Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Heart's Desire
Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 04:10 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

I love how you invited us to share in their honeymoon adventure; it was ridiculously romantic and so fitting! It more then makes up for the ending of season 5. As I was reading I was as so mesmerized by how your brought Ireland and the different settings to life I asked my husband if our passports were still valid!  Yes, I really did! The honeymoon was delightful in more ways then one!  Im so enjoying this story and can't wait to see whats next for our boys, although I have a feeling it might not be quite as peaceful and relaxing!!  Candy



Author's Response:

 Thank you for your comments, Candy! I'm happy that you're enjoying the story so far. And you're correct. There will definitely be some ups and downs in the sequel to the Wedding Present. But I think you'll like it by the time everything is done. There will be some surprises along the way as well. ;)

Thanks for choosing to read these two stories, and for all the feedback! It is greatly appreciated. a86;~Kim

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 01:54 PM · On: Last Day In Paradise

Wow now that's a trip to remember, so much love 💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 01:42 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

This would never be experienced with them and any other man for the rest of their lives and it made their lovemaking that much sweeter, that much intense.

That was beautiful!

Ya killing me with the pictures!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  (Sigh...) And now it's back to reality for them.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Last Day In Paradise

Lovely chapter and wonderful pictures you posted through all the chapters.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend - and now it's out of paradise and back to reality for the boys!  Drama and a roller coaster ride, coming right up!  Stay tuned!  *Hugs* to you.:)

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

Nice chapter.  As far as Brian letting his father and grandparents into


his life, I think that will happen.  But – in most cases there is a father /


son special relationship.  Knowing Brian I really doubt that he can


ever have that kind of relationship with Fin.  Let’s face it, Brian has


already lived almost half his life without Fin.  They can be close, even


to some degree affectionate,  but father / son?  I doubt it.


 


Anyway, both Justin and Brian know that there are going to be tough


times ahead.  Looks to me that together they can face them and


overcome them.


 


Thanks for this very interesting story.


 


DavidR


 


PS:  I really really really like the pictures.


 



Author's Response:

Hi, David!  I always enjoy your insightful comments!  Thanks so much for reading - I agree; I see the father-son bond deepening but I'm not sure just yet how close they will become.  I'll just have to see where my plot bunny takes me.:)  Thanks, too for the comment about the photos - the ability to do that is one of the best parts about posting over here - you'd laugh to see the research I do sometimes - you would think I'm writing a term paper - ha!  Thanks again - I look forward to more of your comments.:)

Reviewer: lindc & predec3 (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

just a note to let you know we are back home.  had one last case.  cal. team arrived early yeeha!!  so we came home.  all tired but have a couple days off to get back in our groove.. guess what was in my mailbox!!!  am so excited.  got a brochure from the berkshires with their playlist of programs.  randy's picture ther as tommy.  omg he looks so cute.  can't wait til july. am so high on adenalin guess it will take me a while to chill down.  bb says hi and lol.  we may be getting our fourth back.  his mom passed and he's not happy were he is working.soooo  we may be getting him back.  things are really looking up for all of us.  don't tell anyone but we are being given a commendation for our work as a number one surgical team.  don't know when, but is forthcoming.  we are just proud as punch.  sorry i'm running off at the mouth again.  lol



Author's Response:

Hello, dear friend - so glad you're back and can hopefully get back to your normal routine!  And congratulations on the commendation!  I'm sure it's well deserved for all of you.:)  I got the same brochure in the mail yesterday and immediately went hunting for our boy; I too was delighted to see him in it and can't wait to hear him sing in person - I actually bought a CD of the Who's greatest hits for $5 so I could practice "Pinball Wizard" for the big day - LOL!  I just wish we were going on the same night - would have loved to have met you in person.:)  Thanks again for all the reviews and feedback you've given me and congratulations again on the upcoming award.  Hope you and the others can get some much-needed rest, and tell Lee to get his butt back home but tell him I'm sorry for his loss.:)

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

WOW!  I seriously want to get married just so I can go on this honeymoon!  Not only do I now have a serious craving to go to Ireland (which I've never been to), but I'm also really hungry from all the food you described (which reminds me I have no food in the house and need to go grocery shopping)!  Great chapter and beautiful pictures to accompany your descriptions -- your descriptions are so great though that I didn't even need the pictures to be able to visualize it, but they were still a nice touch!  Even though I don't want their amazing trip to end, I'm anxious to see what happens with Brian and his dad -- looking forward to it! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words, Kemma!  I think the only reason why I've sent the boys on two honeymoons now for two different stories is because I can pick somewhere that I want to go - it's almost like taking a virtual trip myself - ha!  I'm glad you (and the boys) enjoyed the honeymoon.....(sigh)....wouldn't you like to go with them and share - ha!  I think it's time to bring them back home, though - they're having way too much fun and I think it's time to throw in some good old-fashioned angst now.....stay tuned for some drama coming up!  Thanks for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate that.:P

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2011 04:59 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

How sweet...... the pictures were stunning as usual...it makes me want to have a honeymoon in Ireland....but... only if Brian was included in the deal......lol... 



Author's Response:

You and me, too!  How would like to have THAT man posing for you in front of a waterfall?  Yum!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, my friend.:)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2011 06:44 PM · On: Last Day In Paradise

nueva historia maravillosa pagina web.  un gran fan de QAf.  su escritura es hermosa.



Author's Response:

Gracias!  Bien venidos! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Last Day In Paradise

How romantic is Brian he goes from not celebrating birthdays to this a man in love is a wonderful thing.



Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  I know - I'm not sure if he would have reached this plateau in the show, but I like to think he was heading that way when he bought Britin for "his prince."  I still swoon (at least figuratively) over that sentence.:)  Thanks for reading and for the review!  And now it's back to the political drama.:) 

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2011 06:02 PM · On: Last Day In Paradise

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, such a romantic honeymoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the update.............



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I wish I could have been there, too.:)  Thank you, also for leaving the review.:)  The next chapter will find the boys back in the Pitts and in the throes of the political arena.  Thanks again for reading and commenting.:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Last Day In Paradise

oh my god!!!  these two chapters were utterly amazing.   i have been in a balloon ride. it is fabulous.  it was at a state fair.  had a blast.  i borrowed one of the nurses laptops to see if you had written anything new and saw these two wonderful chapters.  what a good ending to a rough day.  my cohorts are sleeping.  i can't seem to shut my brain off--so i am reading and reviewing.  should try to sleep as we have another busy day tomorrow.  now all the fun is over they have to go back to reality and the governor's race.  i can't wait to have justin tell everyone about this honeymoon as i know he will--every, well almost every detail. what is the next story chapter.  maybe paper hearts??  off to try to sleep.  lol from us all.



Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  I'm impressed by your tenacity in finding someone's computer so you could continue reading - I'm very honored.:)  Never been on a hot-air balloon ride but always thought it would be neat to do it.  I really wanted to get their honeymoon wrapped us ASAP so I could move the story along.  I wasn't planning on two chapters, but when the first one got up to over 10,000+ words I thought I'd better break them up (the boys, not the chapter - ha!).  Yes, looks like Paper Hearts is up next, although I need to get "Operation Birthday" updated soon, too.  At least I think I can finish that one in the next chapter (hopefully)....Thanks again for all the support.  Hope you get to come home soon and get back to your normal schedule.:) 

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