author's Response: Hi, Vin! Can't wait, either! I'll give you a call once I get there and hopefully we can meet at the hotel lobby and walk over to the theater in between shows to hunt down golden boy - ha! I have two Rothko books I want to (hopefully) hand to him - I'm not above bribery to get a photo - LOL!
Thanks for reading this nervewracking story! I think Brian will be furious as well as worried sick...Not only will he need to worry about Justin but also Gus, too, as the only living victim. Don't worry, though - I'm just borrowing Justin to scare him half to death, not to do him in - LOL!
I see probably two more chapters to this one - I'll probably break from rotation after I update "Parent Trap" so I can write another chapter a little quicker due to the awful cliffhanger.:) Thanks again for the comments, my friend - looking forward to seeing you next Saturday! Hope the week goes by super fast!! *Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 08:34 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
noooooooooooooooo.u cant leave it there.brian is going to be pissed.next chpter sooooooooooon please
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I know - TERRIBLE place to leave it! And yes, you're right - Brian is going to be both furious as well as scared to death, not only for Justin but also his son who would be a target as well. I will probably update this one after I take care of the next part of "Parent Trap," so hopefully it will be very soon. Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate that.:) *Hugs*
~Kimberly
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 07:49 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Hi, Sorcha! Thanks, BTW, for not pelting me with 'virtual' rotten tomatoes over where I left off iin this chapter - ha! I know - terrible spot to leave it in! I may try to update this again soon rather than leaving it to my normal story rotation if that helps.:P) Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that, my friend.:) *Hugs*
~Kimberly
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 02:14 PM · On: The Different Shades of Love
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I knew it not again poor Justin and nobody's going to realise for awhile either dam dam dam. Another brilliant chapter I love it so much hugs Chris
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! I know....I think everyone probably saw that coming eventually in lieu of Carruthers simply slinking off into the night, but it's still frightening. You can bet that Brian is going to be terrified for his lover now as well as furious that the two so-called 'security guards' let him down. I hated to break it up there in this chapter, but it was really the best place for it (aarghhh!)! I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can; I may break rotation after I update "Parent Trap"next so I can go back to this one sooner if enough readers want me to. Thanks as always for all the support, dear friend.:) *Big Hug* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 09:10 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
just a little side note. wondering if you heard the audio with bob ari and randy talking about Red? it was 20 minutes long and quite interesting. it was made while they were in rehearsal. i wish it had been on video so we could have seen it. there are also fabulous pictures of gale with a shorter haircut at the grove. this play red you are going to just love. i will be waiting for your review and hopefully some video tape. still wish i could go-but to no avail getting loose from here for quite sometime. lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the info! We must read the same things on the web! Yes, I did see it along with Gale's short 'do - I think both guys look gorgeous! (Sigh...) if only they were WERE an item, but only in my fertile imagination...! I've heard nothing but good things about "Red" so far, so can't wait! I'm not sure if I'll be able to get any video tape with the camcorder, though; that was a definite fluke when I got it at "Tommy" due to the after-party where he showed up outside. But I'm going to do my best to hopefully get some photos of him somehow. I'll be sure to tell everyone about it when I get back, trust me! Thanks for telling me about the links! Randy still looks amazing - they BOTH do!! *Hugs* for thinking about me; wish you could go, too. We'll have to meet at one of his plays one day - maybe next summer in the Berkshires after the convention? Hope he goes back there again!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 08:42 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
I was done with my reviewing quota today when I saw your update. There was no way I was not going to read it. And by the way, you don't ever have to break the chapter up. This one ended way too soon for me.
The way you wrote Carruther's escape was very clever. That had to have taken some work. I can't believe the cliffhanger you got going on here.
PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend! I'm very flattered that you read my latest chapter, despite wanting to stop for the day.:) And I'm delighted that you're a fan of nice long installments, because as you know it's hard for me to know when to quit - ha! Speaking of which, I HATED to end it here, but it really was the best place (ducking under desk now...). Don't worry, I won't hurt one blond hair on his head, but I will scare him half to death first...! Thanks for the compliment about Carruther's escape; it was hard to figure out how to manage it, but I hope it came across at least as plausible...I see a big climax coming up in the next chapter and then probably an epilogue (unless I get long-winded again, which happens a lot with me - LOL!)
Thanks again for all the support you've given me; that is very motivating to me as a writer and means so much. *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2012 07:45 AM · On: The Different Shades of Love
I knew it!! escape and get Justin. cliffy necessary tho. this was a great chapter. will read tonite. BB will be over joyed. he has been waiting for the "man story". ha ha! went to eat with peeps got another ride in the Devil. it now says Devil in the back window with small flame decal-so i guess you got your wish in a small way. i'm sure Lee will tell you that fact if he reviews. he has been off for his 36. he'll be back tomorrow. his rotation is a little different as they have him helping another team because of sickness. lol
Author's Response: Ha! Had to laugh over the decal; I knew he would do that! LOL! Tell him I still think he's a cute little devil himself, though!
I hope I don't have a lot of readers pelting me with virtual tomatoes due to the cliffhanger, BTW, but I was up to 13,000 words and it really was the best place to stop it for now...I am now going over to upate "Parent Trap." I know a lot of readers were really wanting that one continued, so I will work hard on getting the next chapter up as soon as I can for them. I HAVE started on it, but not gotten too far just yet...
Going to see Randy next Saturday; I'm keeping my fingers crossed I can get another photo. I'm taking him a book of Rothko prints to try and hopefully persuade him to come out into the lobby afterward - ha! Wish me luck! Will be sure to post a commentary on my Live Journal account either way afteer I get back.:) Thanks as always, lindc, for all the support! Tell Brian and the 'cute little devil' I said hello the next time you see him - ha! Take care. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:13 PM · On: Reconciling Priorities
I finally found the note on the homepage that tells me how to fix the fact that I can't leave reviews... We'll see if it works. I still love this story, and can't wait for more!! I'm totally enthralled, and sitting on pins and needles waiting to see how Carruthers is going to get out and cause more havoc. Will it be escape? or collusion with his skeezy lawyer? or maybe a technicality? Not much legal about Brian's entry into his house, so a technicality is certainly possible... Waiting anxiously to find out!
Author's Response: Hi, Kate - your comments came through just fine - thanks! I'm so delighted that you're enjoying this story.:) Yes, Carruthers is far from finished yet. Don't want to give away TOO much of the plot so I don't spoil it, but his assistance may come from someone you wouldn't consider. You've got a good point about the technicality - I hadn't thought about that.:) But I have a feeling it won't even get to that point.....Anyway, I know it's taking me a while to update, but this is far from abandoned, I assure you. I WILL get it finished and update it regularly just as soon as I can - promise.:) Thank you for your kindness in going the extra mile to leave feedback - I am very appreciative.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 06:36 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
I'm really glad I'm finally getting the chance to catch up on your amazing fiction. It's taking me awhile but I'm making my way through. :) Once I picked back up on this story, I found it impossible to stop. You've done a tremendous job portaying the genuine care these two have for each other in this. Keeping their relationship on the down low seems a good precaution to take. Excited to be following this story again. Thank you for giving us your words. *HUGS*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Mandi; you're very kind, my friend.:) I appreciate you wanting to get caught back up on my stories - I am so honored by that! This has been one of my favorite stories to write; it's been a progression for the boys from suspicion and wariness to warmth and eventually love. But the danger is not passed yet by any means as you might have surmised. I do hope you will continue to follow this story, and as always I look forward to any of yours in the future! I still want the boys to go the circus, BTW - ha! But I remember what you said about so many story ideas and so little time! I know EXACTLY how that feels! But that means we can hopefully see many more stories from you for a long time to come! Thanks again for all the wonderful feedback, Mandi.:) Big *hug* back to you, too.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 01:59 PM · On: Reconciling Priorities
Glad to see an update :o) It's great to see how you are paying attention to details and thus having the story move along in a very believable manner. I have a feeling this story is no where near the end... I just hope everything works out for our boys. Can Brian keep his cool in durring interrogation? Who is this third person police view and what is his deal? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey, Yvee! You're so kind to leave feedback for me on my stories - thank you! And I appreciate the comment about the pace; sometimes I feel like I write TOO much (I imagine others may feel the same way - ha!). But it's the only way I can do them normally. And yes, this one has a ways to go yet. Carruthers isn't going to just slink away passively into his jail cell, we all know that...And so far Justin's visions have been coming horribly true...
I will be getting this one updated very soon - I'm currently working on the update to "Parent Trap," which should be up shortly. Thank you SO much for taking the time to comment - that is very motivating to me. Hope you have a wonderful new year, BTW!~Kimberly
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
Fantastic Update! I can't wait to see what happens next. I Hope you have a wonderful New Year Kimberly! :)
Author's Response: Hi, Benny, my friend! I was hoping it was you! I'm so delighted to see you still reading this! Thank you for all your support this past year.:) I hope you continue to enjoy my stories for a long time to come, and I hope that I can continue to keep you entertained. Thank you again. I am very appreciative.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
That was an excellent update, though I have to say the possibilities are endless after this chapter. I am still curious what will happen with Carruthers, in my mind I picture him escaping captivitity in a transfer or something, kidnapping another child and then going after Justin, and then the entire fucking PPD going after him and finally being killed before harming the child and Justin... But hey that's just me, I guess I really do not want him standing trail.
I guess I have to wait and see how the interrogation is gonna go and we take it from there.
Until next time sweetie *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Hi, Marla! Thanks for reading and for the feedback, Sweetie! You've got a whole episode of "CSI" mapped out for me - ha! I'm very flattered, actually - thanks! I do have in mind what I'm going to do with Carruthers, but I don't want to spoil it for anyone.:) I hope you like my scenario, though.:) I will do my best to get this updated sooner than last time. I plan on finishing both the Elvis story and the Christmas one very soon, so that should definitely help. Thanks again for all the support, my friend, and hope you have a great New Year!~Kimberly
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 11:25 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
Boy this was a good one. Have been ordering some stuff on line so thought I'd see what was over here. Here you are again. You are really busy while you are on vacation, very prolific. What is to become of Carruthers? We are all wondering what road this will take. Will be interesting to see. Am going to the hospital tomorrow for I hope final check-up. Oh good news!! Went car shopping this afternoon. As you know my car was destroyed so now I have to get another. I would like to buy a tank, feel it would be safer. I am looking to get somehing very solid and heavy. Am a bit put off driving again but I need to get to work as I'm a few miles away. I'll let you know what I get later. love 2 u
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I was just getting ready to ask that! So I suppose a Mini Cooper or a Smart Car is out, huh? After your accident I can't say that I blame you! I'm always so delighted to hear from you, Sweetie, and to hear how much progress you're making. I'm sure once you get your car and get back in the swing of things, you won't feel as much trepidation about driving.
As for Carruthers, yes, it will remain to be seen how "off his rocker" he is; he exhibits traits of both insanity as well as calculating intellect. The plot will definitely be ramping up more in the coming chapters as it heads toward an eventual conclusion of the story.:)
And as for being prolific, I've had this past week off, so I have had a little more time to work on my stories.:) But I need to get back to work on my school lesson plans in preparation for returning next week, so it will unfortunately have to slow down somewhat. I will be working, though, on the Christmas story, because I really need to wrap that one up soon. Thanks again for all the support, Lee, it means to much to me! Good luck at your doctor's appt! *Hugs* to you.:) Kimberly
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
What a non-picnic that was. My goodness!!! I'm glad I was alone reading this. Your descriptions in the sex scenes are very vivid, makes one think they are actually there. You are very talented I must say. Your imagination knows no bounds. Impressive! I'm really waiting to see if a trial will really happen. I certainly hope Gus won't be put on the stand. They can talk to him in an ante-room and record it. He doesn't have to go in the court room at all. I guess we will see where you take us on this journey.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! Thank you for those lovely compliments, my friend! If only I could be there, too, to 'particpate;' I'd be glad to fill in for either one of them in a heartbeat - ha! The action will definitely be starting back up in the next chapter as Carruthers is featured more now.:) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can. Thank you again for all the support - I am very grateful.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 10:32 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
wow is that a picnic or what. they are so cute together. i still think carruthers will escape before trial be tracked down again and shot. we think that is a good ending for that bastard. everyone liked this chapter so sexy!! faces were fun to watch. you should be a bug on the wall during these readings. i think it would do your heart good to see how rapt they are. back to the grind nice break finding this. bb said hey! lol
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - you know you are all spoiling me with the compliments! But it makes me so happy, especially when it seems the reviews are slow in coming.:( Thank you for the encouragment! I would love to see you reading the sex scenes to them especially; I give you credit for being able to do that - I'm not sure I could do without my face turning red - ha! You're right - I would LOVE to see them as you're reading each chapter.:)
I DO see this ending somewhere sooner rather than later - honest! But there will be some more twists and turns to it before that happens. At least our little blond psychic, though, has Brian watching out for him now.:) Thanks again for being such a great supporter of my work - that means so much to me.:) BTW - Just ordered a "QAF" shirt today to wear at the convention in June - can't wait! Take care and tell Brian and all the others that I said hello.:)
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
*Does a happy dance* I was just thinking of this story only yesterday, reminding myself to look for updates soon... and, so glad I did today after an extremely hectic day. This was wonderful - start to finish. Of course the smut was amazingly hot - you write it & them so well. It's not just sex. It far supersedes that. The connection between them is just so vibrantly displayed & felt. Of course, I know the angst is on the horizon... but this was a very wonderful interlude, and one I think they both needed.
Thanks for the update, my friend. Wonderful, as always! *Hugsss*
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! It's so nice of you to read and especially comment, knowing how busy your own schedule is! I thank you very much for that, as well as all the kind compliments.:) I think my sex scenes with them are normally more of a 'sweeter' variety than yours; but you are hands down the consummate 'predatory Brian' sex machine writer when it comes to our beautiful blond boy, and I LOVE it - LOL! Maybe we should co-write one - you write the rough scenes, I write the sweet ones - LOL! Like Ian, er ETHAN said - you peddle, I fiddle - ha!
Thank you again for the very kind, thoughtful comments about my writing style - you know that means the world to me! I will be eagerly looking forward to your updates as well; Happy New Year, BTW! *Hugs*
Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
“How much willpower do you think I fucking have?”
I loved the forest rump!
Looks like tough times ahead with a cop working overtime guarding Carruthers.
Brian still makes an excellent cop. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading and for the comments! Forest 'rump!' - Love that title for their little 'romp!" The next chapter will be focusing more on their pursuit of justice for the victims and their hope to question the suspect further. But with his attorney there and questions as to his competence, it will be interesting to see how much progress they make. There will be some twists and turns before this is all wrapped up. I hope you will continue to enjoy it! Thank you for your ongoing support of my stories! That is what keeps me going.:) *Hug* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 03:17 AM · On: Reconciling Priorities
Wonderful and HOT ... it's hard to read that HOT part with your children around * giggles * having one eye at them "are they coming to the computer!" because Belana can read english.
And I'm still thinking about coming to Cologne ... I know Cologne is close to the border. But first the divorce. Haha and then ... will see.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! Thanks for reading! This chapter is kind of a transitional one, I suppose, for the next chapter. I expect the action to ramp up again then because Carl and Brian will be visiting Carruthers in hopes of questioning him. Will he cooperate, though? And is he really insane/mentally incompetent or crazy like a fox? Hmm...We'll have to see....
BTW - I'm delighted you're still thinking about coming to the convention. You deserve a break! I really hope you get to come, or at the very least have a chance to come and visit with me afterward. I'll be there for a a few days after it's over.:) Let me know! I'll keep my fingers crossed..*hugs*~Kimberly
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2011 11:17 PM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Hello Kimberly! I must admit I'm sorry for not reviewing every chapter but I just haven't had the time. This is in fact the only story I am currently reading. It's no secret that you are a talented author and this story is definitely more proof of that talent. Can't wait to read what happens next! -Benny
Author's Response: Hi, Benny! Always a delight to hear from you! I am so honored that out of all the stories that you could be reading here that you chose to follow this one. I am very flattered by that, my friend.:) Thank you for letting me know. As you can probably tell, the drama's about to ramp up again in the near future, but of course eventually everything will come out right. Thanks so much for letting me know you'll still be following it. That means so much to me.:)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 08:05 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
OK i get it everyone is entitled to have legal representation, but there are cases [always IMHO] that oh I dont know throw them where the sun does not shine and throw away the fucking key.
On a happier note, our Justin is a natural huh? I loved the sex scene in the shower [ah the showers! always a must with this couple] as for Daphne yeah its about time to tone down.
Kim sweetie I can wait for the next update. Until next time then *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Hi, Hon - thanks for catching up on this story and for the support!:) I suppose it IS hard to engender sympathy for Carruthers, despite him losing his son, although I'm leaning toward the guy being more insane than just plain evil. I'll have to mull that over.:) The boys will have a little more 'happy time' before the drama sets back in. Thanks so much for your support of my stories, Marla! I appreciate that so much.:) Have a great Thanksgiving, my friend!:)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
I have always wonder why is it that marry-go-rounds are so fucking scary when they are in abandoned or deserted places? Hmmmmmm? Anyway, I really enjoyed the boys together and lest the vision of Justin this was a HOT HOT chapter.
As for Daphne, I love that girl I really do, but please someone has to tell her that she is Justin's friend and not his guardian and/or savior for fucks sake.
I will keep on reading now sweetie *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Hi, Marla! Thanks for your comments, dear.:) Yes, I think it's time for Daphne to tone it down some, too. I agree - merry-go-rounds always seem sort of grotesque and macabre for some reason. Glad you enjoyed the boys together; I plan on them having some more sweet moments before the drama comes back soon. Thanks so much for reading my stories, Marla - I am very grateful for your continuing support. Reviews are pretty much what drives me to keep writing, so I thank you immensely for that.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2011 02:16 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
You write excellent sex scenes. LOL
Daphne was a wonderful friend in this chapter. She knew just when to voice her concern and when to bow out.
That vision of Justin was even scarier once he drew it. I'm happy Brian is taking it seriously.
I can understand why Justin is visibly shaken. Carruthers is menacing even strapped to a hospital bed. He seems crazy to me, and dangerous.
This was one of the best chapters. Carruthers is starting to remind me of Silence of the Lambs.
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2011 11:38 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Just getting caught up on this story. Have been away for a few days. Was told phk was updated so had to read new installment. Poor Justin--will these visions ever cease. Don't like the sound of this one. I know it will be coming true. This man needs to be hung up by you know what and left there as they would have done in the 1800'S. Evil aren't I?? This crime, in my estimation is the worst one bar none. Good writing bringing ever thing together is your forte.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts and for reading. Not to fear - Carruthers will have justice cast upon him before it's all over with. I will give the boys one nice afternoon together, though, before the drama starts up anew. Yeah, sometimes the old way of justice does have a certain appeal, doesn't it? Thanks again for being such a faithful reviewer - I really appreciate that! Hope you have a great Thanksgiving.:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 10:54 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Justin drawing his nightmare creeped me out! The poor boy. Glad he's got Brian around to "distract" him! And make him feel better.
I don't know if Carruthers really is a crackpot or a really good actor. But he gives me the creeps!
This was a great chapter, darling!!
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie - thanks so much for reading and commenting; you're so faithful about that and I really appreciate your support.:) This certainly is a dark tale, isn't it? I think that's why I like offsetting it with the 'Tales of Tricky' - ha! There will certainly be some more drama coming up soon for both guys. And honestly - I'm not sure yet which way I'm going to turn with Carruthers yet - whether he really is insane or just evil or both.
Thanks for taking the time to review, Megan Rose; that always makes me happy and keeps me motivated to write.:) Hope you have a great Thanksgiving, BTW.:P) I will get this updated soon.:)
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2011 04:04 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
This chapter is the bomb! I really like it a lot.I feel Carruthers will escape and somehow make Justin's vision come true. I guess you will take us down that road soon. Just got back from shopping. I really missed that part of my life as I am a shopping freak. I don't get as tired as I used to so I can shop longer. Lindc is taking all of us and our family members that are available out to a great restaurant for Thanksgiving dinner. She is such a great friend to us and we love her bunches. I hope you have a great Thanksgiving with your family too. love 2 u.
Author's Response: Hi, my dear.:) You went out shopping? By yourself! That's great! You are making such wonderful progress; I'm so happy for you.:) It's a shame Emmett isn't a real person - I think you two would love to go shopping together - LOL!
Yes, lindc sounds like a really wonderful person as you ALL do. If I can ask, next time tell me what area of the US you are in again - I think she said it was the northeast? I have forgotten. One day I would love to stop by the hospital and meet all of you. That would be so great! Maybe I'll even write a special story just for all of you when I come.:) I'm sure you are anxiously waiting for the day you will return there as are all of your friends and co-workers. So glad to hear how well you're doing, Lee, and as always I am thankful for all the reviews and support you've given me - thank you, my friend. I hope you also have a great Thanksgiving. *Hugs* back to you.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: ADAM (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:32 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
JUST GOT OFF WORK AND AM CRUISING THE SITE. MY GOD WOMAN HOW YOU WRITE THESE SEX SCENES. SURE YOU ARE NOT A GAY MAN IN DISGUISE. THIS STORY IS VERY INTERESTING AND DIFFERENT IN MANY WAYS FROM OTHER THINGS I HAVE READ. SOME WRITERS I HAVE READ COULD TAKE A LESSON FROM HOW YOU BUILD YOUR STORY PARAGRAPH TO PARAGRAPH NEVER BREAKING FROM YOUR STORY LINE. I REALLY ENJOY YOUR SKILL. IT WILL BE INTERESTING TO SEE HOW THE PERP GETS AWAY. I HOPE MORE WILL BE FORTHCOMING SOON.
Author's Response: Hi, Adam - I really appreciate your thoughtful comments about my writing - thank you so much for that! That means a lot to me, because I spend hours writing these chapters and I try, at least, to balance detail and the plot without weighing it down too badly. Hopefully I achieve that in most cases.:) Maybe I was a gay man in a previous life (?) - LOL! Thanks for the compliment at any rate.:)
Yes, There is definitely more danger coming - of course, I think everyone realizes that by now.:) But the boys will come out victorious eventually - it's the only way I know how to write them.:) Thanks again for the comments, Adam - hope you'll continue to enjoy a lot more of my stories to come. I'll be starting a new one after I finish with Tricky for Christmas - I just can't let the holiday go by without writing about them.:) Thanks again - have a great Thanksgiving, BTW!:)
Reviewer: lindc &the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:24 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
AMAZING!! This chapter is so good. Description is magnificent. I have to read paragraphs over and over they are so good. We alll loved this chapter so much. Have two new listeners now. They are here for a three month learning seminar which our BB is teaching. He really is such a smart guy. We all are waiting for Carruthers to make his move as we know he will for Justin's vision to be true. lol
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! So glad to hear from you and that you liked this chapter! Yes, I suppose everyone probably knows where I'm heading on this story, but we all know how much I love angst for the boys before they finally get their happy ending.:) Two more recuits? Okay, you'll have to send me your address so I can mail you a bonus check - LOL! Honestly, I appreciate your faith in me so much and how you've recommended my stories to others; it's been kind of quiet review-wise on my stories lately so that really makes me feel better (I think everyone's off reading about Gus on the two new stories that are being posting right now - ha!).
Speaking of Gus, though, I will be going back to the Elvis story soon; I'm trying to finish up Tricky's tales first before Thanksgiving, though. Thanks again for all your support - don't know what I would do without you and the other faithful readers who always take the time to review for me - I appreciate that more than you know.:)
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 05:57 PM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
HOT! And I wonder, why the name of the diner does sound vaguely familiar. Hmmm, let me think, wait, it was, damn, I have it on the tip of my tongue..... :)
Author's Response: LOL! Shhh....don't be giving my secrets away now, Elke! Ha! Okay, you caught me! But it was a good diner, though, wasn't it? And it brings back some good memories.:) Glad to hear from you, my friend, although I'm surprised you even have time to read right now with everything on your plate (speaking of diners - LOL!). Thanks for reading.:) I'm looking forward to seeing you again next year!:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 04:56 PM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Don't know what to say to you anymore. This is my most favorite story at the moment. I love every word you write. and that showerscene ... agggr I need a shower too * giggles * a cold one.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Dear! Thanks for your kind words. Wouldn't you like to even be that bar of soap? LOL! Things should definitely heat up even more in the next chapter (no, not THAT kind of heat - with Carruthers, I mean...). We're moving toward some more heart-stopping excitement in the storyline (at least, I hope that's how the readers will feel...). Anyway, thanks as always for taking the time to review, my friend. I am moving next to hopefully finish up Tricky's tale and then I have a new Christmas/jealous Brian story I will be starting on in between my regular stories. I adore a jealous Brian, don't you? *Hugs* to you, my friend.:)
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 01:49 PM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Uh, if Carruthers isn't to convict because of insanity, then he comes in a mental hospital, doesn't he? And there may be an opportunity for him, to escape and go after Justin. I think you're preparing a showdown here.
That got me thinking of a case here in my country a few years ago, where a nurse, who had fallen in love with an insane childmolester, helped him to escape and he murderered her and a little girl before he was shot by a cop. But I have faith in you, that you won't let anything happen to Justin.
Btw, your description of the showerscene and Justin's first time the night before are absolutely delicious and mouthwatering.
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. That true story you told me is awful; unfortunately that seems to happen a lot where criminals persuade someone vulnerable to help them escape, only to wind up in big trouble. Here in the states there was a story like that, only it was the warden's WIFE! For a long time they thought she had been forced to leave with him but that turned out not to be the case.
As far as the story goes, you are on the right track. But you are also correct that I would not let anything happen to Justin. I do love a protective Brian, though, so I will certainly include some tense moments for boys to play on that emotion before everything is settled.
Thanks for the compliment on the sex scenes - I try to write them with both a degree of hotness as well as sweetness, my favorite combination with the boys. I"m so glad you liked it! I will be updating this one soon, but in the meantime I'm moving over to the further tales with Tricky; I know you were looking forward to that one. Thanks again for reading and for all the comments - that is so motivating to me!
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2011 11:04 AM · On: One Part Dream, One Part Nightmare
Hello, my dear. I was just about to head off for bed when I found this delightful surprise. This was just wonderful on so many different levels. I understand Daphne's concerns. Never did a boy have a better friend. And, the shower! Wow. That was just an incredibly hot & beautiful moment all rolled up into one perfect package. I know the angst is to commence again... but, I certainly enjoyed this. I am so glad I stopped and caught this one tonight. Truly a remarkable story, my friend. I am greatly anticipating more of this.
Now, I must sleep and work tomorrow. Then, I will get back to our boys in Vegas. Thank you so much for the wonderful update. :)
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! So great to hear from you! I'm honored you chose to read this one in what little spare time your writing schedule allows - thank you!:) I will certainly be looking forward to your own updates; I see you finished one, so that should help a little bit. I'm glad you're reposting "Leaping," BTW - it may have been your first multi-chapter fic but it was still a really good one! I think you write the predator Brian better than anyone.:) Thanks again for leaving your thoughts - you're very special to me.:)
Reviewer: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2011 07:48 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
THIS STORY IS GREAT. I AM NEW TO HERE-SO I WASN'T TOO SURE OF HOW TO REVIEW. I HAD SOME HELP FROM CO-WORKERS. I AM A DETECTIVE STORY SLUT. YOU MAKE THESE PEOPLE COME ALIVE. PREDATORS OF THIS KIND ARE THE WORST PEOPLE ON EARTH EVEN IF THEY ARE SICKKOS. MY FRIENDS SAID TO SAY HEY. I WILL BE WAITING FOR AN UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Hi, Adam! Welcome! Thank you for reading and especially taking the time to leave me your thoughts! I like your description of yourself, BTW - "detective story slut." Sounds like a good name for a story title - ha! What a nice thing to say about making the characters come to life, too - thank you.:) That means a lot to me.
I agree - those that prey especially on young, innocent children are the worst. I was a little hesitant about even delving into this subject matter, but I ultimately couldn't resist the idea of putting Brian into the story as a cynical detective who has to rely on someone he doesn't trust to save a son he dearly loves. I hope to continue treating the subject matter seriously and not trivialize these types of crimes.
Tell your friends I said hello, too - I have a good feeling I know who they are and they are the best!:) Thank you again for leaving your thoughts - I religiously update all my stories on a regular basis and promise to get this one updated soon. As you can imagine, it's not over yet with Carruthers. Thanks again, Adam!:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Comfort and Conflict
* is ashamed * I did read it tuesday, but didn't comment * hides under desk *.
And this is really such a great story and I did say it before. This must me filmed.
Last week was a nice week without my two girls. They had a great time with their dad. They text me every day. And the musicals Miss Saigon and Wicked were wonderful. But Randy does play Boq way better.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Reading and not commenting? Bad girl! LOL! That's okay - you're so good any other time, I can cut you a break.:) You're still great to me.:) I'm glad the girls - and you - had a good time. I'm glad you treated yourself - you deserve it, my friend.:) I wish Randy would go back to Broadway again some time, but in a way I prefer it when he goes to the Berkshires. I bet it would be a nightmare trying to get a photo or autograph with him if he was performing on Broadway! BTW - I'm still hoping to get to the convention next June in Cologne. I hope you get a chance to go. If you do, you can come stay with me for the week in my hotel room.:) It would be great!:) You can come back out from under the desk, now - LOL! *Hugs* to you, my dear.:)
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
j 'espere que ça finirai bien pour justin
Author's Response: Ne vous inquiétez pas. Il sera fin. Merci de lire et de commentaire!:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 02:47 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
Wow. I love how, even though the sex is HAWT!!!, Brian is so caring with Justin. Oh, he's fallen so hard for his little psychic!! Poor Justin, that nightmare would freak me out, too! And knowing Justin, it probably wasn't just a nightmare. Love it, darling!
Author's Response: Hi, Megan Rose! Thanks as always for reading and commenting.:) Glad you liked the steamy but sweet first part as well as the creepy last part - LOL! Yes, Carruthers isn't gone yet - I've got some more angst in store for the boys. But you know eventually everything will turn out okay for them and now they have each other.:) Thanks so much for the feedback; I promise to get this updated soon.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 09:45 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
This is quite a marvelous piece of writing. I love the romantic stories you write, but I must say this story and especially this chapter is mesmerizing. I just finished reading stirring it up. That story was so great. You are very talented.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! Thanks so much for your kind words and for all the feedback! I'm so delighted that you're enjoying my stories. I really love these guys; they're so hot and so sweet together.:) I think they bring out the best in each other, not to mention they're not bad looking, either - ha! Justin's going to need Brian in the upcoming chapters, because as I'm sure you've surmised the danger is not over just yet.:) Thank you again for reading so many of my stories - that is so motivating to me and means more than you will ever know.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
Oh my! I want more please ... Soon? As always your writing is just outstanding. I love how you weave a story and how it unfolds. Thanks for writing these wonderful stories!
Author's Response: Hi, Ceci! What a sweet thing to say! Thank you! I'm so glad you let me know you're enjoying the story! I wish I could update faster than I do - I try to update within a few weeks at most, but it would be great to do it faster. I have triple the students in my full time adult education class that I'm teaching this year compared to last year, so it is quite time consuming, unfortunately. But rest assured I will continue to regularly update all of my stories and will finish each one as usual.:) I just started on the second chapter of "Hunka Hunka Burnin' Love." Justin's about to have to contend with a crush from one of Gus's friends. And unfortunately guess who has a crush on the boy? Gus, of course! LOL!
Thank you so much for reading my stories and especially for leaving me feedback. That is so motivating to me and makes me very happy! I hope to hear more from you again, and I promise to continue this story just as soon as I'm able to; shouldn't be too long. And the holidays are coming up, which means a little more time to write! Yay! Thanks again.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
Ahhhh what a treat to come home from a very long day at work to find this. What a gauntlet of emotions displayed here. The beginning was intensely erotic and so vividly portrayed. I think my heart beat sped up a pace - or two or three! Ha! Then, the torture Justin began to live again in his dreams. Scary times ahead I'm afraid. As long as they come through it, my nerves can take it. I think! LOL.
Wonderfully crafted as always, my friend. Fabulous update. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, dear friend.:) I'm honored you took time out of your busy writing schedule and from all the other stories chose to read this one.;) Congrats, BTW, on the Blue Ribbons! They are richly deserved! You are right about Justin - his torment isn't quite over yet. But he will have a sexy detective watching his back (why does even THAT sound erotic? LOL!) Thanks again for reading and especially commenting - you most of all probably know how much these comments mean to me.:) Looking forward to your story updates as well!:)
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 02:28 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
GOT A CALL TO READ, SO HERE I AM READING, TYPING AND REVIEWING. THIS CHAPTER WAS RAD. HALLOWEEN COMING MUST HAVE CAUSED HIS VISION. WONDER WHERE YOU WILL TAKE US FOR THAT ONE AND HOW IT WILL OCCUR. THIS STORY JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER. I REALLY GET INTO HEARTS AS YOU KNOW-BUT THIS ONE IS COMING A CLOSE SECOND. I'M DOING MUCH BETTER-MOST OF MY ISSUES HAVE DIED DOWN. I AM STILL HAVING A FEW HEADACHES. DOC SAYS IT IS NORMAL FOR WHAT MY BODY AND HEAD HAVE BEEN THROUGH. STILL HAVE SOME WEAKNESS ON MY LEFT SIDE BUT THE THERAPY THEY HAVE ME GOING THROUGH,(UGH) SHOULD EVENTUALLY ELIMINATE IT. HOPE SO. MY BUDS ARE TAKING ME OUT TO DINNER LATER AFTER SOME REST. LOVE 2 U
Author's Response: Hi, dear Lee! I was justing wondering if you would be 'checking in' - LOL! Always a delight to hear your thoughts.:) Your friends take such good care of you - giving you alerts on my stories and then taking you out to eat.:) So glad to hear you're continuing to improve. I hope the headaches will eventually go away - my father gets them for a different reason on a frequent basis, and I always feel so sorry for him.
Maybe Halloween IS to blame for the spooky setting - LOL! It will play a role coming up as well in the story, too. (And that's all I'm going to tell you!). Thanks again for reading and reviewing - I am now off to the "Elvis" story, but will be updating both of these again soon. Take care, my friend. Big *hug* to you - tell Brian and Lindc I said hello and to make sure they feed you well - LOL! ~Kimberly
Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
I MUST SAY THIS WAS QUITE THE CHAPTER-SEX, ANGST, AND VISIONS. WOW! OUR FRIEND WENT HOME TO REST-I'M STILL HERE HAVE SOME MORE PAPER-WORK TO FINISH-THEN I'M GONE. THESE 36 HOUR SHIFTS ARE THE "PITTS" HA HA. LATER!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Sorry to hear about the super-long shifts, but at least it sounds like you'll hopefully be heading home soon.:) Glad you got home from D.C. safely, too.:) Thanks for takng the time out of your extremely busy schedule to read and leave me some feedback; I am very appreciative of that.:) I'm very happy that you liked the chapter for this. I promise to update it soon. I am now off to play with Justin as Elvis some more - ha! Take care.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Stacy (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
Off from work, finally can catch up on my reading. I take my laptop in the bath and read and soak--it is relaxing to read your stories while my body eases up from the tension at work. so, thanks for that. This story, i find fascinating. my word what a mind you have. I guess you have to be born with the gift to write. I don't think it can be taught, anyway not the expertise you have installed in your brain. I have read quite a few paranormal stories and things people deem to be true, so i believe in people having these visions. Justin will have more of them i think. They really don't go away and many things can trigger them. Will be waiting to see how the amusement park vision plays out. Good writing, am enjoying it immensely.
Author's Response: Thank you, Stacy! What a nice thing to say about relaxing you; these boys could 'relax' me anytime - LOL! It's great to hear from you again; I'm very pleased that you're enjoying the story. I always thought an abandoned amusement park would be quite eerie; hence the setting for Justin's vision. And I picked it for another reason which will become more evident coming up. Thank you for reading my stories and especially taking the time to review - I am very grateful. I hope you will continue to enjoy them for a long time to come and I'll be looking foward to more of your comments.:)
~Kimberly
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 02:11 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
""Well, you're not alone anymore,' Brian found himself saying as Justin's eyes filled with tears."
Even after the marathon love making sessions, I think the words and tender moments are even better.
Carnivals can be just as scary as clowns and that premonition was no exception.
It sems Justin is not convinced about it being just a dream.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the review, my friend! I'm so pleased that you liked it.:) I do try (I hope!) to not just have them having 'sex.' I try to make it more emotional with them - hopefully I have succeeded in that endeavor.:) Without spoiling it, I WILL say that there is some basis in fact for Justin's vision; Carruthers is not out of the picture yet. You probably know how I love to create some tense-filled moments for the boys.:) Thanks again for not only reading but also leaving me your thoughts - that makes me very happy.:) I will get this updated soon - I promise!:)
Reviewer: JULIAN (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 01:02 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
THIS WAS QUITE A SIZZLING CHAPTER. I KNEW WE WEREN'T DONE WITH THE PERVERT. I HAVE A QUESTION-YOU MAY THINK IT WEIRD BUT HOW DO YOU WRITE THESE GAY GUY SEX SCENES. YOU SEEM TO KNOW WHAT TURNS THEM ON AND WHAT NUANCES ARE THERE AT ALL TIMES. JUST WONDERING. GOOD CHAPTER.
Author's Response: Hi, Julian! So great to hear from you again! Thanks for reading and for the comments! I don't mind the question at all, but I'm not sure how to answer it - LOL! I'm probably about as far apart from a gay male as I could be...I don't really have any gay male friends to bounce these ideas off of when I write them, so I'm flattered that you think they are so realistic - thank you.:) I just try, I guess, to imagine how I would want a lover to be with me, so I suppose it doesn't really matter to a certain extent if the lovers are gay or straight (except for the 'plumbing' involved - LOL!). Thanks again for your kind words and support - I promise to update this just as soon as I can. The boys will need each other in the coming weeks to get through some more angst - as you've no doubt suspected, it's not over yet by a long shot!:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Comfort and Conflict
My god girl-what you do to my listeners. what a hot! hot! chapter. we all knew more carruthers was in the wind. i hope brian takes justin's vision for real, if not there could be more trouble down the road if carruthers somehow escapes fron his captors. i love more angst so the outcome will be even more enjoyable. good job! lol from us all
Author's Response: Hi, Dear! Glad you liked the combination of steaminess and angst in this chapter! I enjoyed writing Justin's vision in a creepy sort of way - of course, writing about the sex wasn't bad, either - LOL! I CAN say that Carruthers is definitely not done with the boys yet - what would be the fun in that??? Thanks as always for the comments - hope all is well with you and peeps. Tell Brian, Lee, Stacy, and all the other wonderful readers you've sent my way that I send my best regards and thanks for their support.:) Take care, my friend.:)
Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:35 PM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
How can I tell you how wonderful a writter you are! I am presently reading "Paper Hearts" and "My Heart's Desire" and I wait on pins and needles for new installments of those stories. I just finished new" paper hearts" it was wonderful, and a few days ago i read newest "my hearts desire" just awesome. I feel like i know these people and i feel what they are feeling, and that shows what a good writter you are that you make me feel this way! JUST AWESOME!!!!! THanks and don't stop! I'll be waiting for the next installments of these stories and anything new you'll write. Oh one more thing I've read all your other stories as well, just so you know it not just these two. That's also how i know how good you are.
Thanks again and keep writting!
Helenann23
Author's Response: Wow - Thanks, Stephanie! I am so honored by your words more than you'll ever know - thank you! I try hard to make the stories seem real enough that you can imagine being a part of them, so I am very happy by your comments and faith in me.:) I only wish I had more time to update them faster. I suppose I could make the chapters shorter and update quicker that way, but normally it's not in my nature to do that.:) Working full-time as a teacher takes up a lot of my time, but rest assured I will continue to post and update new chapters regularly. I have never left a story open and never will. I DO have a new story I'd love to get started on - I even have the banner ready - but I need to at least wait until the "Elvis" story is done; hopefully that won't be long, though, because I definitely see that one as a shorter story and it's up for posting next.
Thanks again for all your kind words - I am very grateful.:)
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 10:22 PM · On: Comfort and Conflict
I'd like to give Brian a kick in the a...! Would he say, that it's only a dream, if Justin had said, that Gus would be in danger again? I think not! Why doesn't he believe in Justin after what they had been through. I'm really disappointed with him. He should have at leat called Carl Horvath to insure, that the safety meassures are strong.
Author's Response: Hi, Dear! Thanks for reading and for the comments.:) I think you might be glad to know that I DO intend for Brian to doublecheck on Carruthers in the next chapter; my thought was that he would wait at least until early morning to make the call to Horvath. But I don't think he's dismissing Justin's claim quite so lightly; I think what he said was more to reassure both of them that the man couldn't possibly cause more harm. Of course, you probably know already how my mind works and how I love angst, so suffice it to say that Carruthers isn't going to slink off quietly into the night without at least one more showdown. Hope you'll stay tuned! Thanks again for reading and especially commenting - that means a lot to me.:)
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Comfort and Conflict
Fantastic chapter! No words...
Author's Response: Hi, Pam! Thank you so much for reading and commenting; I was anxious to get this chapter posted because I knew (or at least hoped!) that a lot of readers were waiting for it. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave some feedback! I promise to get this updated as soon as possible. Thanks again, my friend.:)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 06:20 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
This was a much expected update, let me tell you that. I got a little impatient and frustrated with all the dragging Justin had to pull [ are all virgins really like that?] but I was not dissappointed, but I could do with less hassle,
Cant wait for the havock to come though, for I am absolutely sure something is gonna go down with that Carruthers character. *hugs* Marla
Author's Response: LOL! I know, it was a LONG time coming, wasn't it? And 'coming' is the operative word here - ha! BTW this story is up next for an update, so I should be continuing their 'bonding' a little more in the next chapter (wink, wink). But of course, you're right; we haven't seen the last of Carruthers yet, either. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing, Marla; that is so motivating to me!:P)
Reviewer: clexi79 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 09:41 PM · On: Haunting Visions and a Taunting Clue
What a wonderful story. There's angst and romance and... Don't know what to say... When I read your stories it's like I see a movie with my "inner eye" - Hope you know what I mean.
Keep up with it!
Author's Response: Aww..You are so kind, Melanie! Thanks very much for your kind words - that means so much to me! I try to describe as much of the story and scenes as I can without hopefully bogging them down in detail too much. I know exactly what you mean, then, and it makes me very happy to know that you're enjoying the story! The boys will have a little more 'private time' in the next chapter before Daphne comes home and discovers a little 'surprise' at her apartment.:) And of course, there will be some more angst and unsettling times for the boys in the future until all ends well for them (I just can't write them any other way! LOL!).
Thanks again for your feedback - and welcome again to the site, BTW!
Reviewer: stacy (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2011 09:00 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
hi! my name is stacy and i am a friend of lindc. this is quite a long story so please bear with me. i interrupted her reading to her co-workers. i stayed to listen to what she was reading. she went on to explain what it was all about. long story short-she told me if i was interested what to read. i read the wedding story. she told me to read the rest of this story and review here about the wedding story as she wasn't sure you would see my review there. see told you it was a long story. any whooo! your writing is something i admire very much. now i have to read more. the wedding story was so absorbing i read it all very quickly. this story is good too. she told me to read about the twin girls as i am a romantic at heart--guess that's why i like the wedding story so much. sorry i ran off at the mouth.
Author's Response: Hi, Stacy! What a delight to read your comments! I really should give lindc a commission - LOL! I can't thank her enough for recommending my stories to you, and I'm so thrilled to hear you enjoy them! I hope you will like "Parent Trap." I haven't quite gotten the boys back together, but as lindc probably told you I always give them a happy ending in the end. I'm so glad you liked "The Wedding Present!" If you like the romantic stories, can I suggest "A Kinney Christmas?" Not much in the way of angst, but it definitely is romantic. And "Operation Birthday," too. I think you might even like "Roughing It" where they go camping - lots of romance/sex in that one as well. Heck, they're ALL that way, I suppose, at least eventually, because I'm a hopeless romantic, too! My personal favorite is probably "Stirring Up Trouble." I loved writing the sexual tension in that one, as well as putting Emmett and Justin together as business partners in the cake decorating business.:)
Thanks again for leaving me feedback, Stacy! That means more to me than you know and is so motivating to me! Hope to hear from you again. Oh, and BTW - I DO know when you critique another (older) story because I get an email alert about it.:) Thanks again.
Kimberly
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:32 PM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
HI, MY DEAR!! I HAVE TO LEAVE A REVIEW, OTHERWISE I WILL BE A F****G D**K!! HA-HA!! FIRST: I REALLY LOVED THE WAY YOU REPRESENT JUSTIN'S FURST TIME!! IT WAS VERY HOT, SEXY AND ...REAL!!! SECOND: YOU IMPRESSED ME WITH THE FACT THAT YOU DID NOT THROW RIGHT INTO THE SEX SCENE( BELEIVE ME , AS A DEVOTED FAN OF SLASH FANFICTION I HAVE READ MANY ONES), BUT INSERT SOME INTRODUCTION, IF I CAN CALL IT LIKE THIS, STEP BY STEP, LITTLE BY LITTLE!! AND THE RESULT WAS JUST ...PERFECT!!! THANK YOU!!! KEEP THE SAME PACE!!! P.S. I DO NOT GIVE A SHIT THAT MANY PEOPLE MAY READ THIS: I AM SO BRAINWASHED BY SLASH FANFICTION THAT IN RL I HAVE NO TIME FOR FRIENDS( I DO NOT HAVE MANY), I HAVE NO TIME FOR READING BOOKS( DESPITE THE FACT THAT I AM A BOOKWARM!!), I RARELY GO OUT WITH FRIENDS, I RARELY WATCH TV , AND" ALL MY WHOLE WORLD IS SPINNING OFF ITS AXIS" AND THIS AXIS IS BRIAN AND JUSTIN AND SOME OTHER CHARACTERS....
Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you liked this chapter, Evelyne! I thought it was time the boys finally got what they wanted, but as you said I thought it was more realistic to slowly ease into it (why does even THAT sound sexual? LOL!). I also could see Justin as being inexperienced in this story due to his fear of being involved with someone and possibly seeing some harm come to them. I hope I presented this accurately with regard to that scenario.:) BTW - I love to read books, too, but between my teaching job, writing and reading fanfic I have not had much time to do that. I enjoy writing so much and also reading about these guys - I love these characters! Thanks again for all the kind words, my dear, I am so grateful for that.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Play Ball!
IT IS ME, AGAIN!!! I REVIEW YOUR CHAPPIE 10(AGAIN)!!!! THANK YOU!!! BEST REGARDS: EVELINE
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend! Couldn' resist the title - ha!:) Thanks for the comments.:)
Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:01 PM · On: Preparations and Revelations
HI, MY FAVORITE WRITER!!! I REALLY SORRY THAT I HAD NOT THE CHANCE TO REVIEW YOUR STORY!! I' M FEELING VERY....ASHAMED!! YES, THAT'S RIGHT!!! RL IS A BITCH AND I MUST ADMIT THAT I LATELY SPENT MY TINE IN LIVEJOURNAL READING STORIES...I HOPE YOU WILL EXCUSE MY SILENCE AND NOT RESPONDING FOR NEARLY 1 MONTH...WHAT A SHAME!! WHAT TO SAY ??? YOU ARE BORN A WRITER AND YOU MUST WRITE A BOOK WITH THIS WONDERFUL STORY!! THANK YOU FOR THE NICE CHAPTER!!! I RATE YOUR CHAPTER 10!!! BEST REGARDS: EVELYNE
Author's Response: Aww...thanks so much, Evelyn! I'm so glad to hear from you again.:) BTW - I do post this story on LJ, also, under the same user name. I try to post the same chapters on the same days. I post it on both my personal journal as well as bjfics if you ever want to read it over there.:) But I'm thrilled to see you reading it again, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks very much for leaving your comments.:)
Reviewer: Julian (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 09:28 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
This is a powerful story, sex and all. I am detective story junkie. Most stories I have read have sex in them. Your writing skills are incredible Have you written any novels I could read. I am new to this site and, I must say, am very impressed with your stories. I have only read 2 so far. I have read a few other authors here. No offense to them but they fall short compared to you. A very nice young guy told me I should check you out-so here I am. Slainte!!
Author's Response: Hello, Julian! I'm always excited to get reviews, but especially from someone new!:) Thank you so much for reading my stories and especially commenting - you have no idea how happy that makes me!:) And please thank your friend for recommending me - I am very flattered. To answer your question, alas, no - no novels, although you'll find that I can't seem to write too many short stories, so they typically could be considered novel length! LOL! I hope you will continue to enjoy them - getting feedback is so motivating to me and I know there are a slew of new authors over here lately, so the fact that you chose to read mine is very exciting! I hope to hear more from you in the future. I will be updating this soon - I update each of my WIPs regularly. Thanks again - and thank your friend for me, too.:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:04 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
This is my favorite story even if i am reading alone now. I don't expect lindc to come and read to me now. They are really busy as usual. I'm much better so i am more self-sufficient. This chapter was very hot. Glad i was alone in my reading-whoops. Still my favorite!! I have a favor to ask,please don't go elsewhere for your writing. You may be a reader, but don't EVER give up your writing--that's who you are to me. You don't know how instrumental you and your stories have been to my recovery-and that's not bs. love 2 u
Author's Response: You are so sweet, Lee! That means a lot to me, more than you realize.:) And if I have been helpful in any way in moving you toward your recovery (and I'm thrilled by how far you've come!) that makes me happy.:) I'm so glad you're well enough to be more self-sufficient, but I didn't doubt it for a second because your friends all told me what a fighter you are.:) You're very kind, my friend, really. I'll tell you a secret (shh...). I don't have a lot of friends in RL, so the readers and authors I have made met here are very special to me, including you, lindc, and the rest of the 'peeps.' She's very good at recruiting more of them, too, I've noticed - ha!
I'm so glad you like this story, Lee, and as I said before no matter what happens I would NEVER leave a story hanging, so rest assured I WILL finish this one as well as all my other ones (heck, "My Heart's Desire" could be a full-length feature film by the time I get done with THAT one - LOL!). Ack! I do work hard to update regularly even with my teaching job. Have triple the students this year so it seems like all I do in between updating my stories is grade papers and more papers!!
You know me - Ms. Insecurity. Just ignore my morose state at the moment (like that big word I threw in? LOL!). I actually have a (new) short story I'm working on right now - have the first chapter up but haven't decided if I want to wait until I finish it completely before I post it. That one is actually more of a comedy story. All this angst weighs a person down after a while! These boys need to have some FUN!
Anyway, thank you again for all your kindness. I'm so happy you're on your way to a full recovery. Tell lindc she and Brian and the rest of the Peeps need to take you back out to dinner! Take care, my friend. I'm sending you a *big hug* your way.
~Kimberly
Reviewer: BB (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 05:54 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
THIS WAS QUITE A CHAPTER, SORRY I AM SO LATE HAD TO GO TO D.C. FOR A SEMINAR. LINDC DIDN'T GET TO READ TIL I GOT BACK. IT'S LONG OVERDUE THEIR GETTING TOGETHER BUT WORTH THE WAIT. NOW COMES WHAT THE PERP'S OUTCOME WILL BE. I GUESS THERE IS A LOT GOING ON ON THIS SITE. THERE ARE A LOT MORE WRITERS HERE. I HAD TO GO DOWN THE PAGE QUITE A BIT TIL I FOUND YOU. I HOPE MORE PEOPLE REVIEW SO YOU ALL DON'T GO AWAY-THAT WOULD BE A TRAVESTY. RICK AND DAVE SAY HI. DAVE IS A NEWBIE TO THE PEEPS. I THINK HE WILL BE A GOOD LISTENER IF THIS LAST CHAPTER IS ANY INDICATION. HE WAS SO ENGROSSED IN THE READING. HE WAS TURNING A LITTLE RED. HA HA SO FUNNY. LATER
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I got excited there for a moment, thinking I had three new reviews - LOL! I went ahead and deleted the other two since they were pretty much duplicates - hope you don't mind. Although it would have made my review count larger - ha! Thanks as always for your comments. Yes, it's kind of hard to stand out over here now with all the other good writers.:( I think despite Bob's (JtSecrets) post, I haven't really seen an increase myself in reviews (unfortunately), so it IS discouraging. I guess I'll have to decide whether to keep posting over here or not. Perhaps I'm just meant to be a reader rather than an author (?).
You went to D.C. and didn't see Randy in his play? Shame! LOL! Personally I much preferred him in "Tommy" because of the wonderful music and singing, not to mention Randy being the lead in it. I hope he'll do another musical one day - he really does have a beautiful voice.
Thank you again for all the reviews, Brian. I really do appreciate them. I'm sure you'll enjoy some of the other writers on here as well (if you haven't already, that is). Tell Lee, Rick, and Dave I said hello as well and thank them for reading my stories. Tell lindc thanks for all her support, too.:) I'm giving all you guys a big hug.:)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2011 07:45 PM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
Damn that was hot! Yet also very sweet and tender. A perfect balance. You never dissapoint, this story is wonderful. -Benny
Author's Response: Aww....thank you, Benny - that is so nice of you to say and means so much to me!:) Those sort of comments make me very happy.:) I'm pleased that you're enjoying the story. I promise to include a little more of private time with the boys in the next chapter, too, before the angst begins anew (you know me...!). Thanks again for reading and especially reviewing - I am very appreciative.:)
~Kimberly
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 04:05 AM · On: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer
ummm - I think I may need a cold shower before making dinner - that was sooo worth the wait - and I have a feeling there is more to come...do we get to experience rimming for the very first time with Justin - that will be incredible - and hot!!!
I usually have a hard time separating our boys from AU characters - 'cause I know and love them so well, and they will always be my boys. But here I am seeing them as totally new friends, the cop and the psychic, a whole new Brian and a whole new Justin, which makes it even more amazing to experience their first time like this.
thanks for this update - loved it and as always, I am anxiously waiting for more...greedy...aren't I?
lovinglife,
Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! You can be greedy any time, as long as I get such a thought-provoking, positive review as yours! Thanks as always for reading and for the encouraging words.:) To be honest, speaking of 'greedy,' I was kind of hoping for a few more reviews after Bob's post, but (sigh)....not to be I suppose. But I DO appreciate everyone who has read and especially reviewed up until now and as always I will work on this steadfastedly until I get this one - and all my other stories - completed. It's weird - sometimes it seems like the authors who take months to post the next part of their story get more reviews than the ones who work so diligently at posting regularly (?)....So maybe I'm going about this wrong - ha! BTW, I'm toying with a short story right now. I've written about 1,700 words of it but I'm not ready to post it just yet. I may wait until it's finished before I do, since I see it as a rather short one (yes, I CAN do that on rare occasions - LOL!).
Thanks again, my friend, for taking the time to leave me your thoughts - that is very motivating for me.:) Oh and one more thing...I think I can maybe squeeze in a rimming scene in the next chapter, along with a few 'other' moments (wink, wink)....!
~Kimberly
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