Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

great chapter. don' keep us waiting to long, please



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there with me.  Your support is very appreciated. 

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

This was one hell of a chapter! 

I like the way you began with Brian talking to an unconcious Justin in his hospital bed.

Justin fear as Brian's pity, therefore, rejecting him again, sets Brian off into his self destructive mode. 

Hitting Mikey is always a pleasure  to read.

The family attacking Brian as the villian in the altercation at the party just shows what his so called friends really think of him.

That Ethan is almost as evil as Hannabal Lecter.

Please update soon!

 

 



Author's Response:

I was bounching in my seat when I read your review.  I'm so excited to see that you're into the fic and I really appreciate that you let me know.  Ethan = Hannabal, great comparison.

Many, many thanks for hanging in there with this fic, I mean that sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Can I just say that I love, love, love this chapter....it's intense for sure but so beautifully written! I also hate Michael, can someone put a gag in his iditotic mouth and a straightjacket and lay him in front of a fast moving gaarbage truck (since all he spews is garbage)...lol...anyway, I'll keep my warped fantasies of the destruction of comic book boy to myself....please update this soon....I love it!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

You're as bright and warm as Justin's smile.  The first sentence of your comment just came at the right time and means so much.  Love your suggestions for Michael.  He did have his moments in the show and it wasn't alot of a stretch to pull him into this AU.

Thanks for hanging in there with me and this fic.  I can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

poor Brian, he really doesn´t deserve that treatment but their weird relationship seems never to find an end. Michael as always - annoying!



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is having a tough time of it, but it's making him stronger and better.  We forgive him when he's bad, but that's why he's so good, right?  ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow great story I hope Brian can be near Justin soon I am sure Justin will get better quicker with Dr Kinney's touch lol



Author's Response:

Glad that you're enjoying the fic.  Yep, you're right, Doctor Brian does know how to cure Justin of many ailments.  <big wink> Too crude a comment? my bad, sorry.

I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, thanks so much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

Please Please PLease continue soon !



Author's Response:

Your so kind!  I'm working on the update now.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!! I'm SOoooooo glad I finally read this chapter. I'm really, really wanted to see Justin!!!! And now, I can't wait see Brian/Justin talk!!!!


Brian talk to the unconsciousness Justin, It's really, really SWEET!! God, I wish Justin heard Brian. Then he wouldn't refuse to see Brian. I'm SO SAD Justin did that. (I really want to see Brian/Justin scene!! when both are consciousness, of course) Justin must have Big emotional brake down. He needs to see Brian!! He needs to be with Brian!! If anyone can help Justin get through this, it’s Brian. And Brian needs Justin!! He really miserable, now!! They both need each other and it’s the only way that they can be HAPPY!!!!


I love Brian care about Jennifer. And she trust Brian. But I hope she tell Justin the truth that Brian came to see Justin every night after the bashing. Why she didn't tell Justin?! Why??!!


I like ICU visitor's lounge scene. Wow, you’re really good at this. I really like your Brian. He is very SWEET when he thinks about Justin, but still has original character!! I love that!! His 'Justin moment'...God, I'm speechless!!


And Michael!! How could he say something like that!! He got what he deserves. He is.... I don't know what to say!! God, I'm SO mad at him and others. They really didn't hear a thing?!! Why they can't see the truth!! I really, really hope Justin overheard what happened, and defend Brain, and go loft with Brian, and talk with Brian, and be with Brian!!!!!


As always, this chapter is WONDERFUL!! I really, really Can't wait to see next chapter!!!! Hope you update soon!!!!^^



Author's Response:

Wow, what a wonderful comment.  It really perked up my spirits and put a smile on my face - really and truly.  I'm so glad that you're enjoying it and I do SO appreciate that you let me know your thoughts and feelings!!  It helps so much to know what is coming across and how it's being received by the reader.  I'm working on the next chapter now, I hope you like.

Thanks so, so, so much for reading and commenting.  Your continued support is just awesome.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is very good.  Keep up the great work and don't keep us waiting for more!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like the fic.  Thanks for the support and for taking the time to read and comment.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

first of all, if the fiddler doesn't see jail time then there is no use reading the end of the story. but the way it looks i think he'll be locked away for a long long time.

secondly, what a sham jennifer is pulling. holding onto brian like he was her life's strength. brian's taking care of all of justin's medical bills. is that what she's doing getting all she can out of him yet not have him in justin's life? it's her fault that justin doesn't want to see brian. she never told justin that brian was there every night after the bashing taking care of him the only way brian could. if she had told him then brian would be doing ok and he and justin would be together.

as  for michael, he got what he deserved in the show and in this chapter. i hopejustin over heard what michael said. will he stand up for brian?

this was a awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Your first sentence had me laughing.  I agree with you, and if Ethan doesn't go to jail, then I'm not writing any more, too! :)  All the characters do have their good/bad sides, don't they?  The writers brought that out in the series, though some episodes were better written than others in protraying this concept.  I'll try to attempt this in the fic, but... I hope I'm successful.  I'm working on the next chapter, I hope you enjoy it.

Thanks so much for reading and writing, I truly appreciate your support.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2011 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

If the people heard what Michael said I don't understand why they are mad at Brian. I want for once Brian to defend himself.



Author's Response:

I agree with you, Brian needs to defend himself, and/or have people appreciate him.  I'm working on the next chapter now, I hope you appreciate it.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time - sincerely, I do.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

I miss this story and I'm going thru withdrawl from it (or maybe it's because I have a bad cold) please update soon...pretty please!!



Author's Response:

Hello Jasmine!

I'll be updating in the next two days.  Sorry about the withdrawals. Here's a big hug for your nudge {}. 

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Kati (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

great story! you really know what ur writing, i cant wait for your update :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment - very much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

So gud to know that justin is ok, for once there you got me scared Can't wait to read what happens next, pls post cause i can't wait any longer.

Author's Response:

Sorry about the scare.  All will be explained in the next chapter.  Please come back and read about what happened.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm so happy that I did something to help you because as I said you're a brilliant writer and I think we the readers need to support you writers for all the hard work and dedication you bring! Also thanks also for the staff of MW the best in the world....Take care my friend an keep writing!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Here's a big cyber hug, ummm!  On behalf of all writers and readers, we thank you.  I'm starting to feel like we've got a family here and it feels good.  Thanks so very, very much.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

this angst is a killer...............MORE, PLEASE SOON.  excellent read...this whole situation feels to real !!!!!!!!!!!  Thank you.......................



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate your kind feedback. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

I forgot to mention we have a Zero Tolerance Troll Policy and that person who gave you personal attacks also did it to other writers recently. A troll gets off on making people upset and they fail if you don't let them get to you. As mentioned that person was blocked off the website within minutes of us learning about the behavior.

People don't stop reading a story because of a troll attack. As I studied that troll's writing I think it was just a kid being ugly.

This is a very well written story; very entertaining and an asset to Whispers to have it published here.

bob



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that others had to endure this abuse.  Your quick action has really impressed me and others.  I can't thank you enough for looking out for us, protecting and supporting us. 

My sincerest thanks to you and everyone that jumped in to help and give support on whatever level.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Congratulations on the well deserved blue ribbon! You are a briiliant writer and the blue ribbon proves what I and others know.....now hurry up with that update...please!! lol



Author's Response:

Jamine,

I just want to thank you so muchf for the support and stepping in like you did.  You really saved my heart and mind.  I can't thank you enough, you're a truly kind person. 

Thanks so very much for the kind comments, support, and just being a damn nice person.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG!!!!!!! this is really really brilliant!!  I enjoyed every single part of this stiry!! You're amazing!! WOW!!

I especially like the part Brian whisper to gus. GOD!! that's SO amazing job!! It's very sad, but sooooo beautiful scene.

And I think You're really really good at describe Brian's mind!! the last part is really really impressed!! GOD!! I really LOVE this story!!

I can't wait next chapter!! I't really really interesting part!! I hope you're post it soon^^

Oh, Congraturation about Blue ribbon!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely feedback.  So glad that you are enjoying the story and that you took the time to let me know.  I really appreciate your support and kind words. 

All the best,

Laura

 

 

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Its official, I now have a uterus.

 LOOOOOOL.

You always leave us in the dark here :( CONTINUE SOON pwetty pwease !!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you got a kick out of that line.  I plan to update soon.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, your kindness and encouragement are so very appreciated.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Congratulations on the blue ribbon - can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds!:)



Author's Response:

Predec2

Thanks so much.  I know you've got a virtual mantle full of them, so I feel honored to be in good company.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

Sorry about the troll. Maybe a blue ribbon can sweeten your mood :) This work deserves it. We're counting on you to finish this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm stunned and happily overwhelmed.  I promise, I will finish this story.  It's actually already outlined and drafted, so I just have to tweak and fluff.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rapunzel (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story is really great! Don't let yourself get upset!! Carry on writing!! Looking forward to finding out where Justin was/is!!!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your support. I'm grateful to admin for taking care of it as they did. 

Thanks for the lovely feedback.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

Keep writing, my friend, and ignore the ones who don't appreciate all the hard word it takes to update regularly like you do and hold the reader's suspense.  If for one find this story quite intriguing and am looking forward to the next installment.  I ENJOY the angst - keep it coming and focus on all the other readers who are immensely enjoying this story!:)



Author's Response:

Predec2,

You are by far a fantastic writer who I'm enjoyed immensely, an inspiration to other writers, and just a damn good person.  Thanks for your support and kindness in the past and now.  It would be my honor to call you a friend.

Sincerely,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

I hope you don't pull this story becuse of this hateful coward....maybe you can contact the moderators of this site...Those of us who love your story and your writing will stand up for you! Please don't pay attention to this coward's harsh words you know you're a talented writer and so do I and others!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kindness.  I wrote to the moderators and put a message to the person.  The message might be a bad idea, it was all I could think of.  However, the message will probably stop people from reading.

L

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

I just love this story and can't wait till you put up another chapter because you left us with a cliff-hanger...anc to the anonymous just because you don't like this story doesn't mean you should criticize those of us who do or the writer...there are plenty of diffent stories on this site where both Brian & Justin as a primary role...if you don't have anything constructive to say just don't comment! Sorry for the sermon but that just made me mad.



Author's Response:

Thanks for standing up for me.  I'm about to pull this story.  This same harasser just won't let up.  It's too much.  It was my first QAF and  I never expected this.

I don't know what to do.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

This person has earned the distinction to be blocked  from the website. Personal attacks and/or troll-like behavior is strictly forbidden on Whispers.

- Admin



Author's Response:

The site admin guys have been the absolute best and I and others can't thank you enough.  I'm sorry that someone will no longer be able to enjoy the fabulous work here, but seriously, if seems like they weren't anyway.  I hope they find what they are looking for - and may it contain peace, happiness, and kindness.

Love,

Laura

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter, we need another one NOW. please.



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! Ha! Ha!

Thanks for hanging in there with me.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

ooh...he's alive!! what an edge on the seat ending of this chapter....please hurry and update, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The next chapter will be posted soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: July (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

ohh stopping at this point is cruel ! Looking forward to more !



Author's Response:

Oh, you are too funny!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.  I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow wonderful chapter, but you're evil. Need an update ASAP ... please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now.  Thanks for reading and leaving a kind comment, you have no idea how much I appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW brilliant chapter, now i really can't wait for more!

Thanks

xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks you are very kind and I'm being sincere.  Thanks for reading and commenting, and being nice. 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

you have my attention...good read.  look forward to more soon.  thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and support.  I sincerely appreciate it.

All the best.

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

I can't stand the suspense. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I hope to update shortly.  I hope you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

WTF you can't just end it there. That's not an ending thats just mean. Even if you intend to write another chapter thats mean......



Author's Response:

More chapters to come, it ain't over yet!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

damn

that was so amazing.   i so need more.   The emotion of brian is great    cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I appreciate your support and kind words.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sincerely,

Laura

Reviewer: Julian (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Am enjoying this story very much.... Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  The next chapter is coming soon.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it is very appreciated!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, you evil girl you, leaving us with that cliffhanger - are you taking lessons from me? LOL!  Loved it!  And I really loved the angst part of this chapter and how you delved into Brian's emotions as well as Debbie's in particular.  I always liked the mother/son relationship between the two of them - so sassy but also sweet and no-nonsense.   Very engrossig story - looking forward to seeing how the plot progresses and finding out just where Justin has been!:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind comments.  It is appreciated, you have no idea how much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

THANK GOD!!!  NOW TO THE 5 QUESTIONS: HOW, WHERE, WHO, WHEN, AND WHY.  GOOD STORY!!



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! Brilliant!  Yes, all is coming in the next chapters, plus more.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 2

What is going on with Justin?? None of the usual people that he might have been with aren't panning out! Could it be someone totally different?

Great story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian, Where's Justin? We need more sooon... ~ K

Author's Response:

I apologize for my delayed response.  Justin will be in Chapter 6 and it's coming soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Sad where's my sunshine? ~ K

Author's Response:

He's coming.  Thanks for reading. I apologize for the delayed response.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

So Hooked, on to the next chapter...

Later ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is nice am likin the way brian is missing justin. Pls when will justin come out from hiding.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic.  I appreciate you taking the time to read and leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

omg

this is great i just read it all in one sitting i cant wait for what happens next.   i hope it brings jen and brian closer.   whertr the hell is justin though and chin rat thats priceless



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Where is Ethan, indeed! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

I am hoping that Justin and Brian will get together in this story. I would not like the story if they do not.

You are  good writer and keep the mystery involved.

I loved the part where Jennifer and Brian got together to discuss Justin's missing. Plus, Jennifer's concern about Brian too.

Please keep up the good writing.

Have a nice spring!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  In regards to B/J getting together, I have to say I love happy endings! <wink>

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

This fic looks really good and I  want to read it.....but.... I am afraid it won't be finished ... sooo I'll  wait till it's complete.... Thanks... 

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

too easy that they caught him so quickly. has to be working with someone. first of all if something happened to just im that apartment then who was going to move him? not the fiddler, he's too weak.

how haunting was brian's dream.

brian and his mother-in-law. love them when their on the same side together.



Author's Response:

Great guesses.  Regarding Brian and Jen, yeah I agree, I love seeing them getting along.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: galenutgre (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

great chapter,keep them coming please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian. He can't even admit his love for justin in his dream!! But at least he finally think justin as his partner!! Thanks God!! Good for him!!

I like Brian-Jeniffer part. I always like Brian-Jeniffer scene.

This chapter is really long one. I appreciate that. and I really like Brian's POV. Brian's POV in this chapter is heartbreaking!! WHERE is Justin!!

The suspense is killing me!! What did Ethan do to justin??!! Why there are SO many blood??!! Please, Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Love all of your questions and the major of them will be in the next chapter.  The next chapter might be as long as the chapter 4, so pack that snack.  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

I totally thought for a moment that you had put in Brian as a suspect, and was wondering how you would wind up the story with that plot further on but luckily you didn´t and I could relax....... Well written story, continue soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Yeah, having Brian arrested for Justin's disappearance would have ended the story soon. Ha! Ha!

 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh I am so worried about Justin I loved the scene with Jennifer though



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Glad you liked the Bri-Jen scene, I think they have a special relationship, too.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loving it so far, i really hope they find Justin, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a very well written story! The suspense is killing me!! Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, that is very kind of you.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

omg this chapter had me on the edge of my seat!   Where is Justin!!! lol Great update



Author's Response:

Glad that the chapter engaged you.  I appreciate the compliment.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

this story is driving me crazzzzy!!!..  please give us readers a clue to justin's wherabouts.  we know he isn't dead but are worried just the same.  such a good nerve wracking story.



Author's Response:

You'll learn a lot more in the next chapter.  Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hello, my friend!  I'm really enjoying your story and the way you've crafted Brian's emotions and worry over Justin, in addition to his internal struggle over how much to admit to himself and to others about how much he means to him.  And I always love to read stories that involve interaction between Brian and Jennifer, especially when they're bonded over worry for the boy they love.:)  Looking forward to finding out where Justin has gone.:) 



Author's Response:

Hell!

Thanks for your support, I really appreciate it.  The Bri-Jen scene was tricky but enjoyable to write.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

OH! You leave summary of next chapter! I'm really, really want to see next chapter!! Please post it SOON!! *Hugs*

I like your Carl. he likes Deb, trying to understand gay people, and very good detective!! I hope he consider Craig and kip as suspects too, though. But no one knows Justin and Kip's incident. *Sign*

Michael need to stay out of it. his whining is so irritate me.

Poor Brian. I like his action and word. I can imagine how frustrated he must be!!

Oh, I love the part that Carl and Brian leaving the diner!! Yeah, Brian have some kind of weired power over guys in Liberty Avenue!! *Smile*



Author's Response:

Carl wasn't so bad, right?  Just uninformed, I think.  And Brian is Brian F*cking Kinney - and don't they all knew and love it!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

How can you leave it hanging like that?  Please update soon.  Excellent story so far!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the fic.  Sorry about the cliff hanger.  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

don't leave us hanging to long. PLEASE.



Author's Response:

Updates are coming!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

did anyone mention craig to carl? i wouldn't put it past him to physically hurt his son that he disowned.

brian acting all cool. love it.

if it's justin down by the river, he better be hurt but not dead.



Author's Response:

Good point about Craig.  In regards to Justin... I believe in happy endings!  ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

hris really should keep his mouth closed.

live how brian chased down ethan.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

i love it



Author's Response:

I'm so glad.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

what a cliffhanger?? hope you update soon :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Yes, cliffhanger - writer's tool to hopefully get you to come back.  I hope it works.  ;)

Thanksf or reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

agrrrr you're evil. Need an update ASAP.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Sorry about my very delayed response and thanks.  I do very much appreciate that you read the fic and took the time to leave a comment. 

Glad that you're enjoying my evilness.  ;)

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

I wonder why you mention no funeral scenes. There was no such scene after the Rage party. When Brian was attending what he thought was Michael's funeral in a dream and saw himself in the casket it was after the bombing at Babylon much later.



Author's Response:

Dear Reader,

The "no funderal scenes" refers to this AU fic.  It's a hint to the reader... I don't want to give away too much, but it's my way of saying that the ending won't be as bleak as it may seem.  Especially in future chapters. 

Again, this is an AU, and it may parallel the show at times, but it is will veer away, facts will change, etc.  Many fics do that.

Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this story. You are injecting very nice imagery into your writting,I can visualize it perfectly. Carl is on hell of an interrogator, and poor Brian. Regret is not a pleasant thing to feel, and for him neither is love. The deeper the love the harder it hurts. Really wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for wonderful and supportive comments.  It's a mutual admiration society here, I very much enjoy your work. 

This story is sort of written like a rollercoaster ride, it goes up and down, it flips around, and it twists and turns.  I hope the reader won't get off until the ride is over. 

I hope you come back and continue to read, I will be updating soon.

Thanks!

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is a great story. You write very well, thank you for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for the kind words.  They picked up my spirits.  I'm your best friend now!  Really!

Sincerely, thanks so much for your support and reading and commenting.  I'll be updating soon, I hope you come back.

 

 

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting interrogation! I never think about similar personality between Chris, Ethan and Brian. Yeah, you're right. They're all arrogant, self-centered, and controlling. But Brian is the significant special one for Justin!! *_*
Oh, Poor Brian. I Can't wait to read more!! Hope you post next chapter soon!!



Author's Response:

Your name is familiar, but I can't place it.  Writer? Video? Banner?  Anyway, love it.

I hope you liked the interrogation, I worked on that piece for some time and pulled from memories of crime shows. 

I absolutely believe B/J forever, only Brian for Justin, and I believe in happy endings - big hint here on this fic. 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting; I hope you'll come back and read the updates.

 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love how you're writing this. Love the first person tense.  Love the suspense. It reads like a mickey spillane novel.  Love the mystery!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words, it's been so long since I wrote, I wasn't sure if I still knew how.  I love me a tough guy character.  Mickey Spillane - that's a compliment in itself.  I wonder how many people under the age of 30 know that character from the dime store novels.  

I really enjoy your work and have been following Broken Open on several sites.  That's such a marvelous gut-twister, it sets the bar for all us angst-wannabes.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 2

I don't get the hate for Ethan all the imature name calling what about brian? what about the name calling for him...or hobbs one hurt him the other play games and disrespect him alot so what did ethan do.



Author's Response:

All your questions and concerns will be addressed in the upcoming chapters.  Your're right, all three men did various degrees of damage to Justin, some worse than others.  Of course, this is an AU - alternate universe - so the storyline of this fic will parallel the show but will veer off into another direction later on.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is so engrossing, my friend!  So full of warring emotions and angst.  Can't wait to see how this is eventually resolved! 



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for coming back and reading.  The rollercoaster ride is just getting started so hold on tight.  I hope you'll ride it to the end.

All the best!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

So far, so good!  Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate your report.  I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

omg leave us hanging like that. i know that's your ploy to keep us waiting for the ensuing chapters.  good story we are liking it a whole lot.



Author's Response:

Yeah, cliff hangers - a writer's cheap trick to hopefully get the readers to come back.  What can I say, you caught me.  Ha!  Thanks for reading and commenting and I'm glad you are enjoying it. 

I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll come back!

All the best.

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Brian. He must be terrified thinking Justin would be hurt. I hope they find Sunshine soon!! I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The plot will thicken for a few more chapters as we see the effect that Justin's disappearance has on Brian.

I'll be updating soon, I hope you'll enjoy it.

Again, thanks.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hello, my friend!  How great to see a story from you on here! Welcome!  I'm very intrigued by your beginning - looking forward to the next installment - keep going!:) 



Author's Response:

Hi There!

I'm following your stories and just loving them.  Thanks for dropping by and leaving your kind words.  I really appreciate them.  Now, go back and update some more of your stories, I'm waiting!  Ha! Ha! 

Sincerely, thanks for taking the time to say hi.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

i'm intrigued and want more as soon as possible.

could have been the fiddler or hobbs or anyone, but never ever brian.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I hope you'll come back.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

You got me hooked.  Great beginning!



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks so much!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

great first chapter, waiting for more.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the kind words, thanks!

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm excited to see you writing. :) I really like this so far. You write first person very well. Is the whole story going to be in Carls's POV? Just curious.Thanks for a fun beginning to a sure to be intriguing story. *hugs* Mandi




Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Such a fan of your work!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow great start!  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Love your Broken Open fic.  Thanks for reading and leaving such a kind message.

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

interesting beginning--justin where are you.



Author's Response:

I hope you come back to read some more.  Where indeed is Justin....   ;)

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to Midnight Whispers. You're off to a very good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome and beginning my first ever comment in MW!  And an extra thank you for being so nice. 

All the best!

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