Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is the 2nd time o have read this! I absolutely love it!!!

Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is the 2nd time o have read this! I absolutely love it!!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

Love it

Reviewer: Ruby_Zella (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2019 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I loved bed the dynamic and Brian’s ability to grow while still in character. It was very well written

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2018 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thanks for writing

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

This was a great story!!  And I loved Brian's tattoo.   That alone says the three words he can never say out out loud!!

Reviewer: TatyBacher (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2017 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

Such a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it.  <3



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  Angst and B/J love just seem to go hand-in-hand.  I really appreciate your comments and thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: TatyBacher (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2017 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Just a quick note to tell you how much I'm enjoying reading your story. Very well written and the emotions are almost too much to bear. I can't wait to read how this will evolve. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad that you are enjoying it.  I'm told it's an emotional rollercoaster ride, so I hope you enjoy the ride.  :) 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2017 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Once in a while I come back to this story and always read the last chapter twice as a reward for all heavy angst I had to endure :)

I love it! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Your comment gave me the biggest smile today, thank you so much!  I sincerely appreciate getting your comment, they are few and far between.  It's a heavy, angst-ridden story but I hope the pay-off is worth it.  Thanks for reading and all the best. 

Laura

Reviewer: Suffajet88 (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow wow  woow.  Someone referred me to this and I get it.  So deep and well written I couldn't stop reading. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Sorry about the very delayed response, my health hasn't been the best in the last couple of years.  All the best. 

Laura

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2016 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

I loved this story. Great job and thank for sharing. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you liked the story and I appreciate your kind words.  Thanks for leaving comments, it is so very appreciated!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2016 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

So much drama and angst but I must keep reading. Love how Brian tries to be strong for Jennifer  despite how worried he is about Justin.



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there and continuing on.  I always thought that Brian was a good s'on-in-law' to Jernnifer.  I always liked their relationship.  Again, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2016 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

No I want everyone to know

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

i know i remember this one.   i really do remember this.   i'm loving it though.   i think justin was gone.  i love trying to figure out if this a story i read or something new.   Chin rat, i knew it would be the chin rat.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

i think i read this before but i'm rereading it.   didn't mikey have him.   Good so far .

Reviewer: chibby (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2015 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ok, I'm ready for the boys to be together again.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2015 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story

thank you for sharing

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2014 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

God, you have no idea how much I love this story. Horrible things happening, but so much growth. And still in character. I've read it a dozen times and this is a Brian I can identify with as canon, and yet still find a little fuzzy love for. And a strong but still boyish Justin!

I'm a huge fan of getting Justin/Brian away from the family. I love them, but I'd off myself if I had to deal with a family that much up in my business. I understand that some other people find that much interferring a comforting thing, but for me it's invasive and so potentially damaging.

Thanks for this. I'm putting it aside to read for the thirteenth time when I want to feel the love. ;)

Roni

 

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

The last sentence is perfect, because they belong together.  This story is so moving and it is real.  I am not a writer so I can't express what I feel but it is such a great story.  It deserves the ribbons.  I have actually read this many times and decided to comment on all the pages.  I hope you will write more and soon.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 9

My own lumberjack twink.   That is Justin.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 8

I laughed so hard at the description of Justin and enjoyed how the chapter progressed.  I like that we are reading Brian's thoughts because he is so true in character in your story.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

Emmette is so wonderful here and I was happy that Michael tried to make amends.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

This was so funny and I was so glad when Brian hit Michael.  It was like the show and nicely added into your story. 

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

I thought it was Justin that they found but was so glad it was not.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

This chapter was so sweet with the mother.  The dream was so sexy but then sad.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great great scene with Carl and Barney.  I see them and I'm right there in the moment.  You write in 3D and I love it.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

This was a very powerful scene with Brian.  Such instensity and its so moving.

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love your stories because they are so intense.  Great start and how you have Carl in it and through his eyes.

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just realized that I read this story before, but it's been awhile. Hahahahah!  I saw it mentioned at get it here livejournal and thought I want to read it.  This is so fine and so wonderful.  I think I reviewed it before and I wonder why you don't have hundred of more comments.  I love this story and that's for real.

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter.

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

I like how you've rewritten scenes from the show into your story and they work.   So much going on in this chapter it just keeps going jumping up and down and I loved it!

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great scene of Horvath with Brian and trying to convince him to behave.  No one writes real like this and that's why I don't write reviews. The story has got to be exceptional for me to leave a comment.

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Brian's emotions are so raw and it's so moving.  It just rips out my stomach, just a great scene in the alley.

Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was heart wrenching and heart warming at the same time..i really enjoyed.reading.it..thnks for sharing

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

I just discovered and finished this story.  I really enjoyed it and was happy to see Justin and Brian getting their lives back together.  I also, loved the Doc Joe character and the fact that Brian took the time to go visit with him.  



Author's Response:

A big hug of thanks to you for reading and commenting on this story!  It was my first QAF story and the 2nd fanfiction that I ever wrote.  I'm glad you loved Doe Joe, he's actually patterned after someone I once worked with. 

You're so kind and I can't thank you enough.

All the very best, my friend,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was even better the second time reading it... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks so much for reading the fic again!  But, I'll never be able to thank you enough for reading and leaving a comment, especially since this was a second time of reading it.  That is so kind and so very, very appreciated.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Claypool (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

I don't know if I have left a comment b4 but I'm leaving another this is like the 100th time I read this fic and every time it gets to me. I love it sooo much. I was wondering if you plan to write another fic cause I will definitely be reading it. :)

Author's Response:

Wow, my head is spinning, what a wonderful compliment.  I'm so glad that you enjoy the story and have read it more than once - I'm extremely flattered. 

I really appreciate that you took the time to leave a comment, and a lovely one at that.  Thanks so very much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: awan_angel (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hi,
I enjoy this story. It's quite ending you made. Justin cut all of communication from his friends other than Brian and his mom. Too sad though he's happy with his new life in Michigan. I just can't stand if any of my friend no longer wants any contact with me anymore. I wish you could make them come back to Pitts and start a new life.

And for Ethan doing such violence thing to the person he loved? I think that he didn't love Justin that he's just using him. But I hate that the justice just punish him like that. Such thing makes us don't trust the system anymore T___T

~awan



Author's Response:

Hi There!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.  Yep, this fic had some surprising twists, but I wanted to veer away from the norm and try something different.  I don't Ethan really loved Justin, either.  I think Ethan lived in a fantasy world and that was sad for Justin in the TV show and dangerous for Justin in this story.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 10

Yes I really liked this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it.  I'm so glad that you liked the story.

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

I have OCD and don't like uneven numbers, so I left another to make it 170.  Hehe. 



Author's Response:

Oh, okay, not a problem. 

Thanks!

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thuis was so amazing.  I think one of the best ionthe whispers site.  I just had to go back and writ reviews.  there are not enough.  I don't know why, but there shold be.  so good, the best.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!  Your kind words are very appreciated!  I'm grateful for any and all comments and I am so glad that you went out of your way to leave them.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

when i read this i was so mad because Justin was gone, but then the next chapter wasz better.  I love Emette.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

I just fell in love with Brian all over.  He's how heshould by in the show but beter.  you really did so good job.



Author's Response:

A big, warm bug back at you!  I'm glad that Brian appealed to you and thanks for the compliment.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is one of my favorite chapters.  Brian is a smartas but he still loves Justin.  I like reading about his thoughts.



Author's Response:

Yep, Brian is a smart ass and I'm glad that his thoughts rang true for you.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

Brian is so funny in this chapter.  I love the different mini parts becouse it shws the whole world with detaillllllls.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yessssss! :)  You had us going!



Author's Response:

;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love this chapter.  You can feel the pain.  It is intense.  The best.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like how you made us feel that Brian was the killer. 



Author's Response:

Great, glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

This deserves comments.  It should have a lot more than it does.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you.  I'm glad you think that and I appreciate the support.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is soooo good!  It deceivers all the awards.  It's one of the best stories on this site.  I don't leave reviews but I had to. 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked.  I think you meant that I deserved the awards, not deceived, because yikes!  Sorry, just joking with you.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

I fell in love with this story with the first chapter and the last was just as engaging. Lumberjack Justin, HAHAHA! Very romantic and perfect ending. Please don't hesitate to provide another story or more Lumberjack Justin.

 

Thanks for the ride.:)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the story.  I loved that, "more Lumberjack Justin."  From pictures I've seen, Randy looks great with a full beard and it's a good beard too.  Not a scrappy one. 

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

Loved it... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Glad you enjoyed the fic.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: mariana (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

I've read it in one go and enjoy it very much.

Are you sure you don't want to continue?.......lol

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!  I don't intend to do a sequel but am working on some other fics, hopefully you'll enjoy them, too.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

I waited until I had time to read this from start to finish only to discover that I had already read it some time ago. When I first started reading fic’s I didn’t leave reviews but I’m so glad this is the featured story for November 2012 as it gives me the opportunity to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back and reading again and leaving a comment.  It's very much appreciated.  And thanks for the well wishes, I'm stunned to be honored and I really appreciate the site's generosity.

All the best to you,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 10

I read this story from angsty beginning to end in one sitting. For a first fic, you definitely struck gold.

I absolutely love how they forced the family by omission, to stay out of their relationship especially while Justin was healing. It allowed Brian to realize that Justin was and always will be in his heart.

Nice work JP

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate that you read and commented.  Sometimes the family just got in the way, even when they had good intentions.

Again, thanks for reading.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 10

Absolutely beautiful.......



Author's Response:

You are too kind.  Thanks so much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Congratulations on the best fanfiction award and for your story being featured as the story of the month.



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks for the well wishes.  I didn't know that it had been made the featured story until I saw your comment - so that's a double thank you!

I really appreciate that you went out of your way and took the time to say something.  It was very kind of you.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Awarded BEST FANFICTION CLASSIC on 10/19/2012.



Author's Response:

What can I say that won't sound too cliche and gushy - oh what the heck, thank you!!!! OMG!!! This is just - WOW!!!  This is such an honor - FOR REAL!

Thanks, that is so kind, generous... wow, y'all, thanks! 

Sincerely,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

I really love this whole story alot.I love that brian got the tattoo too :)



Author's Response:

Yvonne,

Thanks so very, very much for reading and leaving a comment!  I really appreciate that you took the time to be kind and say something nice. 

Again, thanks so much and all the best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

I loved it all alot,great story hon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Yvonne!  I haven't had comments in such a long time and to have yours has been Nirvana!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Yaaay,im so happy Justin is ok!!!



Author's Response:

Can't break up the dynamic duo!

Thanks for the comments.

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

Im enjoying your story alot sweetie xx



Author's Response:

You are too kind.  I really appreciate the time that you took to leave comments after each chapter.  As a writer, you know how much it means to have the readers support.

I really appreciate your kindness, so very much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Holy crap at the ending!!



Author's Response:

Yep, twists and turns around every corner.

Thanks for reading!

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

;)  Love the smiley faces.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Im gonna read this now,just finished this chapter and look forward to the rest ~ Vonnie xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate it!

Laura

Reviewer: speks (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2012 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Second time trying to leve a comment.  Last try.  Really liked this, it was one of the best stories i've read.  So many are too long and dull or sloppy, stupid.  Write more.  Maybe a sequel?



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for commenting.  I get readers but no commenters, I don't know if people are experiencing your problem or they don't like it or they just don't care enough to leave a comment.   So anyway, I really appreciate you going out of your way to leave a comment.  You're keeping me sane.  LOL.

Thanks and all the best.

Laura

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comment.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story. 

Happy New Year, I hope it's a good one for you.

Laura

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

Thank you ALWAYS for this amazing story :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for reading it.  And you are my hero for leaving a comment.  This fic is off the beaten path here at MW and I'm so glad that you found it and so happy that you enjoyed it.

All the very best to you and again, thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm sorry I never reviewed on this story the first time I read it. Or maybe I did and I forgot. I LOVE IT!!!! The way you wrote Brian is so accurate you should be a writer if CowLip pulls their head out of their ass and does a reuinion!!! Kudos on many many MANY levels. I'm sending you christmas cookies because I feel there are no better cookies!!! Please write more stories. I love your style.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thankls so much, times a thousand for reading and re-reading this fic.  I was so thrilled to read that and so grateful that you left a comment.  I know it's a pain but it is so appreciated.  I know you've read that before, but from me it's sincere.

I hope to write soon but have learned a lesson.  I need to have the story completely written before I post.  Long delays waiting on a lazy muse is very irritating for the reader.

I'm flattered by your kind, supportive words, and truly cherish them.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best,

Laura 

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just finished reading this story, on my kindle, just yesterday.  I found this story very well written.  I like to read multi-chaptered stories after they're completed.

I truly enjoyed reading it but it's screaming for a sequel to maybe introduce Justin back into Pittsburgh society, so to speak.  Maybe let some time go by with Brian still visiting Michigan, but the gang getting suspicious of some of his traveling. 

I look forward to reading more of your writings.



Author's Response:

Hi Cheryl,

Wow, you were able to download it to your Kindle, how great is that?!  Thanks so much for the kind words, I really appreciate that you went to so much trouble to read and then left a comment.  I sincerely appreciate it.

I don't know if I'll write a sequel, but it's for kind of you to recommend it.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best.

Laura

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2011 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 10

Beautiful bittersweet ending.

It's obvious that Justin still has issues to work out, but it's wonderful that he and Brian will work on them together.

Thank you for the story!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.  Yep, I have to agree with you, Justin will be healing for some time, as will Brian.  After all I put them through, I knew a wonderful Disney ending wouldn't read true.  But I felt like I did push the envelope by adding some extra moments of warm and fuzzy - they desired it, right?!

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, your support was invaluable.

All the best,

LAura

Reviewer: Nightvision55 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ah, I knew they'd end up together eventually!

I liked the way you made Horvath such an important character - he tends to get left out from most fics.  And I love Brian's second tattoo!

Great job

Nightvision



Author's Response:

Well hello,

You're on my love-that-writer's-fic list.  I really appreciate that you read and comment, it means very much to me.  I feel like a crossed a marathon finish line when I posted the last chapter.  Such a feeling of relief, accomplishment, and some blue clouds, because it was over.

Horvath was fun to use, it was a great inspiration from my unreliable muse.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

I was going to wait till the weekend and read this last chapter of this beautiful story, but being the impatient sort that Iam, I read it last evening. WOW!! Can I just say, you did save the best for last. What a wnderful ending, at last our boys are together, with Brian proclaiming his love like only he could. I'll miss this story my talented friend, it was fresh, and new and well deserving of the blue ribbon. I hope that there are many stories that you plan to share! Take care and please write more!!!



Author's Response:

My Guardian Angel!

Jasmine, I can't thank you enough for all your support, warmth, encouragement, and kindness.  You helped me work through writer's blocks and helped me about of the dumps when life was a heavy load to carry. I'm glad that you liked the ending, I have to admit that I felt a little apprehensive when I posted it... you never know how people will react.  But, so far, so good.

All the best to my dear, and I hope the world treats you with kindness and gentleness.

Laura

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

An excellent story in every way!  Loved the mystery, humor and great dialogue.  I was especially impressed with the way you pulled the very best from Brian -- which the TV series never succeeded in doing.

I hope you have more QAF tales to share.  Can't wait!

P.S.  Thanks, especially, for completing this.  I only read completed fic, and was very excited to see this one ready to be enjoyed.  Awesome!



Author's Response:

Love your username!  I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing my fic, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I was so flattered by your statement, 'pulled the very best from Brian.'

Again, many, many thanks and all the best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

So this is how happiness looks like? I have often questioned myself the same thing and up until this moment I don't think that I have seen it yet.

I enjoyed the story even though that Ethan twist was kind of frustrating, I would have killed the bastard in prison.

Great job.

Marla



Author's Response:

Hi Marla,

Yep, what does happiness look like, I think I've seen it at times, unfortunately it doesn't seem to be a constant.  I agree with you about Ethan, he desired a lot more than he got and he did get roughed up in jail, but was it enough -     nnnnnnooooooo! LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story - if it didn't already have a blue ribbon - I would have awarded it one.



Author's Response:

Dear Lady,

Wow, I have to admit, when I saw this comment, I was gobsmacked.  I love your work, love your sites, and can't thank you enough for your generosity in providing sites for fandom fics.  You are an incredible, kind soul - lmay a lot of good karma come to you!

I truly appreciate your kind words, they mean a lot to me.  Last but not least - thanks for reading and commenting! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 10

Best ending ever, so romantic i must say i dont easily get impress but this is a goog story with a perfect ending. WELL DONE KEEP IT UP !!!!!!! luv it.



Author's Response:

Hi Schola,

Thank so much for the kind words, especially since it's not an ordianary thing.  So glad you enjoyed the fic.

I appreciate that you took the time to read an comment, sincerly.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

I haven't had a chance to read this final chapter but wanted to write a quick note anyway. I'll miss this story my talented friend, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing this story with us. I plan to get a box of chocolates, tissues (to cry because this is the last chapter) and just veg out on the couch! I'll write a review when I finish. Take care!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

I just had to thank you for this earlier comment, it was very kind that you took the time to write.

Hugs to you,

Laura

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have really enjoyed reading ths story - and these last chapters are amazing! Don't tell Brian - he would hate it if he knew - but it made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Our boys happy - away from the family who make them crazy and cause so many of their angst - I can just picture them contented for years to come!

Thanks

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi Charle,

I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing.  I agree with you, I think our boys were/are in it for the long run.  I think that the family did a lot of harm to them both, though some meant well.  At least in this AU, I gave them a little more control of their lives, I hope it played well.

I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

LOVED the story. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

what an ending, although i was waiting for the kitten's arrival i guess brian's tattoo is so much better.



Author's Response:

Hi There,

Sorry that there wasn't a kitten scene, but glad the tattoo made up for it.  I just had to show them bickering at the end, just like a normal couple.  Though, Justin dives real low when he's upset.   And Brian is always looking for the closest exit, but he's trying to curb that response.  In all, just another normal, dysfunctioning couple.  LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciated it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

wonderful story.  i started it moons ago and wasn't sure if it would be completed.  this chapter was wonderful.  so glad i saw it through to its completion.



Author's Response:

Hi Linda,

Thanks for hanging in there with the fic.  I had planned to have it completed several months ago, but best laid plans, right.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I truly appreciated your patience and support.

All the best to you and yours,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well, this was definitely worth the wait!  You truly have a way with words, and the scenario you laid out for Justin and Brian was so perfect.  Makes me question my own ability to be so descriptive!:)  You really should write more stories, my dear; this one was very witty as well as creative.  I hope you will consider doing that.  This site has been gifted with this one - I hope there will be another one in the future.



Author's Response:

Hi Sweetie,

Your compliments are like manna and I feel the same way when I read your lovely fics.  I have some shortees, 1 chapter ones planned, but not in the near future.

Many hugs and kisses for your support and encouragement.  I really have appreciated it.

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

Come Back!! I so miss this story, I hope you'll finish this soon, because I'm on pins and needles waiting (and gee it hurts) for the final chapter! I miss your writing my talented friend! Take care and remember you have a following that is waiting anxiously for the FINALE!



Author's Response:

Jasmine, Hello!

I am almost finished, this close  ().  I hope to publish within the next 5 days or sooner.  I started having problems and second-guessing what I had already written and basically imploded.  I'm getting my act together and now just have some last minute tweaking.  Thanks for hanging in there for me, your support is inspirational.

Big hug and kiss,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9

His smile lights up the room, there is only one smile that can do that for Brian - Sunshine!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm winking at you and pointing to my nose!  Thanks for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 9

Sorry it tppk so long to post, but this bronchitis was getting to me....at any rate this chapter had me doing a happy dance, even in my weaken condition!! I love how Brian was keeping the secret of where his beloved is, I knew he was headed to him! I also love the idea of lumberjack Justin, who is independent,confident, and still pursuing his art!! Love also that asshole Ethan got the shit beaten out of him in jail, can they hang him up by his violin string, the ugly weasel deserves nothing but the worse! I kept imagining a bearded, gruffy, Justin, wow sexy image...Another great chapter my talented friend and looking forward to the happy ending for our favorite couple!



Author's Response:

Hi Jamine,

So sorry to hear that you're still dealing with illness.  Fluids, rest, wine, and chocolate, and not necessarily in that order are my recommended treatment and it works every time!  :)

I'm traveling this week for work and hope to publish the final chapter real soon.  it's written but needs last minute touches.  I can't work on it while I'm traveling, I'm too tired at the end of the day.

Anyway, take care of yourself and thanks so much for reading and commenting.  You're the best!

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

I have no business reading this. I supposed to be working, but this story was like an addiction. Brian's snide comments are a riot.

I love your depiction of Lindsey in this fic. You have down pact. I have only known Nightvision to portray her as well.

This story is ending too soon for me.

Please write more!



Author's Response:

Oh sweetie, I am so flatter!  I'm glad you share my depiction of Lindsay and thanks for letting me know, I wasn't sure how that would go over with people.  I share your opinion of Nightvision, her "Divide" story is to die for.

I'll be posted the final chapter soon.  I hope you'll enjoy it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and hanging in there with me, I sincerely appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful update, but it's like I miss a chapter.

What did Brian do after the last chapter.  He let Justin go without doing something!?

And this is the first time they meet again?

Gggrrr I wanna now more about the last half year (* sigh * last half year! bleeeehh)

My cock responds to the visual stimuli and it begins to thicken and lift in greeting.

* sitting here with a big smile *

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi Marny,

Thanks so much for your patience.  I promise that the next and final chapter will fill in alot of the gaps.  I want to thank you so much for your continued support and kind comments.  I really have appreciated it, you helped to keep me afloat whenever I thought the fic was going to end the same wasy as the Titanic.

I hope you'll come back for the final chapter.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

oh i loved this chapter. how brian stood up for justin and his privacy. wonderful. the lemon bars were a give away that he knew where justin was and he was going to see him.

lindsay's going off her rocker if she thinks she can snag brian. ha! at least brian knows what she's up to.

looking forward to the last chapter.



Author's Response:

I want to thank you so much for the comments that you've left.  The feedback and support has been invaluable.  I'm just another sensitive writer looking for recognition.  So, thanks for doing that.

Glad you like the little tweaks and turns.  Please come back for the final chapter!

Thanks so much.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Just want to tell you I so love this story...I caught what I thought was a bad cold but was really been bronchitis so I'm stuck at home for the reat of week trying to get some rest and taking meds, so I read this story from the beginning and fell in love with it all over again!! You are just too damn talented my friend!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Poor baby!  So sorry about the cold and bronchitis, I hope you are feeling better.  I'm not sure where you're located, but hopefully the weather isn't contributing to your misery.  Nothing worse than being sick in exreme cold or heat.  Heck, being sick sucks in any weather or circumstances, really.  

I'm so flattered that you read this again, and I hope it gave you some relief from the struggle of your illness.  I really appreciate that you let me know, too.  You're generosity and kindness of spirit is just incredible.  Even as you lie sick, you're reaching out and giving to me.  Incredible.

Take care, drink fluids, and I hope your recovery is quick.

A big warm virtual hug for you  <<<hug>>>>.

All the very best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: Nightvision55 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 8

Just read everything so far - oh, you know I love Brian all in a tizz over Justin!

Update soon.

Nightvision



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic.  Yep, me too, I love a Brian who is just crazy over Justin.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I sincerely appreciate that you took the time.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: jujubeebee (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

this was really good. don't take too long to update



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it.  I'll be updating with the last chapter soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

what a great update.

now the real work begins.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  Yep, the guys have a lot of work to do and miles to cover before they come home.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I REALLY APPRECIATE IT!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

YAY!! You're backa and I just wanted to let you know that I was thinking about you and I'm so glad that you're back!! Another great chapter and the boys sem to be getting it together!! Time heals all wounds as they say, and I know that it will take time for you to heal from the loss of your beloved pet, but know that I'm thinking of you and saying a silent prayer that things will get better for my very talented friend!



Author's Response:

Hello Dear Friend!

I think your'e right, the guys are going to be okay, they'll find there way.  

I appreciate your thoughts and prayer, it must have worked because I'm feeling stronger and  my knee is better  (no surgery).  

A big,warm hug of thanks for all the support and positive feedback.  You're wonderful!

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: bec (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh the boy's are finally working things out, I've really enjoyed this



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you're enjoying and it's very kind of you to leave a comment.

Thanks so much and all the best.

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

* makes happydance * thanks for the wonderful update, together again.

 

What to do!?  Uuhhh Brian pfff ... tell your boy that you love him and he will stay!! I know!!

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Ha!Ha!Ha!, I love your comment.  Brian is something else. I'm so glad that you'e enjoying it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura 

Reviewer: julimango (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 8

hey nice to see you back, are you really gonna wrap this up in just one chapter?  :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome, it's been a month, I can tell you!  Ha!Ha!

Yep, one more chaper to go.  I had outlined it and partially wrote it back in April.  I just need to fine tune it and hope to have it out within a week.  Unfortunately, I'm not as fast of my writer as many of my fellow fic writers.  I blame my brain and job. Ha!Ha!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

 “The chains, too, Fiddy Cent.  All that bling might distract low flying aircraft.” 

Hilarious! Entertaining as always!

Justin needs serious therapy. He has lsot his mind if he feels the need to dress like that.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Glad you like the humor.  Justin in rapper clothes - yeah, he needs serious therapy, I agree.  I've been trying to alleviate the tension with humor and it makes for a roller coaster ride at times.

Thanks so much for staying with the fic, and leaving your kind comments.  I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hello, my friend - you must have read my mind; I was just thinking about your beautiful story and when you might update it and here it is!  I am SO sorry about losing your 'baby' - I had no idea until I just now read the other comments.  And I'm also sorry to hear about your injury.  I hope it helps to know that this chapter was wonderful and I loved some of the witty reparte, such as Brian asking Justin to 'clear off a shelf or two' - hilarious!  And the emotions were beautifully depicted.  Thank you for updating and again, so sorry about your loss.  I have had dogs for years and certainly know how it's like losing a member of the family.  (P.S. - I think I see where your user name came from now.:))  Take care and I know you will finish this when you can.:)



Author's Response:

I'm giving you a big hug of thanks!  Your comment was so kind, understanding and uplifting.  It's been a rough week. 

Yep, my 'bigdogz' comes from the fact that i've owned big (actually huge) dogs for the last 20 years, and they rule the house!  I lost Hoss, my 185 pound English Mastiff, (actually, he weighed more but we couldn't get him to get on the cow scale - seriously, he was too big for the doggie scale), and he was my baby boy, so...  I also am owned by an all white wolf-hybrid named Mimi.  She's about 90 pounds, and so smart that she scares Border Collies, ha!, ha!  She's 1/8 husky and the rest Artic Wolf.  She was a rescue, as was my mastiff. Sorry, i'm digressing and now teary eyed, thinking about my boy.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such kind comments.  This story has been an odd experience for me but it's helped thicken my skin.  I've gotten a wide spectrum of comments and it's been a learning experience. 

Again, many , many thanks!

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

I know you are going thru alot with injuries and the loss of your beloved pet but please let us know what is going on....I don't think it's alot to ask that you let your fans know if you plan to continue with this story. I was one of your staunch supporters when you first posted this story and I just want you to take the time and be honest with your fans and let us know if you've loss interest in writing this beautiful story...Please stop ignoring those who post and ask for update, fans of a story care about you, and they care about the story!



Author's Response:

Hi There.

I'm writing now and will post tonight or tomorrow.  Sorry, but it's been difficult to concentrate and everytime I tried to get something out, it just seemed too crappy.  Pain, pills, work demands, and losing my pet have just made me very uncreative.  But, I think I'm coming out of the grey haze.

I haven't been ignoring your comments and I do appreciate your interest and concern.  I just haven't been checking the site and didn't know that I was getting comments.  Since the fic is not on the "recent" page, I didn't think anyone was reading it. 

Again, thanks for your patience and support.

All the best.

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

Next chapter please!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry about my delayed response, but thanks so much for reading and leaving an encouraging response.

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

are you ever gonna finish this story...you said to one person posting that you had 4 chapters ready...you know at least let your fans know what is going on even if you have to write it as an update!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

You're mean!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

WOW! Has it been a month already....still no update...I know you've had personal problems, but I'm ready to give up on this story and just consider it  another abandon fan-fic....

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

So sorry about your knee injury, I know how painful that can be so get some rest...I'm so sorry about the lost of Hoss, a pet is a special member of the family so I sure though hard, you'll remember the good times! Take care rmy friend (and I feel the same way by the way) and I send many hugs and lots of love!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

I hope you're still out there.  I didn't see this comment until now.  Thanks so much for your kindness, it's been a rough month.

I have appreciated all of your support and can't thank you enough.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

I don't want to sound mean, because I know that you have a life and are busy, that said, are you plannng to update anytime soon...I hate reading a WIP because you never know if the writer has plans to finish it or just lost interest in it..I wish you would let the readers/fans of this story if there are plans to update any time soon. and just so you know this isn't just a suggestion for you,but some of the writers on this board, because I've seen plenty of stories that have become abandon!



Author's Response:

Dear Reader,

I will be updating soon.  I have only 2 more chapters, 4 if I break them up, to go in this story.  I've been hit by the harshness of fate.  I've had an injured and just lost a beloved member of my family, my beautiful English Mastiff "Hoss" passed away. 

Thanks for your patience.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

Take care of yourself!! Enjoy your vacation and get some rest....many hugs and chocolate is the best medicine...



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

Things have been tough, my knee gave out and my beloved dog passed away and I'm devastated. 

I'll be updating soon, I promise.

You're a stranger that has become a friend.  Thanks so much for your kindness.

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

UPDATE!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

When you wish upon a star, your favorite story will appear!! Where oh where is my story, where are you next chapter!! I miss you so much...hear my tears!! (sigh) oh well let me go put on my Easter bonnet and cry!



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there with me.  I hope to update sometime this week.  Work issues were then traded for a physical injury and I'm suppose to be on vacay this next week, but now have a mucked knee!  Excuses, excuses, I know. 

I hope all is well, sincerely, not just joking.  You're the best, truly.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2011 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ok, here'sy weekly nag...where is thy story...thou must update!! I plead with thee! Ok I just saw Romeo & Juliet so that 's why I'm using thou, thee, thy...enough of the fancy talk...I will say please my talented friend update soon or I'll be reduced to tears of chocolate drops!! LOL!



Author's Response:

So sorry that I haven't updated, but tanks for the nudge.  Bad week at work, taxes, etc. are holding me up.  I hope to update this week.  Be brave my fellow chocolate lover!  ;)

Cheers,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Is this how it feels, Justin?  People trying to control you life and they all think they know what is best for you.   They’re touching you when you don’t want to be touched… grabbing and pushing… and the places that they are pushing you toward seem just as dark and dismal as the place that you’re in. 

 

Here’s the thing, Sunshine.  Nobody throws Brian Kinney from a cliff. 

 

 

 

“It’s my fucking cliff!  I invented the damn thing!  I should patent it.”


I thought the last chapter was something, but you out did yourself with this one. Every character was classic from Honeycutt wasting time and patience, to Mikey being manipulated as being the best friend he values so much.

I can't wait until the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I'm glad that it's enjoyable,  it's a little tricky working with such beloved characters and trying to convey them correctly.  I appreciate that you let me know that it's working.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Very angsty! I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see if they come to their senses!  :-D

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

I could never hate you because you are the best writer around!!! I love this chapter, angst, & love...yummy!!! The course of true love never runs smoothe for our Justin & Brian! This story reminds me of a big juicy novel, I wait anxiously for the next chapter!! I hope that you update soon, and we won't have to wait too long...but in case we do I brought a big box of chocolates!! hugs my talented friend!



Author's Response:

Hi Jasmine,

Your last post was made one hour before I posted the fic, and I didn't know if I should have laughed or whimper in remorse for letting you down.  Thanks for hanging in there with this fic and me.  Your reviews mean so much and encourage me to keep writing.  Really!

All the best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hello, dear!  Great, emotional, and angsty chapter - just my type of reading!  So glad you to see you had a chance to update, but of course now you've got me eagerly waiting for more!  Hope you'll be able to update in the not too distant future.  Thanks for sharing this imaginative fic with us!:)



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks for the kind words and for taking the time to read and review my fic.  i looking forward to catching up with your real soon.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2011 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

seems like they both really have to fight for what they want. hope they both come up winners.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I believe in Brian and Justin forever, so I think they'll be winners!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: BJ_Forever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

Why would I hate you?! I certainly didn’t hate you. I love you!! You’re a wonderful writer and your brilliant story makes me happy!! Love your story and Love those scenes in original show reflect in your story with some difference!!


I love finally see some talk between Brian and Justin. I think they need many time and talk. Justin surely not thinking right. Poor Sunshine. He thinks he is a freak and doesn’t deserve Brian. I’m SO sad when he said that to Brian. Brian hurts by his words. So does Justin. I’m glad Brian see through Sunshine’s mind!!


I really like Michael’s comic shop scene. Brian made perfectly clear where Michael should stands. And he accomplishes his little plan. I’m SO love him!! You really are good at this. Your Brian is really... well, Brian!! And when he thinks about Justin, it’s just melting my heart.


I love their office kiss in original show. And I love your café kiss, too!! That’s really… really wonderful!! Can’t wait to see more!! Hope you update soon!!♥♥



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.  I'm so glad that the chapter "played" well, i wasn't sure if it would.  Also, thanks for letting me know that the Brian in this fic is true to character. 

I really appreciate that you're hung in there with the fic.  Your reviews have been so supportive and informative, they've helped me in many ways.

I can't thank you enough!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hate you!? No no no, love you * giggles * wonderful update, thanks.

 

Love this scene.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Love the vid!!!!  How wonderful!!!  I wish I knew how to do that, I'm getting there, but I'm still working on getting around my LJ blog, ha, ha!

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and the vid!

Laura

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 7

Well I certainly don't hate you!  I love this chapter! I love the banter between Brian and Justin.   Story keeps getting better and better.



Author's Response:

Gina Marie,

Thanks so much, I'm glad you're still hanging in there with the fic.  I've had some flaming on this story and it's left me gun shy, especially since I was working close to the original script.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I sincerely apprieciate it!

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really miss this story....sigh....oh well, let me go eat some more chocolate bon-bons and cry!



Author's Response:

Jasmine!

You're such a dear!  Don't cry - but keep the bon-bons, yummy!  Thanks for hanging in there, i'm a day late, but you know how life can get.  I just updated and I hope you enjoy it.

Big hug, a hearty thanks, and all the best to you.

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

Please update this story real soon..I miss it and get really sad when it's not updated...and also I cry big boo-hoo tears and my eyes get really swollen, and I look like I've been boxing...now you wouldn't want that to happen...not trying to make ya feel guilty for making me sad or crying! lol



Author's Response:

Dear Jasmine,

No, no, don't cry!  No boo-boo, bottom lip, please!  I'm working on it, I promise!  I hope to have it out very soon, 3 days tops.  Lots going on back on the homefront and work, so my energies have been focused there.

Here's a big hug for you <ahmmm>.  Eat some chocolate, let a puppy kiss you, and treat yourself well. 

:)

Laura

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

The story is excellent. Your writing is superb. Keep on writing because I enjoy the Brian/Justin saga. Are you going to write any more chapters? I hope so they are great. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi There,

Your kind words are manna to my muse.  Wow, thank you!  I do have more chapters planned and I'm working on one now, and hope to post it within the next three days.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

All the best,

Laura

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

* waves * OMG I forgot to review * blushes * and this is such a beautiful story. Hmm now a know why I didn't review * sighs * I didn't have the time to read the whole chapter this weekend. Jeeeh kids * giggles * and a hubby who is finally home after 2 weeks on a business trip. Hope Justin is going to talk to Brian. Please Justin.

 

 Please update soon.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Don't worry sweetie, I certainly understand!  Family is the most important thing.  But, I'm horrible, I tell people that life gets in the way of my writing and enjoying fanfic.  Ha!  Ha!  Forgive me my weirdness.  ;)  The fact that you did go out of your way to leave a supportive comment makes the comment all the the better.  Glad your husband is home, hope it was a happy reunion. 

As always - thanks for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it!  All the best.

Laura

 

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that Brian finally gets to see Justin ... but what will Justin's reaction be?

Lovin' this story!



Author's Response:

Truly glad that you're enjoying the fic.  Justin's reaction will be in the next chapter, promise.

Thanks for reading and commenting, the support keeps me motivated.

All the best,

Laura

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