Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 04:36 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Justin is such a eye candy i swear :3 Every hot alpha top will want to eat him up.

Ahhh love when Brian have a competition for Justin.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2014 08:35 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Love your writing! Great first chapter- very glad this is story of the month! Brian's hypocrisy here is overhwelming, I must say. However, you had some sweet lines, like his customary smile when he sees Justin. Speaking of whom, your description of him is delicious. I love your original character, Chamberlain. I can see some beautiful sexual tension between the two later on. Onto the next chapter, I guess...

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2014 11:29 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Just at the first chapter, and i am already LOVING IT!!



Author's Response:

Wow - thank you very much! I'm delighted that you're enjoying it so far. I love a jealous Brian.;)  BTW, if you like this one, there's a sequel where Justin is jealous as well called "Color Me Green."  Thanks again for reading and for the comments. I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2014 11:42 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I saw your name with "new" next to it and got really excited. I then realised it was an old story I'd already read and my excitement disappeared, as something I've already read is not nearly as fun as a new story. 

But it did make me realise I haven't commented on the last two chapters of tame the wild stallion, which is very amiss of me. And as I'm too lazy to do two reviews, so here's two-in-one. :) (I don't think I ever commented on this, but without re-reading it, I don't remember enough of what happened to be able to comment on it. apart from yay jealous!Brian!)

I'd had my suspicions (obviously) that whatshisface had something to do with Brian's cousin's death (as you can see, I'm great with names) and it was wonderful to have them confirmed. But I do feel really bad for Will and Sarah having their son's death dragged out in the open like that and having to think about it. I never believed (again, obviously) that Jared had anything to do with Justin's accident, but it's nice to have it confirmed for the other characters.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki - sorry to burst your bubble, my friend. The featured story is always a completed one; that is one of the requirements.;)  I hope you enjoyed it the first time around, though.

Thank you for the comments about "Stallion."  It was bound to be painful for Will and Sarah to learn the truth, but I think in the long run they would have preferred that to being kept in the dark.  His death HAS been an integral part of the story, but is only one component of it. There is still the question of what will become of  Brian at the end of the summer. That will be resolved eventually, with a few surprises along the way.

Thanks for reading both stories. Oh, and if it helps, I DO have a new story coming that I've been working on behind the scenes. It's almost done, so I should start posting it soon.  I've just made myself a promise to try and not post anything else new unless it's done first. Not sure I can always stick with that, but I'm going to try, at least until I have both of my other WIPs done first.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 03:54 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Love seeing Brian acting all jealous and uber-protective! Seems I somehow missed this story before, so I'm glad Bob picked it for this month. Very enjoyable! Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag! Thanks for reading this one, and for the comments. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. I do like Brian that way, too.;)  Thanks again for the feedback. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:01 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I really love this story. I haven't actually read'Color Me Green'. But this one. I aboslutely love it. I can just see Brian being just like this.

Thanks for a great story,

Le



Author's Response:

Hi, Le! Thank YOU for reading, and for the comments! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm happy you thought I kept Brian IC. He can be a tricky one at times, doing that, since he gradually changed, I think, from the first season to the last.  I hope if you get a chance you will check out 'feisty' Justin in the sequel. Thanks again! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 10:46 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Oh Hell NO!!!

I'm sure Brian has a no fraternizing policy between his clients and employees. And if not he needs one... Now!

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen!  Well, you will soon find out how Brian feels about the other man's request.;)  I had a lot of fun writing this one, and tormenting the poor man - LOL!  Although, there IS a sequel where Justin gets the same treatment. ("Color Me Green").  I hope you enjoy the rest of this. Thanks so much for choosing to read this one, and for the comments, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2013 09:12 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Somehow I don't think Brian is going to hook Max up with Justin.  But then this is a AU.

Reviewer: bubbafrogz (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 11:53 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Oh my goodness!  What an impossible situation!  I wanna say poor Brian but if he would admitt he has feelings like everyone else......  I will say poor Cynthia though.  Having to work with so much hottness and not being able to sample it!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm so happy to see you reading this one!  Thanks especially for taking the time to comment; that means a lot to me!:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 03:59 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I really love a jealous Brian a lot!!! I am gonna love this alot Kim :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

Thanks, Vonnie!  I love a jealous Brian, too, and he's about to erupt over Chamberlain's actions - yum!  Thanks for reading, my friend.  *Hugs* 

Kimberly

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 11:49 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

NOOOooooo! :)  OK, off to the next installment! :)

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 02:35 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

You're writing and stories are incredible.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Linda!  Sometimes I think I'm going to wear out my welcome with so many stories at once, so I'm glad you're enjoying them.:)  I actually have an idea in my mind for a sequel to this one and I have the week off! Hope you'll keep an out for it - I have to update "TLC" first, though.  Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words - I appreciate that so much and it helps motivate me to keep writing as long as others are enjoying them.:)

Reviewer: echelonizi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 12:24 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

this is a reply to your reply to my review :)

That protective/jealous Justin idea is like... great! Coz you mentioned Justin warning Brian not to go after anyone else... a new intern that has a crush on Brian, maybe? 

xo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the idea!  If I can write another story without it turning into my typical, novel-lengths sagas, I may just do that!  I like it!:)

Reviewer: ergenie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 07:30 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

AArrgghhh!!!!.... I have a MAJOR complain about this fic!!!!!....It's just too short!!!!!!!... It's too good to just be a 3 chapter fic!!!!... I want more of it!!!.. I love Brian going all protective mode over Justin and I love that you made Jusitn capable of taking care of himself and not a wimp like most fics do!!!!!.... Great work as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review - you're probably the third person who wanted more - LOL! I think my reputation for writing full-length sagas has preceded me - ha!  Thanks for the kind words.  I'm glad you liked it, even if it was shorter than my normal style.:)  If it's any consolation, I'm about to post the first chapter of one that will no doubt be a long one but it's not fluff by any means.  Hope you'll give it a try, though.  If you like romance with a lot of angst mixed in, you'll probably like this one.  Thanks for reading!:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:44 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I really like your story, it's great, and i am so curious just right now :) Please update soon...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I actually am planning on finishing it later today - hope you'll enjoy the rest of it, too.  Thanks for taking the time to review - that means so much to me.:)

Reviewer: Melo Maria (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2011 01:03 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Great Fic. I am loving this Brian that places Justin in first place. I wait a new chapter shortly. 
Thank you for showing a Brian different from the model of CowLip. 
Abs

Reviewer: epfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:50 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Hello there,

Great first chapter. Looking forward for the rest of it.

Véry well done

Epfan



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know you're reading and enjoying the story!:)  I should be updating this soon - I am in the process right now of finishing up the next chapter of "My Heart's Desire," and this one will be up next.  Should be up in a few days.  Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review - I greatly appreciate that.:)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 11:20 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

 “I want you to hook me up with that hot intern.”

 Ha!  I love where you seem to be going with this.

Max reminds me somewhat of Prescott from Going, Going, Gone.  I thought the two made a cute couple initially.

It's great to see another one of your stories but I won't get any housework done at this rate. LOL

 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  Yeah, a few other people compared him to Prescott, too, but don't worry - this one at least is NOT a psychopath - ha!  I think the poor man's not going to get his wish, but that doesn't mean there won't be some close calls in the meantime - thanks for following along with this one - stay tuned to see what happens!:)

Reviewer: SLing (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 10:41 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Looooooooool Brian is so fuming ^^ Hope you'll be able to update soon

Hugs 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, my friend!:)  I know, I love a jealous Brian so much I asked Bob (JTSecrets) to add jealousy as a sub-category, which he already did - thanks, Bob!  And thank YOU for leaving me your thoughts - I really appreciate that!  I will be updating it as soon as I get the other WIP stories updated in order  - thanks for reading; *Hugs* to you, too.:)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 03:37 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Oh dear we have a massive AD campaign at risk because Brian is not going to have Justin as part of the deal lol, great start xo Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks, Chris!  Let's hope Mr. Kinney has learned his lesson after the Ian.....er, ETHAN fiasco - LOL!  But that doesn't take into consideration what Justin will do, either.....hmmm.....stay tuned to find out what happens!  Thanks for leaving me the review.:)

Reviewer: nagatachou (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 12:54 PM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I love Jealous!Brian..

can't wait to know what Mr. Kinney is going to do!

Another beautiful story!

Thank you for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I also enjoy seeing where Mr. "I Don't Do Jealous" winds up when it comes to a certain blond - LOL!  Thanks for reading - I'm very delighted you're enjoying it.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:28 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

WOW.... poor Brian is caught between a rock and a hard place.....lol... does he tell Max the truth ...or lose a major client??? I can't wait to find out.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Definitely a HARD place, and not in a good way - LOL!  This is going to be the true test of what's most important to him. And just how will Justin react - will he go along with it to help Brian out in some misguided sense of guilt and/or loyalty?  Glad to see you'll be following this one - thanks for leaving the review, too; I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.:)

Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:23 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Oh my word! You have really done it here... and you know how I prefer a first meeting type of premise... but this had me hooked, captivated and wanting more immediately! Incredible job on this beginning. I am just so anxious to read more!! But, why do I worry about having a Prescott sort of situation developing here? Or is it just me looking for such - with the often evil plot bunny I have? LOL.



Author's Response:

Not to fear,my dear - I learned my lesson with that one - one psychopath per author - LOL!  The man may turn out to be persistent, but something tells me between Justin and Brian the man will eventually be put in his place and run off with his tail between his legs.....glad to see you reading along.  Thanks as always for takng the time to review my friend.:)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:16 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

ooohhhh...........what will Brian do?? Brian doesn't do ultimatums or will he?

Exquisite writing as usual.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - you're very kind.:)  I think Brian's going to have to rethink his strategy - if the intern was anyone else he wouldn't give a damn and be glad to help out...but this is different.  And just how far will Justin go to help his partner?  Ah, the torture - stay tuned for the outcome!  Thanks again for taking the time to review.:)

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 07:17 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Way to go predec2, i read a lot of your stories and i know this one will  be as great as the rest. I actually stop reading another story when this one pop up and i wasn't disappointed i got hooked on the first chapter and now i am sitting here wondering HOW LONG until the next. And what is brian to do? Who or what is more important to him Justin or Kinnetik? Then there's the best part, a jealous brian which i love.



Author's Response:

Wow - thank you so much, kfan!  I am so glad you like the story.  I, too, dearly adore a jealous Brian and he's going to have quite the quandry to consider in the next installment.  And just how far will Justin go to do what he thinks is helping him?  So glad you'e reading and I appreciate your thoughts on the story - I appreciate that more than you know.  I hope to update this within a week - I strive to update all my stories religiously so don't fear - it WILL be updated regularly.  Thanks again for taking the time to review. 

Kimberly

Reviewer: Ruby (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:38 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

OMG you're so good at writing these stories, and you keep them in character so brilliantly - please update soon x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Ruby - I am so delighted you like the story!  Yeah, Brian's going to have quite the dilemma on his hands in the next installment - will he go for the business, Kinney style, and encourage Justin to help him out, or will he learn his lesson post-Ethan?  And will Justin actually be the one to intercede in an unorthodox attempt to help the man he loves?  Ah, so many quandaries - ha!  Thanks for reading and leaving the review - I will be updating this one, as well as my other stories, regularly.  Thanks again for reading and especially leaving me your thoughts - it is so appreciated.:)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:14 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

ok i'm hooked already,what is mr. kinney going to do?



Author's Response:

Ah, there's the rub, isn't it? Ha!  Let's hope Brian's learned his lesson this time, but only time will tell.....I know, I'm evil - LOL!  Glad to see you're reading this one - I'll be updating it regularly.  Thanks for taking the time to leave a review - I really appreciate that!:)

Reviewer: Jenny (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:42 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

Bingo!!! So dear Brian, or should I say poor Brian, ;) what is your answer to his request?! I'm impatiently waiting for more!

I'm already hooked to your great story! Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Jenny!  I know, poor Brian - make the client happy or keep Justin happy, keep Justin happy or make the client happy - what a dilemma - ha!  Thanks for taking the time to leave a review- stay tuned for the drama, and thanks for taking the time to leave a review - I really appreciate that!:)

Reviewer: BB (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:37 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

I GUESS I'M BB NOW THANX TO YOU KNOW WHO.  FINISHED I DON'T AND THIS CHAPTER IN YOUR NEW ONE.  IT'S JUST NOT THE SAME AS LINDC READING TO US.  OH WELL!! AT LEAST I'M CAUGHT UP.  COLORADO WAS OK BUT I WOULDN'T WANT TO LIVE THERE ANYMORE.  I GUESS YOU GUYS ARE GOING TO SEE RANDY.  AM JEALOUS.  HE'S A REALLY GOOD SINGER.  I SAW HIM ONCE IN NEW YORK AT SOME CLUB DON'T REMEMBER THE NAME OF IT.  BACK TO OR MONDAY.  HAD TO REVIEW OR MY NAME WOULD BE MUDD---WILL BE LOOKING FOR TLC SOON??????



Author's Response:

Hi there, BB!  I think the BB actually stands for bold and brazen just like the OTHER Brian, doesn't it? - ha!  Glad to see you've returned back to the fold of the reading group.:)  Went to Colorado once on a motorcoach tour for a week.  Almost ashamed to admit it, but it was a little too much togetherness for my then best friend and me.  By the time we got done riding together, sleeping in the same hotel room together, and eating together, we also weren't SPEAKING to each other by the time the week was over - ha!  Not to fear, we have since made up.  But she recently suggested the same type structure for a combo land and cruise tour of Alaska and I had to decline.  Is she trying to ruin our friendship again?  Oh, well, I digress....yeah, Randy's got a beautiful voice - a lady I beta for on a fic story that I have never met is actually flying over from Germany to go with me - will be on the 11th.  Would be awesome if that's the same day that lindc goes as well but will have to see.  Thanks for taking the time to review - will update TLC soon, but I have to post the next chapter of "Double Jeopardy" next - it's the next one in line and I've neglected it a little.  Working on that one right now.  Will be updating TLC soon, though, don't fear.  Thanks for the review, BB!  Welcome back!:)

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:08 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

love it.how will brian get out of this.what will justin do.,its gonna be fun



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  Glad you're enjoying the ride!  Yeah, it will be interesting to see how BOTH boys react to Chamberlain's request, won't it?  Ha!  Stay tuned to see how this develops....has Brian learned anything from Ian, er.....Ethan? LOL!  Thanks for reading.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 03:50 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

OMG another story and I'm definitely hooked to this one. I love jealous!Brian. Hihi poor Justin, how will he handle Chamberlain!?

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks, my dear - no idea what possessed me to start a new one!  But I think this one will be relatively short (I sure hope so, anyway!).  And now I am onto "Double Jeopardy."  Thanks for taking the time to review.:)  *Hugs* to you also!

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 03:03 AM · On: One Good Fuck Deserves Another

a new hot story.  omg!!.  now you have 4 going.  i don't know how you do it, keeping all of us happy.  this one is going to give brian the heebeegeebees.  so looking forward to his jealousy.  by the way bb is back early had enough of colorado.  i told him to review now that he has access to a computer again.  lol



Author's Response:

I know - what am I doing?!? - LOL!  I think this one will be short (hopefully).  Tell BB glad to have him back in the - what is it?  the psych ward? That's certainly where I belong - LOL!  Tell everyone I say hello, and thanks as always for the review.:)

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