Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

I fell in love with this story with the first chapter and the last was just as engaging. Lumberjack Justin, HAHAHA! Very romantic and perfect ending. Please don't hesitate to provide another story or more Lumberjack Justin.

 

Thanks for the ride.:)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the story.  I loved that, "more Lumberjack Justin."  From pictures I've seen, Randy looks great with a full beard and it's a good beard too.  Not a scrappy one. 

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

Loved it... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Glad you enjoyed the fic.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: mariana (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

I've read it in one go and enjoy it very much.

Are you sure you don't want to continue?.......lol

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!  I don't intend to do a sequel but am working on some other fics, hopefully you'll enjoy them, too.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

I waited until I had time to read this from start to finish only to discover that I had already read it some time ago. When I first started reading fic’s I didn’t leave reviews but I’m so glad this is the featured story for November 2012 as it gives me the opportunity to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back and reading again and leaving a comment.  It's very much appreciated.  And thanks for the well wishes, I'm stunned to be honored and I really appreciate the site's generosity.

All the best to you,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 10

I read this story from angsty beginning to end in one sitting. For a first fic, you definitely struck gold.

I absolutely love how they forced the family by omission, to stay out of their relationship especially while Justin was healing. It allowed Brian to realize that Justin was and always will be in his heart.

Nice work JP

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate that you read and commented.  Sometimes the family just got in the way, even when they had good intentions.

Again, thanks for reading.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 10

Absolutely beautiful.......



Author's Response:

You are too kind.  Thanks so much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Congratulations on the best fanfiction award and for your story being featured as the story of the month.



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks for the well wishes.  I didn't know that it had been made the featured story until I saw your comment - so that's a double thank you!

I really appreciate that you went out of your way and took the time to say something.  It was very kind of you.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Awarded BEST FANFICTION CLASSIC on 10/19/2012.



Author's Response:

What can I say that won't sound too cliche and gushy - oh what the heck, thank you!!!! OMG!!! This is just - WOW!!!  This is such an honor - FOR REAL!

Thanks, that is so kind, generous... wow, y'all, thanks! 

Sincerely,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

I really love this whole story alot.I love that brian got the tattoo too :)



Author's Response:

Yvonne,

Thanks so very, very much for reading and leaving a comment!  I really appreciate that you took the time to be kind and say something nice. 

Again, thanks so much and all the best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

I loved it all alot,great story hon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Yvonne!  I haven't had comments in such a long time and to have yours has been Nirvana!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Yaaay,im so happy Justin is ok!!!



Author's Response:

Can't break up the dynamic duo!

Thanks for the comments.

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

Im enjoying your story alot sweetie xx



Author's Response:

You are too kind.  I really appreciate the time that you took to leave comments after each chapter.  As a writer, you know how much it means to have the readers support.

I really appreciate your kindness, so very much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Holy crap at the ending!!



Author's Response:

Yep, twists and turns around every corner.

Thanks for reading!

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

;)  Love the smiley faces.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Im gonna read this now,just finished this chapter and look forward to the rest ~ Vonnie xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate it!

Laura

Reviewer: speks (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2012 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Second time trying to leve a comment.  Last try.  Really liked this, it was one of the best stories i've read.  So many are too long and dull or sloppy, stupid.  Write more.  Maybe a sequel?



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for commenting.  I get readers but no commenters, I don't know if people are experiencing your problem or they don't like it or they just don't care enough to leave a comment.   So anyway, I really appreciate you going out of your way to leave a comment.  You're keeping me sane.  LOL.

Thanks and all the best.

Laura

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comment.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story. 

Happy New Year, I hope it's a good one for you.

Laura

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

Thank you ALWAYS for this amazing story :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for reading it.  And you are my hero for leaving a comment.  This fic is off the beaten path here at MW and I'm so glad that you found it and so happy that you enjoyed it.

All the very best to you and again, thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm sorry I never reviewed on this story the first time I read it. Or maybe I did and I forgot. I LOVE IT!!!! The way you wrote Brian is so accurate you should be a writer if CowLip pulls their head out of their ass and does a reuinion!!! Kudos on many many MANY levels. I'm sending you christmas cookies because I feel there are no better cookies!!! Please write more stories. I love your style.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thankls so much, times a thousand for reading and re-reading this fic.  I was so thrilled to read that and so grateful that you left a comment.  I know it's a pain but it is so appreciated.  I know you've read that before, but from me it's sincere.

I hope to write soon but have learned a lesson.  I need to have the story completely written before I post.  Long delays waiting on a lazy muse is very irritating for the reader.

I'm flattered by your kind, supportive words, and truly cherish them.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best,

Laura 

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just finished reading this story, on my kindle, just yesterday.  I found this story very well written.  I like to read multi-chaptered stories after they're completed.

I truly enjoyed reading it but it's screaming for a sequel to maybe introduce Justin back into Pittsburgh society, so to speak.  Maybe let some time go by with Brian still visiting Michigan, but the gang getting suspicious of some of his traveling. 

I look forward to reading more of your writings.



Author's Response:

Hi Cheryl,

Wow, you were able to download it to your Kindle, how great is that?!  Thanks so much for the kind words, I really appreciate that you went to so much trouble to read and then left a comment.  I sincerely appreciate it.

I don't know if I'll write a sequel, but it's for kind of you to recommend it.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best.

Laura

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2011 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 10

Beautiful bittersweet ending.

It's obvious that Justin still has issues to work out, but it's wonderful that he and Brian will work on them together.

Thank you for the story!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.  Yep, I have to agree with you, Justin will be healing for some time, as will Brian.  After all I put them through, I knew a wonderful Disney ending wouldn't read true.  But I felt like I did push the envelope by adding some extra moments of warm and fuzzy - they desired it, right?!

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, your support was invaluable.

All the best,

LAura

Reviewer: Nightvision55 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ah, I knew they'd end up together eventually!

I liked the way you made Horvath such an important character - he tends to get left out from most fics.  And I love Brian's second tattoo!

Great job

Nightvision



Author's Response:

Well hello,

You're on my love-that-writer's-fic list.  I really appreciate that you read and comment, it means very much to me.  I feel like a crossed a marathon finish line when I posted the last chapter.  Such a feeling of relief, accomplishment, and some blue clouds, because it was over.

Horvath was fun to use, it was a great inspiration from my unreliable muse.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

I was going to wait till the weekend and read this last chapter of this beautiful story, but being the impatient sort that Iam, I read it last evening. WOW!! Can I just say, you did save the best for last. What a wnderful ending, at last our boys are together, with Brian proclaiming his love like only he could. I'll miss this story my talented friend, it was fresh, and new and well deserving of the blue ribbon. I hope that there are many stories that you plan to share! Take care and please write more!!!



Author's Response:

My Guardian Angel!

Jasmine, I can't thank you enough for all your support, warmth, encouragement, and kindness.  You helped me work through writer's blocks and helped me about of the dumps when life was a heavy load to carry. I'm glad that you liked the ending, I have to admit that I felt a little apprehensive when I posted it... you never know how people will react.  But, so far, so good.

All the best to my dear, and I hope the world treats you with kindness and gentleness.

Laura

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

An excellent story in every way!  Loved the mystery, humor and great dialogue.  I was especially impressed with the way you pulled the very best from Brian -- which the TV series never succeeded in doing.

I hope you have more QAF tales to share.  Can't wait!

P.S.  Thanks, especially, for completing this.  I only read completed fic, and was very excited to see this one ready to be enjoyed.  Awesome!



Author's Response:

Love your username!  I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing my fic, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I was so flattered by your statement, 'pulled the very best from Brian.'

Again, many, many thanks and all the best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

So this is how happiness looks like? I have often questioned myself the same thing and up until this moment I don't think that I have seen it yet.

I enjoyed the story even though that Ethan twist was kind of frustrating, I would have killed the bastard in prison.

Great job.

Marla



Author's Response:

Hi Marla,

Yep, what does happiness look like, I think I've seen it at times, unfortunately it doesn't seem to be a constant.  I agree with you about Ethan, he desired a lot more than he got and he did get roughed up in jail, but was it enough -     nnnnnnooooooo! LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story - if it didn't already have a blue ribbon - I would have awarded it one.



Author's Response:

Dear Lady,

Wow, I have to admit, when I saw this comment, I was gobsmacked.  I love your work, love your sites, and can't thank you enough for your generosity in providing sites for fandom fics.  You are an incredible, kind soul - lmay a lot of good karma come to you!

I truly appreciate your kind words, they mean a lot to me.  Last but not least - thanks for reading and commenting! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 10

Best ending ever, so romantic i must say i dont easily get impress but this is a goog story with a perfect ending. WELL DONE KEEP IT UP !!!!!!! luv it.



Author's Response:

Hi Schola,

Thank so much for the kind words, especially since it's not an ordianary thing.  So glad you enjoyed the fic.

I appreciate that you took the time to read an comment, sincerly.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

I haven't had a chance to read this final chapter but wanted to write a quick note anyway. I'll miss this story my talented friend, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing this story with us. I plan to get a box of chocolates, tissues (to cry because this is the last chapter) and just veg out on the couch! I'll write a review when I finish. Take care!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

I just had to thank you for this earlier comment, it was very kind that you took the time to write.

Hugs to you,

Laura

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have really enjoyed reading ths story - and these last chapters are amazing! Don't tell Brian - he would hate it if he knew - but it made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Our boys happy - away from the family who make them crazy and cause so many of their angst - I can just picture them contented for years to come!

Thanks

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi Charle,

I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing.  I agree with you, I think our boys were/are in it for the long run.  I think that the family did a lot of harm to them both, though some meant well.  At least in this AU, I gave them a little more control of their lives, I hope it played well.

I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

LOVED the story. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

what an ending, although i was waiting for the kitten's arrival i guess brian's tattoo is so much better.



Author's Response:

Hi There,

Sorry that there wasn't a kitten scene, but glad the tattoo made up for it.  I just had to show them bickering at the end, just like a normal couple.  Though, Justin dives real low when he's upset.   And Brian is always looking for the closest exit, but he's trying to curb that response.  In all, just another normal, dysfunctioning couple.  LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciated it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

wonderful story.  i started it moons ago and wasn't sure if it would be completed.  this chapter was wonderful.  so glad i saw it through to its completion.



Author's Response:

Hi Linda,

Thanks for hanging in there with the fic.  I had planned to have it completed several months ago, but best laid plans, right.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I truly appreciated your patience and support.

All the best to you and yours,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well, this was definitely worth the wait!  You truly have a way with words, and the scenario you laid out for Justin and Brian was so perfect.  Makes me question my own ability to be so descriptive!:)  You really should write more stories, my dear; this one was very witty as well as creative.  I hope you will consider doing that.  This site has been gifted with this one - I hope there will be another one in the future.



Author's Response:

Hi Sweetie,

Your compliments are like manna and I feel the same way when I read your lovely fics.  I have some shortees, 1 chapter ones planned, but not in the near future.

Many hugs and kisses for your support and encouragement.  I really have appreciated it.

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

Come Back!! I so miss this story, I hope you'll finish this soon, because I'm on pins and needles waiting (and gee it hurts) for the final chapter! I miss your writing my talented friend! Take care and remember you have a following that is waiting anxiously for the FINALE!



Author's Response:

Jasmine, Hello!

I am almost finished, this close  ().  I hope to publish within the next 5 days or sooner.  I started having problems and second-guessing what I had already written and basically imploded.  I'm getting my act together and now just have some last minute tweaking.  Thanks for hanging in there for me, your support is inspirational.

Big hug and kiss,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9

His smile lights up the room, there is only one smile that can do that for Brian - Sunshine!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm winking at you and pointing to my nose!  Thanks for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 9

Sorry it tppk so long to post, but this bronchitis was getting to me....at any rate this chapter had me doing a happy dance, even in my weaken condition!! I love how Brian was keeping the secret of where his beloved is, I knew he was headed to him! I also love the idea of lumberjack Justin, who is independent,confident, and still pursuing his art!! Love also that asshole Ethan got the shit beaten out of him in jail, can they hang him up by his violin string, the ugly weasel deserves nothing but the worse! I kept imagining a bearded, gruffy, Justin, wow sexy image...Another great chapter my talented friend and looking forward to the happy ending for our favorite couple!



Author's Response:

Hi Jamine,

So sorry to hear that you're still dealing with illness.  Fluids, rest, wine, and chocolate, and not necessarily in that order are my recommended treatment and it works every time!  :)

I'm traveling this week for work and hope to publish the final chapter real soon.  it's written but needs last minute touches.  I can't work on it while I'm traveling, I'm too tired at the end of the day.

Anyway, take care of yourself and thanks so much for reading and commenting.  You're the best!

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

I have no business reading this. I supposed to be working, but this story was like an addiction. Brian's snide comments are a riot.

I love your depiction of Lindsey in this fic. You have down pact. I have only known Nightvision to portray her as well.

This story is ending too soon for me.

Please write more!



Author's Response:

Oh sweetie, I am so flatter!  I'm glad you share my depiction of Lindsay and thanks for letting me know, I wasn't sure how that would go over with people.  I share your opinion of Nightvision, her "Divide" story is to die for.

I'll be posted the final chapter soon.  I hope you'll enjoy it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and hanging in there with me, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful update, but it's like I miss a chapter.

What did Brian do after the last chapter.  He let Justin go without doing something!?

And this is the first time they meet again?

Gggrrr I wanna now more about the last half year (* sigh * last half year! bleeeehh)

My cock responds to the visual stimuli and it begins to thicken and lift in greeting.

* sitting here with a big smile *

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi Marny,

Thanks so much for your patience.  I promise that the next and final chapter will fill in alot of the gaps.  I want to thank you so much for your continued support and kind comments.  I really have appreciated it, you helped to keep me afloat whenever I thought the fic was going to end the same wasy as the Titanic.

I hope you'll come back for the final chapter.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

oh i loved this chapter. how brian stood up for justin and his privacy. wonderful. the lemon bars were a give away that he knew where justin was and he was going to see him.

lindsay's going off her rocker if she thinks she can snag brian. ha! at least brian knows what she's up to.

looking forward to the last chapter.



Author's Response:

I want to thank you so much for the comments that you've left.  The feedback and support has been invaluable.  I'm just another sensitive writer looking for recognition.  So, thanks for doing that.

Glad you like the little tweaks and turns.  Please come back for the final chapter!

Thanks so much.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Just want to tell you I so love this story...I caught what I thought was a bad cold but was really been bronchitis so I'm stuck at home for the reat of week trying to get some rest and taking meds, so I read this story from the beginning and fell in love with it all over again!! You are just too damn talented my friend!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Poor baby!  So sorry about the cold and bronchitis, I hope you are feeling better.  I'm not sure where you're located, but hopefully the weather isn't contributing to your misery.  Nothing worse than being sick in exreme cold or heat.  Heck, being sick sucks in any weather or circumstances, really.  

I'm so flattered that you read this again, and I hope it gave you some relief from the struggle of your illness.  I really appreciate that you let me know, too.  You're generosity and kindness of spirit is just incredible.  Even as you lie sick, you're reaching out and giving to me.  Incredible.

Take care, drink fluids, and I hope your recovery is quick.

A big warm virtual hug for you  <<<hug>>>>.

All the very best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: Nightvision55 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 8

Just read everything so far - oh, you know I love Brian all in a tizz over Justin!

Update soon.

Nightvision



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic.  Yep, me too, I love a Brian who is just crazy over Justin.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate that you took the time.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: jujubeebee (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

this was really good. don't take too long to update



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it.  I'll be updating with the last chapter soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

what a great update.

now the real work begins.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  Yep, the guys have a lot of work to do and miles to cover before they come home.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I REALLY APPRECIATE IT!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

YAY!! You're backa and I just wanted to let you know that I was thinking about you and I'm so glad that you're back!! Another great chapter and the boys sem to be getting it together!! Time heals all wounds as they say, and I know that it will take time for you to heal from the loss of your beloved pet, but know that I'm thinking of you and saying a silent prayer that things will get better for my very talented friend!



Author's Response:

Hello Dear Friend!

I think your'e right, the guys are going to be okay, they'll find there way.  

I appreciate your thoughts and prayer, it must have worked because I'm feeling stronger and  my knee is better  (no surgery).  

A big,warm hug of thanks for all the support and positive feedback.  You're wonderful!

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: bec (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh the boy's are finally working things out, I've really enjoyed this



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you're enjoying and it's very kind of you to leave a comment.

Thanks so much and all the best.

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

* makes happydance * thanks for the wonderful update, together again.

 

What to do!?  Uuhhh Brian pfff ... tell your boy that you love him and he will stay!! I know!!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Ha!Ha!Ha!, I love your comment.  Brian is something else. I'm so glad that you'e enjoying it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: julimango (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 8

hey nice to see you back, are you really gonna wrap this up in just one chapter?  :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome, it's been a month, I can tell you!  Ha!Ha!

Yep, one more chaper to go.  I had outlined it and partially wrote it back in April.  I just need to fine tune it and hope to have it out within a week.  Unfortunately, I'm not as fast of my writer as many of my fellow fic writers.  I blame my brain and job. Ha!Ha!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

 “The chains, too, Fiddy Cent.  All that bling might distract low flying aircraft.” 

Hilarious! Entertaining as always!

Justin needs serious therapy. He has lsot his mind if he feels the need to dress like that.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Glad you like the humor.  Justin in rapper clothes - yeah, he needs serious therapy, I agree.  I've been trying to alleviate the tension with humor and it makes for a roller coaster ride at times.

Thanks so much for staying with the fic, and leaving your kind comments.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hello, my friend - you must have read my mind; I was just thinking about your beautiful story and when you might update it and here it is!  I am SO sorry about losing your 'baby' - I had no idea until I just now read the other comments.  And I'm also sorry to hear about your injury.  I hope it helps to know that this chapter was wonderful and I loved some of the witty reparte, such as Brian asking Justin to 'clear off a shelf or two' - hilarious!  And the emotions were beautifully depicted.  Thank you for updating and again, so sorry about your loss.  I have had dogs for years and certainly know how it's like losing a member of the family.  (P.S. - I think I see where your user name came from now.:))  Take care and I know you will finish this when you can.:)



Author's Response:

I'm giving you a big hug of thanks!  Your comment was so kind, understanding and uplifting.  It's been a rough week. 

Yep, my 'bigdogz' comes from the fact that i've owned big (actually huge) dogs for the last 20 years, and they rule the house!  I lost Hoss, my 185 pound English Mastiff, (actually, he weighed more but we couldn't get him to get on the cow scale - seriously, he was too big for the doggie scale), and he was my baby boy, so...  I also am owned by an all white wolf-hybrid named Mimi.  She's about 90 pounds, and so smart that she scares Border Collies, ha!, ha!  She's 1/8 husky and the rest Artic Wolf.  She was a rescue, as was my mastiff. Sorry, i'm digressing and now teary eyed, thinking about my boy.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such kind comments.  This story has been an odd experience for me but it's helped thicken my skin.  I've gotten a wide spectrum of comments and it's been a learning experience. 

Again, many , many thanks!

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

I know you are going thru alot with injuries and the loss of your beloved pet but please let us know what is going on....I don't think it's alot to ask that you let your fans know if you plan to continue with this story. I was one of your staunch supporters when you first posted this story and I just want you to take the time and be honest with your fans and let us know if you've loss interest in writing this beautiful story...Please stop ignoring those who post and ask for update, fans of a story care about you, and they care about the story!



Author's Response:

Hi There.

I'm writing now and will post tonight or tomorrow.  Sorry, but it's been difficult to concentrate and everytime I tried to get something out, it just seemed too crappy.  Pain, pills, work demands, and losing my pet have just made me very uncreative.  But, I think I'm coming out of the grey haze.

I haven't been ignoring your comments and I do appreciate your interest and concern.  I just haven't been checking the site and didn't know that I was getting comments.  Since the fic is not on the "recent" page, I didn't think anyone was reading it. 

Again, thanks for your patience and support.

All the best.

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

Next chapter please!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry about my delayed response, but thanks so much for reading and leaving an encouraging response.

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

are you ever gonna finish this story...you said to one person posting that you had 4 chapters ready...you know at least let your fans know what is going on even if you have to write it as an update!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

You're mean!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

WOW! Has it been a month already....still no update...I know you've had personal problems, but I'm ready to give up on this story and just consider it  another abandon fan-fic....

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

So sorry about your knee injury, I know how painful that can be so get some rest...I'm so sorry about the lost of Hoss, a pet is a special member of the family so I sure though hard, you'll remember the good times! Take care rmy friend (and I feel the same way by the way) and I send many hugs and lots of love!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

I hope you're still out there.  I didn't see this comment until now.  Thanks so much for your kindness, it's been a rough month.

I have appreciated all of your support and can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

I don't want to sound mean, because I know that you have a life and are busy, that said, are you plannng to update anytime soon...I hate reading a WIP because you never know if the writer has plans to finish it or just lost interest in it..I wish you would let the readers/fans of this story if there are plans to update any time soon. and just so you know this isn't just a suggestion for you,but some of the writers on this board, because I've seen plenty of stories that have become abandon!



Author's Response:

Dear Reader,

I will be updating soon.  I have only 2 more chapters, 4 if I break them up, to go in this story.  I've been hit by the harshness of fate.  I've had an injured and just lost a beloved member of my family, my beautiful English Mastiff "Hoss" passed away. 

Thanks for your patience.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

Take care of yourself!! Enjoy your vacation and get some rest....many hugs and chocolate is the best medicine...



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Things have been tough, my knee gave out and my beloved dog passed away and I'm devastated. 

I'll be updating soon, I promise.

You're a stranger that has become a friend.  Thanks so much for your kindness.

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

UPDATE!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

When you wish upon a star, your favorite story will appear!! Where oh where is my story, where are you next chapter!! I miss you so much...hear my tears!! (sigh) oh well let me go put on my Easter bonnet and cry!



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there with me.  I hope to update sometime this week.  Work issues were then traded for a physical injury and I'm suppose to be on vacay this next week, but now have a mucked knee!  Excuses, excuses, I know. 

I hope all is well, sincerely, not just joking.  You're the best, truly.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2011 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ok, here'sy weekly nag...where is thy story...thou must update!! I plead with thee! Ok I just saw Romeo & Juliet so that 's why I'm using thou, thee, thy...enough of the fancy talk...I will say please my talented friend update soon or I'll be reduced to tears of chocolate drops!! LOL!



Author's Response:

So sorry that I haven't updated, but tanks for the nudge.  Bad week at work, taxes, etc. are holding me up.  I hope to update this week.  Be brave my fellow chocolate lover!  ;)

Cheers,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Is this how it feels, Justin?  People trying to control you life and they all think they know what is best for you.   They’re touching you when you don’t want to be touched… grabbing and pushing… and the places that they are pushing you toward seem just as dark and dismal as the place that you’re in. 

 

Here’s the thing, Sunshine.  Nobody throws Brian Kinney from a cliff. 

 

 

 

“It’s my fucking cliff!  I invented the damn thing!  I should patent it.”


I thought the last chapter was something, but you out did yourself with this one. Every character was classic from Honeycutt wasting time and patience, to Mikey being manipulated as being the best friend he values so much.

I can't wait until the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I'm glad that it's enjoyable,  it's a little tricky working with such beloved characters and trying to convey them correctly.  I appreciate that you let me know that it's working.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Very angsty! I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see if they come to their senses!  :-D

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

I could never hate you because you are the best writer around!!! I love this chapter, angst, & love...yummy!!! The course of true love never runs smoothe for our Justin & Brian! This story reminds me of a big juicy novel, I wait anxiously for the next chapter!! I hope that you update soon, and we won't have to wait too long...but in case we do I brought a big box of chocolates!! hugs my talented friend!



Author's Response:

Hi Jasmine,

Your last post was made one hour before I posted the fic, and I didn't know if I should have laughed or whimper in remorse for letting you down.  Thanks for hanging in there with this fic and me.  Your reviews mean so much and encourage me to keep writing.  Really!

All the best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hello, dear!  Great, emotional, and angsty chapter - just my type of reading!  So glad you to see you had a chance to update, but of course now you've got me eagerly waiting for more!  Hope you'll be able to update in the not too distant future.  Thanks for sharing this imaginative fic with us!:)



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for the kind words and for taking the time to read and review my fic.  i looking forward to catching up with your real soon.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2011 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

seems like they both really have to fight for what they want. hope they both come up winners.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I believe in Brian and Justin forever, so I think they'll be winners!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

Why would I hate you?! I certainly didn’t hate you. I love you!! You’re a wonderful writer and your brilliant story makes me happy!! Love your story and Love those scenes in original show reflect in your story with some difference!!


I love finally see some talk between Brian and Justin. I think they need many time and talk. Justin surely not thinking right. Poor Sunshine. He thinks he is a freak and doesn’t deserve Brian. I’m SO sad when he said that to Brian. Brian hurts by his words. So does Justin. I’m glad Brian see through Sunshine’s mind!!


I really like Michael’s comic shop scene. Brian made perfectly clear where Michael should stands. And he accomplishes his little plan. I’m SO love him!! You really are good at this. Your Brian is really... well, Brian!! And when he thinks about Justin, it’s just melting my heart.


I love their office kiss in original show. And I love your café kiss, too!! That’s really… really wonderful!! Can’t wait to see more!! Hope you update soon!!♥♥



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.  I'm so glad that the chapter "played" well, i wasn't sure if it would.  Also, thanks for letting me know that the Brian in this fic is true to character. 

I really appreciate that you're hung in there with the fic.  Your reviews have been so supportive and informative, they've helped me in many ways.

I can't thank you enough!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hate you!? No no no, love you * giggles * wonderful update, thanks.

 

Love this scene.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Love the vid!!!!  How wonderful!!!  I wish I knew how to do that, I'm getting there, but I'm still working on getting around my LJ blog, ha, ha!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and the vid!

Laura

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well I certainly don't hate you!  I love this chapter! I love the banter between Brian and Justin.   Story keeps getting better and better.



Author's Response:

Gina Marie,

Thanks so much, I'm glad you're still hanging in there with the fic.  I've had some flaming on this story and it's left me gun shy, especially since I was working close to the original script.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I sincerely apprieciate it!

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really miss this story....sigh....oh well, let me go eat some more chocolate bon-bons and cry!



Author's Response:

Jasmine!

You're such a dear!  Don't cry - but keep the bon-bons, yummy!  Thanks for hanging in there, i'm a day late, but you know how life can get.  I just updated and I hope you enjoy it.

Big hug, a hearty thanks, and all the best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

Please update this story real soon..I miss it and get really sad when it's not updated...and also I cry big boo-hoo tears and my eyes get really swollen, and I look like I've been boxing...now you wouldn't want that to happen...not trying to make ya feel guilty for making me sad or crying! lol



Author's Response:

Dear Jasmine,

No, no, don't cry!  No boo-boo, bottom lip, please!  I'm working on it, I promise!  I hope to have it out very soon, 3 days tops.  Lots going on back on the homefront and work, so my energies have been focused there.

Here's a big hug for you <ahmmm>.  Eat some chocolate, let a puppy kiss you, and treat yourself well. 

:)

Laura

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

The story is excellent. Your writing is superb. Keep on writing because I enjoy the Brian/Justin saga. Are you going to write any more chapters? I hope so they are great. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi There,

Your kind words are manna to my muse.  Wow, thank you!  I do have more chapters planned and I'm working on one now, and hope to post it within the next three days.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

* waves * OMG I forgot to review * blushes * and this is such a beautiful story. Hmm now a know why I didn't review * sighs * I didn't have the time to read the whole chapter this weekend. Jeeeh kids * giggles * and a hubby who is finally home after 2 weeks on a business trip. Hope Justin is going to talk to Brian. Please Justin.

 

 Please update soon.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Don't worry sweetie, I certainly understand!  Family is the most important thing.  But, I'm horrible, I tell people that life gets in the way of my writing and enjoying fanfic.  Ha!  Ha!  Forgive me my weirdness.  ;)  The fact that you did go out of your way to leave a supportive comment makes the comment all the the better.  Glad your husband is home, hope it was a happy reunion. 

As always - thanks for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it!  All the best.

Laura

 

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that Brian finally gets to see Justin ... but what will Justin's reaction be?

Lovin' this story!



Author's Response:

Truly glad that you're enjoying the fic.  Justin's reaction will be in the next chapter, promise.

Thanks for reading and commenting, the support keeps me motivated.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

great chapter. don' keep us waiting to long, please



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there with me.  Your support is very appreciated. 

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

This was one hell of a chapter! 

I like the way you began with Brian talking to an unconcious Justin in his hospital bed.

Justin fear as Brian's pity, therefore, rejecting him again, sets Brian off into his self destructive mode. 

Hitting Mikey is always a pleasure  to read.

The family attacking Brian as the villian in the altercation at the party just shows what his so called friends really think of him.

That Ethan is almost as evil as Hannabal Lecter.

Please update soon!

 

 



Author's Response:

I was bounching in my seat when I read your review.  I'm so excited to see that you're into the fic and I really appreciate that you let me know.  Ethan = Hannabal, great comparison.

Many, many thanks for hanging in there with this fic, I mean that sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Can I just say that I love, love, love this chapter....it's intense for sure but so beautifully written! I also hate Michael, can someone put a gag in his iditotic mouth and a straightjacket and lay him in front of a fast moving gaarbage truck (since all he spews is garbage)...lol...anyway, I'll keep my warped fantasies of the destruction of comic book boy to myself....please update this soon....I love it!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

You're as bright and warm as Justin's smile.  The first sentence of your comment just came at the right time and means so much.  Love your suggestions for Michael.  He did have his moments in the show and it wasn't alot of a stretch to pull him into this AU.

Thanks for hanging in there with me and this fic.  I can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

poor Brian, he really doesn´t deserve that treatment but their weird relationship seems never to find an end. Michael as always - annoying!



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is having a tough time of it, but it's making him stronger and better.  We forgive him when he's bad, but that's why he's so good, right?  ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow great story I hope Brian can be near Justin soon I am sure Justin will get better quicker with Dr Kinney's touch lol



Author's Response:

Glad that you're enjoying the fic.  Yep, you're right, Doctor Brian does know how to cure Justin of many ailments.  <big wink> Too crude a comment? my bad, sorry.

I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, thanks so much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

Please Please PLease continue soon !



Author's Response:

Your so kind!  I'm working on the update now.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!! I'm SOoooooo glad I finally read this chapter. I'm really, really wanted to see Justin!!!! And now, I can't wait see Brian/Justin talk!!!!


Brian talk to the unconsciousness Justin, It's really, really SWEET!! God, I wish Justin heard Brian. Then he wouldn't refuse to see Brian. I'm SO SAD Justin did that. (I really want to see Brian/Justin scene!! when both are consciousness, of course) Justin must have Big emotional brake down. He needs to see Brian!! He needs to be with Brian!! If anyone can help Justin get through this, it’s Brian. And Brian needs Justin!! He really miserable, now!! They both need each other and it’s the only way that they can be HAPPY!!!!


I love Brian care about Jennifer. And she trust Brian. But I hope she tell Justin the truth that Brian came to see Justin every night after the bashing. Why she didn't tell Justin?! Why??!!


I like ICU visitor's lounge scene. Wow, you’re really good at this. I really like your Brian. He is very SWEET when he thinks about Justin, but still has original character!! I love that!! His 'Justin moment'...God, I'm speechless!!


And Michael!! How could he say something like that!! He got what he deserves. He is.... I don't know what to say!! God, I'm SO mad at him and others. They really didn't hear a thing?!! Why they can't see the truth!! I really, really hope Justin overheard what happened, and defend Brain, and go loft with Brian, and talk with Brian, and be with Brian!!!!!


As always, this chapter is WONDERFUL!! I really, really Can't wait to see next chapter!!!! Hope you update soon!!!!^^



Author's Response:

Wow, what a wonderful comment.  It really perked up my spirits and put a smile on my face - really and truly.  I'm so glad that you're enjoying it and I do SO appreciate that you let me know your thoughts and feelings!!  It helps so much to know what is coming across and how it's being received by the reader.  I'm working on the next chapter now, I hope you like.

Thanks so, so, so much for reading and commenting.  Your continued support is just awesome.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is very good.  Keep up the great work and don't keep us waiting for more!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like the fic.  Thanks for the support and for taking the time to read and comment.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

first of all, if the fiddler doesn't see jail time then there is no use reading the end of the story. but the way it looks i think he'll be locked away for a long long time.

secondly, what a sham jennifer is pulling. holding onto brian like he was her life's strength. brian's taking care of all of justin's medical bills. is that what she's doing getting all she can out of him yet not have him in justin's life? it's her fault that justin doesn't want to see brian. she never told justin that brian was there every night after the bashing taking care of him the only way brian could. if she had told him then brian would be doing ok and he and justin would be together.

as  for michael, he got what he deserved in the show and in this chapter. i hopejustin over heard what michael said. will he stand up for brian?

this was a awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Your first sentence had me laughing.  I agree with you, and if Ethan doesn't go to jail, then I'm not writing any more, too! :)  All the characters do have their good/bad sides, don't they?  The writers brought that out in the series, though some episodes were better written than others in protraying this concept.  I'll try to attempt this in the fic, but... I hope I'm successful.  I'm working on the next chapter, I hope you enjoy it.

Thanks so much for reading and writing, I truly appreciate your support.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

If the people heard what Michael said I don't understand why they are mad at Brian. I want for once Brian to defend himself.



Author's Response:

I agree with you, Brian needs to defend himself, and/or have people appreciate him.  I'm working on the next chapter now, I hope you appreciate it.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time - sincerely, I do.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

I miss this story and I'm going thru withdrawl from it (or maybe it's because I have a bad cold) please update soon...pretty please!!



Author's Response:

Hello Jasmine!

I'll be updating in the next two days.  Sorry about the withdrawals. Here's a big hug for your nudge {}. 

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Kati (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

great story! you really know what ur writing, i cant wait for your update :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment - very much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

So gud to know that justin is ok, for once there you got me scared Can't wait to read what happens next, pls post cause i can't wait any longer.

Author's Response:

Sorry about the scare.  All will be explained in the next chapter.  Please come back and read about what happened.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm so happy that I did something to help you because as I said you're a brilliant writer and I think we the readers need to support you writers for all the hard work and dedication you bring! Also thanks also for the staff of MW the best in the world....Take care my friend an keep writing!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Here's a big cyber hug, ummm!  On behalf of all writers and readers, we thank you.  I'm starting to feel like we've got a family here and it feels good.  Thanks so very, very much.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

this angst is a killer...............MORE, PLEASE SOON.  excellent read...this whole situation feels to real !!!!!!!!!!!  Thank you.......................



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate your kind feedback. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

I forgot to mention we have a Zero Tolerance Troll Policy and that person who gave you personal attacks also did it to other writers recently. A troll gets off on making people upset and they fail if you don't let them get to you. As mentioned that person was blocked off the website within minutes of us learning about the behavior.

People don't stop reading a story because of a troll attack. As I studied that troll's writing I think it was just a kid being ugly.

This is a very well written story; very entertaining and an asset to Whispers to have it published here.

bob



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that others had to endure this abuse.  Your quick action has really impressed me and others.  I can't thank you enough for looking out for us, protecting and supporting us. 

My sincerest thanks to you and everyone that jumped in to help and give support on whatever level.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Congratulations on the well deserved blue ribbon! You are a briiliant writer and the blue ribbon proves what I and others know.....now hurry up with that update...please!! lol



Author's Response:

Jamine,

I just want to thank you so muchf for the support and stepping in like you did.  You really saved my heart and mind.  I can't thank you enough, you're a truly kind person. 

Thanks so very much for the kind comments, support, and just being a damn nice person.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG!!!!!!! this is really really brilliant!!  I enjoyed every single part of this stiry!! You're amazing!! WOW!!

I especially like the part Brian whisper to gus. GOD!! that's SO amazing job!! It's very sad, but sooooo beautiful scene.

And I think You're really really good at describe Brian's mind!! the last part is really really impressed!! GOD!! I really LOVE this story!!

I can't wait next chapter!! I't really really interesting part!! I hope you're post it soon^^

Oh, Congraturation about Blue ribbon!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely feedback.  So glad that you are enjoying the story and that you took the time to let me know.  I really appreciate your support and kind words. 

All the best,

Laura

 

 

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Its official, I now have a uterus.

 LOOOOOOL.

You always leave us in the dark here :( CONTINUE SOON pwetty pwease !!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you got a kick out of that line.  I plan to update soon.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, your kindness and encouragement are so very appreciated.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Congratulations on the blue ribbon - can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds!:)



Author's Response:

Predec2

Thanks so much.  I know you've got a virtual mantle full of them, so I feel honored to be in good company.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

Sorry about the troll. Maybe a blue ribbon can sweeten your mood :) This work deserves it. We're counting on you to finish this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm stunned and happily overwhelmed.  I promise, I will finish this story.  It's actually already outlined and drafted, so I just have to tweak and fluff.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rapunzel (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story is really great! Don't let yourself get upset!! Carry on writing!! Looking forward to finding out where Justin was/is!!!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your support. I'm grateful to admin for taking care of it as they did. 

Thanks for the lovely feedback.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Keep writing, my friend, and ignore the ones who don't appreciate all the hard word it takes to update regularly like you do and hold the reader's suspense.  If for one find this story quite intriguing and am looking forward to the next installment.  I ENJOY the angst - keep it coming and focus on all the other readers who are immensely enjoying this story!:)



Author's Response:

Predec2,

You are by far a fantastic writer who I'm enjoyed immensely, an inspiration to other writers, and just a damn good person.  Thanks for your support and kindness in the past and now.  It would be my honor to call you a friend.

Sincerely,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

I hope you don't pull this story becuse of this hateful coward....maybe you can contact the moderators of this site...Those of us who love your story and your writing will stand up for you! Please don't pay attention to this coward's harsh words you know you're a talented writer and so do I and others!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kindness.  I wrote to the moderators and put a message to the person.  The message might be a bad idea, it was all I could think of.  However, the message will probably stop people from reading.

L

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

I just love this story and can't wait till you put up another chapter because you left us with a cliff-hanger...anc to the anonymous just because you don't like this story doesn't mean you should criticize those of us who do or the writer...there are plenty of diffent stories on this site where both Brian & Justin as a primary role...if you don't have anything constructive to say just don't comment! Sorry for the sermon but that just made me mad.



Author's Response:

Thanks for standing up for me.  I'm about to pull this story.  This same harasser just won't let up.  It's too much.  It was my first QAF and  I never expected this.

I don't know what to do.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

This person has earned the distinction to be blocked  from the website. Personal attacks and/or troll-like behavior is strictly forbidden on Whispers.

- Admin



Author's Response:

The site admin guys have been the absolute best and I and others can't thank you enough.  I'm sorry that someone will no longer be able to enjoy the fabulous work here, but seriously, if seems like they weren't anyway.  I hope they find what they are looking for - and may it contain peace, happiness, and kindness.

Love,

Laura

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter, we need another one NOW. please.



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! Ha! Ha!

Thanks for hanging in there with me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

ooh...he's alive!! what an edge on the seat ending of this chapter....please hurry and update, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The next chapter will be posted soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: July (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

ohh stopping at this point is cruel ! Looking forward to more !



Author's Response:

Oh, you are too funny!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.  I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow wonderful chapter, but you're evil. Need an update ASAP ... please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now.  Thanks for reading and leaving a kind comment, you have no idea how much I appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW brilliant chapter, now i really can't wait for more!

Thanks

xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks you are very kind and I'm being sincere.  Thanks for reading and commenting, and being nice. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

you have my attention...good read.  look forward to more soon.  thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and support.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best.

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

I can't stand the suspense. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I hope to update shortly.  I hope you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

WTF you can't just end it there. That's not an ending thats just mean. Even if you intend to write another chapter thats mean......



Author's Response:

More chapters to come, it ain't over yet!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

damn

that was so amazing.   i so need more.   The emotion of brian is great    cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I appreciate your support and kind words.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sincerely,

Laura

Reviewer: Julian (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Am enjoying this story very much.... Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  The next chapter is coming soon.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it is very appreciated!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, you evil girl you, leaving us with that cliffhanger - are you taking lessons from me? LOL!  Loved it!  And I really loved the angst part of this chapter and how you delved into Brian's emotions as well as Debbie's in particular.  I always liked the mother/son relationship between the two of them - so sassy but also sweet and no-nonsense.   Very engrossig story - looking forward to seeing how the plot progresses and finding out just where Justin has been!:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind comments.  It is appreciated, you have no idea how much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

THANK GOD!!!  NOW TO THE 5 QUESTIONS: HOW, WHERE, WHO, WHEN, AND WHY.  GOOD STORY!!



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! Brilliant!  Yes, all is coming in the next chapters, plus more.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 2

What is going on with Justin?? None of the usual people that he might have been with aren't panning out! Could it be someone totally different?

Great story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian, Where's Justin? We need more sooon... ~ K

Author's Response:

I apologize for my delayed response.  Justin will be in Chapter 6 and it's coming soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Sad where's my sunshine? ~ K

Author's Response:

He's coming.  Thanks for reading. I apologize for the delayed response.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

So Hooked, on to the next chapter...

Later ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is nice am likin the way brian is missing justin. Pls when will justin come out from hiding.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  I appreciate you taking the time to read and leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

omg

this is great i just read it all in one sitting i cant wait for what happens next.   i hope it brings jen and brian closer.   whertr the hell is justin though and chin rat thats priceless



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Where is Ethan, indeed! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

I am hoping that Justin and Brian will get together in this story. I would not like the story if they do not.

You are  good writer and keep the mystery involved.

I loved the part where Jennifer and Brian got together to discuss Justin's missing. Plus, Jennifer's concern about Brian too.

Please keep up the good writing.

Have a nice spring!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  In regards to B/J getting together, I have to say I love happy endings! <wink>

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

This fic looks really good and I  want to read it.....but.... I am afraid it won't be finished ... sooo I'll  wait till it's complete.... Thanks... 

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

too easy that they caught him so quickly. has to be working with someone. first of all if something happened to just im that apartment then who was going to move him? not the fiddler, he's too weak.

how haunting was brian's dream.

brian and his mother-in-law. love them when their on the same side together.



Author's Response:

Great guesses.  Regarding Brian and Jen, yeah I agree, I love seeing them getting along.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: galenutgre (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

great chapter,keep them coming please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian. He can't even admit his love for justin in his dream!! But at least he finally think justin as his partner!! Thanks God!! Good for him!!

I like Brian-Jeniffer part. I always like Brian-Jeniffer scene.

This chapter is really long one. I appreciate that. and I really like Brian's POV. Brian's POV in this chapter is heartbreaking!! WHERE is Justin!!

The suspense is killing me!! What did Ethan do to justin??!! Why there are SO many blood??!! Please, Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Love all of your questions and the major of them will be in the next chapter.  The next chapter might be as long as the chapter 4, so pack that snack.  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

I totally thought for a moment that you had put in Brian as a suspect, and was wondering how you would wind up the story with that plot further on but luckily you didn´t and I could relax....... Well written story, continue soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Yeah, having Brian arrested for Justin's disappearance would have ended the story soon. Ha! Ha!

 

All the best,

Laura

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