Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2016 10:06 AM · On: Brian's Decision
Good stuff, I knew he would do it, can't wait to see his dads reaction. I just pray Stockwell doesn't hurt any of them
Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 03:37 AM · On: Brian's Decision
Ohhhhhh Love the beginning of the chapter. I love quality Brian/Justin time, especially when they're being playful like this! So glad Brian agreed to work with Fin (not that he had much choice once Tony and Justin joined forces). And I wonder if we can get Fin to agree to run for president once he's finished being governor? I'd vote for him!
And here we go with the two sneaky devils talking among themselves once again. Poor Brian and Fin. I almost feel sorry for them. Almost! LOL
Craig Taylor is a bastard. Justin should just say it like it is, but I know first hand how much it hurts to be rejected by the people you love because of who you are. Not to that extent, but rejection just the same. At least he has Brian, Gus, Jennifer. and the rest of the family who love him unconditionally. It's Craig's loss and he's missing out on a treasure because of his bigotry and hatred.
Another wonderful chapter. Trying to get caught up so I can get to the good chapters I keep hearing about. I've forbidden any of my online buddies to tell me what happened, but they keep telling me I have to hurry up and get to the good stuff! LOL
On to the next chapter!
Nita
BTW: the update I had promised you was sent in an email instead of PM. Let me know if you want me to send it again.
Author's Response: Hi, Nita! So glad to see you reading along on this one! And I'm glad to hear you're doing better. I did get a recent email from you, so I think we're caught up.:) I'm feeling much better today - just anxious to get rid of my IV that is attached to me 24/7. Hopefully it will be gone on Thursday; I go back to the lung doctor Tuesday for a follow up. Hope the bloodwork shows no infection left because I'm anxious to get back to work and get my strength back for the trip next month!
So happy you're enjoying this one! I have a lot to tell yet in this story.:) In the meantime, I'm working hard on the next update to "Parent Trap." I think that is just getting warmed up - the girls are about to go into "reunite the fathers" mode - LOL! Thanks so much for all your support, Nita. I'll continue to think about you, my friend.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 03:50 AM · On: Brian's Decision
Oops I fotgot to review this morning * blushes *. But what must I tell you what you don't know already. Great chapter. Sorry for the short review I'm tired.
* hugs *
Author's Response: *Hugs* back, my friend! Go get some rest.:) Thanks for taking the time to let me know you read and enjoyed it.:)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 11:12 AM · On: Brian's Decision
Wonderful chapter. I loved the wrestling scene in the bed.
Justin is still thinkng about a kid, huh? I can't wait to see that plays out.
Author's Response: Hi, Sandra! Thanks for reading! Yeah, their little sparring matches make me suddenly fond of contact sports - ha! And yes, Justin is still thinking about a child, but as I've mentioned in other reviews, things don't always turn out quite the way you think they might....hope you'll stay tuned to find out what I have in mind.:) Thanks for the comments - I'm very appreciative.:)
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Brian's Decision
Hi,
Another wonderful chapter. So much information.
A few chapters back, I voted (not that I have a vote)
for Brian not to be Finn’s Campaign Manager. Well –
Brian didn’t listen to me. Oh well! All the reasons
against the decision was nicely laid out in this chapter.
That is except one.
I never felt that bringing Brian and his father together
into a better and closer relationship was a good reason
for Brian to accept the proposal. What if, Finn wanted
to do something one way and Brian disagreed. Now what?
it is quite obvious that neither can be told NO, and the person
live to say no again. You know what I mean.
Finn to Brian, “no!”
or how about ---
Brian to Finn, “no!”
Anyway, let’s see just how well the two of them will get along.
Tony and Justin just may have to play referee.
Thanks again for the story; it is really good and getting better.
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi, David! Always look forward to your thought-provoking comments.:) Yes, I can see your point about the two working together - this could almost be like two trains on a collision course and no way to stop them - ha! Two alpha males could be a bad thing.....but maybe a GOOD thing for dramatic plot purposes.:) Thanks for checking in and leaving me feedback - I greatly appreciate that.:)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:33 PM · On: Brian's Decision
woohoo another great chapter and goodness me it was hawt!!!!
I am thrilled when we see Brian and Justin working together as a team and just enjoying the place they are in their relationship.
I bet Taylor Electronics is one of the 500 companies bankrolling the opposition and become actively involved once Craig realises that ajustin and brian are involved. Bring it on lol cheers Chris
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! Yeah, I figure it never hurts to just throw in some good, old-fashioned PWP in the middle of my chapter - ha! Glad you liked this one. And never fear, me thinks Mr. Taylor is going to be featured somewhere in this story and will no doubt dredge up some pain and sorrowful memories for Justin, along with several other plot developments. So glad you'll be following the story, my friend. Thanks as always for the feedback and for reading!:)
Reviewer: J (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Brian's Decision
I totally love this chapter...
Author's Response: Aw....Thanks, J! I'm so pleased that you liked it! This was what I would call more of a transitional chapter to get the events set up. I definitely see more drama going forward now.:) Hope you'll continue to stay tuned and see what happens. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Brian's Decision
I knew it! Both Brian agreeing to be Fin's manager and Justin thinking about a baby. This is going to be interesting...
Love it, darling!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 09:40 AM · On: Brian's Decision
You know, given the fact that this is a sequel. and to a rather lengthy original story, it is amazing to me that there is still so much story to be told here. In addition to the known plot, we also have the promise of these little hints we have been getting - surely a baby is on the way (hmmmm - another sequel?). The characters as written here have become new 'old friends' - so familiar from all this time spent with them, and yet enveloped within a storyline so different from Canon that we are getting to know them anew with each chapter, so different are they from the couple we last saw in 513.
still anxiously awaiting each new chapter - thanks for that
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thanks for the very insightful comments.:) Yes, as I just mentioned in another review, I also see a lot to be written here (hope everyone doesn't get bored to death before I get done - LOL!) There's a lot of hopes and dreams being bandied about in this story (hence the title) - Fin's campaign, Tony's wish to one day be married to him, Brian's business and his new position as campaign manager, his relationship with his father (will this draw them closer or push them farther apart?), Justin's wish to have another child with his husband, Stockwell, and Justin's father's possible involvement....whew! I think that might be enough for a while.:) Everything may not turn out the way everyone hopes, though...if it did, what good would THAT do? LOL! Thanks, my friend, for the comments and for reading!:)
Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Brian's Decision
wow what a chapter. we loved it. we knew he would do it or where would the story go. lots to look forward to all the ins and outs and attempted smear tactics. oh yes we can see it all coming down the road. lee is very interested in this story as one of his family members is in politics and has told us about some comings and goings within his family. we still are very interested in the (room). need more about that!!! it was just sort of touched on. sneaky of you. really pooped all of us just got off 36 hours straight--so home to bed. bb hopes paper hearts is next. he asks PLEEEEASE. ha ha! lol
Author's Response: Hello, my tired friends! I'm surprised you even had the strength to write a review!:) But I do appreciate it.:) I know - everyone's itching for the 'drama' to begin. I see that happening more in the coming chapters now that Brian has decided to take on the challenge of being his father's campaign manager. Everyone will learn more about Justin's thoughts and dreams a little later, but it may not come out the way he thinks (hmm....). That might not necessarily be a bad thing, though. I CAN see this story being a pretty lengthy one, however, because my mind can see a lot of issues coming to a head here - the issue of the child, the campaign, Tony's dreams to be closer to his partner, Stockwell, and Justin's father just to name a few (is that enough? ha!). Tell BB I'm working as fast as I can - I know he's anxious as is everyone else for the next installment. I may go against my normal rotation schedule and hold off on the next chapter of "Parent Trap" to accomodate him.:) Tell him to hang in there - I think I may see my arm being twisted just a bit.:) And tell Lee I may need him as a ghostwriter down the road - LOL!
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