Reviewer: Amy (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2013 07:15 AM · On: Two Debbies?

That was incredibly cute! Your writing of the characters is truly wondrous, I can't get enough of your stories! I also can't wait to see what's going to happen with the election and their future!

Author's Response:

Hi, Amy! Thank you very much for reading this chapter and for your kind words; it makes me extremely happy to know that you are enjoying this story!  I will be updating this one very shortly.  I am trying first to write a (completed) story for the summer fan fiction challenge that is due on 8/15, but I have not forgotten this one.  The next chapter will (finally) involve the actual election and detail Justin and Tony waiting with their men for the results.  While they do, I intend to do a back story on how Fin and Tony met and fell in love.  I have been wanting to do that for some time.  If Fin wins, too, I have some definite ideas involved for the Governor's Mansion (wink, wink).

I'm so delighted that you are enjoying this story, Amy!  And I appreciate the extra effort you took to leave me feedback; that means a lot to me.  Thank you again - I will get this story updated again shortly.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 10:10 AM · On: Two Debbies?

Ok, first of all, I'm not sure the world is ready for another Debbie! LOL  And you had me laughing so hard when Alex bopped him on the head with the tray!  I've wanted to do that myself a few times!

Alex is right where she needs to be, and she's going to have all the love and support she could ever want or need.  She just has to allow herself to accept it.

Poor Justin.  I just want to give him a hug.  Brian too, because when Justin hurts, he hurts.

And we're finally at election day!  Was so proud when Fin made the decision to stand up for Justin instead of using the situation.  Finally Brian has a real parent who loves not only him, but his husband.

Now to get Fin in the Governor's mansion.....

Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  Yeah, I couldn't resist Alex giving her difficult diner a little whack of reality - ha!  I think Debbie can definitely relate to this one.;)  And speaking of the governor's mansion, as I told another reader ever since I saw a virtual tour online of the residence, I've had all sorts of delicious thoughts going through my mind.;) 

I'm so glad you're enjoying this story, Nita!  Thank you for all the encouraging comments; that is so motivating to me.;)  Take care and keep in touch.;) *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2013 09:23 AM · On: Alex

Well holy crap!  I miss a few chapters and when I come back you just blow me away with THIS shocker!  HER??????

I missed this!  Another great chapter (as usual).   So glad Justin has Brian, Fin, and Tony to support him because I have a feeling he's going to continue to need it.  And I have a feeling Alex is going to need SOMEBODY'S support since she's having to deal with Debbie! But then again, Debbie is probably exactly what she needs.

Ok, on to the next one.  One good thing about not reading for a while is you get more than one chapter when you finally get around to it! LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Nita - you ARE a few chapters behind - ha! So good to see you catching up.  You don't know how hard it was to write about Alex's character without giving that surprise away.;) And she's about to have some much-needed 'instructional' time with Debbie (poor kid - ha!). Thanks for reading this chapter and for the comments, my friend; I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Two Debbies?

Justin's observation and theory about Alex makes sense. I can see all the possibilities of emotional and physical trauma in her past. May Justin could be the one to get through to her.

I was glad Finn and Tony were back. I had missed them.

Side note:

I saw the new pics of Gale and Randy on your LJ. Its funny how they both looked as if they slept in their clothes (and possibly together). Randy looks more attractive the older he gets.

Thank you for the pics. I enjoyed them.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Just answered you over on FF.net about the other story.;) Thanks for taking the time to read and for the comments on this one, Sweetie.:)  If you like Tony and Fin (so do I), you'll probably like the next chapter, because I plan on Tony describing to Justin in more detail how they met and fell in love as they wait to hear about the election results.  I always wanted to go into more detail about that.:)

I still have quite a bit more to tell with this story, and after seeing the online virtual tour of the PA governor's mansion, I've got all sorts of other (wicked) ideas coming to mind - ha!

As for the con, yes, it was great to see Gale and Randy together on stage again after so long.  I'm glad you enjoyed the posts.  I should have one more post with photos of the con before I'm finished.  And BTW, I like your reason for why they slept in their clothes, too (wink, wink).  Sigh...they certainly do have a wonderful chemistry together...and that hug after dinner!:)  I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can. Thanks again, Sandra.  Have a great time on your vacation!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 03:23 AM · On: Two Debbies?

AM SO GLAD YOU ARE BACK--WHAT A BUSY BEE YOU ARE WITH ALL THE JOBS YOU DO. IT'S A WONDER YOU HAVE ANY TIME TO WRITE HA!! I KNOW YOU WERE AWAY OU HERE FOR YOUR FUN TRIP. LINDC TOLD ME TO GO TO YOUR SITE AND SEE PICTURES AND READ YOUR COMMENTS, IU SHALL DO THAT A LITTLE LATER. I HAVE BEEN SPENDING TIME WITH MY ROOMMATE LATELY HE HAS HAD SOME SICKNESS IN HIS FAMILY. THINGS ARE BETTER NOW SO I CAN BREATH A SIGH OF RELIEF. WE ARE ALL GOOD HERE WORKING HARD AS USUAL. OFF TODAY-GO IN TONIGHT AT TEN. AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE ELECTION-IT MUST BE RIGHT AROUND THE CORNER. WILL BE WAITING TO SEE IF FIN AND TONY GET MARRIED IN THE GOVERNOR'S HOUSE OR ON SOME CARIBBEAN ISLAND. HA!! LUV 2 U

Author's Response:

Aww...hi, Sweetheart!  I'm so happy to hear from you; your comments put a smile on my face.:) And I'm very glad to hear that things are going well for you at last.  Yes, the con was a lot of fun; so great to finally see Randy and Gale on stage together again, and between me and several other fans, we got a LOT of photos, too.;)  I managed to get one taken of Gale and Randy alone by the professional photographer in addition to me being in another picture, which I'm glad I did; it turned out great!:) 

I'll be going to NYC in early August to see Randy's new play; looking forward to that, too.  But I'm going to try hard in the meantime to crank up my story posting schedule.  Speaking of which, yes, the election is definitely coming up in the next chapter, and I plan on detailing more of how Fin and Tony first met, too.;)  

BTW, I noticed there's an virtual tour of the PA governor's mansion online; that's created all sorts of interesting scenarios in my head now that I've seen it - ha!  Tell your roommate I hope his family member continues to recover and that I will be thinking about him.  Take care of yourself, Lee, and keep in touch.  Love and Hugs back to you.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 08:12 AM · On: Two Debbies?

Tony and Fin are great.  Justin certainly seems to have sympathy for Alex - she's had a tough life.  Nothing makes you appreciate how good you have it until you meet someone worse off.  Nice story.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - no, don't send out the paramedics yet - LOL!  I'm one of those having problems with getting review notifications. I've sent Bob another email about it, but it's odd how I was getting them before, but am not now.  So I didn't know you had left a review.  Ugh.  Thanks for doing that, though.  I do love Tony & Fin's characters a lot; in fact, in the next chapter I will have Justin and Tony talking before the election, and Tony will be elaborating more on how he and Fin met and fell in love. I've been wanting to do a little backstory about that, so I think that will be the perfect opportunity.;)

 

I'm slowly getting back on track since returning from the con.  So glad I had the chance to go - and to meet you.:)  Thanks again.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 12:56 AM · On: Two Debbies?

thanks Kim, that's just what I needed. A good story. Now I've some writing to do for school.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend.:)  Loved the photo of Gale on the horse, BTW, too.;)  More writing?  Tell them that they're overworking you - ha!  Thanks for taking the time to comment; I was feeling a little lonely over here.;)  *Hugs* back ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2013 11:22 PM · On: Poetic Justice

Great chapter Kim, love it.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny - I'm glad you got a chance to read this latest chapter and enjoyed it.:)  I still have quite a bit more to cover yet, so I hope you'll bear with me.  I'll try my best to get this updated sooner rather than later this time.  I'm still trying to decide who Alex would best be left with.  I can see good and bad points to both possibilities.

Thanks again for taking the time to comment!  And now I'm (at last!) finally moving back over to "Parent Trap."  I have a lot of that finished, but I'm not quite there yet.  Not sure if I can finish that up in one chapter or not; will have to see how wordy I get - LOL!  Hope you are doing well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2013 11:26 PM · On: Poetic Justice

SORRY AM LATE-WENT OUT OF TOWN FOR A FEW DAYS TO VISIT FRIENDS.  THIS ALEX PERSON WILL PROBABLY WIND UP WITH THEM.  THEY AREN'T EQUIPPED TO HANDLE A GIRL, ALTHOUGH JUSTIN DOES HAVE A SISTER.  TIME WILL TELL WHERE YOU TAKE US WITH THIS SUB-PLOT.  WE NEED THE ELECTION NEXT CHAPTER HUH???  THEN A NICE BIG WEDDING TO MAKE TONY HAPPY.  LINDC SAYS SHE IS WAITING FOR PARENT TRAP.  I TOLD HER TO BE PATIENT AS YOU ARE STILL BUUUUUUUSY.  LUV 2 U.  "V" SAYS HI! 

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart! Always a treat to hear from you.:)  Tell "V" I said hello, too, and that I hope she's back to normal now.:)  Yes, I'm on the fence a little bit with who winds up with Alex.  It would make a lot of sense for the boys to get her eventually, especially with Brian being adopted himself. But on the other hand, Justin has his heart set on a baby.  I'll have to decide how I want to resolve that.  I could see Debbie with her as well.:) 

I do think the election will be in the next chapter, along with perhaps some more back story as to how Fin and Tony met.  I really like those characters, and would like to maybe use them again in another story in the future, if possible.  I still have quite a bit to tell here, though, so it will take me some time to complete this one.

Tell lindc I've got at least a third of Parent Trap done, maybe half.  I'm working on it, so it shouldn't be too much longer.  Tell everyone that I said hello, and keep in touch, Sweetie.:)  *Hugs* back to you, too.:)  Thanks for all the support and encouragement; that means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 07:34 AM · On: Poetic Justice

Very nice chapter. Intriguing turn that you've taken with this Alex storyline. I'm VERY curious as to why she trashed the hotel room.  Very sweet ending to the chapter. Thanx for updating!

Author's Response:

Hi, Jon!  Thank you for reading and for the comments, Sweetie; I appreciate that a lot.:)  Yes, this tale is setting itself up for a long ride still; at least I do see the election coming up soon, but it will only resolve part of the storyline.  I was glad to be able to emphasize more of the relationships between the two pairs here instead of some of the political melodrama that has been swirling around them so much. Because in the end, I think that is what drives the story, not all the political intrigue. 

Thank you again for taking the time to comment, Jon. I'll try my best not to let so much time lapse before the next update.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2013 03:30 PM · On: Poetic Justice

Wow!  Deb is going to whip miss thing into shape.  Alex's back story should be something.  I hope this foundling isn't going to become the boys child.  I somehow see them with a baby.  I guess that remains to be seen. I hope Tony and Fin get hitched at sometime in this story-maybe  after he becomes da GOV.  Lee is going to have a heart spasm when he finds out this is here.  He has gone out of town for a few days for a short vacation.  Everyone here is good and working hard.  BB is very busy..I think he is going to take some time off soon and visit his family back east.  I have been invited to Japan the end of May to take my vacation there and visit with my doctor friend.  My girlfriend wants to buy my ticket there.  She is a sweetie.  My shift is about over so off to bed. Take care and now on to Parent Trap?????  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc.  I can always count on you for support; that means so much to me.:)  Ha - foundling!  You've been talking to Hunter, haven't you?  Or rather, that was how Brian talked about Hunter that one time when he introduced him to Justin.  I tend to agree with you about Alex, but perhaps she could eventually be a sort of big sister somehow to a younger child.  I'll have to see how my muse takes me on that one.  I'm also toying with doing either a separate story or incorporating something into this story on how Fin and Tony met.  I have really grown to love those two characters, and would like to explore more of their background if there is enough interest. 

I would love to see Japan one day!  I'm sure it's a very intriguing country.  Sounds like your girlfriend is very special.:)  And yes, Parent Trap is up next for update.;) 

Thanks again, lindc, for everything, and please tell everyone I said hello and send them my warmest wishes.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Poetic Justice

Sweet happiness for all.  Well done.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Finally able to respond; last night the site wouldn't let me even get in here.  Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to leave me a comment; you know how much I appreciate that.  Looking forward to seeing you soon at the 'big event.'  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alice (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2013 07:56 AM · On: Alex

great story!!! i love your writting. i was just wondering did you reupdate this story after the server crash ? is just that i saw it as completed and after the crash it appears as incomplete. thank you a lot and keep up the good work. honestly there hasnt been a story you wrote to date that i didn't thorouthly enjoy.

Author's Response:

Hi, Alice!  Thank you for reading this story and for the comments.  You're very kind.:)  To answer your question, no, I am working on updating this story next.:)  I believe it was not impacted by the recent server crash on 2/18; it was last updated before that.  It is definitely still a work in progress and as far as I know it was always marked as incomplete.  I'm not sure how many chapters there will be to this, but I still have quite a bit left to tell, including Alex's fate, Justin's wish for a child, Tony's dream of being married to Fin, and the election itself.  So I hope you will continue to read along.  I promise it, like all my other stories, will, indeed, be finished.:)

Thank you again for the feedback; it really makes me happy to think that you are enjoying my stories.  I promise to update this again very soon, and I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 12:01 AM · On: Baskets, Baskets and More Baskets!

Well that was special - a balloon ride in Ireland. Weather permitting it would be a lot of fun, but it rains like Seattle there constantly.

Author's Response:

Hi, Bob!  You're probably right; I guess the Irish gods must have been smiling down on them, thinking they deserved some peace and happiness before all the s**t hits the fan!  Thanks as always for reading and for the time to comment, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:56 AM · On: You Know Me Too Well!

Brian has to accept the job. Fin needs him in the worse way. Looking forward to their return from Ireland.

Author's Response:

Hi, Bob! Well, it does seem like a good fit as well as a way for Brian and his father to bond.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story as you have time.  Thanks again for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 01:37 AM · On: Two Paths Begin Their Journey

Poor Fin and Tony; they are in for a bumpy ride. I always wanted to see Ireland. Gaelic is a beautiful language.

Author's Response:

Hi, Bob - you're so sweet to read and comment on this story.  I know it's difficult for you to read for long lengths of time, so please don't feel the need to rush through this.  Just the thought that you're reading it means a lot to me.  I, too, wish I could see Ireland; maybe one day.  It looks so beautiful.  And yes, Brian's father and his partner are in for a real roller coast ride, for sure.  Thanks again for choosing this one to read, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 09:36 PM · On: Beginnings

You bet I know about real life. And yes only 10 days missing till "B"day :)

Author's Response:

So envious!   Hope you have a wonderful time!   ~Kim;-)

Author's Response:

So envious!   Hope you have a wonderful time!   ~Kim;-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 11:06 AM · On: Alex

I was shocked speechless. Alex is a girl!???

Stewart was caught. Thank goodness.

I enjoyed the bickering of Alex, Brian, and Justin in the car.

"With those bird legs, I'm not surprised,"

LOL! I would have never guessed that Alex was a girl. I can’t wait to see what’s up your sleeve with this one.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  LOL - glad that I could pull off that surprise.;)  It was hard to keep writing in a neutral style, too, whenever I was writing for Alex to keep me from giving away her sex - ha!  I think this will be an interesting dynamic between Brian, Justin, and the girl.  It will be interesting to see what results from this eventually.  So glad you're enjoying the story!  Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment; I greatly appreciate that and will never take that for granted.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 07:36 AM · On: Alex

great surprise  alex a girl not a boy   that good thanku   kim

Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  So good to hear from you, my friend.  I'm glad you liked the little surprise at the end.;)  Now the boys will have to figure out how to handle her along with Debbie.  In the upcoming chapters, I'll be concentrating a lot more on the human side of the story just before the election.  I do hope you will continue to read along.  Thank you for reading this chapter and for the comments, Kim; I appreciate your thoughtfulness so much.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc &BB (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 05:31 AM · On: Alex

After toiling in the trenches for three days we finally have a day off.  Still not home yet, but hopefully soon.  Alex being a girl puts a whole different slant on things.-leave it to you to come up with the twists.  The boys don' t know much about pre-pubescent girls.  This should be very interesting. BB says hi! and they better send her to a charm school. HA!  I told him Brian can deal with her after all he has dealt with Justin and that's saying a mouth ful.  I guess we are off the campaign trail for a while-figuring out how to deal with an enigma called Alexandria.  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  Tell Brian I said hello.:)  And yes, you're right; I think if anyone can handle a wayward, rebellious child, it would be Brian. Although I probably wouldn't recommend the way he took care of his nephew, John, when he pushed his head into the toilet - ha!  I think your Brian has the right idea - but they'd probably kick her out of charm school.;)

Thanks as always for reading and for the comments; I know I sound like a broken record, but you will never know how appreciative I am of your constant support.  And now I am moving back to "Parent Trap."  I know a couple of guys who need to get better reacquainted. (wink, wink).  Hope you all have a good week!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Alex

Ooooh, plot twist with Alexandria.  Interesting turn of events.  Keep 'em coming.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend; it means a lot that you read and commented; thank you for that.  Glad I was able to throw in a curve ball there.;)  It was pretty difficult to write from Alex's perspective without giving away her sex.;)

I'll get this updated again as soon as I can; thank you for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

 

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 03:08 AM · On: Alex

well - didn't see that curve-ball coming at all - what a hoot! - glad to hear from these boys again

I so wish I could even think about coming to the reunion - I would so love that - but there is no way I can break away for it - I really would have loved to be able to meet face to face and chat for a bit - but I will be counting on you to tell me all about it

looking forward to the next chapter here - I wonder if Fin will realize and react to Brian having called him his father - that could be a rather tender moment... and...of course, both couples are in desperate need of a little...coupling...wink wink.

loving life,

Charle

Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  I wish you could be at the con, too!  Elke's arranging a fan meet and greet for that Thursday, and I would have loved to have seen you there.   I hope one day we can meet.  In the meantime, rest assured I will be loaded with two or three cameras and my netbook just like Lois Lane when I get there - ha!

Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the kind words, Charle; even after all these stories I've written, my rather fragile soul still needs the reassurance that my stories are still enjoyable. 

I agree with you about the story; I think that's why I dispatched Stewart rather handily in this chapter.  I want to concentrate more on the human aspect of this story, and the two couples' deepening feelings toward each other and their bond to each other.  And, of course, there's the situation regarding Alex, as well as Justin's hope for a child, Tony's wish to be married to Fin, and the election itself. So going forward I will probably be devoting more time to that and not so much to all the political drama, although that will obviously have to be a part of it.

Thank you again for all the support, Charle!  And I'm still holding out hope that we can meet face-to-face one day.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 01:17 AM · On: Alex

OMG Alex is a girl. That was really a surprise. But know I wanna read more of this story. KIM !! Sit behind your computer and write!!! NOW !! ... please.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny - you don't know how hard it was to write from her perspective without giving away that 'he' was a 'she,' either - LOL!  I'm glad you want to read more, too.  I will try to update again just as fast as I can, but I'm working on "Parent Trap" right now, since I know it's been a while since the last update on that one as well.

BTW - thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.  It gets discouraging at times when no one does that and makes you wonder if anyone is still out there reading.:/  I know I can't update as fast as I wish I could, but I do hope readers are still following it.  So I thank you for your thoughtfulness. Even with authors who have been writing for a while, they still need the feedback and encouragement.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: a longtime fan (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

OMG I so <3 this story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much!  (Love the user name, too, BTW).  It makes me happy to know how much you're enjoying this story!  Thank you for letting me know.   I see a lot more to this story, and I will update it again just as soon as possible.  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; I am very grateful for that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2012 03:27 AM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

      There is so much happening, but “The Moment” that Justin walked onto the stage to confront Craig is simply “The Moment,” at least to me.  What followed next was beautifully written, and very intense.  Some times it is hard to define a person, but to me, Craig is mean.  It doesn’t seem harsh enough, but I looked up its definition.  Some words used to define mean were:

             cruel, spiteful, malicious.

Yep, that defines Craig for me.  There are so many other things he should be doing rather than confront Fin, actually Justin.  Why isn’t he with his lawyers, accountants, and other professionals as he sure is in trouble.  He too has become irrational. 

     Finally, I am glad Brian is giving Alex another chance, or at least making an effort find out what happened.  From the initial time we met Alex, he just doesn’t sound like a kid who would do what it appears he did.

     Thanks for the chapter.

     DavidR

 

Author's Response:

Hi, David!  I'm glad to hear from you again.:)  Yes, I agree; I think it took a lot of courage for Justin to go out on that stage and confront his father, especially with all the crowd there and knowing that whatever he said would be broadcast all over the web and throughout the state.  I think, too, that Craig was, indeed, blinded by so much hatred and misplaced anger over what he perceived as a great injustice done to HIM that he didn't even stop to think about the consequences of his actions, nor does he realize that what he did may backfire on him.  I think he has finally put a face on the untold number of voters who choose not to look beyond Fin's sexuality and see the great leader that he has been for them and WOULD be for them as governor. 

I will be concentrating more going forward on not only the conclusion of the campaign, but also the more personal aspects of the story, such as Alex's troubling emotions, Fin and Tony's relationship, and the father-son dynamics between Fin and Brian.

I'll be updating this again soon.  Thank you for reading and for consistently reviewing this story; I am very appreciative.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:59 AM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

Wow!  This just keeps getting better and better.

Poor Justin!  Craig seriously needs to get over himself and his homophobia.  Nobody wants to hear it anymore, and it is seriously hurting his son.  So glad Brian got there just in time to support him when he needed it most.

I have a feeling Adam isn't done yet, but I hope he gets what's coming to him soon.

And Alex needs to shut his mouth and realize that he's about to experience the best thing that has ever happened to him.  He couldn't have dreamed any better people to have in his corner than Brian, Justin, Debbie and Jennifer.  He's about to learn what love really is.

Great job, Kim!  I didn't see any mistakes at all, but then I don't look for mistakes in your writing, I just enjoy every single word.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

BTW. I know you've posted a couple of one shots lately, and I promise I will eventually get caught up.  RL is still being a bitch and it has me way behind.  Sorry about that!

Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  OMG, I was just thinking about you today and wondering how you were!  I'm so happy to hear from you again, but very sorry to hear that RL is not treating you well.  I'm happy that you liked this chapter, however; I'm trying to tie up a few loose ends in the story, but still have quite a ways to go before it all ends.  Some things are winding down, but others are still just beginning in a way.  For example, there is a lot more to Alex than meets the eye, and I think both Debbie and Hunter will play a key role in breaking through that hard shell the kid has.  Stewart will be dealt with shortly; I feel he's pretty much caused as much havoc as I would like, and I'd prefer to start focusing more on the human aspect of the story and the relationships between the four men, Alex, Brian's grandparents, etc.  And there's that dream of Justin to be a father as well as Tony's hopes and dreams as well.  Whew!  I don't see this one ending fairly soon as you can imagine.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Nita!  Please stay in touch as you're able to and take care of yourself; I'll be thinking about you, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 04:54 AM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

My current favourite of your stories.  Another great chapter - not quite sure what you were worried about ...!  Look forward to the next instalment. A Sunday evening treat for those of us across the pond ... 

Author's Response:

Hi, Henri!  Thank you for those kind words, my friend; I appreciate that.:)  I don't know what it was about this chapter, but it just drove me nuts - ha!  So glad that you liked it, though.  Obviously Alex will be featured more in upcoming chapters as the election slowly drives towards its conclusion.  Something tells me that Craig may have just made a big mistake, though, with his vitrolic outburst.  There's still a lot for me to tell here, though, so I hope you'll hang on until I can flesh it all out.  Thanks again for reading and for the comments!  I'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 03:58 AM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

Hi Kim,

I really liked this chapter, but then again I can't think of anything that you've written that I *haven't* liked, ha. Way to go, Justin! bet Craig wishes he'd never shown his face now. Justin just showed everyone who the better man is, and he may have unknowingly helped Fin's campaign too. Great chapter : )

~*~ Hugs, Janet

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Thank you for trodding through that rather long chapter, my friend; hopefully I didn't throw a lot of boo-boos in there, although I did change some things around.  And I suspect you're correct; I think Craig may have just made a huge, logistical mistake, which would be poetic justice in my opinion.  Thanks for the feedback and all the support you give me, Janet.  I'm now moving onto "Parent Trap;" there're two stubborn men who need to hash out a number of things over there.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

Yeah!!! way to go Justin-tell that so called father s.o.b. off.  Have to give him chops for that one.  Who knew what hides in that body.  This was quite the chapter. Politics can be such a dirty world.  This kid Alex needs a good wake-up call and I think Brian may be just the one to do it with Debbie's help.  She can be a monster when needed.  Will have to see how that plays out.  I am Sam

Author's Response:

Hi, Sam!  I remember you, my friend.:) Thank you for reading this latest chapter of the story and for taking the time to comment; I appreciate that so much.  I'm glad you're enjoying this rather complex tale.  I still have a lot to cover with this one, so I hope you will be along for the rest of the ride, and I hope I can continue to entertain you with some other stories of mine as well.  Thanks again!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2012 10:32 PM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

I am enjoying this story a lot.  I like political situations so Lee turned me on to this one.  It has taken me a while to read up to this chapter.  Don't have a lot of spare time, but finally up to this one.  I read the prequel to this one as Lee said it would help me know the characters and how they came bout.  Good advice.  I guess he gets a little antsy and wants to read more of this one.  He says he goes on line every day to see if there are more chapters done.  He's quite a fan-I hope you know this.  He's  a riot.  I finally got to ride in"V" nice car.  You can eat off the floor.  He is very fastidious about this car.  I am Sam.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sam!  Thank you for the lovely words, my friend.:)  Lee is very special to me; and yes, this is his favorite story of mine.:)  I was going to suggest you read "Wedding Present," so I'm glad he already suggested that.  It DOES help to make a little more sense out of this one.  As you can see, there's a lot going on here, isn't there?  So it will take me some time to get to the finish on this one.  I'm delighted that you're enjoying it in the meantime, though. 

I've heard all about the famous "Vixen" - ha!  Sounds like a beautiful car.  Lee deserves much happiness, so I'm very thankful that he is with his friends out thereand is doing well .  And I'm grateful for readers such as you who give my stories a chance and like them.  Thank you very much!  I hope you will continue to enjoy some of my other stories. If I may suggest one, if you're looking for a humorous read and haven't read this one, one of my personal favorites to write was "Roughing It:  Adventures in the Great Beyond," where Justin finally talks Brian into going camping with somewhat disastrous results. You might enjoy that one.:)

Thank you again, Sam!  And tell Lee I'm working on the sequel to this one now, so hopefully it should only be a few days to go.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 10:07 AM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

     I am not ready to condemn the kid.  Last we saw him, it

sure seemed like he would be better off not causing any

problems. He had a place to stay, food, and even clothes.  Why

would he trash the hotel room?        

    We now have two enraged people, Craig and Stewart.  Both

are willing to do “ whatever” to cause harm to either or both

Brian and Finn.  Also, I have to wonder just how safe are Tony

and Justin?

    I am just curious if Brian had anything to do with hiding

Craig’s wife and baby daughter.  Justin now has a half sister,

he does have an interest in her well being.    

     Well – thanks for the chapter.  There are so many story

lines and places where who-knows-what could happen to

whoever.

    Thanks again,

    DavidR

Author's Response:

Hi, David!  I'm glad that you are still following this (long!) story.:)  As always, you take such time and thought with your responses; thank you for that.  I think you may be correct regarding Alex;  there will be more depth to this character than has been shown so far, so I hope you'll stay tuned.  I still have a lot to cover as you can tell with so many subplots occurring.  Thank you again for your thoughts and for reading; I really appreciate that!  I'll be updating this again just as soon as I can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: NONIE (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2012 09:44 AM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

Hello again.  I'm reviewing again.  Do you believe it.  I had to read a few chapters since I reviewed last.  Sorry have been quite busy working.  My next door neighbor has been quite sick.  I have been transporting her to doctors appts. and testing at the hospital.  Her family lives back east in Rhode Island so she doesn't have anyone here that she trusts.  That's me I guess.  Between work and seeing to her needs I haven't had much time.  On to this story--I wonder how you think up all these plots and how they morph into other plots.  It's amazing how you keep everything on an even keel.  I'm just impressed by the detail in every chapter.  This one in particular was super I was totally engrossed and sorry when it ended.  I am quite political and watch all the debates or tape them if I'm working.  I like how Brian and Fin are bonding.  They are so much alike, and Justin and Tony are like two peas in a pod.  Will be waiting to see how this all pans out.  I think this story will be a long one.  Just wanted you to know I have read the beginning of some stories here and lost interest.  You, my friend, are the best one here.  Guess it's time to get my beauty sleep1  Ha!

Author's Response:

Hi, Nonie, my friend; so wonderful of you to take time out of such a busy schedule to read this story and leave me feedback!  I appreciate that very much.  You and your friends never cease to amaze me with your compassion; that is great of you to help out your neighbor that way.  Too often nowadays people don't seem to want to get involved or even to know their neighbors; if they did, perhaps a lot of stress and strife would be avoided.  So I really applaud you for that.

I'm so delighted that you're enjoying this story!  It is rather timely right now, and I paid close attention to the recent debate, since the style will closely mimic what the next debate between Fin and Whittle will be like.  And yes, this story will take me quite a while yet to flesh out and complete, so I hope I can continue to entertain you with it.:)  I have to move on temporarily now to the scheming twins and their stubborn dads in "Parent Trap," but I WILL be returning to this one shortly.  Thank you again for all the wonderful support.  Oh, and start thinking up names for Lee's new wheels - the contest is on - ha!  Take care.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:19 PM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

I think this is quickly becoming my favorite story by you : ) Justin and Tony are going to become very close friends by the time this is all over (HA- but not *That* close).

Laurie has finally come to her senses but of course, Craig is blaming Brian and Fin.

Alex trashing the hotel room then taking off, I have a feeling there's more to that though. Then Turner offs himself, what a coward! Great update as always.

The power company is shutting off the power for maintenance, naturally we didn't find out until this morning. I'm trying to get as much done on HIPS as possible. Hopefully I can get it posted today, I'm not sure.~*~ Hugs, Janet

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - well, you'll just have to rush off to the library where they have internet service - ha!  Seriously, I'm sorry to hear about your woes; I am really anticipating the rest of your story.  And yes, Brian will be having another encounter with Alex coming up, but not before bad ass Craig shows up again - ugh! 

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story!  Thanks so much for all the wonderful feedback and the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 11:43 AM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

Jesus, hon, talk about a one-two punch!! First, Alex ripping Brian off and then taking off, and then Turner!! Talk about a coward. And Craig just needs to go away...or to prison, I'm not picky! I loved Justin and Tony's talk about marriage and family. Hmm...my imagination is going in weird directions now...

Griping chapter, sweetie!! I'm not going to have any nails left by the time this is finished. BTW, are you planning on timing the end of the story with the real election?

Author's Response:

Hi, Megan!  If only I COULD end it by then!  It seems larger than War and Peace by now - ha!  Sigh.. I don't realistically see any way how I could do that, although it would be great if I could.  I need to stop and devote more time to the other two WIPs for a while, so there's just no way I could see being able to do that.  It would have been a great tie-in, though, and I spent a few minutes last night observing  the format of last night's debate, since it will be pretty similar to the debate between Fin and Dean.  Craig will be creating some controversy there coming up, but he may just get surprised by the counteroffensive. 

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review; I do appreciate that so much, Megan.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:53 AM · On: New Challenges, New Twists

It's nice to hear Justin's recollections of his feelings for Brian through the years. 

And now some more drama... oooohhh.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Thank you, dear friend, for your thoughts.  Yes, more drama!  Craig may just be in for a bit of a surprise, though; he's not going there to confront a bunch of wimps. And there is nothing scarier than a man defending his soulmate like a tiger defending its cub!  And Alex isn't done tormenting Brian, either, but there will be some surprises there as well.  Thanks again for reading and for your comments; I really appreciate that!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 01:33 PM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

OMG, I totally forgot to review this! I knew the baby issue would come up and I liked how you handled it. Brian didn't say yes, didn't say no. I'm not sure canon!Brian would agree to another child, as much as he loves Justin. I think them taking in Alex would be a good compromise.

And now Adam's out?! *shudders* Even with the extra security, I think Justin and Tony are right to be scared.

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2012 11:17 AM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

I still hope that Alex will be the “baby” that Justin gets. There are already so many stories where Justin biologically fathers a child (in around 75% of cases it will be a girl, Daphne is the biological mother appoximately 50% of the time and there is a 25% chance that the girl will be called Briana!) but I can’t think off hand of another story where Brian and Justin adopt an older child so that would be a refreshing change.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa!  THANK YOU for reading and for the thoughtful comments!  Ha!  I had to laugh at your synopsis of the typical "Justin as a father" stories - unfortunately, in more cases than none you are absolutely correct (I'm somewhat guilty of that myself, although I would NOT name a child "Briana" - I think that has been used WAY too much by now!).  Anyway, Alex will be making another appearance in the next chapter, and not exactly in a good way - at least initially.  And there will definitely be some surprises along the way regarding that character.  So I hope I can continue to make that aspect of this story a little different than most.:)

I'm working on the next update to this now - it was actually supposed to be part of this chapter, but I went ahead and posted the first part to get it updated.  So it shouldn't be too long before the next part is finished.  Thank you again for reading and taking the time to comment; that is greatly appreciated and keeps me motivated to keep writing.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2012 03:41 AM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

Great chapter Kim. thanks.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Marny!  I've missed you; hope everything is okay and my story isn't starting to get too predictable.:/  I'm glad to hear from you; hope everything is well on your end, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: yoshrock10 (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

ok I know I have already reviewed this chapter but what the hell, great update! I 

 can not wait to read what your evil mind came up with for the next part!

 

BTW- I really liked the previous picture you had for this story, I like the photos 

Where randy is really young, like from the show. why did you change it? 

Either way, I love all the beautiful photos you have for each story. And again, amazing

update! 

 

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - I'll never complain about getting duplicate feedback.:)  I have most of the next chapter already written, so it shouldn't be too long now.  As far as the banner goes, I'm sorry if I disappointed you with the new one.  I may go back to the old one and tweak it a little; I wasn't too happy with some of the positioning in that one, and I thought that in light of the timeline in this story that they should look older.  But I'll take what you said into consideration.  Thanks again for reading and for your support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

Hi Kim,Oops, well I’m late to the party as usual, LOL where’s the margaritas? Oh man I’d hate to be Craig right now, Brian is going to kick his butt up between his ears eventually, poor Justin!

 

I’m glad Brian didn’t give Justin a definite “no fu**king way” when Justin told him about wanting a baby, Ha- I can already see a blond haired, blue eyed, Justin mini-me, even though I think it will be along time in coming.  

 

I also have a feeling now that Adam Stewart is out of jail; Fin, Tony, Brian and Justin haven’t seen the last of him. As Benton said “the guy sounds like a real lunatic”. Great update and looking forward to more, my friend : )

~*~ Hugs, Janet

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Not too late - just posted this yesterday, and it's been pretty quiet lately.  So I appreciate you taking the time to leave me feedback.  Yes, both Adam and Craig are not slinking away quietly into the night, but Craig may actually wind up being the worst of the two, at least when it comes to the four men.  I think it would be unrealistic to have Adam come stalking back now, but that's not to say that he won't still create some problems.  (How's that for a tease?  LOL!).

I have much of the next part of this written, so it shouldn't be too long before I can post the next update; then it's onto "Parent Trap."  Thanks again for the comments, Janet; and congrats on the wonderful response to your first story post on here!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Justin's Dream Laid Bare

GOOD BUILD UP  FOR WHAT I KNOW IS COMING.  GOD THE PRESSURE.  I LOVE IT. POLITICS IS SUCH A DIRTY GAME, DON'T KNOW HOW ANYONE WANTS TO RUN FOR GOVERNOR OR PRESIDENT, SUCH A THANKLESS JOB FOR NOT THAT MUCH MONEY.  THIS STORY IS QUITE ON TOPIC NOW AS WE WAIT FOR THE BIG ONE COMING UP.  HAVEN'T REALLY MADE UP MY MIND YET.  I DID REGISTER THOUGH.  I'M REALLY GLAD THIS CHAPTER IS HERE.  LINDC HASN'T READ IT YET I THINK.  SHE WAS TALKING A WHILE AGO ABOUT THE BABY PLOT.  SHE WILL BE GLAD IT WAS DISCUSSED.  BRIAN WILL BE ON BOARD AS HE GIVES IN TO JUSTIN WHATEVER HE WANTS.  MUST BE NICE TO HAVE A SPOUSE LIKE THAT.  WELL I'M OFF TO WORK.  LUV 2 U.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart! Yes, I think you beat lindc this time - LOL!  I wanted to put up what I had so far, since I knew it had been so long since I had updated.  There may yet be a few surprises along the way; in fact, I can guarantee it (wink, wink).  I still have quite a bit more to tell yet, so I hope you and the others will bear with me.:)  I have quite a bit more of the next part already written, so it shouldn't take too long before it's up.  Thanks for all your support, Lee; you really are special, my friend.:)  *Hugs* and love to you, too.:)  ~Kim

Oh, and yes, another new banner! I thought it was time to change things up a little.:)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2012 07:44 AM · On: Dead to Me

Hope!! I hope Laurie divorces Craig and takes the mony. Or maybe takes the company and leaves Craig to rot in jail. Great chapter. 1 week left, lok forward to meeting you and seeing QWAN.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 05:42 AM · On: Dead to Me

brilliant - this take down of Craig is long overdue - and the hurt for Justin, not to mention Brian - well it breaks my heart - yet the love between them is still so poignant and breathtaking - 

the little moment between Jsutin and Gus was especially endearing - and I bet will set the tone when the 'let's be dads' talk begins - Brian is learning so much about fatherhood from those on either side of his generation - and watching Justin love his son warms his heart more and more as he forges his relationship with his son...and his dad

great story telling - thanks Kim

Charle

Author's Response:

Hi, Charle!  Thank you for your kind words and for reading, Sweetheart.:)  You said that very well about how Brian is not only learning what it means to be a son but a father as well.  Poor Justin's father is worse, I think, than Jack Kinney was, and that's saying a lot!  Obviously there is still a lot more of this story to tell - so many angles; what was I thinking??? Ha!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter.  I'm just sorry it took me so long to update it!  Thank you for all you support, Charle; that means the word to me!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 12:44 AM · On: Dead to Me

Sadly, it doesn’t appear that this is over for Justin.  Had it been, I could see him back at Britin, feet up on the kitchen table, having the cookies & cream ice cream cones with Gus.  Craig, a total sleaze bag, held the honored title of father, and ruined it. Emotions run deep, and often not logical.  I don’t know if this could ever really end for Justin, no matter how much he tries, no matter what he claims.

 

Just exactly what did Craig do this time?  He contributed to Turner’s campaign.  That was his right to do so, though he broke the law with the amount he contributed.  Yes, it was done, not for the benefit of Turner, but as an aggressive act towards both Justin and I believe more so towards Brian.  Still, I don’t think it was necessary to destroy the man.  I could see possible jail time for Craig, (maybe?), as he should be getting a visit from a couple of IRA agents soon.  It is impossible to defend Craig, but to destroy him?  I don’t think that is necessary.

 

Once again, thanks for this great story.

DavidR 

 

Author's Response:

Hi, David!  You always impress me with the thoughtfulness you put into your comments; I thank you sincerely for that.:)  And I thank you for still following along on this rather convulated story.  I tend to agree with you - Craig is certainly not a sympathetic character, and Justin may SAY that he has cut all ties to his father and now considers him as good as dead, but deep down he is still his father.  So perhaps he may have some influence in what does or doesn't happen to him.  However, as you pointed out, it is a legal matter now, and his punishment may not be up to Justin to decide.  Craig may just have some other tricks up his sleeve as well...hmm...

I will update this story again just as soon as possilble; there is still a lot left to say here.  Thank you again for your constant support of this story, David!  I am very grateful for that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: kim36 (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2012 04:16 PM · On: Dead to Me

i love this story im imprest what u did to graig taylor he is a arss i love justin i the story and update soon please kim

Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story, my friend!  I know there's a lot of stories to read on the site right now, so I thank you sincerely for taking the time to read mine and to leave me your thoughts.:)  I appreciate that so much!  There's still quite a bit to tell of this, so I hope you will continue to enjoy it, and I promise to update it regularly.  Thank you again, Kim!  (You know you have my favorite name, too - ha!)

*Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 10:47 AM · On: Dead to Me

God, I think this is first time you've made me cry! Poor Justin! Holding out all that hope and then have it finally over once and for all. Craig really is the loser in this and I hope he gets nailed (and not in a good way!) I feel sorry for his wife. Thank God Justin has Brian. Hopefully they can concentrate on the campaign now.

Author's Response:

Hi, Megan!  Sorry I made you cry, but in a way I'm flattered that it affected you so much.  I know that Justin had held out hope that things would improve with his father, but I think it's important now that he realizes that is not going to happen so he can concentrate, instead, on those people that DO love him.  And I do think that he will throw himself now not only into the campaign, but probably with some paintings as well, since that seems to be the typical way that he expresses his emotions, whether postive or negative. 

 

Thank you for being so faithful in reading and reviewing my stories, Megan!  I know you have a choice (and a wide one, at that) of which stories to spend your time with on here, and I am extremely grateful that you consistently make time to do that with mine.  I hope that I can continue to write stories that you enjoy.  I will get this one updated again as soon as possible.  Thank you again, Megan.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Dead to Me

Thank you! I've been missing this story so much. The pain that Justin is in right now is so real and raw. I love the real, honest portrayal of the relationship between Brian and Justin. It is in no way one sided, not sappy, not storybook... it's real.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Again, thanks.

Roni

Author's Response:

Hi, Roni!  Thank YOU for those lovely comments and for being so supportive of my stories, my friend.  I'm sorry there's been such a long delay in updating this one - I knew it needed to be updated in the worst way, so I'm glad that it didn't disappoint.  (Darn Randy - if he would just quit doing so much performing lately he wouldn't distract me - ha!).  Anyway, I appreciate your comments very much, and I agree.  I wanted to show Brian as a more mature character in this story and one that evolves, but hopefully not one that has changed unrealistically.  I see him as more open regarding his feelings with Justin, but still having some of the hard-edged character traits that he has always had.  And I think he above everyone else would know what Justin did - or didn't - need in this chapter, and would know when to be involved and not be involved with his husband's confrontation with his father.

I will try my best to get this updated again sooner rather than later!  Thank you for your patience and for being so supportive of my stories!  I know it's hard find time to be an author (and a good one, too, I might add!) as well as a reader, so the fact that you took the time out of your own writing schedule to read this chapter means a lot to me!  Oh, and if I didn't say so before, CONGRATS on the blue ribbon to your story!  I'm sure there will be a lot more of those to come.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Taylor (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 06:31 PM · On: What is a Real Family?

Taylor here again.  Had to leave another review.  This is so much fun, I must say.  Read, review and have feed back from your review.  Lovely concept.  This story is very interesting as to the way things are worded and described.  I really like the comraderie among the four leading men.  It leads one to believe the duos are cut from the same cloth.  I makes one wonder, tho, how Justin is such a nice man considering his father's on-going repulsion of him.  I truly hope he and Justin have a set-to and Justin wins.  What is the significance of the blue ribbon for this story?  Do the readers have a say in it's being here?  I f that is true your fan base truly admires and cares deeply for your stories.  The more I read on this site the more I am enjoying it.  I guess I am really naive in a way.  Will be going home for a few days as me mum's missing me so have to show my face.  She's gotten me and my friend there tickets to the Queen concert in London on Saturday next.  Cheerio for now.

Author's Response:

Hi, Taylor!  Thank you so much for your comments, my friend!  That means a lot to me whenever readers take the time to let me know that they are  enjoying my stories.:)  I'm assuming you have already read the prequel (forgive me for not remembering if you mentioned it before).  It doesn't have to be read to understand this one, but it does provide a lot of the back story for this sequel.:)

As far as Justin winding up with the character traits that he has, the only thing I can think of is that he took after his mother.  I find it hard to believe that Craig wasn't this driven, ambitious, harsh, and judgmental person from the beginning, even before he found out about Justin's sexuality.  He didn't just become that overnight, although I think he did care about his children perhaps when they were a lot younger, which I alluded to in previous chapters when Justin was doing some reminiscing about his childhood.  I think you will be satisfied with how Justin handles this latest revelation.  I feel it's important that HE be the one to conduct this battle and confront his father, sort of like closing a painful chapter in his life. Sad, but I don't see any other outcome in this case, unfortunately.

And the similarities between the two couples are intentional; obviously it's not a stretch to think that Fin and Brian would be a lot alike, but I also wanted Tony and Justin to forge a friendship.  I think with two very strong men as their partners, they NEED that comaraderie.

You asked about the blue ribbons - probably the best way to answer that is to quote the actual description from the website - it's under the categories section:

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Blue Ribbon Award required. All fan fictions will be in this category if featured until we have more different kinds of stories. Only an Administrator can award featured status to a story. Featured status is based on very good writing, imagination, grammar and spelling, readers' response, and sometimes we will reward an author that is making very significant improvement and we want to motivate them to keep going because we see real promise in their work. Only completed stories will be awarded featured status. A few are still not finished and they are allowed to keep their ribbons with timely updates.

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So while readers can't actually award the ribbons, I DO know that both comments received as well as suggestions for a nominee are taken into consideration.  I have emailed the admins from time to time myself when I felt that someone's story is worth a look for a possible ribbon; sometimes they agree and sometimes they don't.  But I do know they are excellent at both listening to your opinion and following through on issues if any arise.  That is what makes this site so phenomenal IMO.

Again, thank you for the wonderful feedback, Taylor!  I hope I can continue to provide you with stories that you enjoy.  And I hope you have a safe and wonderful time in London!  Take care.  *Hugs*

~Kim

 

Reviewer: NONIE (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2012 08:50 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

HI!  I'M HERE AGAIN.  I JUST WANT TO SAY I LOVE KATHY AND SEAN.  SUCH A WONDERFULLY SWEET FUNNY COUPLE.  I HOPE JUSTIN DISCUSSES THE BABY ISSUE SOON.  I THINK THEY,(TOGETHER) WOULD BE GREAT PARENTS TO THEIR OWN CHILD.  JUSTIN LOVES GUS LIKE HIS OWN SO HAVING ANOTHER CHILD WOULD BE AN ADDED CEMENTING OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP.  GUESS THAT'S A LITTLE CORNY , BUT THAT'S ME ROMANTIC AND CORNY.  THIS FALL-OUT BETWEEN JUSTIN AND HIS FATHER IS GOING TO BE DOWN AND DIRTY AND UNFORGIVING I THINK.  THIS WAS A VERY ABSORBING CHAPTER.  TA!

Author's Response:

Hi, Nonie, Sweetheart!  So great to know that you're still reading along.:)  I'm trying to focus a little more right now on the family aspect of the plot, while interweaving the political story into it as well, because my motivation at the beginning was to concentrate on Fin and Brian's changing relationship since they first met.  Of course, as you know there's a lot of other issues going on here as well, including Justin and Craig's relationship and the 'baby' issue.  Add in Alex and Fin and Tony's relationship to the mix, and you have several elements I will need to wrap up before it's all said and done.

Yes, I fear that the next meeting between Justin and Craig will NOT be a happy one - there's no way that it could be.  As often happens in real life, though, sometimes your closest 'family' isn't always your biological one, and Justin will continue to need their love and support coming up.

Thank you so much for your ongoing encouragement, Nonie!  I appreciate that so much.  I will get this story updated again very soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 12:49 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

Just wondering if you would do me a little favor and go on line to adam lambert at the kirby center in wilkes barre to view songs from his new cd trespassing and give me a review.  i would be interested to see what you think. lol

Author's Response:

So I'm reviewing now, too?  LOL! I'll take a look as soon as I can catch a breather - I'm doing some beta work right now for another author - but I'll check it out and let you know.:)  I really wish I had a private email for you, my friend!  But that's okay - I'll figure out a way to include it somewhere else.")  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:52 PM · On: What is a Real Family?

OMG! OMG! Randy is at the Colonial Aug 20, one night only in a play. Sure, now I'm here-he is there.  I am grief stricken. fyi-you probably know already.  Nice picture of him at a picnic table-think I've seen that one before--soooo cute. lol

Author's Response:

Hm.....I have no idea what you're referring....No, actually I have a confession to make.  I not only knew about it, but I already have the ticket and travel arrangements made to go see it...I just couldn't help it - he's like an incurable disease or something - ha!  Look at it this way, though - you're out in CA where Gale is - would DIE to see HIM in a play.  If he ever does another one, I will have to try my best to come out and see him (hopefully it will be in the summer though).  Thanks for the heads up on Randy - I appreciate that. It's supposed to be very funny - can't wait to see it!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2012 05:19 PM · On: What is a Real Family?

Hi there!  Semes I have been out of the loop lately. So busy with commonality.  This chapter was a great relase from all the tension, but it reared it's nasty head again at the end.  I knew Craig wouldn't go away peacefully.  Poor Justin, it never seems to end for him.  I really like the way the four of them get along makes it so much easier when they are fighting for the same cause.  The baby issue raises it's head again.  Will be very interesting to see what Brian thinks about that.  Seems they are a little busy to get fired up about a baby at this point.  Maybe Brian will find his notebook with the sketches------huh???  stranger things have happened in your muses head  Hee!  My life is a liitle angst filled at the present.  I am single again--long story.  Some day I'll fill yo in.  It's still a little raw at the moment.  I might just move again to Cal.  The peeps want me to come and work with them agin.  Don't know yet.  Have to get a job again and all that bs.  We'll see. luv 2 u.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lee!  I'm so sorry to hear about you and your fiancee, Sweetheart.  I'm sure you're going through a difficult time right now.  And while it may sound trite (I don't mean it to be), I do believe that things happen for a reason.  We may not understand it at the time, but I do believe that.  BTW - if you ever want to email me privately (since everyone can read this), don't ever hesitate to do that.  You can click on the 'authors' button at the top of the screen and send me a message that way.:)

I know it would be another big change for you to move to California, but I know that lindc (and I'm sure Brian) both miss you terribly, and it would give you some much-needed moral support, too, so perhaps it's something you should think about. Only you can decide what's best, though.:)

I'm glad you're still enjoying your favorite story.:)  And I do like the way that the two couples are bonding with each other; I particularly like the friendship between Justin and Tony - I see a lot of similarities in them (it sounds like I'm reviewing my OWN story here - ha!).  As far as Justin's wish for a child, yes, that will factor in pretty significantly in the chapters ahead, but things may not occur in the way that he believes...

I may just have to accelerate my new story for you that I'm writing to cheer you up, Sweetie;  I'm trying my best not to post it until I have it completely written, though, but Tricky's about to make a return appearance for summer vacation and I think you could use a little more humor.  Hang in there, dear friend; things WILL get better.  And any time you want to drop me a private line, I would be happy to hear from you.  You're very special to me, you know.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 10:35 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

If Brian and Justin do end up having a child I hope it’s
Alex rather than a baby.  Alex needs
parents and Justin wants a child. It sounds like a win win situation to me.
Also it would continue the adoption theme which is an important part of this
story. You mentioned that there would be some surprises about Alex which makes
me wonder about a few things. I just hope he’s not going to turn out to be
Justin’s long lost biological child (I’m not sure how old Alex is supposed to
be) – that would be too soap opera- ish.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa! Thanks so much for reading and for your thoughtful comments.  No, I can assure you - Alex will NOT be Justin's long-lost child - ha!  I hadn't thought of that (thankfully).  Nothing quite THAT dramatic as far as surprises go.  I deliberately haven't given away a lot of info yet about Alex, including the age, so I hope you'll bear with me until I reveal that and some more information about the character.:) 

There's still a lot of loose ends to tie up here; I agree, BTW, with your thoughts about adoption being an important theme in this story, and it will have a bearing later on in the plot.:)

Thank you again for reading and for the feedback!  I hope you will continue to enjoy it.:) *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:01 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

Poor Justin. Of course homophobe-ass Craig would be one of Turner's supporters. Wonder if Justin and Brian will have the baby conversation sooner rather than later. And what about our little waif Alex? Plot thickens...

BTW, I totally want that patio grill/kitchen!

Author's Response:

Hi, Megan, my friend!  Yeah, me, too - my mom wants one of those, also, to go out on her back porch.:)  It seems very 'Brian' to me, doesn't it?? 

Yes, there is still a lot of subplots in this story to be addressed yet, but I feel like I'm slowly getting there...Justin will be quite hurt as well as angry by this latest chain of events.  He still harbored some hope, I think, that somehow things would improve with his father.  But I think this wil be the proverbial "nail in the coffin" now...I think he will be first in line to confront his father.  Whether it will do any good, though, remains to be seen.  And Alex will be making a return appearance soon, don't worry.  I haven't forgotten our little guest star...:)

Thanks as always for the comments and for reading, Megan; when things seem on the slow side, I can always count on you for your feedback, my friend, and I greatly appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 10:50 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

I love how Justin yearns for a child of his own.  So sweet.  And, is it any surprise that Craig Taylor supports the oppostion?   What a ... well, anyway.

Good story.  Keep it coming.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetheart, for reading and for the encouragement!  Glad you're still following along on it.  And yes, no surprise that Craig is involved on the wrong team once again.  I do see a big blowup coming up between father and son - and I'm NOT talking about Fin and Brian here, either.:)  Thanks for the comments!  I'll be getting this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2012 03:48 AM · On: What is a Real Family?

I always love the pictures you include. My husband would die for that grill.

This domesticated Brian (in apron, no less) is just as sexy as the club boy Brian. I love reading about him that way or the Brian on the verge of becoming more monogamous. I re-read “I Don’t”  last night so I guess that’s why I’m digressing, LOL. On to this story:

I get excited whenever I see an update for any of your stories. I read this early this morning after getting a drink of water and before going back to bed.  I couldn’t wait. Gus was a delight as usual and the Hide and Seek game he played with Justin only reinforced that Justin would make a great father.  I know he is one already with Gus, but as Jennifer could see, he longed to have one of his own to raise.  I didn’t think about Justin possibly having fears about asking Brian about having more children. I could see that being a very legitimate fear. The conversation Justin had with Jennifer was very enlightening.

I was hoping the conversation with Danny was going to be a little more enlightening, LOL. There has got to be more than Craig being involved in financing Turner’s campaign. I can’t believe you left it there. I kept scrolling down the page thinking it had to be more written but just further down the page.

PLEASE tell me you are updating soon!

SandraJ

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  You're very sweet with your comments and your ongoing support - thank you for that!  I am so honored by your anticipating updates to my stories, and it is very encouraging to me.:)

You know well by now, I'm sure, how I love to include Gus, and I thought this was a cute way for Justin's secret to be revealed to his mother.  Plus, I also like to include interaction between mother and son - I adored their relationship on the show and how it deepened as time went on and how she came to accept - and love - Brian.  I can still remember that comment she made to him when he gave her liquor to wash down a pill in Season 5:  "What, do I look like Judy Garland?"  Hilarious!

There WILL be more information Danny will share with Justin in the next chapter, and yes, I know, as usual I left it a horrible spot, didn't I?  Sorry about that.  But I AM able to update faster right now with me not teaching for a few more weeks, so that should help ensure that I get this updated a little quicker if that's any comfort.  As a writer, though, I can't think of a better compliment than the fact that I left you wanting more, even though from your standpoint I can certainly understand the frustration.;)

Thank you again for the wonderful comments, Sandra!  Oh, and just an FYI - I hope you like Tricky, because he's about to make a return engagement soon (hint, hint).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 12:11 AM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

      Alex?  That definitely adds – I don’t know what -- to

this story.  I have to wonder where we are going with

him.  I must admit, that a little diversion from the anger

and hate of Turner,  Stewart, Stockwell, Craig is nice .  I

did enjoy the conversation where Brian told Justin about

Alex.  Like Justin, I too am just a little skeptical of Alex’s

story, but I agree, it really doesn’t matter much (at this

point).  I too am not at all surprised what a kind and

caring man Brian is.

    Will Debbie get a new ‘lost boy’?

    Will Gus get an older brother?

    Will Fin and Tony get married and raise a kid (Alex?).

And I can think of a ten other possibilities, which of

course no reply from you expected.  As always, let the

story unfold.  Of course, Finn is still running for

Governor, I haven’t forgotten.

 

     Thanks for the chapter.

     David R

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi, David!  So happy to see you still reading this story! Thank you for the insightful comments, my friend.  Yes, there is a lot still to tell here; I am gradually moving the action more toward the Pitts and Harrisburg to delve a little more into some of the other subplots running through the story.  And Alex will be a surprise in some ways as well.:)  Thank you for the comments; they are always so thought provoking.  I hope you continue to enjoy Fin's race for governor; I think he has a legitimate competitor now.  This is up next for update, so it shouldn't be too long now.  Thank you again for all your support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 09:58 PM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

Aaggrrr why don't you show us ... Kim !!

 

I think Brian and Justin are becoming parents of a boy named Alex.

 

Thanks for this very very very long chapter, love it.

 

* hugs *

 

Author's Response:

Lol!  As Obi-Wan's mentor used to say, Patience, Padawan - ha!  You might be a little surprised with where I go with Alex - I have to have SOME surprises here and there!  I'm glad you had a chance to read this rather long chapter, my friend; there are so many new - and talented - writers spewing out stories over here that mine pretty much got pushed to the second page in no time, so I'm glad you rooted it out.:)

I'm working on the next part of "Parent Trap" right now; and yes, I know I've been saying that for a couple of days now, but I DO have about 10,600 words of it written with more to go!  So it's a good thing I broke it up...I'll have it posted very soon, though.:)  Thanks again for all the kind words, Marny - I'll expect another 'happy dance' out of you hopefully in the near future - LOL!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

Story is progressing nicely.  Maybe now Brian sees why Michael took in Hunter.  Love the scenes with B & J.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thanks as always for the comments and for reading - been a little slow review wise for this chapter.:  So I appreciate you taking the time to leave me feedback.:)

I'm working on the next chapter of "Parent Trap."  May post the first part later today if my beta has time to look it over for me.  Thanks again for reading!:)  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindac &Nonie (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2012 07:12 PM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

Hey girl, what an interesting chapter, so much in it.  loved it.  Nonie hadn't read this story soooo she saw the update and went back and read it from the beginning. Needless to say she was talking about it for an hour.  I told her she should have read wedding present first so she would understand the premise.  She said she thinks it stands alone, but she will read wedding present soon.  I think Alex is an interesting addition.  Wonder where this will go.  Guess we will just hasve to wait and see.  Things are progressing here finally got all the t's crossed and i's dotted.  Had a bunch of paperwork to fill out and more physical checkups to go through.  I guess it's standard practice here before one starts work. The powers that be want me later in the year to teach some up and coming newbies details of or work.  This should be interesting as i have done some in the past.  I guess someone told them.  I wonder who that was.  I wanted to start work Monday, but had all this paperwork and crap to do first-so now it will be next Monday.  I have itchy feet and want to get started. BB started yesterday.  H e came over last night to fill me in on all the pertinent stuff.  He feels he will like it as he has met some friends there.  Ihave to go shopping now to get new perky scrubs to wear.  I have to be fashionable now I'm in the "in crowd". hee hee!! LOL

Author's Response:

LOL!  Love your running commentary on the new job, lindc!  I'm so glad that things are moving along for you and Brian.  Sounds like Lee really misses you guys, but he mentioned maybe doing some Skyping and I'm sure knowing all of you, you will all keep in touch somehow.  You know I wish you all the best!

I'm glad, also, that Nonie is checking this story out, too; it would make more sense to read "Wedding Present" first to get some of the background and a better feel especially for Tony and Fin, but I suppose with the synopsis I gave at the beginning that as she said it could be read by itself.  I'm happy that she's enjoying it.  Knowing you, I have a feeling that once you start working at the new place there might be some new 'peeps' joining the fold, too.:)  I would love that as you know.:)

Thanks again for all the support; when things are quiet around here, it is encouragement from readers such as you, Lee, and Brian, along with the other faithful ones, that keep me going.  Let me know how everything's going!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2012 05:58 AM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

WELL GUESS WHO IT IS.  I JUST GOT HOME FROM WORK, DAYS NOW. THANK GOD.  THOUGHT I'D GET CAUGHT UP ON MY READING AS I HAD A COUPLE HOURS OF QUIET TIME.  IT IS QUITE WARM AND HAPPY HERE.  I AM A FREAK I GUESS AS I LOVE HOT STICKY WEATHER.  WE HAVE RENTED A NICE CONDO-SMALL AND CLOSE TO OUR WORK.  WE HAVEN'T TIED THE KNOT YET-MAYBE LATER THIS YEAR-UP IN THE AIR STILL.  WE ARE HAPPY WITH EACH OTHER THAT'S THE MAIN PRIORITY AS OF NOW.  I MISS THE PEEPS.  I TALK TO LINDC AND BRIAN QUITE OFTEN.  IT'S HARD BEING SO FAR AWAY, I JUST HAVE TO GET OVER THE DISTANCE SOMEHOW.  THEY ARE SO FREAKING FAR AWAY.  WE ARE THINKING OF GETTIN SKYPE SOMETIME SOON.  I THINK THAT MIGHT HELP US ALL AS WE ARE HAVING SEPARATION ISSUES AS WE WERE TOGETHER FOR A LONG TIME.  WE HAVE BECOME A CLOSE KNIT FAMILY.. ON TO YOU-I GUESS YOU HAD QUITE A WONDERFUL TIME IN GERMANY FROM YOUR REMARKS.  THAT MUST HAVE BEEN A BLAST.  I REALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER.  NOW MAYBE ALL THE CULPRITS WILL BE DRAGGED OUT OF THE WOODWORK.  I'M GLAD FIN IS OK, AM WONDERING IF THERE ARE ANY MORE THREATS TO ANYONE ON THE HORIZON.  THIS ALEX PERSON IS INTERESTING..A HUNTER SEQUEL WITH A TWIST MAYBE.  HE MAY HELP BRIAN WITH HIS DEMONS BY HELPING HIM.. I HOPE JUSTIN IS ON BOARD WITH THIS AS WE WILL BE SEEING ALEX FOR A LONG TIME TO COME-CLOTHES-LIVING WITH JUSTIN AND BRIAN-MEETING THE FAMILY AND BEING INTEGRATED WITH THEM.  ANOTHER LOST BOY FOR DEBBIE.  OH YES I CAN SEE HOW THIS WILL PLAY OUT.  HE WILL BECOME AN INTEGRAL SUB PLOT HUH.  JUST THOUGHT I'D DROP A REVIEW AND SAY HI AND I'M GOOD LUV 2 U!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm so glad to hear from you and to know that you are doing well!  I bet it's just beautiful down there.  And I'm so glad to hear that you are happy, but I can imagine how different things must be now.  You, Brian and Lindc were together for so long it must be hard not to see them all the time.  I actually did Skype with a friend of mine from Australia a few months ago - I could hear her amazingly well, so I would recommend giving it a try...You could at least see each other and talk to each other at the same time.:) 

I'm sure things will settle down for you and your fiance and you will soon feel more at ease.  Whoever your new employer is, they are quite lucky to have you, my friend!  Take good care of the "Lucky Devil" and don't get too much sand in him - ha!  Please try to stay in touch when you can, but I know you have more important priorities in your life.  I do carry your support and encouragement  with me in my heart always, no matter what happens, and you know I wish you and your fiance the very best of happiness, my friend.  I'm sending you my love, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 04:10 AM · On: Looking Into a Mirror

I LOVE this new development! It seems ....so  familiar somehow.... (wink) Of course your version is of course so much more elaborately well done Looking forward to more!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend - glad you were able to plow through that long chapter!  I am now off to a twins' scheming for their fathers' dinner....Poor Justin - ha!  Thanks again - *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Snake in the Grass

Got sidetracked by a sick little girl last night and didn't get to finish until now.

Thank God, everyone is ok!  And Brian finally realizes just how much Fin has come to mean to him.

Poor Justin and Tony had to be worried sick, and I'm sure they're still worried about what's still to come.  At least Adam is out of the picture and ready to talk.  I wouldn't go down alone either!

Another wonderful chapter!  Loving this story and can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  You're all caught up now, so I'd better get it updated soon!  I'll be working on it as soon as I get home - leaving in about an hour but it will be later this evening (our time) before I get back home. 

You are right about Fin and Justin - they will still be worried.  But now that the new candidate is actually a decent guy, I don't see the same type of vitrolic hate spewing forth from the other camp at least.  I will be moving the story more to the Pitts and Harrisburg now in addition to the focus on the campaign, because I have a lot of other issues I want to address.

I hope both your daughter and you are feeling well at the moment - thank you again for all the time you took to comment and provide support for my stories - that means so much to me!  *Big Hug*  Kimberly

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:57 AM · On: Resolving One Problem - But Creating Another?

Wow!  What a couple of assholes on security duty.  Probably hired by Adam.  Glad Justin and Tony were able to get closer to their men where they belonged!  I can only imagine the satisfaction it brought Brian and Fin to bring those bastards down.  And the victory will be even sweeter for Brian and Justin when they find out Stockwell was helping to set him up.  Hasn't that dumbass learned his lesson yet?  You don't piss the Taylor-Kinneys off!

Another wonderful chapter.  I'm almost caught up, so you need to get writing! LOL  J/K

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Got a few minutes and decided I'd better get caught up, too, on my replies.  I'm in Germany from being here for the convention and getting ready to leave in about an hour - can't wait to get back into my own bed and resume my story writing!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story; I have the next chapter partially written, so it shouldn't take me too long to get it finished.  Thank you for all the comments!  *Hugs*  Kimberly