Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

I hope you don't pull this story becuse of this hateful coward....maybe you can contact the moderators of this site...Those of us who love your story and your writing will stand up for you! Please don't pay attention to this coward's harsh words you know you're a talented writer and so do I and others!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kindness.  I wrote to the moderators and put a message to the person.  The message might be a bad idea, it was all I could think of.  However, the message will probably stop people from reading.

L

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

I just love this story and can't wait till you put up another chapter because you left us with a cliff-hanger...anc to the anonymous just because you don't like this story doesn't mean you should criticize those of us who do or the writer...there are plenty of diffent stories on this site where both Brian & Justin as a primary role...if you don't have anything constructive to say just don't comment! Sorry for the sermon but that just made me mad.



Author's Response:

Thanks for standing up for me.  I'm about to pull this story.  This same harasser just won't let up.  It's too much.  It was my first QAF and  I never expected this.

I don't know what to do.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

This person has earned the distinction to be blocked  from the website. Personal attacks and/or troll-like behavior is strictly forbidden on Whispers.

- Admin



Author's Response:

The site admin guys have been the absolute best and I and others can't thank you enough.  I'm sorry that someone will no longer be able to enjoy the fabulous work here, but seriously, if seems like they weren't anyway.  I hope they find what they are looking for - and may it contain peace, happiness, and kindness.

Love,

Laura

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter, we need another one NOW. please.



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! Ha! Ha!

Thanks for hanging in there with me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

ooh...he's alive!! what an edge on the seat ending of this chapter....please hurry and update, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The next chapter will be posted soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: July (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

ohh stopping at this point is cruel ! Looking forward to more !



Author's Response:

Oh, you are too funny!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.  I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow wonderful chapter, but you're evil. Need an update ASAP ... please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now.  Thanks for reading and leaving a kind comment, you have no idea how much I appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW brilliant chapter, now i really can't wait for more!

Thanks

xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks you are very kind and I'm being sincere.  Thanks for reading and commenting, and being nice. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

you have my attention...good read.  look forward to more soon.  thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and support.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best.

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

I can't stand the suspense. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I hope to update shortly.  I hope you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

WTF you can't just end it there. That's not an ending thats just mean. Even if you intend to write another chapter thats mean......



Author's Response:

More chapters to come, it ain't over yet!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

damn

that was so amazing.   i so need more.   The emotion of brian is great    cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I appreciate your support and kind words.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sincerely,

Laura

Reviewer: Julian (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Am enjoying this story very much.... Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  The next chapter is coming soon.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it is very appreciated!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, you evil girl you, leaving us with that cliffhanger - are you taking lessons from me? LOL!  Loved it!  And I really loved the angst part of this chapter and how you delved into Brian's emotions as well as Debbie's in particular.  I always liked the mother/son relationship between the two of them - so sassy but also sweet and no-nonsense.   Very engrossig story - looking forward to seeing how the plot progresses and finding out just where Justin has been!:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind comments.  It is appreciated, you have no idea how much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

THANK GOD!!!  NOW TO THE 5 QUESTIONS: HOW, WHERE, WHO, WHEN, AND WHY.  GOOD STORY!!



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! Brilliant!  Yes, all is coming in the next chapters, plus more.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 2

What is going on with Justin?? None of the usual people that he might have been with aren't panning out! Could it be someone totally different?

Great story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian, Where's Justin? We need more sooon... ~ K

Author's Response:

I apologize for my delayed response.  Justin will be in Chapter 6 and it's coming soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Sad where's my sunshine? ~ K

Author's Response:

He's coming.  Thanks for reading. I apologize for the delayed response.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

So Hooked, on to the next chapter...

Later ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is nice am likin the way brian is missing justin. Pls when will justin come out from hiding.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  I appreciate you taking the time to read and leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

omg

this is great i just read it all in one sitting i cant wait for what happens next.   i hope it brings jen and brian closer.   whertr the hell is justin though and chin rat thats priceless



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Where is Ethan, indeed! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

I am hoping that Justin and Brian will get together in this story. I would not like the story if they do not.

You are  good writer and keep the mystery involved.

I loved the part where Jennifer and Brian got together to discuss Justin's missing. Plus, Jennifer's concern about Brian too.

Please keep up the good writing.

Have a nice spring!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  In regards to B/J getting together, I have to say I love happy endings! <wink>

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

This fic looks really good and I  want to read it.....but.... I am afraid it won't be finished ... sooo I'll  wait till it's complete.... Thanks... 

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

too easy that they caught him so quickly. has to be working with someone. first of all if something happened to just im that apartment then who was going to move him? not the fiddler, he's too weak.

how haunting was brian's dream.

brian and his mother-in-law. love them when their on the same side together.



Author's Response:

Great guesses.  Regarding Brian and Jen, yeah I agree, I love seeing them getting along.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: galenutgre (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

great chapter,keep them coming please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian. He can't even admit his love for justin in his dream!! But at least he finally think justin as his partner!! Thanks God!! Good for him!!

I like Brian-Jeniffer part. I always like Brian-Jeniffer scene.

This chapter is really long one. I appreciate that. and I really like Brian's POV. Brian's POV in this chapter is heartbreaking!! WHERE is Justin!!

The suspense is killing me!! What did Ethan do to justin??!! Why there are SO many blood??!! Please, Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Love all of your questions and the major of them will be in the next chapter.  The next chapter might be as long as the chapter 4, so pack that snack.  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

I totally thought for a moment that you had put in Brian as a suspect, and was wondering how you would wind up the story with that plot further on but luckily you didn´t and I could relax....... Well written story, continue soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Yeah, having Brian arrested for Justin's disappearance would have ended the story soon. Ha! Ha!

 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh I am so worried about Justin I loved the scene with Jennifer though



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Glad you liked the Bri-Jen scene, I think they have a special relationship, too.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loving it so far, i really hope they find Justin, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a very well written story! The suspense is killing me!! Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, that is very kind of you.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

omg this chapter had me on the edge of my seat!   Where is Justin!!! lol Great update



Author's Response:

Glad that the chapter engaged you.  I appreciate the compliment.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

this story is driving me crazzzzy!!!..  please give us readers a clue to justin's wherabouts.  we know he isn't dead but are worried just the same.  such a good nerve wracking story.



Author's Response:

You'll learn a lot more in the next chapter.  Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hello, my friend!  I'm really enjoying your story and the way you've crafted Brian's emotions and worry over Justin, in addition to his internal struggle over how much to admit to himself and to others about how much he means to him.  And I always love to read stories that involve interaction between Brian and Jennifer, especially when they're bonded over worry for the boy they love.:)  Looking forward to finding out where Justin has gone.:) 



Author's Response:

Hell!

Thanks for your support, I really appreciate it.  The Bri-Jen scene was tricky but enjoyable to write.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

OH! You leave summary of next chapter! I'm really, really want to see next chapter!! Please post it SOON!! *Hugs*

I like your Carl. he likes Deb, trying to understand gay people, and very good detective!! I hope he consider Craig and kip as suspects too, though. But no one knows Justin and Kip's incident. *Sign*

Michael need to stay out of it. his whining is so irritate me.

Poor Brian. I like his action and word. I can imagine how frustrated he must be!!

Oh, I love the part that Carl and Brian leaving the diner!! Yeah, Brian have some kind of weired power over guys in Liberty Avenue!! *Smile*



Author's Response:

Carl wasn't so bad, right?  Just uninformed, I think.  And Brian is Brian F*cking Kinney - and don't they all knew and love it!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

How can you leave it hanging like that?  Please update soon.  Excellent story so far!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Sorry about the cliff hanger.  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

don't leave us hanging to long. PLEASE.



Author's Response:

Updates are coming!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

did anyone mention craig to carl? i wouldn't put it past him to physically hurt his son that he disowned.

brian acting all cool. love it.

if it's justin down by the river, he better be hurt but not dead.



Author's Response:

Good point about Craig.  In regards to Justin... I believe in happy endings!  ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

hris really should keep his mouth closed.

live how brian chased down ethan.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

i love it



Author's Response:

I'm so glad.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

what a cliffhanger?? hope you update soon :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Yes, cliffhanger - writer's tool to hopefully get you to come back.  I hope it works.  ;)

Thanksf or reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

agrrrr you're evil. Need an update ASAP.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Sorry about my very delayed response and thanks.  I do very much appreciate that you read the fic and took the time to leave a comment. 

Glad that you're enjoying my evilness.  ;)

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

I wonder why you mention no funeral scenes. There was no such scene after the Rage party. When Brian was attending what he thought was Michael's funeral in a dream and saw himself in the casket it was after the bombing at Babylon much later.



Author's Response:

Dear Reader,

The "no funderal scenes" refers to this AU fic.  It's a hint to the reader... I don't want to give away too much, but it's my way of saying that the ending won't be as bleak as it may seem.  Especially in future chapters. 

Again, this is an AU, and it may parallel the show at times, but it is will veer away, facts will change, etc.  Many fics do that.

Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this story. You are injecting very nice imagery into your writting,I can visualize it perfectly. Carl is on hell of an interrogator, and poor Brian. Regret is not a pleasant thing to feel, and for him neither is love. The deeper the love the harder it hurts. Really wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for wonderful and supportive comments.  It's a mutual admiration society here, I very much enjoy your work. 

This story is sort of written like a rollercoaster ride, it goes up and down, it flips around, and it twists and turns.  I hope the reader won't get off until the ride is over. 

I hope you come back and continue to read, I will be updating soon.

Thanks!

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is a great story. You write very well, thank you for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for the kind words.  They picked up my spirits.  I'm your best friend now!  Really!

Sincerely, thanks so much for your support and reading and commenting.  I'll be updating soon, I hope you come back.

 

 

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting interrogation! I never think about similar personality between Chris, Ethan and Brian. Yeah, you're right. They're all arrogant, self-centered, and controlling. But Brian is the significant special one for Justin!! *_*
Oh, Poor Brian. I Can't wait to read more!! Hope you post next chapter soon!!



Author's Response:

Your name is familiar, but I can't place it.  Writer? Video? Banner?  Anyway, love it.

I hope you liked the interrogation, I worked on that piece for some time and pulled from memories of crime shows. 

I absolutely believe B/J forever, only Brian for Justin, and I believe in happy endings - big hint here on this fic. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting; I hope you'll come back and read the updates.

 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love how you're writing this. Love the first person tense.  Love the suspense. It reads like a mickey spillane novel.  Love the mystery!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words, it's been so long since I wrote, I wasn't sure if I still knew how.  I love me a tough guy character.  Mickey Spillane - that's a compliment in itself.  I wonder how many people under the age of 30 know that character from the dime store novels.  

I really enjoy your work and have been following Broken Open on several sites.  That's such a marvelous gut-twister, it sets the bar for all us angst-wannabes.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 2

I don't get the hate for Ethan all the imature name calling what about brian? what about the name calling for him...or hobbs one hurt him the other play games and disrespect him alot so what did ethan do.



Author's Response:

All your questions and concerns will be addressed in the upcoming chapters.  Your're right, all three men did various degrees of damage to Justin, some worse than others.  Of course, this is an AU - alternate universe - so the storyline of this fic will parallel the show but will veer off into another direction later on.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is so engrossing, my friend!  So full of warring emotions and angst.  Can't wait to see how this is eventually resolved! 



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for coming back and reading.  The rollercoaster ride is just getting started so hold on tight.  I hope you'll ride it to the end.

All the best!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

So far, so good!  Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate your report.  I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

omg leave us hanging like that. i know that's your ploy to keep us waiting for the ensuing chapters.  good story we are liking it a whole lot.



Author's Response:

Yeah, cliff hangers - a writer's cheap trick to hopefully get the readers to come back.  What can I say, you caught me.  Ha!  Thanks for reading and commenting and I'm glad you are enjoying it. 

I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best.

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Brian. He must be terrified thinking Justin would be hurt. I hope they find Sunshine soon!! I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The plot will thicken for a few more chapters as we see the effect that Justin's disappearance has on Brian.

I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll enjoy it.

Again, thanks.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hello, my friend!  How great to see a story from you on here! Welcome!  I'm very intrigued by your beginning - looking forward to the next installment - keep going!:) 



Author's Response:

Hi There!

I'm following your stories and just loving them.  Thanks for dropping by and leaving your kind words.  I really appreciate them.  Now, go back and update some more of your stories, I'm waiting!  Ha! Ha! 

Sincerely, thanks for taking the time to say hi.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

i'm intrigued and want more as soon as possible.

could have been the fiddler or hobbs or anyone, but never ever brian.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I hope you'll come back.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

You got me hooked.  Great beginning!



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks so much!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

great first chapter, waiting for more.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the kind words, thanks!

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm excited to see you writing. :) I really like this so far. You write first person very well. Is the whole story going to be in Carls's POV? Just curious.Thanks for a fun beginning to a sure to be intriguing story. *hugs* Mandi




Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Such a fan of your work!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow great start!  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Love your Broken Open fic.  Thanks for reading and leaving such a kind message.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

interesting beginning--justin where are you.



Author's Response:

I hope you come back to read some more.  Where indeed is Justin....   ;)

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to Midnight Whispers. You're off to a very good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome and beginning my first ever comment in MW!  And an extra thank you for being so nice. 

All the best!

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