Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Heart's Desire
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2016 02:25 PM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

That Adam is an evil twit isn't he, I hope he fails badly and I wanna see Brian bring him down. Go Fin you can do this

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 10:16 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

I am finally back!

Ok, these two are freaking me out with everything they have in common.  Carnegie Mellon?  Really? LOL

I have a feeling Brian is either going to have to start eating some stuff he never would eat before, or he's going to be a very hungry campaign manager.  Sausages and chocolate chip pancakes aren't gonna cut it! LOL  And Justin knows this.  Shame on Justin, Tony and Fin for ganging up on the poor man!

On a more serious note, I baffles me how "intelligent", "mature", and supposedly "sane" people can make such asses out of themselves when it comes to someone's sexuality.  Hey, like Brian has said on more than one occasion, if he's not fucking you then it doesn't matter!  Get over it!

And he needs to send Adam home now.  Pack his shit for him and drop him beside the road in an out of the way place with no phone and no money.  Let him get home the best way he can.  Serves him right if he's hungry, thirsty and lost for a while.

Another great chapter.  Hope you had a wonderful holiday weekend.

Nita



Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  I'm so glad to hear from you!  I hope you had a good weekend, too.:)  Yes, Adam is a real snake and he's not going to stop anytime soon -he's just going to go from bad to worse unfortunately.  I do enjoy writing about the similarities between the two couples.:)  Tony and Justin have become fast friends as father and son try to bond a little more deeply, and Brian and Fin's relationship will be evolving quite a bit throughout the story as you will find.

Hope you are doing well, my friend.:)  Thanks as always for reading and for your lovely comments.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2011 11:16 PM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

 "He and Fin were more cordial toward one another now, and Brian silently hoped that their relationship would continue to evolve, but you didn’t wipe away a lifetime of ignorance about each other in a few short months’ time."

Good point.

"Adam smiled.  The beginning of Fintan O’Connor’s downfall was about to begin."

They seem to have a whole swarm of enemies going after them.

I know I reviewed this chapter before but I'm not sure if it went through. This might be the second. At any rate, I look forward to the next chapter. I have a feeling Brian and his group are a force to be reckoned with.

 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend - thanks for the comments!  I appreciate that.  Yes, there will be all kinds of twists and turns in this story.  BTW - I am writing this in D.C. on my netbook - I am here to see Randy in "Habit of Art" later tonight!  Wish me luck that I can track him down to get my "Tommy" poster signed!  Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts - I will get this updated just as soon as possible.:)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

Thanks for this terrific chapter.  The tension level of this story


just increased 10 fold. 


 


I do understand that security will probably keep Fin safe – I hope.


I have to wonder that since Craig is involved, is Brian really safe?


I am concerned.


 


Adam is a real problem.  I don’t at all accept that his Mom


working for Fin was the cause of his parents break up.  Maybe a


catalyst, but the cause?  I doubt it.  However Adam is like an


injured animal – very dangerous.


 


It will be interesting to see what happens next.  How Fin handles


the crowd and the haters in the crowd.  I will be satisfied if


everyone comes out of this in one piece.


 


Thanks again,


DavidR



 



Author's Response:

Thank you, David - I always look forward to your insightful comments.:)  Yes, there will definitely be some tense moments coming up, perhaps in ways some don't realize.  And there are so many ribbons of emotions running through this story.  It is definitely somewhat darker than "Wedding Present" in that respect, but I think the additional drama will also help be the catalyst to bring some of the characters closer together as well as cement some hopes and dreams.  Of course, there will also be some dashed dreams, too, or at least some that are changed in the meantime.  Thank you for reading and especially leaving your thoughts - I'll be looking forward to hearing more of them in the future.:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

i just saw the review of randy's play and the trailer on youtube.  i am so jealous of you girl.  you must let all of us know how it was.  looks like he had a lot of time on stage, and his hair was curly.  soooo cute. looks still about 20.



Author's Response:

I know!  I LOVE the hair!  Makes me want to run my fingers through it and think all sort of naughty thoughts - ha!  As if HE would be interested (sigh..).  I won't object to when he comes out on stage only wearing that pair of black briefs I've heard about, either!  LOL!    I heard he hasn't been real accessible to fans during his run in D.C., though, and it's apparently not easy to sneak out any photos of him at the theater, so I'm not sure how successful I'll be. But my friend and I plan on trying to grab him in between the matinee Saturday and the night show we're going to, so wish us luck!  Oh and BTW, thanks for recommending my stories to Sean - I really appreciate you doing that!:)  You and Brian are awesome!:)  I'll let you know what happens - I'll be leaving early Saturday morning.:) 

Reviewer: SEAN (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

MY DAY OFF, SO I SPENT A COUPLE HOURS READING TLC.  THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD ONE.  TOLD ME TO READ THAT ONE FIRST AS IT IS ONE OF HER FAVORITES.  NOW I WILL READ THE WEDDING ONE AS I GUESS I'M A ROMANTIC AT HEART.  WE HAVE TO HAVE COMPASSION IN OUR JOBS HERE, SO MOST OF US ARE QUITE MUSHY FOOLS UNNDERNEATH OUR STOLID EXTERIORS. BY 4 NOW



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sean!  Yes, Lindc and Brian really liked "TLC" a lot!  I hope you like "The Wedding Present."  It was a favorite of a lot of readers.  Once you read that one, you'll have a much better understanding of this story,  since it's a sequel to it.:)  If you're into romance and you don't mind it not being Christmas yet, you might also like "A Kinney Christmas Tree."  Of course, ALL my stories eventually have a happy ending for the boys no matter what, though, cause I'm a hopeless romantic, too!  Thanks so much for reading my stories and especially reviewing - I am very honored.:)

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2011 01:10 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

I understand the need for tension and bigotry in the story but I hope you will also include wins and intelligent quips to keep the hope alive!

 

Judi



Author's Response:

Hi, Judi - thanks for reading and commenting!  I definitely won't be dwelling exclusively on the angst in the story all the time, but I feel some of it is necessary due to the subject matter.  And I think despite the seriousness of it, there WERE some moments of more light-heartedness in this chapter (although I admit there was more solemnity than levity in this one...).  I hope despite the heaviness of the chapter you are still enjoying the story and will continue to read along, because I DO see a lot of love and evolving relationships coming out of this saga.  Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.  I hope to hear from you again, and I hope you will let it play out in its entirety.:)  I'm hopeful you will be happy with the results.:)

Reviewer: SEAN (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

HI--REMEMBER ME?  I HAVE ONLY REVIEWED ONCE OOPS NOW TWICE.  I HAVE READ 3 OF YOUR STORIES SO FAR.  YOU REALLY HAVE A WAY WITH THE WRITTEN WORD. MY PARTNER JAY AND I ARE READING YOUR STORIES.  THEY ARE REALLY GOOD.  I LIKE STIRRING UP TROUBLE.  IN ALL THESE STORIES I DON'T LIKE MICHAEL SO MUCH BUT WE LOVE EMMETT.  HE IS A TRIP AND MICHAEL IS PATHETIC.  THE WEDDING STORY WAS FANTASTIC PICTURES AWESOME.  LINDC AND I WERE SAYING YOU SHOULD WRITE A NOVEL. SHE SAID SHE TOLD YOU THAT HERSELF. IT'S TRUE, YOU SHOULD.  THIS STORY IS GOING TO GET NASTY BEFORE IT RESOLVES ITSELF.  POLITICS IS A VERY DIRTY BUSINESS.  I LIKE THE INTERPLAY BETWEEN THE FOUR OF THEM.  HOPE THEY STAY POSITIVE AND CAN CONTINUE TO TAKE WHAT THE HATE-MONGERS THROW AT THEM.  BEEN THERE HAD A HARD TIME IN MY TEENS.  BACK TO MY READING.  BY 4 NOW



Author's Response:

Hi, Sean!  Yes, I definitely remember you!  So great to hear from you again!  Wow, if you've read both "Stirring up Trouble" and "The Wedding Present," that's a lot, because I know how long those are!  LOL!  I'm impressed as well as flattered.  Thank you so much for all the kind words - that really lifts me up.  Reviews mean so much to me.:)  I'm delighted you'll be following along on this one - and you're right - I see this one being maybe the longest story I've written, because there's so many sub-threads woven into it.  If you want a funny story,  BTW, you might like "Roughing It," where Justin talks Brian into going camping.  I mean, Brian in a tent?  LOL!  Thanks again for leaving your thoughts, Sean - I really enjoy reading them.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

Oh dear I am scared for Fin and Brian, history tells us these idiotic fanatics can go to such dangerous levels to achieve their goals.

Loved the gentle teasing between the boys it made such sweet romantic love :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Chris - Thanks so much for your comments!  Don't want to give too much away, but there WILL be some tense moments coming up.  Hopefully I'll have some twists and turns there that you won't forsee to keep you guessing.:)  I'm planning on having some 'fun' with them, too, though - after all, we have two very 'passionate' couples on that RV together - (wink, wink).  Thanks so much for reading, my friend.:)

 

Reviewer: lindc &bb (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2011 06:17 PM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

wow.  this was an amazing chapter.  having them cooped up together is going to be good and bad i think.  four independent men in a small space for some time is bound to be fun watching them cope plus all the political jazz.  brian is going to lose it at some time.  the watching and reading how this comes together will be priceless.  you are too good, girl--bb's words, but i concur.  we are taking our convalescing boy out to dinner tomorrow.  he has a little cabin fever.  i think he will be back to work in a few months time.  he has progressed so well.  so much for the viking spirit.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks as always for your kindess.:)  Yes, Lee mentioned he was being taken out to dinner - I think he's really looking forward to it.  And BTW - thanks for the 'new recruit!"  I was so pleased to see Sean's review of "Shower Scenes!"  I knew immediately who he was walking about when he mentioned 'someone' had steered him over here - I can't thank you enough for that - you're so awesome!  Hope you all have a great week - I'm going to see Randy in "Habit of Art" this coming Saturday - can't wait!  I'll let you know how it goes.:)

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

THIS IS REALLY SHAPING UP SO WELL.  YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LIKE THIS STORY.  ALL THIS SPEAKING TO GRASS ROOTS PEOPLE AT TOWN HALLS IN SMALL AREAS IS VERY MEMORABLE FOR ME.  I WISH I HAD 4 OR 5 CHAPTERS TO READ AT A TIME--SORRY, JUST REALLY AM SO INTO THIS STORY.  I AM FINALLY HOME, THANK GOD.  I DIDN'T KNOW IF OR WHEN I'D SEE MY LOWLY DIGS AGAIN.  MY TYPING AND SPELLING HAVE  IMPROVED.  I KEEP WEBSTERS ON MY DESK. HA HA.  BB AND LINDC COME BY OFTEN TO SEE ME AND CHEER ME UP, I THINK.  THEY ARE TAKING ME OUT TO DINNER, A FIRST.  HOPE I DON'T GET TO TIRED.  MY BODY RUNS DOWN EASILY.  NAP TIME.  THANKS FOR THIS GREAT CHAPTER.  YOU'R THE BEST. LATER



Author's Response:

Hi, Lee!  How wonderful that you're finally home and doing so well!  I'm so delighted to hear that and always thrilled to hear from you!  I actually posted this part without waiting for my beta to get back to me, mainly because I knew you were anxious to read it.:)  I hope I continue to do the story justice, since you seem to have experience with this.:)  I'm flattered, then, that you like it so much.  Lindc and Brian must be very good friends for you - I know they think very highly of you, too.:)  I'm sure you're looking forward to going out to dinner!  Take care and I'll get this updated just as soon as I can.  *Hugs* to you.:)

Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Confrontations and Revelations

Ugh, politics are ugly because they're always about everything but politics. I figured the homophobes would be waiting for them. And I want Brian to run over Adam with the RV! This is going to be a long road trip.

Captivating as always, darling!



Author's Response:

Hi, Megan Rose! Thanks for the review!  I was hoping to actually get to the town meeting in this chapter, but once again, I got carried away  - LOL!  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.  In the meantime, I have a couple of twins that need my attention - LOL!  Thanks so much for taking the time to leave me your thoughts.:)

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