Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Heart's Desire
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 08:38 AM · On: Dream Fulfilled

That was brilliant, I'm so proud of Fin and he will do brilliant things in there. I bet he and Tony can have fun there and when Gus comes to visit playing hide and seek would be fun or riding mini bikes down the long halls lol I still hope they get to do the pony ride,

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 04:14 PM · On: Dream Fulfilled

Another great chapter.  I am happy that Brian is taying with Kinnetik but I bet his father continues to look to him for advice.  Tanks for the update.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill, my friend - thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your comments; I greatly appreciate that.  I am trying to slowly develop Brian's relationship with his father; after all this time I think to push them together like nothing had happened before wouldn't be very realistic.  I will get this updated just as soon as I can.
Thanks again for the support. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 05:54 AM · On: Dream Fulfilled

It's funny what you said about Brian not wearing hats.  I think that the only time I remember him wearing a hat was during the candleight vigil, when Ben got into a fight.  By the time Brian was in the car the hat was off.  Maybe I'm remembering it wrong.  Anyway, VERY little hat wearing, for sure. 

Lovely story.  Maybe Fin will realize what that flash was on Tony's face.  (?)

- Jackie Mag

stories/963/images/Jackie-Icon2.jpg



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, I can remember a few times when Brian wore some questionable shirts (I still remember that ghastly plaid one! Who was dressing his character that day? LOL!), but yes, he normally didn't wear a hat, did he?  I am trying to find some more similarities between father and son in the story, and thought this one would fit.;  I'm glad you're still enjoying it; and yes, the question about Fin and Tony will be resolved one way or the other.;)

Thanks so much for reading, and especially commenting!  I will have this updated again soon. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2015 09:33 PM · On: Dream Fulfilled

     Thanks for the chapter.      


    “We did it”, said by Fin, meant so much.  A wonderful emotional


comment, for us readers too.  Then just a little later Brian said, “it's


been a hell of a ride.”  It sure has, and again for us readers too.


     I thought it was kind of funny that Fin started off his address by


telling everyone what he is not going to talk about, which means he


just talked about it


    Also, it seems that Justin and Brian took special notice of Alex.  But


why?


   Once again, thanks for the chapter and the story.


   DavidR



Author's Response:

Hi, David! Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for bearing with me in between updates; hopefully I can update quicker now that I am not betaing so many authors.  I have really grown to love Fin and Tony's relationship, and there will be more to come between them as they adjust to their new lives.  Both men are strong and confident, which could create some difficulty. But their love will persevere and carry them through eventually. As for Alex, there will be some further adjustments needed by both men, as well as by her. Where her ultimate role lies remains to be seen, but it will be resolved before I'm done.

Thank you again for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment, David! It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2015 02:34 PM · On: Dream Fulfilled

Finally Fin sworn in. Nice chapter. I hope things go smoothly for him and Tony. I know how your creative mind works---sooooo, maybe a few bumps along the way. I will tell Lee this is up, he is sleeping. Just got off a double. Is there a problem with your job. I read in one of your answers to a reviewer something going not so well. Sorry, just worried for you. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Don't apolozie; I appreciate your concern.  My teaching job is secure for this year; but it's on a year-to-year contract, and the enrollment has been way down. So not sure if I will have the class next year or not, which will leave me out in the cold, at least figuratively speaking.  I'm hoping they'll find some role for me, however.  Might be the impetus I need to actually try and write a fiction novel, though; would love to try at some point.

There may be a few other 'bumps in the road,' especially with Alex, and I do have some loose ends to tie up yet, so at least a few more chapters to go.;)  Give Lee my love. And as always, thank you for all the support! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2015 12:06 PM · On: Dream Fulfilled

Wow what a chapter in this we see the full gamut of emotions for Fin. He wants the role but he cannot believe he is there, he wants his partner and his son very close. However he knows that he has the love of his partner Tony and son and son in law and the extended family.

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! I'm so glad you're still following this story, my friend; thank you for the support. Yes, for a confident man, Fin is still a little nervous about his new role. But I have a feeling he will rise to the occasion. At the same time, he will need to reassure his partner that things will not drastically change between them.

I should be able to update this again fairly soon. Thank you as always for all your encouragement, Chris; it is greatly appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2015 04:05 AM · On: Dream Fulfilled

That was one hell of an inauguration! Things definitely seem to be on the ascendant for this congressional family. Great update my friend!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your support, my friend. Yes, one hurdle down, but a few more to go.  I'll get this updated again just as fast as I can. I'm not betaing as many stories right now, so that should help.;)  Thanks again for the feedback, and for bearing with me. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2015 04:00 AM · On: Dream Fulfilled

Wonderful chapter.  I just hope Fin doesn't develop a cold.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading this latest chapter. Don't worry; I think Tony will help to keep him warm.;)  He's going to be much too busy a man for such mundane things as colds.;)  I am very happy you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you as always for reading, and for your comments; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs*  ~Kim

You must login (register) to review.