Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Heart's Desire
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:02 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Way to go Gus, you have a huge heart like your dad and I can see Alex is gonna bond with you and do better because of you. Long may it continue

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 07:51 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Way to go Gus, you have a huge heart like your dad and I can see Alex is gonna bond with you and do better because of you. Long may it continue

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:53 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Happy to see the update.  Really enjoyable chapter.  Hope Alex gets to stay with B & J.  Looking forward to part 2 of the update.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Thanks for reading this latest chapter, and for your comments, my friend. Sorry it's been so long in between updates, but I appreciate you bearing with me.  I should have part two of this posted very soon. Glad that you are still enjoying it! Thanks again for the support, Bill.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 11:26 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Woww big surprise to see this update and a very nice update.

Love the scene about eating breakfast. Haha. Justin is doing great as a dad.

*giggles*  my name is in this story .. 

Alex gifted! She is in good hands with Brian and Justin. Talk to her, that she can stay forever as their girl. Adopt the girl. But I also like to see a lttle baby.

Love Fin and Tony together. But aggrrr why is Tony still so insecure? I know why but ..  *sigh* . Maybe at the end of this story Fin will ask Tony to marry him. Please.

Glad to see Alex laughing. Hope she sees that Britin isn't a prison and Brian and Justin or not wards, but really nice people who wants the best for her.

 

Hope to see the next chapter in a couple of days.

*hugs* 

Marian



Author's Response:

Hi, Marian No. 1 - LOL!  Yes, I hadn't thought about that, but it must be a tribute to you that I had in the back of my mind.;) So happy to see you still reading this one, and thankful for your comments, my friend.  Still have a lot more to go yet, too.  And you just might get your wish with F & T.;)  I'll get the next part up very soon. Thanks again for bearing with me in the meantime. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 10:33 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Hi Kim I was so pleased to see a update but I had forgotten who Alex was I had to go back to the previous chapter to remind myself lol. I just loved reading about a happy and contented BJ xox hugs Chris

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Thank you for still reading, and for the comments, my friend. I really appreciate that. And I'm sorry it's been so long that you had to go back and re-read.  One of these days I'll start only posting stories that are finished first, so you won't have to deal with that.;)  I hope you'll bear with me in the meantime. Thanks again for the support, Chris; I will get the next part up very soon. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:37 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Interesting development with Alex being so smart.  Mrs. McClusky might be right.  (I had a sister in law named Marian, by the way.)  Nice steamy scenes with Fin and Tony.  They really care about each other.  Keep it coming!

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  I actually have a nephew and a mom who were involved with gifted education, and they do tend to be easily bored if they are not kept challenged, so it seemed logical for Alex to be of that ilk.;) I'll have the next part of this up very soon. Thanks again for your patience.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:28 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Hey Kim! I absolutely love the way Justin and Brian are slowly building their relationship with Alex. She is very damaged and is going to require quite a bit of attention and reassurance for her to start to heal.

Please hurry back with the second half of this wonderful update...i can't wait to see what happens at dinner ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara, my friend!  I'm glad you are still enjoying this story; just so sorry it's taking me so long in between updates. That's why I wanted to post the first part, at least, so everyone knows I haven't forgotten it.  It WILL be finished.;)  And I did not think it was realistic to make Alex whole so quickly; as you said, she has experienced a lot, so I would think it would be a more gradual process.

Thanks again for your encouragement, Tamara. I appreciate that so much. I'll get the next part up very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 04:23 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Hello dear Kim! 

It's great to see another chapter of this story. 

I think pretty much the celebration in the Day after Thanksgiving in USA  and I realize it is a moment of great value family ties, then bring that moment to his story was very touching. 

I think the relationship of Justin, Brian and Alex pretty much. It is very exciting to see the  boys learn how to deal with a child. You know how I am a goofy to see Justin as a parent and I think Brian is the kind of father who can only give the best of themselves to their children.  And Alex is a very special child who can only bring so much joy to the boys.

I'm happy to see more of this great story and anxious to see what comes in the next chapter. 

A big hug, my friend!

Fátima.




Author's Response:

Hi, Fatima!  Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your thoughtfulness in leaving a review.  I really appreciate that.;)  By the way, I AM working on your newest story. I hope to have that to you very soon.;)  Thank you again for reading, my friend! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 03:09 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Sorry-got carried away and forgot to review-what a dork huh? I think Alex will grow and prosper under Justin's guidance and patience. I would still like to see a baby there sometime. I know, I am just a softy when it comes to Justin and how much he loves babies. Good chapter and thanx for the update. lol

Author's Response:

LOL! That's okay; you're so kind to follow-up with another comment. :)  I still have a ways before this is done, so stay tuned. There may be a way to please everyone here before I'm done.;)  Thanks again for all the support! That means so much to me. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 03:01 AM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

MY MY MY!!! I am so glad you are back. It's been quite a dry spell. We know you have been busy doing other things. My listeners want to know if you are giving up writing to beta for others. I said "NEVER"-- RIGHT??? It's just that we miss you when you are not here. I will tell Lee about the updste. He is on vacation in Cabo with his new significant other. Surprise Huh?? Brian is dating, rather seriously, again--and poor little me still working, working, working. I am going to New Zealand to see Queen and my Adam in September. My great aunt lives in Auckland so I will be staying with her for a few days. I haven't seen her for eight years. We stay in touch regularly-so when this concert came up she told me to come on down. Am so excited. I hope you and your mom are well and are healthy. Remember to take your vitamins girl. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc! I'm so happy to be able to update this, and especially to hear from you!  I actually DID sneak in a short one-shot about a week ago called "Chemistry" when I needed a short break from the angst.;)  I'm happy to hear that Brian and Lee are doing so well. And how exciting for you regarding your trip to Australia! I always wanted to see that beautiful country. I hope you have a wonderful time. I did get to see Randy's new play, "Atomic," which was great.  Loved his singing, especially.;)  And finally got to see "Such Good People," too. Enjoyed it a great deal.

And yes, still doing beta work for three other authors. Actually, it's more than that, except that a couple of them haven't updated in a long while.  Sigh..I know. Need to quit doing that, because it definitely cuts into how much time I have to work on my own stories.  But I have another part of this I will be posting soon, and am making good progress on "Tame the Wild Stallion," and have a couple new ones in the works I'm working on behind the scenes, so I'm slowly getting back on track.

It's SO good to hear from you! I have missed you, too! Thank you for bearing with me, and for always being so supportive of my stories. That really does help me to keep going, and it so motivating to me.  Stay in touch, and please give everyone my love.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 11:19 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Wonderful to see something on this one again.  I'm delighted that we'll get everyone together and see what they are up to.  Alex may be a handful, but I think she's a better fit than a baby would be in their lives.  Looking forward to the next part.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, dear friend. You know they are always greatly appreciated.  I'll have the next part up very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 08:07 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

hey Kim, I don't know if I am more excited to see more of this story after all this time, or just to hear from you - you ahve been missed my friend

love where this chapter is goin - the relationships are always my soft spot - you know that - and the changes in Alex that we have already seen - along with the ones I know we will see once the boys make the decision we know that they will - ae delightful to watch

plus - what better place for me to get all my 'family aura' than at the Thanksgiving table - can't wait until dinner starts! I can almost taste the turkey...lol

seriously - glad you are back - and hope that means all is well with you - if you ever need an 'ear' - I'm always willing to 'listen'

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle! You're so sweet; thank you for your kind words, my friend.;)  Yes, with my father's passing, helping three authors to  beta, and some other RL issues, it has been hard to keep writing. I feel awful about how long I have to go in between updates. But at least I just have the two WIPs going, so that helps.  I actually have quite a bit of "Stallion" already written, so that will help, too, and the next part to this is almost finished.

I'm glad someone hasn't forgotten me.;)  It's exciting to see so many new stories on here, though! I still have quite a bit to tell about this story, so I hope readers will bear with me while I continue to work on it. My two WIPs WILL be finished, just like all the others before them.;)  Thanks for all the support, Charle! I appreciate that so much, dear.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:39 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

Hi Kim,

Yeah, I'm everywhere :)

You know I haven't read this story YET but in the meantime, I wanted to give you all my support for finally being able to post this first part of your chapter, as there were people who prevented you from doing it sooner lol

I'm sure it's great, as are all your stories.

*hugs*

Alois

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Alois. Thank you for the comments, and for letting me know you'll be reading it eventually.  I'm assuming you've already read the sequel (Wedding Present), although it could be read without doing that.  Makes more sense that way, though.;)  Now I wonder which 'people' you could be referring to? ;)  I AM glad to get this update posted finally, though, and I'm trying very hard NOT to post anything new until it's finished first.  Thank you again for taking the time to comment. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:37 PM · On: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing

I look forward to every update of this story. Extra happy it's a 2 part update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading,  and for the comments!  The next part will be up soon.  *Hugs* ~Kim

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